Subject: [Syslog] draft-ietf-syslog-sign-29

From: Richard Graveman <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 3 Dec 2009 11:30:10 -0500

Thank you for your continued efforts to complete this important work.

The -29 draft contains many improvements.

Here are a few editorial comments. I hope you can save them for AUTH48.

1. Section 2: "NOT RECOMMENDED" is also used below in the sense of RFC
2119, but it is not mentioned as such here.

2. Section 5.3.2.9, line 1: "is is"

3. Section 6, line 12: duplicats -> duplicates

4. Section 7.2, four lines above list item "f.": "the a"

5. [Ii]mplement[eo]rs is spelled multiple times with "or" and with "er"

Richard Graveman