Subject: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ivov-grouptextchat-purpose-03

From: "Vijay K. Gurbani" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 15 Jul 2013 08:40:22 -0500

I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for
this draft (for background on appsdir, please see ​
http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate ).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ivov-grouptextchat-purpose-03
Title: A group text chat purpose for conference and service URIs in
  the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) event package
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Jul-15-2013
IETF Last Call Date: Jul-22-2013
IESG Telechat Date: Not known

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major Issues: 0
Minor Issues: 0
Nits: 1

Nits:
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- S2: The use of "integrity protect" as a verb is rather unorthodox
  in the sentence, "Clients can integrity protect and encrypt ...".
  Better to reword it as "Clients can protect the integrity of and
  encrypt ..."

Thanks,

- vijay
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