Subject: [abfab] #15: Section 1.2 - Suggested new wording

From: "abfab issue tracker" <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 11 Dec 2011 00:39:52 -0000

#15: Section 1.2 - Suggested new wording

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 Section 1.2 - Next to last paragraph - last sentence

 Current text:
 However, federation does not preclude the
    possibility relationship between the RP and the Subject, should needs
    dictate.

 Suggested new text:
 However, federation does not preclude the possibility of a pre-existing
 relationship existing between the RP and the Subject, nor that they may
 use the introduction to create a new long-term relationship independent of
 the federation.

 Two issues addressed -
 1. some grammatical errors
 2.  The concept of creating a new independent relationship based on the
 federation introduction.

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 Reporter:  ietf@…  |      Owner:  draft-ietf-abfab-arch@…
     Type:  defect  |     Status:  new
 Priority:  minor   |  Milestone:
Component:  arch    |    Version:
 Severity:  -       |   Keywords:
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Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/abfab/trac/ticket/15>
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