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Hi Raj and authors,

I have reviewed this draft and I have the below comments.

General Comment:
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I have found it difficult to follow this document differentiation between I=
P session, IP flows, Mobility Session with respect to QoS. Since this docum=
ent reference 3GPP specification for the purpose of QoS, we realize that Qo=
S (in 3GPP) is enforced at the level of a bearer. Thus, when we talk about =
IP session, is that a single bearer or all types of traffic/flows is carrie=
d over this IP session. May be the question is: what is the equivalent of a=
 bearer in PMIPv6? Then we should make sure that we use that definition whe=
n referring to QoS enforcement.

After reading on, section 4.1., mentions that the QoS is applied at three d=
ifferent levels, IP flow, Mobility Session, or per MN.
May be it is a good idea to have this mentioned upfront in the introduction=
 section in order to set the stage correctly. In addition somehow, this doc=
ument needs to provide the detailed logic to differentiate between the thre=
e cases.=20


Editorial:
Comment No. 1:
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      (a) Maintenance of QoS classification during a handover between
      cellular radio access and WLAN access by means of establishing QoS
      policies in the handover target access network,

[Ahmad]=20
     (a) Maintaining QoS classification ....

Comment No. 2:
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   This document specifies an extension to the PMIPv6 protocol, which
   enables the transport of established QoS descriptions between an LMA
   and the MAG by means of a QoS container option in case the QoS policy
   in the WLAN access is not under explicit control of a policy control
   system.

[Ahmad]
It is not clear what you are trying to say in here. I am thinking the autho=
rs intention is to say that in case there is no out of bound policy control=
 mechanism, this document specifies an inbound mechanism using an extension=
 to the PMIPv6 protocol. May be this can be rephrased to capture the mentio=
ned meaning.

Comment No. 3:
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   The specified option allows association between IP session
   keys, such as a Differentiated Services Code Point (DSCP), and the
   expected QoS class for this IP session.

[Ahmad]
I have a problem with the word "keys", maybe we can say IP session classifi=
cation parameters,=20



Comment No. 4:
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   The MN is first connected to the LTE network and having a multimedia
   session such as a video call with appropriate QoS parameters set by
   the policy control function.

[Ahmad]
All of a sudden introduced LTE network, maybe we can rephrase this as follo=
ws:

   The MN is first connected to the cellular network, e.g., LTE network, an=
d having a multimedia ......

Comment No. 5:
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3.3.  Use Case B -- Establishment of new QoS Context in non-3G Access

[Ahmad]
I guess the intention to say non-3GPP ?


Comment No. 6:
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3.5.  Relevant QoS Attributes

[Ahmad]
Although, TFT is not considered a QoS parameter, but it is quite important.=
 I did not see the UL TFT is mentioned anywhere. Is it handled outside this=
 document? If it is, we need to mention that because it tightly coupled wit=
h the enforcement of the QoS.

After reading on, there is Traffic Selector Attribute (section 4.1, etc). H=
owever, the following text is a little misleading and gives the impression =
as the additional attributes are out of scope.

   For some optional QoS attributes the signaling can differentiate
   enforcement per mobility session and per IP flow.  Additional
   attributes can be appended to the QoS option, but their definition
   and specification is out of scope of this document and left to their
   actual deployment.

I think the above text can be modified to clearly reference Traffic Selecto=
r.


Technical Comments:
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Comment No. 1:
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Under section 4.2 " Local Mobility Anchor Considerations" , it says the fol=
lowing:

   The flow selectors and the parameters for flow treatment MUST be
   included in the option only if QoS policy is expected to apply at the
   flow level.

On the other hand, under section 5, "Quality of Service Option", it says th=
e DSCP value to be used for the flow:

   o  DSCP: An 6-bit unsigned integer indicating the code point value,
      as defined in [RFC2475] to be used for the flow.

[Ahmad]
It is not clear to me how this will work out. If the DSCP is a fixed field =
in the QoS option, then how this will work to allow having different flows =
with different DSCP(s). Let me try to explain where I am lost! :-)

If the mobility session was established for default kind of traffic and the=
 QoS DSCP was communicated for a QCI of 9 (DSCP1) for example. Then at a la=
ter time, the MN establishes some application session (flow) with QCI 1 and=
 the returned QoS has a DSCP (DSCP2) in the fixed field and probably a Traf=
fic Selector since it is a per single flow.

Now: when the MAG receives the new PBA, is DSCP2 for this flow only and the=
 old DSCP1 for every other traffic? How that should work in relation with t=
he above DSCP field definition?


Comment No. 2:
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Under section 6, the Guaranteed Downlink Bit Rate is missing.



Comment No. 3:
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Under section 6.8, "Traffic Selector", it says the following:

   MUST be included if QoS parameters (Options according to Section 6.5
   to Section 6.7) are expected to apply at the flow level

[Ahmad]
Why did you single out these two sections only?
For example, section 6.5, says the following:

"
6.5.  Allocation and Retention Priority

   .......
   If the attribute is expected to apply at the flow level, the
   traffic selector (Section 6.8) MUST be included in the QoS option.
"

I suggest modifying the text as follows:
  =20
   MUST be included when QoS is expected to be applied at the flow level.


Comment No. 4:
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Since the Guaranteed Downlink Bit Rate is missing, please recheck the assig=
ned type values and their order in section 6 and the following subsections.=
 Also, please update the IANA section accordingly.


Regards,
Ahmad


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From: Basavaraj Patil [mailto:bpatil1@gmail.com]=20
Sent: Tuesday, May 14, 2013 4:37 PM
To: Ahmad Muhanna
Cc: netext@ietf.org
Subject: Request for review of I-D: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-02


Hi Ahmad,

We would appreciate it if you can review the I-D:=A0uality of Service Optio=
n for Proxy Mobile IPv6 <draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-02.txt>.

Please post your review comments directly to the list. If you can complete =
the review within the next 2 weeks, that would be much appreciated.

Thank you.

-Chairs

--=20
Basavaraj Patil=20

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Hi Raj,

Sincere apology for our delayed response.

Thanks a lot for your thorough review and comments. Please see inline
for our response (we have one question about your comment #7). We will
update the I-D and submit as soon as possible.

(2013/05/14 4:19), Basavaraj Patil wrote:
>
> Below are my review comments for the
> I-D:draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-02 (QoS Support for Proxy Mobile IPv6)
>
>
> Questions/Comments:
>
> 1. "Using the QoS option, the local mobility anchor and the
> mobile access gateway can exchange available QoS attributes and
> associated values."
>
> QoS for a session or subscriber or group of sessions? Not clear from
> this statement.
>

*That depends on the type of QoS attribute. As shown in Section 6 (below
Fig.7), Type=1 is Per-mobile node (could be a group of sessions),
whereas Type=3 is per-session.*

> 2. "This enables QoS policing and labeling of packets
> to enforce QoS differentiation on the path between the local mobility
> anchor and the mobile access gateway."
>
> So is the objective primarily to enable QoS on the MAG<->LMA path? Or
> is the intent to deliver QoS information to the MAG for use on the
> access link? Or both?
>

*For both the path between MAG and LMA and access link. Figs. 4 and 5
illustrate how QoS parameters are delivered and set.*

> 3. "Furthermore, making QoS
> parameters available on the MAG enables mapping these parameters to
> QoS rules being specific to the access technology which operates
> below the mobile access gateway."
>
> Would this mapping be defined elsewhere? As an example how would you
> translate the QoS parameters defined between the MAG<->LMA for use on
> an 802.11 air interface? Who would define this mapping (if it needs to
> be specified).
>

*Appendix A shows an example of how QoS parameters are mapped to
IEEE802.11e.*

> 4. "Current
> standardization effort considers strong QoS classification and
> enforcement for cellular radio access technologies."
>
> What standardization effort is being referred to here?
>

*3GPP is one of those and Section 3.5 shows detailed parameters. *

> 5. "QoS policies are
> typically controlled by a policy control function, ...."
>
> The I-D assumes a very specific network architecture (in this case
> 3GPP EPS). It would be better to indicate the applicability or
> assumptions.
>

*This sentence can go without the description of "policy control function".*

> 6. "Policy control and QoS differentiation for access to the mobile
> operator network through alternative non-cellular access technologies
> is not yet considered, even though some of these access technologies
> are able to support QoS by appropriate traffic prioritization
> techniques."
>
> Not sure how this is relevant in the scope of this I-D.
>

*This part can be removed.*

> 7. "... alternative
> radio access technologies, such as IEEE802.16 "
>
> Would be good to include EV-DO, SCDMA as other technologies as well...
>

*EV-DO could be another example standardized by 3GPP2, but could you
tell us which SDO standardized SCDMA?*

> 8. " whereas inter-working with the cellular
> architecture to establish QoS policies in alternative access networks
> has not been focussed on so far."
>
> The WG is better off defining a mechanism that is not specific to the
> current version of 3GPP standards or access technologies being
> considered.
>

*The defined mechanism is not only for 3GPP, but also for WiFi as shown
in Appendix A or for broadband fixed network as shown in Appendix B. *

> 9. "...has been identified as
> promising alternative technology to complement cellular radio
> access."
>
> It already complements cellular access.. Why is it considered
> promising?
>

*"promising" should be removed.*

> 10. " This specification
> does not depend on the approach how the cellular specific QoS
> policies have been configured on the LMA. "
>
> Is there not a need to have QoS for flows between a MAG and LMA given
> that an MN may have multiple flows between a MAG<->LMA pair?
>

*The QoS for multiple flows between MAG and LMA is also possible.
Traffic selector defined in Secion 6.8 identifies each flow for
assigning a separate QoS.*

> 11. "The MN is first connected to the LTE network and having a multimedia
> session such as a video call with appropriate QoS parameters set by
> the policy control function. "
>
> What QoS policies are configured at the MAG/LMA for such a flow by the
> PCF? And how are these applied?
>

*In the case of video call, QCI=2 is used as per 3GPP's definition and
the PCF delivers necessary parameters to the LMA accordingly. *

> 12. "The MN is first attaching to
> the Wi-Fi network. During attachment process, the LMA, which may be
> in communication with Policy Control Function (this step of the
> process is out of the scope of this document), provides the QoS
> parameters to the MAG piggy-backing the PMIP signaling (i.e.
> PBA)."
>
> Several assumptions being made here. It could also be the case that
> when the MN attaches to a WiFI AP which has QoS support, it could
> request specific QoS already for a session. That is not considered
> here.
>

*Local QoS policy assignment does not require QoS parameters from the
LMA, but can be included as a possible use case in the document.*

> 13. Sec 3.5 describes QCI, ARP, AMBR, GBR etc. which are all 3GPP
> specific for QoS. It is not clear how these are incorporated into the
> signaling between PMIP6 nodes and how they are mapped/applied.
>
> 3GPP has specified all these QoS types. If the PMIP6 elements,
> MAG/LMA, do not support QoS signaling does it imply that 3GPP networks
> will be unable to use QoS if PMIP6 is used as the mobility protocol?
>

*In such a case, another mechanism is used in 3GPP. Instead of PMIPv6
signaling, a dedicated interface called Gxx is defined between the
policy server and MAG. Of course, this is not an ideal situation and
this I-D will fix it.*

> 14. The I-D specifies various QoS options defined in 3GPP such as
> AMBR, GBR, etc. in sections 6.x. 3GPP may continue to expand or
> deprecate these options. Why not simply follow the 3GPP defined QoS
> parameters and allocate a generic 3GPP option instead of assigning a
> type value to each one of these by IANA?
>

*3GPP-defined QoS parameters have been stable enough and referred to by
other SDOs as well. These parameters can be separately used by other
access technologies, so it would be more convenient to define each than
put into a 3GPP option, which would be invisible other than 3GPP.*

> 15. The I-D makes assumptions about interacting with a policy
> controller for obtaining the QoS parameters. What happens in the
> absence of such a PCF element? Can the LMA itself be configured to
> allocate QoS to a session?
>

*LMA-based predefined policy control is also possible. In this case,
static policy will be applied by the LMA.*

> 16. And lastly why not simply specify DSCP and the QoS for the traffic
> between the MAG and LMA instead of worrying about the mapping to
> access technology types and interaction with different elements in the
> access.
>

*We are not worried about other access technologies, but just trying to
show multiple use cases for the applicability of this specification.*

Regards,

-- 
Hidetoshi Yokota

KDDI R&D Laboratories, Inc.
e-mail:yokota@kddilabs.jp



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    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">Hi Raj,<br>
      <br>
      Sincere apology for our delayed response.<br>
      <br>
      Thanks a lot for your thorough review and comments. Please see
      inline for our response (</font><font face="Helvetica, Arial,
      sans-serif"><font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">we have one
        question about your comment #7</font>). We will update the I-D
      and submit as soon as possible.<br>
    </font><br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">(2013/05/14 4:19), Basavaraj Patil
      wrote:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
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      <div dir="ltr">
        <div><br>
        </div>
        Below are my review comments for the
        I-D:draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-02 (<span
          style="color:rgb(0,0,0);white-space:pre-wrap">QoS Support for
          Proxy Mobile IPv6) </span>
        <div><br>
        </div>
        <div>
          <div>
            <br>
          </div>
          <div>Questions/Comments:</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>1. "Using the QoS option, the local mobility anchor and
            the</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;mobile access gateway can exchange available QoS
            attributes and</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;associated values."</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>QoS for a session or subscriber or group of sessions? Not
            clear from</div>
          <div>this statement.</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <b><font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">That depends on the
        type of QoS attribute. As shown in Section 6 (below Fig.7),
        Type=1 is Per-mobile node (could be a group of sessions),
        whereas Type=3 is per-session.</font></b><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>2. "This enables QoS policing and labeling of packets</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;to enforce QoS differentiation on the path between the
            local mobility</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;anchor and the mobile access gateway."</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>So is the objective primarily to enable QoS on the
            MAG&lt;-&gt;LMA path? Or</div>
          <div>is the intent to deliver QoS information to the MAG for
            use on the</div>
          <div>access link? Or both?</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <b><font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">For both the path
        between MAG and LMA and access link. Figs. 4 and 5 illustrate
        how QoS parameters are delivered and set.</font></b><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>3. "Furthermore, making QoS</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;parameters available on the MAG enables mapping these
            parameters to</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;QoS rules being specific to the access technology
            which operates</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;below the mobile access gateway."</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>Would this mapping be defined elsewhere? As an example
            how would you</div>
          <div>translate the QoS parameters defined between the
            MAG&lt;-&gt;LMA for use on</div>
          <div>an 802.11 air interface? Who would define this mapping
            (if it needs to</div>
          <div>be specified).</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><b>Appendix A shows an
        example of how QoS parameters are mapped to IEEE802.11e.</b></font><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>4. "Current</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;standardization effort considers strong QoS
            classification and</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;enforcement for cellular radio access technologies."</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>What standardization effort is being referred to here?&nbsp;</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><b>3GPP is one of those
        and Section 3.5 shows detailed parameters. </b></font><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>5. "QoS policies are</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;typically controlled by a policy control function,
            ...."</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>The I-D assumes a very specific network architecture (in
            this case</div>
          <div>3GPP EPS). It would be better to indicate the
            applicability or</div>
          <div>assumptions.&nbsp;</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><b>This sentence can go
        without the description of "policy control function".</b></font><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>6. "Policy control and QoS differentiation for access to
            the mobile</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;operator network through alternative non-cellular
            access technologies</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;is not yet considered, even though some of these
            access technologies</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;are able to support QoS by appropriate traffic
            prioritization</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;techniques."</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>Not sure how this is relevant in the scope of this I-D.</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><b>This part can be
        removed.</b></font><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>7. "... alternative</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;radio access technologies, such as IEEE802.16 "</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>Would be good to include EV-DO, SCDMA as other
            technologies as well...</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><b>EV-DO could be another
        example standardized by 3GPP2, but could you tell us which SDO
        standardized SCDMA?</b></font> <br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>8. " whereas inter-working with the cellular</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;architecture to establish QoS policies in alternative
            access networks</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;has not been focussed on so far."</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>The WG is better off defining a mechanism that is not
            specific to the</div>
          <div>current version of 3GPP standards or access technologies
            being</div>
          <div>
            considered.</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><b>The defined mechanism
        is not only for 3GPP, but also for WiFi as shown in Appendix A
        or for broadband fixed network as shown in Appendix B. </b></font><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>9. "...has been identified as</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;promising alternative technology to complement
            cellular radio</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;access."</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>It already complements cellular access.. Why is it
            considered</div>
          <div>promising?</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><b>"promising" should be
        removed.</b></font><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>10. " This specification</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;does not depend on the approach how the cellular
            specific QoS</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;policies have been configured on the LMA. "</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>Is there not a need to have QoS for flows between a MAG
            and LMA given</div>
          <div>that an MN may have multiple flows between a
            MAG&lt;-&gt;LMA pair?</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><b>The QoS for multiple
        flows between MAG and LMA is also possible. Traffic selector
        defined in Secion 6.8 identifies each flow for assigning a
        separate QoS.</b></font><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>11. "The MN is first connected to the LTE network and
            having a multimedia</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;session such as a video call with appropriate QoS
            parameters set by</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;the policy control function. "</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>What QoS policies are configured at the MAG/LMA for such
            a flow by the</div>
          <div>PCF? And how are these applied?</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <b><font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">In the case of video
        call, QCI=2 is used as per 3GPP's definition and the PCF
        delivers necessary parameters to the LMA accordingly. </font></b><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>12. "The MN is first attaching to</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;the Wi-Fi network. &nbsp;During attachment process, the
            LMA, which may be</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;in communication with Policy Control Function (this
            step of the</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;process is out of the scope of this document),
            provides the QoS</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;parameters to the MAG piggy-backing the PMIP signaling
            (i.e.</div>
          <div>&nbsp; &nbsp;PBA)."</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>Several assumptions being made here. It could also be the
            case that</div>
          <div>when the MN attaches to a WiFI AP which has QoS support,
            it could</div>
          <div>request specific QoS already for a session. That is not
            considered</div>
          <div>here.</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><b>Local QoS policy
        assignment does not require QoS parameters from the LMA, but can
        be included as a possible use case in the document.</b></font><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>13. Sec 3.5 describes QCI, ARP, AMBR, GBR etc. which are
            all 3GPP</div>
          <div>specific for QoS. It is not clear how these are
            incorporated into the</div>
          <div>signaling between PMIP6 nodes and how they are
            mapped/applied.</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
          <div>3GPP has specified all these QoS types. If the PMIP6
            elements,</div>
          <div>MAG/LMA, do not support QoS signaling does it imply that
            3GPP networks</div>
          <div>will be unable to use QoS if PMIP6 is used as the
            mobility protocol?</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><b>In such a case, another
        mechanism is used in 3GPP. Instead of PMIPv6 signaling, a
        dedicated interface called Gxx is defined between the policy
        server and MAG. Of course, this is not an ideal situation and
        this I-D will fix it.</b></font> <br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>14. The I-D specifies various QoS options defined in 3GPP
            such as</div>
          <div>AMBR, GBR, etc. in sections 6.x. 3GPP may continue to
            expand or</div>
          <div>deprecate these options. Why not simply follow the 3GPP
            defined QoS</div>
          <div>parameters and allocate a generic 3GPP option instead of
            assigning a</div>
          <div>type value to each one of these by IANA?</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <b><font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">3GPP-defined QoS
        parameters have been stable enough and referred to by other SDOs
        as well. These parameters can be separately used by other access
        technologies, so it would be more convenient to define each than
        put into a 3GPP option, which would be invisible other than
        3GPP.</font></b> <br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>15. The I-D makes assumptions about interacting with a
            policy</div>
          <div>controller for obtaining the QoS parameters. What happens
            in the</div>
          <div>absence of such a PCF element? Can the LMA itself be
            configured to</div>
          <div>allocate QoS to a session?</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><b>LMA-based predefined
        policy control is also possible. In this case, static policy
        will be applied by the LMA.</b></font><br>
    <br>
    <blockquote
cite="mid:CAA5F1T2jaFYQpUw4eostxToWe_RiW3aZHsFRvNCqPdrYvgLwag@mail.gmail.com"
      type="cite">
      <div dir="ltr">
        <div>
          <div>16. And lastly why not simply specify DSCP and the QoS
            for the traffic</div>
          <div>between the MAG and LMA instead of worrying about the
            mapping to</div>
          <div>access technology types and interaction with different
            elements in the</div>
          <div>access.</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
        </div>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><b>We are not worried
        about other access technologies, but just trying to show
        multiple use cases for the applicability of this specification.</b></font><br>
    <br>
    <font face="Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">Regards,</font><br>
    <pre class="moz-signature" cols="72">-- 
Hidetoshi Yokota

KDDI R&amp;D Laboratories, Inc.
<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:e-mail:yokota@kddilabs.jp">e-mail:yokota@kddilabs.jp</a></pre>
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          <div>-Raj</div>
          <div><br>
          </div>
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<div>FYI. Discussion with 3GPP SA2/CT4 members on adding a new status code =
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Dear Sri, all,<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Many thanks=A1K<o:p><=
/o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">First of all we=A1=A6=
re NOT thinking about introducing a new Reason value specific to =A1=A7end =
marker=A1=A8.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">And we=A1=A6re ok to =
re-use the existing Reason value (i.e. =A1=A7UPDATE-SESSION-PARAMETERS=A1=
=A8) if everybody is happy with it.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">And I also fully agre=
e with your statement that =A1=A7</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-=
size: 10.5pt; color: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">the
 option/use-case should be broadly applicable beyond 3GPP system</span><spa=
n lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: black; font-family: Cal=
ibri, sans-serif; ">=A1=A8</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 1=
0pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&gt;</span><span lang=3D"EN-=
US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-se=
rif; ">if this does not sound like a clean approach,
 we can certainly define a new Status Code, which is &quot;Vendor-Specific =
Reason (3)&quot;. &nbsp; The peer can handle the UPN message based on that =
vendor-specific option. Is this what you are thinking ?&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">But actually I like y=
our idea of adding a generic new value (=A1=A7Vendor-Specific Reason (3)=A1=
=A8), because I sense there=A1=A6s a possibility that:<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;mso-para-margin-l=
eft:0gd;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo7">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;fon=
t-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast=
-language:JA"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1.<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &=
quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:=
 10pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;CT4=
 argues re-using existing one is not clean<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;mso-para-margin-l=
eft:0gd;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo7">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;fon=
t-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast=
-language:JA"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">2.<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &=
quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:=
 10pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">There may=
 be new enhancements in the future which might require addition of new caus=
e value<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">So if we could have s=
omething generic in the I-D, I think this makes it pretty much future proof=
.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">If we could do that a=
ddition now, then I think it=A1=A6s also good from IETF procedure point of =
view (I mean less delay in the process=A1Kas we
 don=A1=A6t need to wait for CT4 discussion)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">What do you think? I=
=A1=A6d like to also invite comments from other companies=A1K<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Regards,<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Itsuma<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></sp=
an></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">------------------------------------=
--------------------<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Itsuma TANAKA (</span><span style=3D=
"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: 'MS Gothic', '=A2=
=DB=A2=E1 ????', serif; ">=A5=D0=A4=A4=AB=C2=ACz=B0=A8</span><span lang=3D"=
EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Ar=
ial, sans-serif; ">)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">GSMA IREG Vice Chair / IREG Packet C=
hair<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">NTT DOCOMO, Inc.<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">------------------------------------=
--------------------<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></sp=
an></p>
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<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0mm =
0mm 0mm">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; fo=
nt-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; ">From:</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=
=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; "> Sri Gundavelli (sg=
undave) [<a href=3D"mailto:sgundave@cisco.com">mailto:sgundave@cisco.com</a=
>]
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, June 10, 2013 4:31 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Itsuma TANAKA; <a href=3D"mailto:zhou.xingyue@ZTE.COM.CN">zhou.x=
ingyue@ZTE.COM.CN</a>; 'BERRY, Nigel (Nigel)'; 'Wild, Peter Alexander, Voda=
fone DE'; 'Frank Yong Yang'; 'Shishufeng (Susan)'; 'Shahab Lavasani'; 'Milt=
on, Lew (NSN - US/Arlington Heights)';
 'LANDAIS, BRUNO (BRUNO)'; <a href=3D"mailto:koji.watanabe.az@hitachi.com">=
koji.watanabe.az@hitachi.com</a>;
<a href=3D"mailto:tamurato@aj.jp.nec.com">tamurato@aj.jp.nec.com</a>; <a hr=
ef=3D"mailto:jan.kall@nsn.com">
jan.kall@nsn.com</a>; Nirav Salot (nsalot); 'Rahul Suhas Vaidya'; <a href=
=3D"mailto:jlaganier@juniper.net">
jlaganier@juniper.net</a>; 'Jesus De Gregorio'; 'Peter Schmitt'; 'Hidetoshi=
 Yokota';
<a href=3D"mailto:jouni.nospam@gmail.com">jouni.nospam@gmail.com</a>; <a hr=
ef=3D"mailto:marco.liebsch@nw.neclab.eu">
marco.liebsch@nw.neclab.eu</a>; <a href=3D"mailto:suresh.krishnan@ericsson.=
com">suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com</a>; Basavaraj Patil (basavpat)<br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:nishidak@nttdocomo.co.jp">nishidak@nttdocomo.c=
o.jp</a>;
<a href=3D"mailto:shin.yokoyama.kc@s1.nttdocomo.com">shin.yokoyama.kc@s1.nt=
tdocomo.com</a>; 'Atsushi Minokuchi'; 'Zhen Miao'<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: End Marker enhancements for PMIP Update Notification<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Hi Itsuma-san,<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Thanks for your response.<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&gt;&nbsp;</span><span class=
=3D"apple-style-span"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color:=
 rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">So
 is it correct understanding that 3GPP can define their own =A1=A7Notificat=
ion Reason=A1=A8?</span></span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.=
5pt; color: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">We were not thinking of defi=
ning a Reason Code for this outside the&nbsp;Vendor-Specific option.<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">The Reason Code in the UPN m=
essage when this Vendor-specific option is included can be &quot;</span><sp=
an class=3D"apple-style-span"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5=
pt; color: black; font-family: 'Courier New'; ">UPDATE-SESSION-PARAMETERS&q=
uot;,
</span></span><span class=3D"apple-style-span"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=
=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black">which does not require the peer to send a=
 new PBU, but instead requires it to update the session state. That update =
and the associated action is what the
</span></span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black">V=
endor-Specific option defines (when present).</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" st=
yle=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: black; font-family: PMingLiU, serif; "><o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">The presence of the Vendor-S=
pecific option hints the peer to conform to a specific behavior and that be=
havior is what CT4 defines. If there are
 multiple Actions associated with this Vendor-specific option, the option i=
tself can define a vendor specific Action/Reason Code.<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">But, if this does not sound =
like a clean approach, we can certainly define a new Status Code, which is =
&quot;Vendor-Specific Reason (3)&quot;. &nbsp; The peer
 can handle the UPN message based on that vendor-specific option. Is this w=
hat you are thinking ?&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">But, if the Reason Code need=
s to hint specifically to &quot;End Marker&quot; use-case, then IMO, the op=
tion/use-case should be broadly applicable beyond
 3GPP system. Easier approach is to contain the usecase/behavior/action to =
the vendor-specific option and keep this to 3GPP.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&gt; The next 3GPP CT=
4 meeting will be in August 2013 =A1V so isn=A1=A6t it a bit too late when =
some changes/clarification are needed in IETF?</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" s=
tyle=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">We can delay the process and=
 keep the draft in the working group for some more time. The other approach=
 is to get more inputs from all the interested
 companies and find a closure.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-siz=
e: 10.5pt; color: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
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or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Sri<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
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or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0mm =
0mm 0mm">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 11pt; co=
lor: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">From:
</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: black; fon=
t-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Itsuma TANAKA &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:tanaka=
i@nttdocomo.co.jp">tanakai@nttdocomo.co.jp</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Date: </b>Sunday, June 9, 2013 11:12 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Sri Gundavelli &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:sgundave@cisco.com">sgundav=
e@cisco.com</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:zhou.xingyue@ZTE.COM.CN">zhou.=
xingyue@ZTE.COM.CN</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:zhou.xingyue@ZTE.COM.CN"=
>zhou.xingyue@ZTE.COM.CN</a>&gt;, &quot;'BERRY, Nigel (Nigel)'&quot; &lt;<a=
 href=3D"mailto:nigel.berry@ALCATEL-LUCENT.COM">nigel.berry@ALCATEL-LUCENT.=
COM</a>&gt;,
 &quot;'Wild, Peter Alexander, Vodafone DE'&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:pet=
er.wild@vodafone.com">peter.wild@vodafone.com</a>&gt;, 'Frank Yong Yang' &l=
t;<a href=3D"mailto:frank.yong.yang@ERICSSON.COM">frank.yong.yang@ERICSSON.=
COM</a>&gt;, &quot;'Shishufeng (Susan)'&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:susan.s=
hishufeng@HUAWEI.COM">susan.shishufeng@HUAWEI.COM</a>&gt;,
 'Shahab Lavasani' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:shahab.lavasani@HUAWEI.COM">shahab=
.lavasani@HUAWEI.COM</a>&gt;, &quot;'Milton, Lew (NSN - US/Arlington Height=
s)'&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:lew.milton@NSN.COM">lew.milton@NSN.COM</a>&=
gt;, &quot;'LANDAIS, BRUNO (BRUNO)'&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:bruno.landa=
is@alcatel-lucent.com">bruno.landais@alcatel-lucent.com</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:koji.watanabe.az@hitachi.com">koji.watanabe.az@hit=
achi.com</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:koji.watanabe.az@hitachi.com">koji=
.watanabe.az@hitachi.com</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:tamurato@aj.jp.ne=
c.com">tamurato@aj.jp.nec.com</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:tamurato@aj.j=
p.nec.com">tamurato@aj.jp.nec.com</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:jan.kall@nsn.com">jan.kall@nsn.com</a>&quot; &lt;<=
a href=3D"mailto:jan.kall@nsn.com">jan.kall@nsn.com</a>&gt;, &quot;Nirav Sa=
lot (nsalot)&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:nsalot@cisco.com">nsalot@cisco.com=
</a>&gt;, 'Rahul Suhas Vaidya' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:rahulv@juniper.net">ra=
hulv@juniper.net</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:jlaganier@juniper.net">jlaganier@juniper.net</a>&q=
uot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:jlaganier@juniper.net">jlaganier@juniper.net</a>=
&gt;, 'Jesus De Gregorio' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:jesus.de.gregorio@ERICSSON.=
COM">jesus.de.gregorio@ERICSSON.COM</a>&gt;, 'Peter Schmitt'
 &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:Peter.Schmitt@HUAWEI.COM">Peter.Schmitt@HUAWEI.COM</=
a>&gt;, 'Hidetoshi Yokota' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:yokota@kddilabs.jp">yokota=
@kddilabs.jp</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:jouni.nospam@gmail.com">jouni=
.nospam@gmail.com</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:jouni.nospam@gmail.com">j=
ouni.nospam@gmail.com</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:marco.liebsch@nw.neclab.eu">marco.liebsch@nw.necla=
b.eu</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:marco.liebsch@nw.neclab.eu">marco.lieb=
sch@nw.neclab.eu</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:suresh.krishnan@ericsson.=
com">suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:suresh.kr=
ishnan@ericsson.com">suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com</a>&gt;,
 &quot;Basavaraj Patil (basavpat)&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:basavpat@cisc=
o.com">basavpat@cisco.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc: </b>&quot;<a href=3D"mailto:nishidak@nttdocomo.co.jp">nishidak@nttdo=
como.co.jp</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:nishidak@nttdocomo.co.jp">nishid=
ak@nttdocomo.co.jp</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:shin.yokoyama.kc@s1.ntt=
docomo.com">shin.yokoyama.kc@s1.nttdocomo.com</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mail=
to:shin.yokoyama.kc@s1.nttdocomo.com">shin.yokoyama.kc@s1.nttdocomo.com</a>=
&gt;,
 'Atsushi Minokuchi' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:minokuchi@nttdocomo.co.jp">minok=
uchi@nttdocomo.co.jp</a>&gt;, 'Zhen Miao' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:miao@nttdoc=
omo.co.jp">miao@nttdocomo.co.jp</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>RE: End Marker enhancements for PMIP Update Notification<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Dear Sri,</span><span=
 lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Thanks for the prompt=
 feedback here.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">So is it correct unde=
rstanding that 3GPP can define their own =A1=A7Notification Reason=A1=A8?
</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Then it=A1=A6s a good=
 news for me, as we don=A1=A6t possibly need to take any action in IETF.</s=
pan><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<ul type=3D"disc">
<li class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-ma=
rgin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; ">The Reason Code that we have currently allows the LMA to request =
the MAG to re-register (this implicitly includes de-register), or just upda=
te the session parameters.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></l=
i></ul>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">The =A1=A7End Marker=
=A1=A8 indication added in 3GPP is not to re/de-register or to update the s=
ession parameter, but to let MAG to behave in a certain
 way (e.g. generate =A1=A7end marker=A1=A8 packet towards the radio access)=
.&nbsp; Can the current I-D cover such scenario as well?</span><span lang=
=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&gt;Its not too late, we can=
 certainly make changes/add clarification notes before it hits IESG in the =
coming weeks.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">The next 3GPP CT4 mee=
ting will be in August 2013 =A1V so isn=A1=A6t it a bit too late when some =
changes/clarification are needed in IETF?</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Regards,</span><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Itsuma</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">------------------------------------=
--------------------</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Itsuma TANAKA (</span><span lang=3D"=
ZH-CN" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: 'M=
S Gothic', '=A2=DB=A2=E1 ????', serif; ">=A5=D0=A4=A4=AB=C2=ACz=B0=A8</span=
><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); =
font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">)</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"col=
or:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">GSMA IREG Vice Chair / IREG Packet C=
hair</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" st=
yle=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">NTT DOCOMO, Inc.</span><span lang=3D=
"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">------------------------------------=
--------------------</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" st=
yle=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0mm =
0mm 0mm">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; co=
lor: black; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; ">From:</span></b><span lang=
=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color: black; font-family: Tahoma, san=
s-serif; "> Sri Gundavelli (sgundave) [<a href=3D"mailto:sgundave@cisco.com=
">mailto:sgundave@cisco.com</a>]
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, June 10, 2013 3:02 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Itsuma TANAKA; <a href=3D"mailto:zhou.xingyue@ZTE.COM.CN">zhou.x=
ingyue@ZTE.COM.CN</a>; 'BERRY, Nigel (Nigel)'; 'Wild, Peter Alexander, Voda=
fone DE'; 'Frank Yong Yang'; 'Shishufeng (Susan)'; 'Shahab Lavasani'; 'Milt=
on, Lew (NSN - US/Arlington Heights)';
 LANDAIS, BRUNO (BRUNO); <a href=3D"mailto:koji.watanabe.az@hitachi.com">ko=
ji.watanabe.az@hitachi.com</a>;
<a href=3D"mailto:tamurato@aj.jp.nec.com">tamurato@aj.jp.nec.com</a>; <a hr=
ef=3D"mailto:jan.kall@nsn.com">
jan.kall@nsn.com</a>; Nirav Salot (nsalot); 'Rahul Suhas Vaidya'; <a href=
=3D"mailto:jlaganier@juniper.net">
jlaganier@juniper.net</a>; 'Jesus De Gregorio'; 'Peter Schmitt'; 'Hidetoshi=
 Yokota';
<a href=3D"mailto:jouni.nospam@gmail.com">jouni.nospam@gmail.com</a>; <a hr=
ef=3D"mailto:marco.liebsch@nw.neclab.eu">
marco.liebsch@nw.neclab.eu</a>; <a href=3D"mailto:suresh.krishnan@ericsson.=
com">suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com</a>; Basavaraj Patil (basavpat)<br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:nishidak@nttdocomo.co.jp">nishidak@nttdocomo.c=
o.jp</a>;
<a href=3D"mailto:shin.yokoyama.kc@s1.nttdocomo.com">shin.yokoyama.kc@s1.nt=
tdocomo.com</a>; 'Atsushi Minokuchi'; Zhen Miao<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: End Marker enhancements for PMIP Update Notification</s=
pan><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Hi Itsuma-san,</span><span l=
ang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"E=
N-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&#43; Basavaraj</span><span =
lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"E=
N-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">I had a chat with Yokota-san=
 on this and here is my view on this requirement.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US=
" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<ul type=3D"disc">
<li class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-ma=
rgin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; ">Update Notification (UPN) provides the basic semantics for LMA in=
itiated notification messages</span><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span>=
</li><li class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;m=
so-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; ">Any of the Mobility Header options defined for PMIPv6 signaling m=
essages can be carried in the UPN/UPNA message, including RFC5094 VSE</span=
><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=3D"MsoNormal" style=
=3D"color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list=
:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; ">CT4 can define a new 3GPP VSE based on RFC5094 for supporting End=
 Marker enhancement. This being very 3GPP specific, it makes sense not to d=
efine a generic IETF MH option for this</span><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p></o=
:p></span></li><li class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color:black;mso-margin-top-=
alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; ">The Reason Code that we have currently allows the LMA to request =
the MAG to re-register (this implicitly includes de-register), or just upda=
te the session parameters.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></l=
i><li class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-=
margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; ">The 3GPP VSE when carried with one of the above two Reason Codes,=
 should be sufficient for the MAG to handle this correctly.&nbsp;But, if ar=
e expecting some new behavior, we can certainly
 define a new Reason Code and specify that Action.</span><span lang=3D"EN-U=
S"><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"E=
N-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Its not too late, we can cer=
tainly make changes/add clarification notes before it hits IESG in the comi=
ng weeks. &nbsp;But, what we have may be sufficient.</span><span lang=3D"EN=
-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"E=
N-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"E=
N-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Regards</span><span lang=3D"=
EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Sri</span><span lang=3D"EN-U=
S" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"E=
N-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"E=
N-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"E=
N-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0mm =
0mm 0mm">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 11pt; co=
lor: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">From:
</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: black; fon=
t-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Itsuma TANAKA &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:tanaka=
i@nttdocomo.co.jp">tanakai@nttdocomo.co.jp</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Date: </b>Sunday, June 9, 2013 10:23 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>&quot;<a href=3D"mailto:zhou.xingyue@ZTE.COM.CN">zhou.xingyue@ZT=
E.COM.CN</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:zhou.xingyue@ZTE.COM.CN">zhou.xing=
yue@ZTE.COM.CN</a>&gt;, &quot;'BERRY, Nigel (Nigel)'&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"m=
ailto:nigel.berry@ALCATEL-LUCENT.COM">nigel.berry@ALCATEL-LUCENT.COM</a>&gt=
;,
 &quot;'Wild, Peter Alexander, Vodafone DE'&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:pet=
er.wild@vodafone.com">peter.wild@vodafone.com</a>&gt;, 'Frank Yong Yang' &l=
t;<a href=3D"mailto:frank.yong.yang@ERICSSON.COM">frank.yong.yang@ERICSSON.=
COM</a>&gt;, &quot;'Shishufeng (Susan)'&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:susan.s=
hishufeng@HUAWEI.COM">susan.shishufeng@HUAWEI.COM</a>&gt;,
 'Shahab Lavasani' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:shahab.lavasani@HUAWEI.COM">shahab=
.lavasani@HUAWEI.COM</a>&gt;, &quot;'Milton, Lew (NSN - US/Arlington Height=
s)'&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:lew.milton@NSN.COM">lew.milton@NSN.COM</a>&=
gt;, &quot;LANDAIS, BRUNO (BRUNO)&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:bruno.landais=
@alcatel-lucent.com">bruno.landais@alcatel-lucent.com</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:koji.watanabe.az@hitachi.com">koji.watanabe.az@hit=
achi.com</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:koji.watanabe.az@hitachi.com">koji=
.watanabe.az@hitachi.com</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:tamurato@aj.jp.ne=
c.com">tamurato@aj.jp.nec.com</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:tamurato@aj.j=
p.nec.com">tamurato@aj.jp.nec.com</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:jan.kall@nsn.com">jan.kall@nsn.com</a>&quot; &lt;<=
a href=3D"mailto:jan.kall@nsn.com">jan.kall@nsn.com</a>&gt;, &quot;Nirav Sa=
lot (nsalot)&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:nsalot@cisco.com">nsalot@cisco.com=
</a>&gt;, 'Rahul Suhas Vaidya' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:rahulv@juniper.net">ra=
hulv@juniper.net</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:jlaganier@juniper.net">jlaganier@juniper.net</a>&q=
uot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:jlaganier@juniper.net">jlaganier@juniper.net</a>=
&gt;, 'Jesus De Gregorio' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:jesus.de.gregorio@ERICSSON.=
COM">jesus.de.gregorio@ERICSSON.COM</a>&gt;, 'Peter Schmitt'
 &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:Peter.Schmitt@HUAWEI.COM">Peter.Schmitt@HUAWEI.COM</=
a>&gt;, 'Hidetoshi Yokota' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:yokota@kddilabs.jp">yokota=
@kddilabs.jp</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:jouni.nospam@gmail.com">jouni=
.nospam@gmail.com</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:jouni.nospam@gmail.com">j=
ouni.nospam@gmail.com</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:marco.liebsch@nw.neclab.eu">marco.liebsch@nw.necla=
b.eu</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:marco.liebsch@nw.neclab.eu">marco.lieb=
sch@nw.neclab.eu</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:suresh.krishnan@ericsson.=
com">suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:suresh.kr=
ishnan@ericsson.com">suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com</a>&gt;,
 Sri Gundavelli &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:sgundave@cisco.com">sgundave@cisco.co=
m</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc: </b>&quot;<a href=3D"mailto:nishidak@nttdocomo.co.jp">nishidak@nttdo=
como.co.jp</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:nishidak@nttdocomo.co.jp">nishid=
ak@nttdocomo.co.jp</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:shin.yokoyama.kc@s1.ntt=
docomo.com">shin.yokoyama.kc@s1.nttdocomo.com</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mail=
to:shin.yokoyama.kc@s1.nttdocomo.com">shin.yokoyama.kc@s1.nttdocomo.com</a>=
&gt;,
 'Atsushi Minokuchi' &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:minokuchi@nttdocomo.co.jp">minok=
uchi@nttdocomo.co.jp</a>&gt;, Zhen Miao &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:miao@nttdocom=
o.co.jp">miao@nttdocomo.co.jp</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>End Marker enhancements for PMIP Update Notification</span>=
<span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; col=
or: black; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"E=
N-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Dear PMIP Experts in =
CT4 and the Editors of PMIP Update Notification I-D.</span><span lang=3D"EN=
-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">I=A1=A6d like to draw=
 your attention on the attached Rel-12 CRs to 3GPP TS23.401 and TS23.402, w=
hich were agreed in SA2#97 a couple weeks ago.
 These CRs enhances GTP/PMIP protocols to add the support of =A1=A7end mark=
er=A1=A8, and since I=A1=A6m particularly concerned about how to progress t=
he PMIP Stage 3, I appreciate your views here.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" s=
tyle=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">We (DOCOMO) believe t=
hat this enhancement can be done using
<b>PMIP Update Notification.&nbsp; </b>My understanding is that WG Last Cal=
l for this I-D is in progress in IETF, and I=A1=A6m of the opinion that coo=
rdination between 3GPP and IETF might be necessary.</span><span lang=3D"EN-=
US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">So I=A1=A6d like to k=
indly ask your views on:</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;mso-para-margin-l=
eft:0gd;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l4 level1 lfo6">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Ar=
ial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignor=
e">-<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:=
 10pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Whether t=
hese additions can be realized without impacting IETF Update Notification I=
-D?</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:18.0pt;mso-para-margin-l=
eft:0gd;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l4 level1 lfo6">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;Ar=
ial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignor=
e">-<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size:=
 10pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">If IETF i=
mpact is inevitable, can we raise this directly in IETF and stop the proces=
s until CT4 agrees on the way forward?</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"=
color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">For the first questio=
n, the only impact on the I-D I=A1=A6m seeing here is adding a new =A1=A7No=
tification Reason=A1=A8 value.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:bl=
ack"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">I=A1=A6d like to know=
 if any addition on =A1=A7Notification Reason=A1=A8 header needs any IETF w=
ork.</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Or can this be specif=
ied in 3GPP (and subsequent IANA registration) only?</span><span lang=3D"EN=
-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Best Regards,</span><=
span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Itsuma</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10pt; color=
: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span la=
ng=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">------------------------------------=
--------------------</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Itsuma TANAKA (</span><span lang=3D"=
ZH-CN" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: 'M=
S Gothic', '=A2=DB=A2=E1 ????', serif; ">=A5=D0=A4=A4=AB=C2=ACz=B0=A8</span=
><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); =
font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">)</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"col=
or:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">GSMA IREG Vice Chair / IREG Packet C=
hair</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;</span><span lang=3D"EN-US" st=
yle=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideog=
raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">NTT DOCOMO, Inc.</span><span lang=3D=
"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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raph"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
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Hi Ahmad,

thanks a lot for your detailed comments and proposals.
Please see inline for feedback.

>-----Original Message-----
>From: netext-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:netext-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf O=
f
>Ahmad Muhanna
>Sent: Sonntag, 2. Juni 2013 21:21
>To: netext@ietf.org
>Cc: Basavaraj Patil
>Subject: [netext] Review Comments on: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-02
>
>Hi Raj and authors,
>
>I have reviewed this draft and I have the below comments.
>
>General Comment:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>I have found it difficult to follow this document differentiation between =
IP
>session, IP flows, Mobility Session with respect to QoS. Since this docume=
nt
>reference 3GPP specification for the purpose of QoS, we realize that QoS (=
in
>3GPP) is enforced at the level of a bearer. Thus, when we talk about IP se=
ssion, is
>that a single bearer or all types of traffic/flows is carried over this IP=
 session.
>May be the question is: what is the equivalent of a bearer in PMIPv6? Then=
 we
>should make sure that we use that definition when referring to QoS
>enforcement.

I would not try to map the bearer concept, which applies to cellular networ=
ks,
to IP tunneling as used by PMIP. A PMIP tunnel is shared even by multiple u=
sers,
whereas the bearer is established per MN and per QoS. I'd rather add more t=
ext about
how QoS differentiation should be enabled on a PMIP tunnel. In current cell=
ular systems,
mapping of flows to a per MN and per-QoS bearer is performed on the downlin=
k
after the termination of the PMIP tunnel, i.e. at the MAG. So, no bearer as=
sumed on
PMIP even in cellular networks. Scope of the spec is to enable QoS differen=
tiation by means
of DSCPs on the PMIP tunnel and opt for mapping of QoS rules to non-cellula=
r access
technology specific QoS.


>
>After reading on, section 4.1., mentions that the QoS is applied at three =
different
>levels, IP flow, Mobility Session, or per MN.
>May be it is a good idea to have this mentioned upfront in the introductio=
n
>section in order to set the stage correctly. In addition somehow, this doc=
ument
>needs to provide the detailed logic to differentiate between the three cas=
es.

Fully agree to that point and we addressed past comments on this mainly in =
the
message format description. The general parts, such as the Intro, lack in
clear text, which we'll add in the updated version. Thanks again for the hi=
nt.


>
>
>Editorial:
>Comment No. 1:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>      (a) Maintenance of QoS classification during a handover between
>      cellular radio access and WLAN access by means of establishing QoS
>      policies in the handover target access network,
>
>[Ahmad]
>     (a) Maintaining QoS classification ....

Ok.


>
>Comment No. 2:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>   This document specifies an extension to the PMIPv6 protocol, which
>   enables the transport of established QoS descriptions between an LMA
>   and the MAG by means of a QoS container option in case the QoS policy
>   in the WLAN access is not under explicit control of a policy control
>   system.
>
>[Ahmad]
>It is not clear what you are trying to say in here. I am thinking the auth=
ors
>intention is to say that in case there is no out of bound policy control
>mechanism, this document specifies an inbound mechanism using an extension
>to the PMIPv6 protocol. May be this can be rephrased to capture the mentio=
ned
>meaning.

Agreed. How about that (omitting the pointer to the policy control system):
This document specifies an extension to the PMIPv6 protocol to establish Qo=
S policies
for an MN's data traffic on the LMA and the MAG. QoS policies are conveyed =
in-band with
PMIPv6 signaling using the specified QoS option and are enforced on the LMA=
 for downlink
traffic and on the MAG for uplink traffic.


>
>Comment No. 3:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>   The specified option allows association between IP session
>   keys, such as a Differentiated Services Code Point (DSCP), and the
>   expected QoS class for this IP session.
>
>[Ahmad]
>I have a problem with the word "keys", maybe we can say IP session
>classification parameters,
>

I think your proposal is good. We'll adopt it.


>
>
>Comment No. 4:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>   The MN is first connected to the LTE network and having a multimedia
>   session such as a video call with appropriate QoS parameters set by
>   the policy control function.
>
>[Ahmad]
>All of a sudden introduced LTE network, maybe we can rephrase this as foll=
ows:
>
>   The MN is first connected to the cellular network, e.g., LTE network, a=
nd
>having a multimedia ......

Good point.

>
>Comment No. 5:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>3.3.  Use Case B -- Establishment of new QoS Context in non-3G Access
>
>[Ahmad]
>I guess the intention to say non-3GPP ?

Yes. Even better: '..non-cellular Access'. Ok with you?

>
>
>Comment No. 6:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>3.5.  Relevant QoS Attributes
>
>[Ahmad]
>Although, TFT is not considered a QoS parameter, but it is quite important=
. I did
>not see the UL TFT is mentioned anywhere. Is it handled outside this docum=
ent?
>If it is, we need to mention that because it tightly coupled with the enfo=
rcement
>of the QoS.

The TFT is a cellular-specific concept, better a collection of filter and m=
apping rules,
that holds flow information and allow mapping of each flow to a bearer in t=
he cellular
network. The downlink TFT applies to the MAG in the cellular network which =
use PMIP,
the uplink TFT (do you refer only to this one?) applies to the MN. I consid=
er functions of
the TFT on both sides out of scope of this document's focus, as it's relate=
d to bearer mapping.
Also I do not think the spec needs to classify it explicitly as out of scop=
e.
Implementations may re-use the TFT data structures to hold and maintain QoS
information for non-cellular access, but I'd hesitate entering that level a=
nd the
need to introduce a TFT term, which also needs to be described then.
Other opinions?


>
>After reading on, there is Traffic Selector Attribute (section 4.1, etc). =
However,
>the following text is a little misleading and gives the impression as the =
additional
>attributes are out of scope.
>
>   For some optional QoS attributes the signaling can differentiate
>   enforcement per mobility session and per IP flow.  Additional
>   attributes can be appended to the QoS option, but their definition
>   and specification is out of scope of this document and left to their
>   actual deployment.
>
>I think the above text can be modified to clearly reference Traffic Select=
or.

Not sure I got your point correctly. The specification of additional QoS at=
tributes and
the associated options' format is out of scope of this specification, but m=
ay be relevant for
a particular deployment. Means, the specified mechanisms can be
used to convey more options, e.g. ones that are defined by other SDOs.
About the Traffic Selector, what else than a reference to RFC6088 would you
like to see in the draft?

>
>
>Technical Comments:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>
>Comment No. 1:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>Under section 4.2 " Local Mobility Anchor Considerations" , it says the fo=
llowing:
>
>   The flow selectors and the parameters for flow treatment MUST be
>   included in the option only if QoS policy is expected to apply at the
>   flow level.
>
>On the other hand, under section 5, "Quality of Service Option", it says t=
he DSCP
>value to be used for the flow:
>
>   o  DSCP: An 6-bit unsigned integer indicating the code point value,
>      as defined in [RFC2475] to be used for the flow.
>
>[Ahmad]
>It is not clear to me how this will work out. If the DSCP is a fixed field=
 in the QoS
>option, then how this will work to allow having different flows with diffe=
rent
>DSCP(s). Let me try to explain where I am lost! :-)
>
>If the mobility session was established for default kind of traffic and th=
e QoS
>DSCP was communicated for a QCI of 9 (DSCP1) for example. Then at a later
>time, the MN establishes some application session (flow) with QCI 1 and th=
e
>returned QoS has a DSCP (DSCP2) in the fixed field and probably a Traffic
>Selector since it is a per single flow.
>
>Now: when the MAG receives the new PBA, is DSCP2 for this flow only and th=
e
>old DSCP1 for every other traffic? How that should work in relation with t=
he
>above DSCP field definition?

Per-flow policies overrule default policies. I hope this is only a clarific=
ation issue
in the draft, or do you see an inconsistency and technical issue here?

>
>
>Comment No. 2:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>Under section 6, the Guaranteed Downlink Bit Rate is missing.

Only in the listed attributes, not in the specification (Sec. 6.6 and 6.7).
Thanks for the catch!=20

>
>
>
>Comment No. 3:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>Under section 6.8, "Traffic Selector", it says the following:
>
>   MUST be included if QoS parameters (Options according to Section 6.5
>   to Section 6.7) are expected to apply at the flow level
>
>[Ahmad]
>Why did you single out these two sections only?

Because the use of per-flow rules made sense here, whereas
the per-Mobility Session attributes should represent an aggregated view
taking all flows of the mobility session into account.

>For example, section 6.5, says the following:
>
>"
>6.5.  Allocation and Retention Priority
>
>   .......
>   If the attribute is expected to apply at the flow level, the
>   traffic selector (Section 6.8) MUST be included in the QoS option.
>"
>
>I suggest modifying the text as follows:
>
>   MUST be included when QoS is expected to be applied at the flow level.

Ok.

>
>
>Comment No. 4:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>Since the Guaranteed Downlink Bit Rate is missing, please recheck the assi=
gned
>type values and their order in section 6 and the following subsections. Al=
so,
>please update the IANA section accordingly.

Ok.

Thanks again for your detailed comments and suggestions.

marco

>
>
>Regards,
>Ahmad
>
>
>+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>+++++++++++++++++++++
>From: Basavaraj Patil [mailto:bpatil1@gmail.com]
>Sent: Tuesday, May 14, 2013 4:37 PM
>To: Ahmad Muhanna
>Cc: netext@ietf.org
>Subject: Request for review of I-D: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-02
>
>
>Hi Ahmad,
>
>We would appreciate it if you can review the I-D:=A0uality of Service Opti=
on for
>Proxy Mobile IPv6 <draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-02.txt>.
>
>Please post your review comments directly to the list. If you can complete=
 the
>review within the next 2 weeks, that would be much appreciated.
>
>Thank you.
>
>-Chairs
>
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	Title           : Update Notifications for Proxy Mobile IPv6
	Author(s)       : Suresh Krishnan
                          Sri Gundavelli
                          Marco Liebsch
                          Hidetoshi Yokota
                          Jouni Korhonen
	Filename        : draft-ietf-netext-update-notifications-05.txt
	Pages           : 18
	Date            : 2013-06-17

Abstract:
   This document specifies protocol enhancements for allowing the local
   mobility anchor in a Proxy Mobile IPv6 domain to asynchronously
   notify the mobile access gateway about changes related to a mobility
   session.  These update notification messages are exchanged using a
   new Mobility Header message type specifically designed for this
   purpose.


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	Title           : Prefix Delegation Support for Proxy Mobile IPv6
	Author(s)       : Xingyue Zhou
                          Jouni Korhonen
                          Carl Williams
                          Sri Gundavelli
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Abstract:
   This specification defines extensions to Proxy Mobile IPv6 protocol
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   delegated IP prefixes for its attached mobile networks.  The mobility
   entities in the network will provide network-based mobility
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Hello,

The functionality offered to the Mobile Router, as described in this
draft, is similar if not the same as what the 64share draft does
draft-ietf-v6ops-64share-07 behaviour called 'IPv6 tethering' and
witnessed on smartphones on cellular operators.

A deployer of Mobile Routers faces thus two alternatives: should use
64share exclusively on the smartphone?  Or should deploy PMIP-PD in the
infrastructure?  It's pointless to do both.

Remark also that 64share v6ops discussion seems to have an oppinion with
respect to DHCPv6-PD (it is the right thing to do), yet no oppinion
about PMIP-PD.

Given these aspects, I am surprised there is no reference from one draft
to the other.

Alex

Le 18/06/2013 18:54, internet-drafts@ietf.org a écrit :
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories. This draft is a work item of the Network-Based Mobility
> Extensions Working Group of the IETF.
>
> Title           : Prefix Delegation Support for Proxy Mobile IPv6
> Author(s)       : Xingyue Zhou Jouni Korhonen Carl Williams Sri
> Gundavelli Carlos J. Bernardos Filename        :
> draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip-09.txt Pages           : 27 Date
> : 2013-06-18
>
> Abstract: This specification defines extensions to Proxy Mobile IPv6
> protocol for allowing a mobile router in a Proxy Mobile IPv6 domain
> to obtain delegated IP prefixes for its attached mobile networks.
> The mobility entities in the network will provide network-based
> mobility management support for those delegated IP prefixes just as
> how IP mobility support is provided for the mobile node's home
> address. Even as the mobile router performs a handoff and changes its
> network point of attachment, mobility support is ensured for all the
> delegated IP prefixes and for all the IP nodes in the mobile network
> that use IP address configuration from those delegated IP prefixes.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip
>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip-09
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip-09
>
>
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On Jun 20, 2013, at 4:45 PM, Alexandru Petrescu =
<alexandru.petrescu@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hello,
>=20
> The functionality offered to the Mobile Router, as described in this
> draft, is similar if not the same as what the 64share draft does
> draft-ietf-v6ops-64share-07 behaviour called 'IPv6 tethering' and
> witnessed on smartphones on cellular operators.

Obviously we are and were aware of this all the time..

> A deployer of Mobile Routers faces thus two alternatives: should use
> 64share exclusively on the smartphone?  Or should deploy PMIP-PD in =
the
> infrastructure?  It's pointless to do both.

You are missing one thing here. What NETEXT is doing is specific to
PMIPv6 and fixes/clarifies a specific issue related to prefix =
delegation.

>=20
> Remark also that 64share v6ops discussion seems to have an oppinion =
with
> respect to DHCPv6-PD (it is the right thing to do), yet no oppinion
> about PMIP-PD.
>=20
> Given these aspects, I am surprised there is no reference from one =
draft
> to the other.

Because there is no need. The v6ops work is independent of what NETEXT =
is
doing and what NETEXT is doing cannot prohibit an operator deploying =
what
v6ops is defining..

- Jouni

>=20
> Alex
>=20
> Le 18/06/2013 18:54, internet-drafts@ietf.org a =E9crit :
>>=20
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories. This draft is a work item of the Network-Based Mobility
>> Extensions Working Group of the IETF.
>>=20
>> Title           : Prefix Delegation Support for Proxy Mobile IPv6
>> Author(s)       : Xingyue Zhou Jouni Korhonen Carl Williams Sri
>> Gundavelli Carlos J. Bernardos Filename        :
>> draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip-09.txt Pages           : 27 Date
>> : 2013-06-18
>>=20
>> Abstract: This specification defines extensions to Proxy Mobile IPv6
>> protocol for allowing a mobile router in a Proxy Mobile IPv6 domain
>> to obtain delegated IP prefixes for its attached mobile networks.
>> The mobility entities in the network will provide network-based
>> mobility management support for those delegated IP prefixes just as
>> how IP mobility support is provided for the mobile node's home
>> address. Even as the mobile router performs a handoff and changes its
>> network point of attachment, mobility support is ensured for all the
>> delegated IP prefixes and for all the IP nodes in the mobile network
>> that use IP address configuration from those delegated IP prefixes.
>>=20
>>=20
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip
>>=20
>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip-09
>>=20
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip-09
>>=20
>>=20
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Le 21/06/2013 10:39, Jouni Korhonen a écrit :
>
> On Jun 20, 2013, at 4:45 PM, Alexandru Petrescu <alexandru.petrescu@gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Hello,
>>
>> The functionality offered to the Mobile Router, as described in this
>> draft, is similar if not the same as what the 64share draft does
>> draft-ietf-v6ops-64share-07 behaviour called 'IPv6 tethering' and
>> witnessed on smartphones on cellular operators.
>
> Obviously we are and were aware of this all the time..

That is good.  But also obviously if one is done the other is not needed.

>> A deployer of Mobile Routers faces thus two alternatives: should use
>> 64share exclusively on the smartphone?  Or should deploy PMIP-PD in the
>> infrastructure?  It's pointless to do both.
>
> You are missing one thing here. What NETEXT is doing is specific to
> PMIPv6 and fixes/clarifies a specific issue related to prefix delegation.

I thought both were specific to IPv6.

>> Remark also that 64share v6ops discussion seems to have an oppinion with
>> respect to DHCPv6-PD (it is the right thing to do), yet no oppinion
>> about PMIP-PD.
>>
>> Given these aspects, I am surprised there is no reference from one draft
>> to the other.
>
> Because there is no need. The v6ops work is independent of what NETEXT is
> doing and what NETEXT is doing cannot prohibit an operator deploying what
> v6ops is defining..

I am not going then to ask why NETEXT is doing what is doing, neither v6ops.

But it is surprising these two alternatives realize the same 
functionality.  Whether you want to agree to this or not is another 
matter :-)

Alex

>
> - Jouni
>
>>
>> Alex
>>
>> Le 18/06/2013 18:54, internet-drafts@ietf.org a écrit :
>>>
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>> directories. This draft is a work item of the Network-Based Mobility
>>> Extensions Working Group of the IETF.
>>>
>>> Title           : Prefix Delegation Support for Proxy Mobile IPv6
>>> Author(s)       : Xingyue Zhou Jouni Korhonen Carl Williams Sri
>>> Gundavelli Carlos J. Bernardos Filename        :
>>> draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip-09.txt Pages           : 27 Date
>>> : 2013-06-18
>>>
>>> Abstract: This specification defines extensions to Proxy Mobile IPv6
>>> protocol for allowing a mobile router in a Proxy Mobile IPv6 domain
>>> to obtain delegated IP prefixes for its attached mobile networks.
>>> The mobility entities in the network will provide network-based
>>> mobility management support for those delegated IP prefixes just as
>>> how IP mobility support is provided for the mobile node's home
>>> address. Even as the mobile router performs a handoff and changes its
>>> network point of attachment, mobility support is ensured for all the
>>> delegated IP prefixes and for all the IP nodes in the mobile network
>>> that use IP address configuration from those delegated IP prefixes.
>>>
>>>
>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip
>>>
>>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip-09
>>>
>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netext-pd-pmip-09
>>>
>>>
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Hi Marco,
Sorry I was out last week.
I would like to address your comments as follows. The below is in general a=
nd comments to your specific replies.

In general, I agree 3GPP standard does not specify a PMIPv6 tunnel that is =
comparable to a GTP bearer. That's given. However, that is the reason 3GPP =
specify a different PCC architecture when PMIP is used. In other words, the=
 MAG goes directly to the PCRF over Gxa, for example.

I believe that allowing a different architecture for PCC to be used over PM=
IP6 must have one of two options.
1. Define the needed extras for PMIP6 to be able to be comparable to GTP be=
arer and then use PCC as it is being used for GTP and as you are trying to =
use in your draft, this means you need to describe the scenarios to the lev=
el of bearers and NOT MN or Mobility session. However, I must say that this=
 option SHOULD NOT be addressed in IETF and should be handled in 3GPP stand=
ardization, for example SA2. I remember in the past there was lots of discu=
ssion related to PCC architecture and for PMIP the option was to use out-of=
-bound mechanism.

2. Forget about 3GPP PCC and define your own mechanism for exchanging some =
QoS parameters without ANY reference to 3GPP. That is possible but I am not=
 sure about the value.

Having said the above, please see more responses below.


Best Regards,
Ahmad

-----Original Message-----
From: Marco Liebsch [mailto:Marco.Liebsch@neclab.eu]=20
Sent: Monday, June 17, 2013 10:54 AM
To: Ahmad Muhanna; netext@ietf.org
Cc: Basavaraj Patil
Subject: RE: Review Comments on: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-02

Hi Ahmad,

thanks a lot for your detailed comments and proposals.
Please see inline for feedback.

>-----Original Message-----
>From: netext-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:netext-bounces@ietf.org] On=20
>Behalf Of Ahmad Muhanna
>Sent: Sonntag, 2. Juni 2013 21:21
>To: netext@ietf.org
>Cc: Basavaraj Patil
>Subject: [netext] Review Comments on: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-02
>
>Hi Raj and authors,
>
>I have reviewed this draft and I have the below comments.
>
>General Comment:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>I have found it difficult to follow this document differentiation=20
>between IP session, IP flows, Mobility Session with respect to QoS.=20
>Since this document reference 3GPP specification for the purpose of=20
>QoS, we realize that QoS (in
>3GPP) is enforced at the level of a bearer. Thus, when we talk about IP=20
>session, is that a single bearer or all types of traffic/flows is carried =
over this IP session.
>May be the question is: what is the equivalent of a bearer in PMIPv6?=20
>Then we should make sure that we use that definition when referring to=20
>QoS enforcement.

I would not try to map the bearer concept, which applies to cellular networ=
ks, to IP tunneling as used by PMIP. A PMIP tunnel is shared even by multip=
le users, whereas the bearer is established per MN and per QoS. I'd rather =
add more text about how QoS differentiation should be enabled on a PMIP tun=
nel. In current cellular systems, mapping of flows to a per MN and per-QoS =
bearer is performed on the downlink after the termination of the PMIP tunne=
l, i.e. at the MAG. So, no bearer assumed on PMIP even in cellular networks=
. Scope of the spec is to enable QoS differentiation by means of DSCPs on t=
he PMIP tunnel and opt for mapping of QoS rules to non-cellular access tech=
nology specific QoS.

[Ahmad:]=20
[Ahmad:] Please see my comments above.


>
>After reading on, section 4.1., mentions that the QoS is applied at=20
>three different levels, IP flow, Mobility Session, or per MN.
>May be it is a good idea to have this mentioned upfront in the=20
>introduction section in order to set the stage correctly. In addition=20
>somehow, this document needs to provide the detailed logic to differentiat=
e between the three cases.

Fully agree to that point and we addressed past comments on this mainly in =
the message format description. The general parts, such as the Intro, lack =
in clear text, which we'll add in the updated version. Thanks again for the=
 hint.
[Ahmad:] Thank you.


>
>
>Editorial:
>Comment No. 1:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>      (a) Maintenance of QoS classification during a handover between
>      cellular radio access and WLAN access by means of establishing QoS
>      policies in the handover target access network,
>
>[Ahmad]
>     (a) Maintaining QoS classification ....

Ok.


>
>Comment No. 2:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>   This document specifies an extension to the PMIPv6 protocol, which
>   enables the transport of established QoS descriptions between an LMA
>   and the MAG by means of a QoS container option in case the QoS policy
>   in the WLAN access is not under explicit control of a policy control
>   system.
>
>[Ahmad]
>It is not clear what you are trying to say in here. I am thinking the=20
>authors intention is to say that in case there is no out of bound=20
>policy control mechanism, this document specifies an inbound mechanism=20
>using an extension to the PMIPv6 protocol. May be this can be rephrased=20
>to capture the mentioned meaning.

Agreed. How about that (omitting the pointer to the policy control system):
This document specifies an extension to the PMIPv6 protocol to establish Qo=
S policies for an MN's data traffic on the LMA and the MAG. QoS policies ar=
e conveyed in-band with
PMIPv6 signaling using the specified QoS option and are enforced on the LMA=
 for downlink traffic and on the MAG for uplink traffic.
[Ahmad:]=20
I think that may be an option as I listed above. However, you need to prese=
nt this document as a mechanism for exchanging some QoS parameters that you=
 need to define in this document or reference other IETF documents because =
you no longer is able to reference any 3GPP documents. In that case, please=
 make sure that the document is consistent across the board and I believe t=
he new/updated document needs further fresh reviews.


>
>Comment No. 3:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>   The specified option allows association between IP session
>   keys, such as a Differentiated Services Code Point (DSCP), and the
>   expected QoS class for this IP session.
>
>[Ahmad]
>I have a problem with the word "keys", maybe we can say IP session=20
>classification parameters,
>

I think your proposal is good. We'll adopt it.


>
>
>Comment No. 4:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>   The MN is first connected to the LTE network and having a multimedia
>   session such as a video call with appropriate QoS parameters set by
>   the policy control function.
>
>[Ahmad]
>All of a sudden introduced LTE network, maybe we can rephrase this as foll=
ows:
>
>   The MN is first connected to the cellular network, e.g., LTE=20
>network, and having a multimedia ......

Good point.

>
>Comment No. 5:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>3.3.  Use Case B -- Establishment of new QoS Context in non-3G Access
>
>[Ahmad]
>I guess the intention to say non-3GPP ?

Yes. Even better: '..non-cellular Access'. Ok with you?
[Ahmad:] Yes. If you agree to not reference 3GPP standardization, this come=
s natural. Thanks!

>
>
>Comment No. 6:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>3.5.  Relevant QoS Attributes
>
>[Ahmad]
>Although, TFT is not considered a QoS parameter, but it is quite=20
>important. I did not see the UL TFT is mentioned anywhere. Is it handled o=
utside this document?
>If it is, we need to mention that because it tightly coupled with the=20
>enforcement of the QoS.

The TFT is a cellular-specific concept, better a collection of filter and m=
apping rules, that holds flow information and allow mapping of each flow to=
 a bearer in the cellular network. The downlink TFT applies to the MAG in t=
he cellular network which use PMIP, the uplink TFT (do you refer only to th=
is one?) applies to the MN. I consider functions of the TFT on both sides o=
ut of scope of this document's focus, as it's related to bearer mapping.
=20
[Ahmad:] May be I am missing something here. At the end regardless of the m=
apping to a single bearer or a tunnel for multiple UEs, you need to enforce=
 the PCC rules at the level of flows. That could be a wild card but if you =
have a solution that assumes wild card all the time, then you may have a pr=
oblem. In other words, I believe the TFT is needed to be communicated to th=
e UE and the MAG. If in non-cellular the UE does not need to have the uplin=
k TFT, then please explain this in the draft. In other words, whatever opti=
on you want to choose, please mention the justification. Thanks.


Also I do not think the spec needs to classify it explicitly as out of scop=
e.
Implementations may re-use the TFT data structures to hold and maintain QoS=
 information for non-cellular access, but I'd hesitate entering that level =
and the need to introduce a TFT term, which also needs to be described then=
.
Other opinions?
[Ahmad:] Well, then we disagree. That communication of QoS parameters is us=
eless if you do not know how to enforce it. Whenever, people talks about PC=
C, they automatically thinks of the enforcement and you need to address it.=
 Either referencing other IETF documents or give justification for why it i=
s not needed.


>
>After reading on, there is Traffic Selector Attribute (section 4.1,=20
>etc). However, the following text is a little misleading and gives the=20
>impression as the additional attributes are out of scope.
>
>   For some optional QoS attributes the signaling can differentiate
>   enforcement per mobility session and per IP flow.  Additional
>   attributes can be appended to the QoS option, but their definition
>   and specification is out of scope of this document and left to their
>   actual deployment.
>
>I think the above text can be modified to clearly reference Traffic Select=
or.

Not sure I got your point correctly. The specification of additional QoS at=
tributes and the associated options' format is out of scope of this specifi=
cation, but may be relevant for a particular deployment. Means, the specifi=
ed mechanisms can be used to convey more options, e.g. ones that are define=
d by other SDOs.
[Ahmad:] That should be fine.

About the Traffic Selector, what else than a reference to RFC6088 would you=
 like to see in the draft?
[Ahmad:] That should suffice to eliminate the possible misunderstanding of =
the text above.

>
>
>Technical Comments:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>
>Comment No. 1:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>Under section 4.2 " Local Mobility Anchor Considerations" , it says the fo=
llowing:
>
>   The flow selectors and the parameters for flow treatment MUST be
>   included in the option only if QoS policy is expected to apply at the
>   flow level.
>
>On the other hand, under section 5, "Quality of Service Option", it=20
>says the DSCP value to be used for the flow:
>
>   o  DSCP: An 6-bit unsigned integer indicating the code point value,
>      as defined in [RFC2475] to be used for the flow.
>
>[Ahmad]
>It is not clear to me how this will work out. If the DSCP is a fixed=20
>field in the QoS option, then how this will work to allow having=20
>different flows with different DSCP(s). Let me try to explain where I=20
>am lost! :-)
>
>If the mobility session was established for default kind of traffic and=20
>the QoS DSCP was communicated for a QCI of 9 (DSCP1) for example. Then=20
>at a later time, the MN establishes some application session (flow)=20
>with QCI 1 and the returned QoS has a DSCP (DSCP2) in the fixed field=20
>and probably a Traffic Selector since it is a per single flow.
>
>Now: when the MAG receives the new PBA, is DSCP2 for this flow only and=20
>the old DSCP1 for every other traffic? How that should work in relation=20
>with the above DSCP field definition?

Per-flow policies overrule default policies. I hope this is only a clarific=
ation issue in the draft, or do you see an inconsistency and technical issu=
e here?
[Ahmad:]=20
As I said earlier, please remember you are defining a new mechanism for usi=
ng 3GPP PCC architecture that is NOT defined by 3GPP. May be if you agree o=
n the previous comments above, then this point will automatically be addres=
sed.

>
>
>Comment No. 2:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>Under section 6, the Guaranteed Downlink Bit Rate is missing.

Only in the listed attributes, not in the specification (Sec. 6.6 and 6.7).
Thanks for the catch!=20

>
>
>
>Comment No. 3:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>Under section 6.8, "Traffic Selector", it says the following:
>
>   MUST be included if QoS parameters (Options according to Section 6.5
>   to Section 6.7) are expected to apply at the flow level
>
>[Ahmad]
>Why did you single out these two sections only?

Because the use of per-flow rules made sense here, whereas the per-Mobility=
 Session attributes should represent an aggregated view taking all flows of=
 the mobility session into account.
[Ahmad:]=20
May be the new approach (if you agree on the above comments) will address t=
his too.

>For example, section 6.5, says the following:
>
>"
>6.5.  Allocation and Retention Priority
>
>   .......
>   If the attribute is expected to apply at the flow level, the
>   traffic selector (Section 6.8) MUST be included in the QoS option.
>"
>
>I suggest modifying the text as follows:
>
>   MUST be included when QoS is expected to be applied at the flow level.

Ok.

>
>
>Comment No. 4:
>=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
>Since the Guaranteed Downlink Bit Rate is missing, please recheck the=20
>assigned type values and their order in section 6 and the following=20
>subsections. Also, please update the IANA section accordingly.

Ok.

Thanks again for your detailed comments and suggestions.

Marco
[Ahmad:]=20
Thanks Marco!

>
>
>Regards,
>Ahmad
>
>
>+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>+++++++++++++++++++++
>From: Basavaraj Patil [mailto:bpatil1@gmail.com]
>Sent: Tuesday, May 14, 2013 4:37 PM
>To: Ahmad Muhanna
>Cc: netext@ietf.org
>Subject: Request for review of I-D: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-02
>
>
>Hi Ahmad,
>
>We would appreciate it if you can review the I-D:=A0uality of Service=20
>Option for Proxy Mobile IPv6 <draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-02.txt>.
>
>Please post your review comments directly to the list. If you can=20
>complete the review within the next 2 weeks, that would be much appreciate=
d.
>
>Thank you.
>
>-Chairs
>
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