Subject: Re: [netmod] syslog-model-05: minor editorial comments

From: "Clyde Wildes (cwildes)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 22 Dec 2015 19:39:46 +0000

Jason,

We are about to publish draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-06 which incorporates your feedback below.

Thanks,

Clyde

From: netmod <[email-masked]<mailto:[email-masked]>> on behalf of "Sterne, Jason (Jason)" <[email-masked]<mailto:[email-masked]>>
Date: Wednesday, October 28, 2015 at 11:50 AM
To: "[email-masked]<mailto:[email-masked]>" <[email-masked]<mailto:[email-masked]>>
Subject: [netmod] syslog-model-05: minor editorial comments

A few minor editorial comments on syslog-model-05:

- The introduction says "We are using definitions of Syslog protocol from [RFC3164] in this draft." but the YANG model mostly references 5424.
- In section 3 maybe use the term "Remote Collector(s)" instead of Server(s) ? Collector seems more in line with RFC5424 (or "Remote Receiver" if others prefer that).
- In the Section 3 figure make all the Distributors have a common syntax for plural vs singular "Log Buffer(s)", "Log File(s)", "Remote Collector(s)", “User Terminal(s)”
- Document is missing the standard legend for the PYANG tree

Jason