Subject: [netmod] syslog-model-05: minor editorial comments

From: "Sterne, Jason (Jason)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 28 Oct 2015 18:50:42 +0000

A few minor editorial comments on syslog-model-05:

- The introduction says "We are using definitions of Syslog protocol from [RFC3164] in this draft." but the YANG model mostly references 5424.
- In section 3 maybe use the term "Remote Collector(s)" instead of Server(s) ? Collector seems more in line with RFC5424 (or "Remote Receiver" if others prefer that).
- In the Section 3 figure make all the Distributors have a common syntax for plural vs singular "Log Buffer(s)", "Log File(s)", "Remote Collector(s)", "User Terminal(s)"
- Document is missing the standard legend for the PYANG tree

Jason