Subject: Re: [sipcore] WGLC: draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-push - Editorial Comments - Liviu's comments

From: Christer Holmberg <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 31 Jan 2018 17:35:56 +0000

Hi Liviu,

Thanks for your comments! Please see inline.

>I spotted some minor nuisances:
>
>Section 7.1 - typo
>
>  "555 (Push Notficiation Service Not Supported)"

Will be fixed.

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>Section 7.2 - inconsistency (possibly due to an old iteration)
>
>The BNF grammar defines a series of "pn-*" params, yet the last sentence references a couple of undefined "pns-*" params:
>
>"The format and semantics of pns-param is specific to a given pns-provider value."

Will be fixed.

Regards,

Christer

On 25.01.2018 22:35, A. Jean Mahoney wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> Working Group Last Call starts today for draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-push.
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-push/
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> February 9th.
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> Thanks!
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