Subject: [IPP] Hewlett-Packard has reviewed the IPP Implementor's Guide v2.0 and has comments

From: "Kennedy, Smith (Wireless Architect)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 4 May 2015 22:27:25 +0000

Greetings,

HP's feedback on IPP Implementor's Guide v2 wd-ippig20-20150303.pdf:

• Page 12: List of tasks should match the titles of subsections of section 4
• Pages 13, 34, 35, 39, 43, 49, 52, 55: titles of subsections should start with verbs like "Find" or "Submit", not the "present participle" form ending in "-ing" such as "Finding" or "Submitting"
• Page 55, lines 899-901: rewrite the paragraph - wording awkward
• Page 55, line 903: Add a new first sentence that sets the context more clearly.
• Page 81, line 1743: Update reference to point to RFC 7472

Cheers,
Smith

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