Subject: [AAA-WG]: Editorial nits in Diameter Base -08

From: Bernard Aboba <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 29 Dec 2001 07:40:07 -0800 (PST)

Submitter: Bernard Aboba <[email-masked]>
Date: December 28, 2001
Document: Diameter Base -08
Type: Editorial

Page 7, section 1.1, 3rd paragraph, last sentence:
Change
"AVPs are used by base Diameter" to "AVPs are used by the base Diameter"

Page 12, section 3.0-, 3rd paragraph:

"Diameter Servers must support the base protocol"

Shouldn't the must be capitalized? 

Page 14, section 2.1, third and fourth paragraphs:

Change: "ICMP protocol and port unreachable messages" to "ICMP protocol
port unreachable messages". 

"If Diameter receives data to from TCP that" to "If Diameter receives data
from TCP that"

Page 16, Section 2.3.4, first paragraph:
Change "Applications Identifiers is different from the ones" to
"Applications Identifiers are different from the ones"

Page 111, Section 11.1.1, second paragraph
Change:
"is set to a non-zero value, is for Private Use" to 
"is set to a non-zero value, are for Private Use"

Same change in section 11.2.1 on page 111 also.