Subject: [calsify] Review of draft-ietf-caldav-timezone-ref

From: Ken Murchison <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 27 Oct 2014 11:26:03 -0400

General observation:

Having read this document cover to cover a few times, I find it 
sufficient to implement the documented CalDAV feature on the server-side 
(which I have done).

A few editorial nits:

- Sec 1, para 3, sent 1: "resulting missed meetings" -> "resulting in 
missed meetings"

- Sec 3.1.1, sent 1 & 2: "time zone services" -> "time zone data 
distribution services"

- Sec 4, para 1 and items 1 & 2: "time zone services" -> "time zone data 
distribution services"

-- 
Kenneth Murchison
Principal Systems Software Engineer
Carnegie Mellon University