Subject: [Hipsec] Preliminary version of draft-moskowitz-hip-09

From: [email-masked] (Ahrenholz, Jeffrey M)
Date: Mon Feb 2 18:25:02 2004

Below are some spelling-only suggestions for this -09pre2 draft:
page section  suggestion
9  3.1.1 accomodate > accommodate
11 3.3   signalled > signaled
15 4.1.1 similarily > similarly
16 4.1.2 sents > sends
19 5.1   birthdate > birthday (?)
20 5.3   negotiaton > negotiation
31 6.2.2 registed > registered
32 6.2.3 talkin > talking
         must to represent > must use to represent
33 6.2.6 Suide > Suite-IDs
38 6.2.10 consequtive > consecutive
41 6.2.13 the the (repeated word)
43 6.2.15 nonexisting > nonexistent
49 7.5   Recipients's > Recipient's
49 7.6   NetBios > NetBIOS
50 7.7   Recipients's > Recipient's
51 7.8   Senders's > Sender's
         Recipients's > Recipient's
52 8.1   destinated > destined
53 8.2   succesful > successful
60 8.6   Ithe > the
         Icheck > check
66 9     Reponder's > Responder's
69 11.1  Initator > Initiator
70 11.2  Similarily > Similarly
70 11.5  algoritms > aglorithms
71 11.6  cryptoanalysis > cryptanalysis
82 Ap A  applcations > applications
84 Ap C  probablity > probability (x2)
85 Ap D  implmentators > implementors
85 Ap D  depracated > deprecated
86 Ap D  legitimite > legitimate
89 Ap E  Destionation > Destination

-Jeff

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> I uploaded pre2 version of the draft-moskowitz-hip-09 to
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> 09pre2 and 09pre1 -> 09pre2.
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> Please, feel free to comment. Shortly (before leaving home):
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> I have fixed the state machine (a bit) and changed the=20
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> NES is changed to UPD, NES_INFO parameter to NES, state names=20
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> HIP_SIGNATURE (1&2) have new type numbers, we propose to leave some=20
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> Appendix F contains now help for checksum verification.
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