Subject: [AAA-WG]: More editorial comments on base-07

From: Lucius Schmid <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 1 Aug 2001 11:23:52 -0400

Submitter name: Lucius Schmid 
Submitter email address: [email-masked] 
Date first submitted: Aug. 1. 2001 
Reference: N/A 
Document: base 
Comment type: E
Priority: 1 
Section: 5.6 
Rationale/Explanation of issue:  

Hi,

since there are Disconnect-Peer-x (DPR/DPA) commands codes I suggested to 
change the event name "Peer-Disc" to "Rcv-DPR" and the action name 
from "Disc" to "Snd-DPA".

Requested change: 
pages 58/59, section 5.6: the peer state machine table
replace all "x-Peer-Disc" with "x-Rcv-DPR" and "x-Disc" with "x-Snd-DPA"

page 60, section 5.6.2: Events
replace "Peer-Disc" with "Rcv-DPR"  (explanation remains)

page 61, section 5.6.3: Actions
replace "Disc" with "Snd-DPA"  (explanation remains)

cheers
Lucius