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Sun, 18 Aug 2013 10:29:43 +0000 Received: from AMSPR02MB055.eurprd02.prod.outlook.com ([169.254.15.125]) by AMSPR02MB055.eurprd02.prod.outlook.com ([169.254.15.125]) with mapi id 15.00.0731.000; Sun, 18 Aug 2013 10:29:43 +0000 From: David Schwartz To: "drinks@ietf.org WG" Thread-Topic: Diffs between draft-ietf-drinks-spp-framework-05 and 04 Thread-Index: AQHOm/3aiWOK+Fjrr0+v6VbFh2IJDA== Date: Sun, 18 Aug 2013 10:29:43 +0000 Message-ID: <0B814065-543F-42CD-ACFC-BAD12B5ADF3E@xconnect.net> References: <4B11612E-BC5C-4C7E-848C-D61079C93439@xconnect.net> Accept-Language: en-US Content-Language: en-US X-MS-Has-Attach: X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: x-originating-ip: [62.219.150.62] x-forefront-prvs: 094213BFEA Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_0B814065543F42CDACFCBAD12B5ADF3Exconnectnet_" MIME-Version: 1.0 X-OriginatorOrg: xconnect.net X-FOPE-CONNECTOR: Id%0$Dn%*$RO%0$TLS%0$FQDN%$TlsDn% Subject: [drinks] Diffs between draft-ietf-drinks-spp-framework-05 and 04 X-BeenThere: drinks@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.12 Precedence: list List-Id: IETF DRINKS WG List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 18 Aug 2013 10:29:57 -0000 --_000_0B814065543F42CDACFCBAD12B5ADF3Exconnectnet_ Content-Type: text/plain; charset="Windows-1252" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable The diff page is online http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=3Ddraft-ietf-drink= s-spp-framework-05&url2=3Ddraft-ietf-drinks-spp-framework-04 At a high level, other than nits the major change has to do with the relati= onship between a PublicIdentifier and a DestinationGroup. PublicIdentifier = has now been promoted to a first class object as opposed to previously bein= g scoped within a DestinationGroup. :D (some specific details below) (page numbers represent 04 document) Page 6 - section outline cleanup Page 11 - Figure 2 tightening up Page 11 - Figure 2 changes - Public Identifier change to match object chang= es (destGrpRef --> dgName Page 11 - corresponding text change - (04) "An SPPF Public Identifier is associated with a Destination Group" (05) "An SPPF Public Identifier may be a member of zero or more Destinati= on Groups" --- (04) "=85being associated with a Destination Group" (05) "=85forcing membership in one or more Destination Groups" Page 13 - tightened up text around egress routes (04) "the 'svcs' element identifies the SED records associated with the SED= Group" (05) "the 'svcs' element specifies ENUM services ((e.g.,E2U+pstn:sip+sip) t= hat are used to identify the SED records associated with the SED Group" Spelling mistakes Page 17 - grammer fix Page 18 - Spelling PublicIDType changes to reflect the change in schema regarding the Destinat= ionGroup Section 6.2 (04) - "The abstract XML schema type definition PubIDType is a generalizati= on for the concrete Public Identifier schema types. PubIDType element 'dgNa= me' represents the name of the destination group that a given Public Identi= fier may be a member of." (05) - "The abstract XML schema type definition PubIdType is a generalizati= on for the concrete Public Identifier schema types. PubIdType element 'dgNa= me' represents the name of a destination group that a given Public Identifi= er may be a member of. Note that this element may be present multiple times= so that a given Public Identifier may be a member of multiple destination = groups" Corresponding schema changes Added section 7 introductory text - "In addition to the operation specific = object types, all operations MAY specify the minor version of the protocol = that when used in conjunction with the major version (that can be for insta= nce specified in the protocol namespace) can serve to identify the version = of the SPPF protocol that the client is using. If the minor version is not = specified, the latest minor version supported by the SPPF server for the gi= ven major version will be used. Additionally, operations that may potential= ly modify persistent protocol objects SHOULD include a transaction ID as we= ll." --_000_0B814065543F42CDACFCBAD12B5ADF3Exconnectnet_ Content-Type: text/html; charset="Windows-1252" Content-ID: Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable The diff page is online http://www.ietf.org/= rfcdiff?url1=3Ddraft-ietf-drinks-spp-framework-05&url2=3Ddraft-ietf-dri= nks-spp-framework-04

At a high level, other than nits the major change has to do with the r= elationship between a PublicIdentifier and a DestinationGroup. PublicIdenti= fier has now been promoted to a first class object as opposed to previously= being scoped within a DestinationGroup.

:D

(some specific details below)


(page num= bers represent 04 document) 

Page 6 - = section outline cleanup
Page 11 -= Figure 2 tightening up
Page 11 -= Figure 2 changes - Public Identifier change to match object changes (destG= rpRef --> dgName
Page 11 -= corresponding text change -

(04) = ; "An SPPF Public Identifier is associated with a Destination Group&qu= ot;
(05) &nbs= p; "An SPPF Public Identifier may be a member of zero or more Destinat= ion Groups"
---
(04) = ; "=85being associated with a Destination Group"
(05) = ; "=85forcing membership in one or more Destination Groups"

Page 13 -= tightened up text around egress routes
(04) &quo= t;the 'svcs' element identifies the SED records associated with the SED Gro= up"
(05) &quo= t;the 'svcs' element specifies ENUM services ((e.g.,E2U+pstn:sip+si= p) that are used to identify the SED records associated with the SED Group&= quot;

Spelling = mistakes

Page 17 -= grammer fix
Page 18 -= Spelling

PublicIDT= ype changes to reflect the change in schema regarding the DestinationGroup<= /div>

Section 6= .2
(04) - &q= uot;The abstract XML schema type definition PubIDType is a generalization f= or the concrete Public Identifier schema types. PubIDType element 'dgName' = represents the name of the destination group that a given Public Identifier may be a member of."
(05) - &q= uot;The abstract XML schema type definition PubIdType is a generalization f= or the concrete Public Identifier schema types. PubIdType element 'dgName' = represents the name of a destination group that a given Public Identifier may be a member of. Note that this element = may be present multiple times so that a given Public Identifier may be a me= mber of multiple destination groups"

Correspon= ding schema changes

Added sec= tion 7 introductory text - "In addition to the operation specific obje= ct types, all operations MAY specify the minor version of the protocol that= when used in conjunction with the major version (that can be for instance specified in the protocol namespace) can= serve to identify the version of the SPPF protocol that the client is usin= g. If the minor version is not specified, the latest minor version supporte= d by the SPPF server for the given major version will be used. Additionally, operations that may potentially = modify persistent protocol objects SHOULD include a transaction ID as well.= "

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