From nobody Fri Dec 1 07:46:51 2017 Return-Path: X-Original-To: int-dir@ietf.org Delivered-To: int-dir@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id BD914129407; Fri, 1 Dec 2017 07:46:50 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: Bob Halley To: Cc: lp-wan@ietf.org, draft-ietf-lpwan-overview.all@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.66.0 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <151214321071.1282.9088534214260050074@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Fri, 01 Dec 2017 07:46:50 -0800 Archived-At: Subject: [Int-dir] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-07 X-BeenThere: int-dir@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 List-Id: "This list is for discussion between the members of the Internet Area directorate." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 01 Dec 2017 15:46:51 -0000 Reviewer: Bob Halley Review result: Ready I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-07. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html. The document is a good introduction to this area! 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