Subject: [AAA-WG]: [issue] Key Management chapter rephrasing

From: Miguel Ángel Monjas Llorente <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 23 Aug 2001 11:37:37 +0200

Submitter name: Miguel A. Monjas
Submitter email address: [email-masked] 
Date first submitted: 2001-08-23
Reference: 
Document: CMS-02
Comment type: E
Priority: 2
Section: 3.0
Rationale/Explanation of issue: 

In 3.0 chapter a number of issues are listed in order to provide
solutions for them in the rest of 3.x chapters.

However, phrases like:

"a specific Diameter key distribution mechanism is defined here"
"Another issue that must be addressed..."
"This section describes..."

aren't lucky since there isn't a specific mention to which chapters
will actually address the issues.

Requested change: 

Add clarifying phrases in order to state the chapters in which any
issue will be addressed.

Regards

  // M.A.

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