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There are many grammatical errors.  For example, in the very first sentence
of section 1

   Proxy Mobile IPv6 (PMIPv6) [RFC5213] is network based mobility
   management protocol which allows IP mobility session continuity for a
   Mobile Node (MN) without its involvement in mobility management
   signaling.  

This should read something like

   Proxy Mobile IPv6 (PMIPv6) [RFC5213] is a network-based mobility
   management protocol which allows IP mobility session continuity for a
   Mobile Node (MN) without its involvement in mobility management
   signaling.  

However, this still reads pretty clumsily; in particular, it's difficult for
me to tell which entity "its" refers to and the usage of "network-based" is
jargon that only has meaning if one is already familiar with PMIP; since
this draft is presumably aimed at RADIUS implanters, I think it would be
good to avoid as much PMIP-specific jargon as possible.  Similarly, the
terms "download" and "interface" are used repeatedly.  "Download" has AFAIK
no meaning WRT to RADIUS and "interface", while "real 3G" is also not
particularly useful in this context.  For example, Section 1 says:

   This document defines the RADIUS [RFC2865] based profile and the
   corresponding attributes to be used on the AAA interface between the
   MAG and the RADIUS server.  This interface is used to download the
   per MN Policy Profile from the remote Policy Store to the MAG, at the
   point when MN attaches to a PMIPv6 Domain. 

I suspect that what this means that the per-MN profile is returned in a
RADIUS Access-Accept message encapsulated in the Attributes defined by this
draft (and I shouldn't need to guess).  The same section continues:

   Furthermore, this document also defines a RADIUS-based interface between
the LMA and 
   the RADIUS server for authorization of the received Proxy Binding
   Update (PBU) messages for the mobility service session.  

Actually, it doesn't: some Attributes are defined, but how they are used is
left almost completely unspecified.

The statement that "The terminology in this document is based on the
definitions found in   [RFC5213] and [I-D.ietf-netlmm-pmip6-ipv4-support]"
in Section 2 strongly suggests that the reader must have read and understood
draft-ietf-netlmm-pmip6-ipv4-support and that, therefore, that draft would
be a normative reference but it's not.

In Section 2, the definition of "Network Access Server (NAS)" says

      A device that provides the access service for a user to a network.
      In the context of this document the NAS may be integrated into or
      co-located with the MAG.  The NAS device contains the RADIUS
      Client function.

What happens in the context of this document if the NAS is _not_ integrated
or co-located with the MAG?  Since the statement is that the NAS "contains
the RADIUS Client (sic) functionality", my guess is nothing ;-).  Similarly,
even if the MAG and NAS are co-located, unless they communicate nothing will
happen. Furthermore, Section 3 says that the MAG 'acts as a NAS', which
seems more accurate but isn't the same as 'integrated with' or 'co-located
with'.  I _think_ that what is really meant is that the MAG acts as a RADIUS
client, but it's really hard to tell...

I could go on at (much) greater length, but basically this draft either a)
says too much (i.e., claims to provide a "solution" while just doing a lot
of hand-waving) or b) says way too little for the same reason.  My
suggestion would be to either a) get rid of the "solution" stuff and _only_
define the needed Attributes or b) actually describe how these Attributes
are to be used in detail.


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At IETF79 we agreed to progress the "PMIPv6 Localized Routing Problem
Statement" I-D following a WG last call.
The I-D has gone through a WG last call previously. Please consider this
as the WG last call for the following I-D:
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Rajeev,

Thanks for a thorough review. I'll address these comments in a new =
'draft' revision and then come up with additional comments if/when I =
disagree with something.

- Jouni

On Dec 9, 2010, at 7:40 AM, Rajeev Koodli wrote:

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Dear all,
I have read the draft and think it has improved, is concise, clear, and
correct ... Beyond some nits detected as follows:=20

Ch. 3.1:=20
   Hence, providing the
   necessary protocol specification to enable localized routing in
   PMIPv6 is necessary.
=3D> I think it sounds nice when we exchange 'necessary' by 'required' =
or
'strongly recommended'

Ch. 3.2:
s/being build by the CN's/being built by the CN's/
=3D> or may we omit 'being' completely?=20

... considered as the MN's current pCoA,
=3D> add explanation (previous CoA, Proxy-CoA, ... ?)

s/Accordingly, these topological difference are denoted/Accordingly,
these topological differences are denoted/=20

s/without traversing the MNs' LMA(s)/without traversing the MNs'
LMA(s)./

Ch. 3.3.2:

s/domain .  Optional mechanisms for negotiating the IP version to use as
well as the encapsulation mode to use are outside the scope/domain.
Design of optional mechanisms for negotiating the IP version to use as
well as the encapsulation mode to use is outside the scope/=20

Ch.5:
s/registration of the MN or the CN respectively./registration of the MN
or the CN, respectively./

s/by CN's MAG (MAG2/MAG2') and its LMA (LMA2)./by CN's MAG (MAG2/MAG2')
and its LMA (LMA2/LMA2')./=20

s/are located in provider domain A/are located in provider domain A./

s/and CN's LMA (LMA2) is located in provider domain B/and CN's LMA
(LMA2') is located in provider domain B./

Thanks for all the work to editors and chairs ... And a Happy New Year
to all!

Best regards
Dirk
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Hi guys

I have a quick review of this draft. My main concern is about
the concept of CN(Correspondent Node).

Firstly, there is another definition in RFC3775 regarding CN.
What is the relationship between these two definitions?

Secondly, My impression is that the draft mostly assumes 
CNs are always attached to MAGs.  The draft should make
it clear that CNs could be mobile or stationary. It would 
be better to state why stationary CNs are not taken into account.

Lastly, this draft uses "set up" as a noun, e.g "The set up 
and maintenance of localized routing". I am not sure if its
appropriate.

BR
Frank

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At IETF79 we agreed to progress the "PMIPv6 Localized Routing Problem
Statement" I-D following a WG last call.
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Hi,

I have read this draft, and I have some comments.


The scope of the base
   protocol covers the set up and maintenance of a forwarding tunnel
   between an MN's Mobility Access Gateway (MAG) and its selected Local
   Mobility Anchor (LMA).

MAG is defined as Mobile Access Gateway in RFC5213.

Localized Routing States: Information for localized routing on
      relevant forwarding entities on the direct data path between an MN
      and a CN.

"direct data path" seems not clear enough.

Mechanisms for
   route optimization in MIPv6 cannot be directly applied in PMIPv6, as
   MNs do not take part in mobility management and associated signaling.
   Following the paradigm of PMIPv6, MNs are not involved in mobility
   signaling, hence cannot perform signaling to set up localized routes.

These two sentences seem a bit duplicated or redundant to me.

Instead, the PMIPv6 functional entities of the LMA and MAG, which are
   involved in the mobility management of the MN and the CN, must be
   able to find out whether or not a localized route is to be used and
   then control the setup and maintenance of localized routing states
   accordingly without any assistance from the MN and the CN.

I feel uncomfortable in the "must".

Section 2 reads,
   o  Localized Routing: Result of signaling to set up routing states on
      relevant network entities to allow forwarding of data packets
      between an MN and a CN, which are attached to the **same provider
      domain** without intervention of the MN's LMA and the CN's LMA in
      data forwarding.

However, section 5 says,
A solution for localized routing cannot take any
   assumption about **whether or not MN and CN share the same PMIPv6
   domain**, ...
It is not required that LMAs, which hold the registration for the MN
   and the CN respectively, are part of the **same provider domain** as the
   MAGs where MN and CN attach.

it is confusing, localized routing is intra-domain-only or
inter-domain-possible?


Regards,
Xiangsong

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Xiangsong Cui [mailto://Xiangsong.Cui@huawei.com] writes:

> Localized Routing States: Information for localized routing on
>       relevant forwarding entities on the direct data path between an MN
>       and a CN.
> 
> "direct data path" seems not clear enough.

Have a suggestion?

...

> Instead, the PMIPv6 functional entities of the LMA and MAG, which are
>    involved in the mobility management of the MN and the CN, must be
>    able to find out whether or not a localized route is to be used and
>    then control the setup and maintenance of localized routing states
>    accordingly without any assistance from the MN and the CN.
> 
> I feel uncomfortable in the "must".

I don't understand why not.

...


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> > Localized Routing States: Information for localized routing on
> >       relevant forwarding entities on the direct data path between an MN
> >       and a CN.
> >
> > "direct data path" seems not clear enough.
> 
> Have a suggestion?

This is a difficult job to me, too, but I would like to try.
Localized Routing States: Information for localized routing on relevant
forwarding entities, which route the packets directly to the care-of address
of the destination node, rather than the home address.

> 
> ...
> 
> > Instead, the PMIPv6 functional entities of the LMA and MAG, which are
> >    involved in the mobility management of the MN and the CN, must be
> >    able to find out whether or not a localized route is to be used and
> >    then control the setup and maintenance of localized routing states
> >    accordingly without any assistance from the MN and the CN.
> >
> > I feel uncomfortable in the "must".
> 
> I don't understand why not.

Is it wrong if the entity is NOT able to find out ... ?

Xiangsong

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Xiangsong Cui [mailto://Xiangsong.Cui@huawei.com] writes:

...

> > > Instead, the PMIPv6 functional entities of the LMA and MAG, which
> are
> > >    involved in the mobility management of the MN and the CN, must be
> > >    able to find out whether or not a localized route is to be used
> and
> > >    then control the setup and maintenance of localized routing
> states
> > >    accordingly without any assistance from the MN and the CN.
> > >
> > > I feel uncomfortable in the "must".
> >
> > I don't understand why not.
> 
> Is it wrong if the entity is NOT able to find out ... ?

If both the LMA & MAG support localized routing but can't decide whether or
not to use it, that seems like a problem to me.

...



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> If both the LMA & MAG support localized routing but can't decide whether
or
> not to use it, that seems like a problem to me.

This is just a problem statement, why do you have the assumption of "LMA &
MAG support localized routing"?

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I-D: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03.txt

Review comments:

General:
The I-D illustrates multiple scenarios and use cases for optimized
routing. However the WG has clearly noted that the scope of such
localized routing should be limited to the scope of a single PMIP6
domain. Inter-LMA routing is also out of scope. These points should be
noted in the I-D as being relevant to the solution scope.
Additional comments below:

Issues:

- It would be good to note in the introduction that RFC5213 (Sec
  6.10.3) does allow packets between an MN and CN attached to a common
  MAG to be routed without having to traverse thru the LMA.

- The scope of Localized routing as far as I understand is between
  nodes that are attached to a common LMA. There is no inter-LMA
  routing. The definition of localized routing in sec 2 seems to
  indicate otherwise.
"  Localized Routing: Result of signaling to set up routing states on
      relevant network entities to allow forwarding of data packets
      between an MN and a CN, which are attached to the same provider
      domain without intervention of the MN's LMA and the CN's LMA in
      data forwarding.
"

Proposed change:
Localized routing: The capability to route packets between an MN and
CN which are attached to a common LMA but potentially different MAGs
without having to traverse the LMA is refered to as localized
routing.=20

- In sec 3.2, it would be useful to show the concept of a PMIP6 domain
  in the figure (Fig 1). You could make the argument that there could
  be multiple LMAs within the scope of a single PMI6 domain. However
  the PS doc needs to clearly state that the scope of LR is only
  between nodes that are served by a common LMA.

- Also in Fig 1, you may want to illustrate multiple MAGs within the
  scope of a single LMA.

- Case A11 is already handled by RFC5213. So maybe you can just
  mention it as such.

- W.r.t A12 you need to also consider whether MAG1 is part of the same
  PMIP6 domain or is associated with LMAs that are in different PMIP6
  domain. Do both LMAs have to authorize (EnableMAGLocalRouting flag)
  in order for this to work?

- It is okay to include A22, but only as a potential use case. You may
  want to emphasise that the WG is not considering this use case
  because of the complexities involved.

- In Sec 3.3.2:
"Optional mechanisms for negotiating the IP version to use
   as well as the encapsulation mode to use are outside the scope of the
   NetExt WG's solution for localized routing."
  =20
   Why does the PS I-D have to say anything about solution scope?

- The functional requirements in Sec 4 appear to be specifying a
  solution. This section could be safely dropped IMO.

Editorial:

- s/for network-based localized mobility management (NetLMM) which
  takes basic operation for registration, de-registration and handover
  into account. /for network-based localized mobility managment.

- s/Even though an MN may be attached to the
   same or a different MAG as its Correspondent Node (CN) within the
   same provider domain, packets being associated with their
   communication will traverse the MN's and the CN's LMA./Packets
   associated with a session between an MN and CN which are attached
   to the same PMIP6 domain via a common LMA are always routed via the
   LMA.=20

- s/The NetLMM Extensions (NetExt) Working Group has an objective to
   design a solution for localized routing in PMIPv6./An optimized
   approach to routing of packets between nodes attached to a common
   LMA is considered useful. The NetLMM Extensions (NetExt) working
   group has a charter item to specify a localized routing solution
   for Proxy Mobile IPv6.

Rewrite the following with better clarity:
" In case one or both nodes hand over to a different MAG, the localized
   routing protocol maintains the localized routing path.  Relevant
   protocol interfaces may include the interface between associated
   MAGs, between a MAG and an LMA as well as between LMAs.
"

- s/3.1.  General observation/Background and justification


- s/At least some deployment would benefit from having such
   communication localized, rather than traverse the core network to the
   LMA(s)./Deployment benefit in terms of reduced backhaul is realized
   by having packets between an MN and CN associated with a common LMA
   localized to the relevant MAGs.

- s/Localized routing is crucial at least/Localized routing is
  relevant at least

- s/Hence, providing the
   necessary protocol specification to enable localized routing in
   PMIPv6 is necessary./Hence, specifying optimizations to packet
   routing between nodes attached to a common LMA has performance and
   cost benefits.

- s/3.2.  Analysis of different use cases/ Use Case analysis

- s/The following list summarizes some key functions, which need to
   be performed by the PMIPv6 enabled network infrastructure to
   substitute mobile nodes in setting up a direct route./The following
   is a list of some of the key functions which need to be implemented
   by the MAG and LMA nodes in a PMIP6 enabled network.

- In Sec 5, it would be worthwhile to also include some analysis text
  regarding which of the roaming scenarios may be considered out of
  scope at the present time.
=20
-Basavaraj



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Hi Dirk,

thanks a lot for the review and your comments! Please find
some feedback inline.

Dirk.von-Hugo@telekom.de wrote:
> Dear all,
> I have read the draft and think it has improved, is concise, clear, and
> correct ... Beyond some nits detected as follows: 
>
> Ch. 3.1: 
>    Hence, providing the
>    necessary protocol specification to enable localized routing in
>    PMIPv6 is necessary.
> => I think it sounds nice when we exchange 'necessary' by 'required' or
> 'strongly recommended'
>   
'recommended' sounds good.

> Ch. 3.2:
> s/being build by the CN's/being built by the CN's/
> => or may we omit 'being' completely? 
>   
yes, too many beings.. I think simply 'PMIP6 domain built by the CN's 
LMA..' should be ok.

> ... considered as the MN's current pCoA,
> => add explanation (previous CoA, Proxy-CoA, ... ?)
>   
good point, I'll expand it.

> s/Accordingly, these topological difference are denoted/Accordingly,
> these topological differences are denoted/ 
>   
ok

> s/without traversing the MNs' LMA(s)/without traversing the MNs'
> LMA(s)./
>   
ok

> Ch. 3.3.2:
>
> s/domain .  Optional mechanisms for negotiating the IP version to use as
> well as the encapsulation mode to use are outside the scope/domain.
> Design of optional mechanisms for negotiating the IP version to use as
> well as the encapsulation mode to use is outside the scope/ 
>   
ok

> Ch.5:
> s/registration of the MN or the CN respectively./registration of the MN
> or the CN, respectively./
>   
ok

> s/by CN's MAG (MAG2/MAG2') and its LMA (LMA2)./by CN's MAG (MAG2/MAG2')
> and its LMA (LMA2/LMA2')./ 
>   
true

> s/are located in provider domain A/are located in provider domain A./
>   
ok

> s/and CN's LMA (LMA2) is located in provider domain B/and CN's LMA
> (LMA2') is located in provider domain B./
>   
ok

> Thanks for all the work to editors and chairs ... And a Happy New Year
> to all!
>   
Many thanks to you for finding and proposing revision to all these 
editorial items.

Best regards,
marco

> Best regards
> Dirk
>  
> Von: netext-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:netext-bounces@ietf.org] Im Auftrag
> von Basavaraj.Patil@nokia.com
> Gesendet: Dienstag, 4. Januar 2011 19:07
> An: netext@ietf.org
> Betreff: [netext] WG last call: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03
>
>
> At IETF79 we agreed to progress the "PMIPv6 Localized Routing Problem
> Statement" I-D following a WG last call.
> The I-D has gone through a WG last call previously. Please consider this
> as the WG last call for the following I-D:
> draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03.txt
>
>
> Reviews and feedback are appreciated. The WG last call will expire on
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Hi Frank,

thanks for your feedback. Please see inline.

Frank Xia wrote:
> Hi guys
>
> I have a quick review of this draft. My main concern is about
> the concept of CN(Correspondent Node).
>
> Firstly, there is another definition in RFC3775 regarding CN.
> What is the relationship between these two definitions?
>   
I do not see these two definitions conflicting. RFC3775 says:
"A peer node with which a mobile node is communicating. The 
correspondent node
may be either mobile or stationary."
For the LR discussion, NetExt considers a specific setup, which has the
MN's communication peer attached at a MAG as well. Only such use case
is relevant for NetExt. The additional definition for the CN in the PS draft
is to clarify where the CN is assumed for the use cases discussed in the PS.

We had a discussion long time ago about using MN1-MN2 or MN-CN. We
sticked to MN-CN to indicate also the direction of the communication setup.
Hence, MN sends first data packets to CN, which can trigger the setup of a
localized routing path. I also feel more comfortable in writing and reading
such notation rather than always using MN1, MN2.
If the WG finds this important to change, I can revise it.

> Secondly, My impression is that the draft mostly assumes 
> CNs are always attached to MAGs.  The draft should make
> it clear that CNs could be mobile or stationary. It would 
> be better to state why stationary CNs are not taken into account.
>   
Well, the CN can be stationary as long as it is attached to a MAG and
managed by PMIPv6. I agree that managing such node with PMIP may not
make too much sense. When it's stationary and *not* managed by PMIP,
we enter the discussion again to consider regular IPv6 nodes on an
access router. That has been addressed by Carlos long time ago.
We mention this in section 3.1, 2nd paragraph, but chairs ruled it out
from the solution.

I agree that the definition of CN in the PS repeats some parts of RFC3775.
We could revise text to say something like 'Take the definition according to
RFC3775 and assume further characteristics for the CN, such as MAG-attached,
PMIP managed.' Do you think this makes it clearer?

> Lastly, this draft uses "set up" as a noun, e.g "The set up 
> and maintenance of localized routing". I am not sure if its
> appropriate.
>   
Ok, I'll check.

Thanks,
marco

> BR
> Frank
>
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>
>
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Hi Xiangsong,

thanks for your comments. Please see inline.

Xiangsong Cui wrote:
> Hi,
>
> I have read this draft, and I have some comments.
>
>
> The scope of the base
>    protocol covers the set up and maintenance of a forwarding tunnel
>    between an MN's Mobility Access Gateway (MAG) and its selected Local
>    Mobility Anchor (LMA).
>
> MAG is defined as Mobile Access Gateway in RFC5213.
>   
Ok, I'll revise the expanded wording accordingly.

> Localized Routing States: Information for localized routing on
>       relevant forwarding entities on the direct data path between an MN
>       and a CN.
>
> "direct data path" seems not clear enough.
>   
I remember we had some discussion on this. What about the following:
'...entities on the optimized path between...' ?

> Mechanisms for
>    route optimization in MIPv6 cannot be directly applied in PMIPv6, as
>    MNs do not take part in mobility management and associated signaling.
>    Following the paradigm of PMIPv6, MNs are not involved in mobility
>    signaling, hence cannot perform signaling to set up localized routes.
>
> These two sentences seem a bit duplicated or redundant to me.
>   
Ok, let's omit the second part of the first sentence:
'Mechanisms for route optimization in MIPv6 cannot be directly
applied in PMIPv6. Following the paradigm of PMIPv6, MNs are
not involved in mobility signaling, hence cannot perform signaling
to set up localized routes.'

> Instead, the PMIPv6 functional entities of the LMA and MAG, which are
>    involved in the mobility management of the MN and the CN, must be
>    able to find out whether or not a localized route is to be used and
>    then control the setup and maintenance of localized routing states
>    accordingly without any assistance from the MN and the CN.
>
> I feel uncomfortable in the "must".
>   
This has been discussed in further mails. I'll reply using the latest one
of your discussion with Glen.

> Section 2 reads,
>    o  Localized Routing: Result of signaling to set up routing states on
>       relevant network entities to allow forwarding of data packets
>       between an MN and a CN, which are attached to the **same provider
>       domain** without intervention of the MN's LMA and the CN's LMA in
>       data forwarding.
>
> However, section 5 says,
> A solution for localized routing cannot take any
>    assumption about **whether or not MN and CN share the same PMIPv6
>    domain**, ...
> It is not required that LMAs, which hold the registration for the MN
>    and the CN respectively, are part of the **same provider domain** as the
>    MAGs where MN and CN attach.
>
> it is confusing, localized routing is intra-domain-only or
> inter-domain-possible?
>   
Ok, I see. The first paragraph (Terminology) refers to the two MAGs, which
must share the same provider domain according to a NetExt WG decision.
The paragraph in section 5 refers to the anchors of the MN and the CN,
hence talks about the LMAs in the roaming model.
I agree we need to clarify this. What about the following:

' o  Localized Routing: Result of signaling to set up routing states on
      relevant network entities to allow forwarding of data packets
      between an MN and a CN, which are attached to MAGs sharing the
      same provider domain without intervention of the MN's LMA and the
      CN's LMA in data forwarding.'


Section 5:

'A solution for localized routing cannot take any assumption about 
   whether or not the MN's and CN's LMAs share the same PMIPv6
   domain, ...'

Does this revision make the text clearer?


Thanks and best regards,
marco


>
> Regards,
> Xiangsong
>
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Hi Xiangsong,

please see inline.

Glen Zorn wrote:
> Xiangsong Cui [mailto://Xiangsong.Cui@huawei.com] writes:
>
> ...
>
>   
>>>> Instead, the PMIPv6 functional entities of the LMA and MAG, which
>>>>         
>> are
>>     
>>>>    involved in the mobility management of the MN and the CN, must be
>>>>    able to find out whether or not a localized route is to be used
>>>>         
>> and
>>     
>>>>    then control the setup and maintenance of localized routing
>>>>         
>> states
>>     
>>>>    accordingly without any assistance from the MN and the CN.
>>>>
>>>> I feel uncomfortable in the "must".
>>>>         
>>> I don't understand why not.
>>>       
>> Is it wrong if the entity is NOT able to find out ... ?
>>     
>
> If both the LMA & MAG support localized routing but can't decide whether or
> not to use it, that seems like a problem to me.
>
> ...
>
>   
The sentence comprise two aspects: Finding out whether or not to 
optimize, and
controlling the setup. 'Finding out' can be based on a third component 
or an indication,
even a static policy to optimize for a particular pool of MN/CN 
prefixes. Still, it's the
PMIP components who find out, using whatever mechanism This is needed, 
hence a must.
Also the 'control of LR setup': We can rely only on existing PMIP components
to enable LR, at least for the key functions like signaling etc. To 
solve the problem,
I also see here a must.

But if you have a proposal which takes these requirements into account 
and makes
you feeling more comfortable, we can discuss this.

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Xiangsong Cui wrote:
>> If both the LMA & MAG support localized routing but can't decide whether
>>     
> or
>   
>> not to use it, that seems like a problem to me.
>>     
>
> This is just a problem statement, why do you have the assumption of "LMA &
> MAG support localized routing"?
>   
I think because these are the only components we can do something to enable
LR, which is the problem we want to analyze and solve.

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> > Localized Routing States: Information for localized routing on
> >       relevant forwarding entities on the direct data path between an MN
> >       and a CN.
> >
> > "direct data path" seems not clear enough.
> >
> I remember we had some discussion on this. What about the following:
> '...entities on the optimized path between...' ?

Yeah ;) 
the new words is ok to me.

> 
> > Mechanisms for
> >    route optimization in MIPv6 cannot be directly applied in PMIPv6, as
> >    MNs do not take part in mobility management and associated signaling.
> >    Following the paradigm of PMIPv6, MNs are not involved in mobility
> >    signaling, hence cannot perform signaling to set up localized routes.
> >
> > These two sentences seem a bit duplicated or redundant to me.
> >
> Ok, let's omit the second part of the first sentence:
> 'Mechanisms for route optimization in MIPv6 cannot be directly
> applied in PMIPv6. Following the paradigm of PMIPv6, MNs are
> not involved in mobility signaling, hence cannot perform signaling
> to set up localized routes.'

Ok.

> 
> > Instead, the PMIPv6 functional entities of the LMA and MAG, which are
> >    involved in the mobility management of the MN and the CN, must be
> >    able to find out whether or not a localized route is to be used and
> >    then control the setup and maintenance of localized routing states
> >    accordingly without any assistance from the MN and the CN.
> >
> > I feel uncomfortable in the "must".
> >
> This has been discussed in further mails. I'll reply using the latest one
> of your discussion with Glen.

Ok.

> 
> > Section 2 reads,
> >    o  Localized Routing: Result of signaling to set up routing states on
> >       relevant network entities to allow forwarding of data packets
> >       between an MN and a CN, which are attached to the **same
> provider
> >       domain** without intervention of the MN's LMA and the CN's LMA in
> >       data forwarding.
> >
> > However, section 5 says,
> > A solution for localized routing cannot take any
> >    assumption about **whether or not MN and CN share the same PMIPv6
> >    domain**, ...
> > It is not required that LMAs, which hold the registration for the MN
> >    and the CN respectively, are part of the **same provider domain** as
> the
> >    MAGs where MN and CN attach.
> >
> > it is confusing, localized routing is intra-domain-only or
> > inter-domain-possible?
> >
> Ok, I see. The first paragraph (Terminology) refers to the two MAGs, which
> must share the same provider domain according to a NetExt WG decision.
> The paragraph in section 5 refers to the anchors of the MN and the CN,
> hence talks about the LMAs in the roaming model.
> I agree we need to clarify this. What about the following:
> 
> ' o  Localized Routing: Result of signaling to set up routing states on
>       relevant network entities to allow forwarding of data packets
>       between an MN and a CN, which are attached to MAGs sharing the
>       same provider domain without intervention of the MN's LMA and the
>       CN's LMA in data forwarding.'
> 
> 
> Section 5:
> 
> 'A solution for localized routing cannot take any assumption about
>    whether or not the MN's and CN's LMAs share the same PMIPv6
>    domain, ...'
> 
> Does this revision make the text clearer?

Good, I see the points.

Thanks and regards,
Xiangsong

> 
> 
> Thanks and best regards,
> marco
> 
> 
> >
> > Regards,
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> >
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> >> At IETF79 we agreed to progress the "PMIPv6 Localized Routing Problem
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> > This is just a problem statement, why do you have the assumption of "LMA
&
> > MAG support localized routing"?
> >
> I think because these are the only components we can do something to
enable
> LR, which is the problem we want to analyze and solve.

If you say "To achieve localized routing, the entities must be able to (or
say have to be able to) ...", I would be ok.
But as Raj mentioned, the PS document should not say anything about the
solution space, I'm not sure is it appropriate under this criterion.

Regards,
Xiangsong

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Hi Xiangsong,

one correction of my proposal inline.

Xiangsong Cui wrote:
>>> Localized Routing States: Information for localized routing on
>>>       relevant forwarding entities on the direct data path between an MN
>>>       and a CN.
>>>
>>> "direct data path" seems not clear enough.
>>>
>>>       
>> I remember we had some discussion on this. What about the following:
>> '...entities on the optimized path between...' ?
>>     
>
> Yeah ;) 
> the new words is ok to me.
>
>   
>>> Mechanisms for
>>>    route optimization in MIPv6 cannot be directly applied in PMIPv6, as
>>>    MNs do not take part in mobility management and associated signaling.
>>>    Following the paradigm of PMIPv6, MNs are not involved in mobility
>>>    signaling, hence cannot perform signaling to set up localized routes.
>>>
>>> These two sentences seem a bit duplicated or redundant to me.
>>>
>>>       
>> Ok, let's omit the second part of the first sentence:
>> 'Mechanisms for route optimization in MIPv6 cannot be directly
>> applied in PMIPv6. Following the paradigm of PMIPv6, MNs are
>> not involved in mobility signaling, hence cannot perform signaling
>> to set up localized routes.'
>>     
>
> Ok.
>
>   
>>> Instead, the PMIPv6 functional entities of the LMA and MAG, which are
>>>    involved in the mobility management of the MN and the CN, must be
>>>    able to find out whether or not a localized route is to be used and
>>>    then control the setup and maintenance of localized routing states
>>>    accordingly without any assistance from the MN and the CN.
>>>
>>> I feel uncomfortable in the "must".
>>>
>>>       
>> This has been discussed in further mails. I'll reply using the latest one
>> of your discussion with Glen.
>>     
>
> Ok.
>
>   
>>> Section 2 reads,
>>>    o  Localized Routing: Result of signaling to set up routing states on
>>>       relevant network entities to allow forwarding of data packets
>>>       between an MN and a CN, which are attached to the **same
>>>       
>> provider
>>     
>>>       domain** without intervention of the MN's LMA and the CN's LMA in
>>>       data forwarding.
>>>
>>> However, section 5 says,
>>> A solution for localized routing cannot take any
>>>    assumption about **whether or not MN and CN share the same PMIPv6
>>>    domain**, ...
>>> It is not required that LMAs, which hold the registration for the MN
>>>    and the CN respectively, are part of the **same provider domain** as
>>>       
>> the
>>     
>>>    MAGs where MN and CN attach.
>>>
>>> it is confusing, localized routing is intra-domain-only or
>>> inter-domain-possible?
>>>
>>>       
>> Ok, I see. The first paragraph (Terminology) refers to the two MAGs, which
>> must share the same provider domain according to a NetExt WG decision.
>> The paragraph in section 5 refers to the anchors of the MN and the CN,
>> hence talks about the LMAs in the roaming model.
>> I agree we need to clarify this. What about the following:
>>
>> ' o  Localized Routing: Result of signaling to set up routing states on
>>       relevant network entities to allow forwarding of data packets
>>       between an MN and a CN, which are attached to MAGs sharing the
>>       same provider domain without intervention of the MN's LMA and the
>>       CN's LMA in data forwarding.'
>>
>>
>> Section 5:
>>
>> 'A solution for localized routing cannot take any assumption about
>>    whether or not the MN's and CN's LMAs share the same PMIPv6
>>    domain, ...'
>>
>> Does this revision make the text clearer?
>>     
>
>   
The paragraphs talk about different domains. The first one refers to the 
provider
domain, whereas Section 5 refers to the PMIPv6 domain. I still think 
that the
proposed revision to the Terms section helps to understand the requirement,
that both MAGs must share the provider domain. For Section 5, I think we
should stick to the original text, as it talks about PMIP domains, which are
defined by the relation between an MN's MAG-LMA association. Ok with you?

marco




> Good, I see the points.
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Xiangsong
>
>   
>> Thanks and best regards,
>> marco
>>
>>
>>     
>>> Regards,
>>> Xiangsong
>>>
>>>
>>>       
>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>> From: netext-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:netext-bounces@ietf.org] On
>>>>         
> Behalf
>   
>>> Of
>>>
>>>       
>>>> Basavaraj.Patil@nokia.com
>>>> Sent: Wednesday, January 05, 2011 2:07 AM
>>>> To: netext@ietf.org
>>>> Subject: [netext] WG last call: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> At IETF79 we agreed to progress the "PMIPv6 Localized Routing Problem
>>>> Statement" I-D following a WG last call.
>>>> The I-D has gone through a WG last call previously. Please consider
>>>>         
> this
>   
>>>> as the WG last call for the following I-D:
>>>> draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03.txt
>>>>
>>>>
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>>>>         
> Jan
>   
>>>> 20th.
>>>>
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Xiangsong Cui wrote:
>>> This is just a problem statement, why do you have the assumption of "LMA
>>>       
> &
>   
>>> MAG support localized routing"?
>>>
>>>       
>> I think because these are the only components we can do something to
>>     
> enable
>   
>> LR, which is the problem we want to analyze and solve.
>>     
>
> If you say "To achieve localized routing, the entities must be able to (or
> say have to be able to) ...", I would be ok.
>   
Ok. 'Entities' is not really clear, IMHO. What about using 'the solution'
and refer in this context to functions in the network as we cannot rely on
the MN?

Result:
'...the solution must consider functions in the network to find out whether
or not a localized route is to be used and then control the setup and 
maintenance
of localized routing states accordingly without any assistance from the 
MN and the CN.'

Is that ok?

marco

> But as Raj mentioned, the PS document should not say anything about the
> solution space, I'm not sure is it appropriate under this criterion.
>
> Regards,
> Xiangsong
>
>   
>> marco
>>
>>     
>>> Xiangsong
>>>
>>>
>>>       
>>>> ...
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Hi Raj,

thanks for your review and comments. Please see inline.

Basavaraj.Patil@nokia.com wrote:
> I-D: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03.txt
>
> Review comments:
>
> General:
> The I-D illustrates multiple scenarios and use cases for optimized
> routing. However the WG has clearly noted that the scope of such
> localized routing should be limited to the scope of a single PMIP6
> domain.
I think section 3.2, where we start the analysis, can mention this. What 
about
starting with the following intro:
'This problem statement focuses on local communication between PMIPv6
managed nodes being attached to MAGs sharing the same provider domain.'

>  Inter-LMA routing is also out of scope.
I think routing between two LMAs is nothing we can influence. That happens
when two MNs communicate, even without localized routing.

>  These points should be
> noted in the I-D as being relevant to the solution scope.
>   
Is the sentence above for section 3.2 ok with you?

> Additional comments below:
>
> Issues:
>
> - It would be good to note in the introduction that RFC5213 (Sec
>   6.10.3) does allow packets between an MN and CN attached to a common
>   MAG to be routed without having to traverse thru the LMA.
>   
Ok, we address this in 3.1, but can also refer to it in the Intro. 
However, I think that
RFC5213 just *considers* it without *supporting* it. This means, the 
spec mandates
the LMA to control such local routing, but means to control are not 
available.
So, what about adding the following to the Intro:

Intro:
'...[RFC5213] addresses the need to enable local routing of traffic 
between two nodes
being attached to the same MAG, but does not specify the complete procedure
to establish such localized routing state on the shared MAG...'

> - The scope of Localized routing as far as I understand is between
>   nodes that are attached to a common LMA. There is no inter-LMA
>   routing. The definition of localized routing in sec 2 seems to
>   indicate otherwise.
> "  Localized Routing: Result of signaling to set up routing states on
>       relevant network entities to allow forwarding of data packets
>       between an MN and a CN, which are attached to the same provider
>       domain without intervention of the MN's LMA and the CN's LMA in
>       data forwarding.
> "
>
> Proposed change:
> Localized routing: The capability to route packets between an MN and
> CN which are attached to a common LMA but potentially different MAGs
> without having to traverse the LMA is refered to as localized
> routing. 
>   
Same as above, I do not think this can be influenced. When two
PMIP managed MNs communicate, their traffic always traverses
their LMAs, hence is routed between their LMAs. This has nothing
to do with the localized routing issue. Hence, we cannot exclude this
from the PS. Limiting the scope of a solution for LR to single MAG
operation, this is something different. However, the NetExt WG's
solution draft also specifies LR for multi-LMA scenarios.
So, why shouldn't this be considered then in the PS.

> - In sec 3.2, it would be useful to show the concept of a PMIP6 domain
>   in the figure (Fig 1). You could make the argument that there could
>   be multiple LMAs within the scope of a single PMI6 domain. However
>   the PS doc needs to clearly state that the scope of LR is only
>   between nodes that are served by a common LMA.
>   
3.2 does not make an assumption about PMIP domains, as it's not relevant.
We went through the exercise to discuss and define the terms of PMIP domain
versus provider domain. We use these terms as agreed. NetExt WG scope 
limitation
to consider only MAGs sharing the same provider domain is explicitly 
mentioned
in 3.2. Do you agree this is sufficient? Btw, distribution of LMAs and 
MAGs between
different provider domains is discussed in the roaming section, which 
has been requested
some time ago. I think this helps to understand the limitations.

> - Also in Fig 1, you may want to illustrate multiple MAGs within the
>   scope of a single LMA.
>   
Not exactly clear to me what you propose. It's just an architecture picture
without associating MAGs to LMAs. This is done in section 3.2 and
section 5. Maybe you can provide an example what you want to
show in Fig 1 and indicate what's the advantage of showing this in Fig. 1.

> - Case A11 is already handled by RFC5213. So maybe you can just
>   mention it as such.
>   
Ok, same proposal as above, we can refer to what RFC5213 covers.
Basically it would be the same text as I proposed above. Is this ok
with you?
One question: How does RFC5213 localized routing distinguish
A11 from A12? And how do LMAs control the mandated enforcement of
localized routing?

> - W.r.t A12 you need to also consider whether MAG1 is part of the same
>   PMIP6 domain or is associated with LMAs that are in different PMIP6
>   domain. Do both LMAs have to authorize (EnableMAGLocalRouting flag)
>   in order for this to work?
>   
I do not know. I also cannot find this described in RFC5213. That's
why I doubt this is specified and supported by RFC5213. How to handle this?


> - It is okay to include A22, but only as a potential use case. You may
>   want to emphasise that the WG is not considering this use case
>   because of the complexities involved.
>   
Ok, I can add a statement. But is this really the responsibility of the 
Problem Statement?
Why should we enter the solution space and scope here? It's something the
charter should indicate, isn't it?

> - In Sec 3.3.2:
> "Optional mechanisms for negotiating the IP version to use
>    as well as the encapsulation mode to use are outside the scope of the
>    NetExt WG's solution for localized routing."
>    
>    Why does the PS I-D have to say anything about solution scope?
>   
Raj, now I am confused. Should the PS now refer to NetExt limitations or
not? For the A22 scenarios you want to have it, for other things not. Please
take a decision and let us know.

> - The functional requirements in Sec 4 appear to be specifying a
>   solution. This section could be safely dropped IMO.
>   
You're the only one proposing this so far. If the WG thinks this
should be out, no problem. We don't see this as solution. The bullets
just follow the problem analysis and list what's to be done to address 
the problems.
This also differentiates the problems from MIPv6 RO problems.
Maybe we can have more opinions on this?

Btw, there were some comments from Xiangsong and we revised text to
avoid solution specifics.

> Editorial:
>
> - s/for network-based localized mobility management (NetLMM) which
>   takes basic operation for registration, de-registration and handover
>   into account. /for network-based localized mobility managment.
>   
ok.
> - s/Even though an MN may be attached to the
>    same or a different MAG as its Correspondent Node (CN) within the
>    same provider domain, packets being associated with their
>    communication will traverse the MN's and the CN's LMA./Packets
>    associated with a session between an MN and CN which are attached
>    to the same PMIP6 domain via a common LMA are always routed via the
>    LMA. 
>   
Why do you propose mixing again provider with PMIP domain?
PMIP domain is not relevant here. 'provider domain' has been added
here as requested to highlight the NetExt limitation, where both MAGs
must share the same provider domain. I don't think we need to
mention NetExt scope limitations in every second sentence..

For remaining editorial comments, I'll take over relevant comments
which make text clearer. Most of the other proposals for editorial
changes make an effort to limit the description to single LMA scenario,
which even conflicts with NetExt scope, as the solution covers
scenarios with multiple LMAs. So, would it be ok to keep the
general PS, but mention the NetExt scope in the PS once? I think
this is sufficient and should be clarified first.

marco

> - s/The NetLMM Extensions (NetExt) Working Group has an objective to
>    design a solution for localized routing in PMIPv6./An optimized
>    approach to routing of packets between nodes attached to a common
>    LMA is considered useful. The NetLMM Extensions (NetExt) working
>    group has a charter item to specify a localized routing solution
>    for Proxy Mobile IPv6.
>
> Rewrite the following with better clarity:
> " In case one or both nodes hand over to a different MAG, the localized
>    routing protocol maintains the localized routing path.  Relevant
>    protocol interfaces may include the interface between associated
>    MAGs, between a MAG and an LMA as well as between LMAs.
> "
>
> - s/3.1.  General observation/Background and justification
>
>
> - s/At least some deployment would benefit from having such
>    communication localized, rather than traverse the core network to the
>    LMA(s)./Deployment benefit in terms of reduced backhaul is realized
>    by having packets between an MN and CN associated with a common LMA
>    localized to the relevant MAGs.
>
> - s/Localized routing is crucial at least/Localized routing is
>   relevant at least
>
> - s/Hence, providing the
>    necessary protocol specification to enable localized routing in
>    PMIPv6 is necessary./Hence, specifying optimizations to packet
>    routing between nodes attached to a common LMA has performance and
>    cost benefits.
>
> - s/3.2.  Analysis of different use cases/ Use Case analysis
>
> - s/The following list summarizes some key functions, which need to
>    be performed by the PMIPv6 enabled network infrastructure to
>    substitute mobile nodes in setting up a direct route./The following
>    is a list of some of the key functions which need to be implemented
>    by the MAG and LMA nodes in a PMIP6 enabled network.
>
> - In Sec 5, it would be worthwhile to also include some analysis text
>   regarding which of the roaming scenarios may be considered out of
>   scope at the present time.
>  
> -Basavaraj
>
>
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	Title           : PMIPv6 Localized Routing Problem Statement
	Author(s)       : M. Liebsch, et al.
	Filename        : draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-04.txt
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	Date            : 2011-01-12

Proxy Mobile IPv6 is the IETF standard for network-based mobility
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anchored at a Local Mobility Anchor, which forwards all data for
registered mobile nodes.  The setup and maintenance of localized
routing, which allows forwarding of data packets between mobile nodes
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Hello Marco

Thank your response.
Please also check my inline comments...

BR
Frank

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Hi Frank,

thanks for your feedback. Please see inline.

Frank Xia wrote:
> Hi guys
>
> I have a quick review of this draft. My main concern is about
> the concept of CN(Correspondent Node).
>
> Firstly, there is another definition in RFC3775 regarding CN.
> What is the relationship between these two definitions?
>   
I do not see these two definitions conflicting. RFC3775 says:
"A peer node with which a mobile node is communicating. The 
correspondent node
may be either mobile or stationary."
For the LR discussion, NetExt considers a specific setup, which has the
MN's communication peer attached at a MAG as well. Only such use case
is relevant for NetExt. The additional definition for the CN in the PS draft
is to clarify where the CN is assumed for the use cases discussed in the PS.

We had a discussion long time ago about using MN1-MN2 or MN-CN. We
sticked to MN-CN to indicate also the direction of the communication setup.
Hence, MN sends first data packets to CN, which can trigger the setup of a
localized routing path. I also feel more comfortable in writing and reading
such notation rather than always using MN1, MN2.
If the WG finds this important to change, I can revise it.

> Secondly, My impression is that the draft mostly assumes 
> CNs are always attached to MAGs.  The draft should make
> it clear that CNs could be mobile or stationary. It would 
> be better to state why stationary CNs are not taken into account.
>   
Well, the CN can be stationary as long as it is attached to a MAG and
managed by PMIPv6. I agree that managing such node with PMIP may not
make too much sense. When it's stationary and *not* managed by PMIP,
we enter the discussion again to consider regular IPv6 nodes on an
access router. That has been addressed by Carlos long time ago.
We mention this in section 3.1, 2nd paragraph, but chairs ruled it out
from the solution.
Frank=>Stationary CN means here regular IPv6 nodes attaching an access
router.
This is a ps document even though only some of the problems could be dealt
with.
Whole picture of the problems is important to understand.

I agree that the definition of CN in the PS repeats some parts of RFC3775.
We could revise text to say something like 'Take the definition according to
RFC3775 and assume further characteristics for the CN, such as MAG-attached,
PMIP managed.' Do you think this makes it clearer?
Frank=>I don't think so. Anyway, you figure it out, and this is not
very important issue.

> Lastly, this draft uses "set up" as a noun, e.g "The set up 
> and maintenance of localized routing". I am not sure if its
> appropriate.
>   
Ok, I'll check.

Thanks,
marco

> BR
> Frank
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> The paragraphs talk about different domains. The first one refers to the
> provider
> domain, whereas Section 5 refers to the PMIPv6 domain. I still think
> that the
> proposed revision to the Terms section helps to understand the
requirement,
> that both MAGs must share the provider domain. For Section 5, I think we
> should stick to the original text, as it talks about PMIP domains, which
are
> defined by the relation between an MN's MAG-LMA association. Ok with you?

I think I understand your point, but I still think the words is not clear
enough.

Firstly, I would like to see the terminology of "provider domain" and "PMIP
domain". In addition, "home domain" is mentioned in section 5.

In Section 2, localized routing is defined as (I refer to PS-draft-04),

   o  Localized Routing: Result of signaling to set up routing states on
      relevant network entities to allow forwarding of data packets
      between an MN and a CN, which are attached to MAGs sharing the
      ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
      same provider domain, without intervention of the MN's LMA and the
      CN's LMA in data forwarding.

My questions to this definition are,
If MN is attached to MAG1 while CN is attached to MAG2, however, MAG1 and
MAG2 are from different carriers (the hint here is that the corresponding
LMAs are also from different carriers), is this scenario falls in the scope
of localized routing?  MN and CN are NOT attached to MAGs in the same
carrier network, is it true that the MAGs are NOT sharing the same "provider
domain" in this case?

In section 5, also saying about "provider domain",
   Figure 2 shows PMIPv6 roaming cases where PMIPv6 components (e.g.,
   LMAs, MAGs) tied by MN and CN may be distributed between different
   ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
   provider domains (i.e., domain A, B, C) and MN and/or CN moves from
   ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
   one provider domain to another one.  In order to support localized
   routing when roaming occurs, it is required that MAGs to which MN and
                                          ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
   CN connect are within the same provider domain and each MAG has a
   ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
   security relationship with the corresponding LMA which maintains the
   registration of the MN or the CN, respectively.

The front says, in Figure 2, MAGs may be in different provider domains, and
section 5 mainly refers to figure 2 (where MAGs are actually distributed in
different provider domains), taking this as a basis, right?
The end of this paragraph says it is required that MAGs are within the same
provider domain, so should a "sharing-domain-figure" be provided as
reference?

Xiangsong

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Folks,

we published an update of the Localized Routing PS, which considers
editorial comments as far as we discussed and agreed, since version 03
was about to expire. A further update will follow, taking the remaining
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Network-Based Mobility Extensions Working Group of the IETF.


	Title           : PMIPv6 Localized Routing Problem Statement
	Author(s)       : M. Liebsch, et al.
	Filename        : draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-04.txt
	Pages           : 18
	Date            : 2011-01-12

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	Filename        : draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-04.txt
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Proxy Mobile IPv6 is the IETF standard for network-based mobility
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Hi Frank,
please see inline.

Am 12.01.2011 22:29, schrieb Frank Xia:
> Hello Marco
>
> Thank your response.
> Please also check my inline comments...
>
> BR
> Frank
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> -----Original Message-----
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> Cc: Basavaraj.Patil@nokia.com; netext@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [netext] WG last call: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03
>
> Hi Frank,
>
> thanks for your feedback. Please see inline.
>
> Frank Xia wrote:
>> Hi guys
>>
>> I have a quick review of this draft. My main concern is about
>> the concept of CN(Correspondent Node).
>>
>> Firstly, there is another definition in RFC3775 regarding CN.
>> What is the relationship between these two definitions?
>>
> I do not see these two definitions conflicting. RFC3775 says:
> "A peer node with which a mobile node is communicating. The
> correspondent node
> may be either mobile or stationary."
> For the LR discussion, NetExt considers a specific setup, which has the
> MN's communication peer attached at a MAG as well. Only such use case
> is relevant for NetExt. The additional definition for the CN in the PS draft
> is to clarify where the CN is assumed for the use cases discussed in the PS.
>
> We had a discussion long time ago about using MN1-MN2 or MN-CN. We
> sticked to MN-CN to indicate also the direction of the communication setup.
> Hence, MN sends first data packets to CN, which can trigger the setup of a
> localized routing path. I also feel more comfortable in writing and reading
> such notation rather than always using MN1, MN2.
> If the WG finds this important to change, I can revise it.
>
>> Secondly, My impression is that the draft mostly assumes
>> CNs are always attached to MAGs.  The draft should make
>> it clear that CNs could be mobile or stationary. It would
>> be better to state why stationary CNs are not taken into account.
>>
> Well, the CN can be stationary as long as it is attached to a MAG and
> managed by PMIPv6. I agree that managing such node with PMIP may not
> make too much sense. When it's stationary and *not* managed by PMIP,
> we enter the discussion again to consider regular IPv6 nodes on an
> access router. That has been addressed by Carlos long time ago.
> We mention this in section 3.1, 2nd paragraph, but chairs ruled it out
> from the solution.

> Frank=>Stationary CN means here regular IPv6 nodes attaching an access
> router.
> This is a ps document even though only some of the problems could be dealt
> with.
> Whole picture of the problems is important to understand.

If I understand correctly, you propose having a section in the PS that 
analyzes
the use case of setting up a localized route between an MN's MAG and a
regular IPv6 node being attached to an access router, even though such
scenario is out of scope of NetExt. Correct?



> I agree that the definition of CN in the PS repeats some parts of RFC3775.
> We could revise text to say something like 'Take the definition according to
> RFC3775 and assume further characteristics for the CN, such as MAG-attached,
> PMIP managed.' Do you think this makes it clearer?

> Frank=>I don't think so. Anyway, you figure it out, and this is not
> very important issue.

ok

Marco

>> Lastly, this draft uses "set up" as a noun, e.g "The set up
>> and maintenance of localized routing". I am not sure if its
>> appropriate.
>>
> Ok, I'll check.
>
> Thanks,
> marco
>
>> BR
>> Frank
>>
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Hi Xiangsong,
please see inline.

Am 13.01.2011 04:41, schrieb Xiangsong Cui:
>> The paragraphs talk about different domains. The first one refers to the
>> provider
>> domain, whereas Section 5 refers to the PMIPv6 domain. I still think
>> that the
>> proposed revision to the Terms section helps to understand the
> requirement,
>> that both MAGs must share the provider domain. For Section 5, I think we
>> should stick to the original text, as it talks about PMIP domains, which
> are
>> defined by the relation between an MN's MAG-LMA association. Ok with you?
> I think I understand your point, but I still think the words is not clear
> enough.
>
> Firstly, I would like to see the terminology of "provider domain" and "PMIP
> domain". In addition, "home domain" is mentioned in section 5.

PMIPv6 domain is defined in RFC5213.

Nodes in a 'provider domain' are administered by one authority, the 
mobile network provider.
For details of the discussion in this context, please refer to the eMail 
conversation from
Sept 2009. Do you propose to define the term of a 'provider domain' in 
the PS?

> In Section 2, localized routing is defined as (I refer to PS-draft-04),
>
>     o  Localized Routing: Result of signaling to set up routing states on
>        relevant network entities to allow forwarding of data packets
>        between an MN and a CN, which are attached to MAGs sharing the
>        ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>        same provider domain, without intervention of the MN's LMA and the
>        CN's LMA in data forwarding.
>
> My questions to this definition are,
> If MN is attached to MAG1 while CN is attached to MAG2, however, MAG1 and
> MAG2 are from different carriers (the hint here is that the corresponding
> LMAs are also from different carriers),
I don't think you can map the MAG association to the LMAs. In case of 
roaming, both,
MN and CN can be anchored at two LMAs of the same provider, their home 
provider A.
The case you refer to assumes that MAG1 is with provider B and MAG2 is with
provider C, hence, MAGs do not share the same provider. Such case is 
possible,
but not considered for localized routing in NetExt.

>   is this scenario falls in the scope
> of localized routing?
technically: yes, but the other question is if there is benefit in 
setting up
a route between these two MAGs. Depends on how the two domains are 
connected.
When inter-domain traffic traverses LMAs anyway, there is no benefit.


>    MN and CN are NOT attached to MAGs in the same
> carrier network, is it true that the MAGs are NOT sharing the same "provider
> domain" in this case?
yes.

> In section 5, also saying about "provider domain",
>     Figure 2 shows PMIPv6 roaming cases where PMIPv6 components (e.g.,
>     LMAs, MAGs) tied by MN and CN may be distributed between different
>     ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>     provider domains (i.e., domain A, B, C) and MN and/or CN moves from
>     ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>     one provider domain to another one.  In order to support localized
>     routing when roaming occurs, it is required that MAGs to which MN and
>                                            ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>     CN connect are within the same provider domain and each MAG has a
>     ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>     security relationship with the corresponding LMA which maintains the
>     registration of the MN or the CN, respectively.
>
> The front says, in Figure 2, MAGs may be in different provider domains,
where? Please point ot the text.

>   and
> section 5 mainly refers to figure 2 (where MAGs are actually distributed in
> different provider domains), taking this as a basis, right?
Do not confuse the components which are shared or located in different 
provider domains.
This is about MAGs only. When its says 'MAG1 and MAG2 are in the same 
provider
domain', this is independent of whether LMA1/2 is also in the same 
provider domain or not.
The discussion about the MN's LMA location relative to the associated 
MN's MAG location is
different from the location of two MAGs.


> The end of this paragraph says it is required that MAGs are within the same
> provider domain, so should a "sharing-domain-figure" be provided as
> reference?
it does. Fig 2 and associated text consider only MAGs in the same 
provider domain,
MAG1-MAG2, and MAG1'-MAG2', respectively.

marco

> Xiangsong
>
>> marco
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>> Good, I see the points.
>>>
>>> Thanks and regards,
>>> Xiangsong
>>>
>>>
>>>> Thanks and best regards,
>>>> marco
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> Regards,
>>>>> Xiangsong
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>>> From: netext-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:netext-bounces@ietf.org] On
>>>>>>
>>> Behalf
>>>
>>>>> Of
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> Basavaraj.Patil@nokia.com
>>>>>> Sent: Wednesday, January 05, 2011 2:07 AM
>>>>>> To: netext@ietf.org
>>>>>> Subject: [netext] WG last call: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> At IETF79 we agreed to progress the "PMIPv6 Localized Routing Problem
>>>>>> Statement" I-D following a WG last call.
>>>>>> The I-D has gone through a WG last call previously. Please consider
>>>>>>
>>> this
>>>
>>>>>> as the WG last call for the following I-D:
>>>>>> draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03.txt
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Reviews and feedback are appreciated. The WG last call will expire on
>>>>>>
>>> Jan
>>>
>>>>>> 20th.
>>>>>>
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Hi,

Here's my initial quick review of the "PMIPv6 Localized Routing Problem =
Statement" based on the recent -04 version.

- Jouni


--------------------------------

Nits:

 o The document seems to lack the IANA considerations section.
   Even if it is not needed, having a dummy section stating
   "This document has no IANA considerations" would be good.

 o Shouldn't the I-D reference to RFC3775bis instead of RFC3775?
   The bis is already in IESG.


Semi-substantial:

Section 1:

 o Propose rephrasing
   "..  maintenance of a forwarding tunnel between an MN's Mobile =
Access.."
   as
   "..  maintenance of a tunnel between an MN's Mobile Access.."

Section 3.1:

 o It is stated
   "Localized routing is understood in [RFC5213] as optimization of
   traffic between an MN and a CN under the same access router, whereas
   the MN connects to the MAG function of this access router and is
   registered with an LMA, but the CN is a regular IPv6 node without
   getting PMIPv6 service.  In such case, the MAG forwards traffic.."

  I do not agree with the above conclusion of CN's role. In RFC5213
  Section 6.10.3 says "..correspondent node that is locally attached
  to an access link connected to the mobile access gateway, .."
  To me this does not imply CN is not getting PMIPv6 service. I would
  propose rephrasing the text as:

  "Localized routing is understood in [RFC5213] as optimization of
   traffic between an MN and a CN that are attached to an access
   link connected to a same MAG. In such case, the MAG forwards
   traffic.."

 o The third paragraph listing localized routing benefits I think one
   additional benefit should be listed. Localized routing allows
   bypassing the LMA, which may help scaling of the LMA. The LMA is
   anyway aggregating traffic from a number of MAGs thus becoming a
   bottleneck more easily than a MAG.

Section 3.2:

 o What actually is a "provider domain"? A composition of PMIPv6
   domains? This should be clarified. Maybe even in the terminology
   section.

Section 3.3.1:

 o This section should at least mention that MN and CN should have
   IPv4 home addresses of the same scope. I know e.g. NAT is scoped
   away (which is good) but having more explicit statement here
   would add clarity imho.

 o In case of RFC1918 IPv4 home addresses CN's and MN's addresses
   must not overlap.

Section 3.3.2:

 o I would also add here that addressing used across all MAGs=20
   should be of the same scope (for both IPv4 and IPv6). That
   would make life a bit easier.

Section 5:

 o The last paragraph and the last sentence says "CN should stay
   with MN within the same domain." I did not get where this
   requirement is coming from.


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Hi Jouni,

thanks for your comments. Please see inline.

Am 13.01.2011 14:58, schrieb Jouni:
> Hi,
>
> Here's my initial quick review of the "PMIPv6 Localized Routing Problem Statement" based on the recent -04 version.
>
> - Jouni
>
>
> --------------------------------
>
> Nits:
>
>   o The document seems to lack the IANA considerations section.
>     Even if it is not needed, having a dummy section stating
>     "This document has no IANA considerations" would be good.
very good point. I'll add it.

>   o Shouldn't the I-D reference to RFC3775bis instead of RFC3775?
>     The bis is already in IESG.
Hmm, as long as it's not approved and published? I think in case we get the
PS to the RFC Editor state, by that time RFC3775bis may be public and
will be updated in the PS anyhow before publication. I'll check if it's
appropriate to refer to the bis now. Thanks for the hint.


>
> Semi-substantial:
>
> Section 1:
>
>   o Propose rephrasing
>     "..  maintenance of a forwarding tunnel between an MN's Mobile Access.."
>     as
>     "..  maintenance of a tunnel between an MN's Mobile Access.."
ok

> Section 3.1:
>
>   o It is stated
>     "Localized routing is understood in [RFC5213] as optimization of
>     traffic between an MN and a CN under the same access router, whereas
>     the MN connects to the MAG function of this access router and is
>     registered with an LMA, but the CN is a regular IPv6 node without
>     getting PMIPv6 service.  In such case, the MAG forwards traffic.."
>
>    I do not agree with the above conclusion of CN's role. In RFC5213
>    Section 6.10.3 says "..correspondent node that is locally attached
>    to an access link connected to the mobile access gateway, .."
>    To me this does not imply CN is not getting PMIPv6 service. I would
>    propose rephrasing the text as:
>
>    "Localized routing is understood in [RFC5213] as optimization of
>     traffic between an MN and a CN that are attached to an access
>     link connected to a same MAG. In such case, the MAG forwards
>     traffic.."
Reading RFC5213, both can be understood. Carlos mentioned the interpretation
of having regular IPv6 nodes below a MAG in Feb 2009. But this shows 
that RFC5213
is really not clear about which use cases are addressed and in 
particular how to achieve
and signal localized routing. At that time we agreed to refer to regular 
IPv6 nodes.
I don't think it's too relevant for the PS if it's a regular IPv6 node 
or a mobile node,
as mechanisms are obviously not completely covered in RFC5213. That means
there is still a problem and that's what the PS is about. So, if Carlos 
and others are
fine, I am also ok with taking over your shortened text.


>   o The third paragraph listing localized routing benefits I think one
>     additional benefit should be listed. Localized routing allows
>     bypassing the LMA, which may help scaling of the LMA. The LMA is
>     anyway aggregating traffic from a number of MAGs thus becoming a
>     bottleneck more easily than a MAG.
Ok, I'll add an item about LMA scalability. thanks.


> Section 3.2:
>
>   o What actually is a "provider domain"? A composition of PMIPv6
>     domains? This should be clarified. Maybe even in the terminology
>     section.
Let's add some description to the Terms section.

'Provider domain: A network domain in which network components
are administered by a single authority, e.g. the mobile operator.'

Does this sound ok?

Btw, we tried to propose text for such definition some time ago, folks
complained if we want to re-invent the wheel and re-define well
known terms ;-)


> Section 3.3.1:
>
>   o This section should at least mention that MN and CN should have
>     IPv4 home addresses of the same scope. I know e.g. NAT is scoped
>     away (which is good) but having more explicit statement here
>     would add clarity imho.

>   o In case of RFC1918 IPv4 home addresses CN's and MN's addresses
>     must not overlap.
Do you propose to write this as a requirement? We cannot assume this, as
we identify problems in this document.
Conflicts when using private address spaces can still happen. We covered 
this
in early versions of the PS, but had to take it out. Please clarify the 
last two
bullets. Thanks.


> Section 3.3.2:
>
>   o I would also add here that addressing used across all MAGs
>     should be of the same scope (for both IPv4 and IPv6). That
>     would make life a bit easier.
as requirement or as problem?

> Section 5:
>
>   o The last paragraph and the last sentence says "CN should stay
>     with MN within the same domain." I did not get where this
>     requirement is coming from.
Good point. This is really not clear.
I guess it should be said that in both cases, roaming or non-roaming, MN 
and CN
must attached to MAGs of the same provider domain to receive localized 
routing
service (meeting the NetExt scope). What about the following revision:

'During mobility, CN and MN should remain attached to MAGs of the same
provider domain to ensure efficient routing of traffic between their MAGs.'

Is this clear enough?

Thanks,
marco


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Marco,

On 1/13/11 7:08 AM, "ext Marco Liebsch" <marco.liebsch@neclab.eu> wrote:

>
>> Frank=3D>Stationary CN means here regular IPv6 nodes attaching an access
>> router.
>> This is a ps document even though only some of the problems could be
>>dealt
>> with.
>> Whole picture of the problems is important to understand.
>
>If I understand correctly, you propose having a section in the PS that
>analyzes
>the use case of setting up a localized route between an MN's MAG and a
>regular IPv6 node being attached to an access router, even though such
>scenario is out of scope of NetExt. Correct?
>

RFC5213 covers the case where the CN (non-PMIP6 attached host) and the MN
(PMIP6 attached host) are associated with the same access router (MAG from
MNs perspective). So no reason to mention this.
But the case where the MN is attached to a MAG and the CN (non PMIP6 host)
is attached to another AR (which is a MAG in the scope of the PMIP6
domain) is best left out of scope.

-Raj


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Hi Marco

Please check again.

BR
Frank

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Hi Frank,
please see inline.

Am 12.01.2011 22:29, schrieb Frank Xia:
> Hello Marco
>
> Thank your response.
> Please also check my inline comments...
>
> BR
> Frank
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Marco Liebsch [mailto:marco.liebsch@neclab.eu]
> Sent: Tuesday, January 11, 2011 8:14 AM
> To: Frank Xia
> Cc: Basavaraj.Patil@nokia.com; netext@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [netext] WG last call: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03
>
> Hi Frank,
>
> thanks for your feedback. Please see inline.
>
> Frank Xia wrote:
>> Hi guys
>>
>> I have a quick review of this draft. My main concern is about
>> the concept of CN(Correspondent Node).
>>
>> Firstly, there is another definition in RFC3775 regarding CN.
>> What is the relationship between these two definitions?
>>
> I do not see these two definitions conflicting. RFC3775 says:
> "A peer node with which a mobile node is communicating. The
> correspondent node
> may be either mobile or stationary."
> For the LR discussion, NetExt considers a specific setup, which has the
> MN's communication peer attached at a MAG as well. Only such use case
> is relevant for NetExt. The additional definition for the CN in the PS
draft
> is to clarify where the CN is assumed for the use cases discussed in the
PS.
>
> We had a discussion long time ago about using MN1-MN2 or MN-CN. We
> sticked to MN-CN to indicate also the direction of the communication
setup.
> Hence, MN sends first data packets to CN, which can trigger the setup of a
> localized routing path. I also feel more comfortable in writing and
reading
> such notation rather than always using MN1, MN2.
> If the WG finds this important to change, I can revise it.
>
>> Secondly, My impression is that the draft mostly assumes
>> CNs are always attached to MAGs.  The draft should make
>> it clear that CNs could be mobile or stationary. It would
>> be better to state why stationary CNs are not taken into account.
>>
> Well, the CN can be stationary as long as it is attached to a MAG and
> managed by PMIPv6. I agree that managing such node with PMIP may not
> make too much sense. When it's stationary and *not* managed by PMIP,
> we enter the discussion again to consider regular IPv6 nodes on an
> access router. That has been addressed by Carlos long time ago.
> We mention this in section 3.1, 2nd paragraph, but chairs ruled it out
> from the solution.

> Frank=>Stationary CN means here regular IPv6 nodes attaching an access
> router.
> This is a ps document even though only some of the problems could be dealt
> with.
> Whole picture of the problems is important to understand.

If I understand correctly, you propose having a section in the PS that 
analyzes
the use case of setting up a localized route between an MN's MAG and a
regular IPv6 node being attached to an access router, even though such
scenario is out of scope of NetExt. Correct?
Frank=>I don't see any text saying such scenario is out of scope of Netext.
I encourage you to describe this use case. This is not a solution document.


> I agree that the definition of CN in the PS repeats some parts of RFC3775.
> We could revise text to say something like 'Take the definition according
to
> RFC3775 and assume further characteristics for the CN, such as
MAG-attached,
> PMIP managed.' Do you think this makes it clearer?

> Frank=>I don't think so. Anyway, you figure it out, and this is not
> very important issue.

ok

Marco

>> Lastly, this draft uses "set up" as a noun, e.g "The set up
>> and maintenance of localized routing". I am not sure if its
>> appropriate.
>>
> Ok, I'll check.
>
> Thanks,
> marco
>
>> BR
>> Frank
>>
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>> Subject: [netext] WG last call: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03
>>
>>
>> At IETF79 we agreed to progress the "PMIPv6 Localized Routing Problem
>> Statement" I-D following a WG last call.
>> The I-D has gone through a WG last call previously. Please consider this
>> as the WG last call for the following I-D:
>> draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03.txt
>>
>>
>> Reviews and feedback are appreciated. The WG last call will expire on Jan
>> 20th.
>>
>> Please note that progress of documents is only possible when we have
>> enough people reviewing the WG documents.
>>
>> -Chairs
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Marco Liebsch [mailto:marco.liebsch@neclab.eu]
> Sent: Thursday, January 13, 2011 9:42 PM
> To: Xiangsong Cui
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> 
> Hi Xiangsong,
> please see inline.
> 
> Am 13.01.2011 04:41, schrieb Xiangsong Cui:
> >> The paragraphs talk about different domains. The first one refers to
the
> >> provider
> >> domain, whereas Section 5 refers to the PMIPv6 domain. I still think
> >> that the
> >> proposed revision to the Terms section helps to understand the
> > requirement,
> >> that both MAGs must share the provider domain. For Section 5, I think
we
> >> should stick to the original text, as it talks about PMIP domains,
which
> > are
> >> defined by the relation between an MN's MAG-LMA association. Ok with
> you?
> > I think I understand your point, but I still think the words is not
clear
> > enough.
> >
> > Firstly, I would like to see the terminology of "provider domain" and
"PMIP
> > domain". In addition, "home domain" is mentioned in section 5.
> 
> PMIPv6 domain is defined in RFC5213.
> 
> Nodes in a 'provider domain' are administered by one authority, the
> mobile network provider.
> For details of the discussion in this context, please refer to the eMail
> conversation from
> Sept 2009. Do you propose to define the term of a 'provider domain' in
> the PS?

Sorry I didn't follow the thread closely, but I think it would be better if
there was a definition.

> 
> > In Section 2, localized routing is defined as (I refer to PS-draft-04),
> >
> >     o  Localized Routing: Result of signaling to set up routing states
on
> >        relevant network entities to allow forwarding of data packets
> >        between an MN and a CN, which are attached to MAGs sharing the
> >        ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> >        same provider domain, without intervention of the MN's LMA and
> the
> >        CN's LMA in data forwarding.
> >
> > My questions to this definition are,
> > If MN is attached to MAG1 while CN is attached to MAG2, however, MAG1
> and
> > MAG2 are from different carriers (the hint here is that the
corresponding
> > LMAs are also from different carriers),
> I don't think you can map the MAG association to the LMAs. In case of
> roaming, both,
> MN and CN can be anchored at two LMAs of the same provider, their home
> provider A.
> The case you refer to assumes that MAG1 is with provider B and MAG2 is
with
> provider C, hence, MAGs do not share the same provider. Such case is
> possible,
> but not considered for localized routing in NetExt.
> 
> >   is this scenario falls in the scope
> > of localized routing?
> technically: yes, but the other question is if there is benefit in
> setting up
> a route between these two MAGs. Depends on how the two domains are
> connected.
> When inter-domain traffic traverses LMAs anyway, there is no benefit.
> 

Thanks for the clarification.

> 
> >    MN and CN are NOT attached to MAGs in the same
> > carrier network, is it true that the MAGs are NOT sharing the same
"provider
> > domain" in this case?
> yes.
> 
> > In section 5, also saying about "provider domain",
> >     Figure 2 shows PMIPv6 roaming cases where PMIPv6 components (e.g.,
> >     LMAs, MAGs) tied by MN and CN may be distributed between different
> >     ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> >     provider domains (i.e., domain A, B, C) and MN and/or CN moves from
> >     ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> >     one provider domain to another one.  In order to support localized
> >     routing when roaming occurs, it is required that MAGs to which MN
and
> >                                            ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> >     CN connect are within the same provider domain and each MAG has a
> >     ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> >     security relationship with the corresponding LMA which maintains the
> >     registration of the MN or the CN, respectively.
> >
> > The front says, in Figure 2, MAGs may be in different provider domains,
> where? Please point ot the text.

The first sentence of section 5,
Figure 2 shows PMIPv6 roaming cases where PMIPv6 components (e.g., LMAs,
MAGs) tied by MN and CN may be distributed between different provider
domains (i.e., domain A, B, C) and MN and/or CN moves from    one provider
domain to another one.

Let me try to simplify this sentence, it is describing the roaming case
which is showed in Figure 2, 
The front half of the subordinate clause says, "PMIPv6 components (e.g.,
LMAs, MAGs) tied by MN and CN may be distributed between different provider
domains" does this mean MAGs may be in different provider domain?
The end half of the subordinate clause says, "MN and/or CN moves from one
provider domain to another one". Does the *or* means that the nodes may roam
one by one? So even MAGs are in same provider domain, it would be changed
when one node is roaming (to a new MAG in another provider domain).

> 
> >   and
> > section 5 mainly refers to figure 2 (where MAGs are actually distributed
in
> > different provider domains), taking this as a basis, right?
> Do not confuse the components which are shared or located in different
> provider domains.
> This is about MAGs only. When its says 'MAG1 and MAG2 are in the same
> provider
> domain', this is independent of whether LMA1/2 is also in the same
> provider domain or not.
> The discussion about the MN's LMA location relative to the associated
> MN's MAG location is
> different from the location of two MAGs.

Yes, I have known the difference on location of LMA and MAG.

> 
> 
> > The end of this paragraph says it is required that MAGs are within the
same
> > provider domain, so should a "sharing-domain-figure" be provided as
> > reference?
> it does. Fig 2 and associated text consider only MAGs in the same
> provider domain,
> MAG1-MAG2, and MAG1'-MAG2', respectively.

Do you mean MN and CN are roaming exactly simultaneously? From MAG1/MAG2
pair to MAG1'/MAG2' pair?
In my impression, when MN (or CN) moves to a new provider domain, it would
lie in a different provider domain with CN (or MN), so the localized routing
should be released, right?
If you say they are exactly simultaneously roaming, supposed they are
registered in the same LMA, the LMA would receive PBU from MAG1' and MAG2'
respectively, I think here should be a single thread program, so it is
impossible for the LMA to receive exactly simultaneous message, do you mean
the LMA should hold one PBU for some time (not destroy localized routing
immediately although "different provider domain") and wait for the other PBU
(to continue the localized routing on new MAG pair)? This is of course
purely implementation issue, here my point is just to check the case.

Xiangsong

> 
> marco
> 
> > Xiangsong
> >
> >> marco
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>> Good, I see the points.
> >>>
> >>> Thanks and regards,
> >>> Xiangsong
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>> Thanks and best regards,
> >>>> marco
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>> Regards,
> >>>>> Xiangsong
> >>>>>
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> >>>
> >>>>> Of
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> >>>>>> Sent: Wednesday, January 05, 2011 2:07 AM
> >>>>>> To: netext@ietf.org
> >>>>>> Subject: [netext] WG last call: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-lr-ps-03
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> At IETF79 we agreed to progress the "PMIPv6 Localized Routing
> Problem
> >>>>>> Statement" I-D following a WG last call.
> >>>>>> The I-D has gone through a WG last call previously. Please consider
> >>>>>>
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Hi Frank,

Am 13.01.2011 23:29, schrieb Frank Xia:
> H
>>> Secondly, My impression is that the draft mostly assumes
>>> CNs are always attached to MAGs.  The draft should make
>>> it clear that CNs could be mobile or stationary. It would
>>> be better to state why stationary CNs are not taken into account.
>>>
>> Well, the CN can be stationary as long as it is attached to a MAG and
>> managed by PMIPv6. I agree that managing such node with PMIP may not
>> make too much sense. When it's stationary and *not* managed by PMIP,
>> we enter the discussion again to consider regular IPv6 nodes on an
>> access router. That has been addressed by Carlos long time ago.
>> We mention this in section 3.1, 2nd paragraph, but chairs ruled it out
>> from the solution.
>> Frank=>Stationary CN means here regular IPv6 nodes attaching an access
>> router.
>> This is a ps document even though only some of the problems could be dealt
>> with.
>> Whole picture of the problems is important to understand.
> If I understand correctly, you propose having a section in the PS that
> analyzes
> the use case of setting up a localized route between an MN's MAG and a
> regular IPv6 node being attached to an access router, even though such
> scenario is out of scope of NetExt. Correct?
> Frank=>I don't see any text saying such scenario is out of scope of Netext.
Technical scope of NetExt LR has been decided throughout the discussion.
Authors of the PS have been asked to reflect this in the PS. For the use 
case
to set up a localized route with a regular IPv6 node, the 3.1 has the 
following text:

"Maintaining local forwarding between the MN and the regular IPv6 CN
gets more complex in case the MN performs a handover to a different
MAG.  Such use case is not considered in the specification and out
of scope of this problem statement.  This document focuses on use
cases, where both nodes, the MN and the CN,are each registered with
an LMA and both obtain PMIPv6 mobility service."

Pleaase propose new or additional text in case you think this in not 
sufficient.

> I encourage you to describe this use case. This is not a solution document.

I am ok with having a short section analyzing this case. Would appreciate if
you have some input on this. Bullet lists is fine. I can make text out 
of that.
This assumes nobody (incl. chairs) object having such text in the PS.
Chairs?

marco



>
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Am 13.01.2011 23:02, schrieb Basavaraj.Patil@nokia.com:
> Marco,
>
> On 1/13/11 7:08 AM, "ext Marco Liebsch"<marco.liebsch@neclab.eu>  wrote:
>
>>> Frank=>Stationary CN means here regular IPv6 nodes attaching an access
>>> router.
>>> This is a ps document even though only some of the problems could be
>>> dealt
>>> with.
>>> Whole picture of the problems is important to understand.
>> If I understand correctly, you propose having a section in the PS that
>> analyzes
>> the use case of setting up a localized route between an MN's MAG and a
>> regular IPv6 node being attached to an access router, even though such
>> scenario is out of scope of NetExt. Correct?
>>
> RFC5213 covers the case where the CN (non-PMIP6 attached host) and the MN
> (PMIP6 attached host) are associated with the same access router (MAG from
> MNs perspective). So no reason to mention this.
> But the case where the MN is attached to a MAG and the CN (non PMIP6 host)
> is attached to another AR (which is a MAG in the scope of the PMIP6
> domain) is best left out of scope.

Clear. That's why we added associated text in 3.1 Please check my last
reply to Frank in this context and let me know if this is sufficient.

marco


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Hi Marco,

See inline.

On Jan 13, 2011, at 5:43 PM, Marco Liebsch wrote:

> Hi Jouni,
>=20
> thanks for your comments. Please see inline.
>=20
> Am 13.01.2011 14:58, schrieb Jouni:
>> Hi,
>>=20
>> Here's my initial quick review of the "PMIPv6 Localized Routing =
Problem Statement" based on the recent -04 version.
>>=20
>> - Jouni
>>=20
>>=20
>> --------------------------------
>>=20
>> Nits:
>>=20
>>  o The document seems to lack the IANA considerations section.
>>    Even if it is not needed, having a dummy section stating
>>    "This document has no IANA considerations" would be good.
> very good point. I'll add it.
>=20
>>  o Shouldn't the I-D reference to RFC3775bis instead of RFC3775?
>>    The bis is already in IESG.
> Hmm, as long as it's not approved and published? I think in case we =
get the
> PS to the RFC Editor state, by that time RFC3775bis may be public and
> will be updated in the PS anyhow before publication. I'll check if =
it's
> appropriate to refer to the bis now. Thanks for the hint.


Ok.

>=20
>=20
>>=20
>> Semi-substantial:
>>=20
>> Section 1:
>>=20
>>  o Propose rephrasing
>>    "..  maintenance of a forwarding tunnel between an MN's Mobile =
Access.."
>>    as
>>    "..  maintenance of a tunnel between an MN's Mobile Access.."
> ok
>=20
>> Section 3.1:
>>=20
>>  o It is stated
>>    "Localized routing is understood in [RFC5213] as optimization of
>>    traffic between an MN and a CN under the same access router, =
whereas
>>    the MN connects to the MAG function of this access router and is
>>    registered with an LMA, but the CN is a regular IPv6 node without
>>    getting PMIPv6 service.  In such case, the MAG forwards traffic.."
>>=20
>>   I do not agree with the above conclusion of CN's role. In RFC5213
>>   Section 6.10.3 says "..correspondent node that is locally attached
>>   to an access link connected to the mobile access gateway, .."
>>   To me this does not imply CN is not getting PMIPv6 service. I would
>>   propose rephrasing the text as:
>>=20
>>   "Localized routing is understood in [RFC5213] as optimization of
>>    traffic between an MN and a CN that are attached to an access
>>    link connected to a same MAG. In such case, the MAG forwards
>>    traffic.."
> Reading RFC5213, both can be understood. Carlos mentioned the =
interpretation
> of having regular IPv6 nodes below a MAG in Feb 2009. But this shows =
that RFC5213
> is really not clear about which use cases are addressed and in =
particular how to achieve
> and signal localized routing. At that time we agreed to refer to =
regular IPv6 nodes.
> I don't think it's too relevant for the PS if it's a regular IPv6 node =
or a mobile node,
> as mechanisms are obviously not completely covered in RFC5213. That =
means
> there is still a problem and that's what the PS is about. So, if =
Carlos and others are
> fine, I am also ok with taking over your shortened text.
>=20

Just to mention that the "shortened" interpretation was used e.g. when =
RFC5779 was done.

>=20
>>  o The third paragraph listing localized routing benefits I think one
>>    additional benefit should be listed. Localized routing allows
>>    bypassing the LMA, which may help scaling of the LMA. The LMA is
>>    anyway aggregating traffic from a number of MAGs thus becoming a
>>    bottleneck more easily than a MAG.
> Ok, I'll add an item about LMA scalability. thanks.
>=20
>=20
>> Section 3.2:
>>=20
>>  o What actually is a "provider domain"? A composition of PMIPv6
>>    domains? This should be clarified. Maybe even in the terminology
>>    section.
> Let's add some description to the Terms section.
>=20
> 'Provider domain: A network domain in which network components
> are administered by a single authority, e.g. the mobile operator.'
>=20
> Does this sound ok?

Sounds ok.

>=20
> Btw, we tried to propose text for such definition some time ago, folks
> complained if we want to re-invent the wheel and re-define well
> known terms ;-)

Wasn't ambiguous to me.. and I even used to work for a provider.


>=20
>=20
>> Section 3.3.1:
>>=20
>>  o This section should at least mention that MN and CN should have
>>    IPv4 home addresses of the same scope. I know e.g. NAT is scoped
>>    away (which is good) but having more explicit statement here
>>    would add clarity imho.
>=20
>>  o In case of RFC1918 IPv4 home addresses CN's and MN's addresses
>>    must not overlap.
> Do you propose to write this as a requirement? We cannot assume this, =
as
> we identify problems in this document.

You could state that as a problem or a known constraint.

> Conflicts when using private address spaces can still happen. We =
covered this
> in early versions of the PS, but had to take it out. Please clarify =
the last two
> bullets. Thanks.

I find it odd, of someone would even try to directly integrate domains =
that are known to have overlapping address issues. That would be plain =
dump.

>=20
>=20
>> Section 3.3.2:
>>=20
>>  o I would also add here that addressing used across all MAGs
>>    should be of the same scope (for both IPv4 and IPv6). That
>>    would make life a bit easier.
> as requirement or as problem?

Would state that as a problem/known constraint.

>=20
>> Section 5:
>>=20
>>  o The last paragraph and the last sentence says "CN should stay
>>    with MN within the same domain." I did not get where this
>>    requirement is coming from.
> Good point. This is really not clear.
> I guess it should be said that in both cases, roaming or non-roaming, =
MN and CN
> must attached to MAGs of the same provider domain to receive localized =
routing
> service (meeting the NetExt scope). What about the following revision:
>=20
> 'During mobility, CN and MN should remain attached to MAGs of the same
> provider domain to ensure efficient routing of traffic between their =
MAGs.'
>=20
> Is this clear enough?

Yes.

- JOuni

>=20
> Thanks,
> marco
>=20
>=20
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Hi Marco,

On 1/14/11 4:15 AM, "ext Marco Liebsch" <marco.liebsch@neclab.eu> wrote:

>Am 13.01.2011 23:02, schrieb Basavaraj.Patil@nokia.com:
>> Marco,
>>
>> On 1/13/11 7:08 AM, "ext Marco Liebsch"<marco.liebsch@neclab.eu>  wrote:
>>
>>>> Frank=3D>Stationary CN means here regular IPv6 nodes attaching an acce=
ss
>>>> router.
>>>> This is a ps document even though only some of the problems could be
>>>> dealt
>>>> with.
>>>> Whole picture of the problems is important to understand.
>>> If I understand correctly, you propose having a section in the PS that
>>> analyzes
>>> the use case of setting up a localized route between an MN's MAG and a
>>> regular IPv6 node being attached to an access router, even though such
>>> scenario is out of scope of NetExt. Correct?
>>>
>> RFC5213 covers the case where the CN (non-PMIP6 attached host) and the
>>MN
>> (PMIP6 attached host) are associated with the same access router (MAG
>>from
>> MNs perspective). So no reason to mention this.
>> But the case where the MN is attached to a MAG and the CN (non PMIP6
>>host)
>> is attached to another AR (which is a MAG in the scope of the PMIP6
>> domain) is best left out of scope.
>
>Clear. That's why we added associated text in 3.1 Please check my last
>reply to Frank in this context and let me know if this is sufficient.

I am okay with what you proposed. Thanks.
-Raj

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>marco
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>> -Raj
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