Subject: [Syslog-sec] syslog-protocol-05 comments

From: "Anton Okmianski" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 8 Sep 2004 17:38:39 -0400

Rainer:

Attached is a PDF document with your draft and my comments. Do "View/
Comments" in Acrobat Reader if you don't see them.  Comments range
from  wording suggestions to serious issues. Too many issues to
provide in an email.  Please bring up the more important ones for
discussion.

Thanks,
Anton. 

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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line 
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> Security Issues in Network Event Logging Working Group of the IETF.
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> 	Title		: The syslog Protocol
> 	Author(s)	: R. Gerhards
> 	Filename	: draft-ietf-syslog-protocol-05.txt
> 	Pages		: 40
> 	Date		: 2004-7-15
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> This document describes the syslog protocol. The syslog protocol has
>    been used throughout the years to convey event notifications.
This
>    documents describes a layered architecture for an easily
extensible
>    syslog protocol. It also describes the basic message format and
>    structured elements used to provide meta-information about the
>    message.
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