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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
 This draft is a work item of the Network-Based Mobility Extensions Working Group of the IETF.

        Title           : Mapping PMIPv6 QoS Procedures with WLAN QoS procedures
        Authors         : John Kaippallimalil
                          Rajesh Pazhyannur
                          Parviz Yegani
	Filename        : draft-ietf-netext-pmip-qos-wifi-02.txt
	Pages           : 19
	Date            : 2014-10-10

Abstract:
   This document provides guidelines for achieving end to end QoS in a
   PMIPv6 domain where the access network is based on IEEE 802.11.
   RFC 7222 describes QoS negotiation between a MAG and LMA in a PMIPv6
   mobility domain. The negotiated QoS parameters can be used for QoS
   policing and marking of packets to enforce QoS differentiation on the
   path between the MAG and LMA. IEEE 802.11-2012, WMM-AC describes
   methods for QoS negotiation between a Wi-Fi Station (MN in PMIPv6
   terminology) and an Access Point. This document provides a mapping
   between the above two sets of QoS procedures and the associated QoS
   parameters. This document is intended to be used as a companion
   document to RFC 7222 to enable implementation of end to end QoS.



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Hi,
We just posted a new revision of the draft-ietf-netext-pmip-qos-wifi with S=
ri's comments addressed:

-          Description of LMA initiated QoS reservation with IEEE 802.11aa

-          MN and session parameter descriptions, security text and other r=
evisions for references, etc.


The draft is ready for WGLC in our opinion.

Regards,
John

Link to new version:

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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netext-pmip-qos-wifi/



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http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netext-pmip-qos-wifi-02



From: netext [mailto:netext-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Sri Gundavelli (=
sgundave)
Sent: Tuesday, September 16, 2014 12:47 AM
To: netext@ietf.org
Subject: [netext] Review Comments on I-D: draft-ietf-netext-pmip-qos-wifi-0=
1

Hi Authors:

I've reviewed the -01 version of Wi-Fi QoS document. Its is well written. I=
ts in a good shape. Few comments below.



Major Comment:

> Section 3: "However, there are no standards defined way for the AP to ini=
tiate a QoS service request to the MN."

I'm bit disappointed to see the removal of the support for network initiate=
d QoS set-up.  John, Rajesh and myself had several offline discussions on t=
his few months back; Here is my comment from earlier discussions. I'm not a=
sking the Authors to add the support for network-initiated dynamic QoS, but=
 I thought it will be good to get some feedback from others.

"I do not understand the 802.11 guys thinking on this entire StreamId busin=
ess. When I first looked at it this, I thought this is just a identifier us=
ed in Application signaling. But, when this is tied to .1Q, even the basic =
semantics on the StreamId length or how its used in the network is not clea=
r to me. Their view that the tag is global and can be enforced in the entir=
e network seems bit broken. But, that spec is not my area of expertise and =
so may be I missing the real intent here.

However, when I look at this from PMIP QoS point of view and with the goal =
of realizing end to end QoS, the QoS enforcement  in this context is on the=
 MAG/AP. QoS enforcement on the rest of the network (MAG to LMA) is PMIP is=
sue. If that is the baseline requirement, my point is what stops the UE or =
the MAG implementation to ignore the StreamId completely ? MAG and UE repre=
sent the two end points of the air interface and they both have the TFT.  S=
o, this entire streamId business is total non-sense, specially the key prot=
ocols such as SIP have no mapping. So, even if there is public OUI allocati=
on, I fail to understand how it fits in the overall scheme of things. So, m=
y initial suggestion was to workaround the StreamId and make the spec work.
"



Additional Comments:

> Introduction: "STA"
Please add a reference or explanation on "STA" term - Station; In general, =
please add references/explanations to all Wi-Fi terminology.

> "The Mean Data Rate does not include the MAC and PHY overheads [WMM1.2.0]=
"
 Some explanation can help.

> However, this document does not exclude
   various deployments including those where AP and WLC are separate
   nodes, or the MAG control and data planes are separate."

Should there any guidance on how the QoS parameters are negotiated/exchange=
d between AP and WLC in the split mode ?

> Section 1.2: TSPEC
Add a reference to TSPEC

> GBR, AMBR Terminology
You may want to add a reference to RFC 7222 Terminology section. There is e=
xplanation for GBR, AMBR and other parameters

> PMIPV6
Should be PMIPv6

> Handovers ?
I did not see much text on what happens to the QoS states after a MN's inte=
r-MAG handovers.

> Section 4.1
Please use "Traffic Class" in the table, instead of "DSCP"

> Error Code Mapping
RFC7222 defines couple of error codes. Its not clear how those error codes =
map to the Cause Codes in ADDTS Response. I saw just one Cause Code. Is tha=
t all ?

> Scope: Per-MN, Per-Session,
No discussion on the scope. Its unclear how the Per-Session, Per-MN attribu=
tes map to different Wi-Fi QoS elements

> Security Considerations
You may want to add some text on how WLAN security architecture can protect=
 the integrity of the QoS signaling messages on the air interface. The curr=
ent text may not be sufficient.


> References
Informative Reference to RFC 5213 and 5844 as the PBU/PBA messages are used=
 in call flows
Add a reference to UPN/UPA spec (RFC7077) as its used in call flows






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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">We just posted a new revi=
sion of the draft-ietf-netext-pmip-qos-wifi with Sri&#8217;s comments addre=
ssed:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:=
&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Description of LM=
A initiated QoS reservation with IEEE 802.11aa
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libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span=
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Sri Gundavelli (sgundave)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, September 16, 2014 12:47 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> netext@ietf.org<br>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">I've reviewed the -01 versi=
on of Wi-Fi QoS document. Its is well written. Its in a good shape. Few com=
ments below.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Major Comment:<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; Section 3: &quot;Howev=
er, there are no standards defined way&nbsp;for the AP to initiate a QoS se=
rvice request to the MN.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">I'm bit disappointed to see=
 the removal of the support for network initiated QoS set-up. &nbsp;John, R=
ajesh and myself had several offline discussions on this few
 months back; Here is my comment from earlier discussions. I'm not asking t=
he Authors to add the support for network-initiated dynamic QoS, but I thou=
ght it will be good to get some feedback from others.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&quot;I do not understand t=
he 802.11 guys thinking on this entire StreamId business. When I first look=
ed at it this, I thought this is just a identifier used in Application
 signaling. But, when this is tied to .1Q, even the basic semantics on the =
StreamId length or how its used in the network is not clear to me. Their vi=
ew that the tag is global and can be enforced in the entire network seems b=
it broken. But, that spec is not
 my area of expertise and so may be I missing the real intent here.&nbsp;<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">However, when I look at thi=
s from PMIP QoS point of view and with the goal of realizing end to end QoS=
, the QoS enforcement &nbsp;in this context is on the MAG/AP.
 QoS enforcement on the rest of the network (MAG to LMA) is PMIP issue. If =
that is the baseline requirement, my point is what stops the UE or the MAG =
implementation to ignore the StreamId completely ? MAG and UE represent the=
 two end points of the air interface
 and they both have the TFT.&nbsp;&nbsp;So, this entire streamId business i=
s total non-sense, specially the key protocols such as SIP have no mapping.=
 So, even if there is public OUI allocation, I fail to understand how it fi=
ts in the overall scheme of things. So, my
 initial suggestion was to workaround the StreamId and make the spec work.<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&quot;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Additional Comments:<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; Introduction: &quot;ST=
A&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Please add a reference or e=
xplanation on &quot;STA&quot; term - Station; In general, please add refere=
nces/explanations to all Wi-Fi terminology.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; &quot;The Mean Data&nb=
sp;Rate does not include the MAC and PHY overheads [WMM1.2.0]&quot;<o:p></o=
:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;Some explanation can =
help.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt;&nbsp;However, this doc=
ument does not exclude<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&nbsp; &nbsp;various deploy=
ments including those where AP and WLC are separate<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&nbsp; &nbsp;nodes, or the =
MAG control and data planes are separate.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Should there any guidance o=
n how the QoS parameters are negotiated/exchanged between AP and WLC in the=
 split mode ?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; Section 1.2: TSPEC<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Add a reference to TSPEC<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; GBR, AMBR Terminology<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">You may want to add a refer=
ence to RFC 7222 Terminology section. There is explanation for GBR, AMBR an=
d other parameters<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; PMIPV6&nbsp;<o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Should be PMIPv6&nbsp;<o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; Handovers ?<o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">I did not see much text on =
what happens to the QoS states after a MN's inter-MAG handovers.<o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; Section 4.1<o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Please use &quot;Traffic Cl=
ass&quot; in the table, instead of &quot;DSCP&quot;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; Error Code Mapping<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">RFC7222 defines couple of e=
rror codes. Its not clear how those error codes map to the Cause Codes in A=
DDTS Response. I saw just one Cause Code. Is that all ?<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; Scope: Per-MN, Per-Ses=
sion,&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">No discussion on the scope.=
 Its unclear how the Per-Session, Per-MN attributes map to different Wi-Fi =
QoS elements<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; Security Consideration=
s<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">You may want to add some te=
xt on how WLAN security architecture can protect the integrity of the QoS s=
ignaling messages on the air interface. The current text
 may not be sufficient.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&gt; References<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Informative Reference to RF=
C 5213 and 5844 as the PBU/PBA messages are used in call flows<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Add a reference to UPN/UPA =
spec (RFC7077) as its used in call flows<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
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Dear authors,

please find some observations during review summarized below. Sorry for pos=
ting my comments
late, they are still based on revision 01 and may be obsolete with the rece=
nt update.

The draft is written well and provides guidelines about operation when comb=
ining
WiFi QoS with a PMIP QoS backend.

I try to provide a few hints how the 'guideline'-aspects could be emphasize=
d. It's up to
the authors whether or not to adopt them.

Some limitations, often constrained by WiFi/WMM, are analyzed, but few reco=
mmendations
or guidelines are provided how to tackle certain situations. Clarification =
is not mandatory, but may
help implementations.

In general I see some implementation impact to the AP, so it's not simply a=
 configuration
issue or even plug and play :)
The fact to have two policy decision points with strong dependencies now br=
eaks
the WiFi QoS state machine. It may be useful to state this in the draft.

Impact of the described WiFi admission control may be clarified, so I do no=
t assume that
a failed QoS request results in broken connectivity. But a hint about how t=
o
treat that case can be useful. I suppose no QoS state will be set up but tr=
affic is
treated BE, correct?

Taking the operation in sec 3.1.1, the LMA may revise the requested
QoS and let the MAG/AP know in the PBA. Is there support in WiFi/WMM to not=
ify
the MN about a successful QoS request but with adjusted (downgraded) QoS va=
lues?
Or is this treated as failed QoS request as per the WiFi specification?

Sec. 3.2.1 describes the case when the LMA initiates a QoS setup and correc=
tly points to the
lack of support for network initiated QoS setup in WLAN. The current descri=
ption is clear, but some
recommendations how to tackle this may be given to meet a reader's expectat=
ions
on guidelines. E.g. how could a MAG accept or re-negotiate an LMA-initiated=
 QoS
setup? It should not accept the LMA's request when the AP has not sufficien=
t resources.
So, the MAG may have knowledge about a resources budget from the AP (aggreg=
ated or
per MN).  Providing such information is of course optional and up to author=
s' decision.


1.2 Definitions
>From sec. 3.1.1 I understand that terms peak and mean data rate are per-flo=
w, correct?
This may be stated in sec. 1.2 if it's the general assumption for the refer=
red WMM procedure.

I am not so clear about the statement that WMM-AC specs do not consider a T=
CLAS (sec 3.1.1).
Missing this attribute does not allow the description of a flow using the T=
raffic Selector in PMIP.
Sec. 3.1.1 indicates that in such case only a single reservation per AC is =
possible. Are there
default configurations then to identify best effort, video, voice, etc. tra=
ffic? Or is that case even limited
to a single reservation per MN/MAC address, hence all traffic of that MN is=
 assigned to the AC?
How is that limitation reflected on the PMIP QoS; should per MN, per mobili=
ty session aggregates
be used? This could be clarified.


Hope you find these comments useful.

Best regards,
marco










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nt update.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">The draft is written well and provides guidelines ab=
out operation when combining<br>
WiFi QoS with a PMIP QoS backend.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I try to provide a few hints how the &#8216;guidelin=
e&#8217;-aspects could be emphasized. It&#8217;s up to<br>
the authors whether or not to adopt them.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Some limitations, often constrained by WiFi/WMM, are=
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or guidelines are provided how to tackle certain situations. Clarification =
is not mandatory, but may<br>
help implementations.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In general I see some implementation impact to the A=
P, so it&#8217;s not simply a configuration<br>
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o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">The fact to have two policy decision points with str=
ong dependencies now breaks<br>
the WiFi QoS state machine. It may be useful to state this in the draft.<o:=
p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Impact of the described WiFi admission control may b=
e clarified, so I do not assume that<br>
a failed QoS request results in broken connectivity. But a hint about how t=
o<br>
treat that case can be useful. I suppose no QoS state will be set up but tr=
affic is<br>
treated BE, correct?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Taking the operation in sec 3.1.1, the LMA may revis=
e the requested<br>
QoS and let the MAG/AP know in the PBA. Is there support in WiFi/WMM to not=
ify<br>
the MN about a successful QoS request but with adjusted (downgraded) QoS va=
lues? <br>
Or is this treated as failed QoS request as per the WiFi specification?<o:p=
></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Sec. 3.2.1 describes the case when the LMA initiates=
 a QoS setup and correctly points to the<br>
lack of support for network initiated QoS setup in WLAN. The current descri=
ption is clear, but some<br>
recommendations how to tackle this may be given to meet a reader&#8217;s ex=
pectations<br>
on guidelines. E.g. how could a MAG accept or re-negotiate an LMA-initiated=
 QoS<br>
setup? It should not accept the LMA&#8217;s request when the AP has not suf=
ficient resources.<br>
So, the MAG may have knowledge about a resources budget from the AP (aggreg=
ated or<br>
per MN). &nbsp;Providing such information is of course optional and up to a=
uthors&#8217; decision.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">1.2 Definitions<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">From sec. 3.1.1 I understand that terms peak and mea=
n data rate are per-flow, correct?<br>
This may be stated in sec. 1.2 if it&#8217;s the general assumption for the=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I am not so clear about the statement that WMM-AC sp=
ecs do not consider a TCLAS (sec 3.1.1).<br>
Missing this attribute does not allow the description of a flow using the T=
raffic Selector in PMIP.<br>
Sec. 3.1.1 indicates that in such case only a single reservation per AC is =
possible. Are there<br>
default configurations then to identify best effort, video, voice, etc. tra=
ffic? Or is that case even limited<br>
to a single reservation per MN/MAC address, hence all traffic of that MN is=
 assigned to the AC?<br>
How is that limitation reflected on the PMIP QoS; should per MN, per mobili=
ty session aggregates<br>
be used? This could be clarified.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hope you find these comments useful.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">marco<o:p></o:p></p>
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Hi Marco,
Thank you for the detailed review. The comments and suggestions are very us=
eful to clarify operation and improve readability - especially since this d=
raft contains guidelines.
Will revise with input from these comments in the next few days.

Some notes on planned revision inline below.

Best Regards,
John


From: netext [mailto:netext-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Marco Liebsch
Sent: Tuesday, October 14, 2014 10:04 AM
To: netext@ietf.org
Subject: [netext] comments to draft-ietf-netext-pmip-qos-wifi

Dear authors,

please find some observations during review summarized below. Sorry for pos=
ting my comments
late, they are still based on revision 01 and may be obsolete with the rece=
nt update.

The draft is written well and provides guidelines about operation when comb=
ining
WiFi QoS with a PMIP QoS backend.

I try to provide a few hints how the 'guideline'-aspects could be emphasize=
d. It's up to
the authors whether or not to adopt them.

Some limitations, often constrained by WiFi/WMM, are analyzed, but few reco=
mmendations
or guidelines are provided how to tackle certain situations. Clarification =
is not mandatory, but may
help implementations.

In general I see some implementation impact to the AP, so it's not simply a=
 configuration
issue or even plug and play :)
The fact to have two policy decision points with strong dependencies now br=
eaks
the WiFi QoS state machine. It may be useful to state this in the draft.

>> will revise.

Impact of the described WiFi admission control may be clarified, so I do no=
t assume that
a failed QoS request results in broken connectivity. But a hint about how t=
o
treat that case can be useful. I suppose no QoS state will be set up but tr=
affic is
treated BE, correct?

>> correct. Revision 02 has some updates to clarify this, but will look ove=
r again.

Taking the operation in sec 3.1.1, the LMA may revise the requested
QoS and let the MAG/AP know in the PBA. Is there support in WiFi/WMM to not=
ify
the MN about a successful QoS request but with adjusted (downgraded) QoS va=
lues?
Or is this treated as failed QoS request as per the WiFi specification?

>> This would be a failed request per WiFi.
Can add text to clarify this. Recommendations beyond that would perhaps be =
beyond the scope of this draft.

Sec. 3.2.1 describes the case when the LMA initiates a QoS setup and correc=
tly points to the
lack of support for network initiated QoS setup in WLAN. The current descri=
ption is clear, but some
recommendations how to tackle this may be given to meet a reader's expectat=
ions
on guidelines. E.g. how could a MAG accept or re-negotiate an LMA-initiated=
 QoS
setup? It should not accept the LMA's request when the AP has not sufficien=
t resources.
So, the MAG may have knowledge about a resources budget from the AP (aggreg=
ated or
per MN).  Providing such information is of course optional and up to author=
s' decision.

>> will revise.


1.2 Definitions
>From sec. 3.1.1 I understand that terms peak and mean data rate are per-flo=
w, correct?
This may be stated in sec. 1.2 if it's the general assumption for the refer=
red WMM procedure.

>> will revise.
I am not so clear about the statement that WMM-AC specs do not consider a T=
CLAS (sec 3.1.1).
Missing this attribute does not allow the description of a flow using the T=
raffic Selector in PMIP.
Sec. 3.1.1 indicates that in such case only a single reservation per AC is =
possible. Are there
default configurations then to identify best effort, video, voice, etc. tra=
ffic? Or is that case even limited
to a single reservation per MN/MAC address, hence all traffic of that MN is=
 assigned to the AC?
How is that limitation reflected on the PMIP QoS; should per MN, per mobili=
ty session aggregates
be used? This could be clarified.
>> updated in current revision.


Hope you find these comments useful.

>> definitely useful - appreciate the review.

Best regards,
marco










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span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">Thank you for the deta=
iled review. The comments and suggestions are very useful to clarify operat=
ion and improve readability - especially since this draft contains guidelin=
es.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">Will revise with input=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">Some notes on planned =
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">Best Regards,<o:p></o:=
p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">John<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> netext [=
mailto:netext-bounces@ietf.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Marco Liebsch<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, October 14, 2014 10:04 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> netext@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [netext] comments to draft-ietf-netext-pmip-qos-wifi<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Dear authors,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">please find some observations during review summariz=
ed below. Sorry for posting my comments<br>
late, they are still based on revision 01 and may be obsolete with the rece=
nt update.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">The draft is written well and provides guidelines ab=
out operation when combining<br>
WiFi QoS with a PMIP QoS backend.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I try to provide a few hints how the &#8216;guidelin=
e&#8217;-aspects could be emphasized. It&#8217;s up to<br>
the authors whether or not to adopt them.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Some limitations, often constrained by WiFi/WMM, are=
 analyzed, but few recommendations<br>
or guidelines are provided how to tackle certain situations. Clarification =
is not mandatory, but may<br>
help implementations.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In general I see some implementation impact to the A=
P, so it&#8217;s not simply a configuration<br>
issue or even plug and play <span style=3D"font-family:Wingdings">J</span><=
o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">The fact to have two policy decision points with str=
ong dependencies now breaks<br>
the WiFi QoS state machine. It may be useful to state this in the draft.<o:=
p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">&gt;&gt; will revise.<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Impact of the described WiFi admission control may b=
e clarified, so I do not assume that<br>
a failed QoS request results in broken connectivity. But a hint about how t=
o<br>
treat that case can be useful. I suppose no QoS state will be set up but tr=
affic is<br>
treated BE, correct?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">&gt;&gt; correct. Revi=
sion 02 has some updates to clarify this, but will look over again.<o:p></o=
:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Taking the operation in sec 3.1.1, the LMA may revis=
e the requested<br>
QoS and let the MAG/AP know in the PBA. Is there support in WiFi/WMM to not=
ify<br>
the MN about a successful QoS request but with adjusted (downgraded) QoS va=
lues? <br>
Or is this treated as failed QoS request as per the WiFi specification?<o:p=
></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">&gt;&gt; This would be=
 a failed request per WiFi.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">Can add text to clarif=
y this. Recommendations beyond that would perhaps be beyond the scope of th=
is draft.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Sec. 3.2.1 describes the case when the LMA initiates=
 a QoS setup and correctly points to the<br>
lack of support for network initiated QoS setup in WLAN. The current descri=
ption is clear, but some<br>
recommendations how to tackle this may be given to meet a reader&#8217;s ex=
pectations<br>
on guidelines. E.g. how could a MAG accept or re-negotiate an LMA-initiated=
 QoS<br>
setup? It should not accept the LMA&#8217;s request when the AP has not suf=
ficient resources.<br>
So, the MAG may have knowledge about a resources budget from the AP (aggreg=
ated or<br>
per MN). &nbsp;Providing such information is of course optional and up to a=
uthors&#8217; decision.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">&gt;&gt; will revise.<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">1.2 Definitions<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">From sec. 3.1.1 I understand that terms peak and mea=
n data rate are per-flow, correct?<br>
This may be stated in sec. 1.2 if it&#8217;s the general assumption for the=
 referred WMM procedure.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">&gt;&gt; will revise.<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I am not so clear about the statement that WMM-AC sp=
ecs do not consider a TCLAS (sec 3.1.1).<br>
Missing this attribute does not allow the description of a flow using the T=
raffic Selector in PMIP.<br>
Sec. 3.1.1 indicates that in such case only a single reservation per AC is =
possible. Are there<br>
default configurations then to identify best effort, video, voice, etc. tra=
ffic? Or is that case even limited<br>
to a single reservation per MN/MAC address, hence all traffic of that MN is=
 assigned to the AC?<br>
How is that limitation reflected on the PMIP QoS; should per MN, per mobili=
ty session aggregates<br>
be used? This could be clarified.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">&gt;&gt; updated in cu=
rrent revision.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hope you find these comments useful.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">&gt;&gt; definitely us=
eful &#8211; appreciate the review.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">marco<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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Hello Marco

Thanks for the comments. Some responses inline

regards

Rajesh
________________________________
From: netext [netext-bounces@ietf.org] on behalf of Marco Liebsch [Marco.Li=
ebsch@neclab.eu]
Sent: Tuesday, October 14, 2014 8:03 AM
To: netext@ietf.org
Subject: [netext] comments to draft-ietf-netext-pmip-qos-wifi

Dear authors,

please find some observations during review summarized below. Sorry for pos=
ting my comments
late, they are still based on revision 01 and may be obsolete with the rece=
nt update.

The draft is written well and provides guidelines about operation when comb=
ining
WiFi QoS with a PMIP QoS backend.

I try to provide a few hints how the =91guideline=92-aspects could be empha=
sized. It=92s up to
the authors whether or not to adopt them.

Some limitations, often constrained by WiFi/WMM, are analyzed, but few reco=
mmendations
or guidelines are provided how to tackle certain situations. Clarification =
is not mandatory, but may
help implementations.

In general I see some implementation impact to the AP, so it=92s not simply=
 a configuration
issue or even plug and play :)
The fact to have two policy decision points with strong dependencies now br=
eaks
the WiFi QoS state machine. It may be useful to state this in the draft.

Impact of the described WiFi admission control may be clarified, so I do no=
t assume that
a failed QoS request results in broken connectivity. But a hint about how t=
o
treat that case can be useful. I suppose no QoS state will be set up but tr=
affic is
treated BE, correct?

Taking the operation in sec 3.1.1, the LMA may revise the requested
QoS and let the MAG/AP know in the PBA. Is there support in WiFi/WMM to not=
ify
the MN about a successful QoS request but with adjusted (downgraded) QoS va=
lues?
Or is this treated as failed QoS request as per the WiFi specification?

> Yes, ADDTS response can provide success/failure status code. It does not =
admit flows with "downgraded" QoS values.

Sec. 3.2.1 describes the case when the LMA initiates a QoS setup and correc=
tly points to the
lack of support for network initiated QoS setup in WLAN. The current descri=
ption is clear, but some
recommendations how to tackle this may be given to meet a reader=92s expect=
ations
on guidelines. E.g. how could a MAG accept or re-negotiate an LMA-initiated=
 QoS
setup? It should not accept the LMA=92s request when the AP has not suffici=
ent resources.
So, the MAG may have knowledge about a resources budget from the AP (aggreg=
ated or
per MN).  Providing such information is of course optional and up to author=
s=92 decision.


1.2 Definitions
>From sec. 3.1.1 I understand that terms peak and mean data rate are per-flo=
w, correct?
This may be stated in sec. 1.2 if it=92s the general assumption for the ref=
erred WMM procedure.

I am not so clear about the statement that WMM-AC specs do not consider a T=
CLAS (sec 3.1.1).
Missing this attribute does not allow the description of a flow using the T=
raffic Selector in PMIP.
Sec. 3.1.1 indicates that in such case only a single reservation per AC is =
possible. Are there
default configurations then to identify best effort, video, voice, etc. tra=
ffic? Or is that case even limited
to a single reservation per MN/MAC address, hence all traffic of that MN is=
 assigned to the AC?
How is that limitation reflected on the PMIP QoS; should per MN, per mobili=
ty session aggregates
be used? This could be clarified.

 >> Yes, we will clarify but briefly what we are saying is the following. I=
EEE 802.11 has a information called TCLAS (which as the name indicates prov=
ides flow classifiers). However, TCLAS is an optional field. However, WMM-A=
C (from the Wi-Fi Alliance) which is a certification specification for admi=
ssion control does not include TCLAS in the signaling. So WMM-AC compliant =
devices are unlikely to have this field.


Hope you find these comments useful.

Best regards,
marco










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<div>Thanks for the comments. Some responses inline</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>regards</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Rajesh<br>
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<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, October 14, 2014 8:03 AM<br>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Dear authors,</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">please find some observations during review summariz=
ed below. Sorry for posting my comments<br>
late, they are still based on revision 01 and may be obsolete with the rece=
nt update.</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">The draft is written well and provides guidelines ab=
out operation when combining<br>
WiFi QoS with a PMIP QoS backend.</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I try to provide a few hints how the =91guideline=92=
-aspects could be emphasized. It=92s up to<br>
the authors whether or not to adopt them.</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Some limitations, often constrained by WiFi/WMM, are=
 analyzed, but few recommendations<br>
or guidelines are provided how to tackle certain situations. Clarification =
is not mandatory, but may<br>
help implementations.</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In general I see some implementation impact to the A=
P, so it=92s not simply a configuration<br>
issue or even plug and play <span style=3D"font-family:Wingdings">J</span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">The fact to have two policy decision points with str=
ong dependencies now breaks<br>
the WiFi QoS state machine. It may be useful to state this in the draft.</p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Impact of the described WiFi admission control may b=
e clarified, so I do not assume that<br>
a failed QoS request results in broken connectivity. But a hint about how t=
o<br>
treat that case can be useful. I suppose no QoS state will be set up but tr=
affic is<br>
treated BE, correct?</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Taking the operation in sec 3.1.1, the LMA may revis=
e the requested<br>
QoS and let the MAG/AP know in the PBA. Is there support in WiFi/WMM to not=
ify<br>
the MN about a successful QoS request but with adjusted (downgraded) QoS va=
lues? <br>
Or is this treated as failed QoS request as per the WiFi specification?</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><br>
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&gt; Yes, ADDTS response can provide success/failure=
 status code. It does not admit flows with &quot;downgraded&quot; QoS value=
s.</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Sec. 3.2.1 describes the case when the LMA initiates=
 a QoS setup and correctly points to the<br>
lack of support for network initiated QoS setup in WLAN. The current descri=
ption is clear, but some<br>
recommendations how to tackle this may be given to meet a reader=92s expect=
ations<br>
on guidelines. E.g. how could a MAG accept or re-negotiate an LMA-initiated=
 QoS<br>
setup? It should not accept the LMA=92s request when the AP has not suffici=
ent resources.<br>
So, the MAG may have knowledge about a resources budget from the AP (aggreg=
ated or<br>
per MN). &nbsp;Providing such information is of course optional and up to a=
uthors=92 decision.</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">1.2 Definitions</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">From sec. 3.1.1 I understand that terms peak and mea=
n data rate are per-flow, correct?<br>
This may be stated in sec. 1.2 if it=92s the general assumption for the ref=
erred WMM procedure.</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I am not so clear about the statement that WMM-AC sp=
ecs do not consider a TCLAS (sec 3.1.1).<br>
Missing this attribute does not allow the description of a flow using the T=
raffic Selector in PMIP.<br>
Sec. 3.1.1 indicates that in such case only a single reservation per AC is =
possible. Are there<br>
default configurations then to identify best effort, video, voice, etc. tra=
ffic? Or is that case even limited<br>
to a single reservation per MN/MAC address, hence all traffic of that MN is=
 assigned to the AC?<br>
How is that limitation reflected on the PMIP QoS; should per MN, per mobili=
ty session aggregates<br>
be used? This could be clarified.</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><br>
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&gt;&gt; Yes, we will clarify but briefly what=
 we are saying is the following. IEEE 802.11 has a information called TCLAS=
 (which as the name indicates provides flow classifiers). However, TCLAS is=
 an optional field. However, WMM-AC (from the
 Wi-Fi Alliance) which is a certification specification for admission contr=
ol does not include TCLAS in the signaling. So WMM-AC compliant devices are=
 unlikely to have this field.&nbsp;</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><br>
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
 This draft is a work item of the Network-Based Mobility Extensions Working Group of the IETF.

        Title           : Mapping PMIPv6 QoS Procedures with WLAN QoS procedures
        Authors         : John Kaippallimalil
                          Rajesh Pazhyannur
                          Parviz Yegani
	Filename        : draft-ietf-netext-pmip-qos-wifi-03.txt
	Pages           : 20
	Date            : 2014-10-16

Abstract:
   This document provides guidelines for achieving end to end QoS in a
   PMIPv6 domain where the access network is based on IEEE 802.11.
   RFC 7222 describes QoS negotiation between a MAG and LMA in a PMIPv6
   mobility domain. The negotiated QoS parameters can be used for QoS
   policing and marking of packets to enforce QoS differentiation on the
   path between the MAG and LMA. IEEE 802.11-2012, WMM-AC describes
   methods for QoS negotiation between a Wi-Fi Station (MN in PMIPv6
   terminology) and an Access Point. This document provides a mapping
   between the above two sets of QoS procedures and the associated QoS
   parameters. This document is intended to be used as a companion
   document to RFC 7222 to enable implementation of end to end QoS.



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        Title           : EAP Attributes for Wi-Fi - EPC Integration
        Authors         : Ravi Valmikam
                          Rajeev Koodli
	Filename        : draft-ietf-netext-wifi-epc-eap-attributes-13.txt
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	Date            : 2014-10-24

Abstract:
   With Wi-Fi emerging as a trusted access network for service
   providers, it has become important to provide functions commonly
   available in 3G and 4G networks in Wi-Fi access networks as well.
   Such functions include Access Point Name (APN) Selection, multiple
   Packet Data Network (PDN) connections, and seamless mobility between
   Wi-Fi and 3G/4G networks.

   The EAP/AKA (and EAP/AKA') protocol is required for mobile devices to
   access the mobile Evolved Packet Core (EPC) via trusted Wi-Fi
   networks.  This document defines a few new EAP attributes to enable
   the above-mentioned functions in trusted Wi-Fi access networks.  The
   attributes are exchanged between a client (such as a Mobile Node) and
   its network counterpart (such as a AAA server) in the service
   provider's infrastructure.


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A new Request for Comments is now available in online RFC libraries.

        
        RFC 7389

        Title:      Separation of Control and User 
                    Plane for Proxy Mobile IPv6 
        Author:     R. Wakikawa, R. Pazhyannur,
                    S. Gundavelli, C. Perkins
        Status:     Standards Track
        Stream:     IETF
        Date:       October 2014
        Mailbox:    ryuji.wakikawa@gmail.com, 
                    rpazhyan@cisco.com, 
                    sgundave@cisco.com, 
                    charliep@computer.org
        Pages:      12
        Characters: 26217
        Updates/Obsoletes/SeeAlso:   None

        I-D Tag:    draft-ietf-netext-pmip-cp-up-separation-07.txt

        URL:        https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7389.txt

This document specifies a method to split the control plane (CP) and
user plane (UP) for a network infrastructure based on Proxy Mobile
IPv6 (PMIPv6).  Existing specifications allow a mobile access gateway
(MAG) to separate its control and user plane using the Alternate
Care-of Address mobility option for IPv6 or Alternate IPv4 Care-of
Address option for IPv4.  However, the current specification does not
provide any mechanism allowing the local mobility anchor (LMA) to
perform an analogous functional split.  To remedy that shortcoming,
this document specifies a mobility option enabling an LMA to provide
an alternate LMA address to be used for the bidirectional user-plane
traffic between the MAG and LMA.  With this new option, an LMA will
be able to use an IP address for its user plane that is different
than the IP address used for the control plane.

This document is a product of the Network-Based Mobility Extensions Working Group of the IETF.

This is now a Proposed Standard.

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