Subject: Re: [Hipsec] References to expired work in progress in 4843bis and 5201bis

From: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 30 Oct 2013 12:45:36 +0200

Authors of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4843-bis,

could you please fix the nits below? Also, note that the current draft
will expire in a week.

Thanks,

Gonzalo

On 16/07/2013 10:03 AM, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> ID nits complains about the following in 4843bis. These nits need to be
> fixed before we request the publication of the draft:
> 
> http://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-hip-rfc4843-bis-04.txt
> 
>   == Unused Reference: 'Hi3' is defined on line 433, but no explicit
>      reference was found in the text
> 
>   == Unused Reference: 'NodeID' is defined on line 443, but no explicit
>      reference was found in the text
> 
>   -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4773
>      (Obsoleted by RFC 6890)
> 
> ID nits also complains about 5201bis. Could the authors please have a
> look at this output and fix whatever needs to be fixed?
> 
> http://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-hip-rfc5201-bis-12.txt
> 
> And the same for 5202bis:
> 
> http://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-hip-rfc5202-bis-03.txt
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Gonzalo
> 
> 
> 
> On 11/07/2013 10:20 AM, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> as you know, we are preparing the publication request for 4843bis,
>> 5201bis, and 5202bis. The two former drafts have references to work in
>> progress that has expired years ago. Do we want to keep those references
>> in the drafts (see below)?
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Gonzalo
>>
>>
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hip-rfc4843-bis-04#section-9
>>
>> [PRIVACYTEXT]               Dupont, F., "A Simple Privacy Extension
>>                              for Mobile IPv6", Work in Progress,
>>                              July 2006.
>>
>>
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-dupont-mip6-privacyext-04
>>
>>
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hip-rfc5201-bis-12#section-12
>>
>>    [I-D.ietf-btns-c-api]       Richardson, M., Williams, N., Komu, M.,
>>                                and S. Tarkoma, "C-Bindings for IPsec
>>                                Application Programming Interfaces",
>>                                draft-ietf-btns-c-api-04 (work in
>>                                progress), March 2009.
>>
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-btns-c-api-04
>>
>>
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