Subject: [abfab] #13: Section 1.2 - language clarity

From: "abfab issue tracker" <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 11 Dec 2011 00:35:49 -0000

#13: Section 1.2 - language clarity

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 Section 1.2

 Old Text:
 Some deployments are sometimes required to deploy complex technical
    infrastructure, including message routing intermediaries, to offer
    the required technical functionality, while in other deployments
    those are missing.

 New Text suggestion:
 I think that the word sometimes should be removed - thus

 Some deployments are required  -- or
 Deployments are sometimes required

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 Reporter:  ietf@…  |      Owner:  draft-ietf-abfab-arch@…
     Type:  defect  |     Status:  new
 Priority:  minor   |  Milestone:
Component:  arch    |    Version:
 Severity:  -       |   Keywords:
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Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/abfab/trac/ticket/13>
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