Subject: Re: [core] Review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-01 (editorial bits)

From: Thomas Fossati <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 27 Jun 2019 14:22:10 +0000

Last batch of (purely editorial) comments:

Section 1.1 defines the shorthand Client and Server.  In the remainder
of the memo these are not used and the long version "server or
intermediary in the server role" and "client or intermediary in the
client role" are used instead.  Either use the shorthand or drop them.

Section 1.1
   [...] such as state for generating tokens and congestion control

s/generating tokens/request retransmission/ ?

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