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Dear Tsuno/Zhang
      Thanks for waiting. The review of
  draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-07 follows.

Glenn

C1. Abstract:
     The draft now defines 2 MIB modules.  Please revise the abstract
     and probably the title of the document too.

C2. The MIBs (L2L3-VPN-MCAST-TC-MIB, L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB) compile OK.
     (Three {type-unref} warnings are there, may be ignored.)

C3. Page 4:
       s/3.  Summary of MIB Module/
         3.  Summary of MIB Modules/

C4. Page 6: L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer DESCRIPTION
       s/"Denotes a pointer to the row pertaining to a table entry/
        /"This textual convention represents a pointer to a row in
         the table represented by the following object of type
         L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointerType./

C5. Page 7: L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer DESCRIPTION
         The explanation in the last paragraph seems out of place.
         It may be removed.

C6  Page 7: L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointerType DESCRIPTION
         it is unclear when the value 'null(0)' will be used.
         Is this allowed only when the corresponding object of type
         L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer has a value that is a
         zero-length string ? If yes, please make that clear.

C7. Page 9: l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeTable DESCRIPTION
         s/created by a PE router/maintained by a PE router/

C8. Page 12: l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId
          Do you really want to keep this object in L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB.
          It will change every time a new "tunnel type" is added to
          L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelType. That will defeat the purpose
          of separating L2L3-VPN-MCAST-TC-MIB from L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB
          It may be a good idea to define a textual convention like
              L2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId
          in the L2L3-VPN-MCAST-TC-MIB and use that textual convention
          in the L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB

C9. Page 13: l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId DESCRIPTION
A.       s/Thus, the size of this object is 16 octets in IPv4/
            Thus, the size of this object is 8 octets in IPv4/
B.       The last 2 paragraphs do not tie up well with the previous
          paragraphs in the DESCRIPTION.
C.       In the last paragraph
          "this object is a pair of source and group IP addresses"
          is unlcear. Please clarify.

C10. Page 15: Security Considerations
          I would think that any field that reveals information about
          a Multicast VPN and/or its members is sensitive.
          Does the l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId field reveal
          information about the participating members? If yes, it must
          be marked as sensitive.

C11. Editorial:

A. This does not pertain to the MIBs as such,
    but I am uncomfortable with the  several variations
    of the phrase
    "Layer 2 and Layer 3 Virtual Private Networks (VPN)
     that support multicast"
    that appears in the text. I do not have a solution
    on hand but it would be perhaps be more readable to
    define and use a simple name/notation the beast for
    which the MIB is being designed (e.g. "L2L3VPNMCast").

B. Same with the phrase
     "Layer 2 (L2) and Layer 3 (L3) VPN (Virtual Private
      Network)
     it would be probably be easier on the reader if an
     abbreviation like L2L3VPNs was used where ever
     applicable.

C12. P2:Para4: s/within MIB module specifications//;

C13. General:
A.      The DESCRIPTION clauses could do would some more
         packing. (Too much space at the end of lines)
B.      Please check the articles a/an/the once again. Some
         usages do not seem right to me.





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Dear Glenn,

Thank you very much for your thorough review.
I have greatly appreciated it.

I am going to check and update the draft taking into
account your comments.
I try to submit the updated draft by the end of next week.

Best regards,

-- tsuno

2017-05-01 12:32 GMT+02:00 Glenn Mansfield Keeni <glenn@cysols.com>:
> Dear Tsuno/Zhang
>      Thanks for waiting. The review of
>  draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-07 follows.
>
> Glenn
>
> C1. Abstract:
>     The draft now defines 2 MIB modules.  Please revise the abstract
>     and probably the title of the document too.
>
> C2. The MIBs (L2L3-VPN-MCAST-TC-MIB, L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB) compile OK.
>     (Three {type-unref} warnings are there, may be ignored.)
>
> C3. Page 4:
>       s/3.  Summary of MIB Module/
>         3.  Summary of MIB Modules/
>
> C4. Page 6: L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer DESCRIPTION
>       s/"Denotes a pointer to the row pertaining to a table entry/
>        /"This textual convention represents a pointer to a row in
>         the table represented by the following object of type
>         L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointerType./
>
> C5. Page 7: L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer DESCRIPTION
>         The explanation in the last paragraph seems out of place.
>         It may be removed.
>
> C6  Page 7: L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointerType DESCRIPTION
>         it is unclear when the value 'null(0)' will be used.
>         Is this allowed only when the corresponding object of type
>         L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer has a value that is a
>         zero-length string ? If yes, please make that clear.
>
> C7. Page 9: l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeTable DESCRIPTION
>         s/created by a PE router/maintained by a PE router/
>
> C8. Page 12: l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId
>          Do you really want to keep this object in L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB.
>          It will change every time a new "tunnel type" is added to
>          L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelType. That will defeat the purpose
>          of separating L2L3-VPN-MCAST-TC-MIB from L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB
>          It may be a good idea to define a textual convention like
>              L2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId
>          in the L2L3-VPN-MCAST-TC-MIB and use that textual convention
>          in the L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB
>
> C9. Page 13: l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId DESCRIPTION
> A.       s/Thus, the size of this object is 16 octets in IPv4/
>            Thus, the size of this object is 8 octets in IPv4/
> B.       The last 2 paragraphs do not tie up well with the previous
>          paragraphs in the DESCRIPTION.
> C.       In the last paragraph
>          "this object is a pair of source and group IP addresses"
>          is unlcear. Please clarify.
>
> C10. Page 15: Security Considerations
>          I would think that any field that reveals information about
>          a Multicast VPN and/or its members is sensitive.
>          Does the l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId field reveal
>          information about the participating members? If yes, it must
>          be marked as sensitive.
>
> C11. Editorial:
>
> A. This does not pertain to the MIBs as such,
>    but I am uncomfortable with the  several variations
>    of the phrase
>    "Layer 2 and Layer 3 Virtual Private Networks (VPN)
>     that support multicast"
>    that appears in the text. I do not have a solution
>    on hand but it would be perhaps be more readable to
>    define and use a simple name/notation the beast for
>    which the MIB is being designed (e.g. "L2L3VPNMCast").
>
> B. Same with the phrase
>     "Layer 2 (L2) and Layer 3 (L3) VPN (Virtual Private
>      Network)
>     it would be probably be easier on the reader if an
>     abbreviation like L2L3VPNs was used where ever
>     applicable.
>
> C12. P2:Para4: s/within MIB module specifications//;
>
> C13. General:
> A.      The DESCRIPTION clauses could do would some more
>         packing. (Too much space at the end of lines)
> B.      Please check the articles a/an/the once again. Some
>         usages do not seem right to me.
>
>
>
>


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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-05-03
IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-28
IESG Telechat date: 2017-05-11

Summary:
The document is ready for publication.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

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I support the adoption of this draft.
Best regards
Jon

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plane adoption following the IPR disclosure

WG

Given the IPR disclosed [1] against
draft-mackie-bess-nsh-bgp-control-plane, we are starting a call for comment=
 specifically to let people express a revised opinion on how draft-ietf-bes=
s-nsh-bgp-control-plane should be pursued in BESS.

This call for comment is open until the 5th of May

Thanks
M&T

[1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/2980/

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the BGP Enabled ServiceS of the IETF.

        Title           : VPWS support in EVPN
        Authors         : Sami Boutros
                          Ali Sajassi
                          Samer Salam
                          John Drake
                          Jorge Rabadan
	Filename        : draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-13.txt
	Pages           : 14
	Date            : 2017-05-05

Abstract:
   This document describes how EVPN can be used to support Virtual
   Private Wire Service (VPWS) in MPLS/IP networks. EVPN enables the
   following characteristics for VPWS: single-active as well as all-
   active multi-homing with flow-based load-balancing, eliminates the
   need for Pseudowire (PW) signaling, and provides fast protection
   convergence upon node or link failure.


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Thanks for addressing my Discuss on clarifying the use of VXLAN & that it
is the tunneling technology
and how it pertains to the services supported.

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Hi Warren,

This is clearly not unanimous/ not everyone is happy, but (in my view)
> there is *rough* consensus for this to progress.
>

=E2=80=8BThe group of users of BGP which this update impacts the most are m=
embers
of BESS WG (cc-ed) and not IDR WG due to the fact that this proposal
applies to all AFI/SAFIs.

IMO before you progress anywhere with this IETF LC BESS WG should express
their formal opinion on it.

Example of in or out eBGP policy where you are sending MAC addresses in
EVPN AF needs to be provided and explained why it makes sense. Likewise
examples of RTC AF for L3VPN Inter-as needs to be discussed.

Otherwise the group of people which defined a lot of non ISP uses of BGP
may be
suddenly surprised down the read for keeping them out of the loop and have
customers loosing reachability upon compliant non sequential router OS
upgrade.

Cheers,
Robert.

REF: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-grow-bgp-reject-06

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,he=
lvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Hi Warren,</div><div class=3D"gmail_def=
ault" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br>=
</div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><blockquote cla=
ss=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid =
rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">This is clearly not unanimous/ not every=
one is happy, but (in my view)<br>
there is *rough* consensus for this to progress.<br></blockquote><div><br><=
/div><div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica=
,sans-serif;font-size:small">=E2=80=8BThe group of users of BGP which this =
update impacts the most are members=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmail_default"=
 style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">of BESS W=
G (cc-ed) and not IDR WG due to the fact that this proposal applies to all =
AFI/SAFIs.=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:ari=
al,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_defa=
ult" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">IMO b=
efore you progress anywhere with this IETF LC BESS WG should express=C2=A0<=
/div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans=
-serif;font-size:small">their formal opinion on it.=C2=A0</div><div class=
=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-siz=
e:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,=
helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Example of in or out eBGP policy wher=
e you are sending MAC addresses in=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" =
style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">EVPN AF ne=
eds to be provided and explained why it makes sense. Likewise=C2=A0</div><d=
iv class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;=
font-size:small">examples of RTC AF for L3VPN Inter-as needs to be discusse=
d.=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helve=
tica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" sty=
le=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Otherwise the=
 group of people which defined a lot of non ISP uses of BGP may be=C2=A0</d=
iv><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-s=
erif;font-size:small">suddenly surprised down the read for keeping them out=
 of the loop and have=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font=
-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">customers loosing reach=
ability upon compliant non sequential router OS upgrade.=C2=A0</div><div cl=
ass=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-=
size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:ari=
al,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Cheers,</div><div class=3D"gmail_d=
efault" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Ro=
bert.</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetic=
a,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=
=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">REF:=C2=A0<a hr=
ef=3D"https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-grow-bgp-reject-06">https://to=
ols.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-grow-bgp-reject-06</a></div><div class=3D"gmai=
l_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"=
><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetic=
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Dear IDR and BESS WGs members,

As you have either participated or seen from other email exchanges there is
ongoing communication about change in eBGP specification to mandate by
default use of policy in order to make all receive routes ineligible for
best path and to suppress sending them to your peers. And that in spite of
different opinions of the authors itself at this point is to apply to all
existing and future AFI/SAFIs.

John S. summarized this point as stated below:




*"3. Should the behavior be per-AFI/SAFI instead of global? Perhaps to
apply only to Internet routing and not other applications?Pro: the
motivation section of the document calls out the Internet use caseCon:
there's no clear, unambiguous way to actually specify this (AFI/SAFI 1/1
can be used in a VPN context, e.g.). different defaults for different
AFI/SAFI is confusing for the user and the extra complexity not required."*

So first let me observe that technically it is very clear to know that
under vrf in a VPN context (towards CEs or inter-as ASBR in option A)
address family ipv4 or ipv6 unicast is configured. There is no disambiguity
of it of any sort. Likewise it is also very clear when address family vpnv4
or vpnv6 is configured over eBGP Inter-AS option B or C sessions.

During IDR discussion 4 individual contributors where opposed to make this
proposal applicable to any eBGP AFI/SAFI and recommended to make it only
for IPv4 and IPv6 existing address families. While in the same time only
voice of 1 with reference to past discussion in GROW WG had taken place
expressed otherwise. Well this reference to GROW list in 2016 results in
one voice against, one pro and author concluding that this is pro all AFs.

I think on that point if there is rough consensus at all it is really
against that.

Now why I am bringing this specific point up ...

* There are numerous SAFIs in use today that even authors of this proposal
fail to produce any valid in or out policy other then "send all/accept
all". So even with good will operator will be simply forced to add those
lines to the configuration. Now fun starts when an implementation code does
not allow for it in some specific AFI/SAFIs or that manual policy would
overwrite RTC or ORF based for L2VPN or L3VPN. That effectively means that
to be complaint to this proposal implementations must change.

* This draft is to update RFC4271 that means that now any newly defined
AFI/SAFI will also have to define a set of policies to be used to enable it
over eBGP sessions both in the draft/rfc and in the code. That clearly
makes it harder for everyone with no gain.

* There are address families today which are opaque to best path and are
applied when received .. examples BGP-LS or Flow-spec. At most best path is
run only when sending it out (if at all). The current spec does not limit
reception of the information but does limit its eligibility for best path
computation. I think there is room for large number of surprising
behaviors with that for those SAFIs which carry opaque information to core
BGP.

* As the spec (as it is written today) applies to all eBGP sessions what
happens if BGP UPDATE message contains in new SAFI no MP_REACH attribute at
all and does not carry "routes" ? Would it be explicitly allowed ?
(Example: draft-ietf-idr-operational-message-00).

*  As the spec (as it is written today) applies to all "routes" received or
to be sent over eBGP sessions it actually fails to define what is a "route"
Within MP_REACH we have a concept of NLRI which for different address
families have been redefined and departed long time back from pure
definition of ip route.

* If BGP UPDATE message carries only MP_UNREACH attribute .. so effectively
routes to be withdrawn .. are those still subject to proposed policy or not
?


Therefor I would like to ask members of both working groups to express
clear opinion if this proposal and update to RFC4271 specification should
apply only IPv4 and IPv6 unicast (AFI/SAFI 1/1 & 2/1) or should be extended
to all AFI/SAFIs we have today and we are going to invent in the future.

If the majority of WG members would choose to have this change applicable
to all AFI/SAFIs I do ask authors to address in the document all of the
above points before proceeding forward.

Kind regards,
Robert.

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,he=
lvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Dear IDR and BESS WGs members,</div><di=
v class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;f=
ont-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family=
:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">As you have either participate=
d or seen from other email exchanges there is ongoing communication about c=
hange in eBGP specification to mandate by default use of policy in order to=
 make all receive routes ineligible for best path and to suppress sending t=
hem to your peers. And that in spite of different opinions of the authors i=
tself at this point is to apply to all existing and future AFI/SAFIs.=C2=A0=
</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,san=
s-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"fo=
nt-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">John S. summarized th=
is point as stated below:</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-f=
amily:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"g=
mail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:sma=
ll"><u><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px">&quot;=
3. Should the behavior be per-AFI/SAFI instead of global? Perhaps to apply =
only to Internet routing and not other applications?</span><br style=3D"fon=
t-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px"><span style=3D"font-family:aria=
l,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px">Pro: the motivation section of the document =
calls out the Internet use case</span><br style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-s=
erif;font-size:12.8px"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-siz=
e:12.8px">Con: there&#39;s no clear, unambiguous way to actually specify th=
is (AFI/SAFI 1/1 can be used in a VPN context, e.g.). different defaults fo=
r different AFI/SAFI is confusing for the user and the extra complexity not=
 required.&quot;</span><br></u></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"=
font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><span style=3D"font=
-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px"><br></span></div><div class=3D"g=
mail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:sma=
ll"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px">So first =
let me observe that technically it is very clear to know that under vrf in =
a VPN context (towards CEs or inter-as ASBR in option A) address family ipv=
4 or ipv6 unicast is configured. There is no disambiguity of it of any sort=
. Likewise it is also very clear when address family vpnv4 or vpnv6 is conf=
igured over eBGP Inter-AS option B or C sessions.</span></div><div class=3D=
"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:s=
mall"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px"><br></s=
pan></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px">Dur=
ing IDR discussion 4 individual contributors where opposed to make this pro=
posal applicable to any eBGP AFI/SAFI and recommended to make it only for I=
Pv4 and IPv6 existing address families. While in the same time only voice o=
f 1 with reference to past discussion in GROW WG had taken place expressed =
otherwise. Well this reference=C2=A0to GROW list in 2016 results in one voi=
ce against, one pro and author concluding that this is pro all AFs.=C2=A0</=
span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetic=
a,sans-serif;font-size:small"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;f=
ont-size:12.8px"><br></span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"fon=
t-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><span style=3D"font-fa=
mily:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px">I think on that point if there is r=
ough consensus at all it is really against that.=C2=A0</span></div><div cla=
ss=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-s=
ize:small"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px"><b=
r></span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helv=
etica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-ser=
if;font-size:12.8px">Now why I am bringing this specific point up ...</span=
></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sa=
ns-serif;font-size:small"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-=
size:12.8px"><br></span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"f=
ont-size:12.8px">* There are numerous SAFIs in use today that even authors =
of this proposal fail to produce any valid in or out policy other then &quo=
t;send all/accept all&quot;. So even with good will operator will be simply=
 forced to add those lines to the configuration. Now fun starts when an imp=
lementation code does not allow for it in some specific AFI/SAFIs or that m=
anual policy would overwrite RTC or ORF based for L2VPN or L3VPN. That effe=
ctively means that to be complaint to this proposal implementations must ch=
ange.=C2=A0=C2=A0</span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-fa=
mily:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><span style=3D"font-family=
:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px"><br></span></div><div class=3D"gmail_de=
fault"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px">* This draft is to update RFC4271 t=
hat means that now any newly defined AFI/SAFI will also have to define a se=
t of policies to be used to enable it over eBGP sessions both in the draft/=
rfc and in the code. That clearly makes it harder for everyone with no gain=
.=C2=A0</span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:1=
2.8px"><br></span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-si=
ze:12.8px">* There are address families today which are opaque to best path=
 and are applied when received .. examples BGP-LS or Flow-spec. At most bes=
t path is run only when sending it out (if at all). The current spec does n=
ot limit reception of the information but does limit its eligibility for be=
st path computation. I think there is room for large number of surprising b=
ehaviors=C2=A0with that for those SAFIs which carry opaque information to c=
ore BGP.</span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:=
12.8px"><br></span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:12.8px">* As the spec (as it is written today) applies to all eBGP sess=
ions what happens if BGP UPDATE message contains in new SAFI no MP_REACH at=
tribute at all and does not carry &quot;routes&quot; ? Would it be explicit=
ly=C2=A0allowed ? (Example:=C2=A0draft-ietf-idr-operational-message-00).</s=
pan></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_defaul=
t"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px">*=C2=A0</span><span style=3D"font-size:=
12.8px">=C2=A0As the spec (as it is written today) applies to all &quot;rou=
tes&quot; received or to be sent over eBGP sessions it actually fails to de=
fine what is a &quot;route&quot; Within MP_REACH we have a concept of NLRI =
which for different address families have been redefined and departed long =
time back from pure definition of ip route.=C2=A0</span></div><div class=3D=
"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px"><br></span></div><div clas=
s=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px">* If BGP UPDATE messag=
e carries only MP_UNREACH attribute=C2=A0.. so effectively routes to be wit=
hdrawn .. are those still subject to proposed policy or not ?</span></div><=
div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px"><br></span></d=
iv><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px"><br></span=
></div><div class=3D"gmail_default">Therefor I would like to ask members of=
 both working groups to express clear opinion if this proposal and update t=
o RFC4271 specification should apply only IPv4 and IPv6 unicast (AFI/SAFI 1=
/1 &amp; 2/1) or should be extended to all AFI/SAFIs we have today and we a=
re going to invent in the future.=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><=
br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default">If the majority of WG members would c=
hoose to have this change applicable to all AFI/SAFIs I do ask authors to a=
ddress in the document all of the above points before proceeding forward.=
=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_defa=
ult">Kind regards,</div><div class=3D"gmail_default">Robert.=C2=A0</div><di=
v class=3D"gmail_default"><br></div></div>

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Sorry one typo:

s/to make all receive routes ineligible for best path/to make all receive
routes eligible for best path/

Apologies,
r.


On Sat, May 6, 2017 at 7:10 PM, Robert Raszuk <robert@raszuk.net> wrote:

> Dear IDR and BESS WGs members,
>
> As you have either participated or seen from other email exchanges there
> is ongoing communication about change in eBGP specification to mandate by
> default use of policy in order to make all receive routes ineligible for
> best path and to suppress sending them to your peers. And that in spite of
> different opinions of the authors itself at this point is to apply to all
> existing and future AFI/SAFIs.
>
> John S. summarized this point as stated below:
>
>
>
>
> *"3. Should the behavior be per-AFI/SAFI instead of global? Perhaps to
> apply only to Internet routing and not other applications?Pro: the
> motivation section of the document calls out the Internet use caseCon:
> there's no clear, unambiguous way to actually specify this (AFI/SAFI 1/1
> can be used in a VPN context, e.g.). different defaults for different
> AFI/SAFI is confusing for the user and the extra complexity not required."*
>
> So first let me observe that technically it is very clear to know that
> under vrf in a VPN context (towards CEs or inter-as ASBR in option A)
> address family ipv4 or ipv6 unicast is configured. There is no disambiguity
> of it of any sort. Likewise it is also very clear when address family vpnv4
> or vpnv6 is configured over eBGP Inter-AS option B or C sessions.
>
> During IDR discussion 4 individual contributors where opposed to make this
> proposal applicable to any eBGP AFI/SAFI and recommended to make it only
> for IPv4 and IPv6 existing address families. While in the same time only
> voice of 1 with reference to past discussion in GROW WG had taken place
> expressed otherwise. Well this reference to GROW list in 2016 results in
> one voice against, one pro and author concluding that this is pro all AFs.
>
> I think on that point if there is rough consensus at all it is really
> against that.
>
> Now why I am bringing this specific point up ...
>
> * There are numerous SAFIs in use today that even authors of this proposal
> fail to produce any valid in or out policy other then "send all/accept
> all". So even with good will operator will be simply forced to add those
> lines to the configuration. Now fun starts when an implementation code does
> not allow for it in some specific AFI/SAFIs or that manual policy would
> overwrite RTC or ORF based for L2VPN or L3VPN. That effectively means that
> to be complaint to this proposal implementations must change.
>
> * This draft is to update RFC4271 that means that now any newly defined
> AFI/SAFI will also have to define a set of policies to be used to enable it
> over eBGP sessions both in the draft/rfc and in the code. That clearly
> makes it harder for everyone with no gain.
>
> * There are address families today which are opaque to best path and are
> applied when received .. examples BGP-LS or Flow-spec. At most best path is
> run only when sending it out (if at all). The current spec does not limit
> reception of the information but does limit its eligibility for best path
> computation. I think there is room for large number of surprising
> behaviors with that for those SAFIs which carry opaque information to core
> BGP.
>
> * As the spec (as it is written today) applies to all eBGP sessions what
> happens if BGP UPDATE message contains in new SAFI no MP_REACH attribute at
> all and does not carry "routes" ? Would it be explicitly allowed ?
> (Example: draft-ietf-idr-operational-message-00).
>
> *  As the spec (as it is written today) applies to all "routes" received
> or to be sent over eBGP sessions it actually fails to define what is a
> "route" Within MP_REACH we have a concept of NLRI which for different
> address families have been redefined and departed long time back from pure
> definition of ip route.
>
> * If BGP UPDATE message carries only MP_UNREACH attribute .. so
> effectively routes to be withdrawn .. are those still subject to proposed
> policy or not ?
>
>
> Therefor I would like to ask members of both working groups to express
> clear opinion if this proposal and update to RFC4271 specification should
> apply only IPv4 and IPv6 unicast (AFI/SAFI 1/1 & 2/1) or should be extended
> to all AFI/SAFIs we have today and we are going to invent in the future.
>
> If the majority of WG members would choose to have this change applicable
> to all AFI/SAFIs I do ask authors to address in the document all of the
> above points before proceeding forward.
>
> Kind regards,
> Robert.
>
>

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,he=
lvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Sorry one typo:</div><div class=3D"gmai=
l_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"=
><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetic=
a,sans-serif;font-size:small">s/to make all receive routes ineligible for b=
est path/to make all receive routes eligible for best path/</div><div class=
=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-siz=
e:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,=
helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Apologies,</div><div class=3D"gmail_d=
efault" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">r.=
</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,san=
s-serif;font-size:small"><br></div></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><di=
v class=3D"gmail_quote">On Sat, May 6, 2017 at 7:10 PM, Robert Raszuk <span=
 dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:robert@raszuk.net" target=3D"_blank">rob=
ert@raszuk.net</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" s=
tyle=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div=
 dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvet=
ica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Dear IDR and BESS WGs members,</div><div cl=
ass=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-=
size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:ari=
al,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">As you have either participated or=
 seen from other email exchanges there is ongoing communication about chang=
e in eBGP specification to mandate by default use of policy in order to mak=
e all receive routes ineligible for best path and to suppress sending them =
to your peers. And that in spite of different opinions of the authors itsel=
f at this point is to apply to all existing and future AFI/SAFIs.=C2=A0</di=
v><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-se=
rif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-f=
amily:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">John S. summarized this p=
oint as stated below:</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-famil=
y:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail=
_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">=
<u><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px">&quot;3. S=
hould the behavior be per-AFI/SAFI instead of global? Perhaps to apply only=
 to Internet routing and not other applications?</span><br style=3D"font-fa=
mily:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sa=
ns-serif;font-size:12.8px">Pro: the motivation section of the document call=
s out the Internet use case</span><br style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif=
;font-size:12.8px"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12=
.8px">Con: there&#39;s no clear, unambiguous way to actually specify this (=
AFI/SAFI 1/1 can be used in a VPN context, e.g.). different defaults for di=
fferent AFI/SAFI is confusing for the user and the extra complexity not req=
uired.&quot;</span><br></u></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font=
-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><span style=3D"font-fam=
ily:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px"><br></span></div><div class=3D"gmail=
_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">=
<span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px">So first let =
me observe that technically it is very clear to know that under vrf in a VP=
N context (towards CEs or inter-as ASBR in option A) address family ipv4 or=
 ipv6 unicast is configured. There is no disambiguity of it of any sort. Li=
kewise it is also very clear when address family vpnv4 or vpnv6 is configur=
ed over eBGP Inter-AS option B or C sessions.</span></div><div class=3D"gma=
il_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small=
"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px"><br></span>=
</div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px">During =
IDR discussion 4 individual contributors where opposed to make this proposa=
l applicable to any eBGP AFI/SAFI and recommended to make it only for IPv4 =
and IPv6 existing address families. While in the same time only voice of 1 =
with reference to past discussion in GROW WG had taken place expressed othe=
rwise. Well this reference=C2=A0to GROW list in 2016 results in one voice a=
gainst, one pro and author concluding that this is pro all AFs.=C2=A0</span=
></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sa=
ns-serif;font-size:small"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-=
size:12.8px"><br></span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-fa=
mily:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><span style=3D"font-family=
:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px">I think on that point if there is rough=
 consensus at all it is really against that.=C2=A0</span></div><div class=
=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-siz=
e:small"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px"><br>=
</span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvet=
ica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif=
;font-size:12.8px">Now why I am bringing this specific point up ...</span><=
/div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans=
-serif;font-size:small"><span style=3D"font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-si=
ze:12.8px"><br></span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"fon=
t-size:12.8px">* There are numerous SAFIs in use today that even authors of=
 this proposal fail to produce any valid in or out policy other then &quot;=
send all/accept all&quot;. So even with good will operator will be simply f=
orced to add those lines to the configuration. Now fun starts when an imple=
mentation code does not allow for it in some specific AFI/SAFIs or that man=
ual policy would overwrite RTC or ORF based for L2VPN or L3VPN. That effect=
ively means that to be complaint to this proposal implementations must chan=
ge.=C2=A0=C2=A0</span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-fami=
ly:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><span style=3D"font-family:a=
rial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px"><br></span></div><div class=3D"gmail_defa=
ult"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px">* This draft is to update RFC4271 tha=
t means that now any newly defined AFI/SAFI will also have to define a set =
of policies to be used to enable it over eBGP sessions both in the draft/rf=
c and in the code. That clearly makes it harder for everyone with no gain.=
=C2=A0</span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:12=
.8px"><br></span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:12.8px">* There are address families today which are opaque to best path =
and are applied when received .. examples BGP-LS or Flow-spec. At most best=
 path is run only when sending it out (if at all). The current spec does no=
t limit reception of the information but does limit its eligibility for bes=
t path computation. I think there is room for large number of surprising be=
haviors=C2=A0with that for those SAFIs which carry opaque information to co=
re BGP.</span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:1=
2.8px"><br></span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-si=
ze:12.8px">* As the spec (as it is written today) applies to all eBGP sessi=
ons what happens if BGP UPDATE message contains in new SAFI no MP_REACH att=
ribute at all and does not carry &quot;routes&quot; ? Would it be explicitl=
y=C2=A0allowed ? (Example:=C2=A0draft-ietf-idr-<wbr>operational-message-00)=
.</span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_de=
fault"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px">*=C2=A0</span><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:12.8px">=C2=A0As the spec (as it is written today) applies to all &quot=
;routes&quot; received or to be sent over eBGP sessions it actually fails t=
o define what is a &quot;route&quot; Within MP_REACH we have a concept of N=
LRI which for different address families have been redefined and departed l=
ong time back from pure definition of ip route.=C2=A0</span></div><div clas=
s=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px"><br></span></div><div =
class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px">* If BGP UPDATE me=
ssage carries only MP_UNREACH attribute=C2=A0.. so effectively routes to be=
 withdrawn .. are those still subject to proposed policy or not ?</span></d=
iv><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px"><br></span=
></div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><span style=3D"font-size:12.8px"><br></=
span></div><div class=3D"gmail_default">Therefor I would like to ask member=
s of both working groups to express clear opinion if this proposal and upda=
te to RFC4271 specification should apply only IPv4 and IPv6 unicast (AFI/SA=
FI 1/1 &amp; 2/1) or should be extended to all AFI/SAFIs we have today and =
we are going to invent in the future.=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmail_defaul=
t"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default">If the majority of WG members wou=
ld choose to have this change applicable to all AFI/SAFIs I do ask authors =
to address in the document all of the above points before proceeding forwar=
d.=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmail_default"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_de=
fault">Kind regards,</div><div class=3D"gmail_default">Robert.=C2=A0</div><=
div class=3D"gmail_default"><br></div></div>
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[ + authors ]

On Sat, May 6, 2017 at 3:16 AM, Robert Raszuk <robert@raszuk.net> wrote:
> Hi Warren,
>
>> This is clearly not unanimous/ not everyone is happy, but (in my view)
>> there is *rough* consensus for this to progress.
>
>
> The group of users of BGP which this update impacts the most are members
> of BESS WG (cc-ed) and not IDR WG due to the fact that this proposal applies
> to all AFI/SAFIs.

I'll happily admit that I have not been following BESS at all, and so
know very little of what y'all do ("Hi Bess!"). Alvaro, please advise
if BESS is affected to the level that they should have been explicitly
invited to comment?

> IMO before you progress anywhere with this IETF LC BESS WG should express
> their formal opinion on it.
>
> Example of in or out eBGP policy where you are sending MAC addresses in
> EVPN AF needs to be provided and explained why it makes sense. Likewise
> examples of RTC AF for L3VPN Inter-as needs to be discussed.
>
> Otherwise the group of people which defined a lot of non ISP uses of BGP may
> be
> suddenly surprised down the read for keeping them out of the loop and have
> customers loosing reachability upon compliant non sequential router OS
> upgrade.

The authors are busy incorporating some final edits (including some
suggested by Alvaro). I would have hoped that all affected parties
would have seen the discussions on GROW / IDR / the IETF LC.

I ask people to please withhold judgment until the new version is released.


I'm about to board a plane (to Budapest), and will be out of email for
many hours...
W

 >
> Cheers,
> Robert.

>
> REF: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-grow-bgp-reject-06
>
>



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idea in the first place.
This is like putting rabid weasels in your pants, and later expressing
regret at having chosen those particular rabid weasels and that pair
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On 5/6/17 10:53 AM, Warren Kumari wrote:
> [ + authors ]
>=20
> On Sat, May 6, 2017 at 3:16 AM, Robert Raszuk <robert@raszuk.net> wrote=
:
>> Hi Warren,
>>
>>> This is clearly not unanimous/ not everyone is happy, but (in my view=
)
>>> there is *rough* consensus for this to progress.
>>
>>
>> The group of users of BGP which this update impacts the most are membe=
rs
>> of BESS WG (cc-ed) and not IDR WG due to the fact that this proposal a=
pplies
>> to all AFI/SAFIs.

I think this statement elides that the largest impact here is on
operators, which might be participants of either working group but are
by in large not at the ietf.

As an operator the ability to make recommendations based on practice
that has proven to be problematic is ought to be something others in the
ietf would be interested in. e.g. default accept policies have been
shooting operators in the foot with v4 and v6 unicast AFI's since
literally the dawn of time.

> I'll happily admit that I have not been following BESS at all, and so
> know very little of what y'all do ("Hi Bess!"). Alvaro, please advise
> if BESS is affected to the level that they should have been explicitly
> invited to comment?
>=20
>> IMO before you progress anywhere with this IETF LC BESS WG should expr=
ess
>> their formal opinion on it.
>>
>> Example of in or out eBGP policy where you are sending MAC addresses i=
n
>> EVPN AF needs to be provided and explained why it makes sense. Likewis=
e
>> examples of RTC AF for L3VPN Inter-as needs to be discussed.
>>
>> Otherwise the group of people which defined a lot of non ISP uses of B=
GP may
>> be
>> suddenly surprised down the read for keeping them out of the loop and =
have
>> customers loosing reachability upon compliant non sequential router OS=

>> upgrade.
>=20
> The authors are busy incorporating some final edits (including some
> suggested by Alvaro). I would have hoped that all affected parties
> would have seen the discussions on GROW / IDR / the IETF LC.
>=20
> I ask people to please withhold judgment until the new version is relea=
sed.
>=20
>=20
> I'm about to board a plane (to Budapest), and will be out of email for
> many hours...
> W
>=20
>  >
>> Cheers,
>> Robert.
>=20
>>
>> REF: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-grow-bgp-reject-06
>>
>>
>=20
>=20
>=20



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[ For -11 / -12 ] 
This document is very heavy on the acronyms, and could do with some
expanding of these -- for example, the document starts out with "This
document describes how EVPN can be used...". I'm no MPLS VPN person, so
much time was spent searching to try figure out what everything meant.

I also agree with Spencer's "In multihoming scenarios, both B and P flags
MUST NOT be both set. " being hard to parse, and disagree with Acee that
is it clear.

[ For -13 ]
The draft was revised to address Alia's DISCUSS, and also Spencer's
"traditional way" and "both B and P flags MUST NOT be both set" comment,
but still does not expand EVPN; I also agree with Spencer that it would
be helpful to expand P2P on first use.  I reread the document and have
some additional comments - note that these are are only comments, but I
think that they would make the document more readable...

1: Introduction:
"that in EVPN terminology would mean a single pair of Ethernet Segments
ES(es)." - I'm confused by the 'ES(es)' - guessing this was an editing
failure and 'Ethernet Segments (ES)' was intended? If not, 

You use both "Ethernet AD" and "Ethernet A-D" - please choose and stick
with one.

1.1: Terminology:
"EVI: EVPN Instance." --  Ok, but EVPN is still not defined /
referenced.

3.1  EVPN Layer 2 attributes extended community
" A PE that receives an update with both B and P flags set MUST treat
the
 route as a withdrawal. If the PE receives a route with both B and P
 clear, it MUST treat the route as a withdrawal from the sender PE."
Do the above 2 sentences say the same thing? It sure sounds like
repetition, if not, please explain the difference. If not, removing one
would make this less confusing.

Figure 3: EVPN-VPWS Deployment Model
You use the terms / labels "PSN1", "PSN2" - what are these? "Provider
<something> Network"?



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Hi Warren,

In the draft you have reviewed EVPN term is use interchangeably with term
[RFC7432] which in turn is also already listed and defined in the Normative
References section (2nd from the top).

Personally if you assume that the reader of this document is not familiar
with EVPN I would also recommend to read few other L2 VPN related documents
as prerequisite before jumping to this one:

- RFC 7209 and all VPN related documents included in its references

- RFC 7432 and all VPN related documents included in its references

- all VPN related documents included in references of
draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws

- only then the draft in question itself.

Kind regards,
Robert.


On Sun, May 7, 2017 at 7:05 PM, Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net> wrote:

> Warren Kumari has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-13: No Objection
>
> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
> introductory paragraph, however.)
>
>
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> for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
>
>
> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws/
>
>
>
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> [ For -11 / -12 ]
> This document is very heavy on the acronyms, and could do with some
> expanding of these -- for example, the document starts out with "This
> document describes how EVPN can be used...". I'm no MPLS VPN person, so
> much time was spent searching to try figure out what everything meant.
>
> I also agree with Spencer's "In multihoming scenarios, both B and P flags
> MUST NOT be both set. " being hard to parse, and disagree with Acee that
> is it clear.
>
> [ For -13 ]
> The draft was revised to address Alia's DISCUSS, and also Spencer's
> "traditional way" and "both B and P flags MUST NOT be both set" comment,
> but still does not expand EVPN; I also agree with Spencer that it would
> be helpful to expand P2P on first use.  I reread the document and have
> some additional comments - note that these are are only comments, but I
> think that they would make the document more readable...
>
> 1: Introduction:
> "that in EVPN terminology would mean a single pair of Ethernet Segments
> ES(es)." - I'm confused by the 'ES(es)' - guessing this was an editing
> failure and 'Ethernet Segments (ES)' was intended? If not,
>
> You use both "Ethernet AD" and "Ethernet A-D" - please choose and stick
> with one.
>
> 1.1: Terminology:
> "EVI: EVPN Instance." --  Ok, but EVPN is still not defined /
> referenced.
>
> 3.1  EVPN Layer 2 attributes extended community
> " A PE that receives an update with both B and P flags set MUST treat
> the
>  route as a withdrawal. If the PE receives a route with both B and P
>  clear, it MUST treat the route as a withdrawal from the sender PE."
> Do the above 2 sentences say the same thing? It sure sounds like
> repetition, if not, please explain the difference. If not, removing one
> would make this less confusing.
>
> Figure 3: EVPN-VPWS Deployment Model
> You use the terms / labels "PSN1", "PSN2" - what are these? "Provider
> <something> Network"?
>
>
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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,he=
lvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Hi Warren,</div><div class=3D"gmail_def=
ault" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br>=
</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,san=
s-serif;font-size:small">In the draft you have reviewed EVPN term is use in=
terchangeably with term [RFC7432] which in turn is also already listed and =
defined in the Normative References section (2nd from the top).=C2=A0</div>=
<div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-seri=
f;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-fam=
ily:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Personally if you assume th=
at the reader of this document is not familiar with EVPN I would also recom=
mend to read few other L2 VPN related documents as prerequisite before jump=
ing to this one:=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-fami=
ly:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmai=
l_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"=
>- RFC 7209 and all VPN related documents included in its references<br></d=
iv><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-s=
erif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-=
family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">- RFC 7432 and all VPN r=
elated documents included in its references</div><div class=3D"gmail_defaul=
t" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></d=
iv><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-s=
erif;font-size:small">- all VPN related documents included in references of=
 draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-=
family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"=
gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:sm=
all">- only then the draft in question itself.</div><div class=3D"gmail_def=
ault" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br>=
</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,san=
s-serif;font-size:small">Kind regards,</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" st=
yle=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Robert.</div=
><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-ser=
if;font-size:small"><br></div></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div cla=
ss=3D"gmail_quote">On Sun, May 7, 2017 at 7:05 PM, Warren Kumari <span dir=
=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:warren@kumari.net" target=3D"_blank">warren@=
kumari.net</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=
=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Warren K=
umari has entered the following ballot position for<br>
draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-13: No Objection<br>
<br>
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all<br>
email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this<br>
introductory paragraph, however.)<br>
<br>
<br>
Please refer to <a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-crit=
eria.html" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/iesg/<=
wbr>statement/discuss-criteria.<wbr>html</a><br>
for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.<br>
<br>
<br>
The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:<br>
<a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws/" rel=
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ft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws/</a><br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
------------------------------<wbr>------------------------------<wbr>-----=
-----<br>
COMMENT:<br>
------------------------------<wbr>------------------------------<wbr>-----=
-----<br>
<br>
[ For -11 / -12 ]<br>
This document is very heavy on the acronyms, and could do with some<br>
expanding of these -- for example, the document starts out with &quot;This<=
br>
document describes how EVPN can be used...&quot;. I&#39;m no MPLS VPN perso=
n, so<br>
much time was spent searching to try figure out what everything meant.<br>
<br>
I also agree with Spencer&#39;s &quot;In multihoming scenarios, both B and =
P flags<br>
MUST NOT be both set. &quot; being hard to parse, and disagree with Acee th=
at<br>
is it clear.<br>
<br>
[ For -13 ]<br>
The draft was revised to address Alia&#39;s DISCUSS, and also Spencer&#39;s=
<br>
&quot;traditional way&quot; and &quot;both B and P flags MUST NOT be both s=
et&quot; comment,<br>
but still does not expand EVPN; I also agree with Spencer that it would<br>
be helpful to expand P2P on first use.=C2=A0 I reread the document and have=
<br>
some additional comments - note that these are are only comments, but I<br>
think that they would make the document more readable...<br>
<br>
1: Introduction:<br>
&quot;that in EVPN terminology would mean a single pair of Ethernet Segment=
s<br>
ES(es).&quot; - I&#39;m confused by the &#39;ES(es)&#39; - guessing this wa=
s an editing<br>
failure and &#39;Ethernet Segments (ES)&#39; was intended? If not,<br>
<br>
You use both &quot;Ethernet AD&quot; and &quot;Ethernet A-D&quot; - please =
choose and stick<br>
with one.<br>
<br>
1.1: Terminology:<br>
&quot;EVI: EVPN Instance.&quot; --=C2=A0 Ok, but EVPN is still not defined =
/<br>
referenced.<br>
<br>
3.1=C2=A0 EVPN Layer 2 attributes extended community<br>
&quot; A PE that receives an update with both B and P flags set MUST treat<=
br>
the<br>
=C2=A0route as a withdrawal. If the PE receives a route with both B and P<b=
r>
=C2=A0clear, it MUST treat the route as a withdrawal from the sender PE.&qu=
ot;<br>
Do the above 2 sentences say the same thing? It sure sounds like<br>
repetition, if not, please explain the difference. If not, removing one<br>
would make this less confusing.<br>
<br>
Figure 3: EVPN-VPWS Deployment Model<br>
You use the terms / labels &quot;PSN1&quot;, &quot;PSN2&quot; - what are th=
ese? &quot;Provider<br>
&lt;something&gt; Network&quot;?<br>
<br>
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On Sun, May 7, 2017, 7:35 PM Robert Raszuk <robert@raszuk.net> wrote:

> Hi Warren,
>
> In the draft you have reviewed EVPN term is use interchangeably with term
> [RFC7432] which in turn is also already listed and defined in the Normative
> References section (2nd from the top).
>


Yes, and I  read RFC7432 when I first reviewed this document - but I only
knew that was the one to read after grepping though RFCs for "EVPN" -- is
there any reason for the authirs *not* to make things easier for your
readers by saying: "
This document describes how EVPN [RFC7432] can be ..."?


> Personally if you assume that the reader of this document is not familiar
> with EVPN I would also recommend to read few other L2 VPN related documents
> as prerequisite before jumping to this one:
>
> - RFC 7209 and all VPN related documents included in its references
>
> - RFC 7432 and all VPN related documents included in its references
>
> - all VPN related documents included in references of
> draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws
>

That sounds like a fine idea - perhaps the authors should add something
like "Readers of this document are expected to be familiar with RFC7209 and
RFC7432."
Mainly I don't understand why we wouldn't want to make it easier for
someone new to the technology...

W




> - only then the draft in question itself.
>
> Kind regards,
> Robert.
>
>
> On Sun, May 7, 2017 at 7:05 PM, Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net> wrote:
>
>> Warren Kumari has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-13: No Objection
>>
>> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
>> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
>> introductory paragraph, however.)
>>
>>
>> Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
>> for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
>>
>>
>> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws/
>>
>>
>>
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> COMMENT:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> [ For -11 / -12 ]
>> This document is very heavy on the acronyms, and could do with some
>> expanding of these -- for example, the document starts out with "This
>> document describes how EVPN can be used...". I'm no MPLS VPN person, so
>> much time was spent searching to try figure out what everything meant.
>>
>> I also agree with Spencer's "In multihoming scenarios, both B and P flags
>> MUST NOT be both set. " being hard to parse, and disagree with Acee that
>> is it clear.
>>
>> [ For -13 ]
>> The draft was revised to address Alia's DISCUSS, and also Spencer's
>> "traditional way" and "both B and P flags MUST NOT be both set" comment,
>> but still does not expand EVPN; I also agree with Spencer that it would
>> be helpful to expand P2P on first use.  I reread the document and have
>> some additional comments - note that these are are only comments, but I
>> think that they would make the document more readable...
>>
>> 1: Introduction:
>> "that in EVPN terminology would mean a single pair of Ethernet Segments
>> ES(es)." - I'm confused by the 'ES(es)' - guessing this was an editing
>> failure and 'Ethernet Segments (ES)' was intended? If not,
>>
>> You use both "Ethernet AD" and "Ethernet A-D" - please choose and stick
>> with one.
>>
>> 1.1: Terminology:
>> "EVI: EVPN Instance." --  Ok, but EVPN is still not defined /
>> referenced.
>>
>> 3.1  EVPN Layer 2 attributes extended community
>> " A PE that receives an update with both B and P flags set MUST treat
>> the
>>  route as a withdrawal. If the PE receives a route with both B and P
>>  clear, it MUST treat the route as a withdrawal from the sender PE."
>> Do the above 2 sentences say the same thing? It sure sounds like
>> repetition, if not, please explain the difference. If not, removing one
>> would make this less confusing.
>>
>> Figure 3: EVPN-VPWS Deployment Model
>> You use the terms / labels "PSN1", "PSN2" - what are these? "Provider
>> <something> Network"?
>>
>>
>> _______________________________________________
>> BESS mailing list
>> BESS@ietf.org
>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess
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<br><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div dir=3D"ltr">On Sun, May 7, 2017, 7:=
35 PM Robert Raszuk &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:robert@raszuk.net">robert@raszuk.=
net</a>&gt; wrote:<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"marg=
in:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr"=
><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-ser=
if;font-size:small">Hi Warren,</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"f=
ont-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=
=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-siz=
e:small">In the draft you have reviewed EVPN term is use interchangeably wi=
th term [RFC7432] which in turn is also already listed and defined in the N=
ormative References section (2nd from the top).=C2=A0</div></div></blockquo=
te></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><span style=3D"font-size:13px">=
Yes, and I =C2=A0read RFC7432 when I first reviewed this document - but I o=
nly knew that was the one to read after grepping though RFCs for &quot;EVPN=
&quot; -- is there any reason for the authirs *not* to make things easier f=
or your readers by saying: &quot;<br>   This document describes how EVPN [R=
FC7432] can be ...&quot;?</span></div><div><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_qu=
ote"><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-le=
ft:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_de=
fault" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br=
></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sa=
ns-serif;font-size:small">Personally if you assume that the reader of this =
document is not familiar with EVPN I would also recommend to read few other=
 L2 VPN related documents as prerequisite before jumping to this one:=C2=A0=
</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,san=
s-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"fo=
nt-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">- RFC 7209 and all VP=
N related documents included in its references<br></div><div class=3D"gmail=
_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">=
<br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica=
,sans-serif;font-size:small">- RFC 7432 and all VPN related documents inclu=
ded in its references</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-famil=
y:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail=
_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">=
- all VPN related documents included in references of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-=
vpws</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica=
,sans-serif;font-size:small"></div></div></blockquote></div><div><br></div>=
<div>That sounds like a fine idea - perhaps the authors should add somethin=
g like &quot;Readers of this document are expected to be familiar with RFC7=
209 and RFC7432.&quot;</div><div>Mainly I don&#39;t understand why we would=
n&#39;t want to make it easier for someone new to the technology...</div><d=
iv><br></div><div>W</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div =
class=3D"gmail_quote"><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0=
 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr"><div =
class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;fon=
t-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:a=
rial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">- only then the draft in questio=
n itself.</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helv=
etica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" st=
yle=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Kind regards=
,</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sa=
ns-serif;font-size:small">Robert.</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=
=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div></div=
><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote"></div></div><div=
 class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Sun, May 7, 2017 at 7:=
05 PM, Warren Kumari <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:warren@kumari.=
net" target=3D"_blank">warren@kumari.net</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br></div></d=
iv><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><blockquote class=
=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padd=
ing-left:1ex">Warren Kumari has entered the following ballot position for<b=
r>
draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-13: No Objection<br>
<br>
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all<br>
email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this<br>
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<br>
<br>
Please refer to <a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-crit=
eria.html" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/iesg/s=
tatement/discuss-criteria.html</a><br>
for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.<br>
<br>
<br>
The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:<br>
<a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws/" rel=
=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ie=
tf-bess-evpn-vpws/</a><br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
----------------------------------------------------------------------<br>
COMMENT:<br>
----------------------------------------------------------------------<br>
<br>
[ For -11 / -12 ]<br>
This document is very heavy on the acronyms, and could do with some<br>
expanding of these -- for example, the document starts out with &quot;This<=
br>
document describes how EVPN can be used...&quot;. I&#39;m no MPLS VPN perso=
n, so<br>
much time was spent searching to try figure out what everything meant.<br>
<br>
I also agree with Spencer&#39;s &quot;In multihoming scenarios, both B and =
P flags<br>
MUST NOT be both set. &quot; being hard to parse, and disagree with Acee th=
at<br>
is it clear.<br>
<br>
[ For -13 ]<br>
The draft was revised to address Alia&#39;s DISCUSS, and also Spencer&#39;s=
<br>
&quot;traditional way&quot; and &quot;both B and P flags MUST NOT be both s=
et&quot; comment,<br>
but still does not expand EVPN; I also agree with Spencer that it would<br>
be helpful to expand P2P on first use.=C2=A0 I reread the document and have=
<br>
some additional comments - note that these are are only comments, but I<br>
think that they would make the document more readable...<br>
<br>
1: Introduction:<br>
&quot;that in EVPN terminology would mean a single pair of Ethernet Segment=
s<br>
ES(es).&quot; - I&#39;m confused by the &#39;ES(es)&#39; - guessing this wa=
s an editing<br>
failure and &#39;Ethernet Segments (ES)&#39; was intended? If not,<br>
<br>
You use both &quot;Ethernet AD&quot; and &quot;Ethernet A-D&quot; - please =
choose and stick<br>
with one.<br>
<br>
1.1: Terminology:<br>
&quot;EVI: EVPN Instance.&quot; --=C2=A0 Ok, but EVPN is still not defined =
/<br>
referenced.<br>
<br>
3.1=C2=A0 EVPN Layer 2 attributes extended community<br>
&quot; A PE that receives an update with both B and P flags set MUST treat<=
br>
the<br>
=C2=A0route as a withdrawal. If the PE receives a route with both B and P<b=
r>
=C2=A0clear, it MUST treat the route as a withdrawal from the sender PE.&qu=
ot;<br>
Do the above 2 sentences say the same thing? It sure sounds like<br>
repetition, if not, please explain the difference. If not, removing one<br>
would make this less confusing.<br>
<br>
Figure 3: EVPN-VPWS Deployment Model<br>
You use the terms / labels &quot;PSN1&quot;, &quot;PSN2&quot; - what are th=
ese? &quot;Provider<br>
&lt;something&gt; Network&quot;?<br>
<br>
<br></blockquote></div></div><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail=
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> is there any reason for the authirs *not* to make things easier for your
> readers by saying: "
> This document describes how EVPN [RFC7432] can be ..."?
>

=E2=80=8BThat clearly is a good edit suggestion for all alone occurrences o=
f
[RFC7432] in the draft. =E2=80=8B


That sounds like a fine idea - perhaps the authors should add something
> like "Readers of this document are expected to be familiar with RFC7209 a=
nd
> RFC7432."
> Mainly I don't understand why we wouldn't want to make it easier for
> someone new to the technology...
>


=E2=80=8BI think in number of IETF drafts extending existing specifications=
 there
is an implicit assumption that the reader is =E2=80=8Bfamiliar with the bas=
e spec
or specs around it related to new work. IMHO normative or informative
references is a good place for it. So Adding RFC7209 to the latter may be
indeed helpful.

- - -

Regarding the draft itself my personal comment is that just like other
specs defining VPWS service this proposal also fails to include OEM section
describing or even defining tools which will allow user of such emulated
circuit to get all errors (or even MTU fluctuations) from the underlay it
traverses to be exposed and reported to the wire/circuit end points.

Being on the enterprise side which uses such circuits I can only see now
that there is huge missing gap between providing spec to construct given
service and the perspective of actual use of such emulated wires
established over third party IP or IP/MPLS networks.

IMO OEM NNI between those two planes should be made mandatory in all specs.

Kind regards,
//Robert.

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><div=
>=C2=A0</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;b=
order-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div><span style=3D"font-size:1=
3px">is there any reason for the authirs *not* to make things easier for yo=
ur readers by saying: &quot;<br>   This document describes how EVPN [RFC743=
2] can be ...&quot;?</span></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div><div clas=
s=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-si=
ze:small">=E2=80=8BThat clearly is a good edit suggestion for all alone occ=
urrences of [RFC7432] in the draft. =E2=80=8B</div><br></div><div><br></div=
><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1=
px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><span class=3D""><div>That sounds like a fi=
ne idea - perhaps the authors should add something like &quot;Readers of th=
is document are expected to be familiar with RFC7209 and RFC7432.&quot;<br>=
</div></span><div>Mainly I don&#39;t understand why we wouldn&#39;t want to=
 make it easier for someone new to the technology...</div></blockquote><div=
><br></div><div><br></div><div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-f=
amily:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">=E2=80=8BI think in numbe=
r of IETF drafts extending existing specifications there is an implicit ass=
umption that the reader is =E2=80=8Bfamiliar with the base spec or specs ar=
ound it related to new work. IMHO normative or informative references is a =
good place for it. So Adding RFC7209 to the latter may be indeed helpful.</=
div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-=
serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font=
-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">- - -</div><div class=
=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-siz=
e:small"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,=
helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Regarding the draft itself my persona=
l comment is that just like other specs defining VPWS service this proposal=
 also fails to include OEM section describing or even defining tools which =
will allow user of such emulated circuit to get all errors (or even MTU flu=
ctuations) from the underlay it traverses to be exposed and reported to the=
 wire/circuit end points.=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"=
font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div clas=
s=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-si=
ze:small">Being on the enterprise side which uses such circuits I can only =
see now that there is huge missing gap between providing spec to construct =
given service and the perspective of actual use of such emulated wires esta=
blished over third party IP or IP/MPLS networks.=C2=A0</div><div class=3D"g=
mail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:sma=
ll"><br></div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helve=
tica,sans-serif;font-size:small">IMO OEM NNI between those two planes shoul=
d be made mandatory in all specs.</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=
=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div =
class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;fon=
t-size:small">Kind regards,</div><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font=
-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">//Robert.</div><br></di=
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On Sun, May 7, 2017 at 1:05 PM, Robert Raszuk <robert@raszuk.net> wrote:

>
>
>> is there any reason for the authirs *not* to make things easier for your
>> readers by saying: "
>> This document describes how EVPN [RFC7432] can be ..."?
>>
>
> =E2=80=8BThat clearly is a good edit suggestion for all alone occurrences=
 of
> [RFC7432] in the draft. =E2=80=8B
>
>
> That sounds like a fine idea - perhaps the authors should add something
>> like "Readers of this document are expected to be familiar with RFC7209 =
and
>> RFC7432."
>> Mainly I don't understand why we wouldn't want to make it easier for
>> someone new to the technology...
>>
>
>
> =E2=80=8BI think in number of IETF drafts extending existing specificatio=
ns there
> is an implicit assumption that the reader is =E2=80=8Bfamiliar with the b=
ase spec
> or specs around it related to new work.
>

I'm sure this is true, but as someone who reads a lot of specs, this one is
unusually
reader-unfriendly to someone who is being asked to pick it up and review
it. It's
not unreasonable to expect that:

1. Acronyms be expanded on first use.
2. Terms of art come with citations to where they are defined.

-Ekr

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><br><div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=3D"gmail_quo=
te">On Sun, May 7, 2017 at 1:05 PM, Robert Raszuk <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a =
href=3D"mailto:robert@raszuk.net" target=3D"_blank">robert@raszuk.net</a>&g=
t;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0=
 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir=3D"ltr"><div cl=
ass=3D"gmail_extra"><div class=3D"gmail_quote"><span class=3D""><div>=C2=A0=
</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-l=
eft:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div><span style=3D"font-size:13px">is=
 there any reason for the authirs *not* to make things easier for your read=
ers by saying: &quot;<br>   This document describes how EVPN [RFC7432] can =
be ...&quot;?</span></div></blockquote><div><br></div></span><div><div styl=
e=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">=E2=80=8BThat =
clearly is a good edit suggestion for all alone occurrences of [RFC7432] in=
 the draft. =E2=80=8B</div><br></div><span class=3D""><div><br></div><block=
quote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc=
 solid;padding-left:1ex"><span><div>That sounds like a fine idea - perhaps =
the authors should add something like &quot;Readers of this document are ex=
pected to be familiar with RFC7209 and RFC7432.&quot;<br></div></span><div>=
Mainly I don&#39;t understand why we wouldn&#39;t want to make it easier fo=
r someone new to the technology...</div></blockquote><div><br></div><div><b=
r></div></span><div><div style=3D"font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;fo=
nt-size:small">=E2=80=8BI think in number of IETF drafts extending existing=
 specifications there is an implicit assumption that the reader is =E2=80=
=8Bfamiliar with the base spec or specs around it related to new work.</div=
></div></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>I&#39;m sure this=
 is true, but as someone who reads a lot of specs, this one is unusually</d=
iv><div>reader-unfriendly to someone who is being asked to pick it up and r=
eview it. It&#39;s</div><div>not unreasonable to expect that:</div><div><br=
></div><div>1. Acronyms be expanded on first use.</div><div>2. Terms of art=
 come with citations to where they are defined.</div><div><br></div><div>-E=
kr<br></div><div>=C2=A0</div></div></div></div>

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> 1. Acronyms be expanded on first use.

All the more so since the RFC Editor will insist on this anyway.

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Subject: Re: [bess] Extra time to reflect on draft-mackie-bess-nsh-bgp-control-plane adoption following the IPR disclosure
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WG,

there is a clear renewed support for this document, so we'll continue as 
normal.
Thank you.

M&T

Le 13/04/2017 à 20:04, Martin Vigoureux a écrit :
> WG
>
> Given the IPR disclosed [1] against
> draft-mackie-bess-nsh-bgp-control-plane, we are starting a call for
> comment specifically to let people express a revised opinion on how
> draft-ietf-bess-nsh-bgp-control-plane should be pursued in BESS.
>
> This call for comment is open until the 5th of May
>
> Thanks
> M&T
>
> [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/2980/


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Thanks for your review!


On 4/27/2017 9:03 AM, Jonathan Hardwick wrote:
>
> I also spotted a few nits that should be fixed at some point before 
> publication.
>

I have fixed the nits.

> Comments and Questions
>
> 1) In section 2.1 it says:
>
> â€œ   If the Multiple Labels Capability for a given AFI/SAFI had been
>
>    exchanged on the failed session, but is not exchanged on the
>
>    restarted session, then any prefixes advertised in that AFI/SAFI with
>
>    multiple labels MUST be explicitly withdrawn.â€
>
> If I have understood this correctly, it requires a speaker to withdraw 
> NLRI that it sent on the previous session but that it has not sent on 
> the restarted session (because the negotiated session capabilities 
> changed).
>
> (a) Why does it need to do that â€“ isnâ€™t the NLRI implicitly withdrawn 
> when the EOR marker is sent?
>

The theory here is that the label stack in the stale routes is known to 
be invalid, so you really don't want your peer to hold on to them until 
EOR is received.

> (b) This seems to contradict section 2.4 which says â€œNote that 
> label/prefix bindings that were not advertised on the given session 
> cannot be withdrawn by this method.â€
>

I added the following text to section 2.4 right after the quoted sentence:

      (However, if the bindings were advertised on a previous session
    with the same peer, and the current session is the result of a
    "graceful restart" ([RFC4724]) of the previous session, then this
    withdrawal method may be used.)

>
> 2) In section 2.1 it says:
>
> â€œA BGP speaker SHOULD NOT send an UPDATE that binds more labels to a 
> given prefix than its peer is capable of receivingâ€ â€“ why isnâ€™t that 
> MUST NOT?
>

Section 2.1 also requires the receiving speaker to apply 
"treat-as-withdraw" to such updates, which does imply that the sending 
speaker must not send them.  So I've changed "SHOULD NOT" to "MUST NOT".

> 3) In section 2.4 it says:
>
> â€œTo do so, it may send a BGP UPDATE message with an MP_UNREACH_NLRI 
> attribute.â€
>
> Should that be â€œit MUST sendâ€?
>

I think the non-normative (non-RFC2119) language is fine here.

> 4) In section 5: although some implementations treat SAFI 1 and SAFI 4 
> routes as comparable, I believe that they should always be treated as 
> independent, in the following sense:
>
> Suppose a speaker S1 sends a SAFI 1 route and then a SAFI 4 route to 
> the same prefix P.  The SAFI 4 route MUST NOT be treated by the 
> receiving speaker as an implicit withdraw of the SAFI 1 route.  If S1 
> subsequently sends an explicit withdraw of the SAFI 4 route, this MUST 
> NOT implicitly withdraw the SAFI 1 route, and vice versa.
>
> Am I correct?  I have seen implementations that violate this so I 
> think it is worth spelling out somewhere in this section.
>

 From Section 1:

    This document also addresses the issue of the how UPDATEs that bind
    labels to a given prefix interact with UPDATEs that advertise paths
    to that prefix but do not bind labels to it. However, for backwards
    compatibility, it declares most of these interactions to be matters
    of local policy.

Different deployed implementations have different behavior, and I think 
it is better to advance the document as is rather than derail it with 
the inevitable food fight that would occur if we wanted to try to get 
the IETF to say which implementation is better than which other 
implementation.  The deployed implementations have been around for many 
years, and people seem to have adapted to the differences.

> 5) In section 7 it says:
>
> â€œ If a BGP implementation, not conformant with the current document,
>
> encodes multiple labels in the NLRI but has not sent and received the
>
> "Multiple Labels" Capability, a BGP implementation that does conform
>
> with the current document will likely reset the BGP session.â€
>
> Wouldnâ€™t that prevent incremental deployment of this RFC into a 
> network that is initially composed of such implementations?  Because 
> it seems to require that both ends of each BGP session must be 
> upgraded simultaneously, or else the BGP sessions will all reset.
>

This issue was discussed at great length when the draft was first 
submitted.  The vast majority of deployments do not check the S bit.  
That is, the de facto standard is to assume that a received update has 
only one label.   If any existing deployment were transmitting updates 
with multiple labels encoded into the NLRI, it would already be causing 
BGP session resets.

(Even iff this were a real problem, it wouldn't require both ends of a 
session to be upgraded simultaneously.  It would just require one end to 
have a knob allowing it to accept both old and new behavior from its 
peer, and a knob telling it whether to use old or new behavior when 
sending to its peer.  But since the defacto standard doesn't use 
multiple labels, I don't think we have to worry much about this.)


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    <p>Thanks for your review!<br>
    </p>
    <br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 4/27/2017 9:03 AM, Jonathan Hardwick
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    I have fixed the nits.<br>
    <br>
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        <p class="MsoNormal">1) In section 2.1 it says:<o:p></o:p></p>
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        <p class="MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; multiple labels MUST be explicitly
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        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal">If I have understood this correctly, it
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          previous session but that it has not sent on the restarted
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        <p class="MsoNormal">(a) Why does it need to do that â€“ isnâ€™t the
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    <br>
    The theory here is that the label stack in the stale routes is known
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    until EOR is received.<br>
    <br>
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        <p class="MsoNormal">(b) This seems to contradict section 2.4
          which says â€œNote that label/prefix bindings that were not
          advertised on the given session cannot be withdrawn by this
          method.â€</p>
      </div>
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    <br>
    I added the following text to section 2.4 right after the quoted
    sentence:<br>
    <blockquote>&nbsp;(However, if the bindings were advertised on a previous
      session with the same peer, and the current session is the result
      of a &quot;graceful restart&quot; ([RFC4724]) of the previous session, then
      this withdrawal method may be used.)<br>
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        <p class="MsoNormal">2) In section 2.1 it says:<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal">â€œA BGP speaker SHOULD NOT send an UPDATE
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          capable of receivingâ€ â€“ why isnâ€™t that MUST NOT?</p>
      </div>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    Section 2.1 also requires the receiving speaker to apply
    &quot;treat-as-withdraw&quot; to such updates, which does imply that the
    sending speaker must not send them.&nbsp; So I've changed &quot;SHOULD NOT&quot; to
    &quot;MUST NOT&quot;.&nbsp; <br>
    <br>
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        <p class="MsoNormal">â€œTo do so, it may send a BGP UPDATE message
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        <p class="MsoNormal">Should that be â€œit MUST sendâ€?</p>
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    <br>
    I think the non-normative (non-RFC2119) language is fine here.&nbsp; <br>
    <br>
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        <p class="MsoNormal">4) In section 5: although some
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          I believe that they should always be treated as independent,
          in the following sense:<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal">Suppose a speaker S1 sends a SAFI 1 route
          and then a SAFI 4 route to the same prefix P.&nbsp; The SAFI 4
          route MUST NOT be treated by the receiving speaker as an
          implicit withdraw of the SAFI 1 route.&nbsp; If S1 subsequently
          sends an explicit withdraw of the SAFI 4 route, this MUST NOT
          implicitly withdraw the SAFI 1 route, and vice versa.<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal">Am I correct?&nbsp; I have seen implementations
          that violate this so I think it is worth spelling out
          somewhere in this section.</p>
      </div>
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    <br>
    From Section 1:<br>
    <blockquote>This document also addresses the issue of the how
      UPDATEs that bind labels to a given prefix interact with UPDATEs
      that advertise paths to that prefix but do not bind labels to it.&nbsp;
      However, for backwards compatibility, it declares most of these
      interactions to be matters of local policy.<br>
    </blockquote>
    Different deployed implementations have different behavior, and I
    think it is better to advance the document as is rather than derail
    it with the inevitable food fight that would occur if we wanted to
    try to get the IETF to say which implementation is better than which
    other implementation.&nbsp; The deployed implementations have been around
    for many years, and people seem to have adapted to the differences.<br>
    <br>
    <blockquote cite="mid:BY2PR0201MB19109FB5D0BF1F2FC02B8E5284100@BY2PR0201MB1910.namprd02.prod.outlook.com" type="cite">
      <div class="WordSection1">
        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal">5) In section 7 it says:<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">â€œ
            If a BGP implementation, not conformant with the current
            document,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">encodes
            multiple labels in the NLRI but has not sent and received
            the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">&quot;Multiple
            Labels&quot; Capability, a BGP implementation that does conform<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">with
            the current document will likely reset the BGP session.â€<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal">Wouldnâ€™t that prevent incremental
          deployment of this RFC into a network that is initially
          composed of such implementations?&nbsp; Because it seems to require
          that both ends of each BGP session must be upgraded
          simultaneously, or else the BGP sessions will all reset.<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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    </blockquote>
    <br>
    This issue was discussed at great length when the draft was first
    submitted.&nbsp; The vast majority of deployments do not check the S
    bit.&nbsp; That is, the de facto standard is to assume that a received
    update has only one label. &nbsp; If any existing deployment were
    transmitting updates with multiple labels encoded into the NLRI, it
    would already be causing BGP session resets.<br>
    <br>
    (Even iff this were a real problem, it wouldn't require both ends of
    a session to be upgraded simultaneously.&nbsp; It would just require one
    end to have a knob allowing it to accept both old and new behavior
    from its peer, and a knob telling it whether to use old or new
    behavior when sending to its peer.&nbsp; But since the defacto standard
    doesn't use multiple labels, I don't think we have to worry much
    about this.)<br>
    <br>
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Hi Jon,

I've made some modifications to section 5 in response to your comments.  
While I don't want to get into a lot of details about the implementation 
differences, I do think it is fair to ask that section 5 point out more 
clearly that there can be interoperability problems, and that it might 
not be possible to achieve a desired set of local policies with some 
implementations or some combinations of implementation.  See below for 
the proposed new contents of Section 5.

Eric
----------------------
5.  Relationship Between SAFI-4 and SAFI-1 Routes

    It is possible that a BGP speaker will receive both a SAFI-1 route 
for prefix P and a SAFI-4 route for prefix P.  Different implementations 
treat this situation in different ways.

    For example, some implementations may regard SAFI-1 routes and 
SAFI-4 routes as completely independent, and may treat them in a "ships 
in the night" fashion.  In this case, bestpath selection for the two 
SAFIs is independent, and there will be a best SAFI-1 route to P as well 
as a best SAFI-4 route to P.  Which packets get forwarded according to 
the routes of which SAFI is then a matter of local policy.

    Other implementations may treat the SAFI-1 and SAFI-4 routes for a 
given prefix as comparable, such that the best route to prefix P is 
either a SAFI-1 route or a SAFI-4 route, but not both.  In such 
implementations, if load-balancing is done among a set of equal cost 
routes, some of the equal cost routes may be SAFI-1 routes and some may 
be SAFI-4 routes.  Whether this is allowed is again a matter of local 
policy.

    Some implementations may allow a single BGP session to carry UPDATES 
of both SAFI-1 and SAFI-4; other implementations may disallow this.  
Some implementations that allow both SAFIs on the same session may treat 
the receipt of a SAFI-1 route for prefix P on a given session as an 
implicit withdrawal of a previous SAFI-4 route for prefix P on that 
session, and vice versa.  Other implementations may have different behavior.

    A BGP speaker may receive a SAFI-4 route over a given BGP session, 
but may have other BGP sessions for which SAFI-4 is not enabled.  In 
this case, the BGP speaker MAY convert the SAFI-4 route to a SAFI-1 
route and then propagate the result over the session on which SAFI-4 is 
not enabled.  Whether this is done is a matter of local policy.

    These differences in the behavior of different implementations may 
result in unexpected behavior or lack of interoperability.  In some 
cases, it may be difficult or impossible to achieve the desired policies 
with certain implementations or combinations of implementations.



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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the BGP Enabled ServiceS of the IETF.

        Title           : E-TREE Support in EVPN & PBB-EVPN
        Authors         : Ali Sajassi
                          Samer Salam
                          John Drake
                          Jim Uttaro
                          Sami Boutros
                          Jorge Rabadan
	Filename        : draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree-10.txt
	Pages           : 19
	Date            : 2017-05-09

Abstract:
   The Metro Ethernet Forum (MEF) has defined a rooted-multipoint
   Ethernet service known as Ethernet Tree (E-Tree). A solution
   framework for supporting this service in MPLS networks is proposed in
   RFC7387 ("A Framework for Ethernet Tree (E-Tree) Service over a
   Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) Network"). This document
   discusses how those functional requirements can be easily met with
   Ethernet VPN (EVPN) and how EVPN offers a more efficient
   implementation of these functions. This document makes use of the
   most significant bit of the scope governed by the IANA registry
   created by RFC7385, and hence updates RFC7385 accordingly.



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Hi Alvaro,

Thank you  for your thorough review and comments. I have addressed all of t=
hem. Please refer inline for details on each. I just posted a new rev (rev1=
0) that covers all the comment resolutions addressed here.

https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree-10.txt


From: "Alvaro Retana (aretana)" <aretana@cisco.com<mailto:aretana@cisco.com=
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Resent-Date: Tuesday, April 4, 2017 at 2:37 PM

Dear authors:

I just finished reading this document.  In general, the document could bene=
fit from an editorial pass to improve readability; I put in some suggestion=
s below, but I=92m sure I didn=92t mention all.  I don=92t think that my co=
mments (even the Major ones) will be hard to resolve =96 most are around pr=
oviding clarity and consistency.  I=92ll wait for a revised draft before st=
arting the IETF Last Call.

Thanks!

Alvaro.



Major:

M1. Both the Introduction and the Abstract mention that =93this document di=
scusses how the functional requirements for E-Tree service can be easily me=
t=85=94  It seems to me that RFC7387 is used as the building block for this=
 document.  Why is it not a Normative reference?

Because RFC7387 is informational RFC (and the framework RFC) and the idnits=
 complains of a downref: Normative reference to an informational RFC

M2. There is no reference to E-Tree.  Please add a Normative one.

Added a reference for E-TREE definition in MEF.

M3. In Section 2.2 (Scenario 2: Leaf OR Root site(s) per AC): =93=85then a =
single RT per EVI MAY be used=85=94  I think that =93MAY=94 is out of place=
 because it seems to be expressing just a fact.  Also, please keep the norm=
ative language where the operation is defined (in this case in 3.1).

Changed =93MAY=94 to =93can=94.

M4. Section 3.1 (Known Unicast Traffic) talks about how in the =93multi-hom=
ing scenario of section 2.2=85the PE MAY advertise leaf indication along wi=
th the Ethernet A-D per EVI route=94.  Given that the text later says that =
=93in case of discrepancy, the multi-homing for that pair of PEs is assumed=
 to be in default "root" mode=94, I find the =93MAY=94 not sufficient.  If =
we want to prevent as many discrepancies as possible, shouldn=92t that be a=
 =93SHOULD=94 (or even a =93MUST=94)?   Given the local configuration, why =
would the PE not want to include the leaf indication=85ever=85?

It is cleaned up.

M5. In Section 5.1 (E-TREE Extended Community) there is redundant informati=
on (first and last paragraphs).  Among that redundant information there is =
no consistency: =93the Leaf Label field is set to a valid MPLS label=94 and=
 =93the Leaf Label MUST be set to a valid MPLS label=94 =96 please be consi=
stent and specify things just once.

Removed the replicated/redundant text

M5.1. BTW, that is a =93valid MPLS label=94?  How would a receiver recogniz=
e it?  Please add a reference to avoid confusion.

Added a brief description of =93valid MPLS label=94 and provided the refere=
nce


M6. Definition of the E-TREE Extended Community

M6.1. Only one Flag is defined.  What about the others?  Please set up a re=
gistry.

If needed in the future, we will setup a registry.

M6.2. [Minor] Please put a Figure number and heading for the community form=
at.

Done.

M6.3. It looks like the Reserved fields are set to 0.  What should happen i=
f the receiver gets something else?

Added a sentence that =93the receiver should ignore the reserved bits=94

M6.4. =93=85the Leaf-Indication flag MUST be set to one and Leaf Label is s=
et to zero. The received PE should ignore Leaf Label and only processes Lea=
f-Indication flag.=94  What if the Leaf Label is not set to zero?  The seco=
nd sentence says to ignore it, but the first one that it =93MUST be=85set t=
o zero=94.  Which one is it?  Maybe both=85  Be specific!

For MPLS label, changed it to =93the transmitter SHOULD set it to zero and =
the receiver SHOULD ignore it=94.

M6.5. =93=85the Leaf Label MUST be set to a valid MPLS label and the Leaf-I=
ndication flag should be set to zero. The received PE should ignore the Lea=
f-Indication flag.=94  Similar question for the Leaf-Indication bit.

For Leaf-Inication flag, change it to "the transmitter SHOULD set it to zer=
o and the receiver SHOULD ignore it"

M6.6. =93A non-valid MPLS label when sent along with the Ethernet A-D per E=
S route, should be logged as an error.=94  I=92m assuming that not only the=
 logging is needed, but is the route ignored/discarded too?

Added =93the route should be ignored"

M7. The PMSI Tunnel Attribute:  Please be clear to the fact that the C bit =
is being defined/introduced in this document (and not just start talking ab=
out it as if it is well-known to every reader).

Modified the 1st para to make it explicit:
"This draft defines a new Composite tunnel type by introducing a new  "Comp=
osite Tunnel' bit in the Tunnel Type field and adding a MPLS label to the T=
unnel Identifier field of PMSI Tunnel attribute as detailed below. This dra=
ft uses all other remaining fields per existing definition."

M7.1. It is not clear to me how the C bit is to be used.  Section 5.2 says =
that =93the high-order bit of the tunnel type field (C bit - Composite tunn=
el bit) is set while the remaining low-order seven bits indicate the tunnel=
 type as before.=94   But 3.3.1 says that the =93new composite tunnel type =
is advertised by the root PE to simultaneously indicate a P2MP tunnel in tr=
ansmit direction and an ingress-replication tunnel in the receive direction=
=85=94.  Knowing, from 5.2 that when the C bit is set =93Tunnel Types=850x0=
6 'Ingress Replication' is invalid=94, then does the C bit have a set meani=
ng or ???   [BTW, s/is/are]

The description in section 3.3.1 is consistent with this section 5.2. Basic=
ally, Composite Tunnel type, as its name implies consist of two tunnels: a =
P2MP tunnel in the transmit direction and a MP2P tunnel in the receive dire=
ction. The MP2P tunnel in the receive direction is used by Leaf PE devices =
for their BUM traffic transmission. The "ingress replication tunnel type=94=
 is not valid because for that we don=92t need composite tunnel type!!
I added the following sentence to the 1st paragraph to clarify it  more:
"Composite tunnel type is advertised by the root PE to simultaneously indic=
ate a P2MP tunnel in transmit direction and an ingress-replication tunnel i=
n the receive direction for the BUM traffic."

M7.2. [Minor] In some places you talk about the =93C bit=94 or =93Composite=
 tunnel bit=94, but later mention the =93Composite flag=94.  I=92m assuming=
 it is the same thing =96 please be consistent!

OK, changed it to "Composite Tunnel bit".

M7.3. =93invalid tunnel type=94  RFC6514 talks about an =93undefined tunnel=
 type=94.  Do you mean the same thing?  If you do, please use the right ter=
minology and put a reference to rfc6514 here to remind people where the act=
ion is defined.

Added a sentence that it should be treated as malformed per section 5 of [R=
FC6514].

M8. Section 8.1 (Considerations for PMSI Tunnel Types).

M8.1. What should the name of the bit be?  C bit, =93composite tunnels=94 o=
r =93Composite tunnel bit=94 =96 all 3 versions are used, and IANA will wan=
t specific directions.

Now, using =93Composite Tunnel bit=94 everywhere.

M8.2. =93=85by removing the entries for 0xFB-0xFE and 0x0F=94  The range be=
tween 0x80-0xFA also needs to be changed/updated.  s/0x0F/0xFF.  It may be =
clearer to write that this document updates the range 0x80-0xFF.

The ranges =930xFB-0xFE=94 and 0x0F have been replaced with =930x7B-0x7E=94=
 and 0x7F.

M8.3. =93=85and replacing them by=85=94   Please format the table so that s=
pacing is aligned (for better clarity for IANA).  Also, please include in i=
t all the reallocated space; for example:

   Value         Meaning                         Reference
0x0B-0x7A     Unassigned
 0x7B-0x7E     Reserved for Experimental Use   [this document]
0x7F          Reserved                        [this document]
0x80-0xFF     Composite Tunnels               [this document]

Done.


M8.4. What is 0x7F reserved for?  It doesn=92t seem to be used in this docu=
ment.  Why a different registration procedure?

0x7F just replaces 0x0F - i.e.  No new registration procedure


Minor:

P1. s/and RFC called "A Framework for E-Tree Service over MPLS Network"./RF=
C7387 ("A Framework for Ethernet Tree (E-Tree) Service over a Multiprotocol=
 Label Switching (MPLS) Network").

Done.

P2. Please expand EVPN on first use.  I know that this is a well-known term=
 =96 please consider talking to the RFC Editor (once this document gets to =
them) in order to include =93EVPN=94 in the =93RFC Editor Abbreviations Lis=
t=94 [1].

Done and we=92ll do.

P2.1.  Please also expand: DF, BUM=85

Done.

[1] https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt

P3. The abbreviation for Ethernet Segment is introduced in Section 3.2=85pl=
ease introduce it on first mention (Section 2) as it gets used before 3.2. =
 Also, the abbreviation for Attachment Circuit is introduced after AC has b=
een used several times.  EC is used w/out definition.

Done.

P4. =93E-TREE for VPLS=94  Please add an Informative reference to rfc7796.

Done.

P5. =93=85new BGP Extended Community for leaf indication as shown later in =
this document.=94  Please include a forward reference to Section 5.1.

Done.

P6. =93MAC mobility procedures=94  What are those?  Please add a reference.

Done.

P7. Section 3.2.1 (BUM traffic originated from a single-homed site on a lea=
f AC) starts by talking about =93a special MPLS label=94 =96 even though th=
ere=92s a reference later to 5.1, please be explicit (writing something lik=
e this): =93the PE adds the Leaf Label advertised using the E-Tree Extended=
 Community (Section 5.1)=94.     Simplifying the text will go a long way to=
 making implementation easier.

Done.

P8. =93IRB use case is outside the scope of this document.=94  An Informati=
ve reference to draft-ietf-bess-evpn-inter-subnet-forwarding would be nice.

Done.

P9. It would be nice to include a =93map=94 of the document in the Introduc=
tion: (something like) =93Section 2 talks about blah=85Section 3 defines=85=
=94.

Done.

P10. s/EVPN MAC Advertisement route/MAC/IP Advertisement Route     Please b=
e specific!

Done.

P11. =93To support multicast/broadcast from Root to Leaf sites, either a P2=
MP tree rooted at the PE(s) with the Root site(s) or ingress replication ca=
n be used.=94  References would be very nice!

Done.

P12. Section 5.3 doesn=92t exist.

Corrected.

P13. Both Sections 3 and 4 mention the same things (other tagging mechanism=
s and IRB) out of scope.  It would be nice to mention common pieces of the =
operation in a single place.

They are for two different solutions =96 one for EVPN and the other for PBB=
-EVPN. It is done intentionally for ease of reference.

P14. =93This document defines two new BGP Extended Community for EVPN.=94  =
I only see one.

It used to be two :-) I corrected it.

P15. A Normative reference to rfc4360 is needed in 5.1.

Done.

P16. There=92s no need to the reference to rfc7153 because you=92re referri=
ng to the registry itself.

It doesn=92t hurt :-)

P17. The 'Updates: ' line in the draft header should list only the _numbers=
_ of the RFCs which will be updated by this document (if approved); it shou=
ld not include the word 'RFC' in the list.

Done. Also added 6514 to the list.

P18. There is no reference to rfc5226.

Done.

Nits:

N1. There are a lot of very long sentences=85  It would be nice if the idea=
s were composed so that the overall document was easier to read.  For an ex=
ample, take a look at the last paragraph in 2.2=85  No specific action requ=
ired here, but it would be nice to give it an editing pass.

I did an editorial pass through this section to improve its readability.

N2. s/ each of its MAC/IP Advertisement route/each of its MAC/IP Advertisem=
ent routes

Done.

N3. Another example of where the text is not as clear as it could be for a =
specification is Section 3.2, where tagging MPLS frames is mandated (=93the=
 MPLS-encapsulated frames MUST be tagged with an indication when they origi=
nated from a Leaf AC=94), but there is no indication on how to do this unti=
l 3 paragraphs later =96 a seemingly unrelated discussion is held in betwee=
n=85

I did an editorial pass through this section to improve its readability.

N4. =93we=94 is used a couple of times (outside the Acknowledgements) =96 p=
lease change that to =93this document=94 (or something similar).

Done.

N5. s/where and Ethernet Segment/where an Ethernet Segment

Done.

N6. s/draft/document

Done.

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=92m sure I didn=92t mention all.&nbsp; I don=92t think
 that my comments (even the Major ones) will be hard to resolve =96 most ar=
e around providing clarity and consistency.&nbsp; I=92ll wait for a revised=
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uction and the Abstract mention that =93this document discusses how the fun=
ctional requirements for E-Tree service can be easily met=85=94&nbsp; It se=
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 block for this document.&nbsp; Why is it not a Normative reference?<o:p></=
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e: 14px;">Because RFC7387 is informational RFC (and the framework RFC) and =
the idnits complains of a downref:&nbsp;</font><font color=3D"#ff0000" face=
=3D"Calibri,sans-serif">Normative reference to
 an informational RFC</font></div>
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(Scenario 2: Leaf OR Root site(s) per AC): =93=85then a single RT per EVI M=
AY be used=85=94&nbsp; I think that =93MAY=94 is out of place because it se=
ems to be expressing just a fact.&nbsp; Also, please keep
 the normative language where the operation is defined (in this case in 3.1=
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own Unicast Traffic) talks about how in the =93multi-homing scenario of sec=
tion 2.2=85the PE MAY advertise leaf indication along with the Ethernet A-D=
 per EVI route=94.&nbsp; Given that the text later
 says that =93in case of discrepancy, the multi-homing for that pair of PEs=
 is assumed to be in default &quot;root&quot; mode=94, I find the =93MAY=94=
 not sufficient.&nbsp; If we want to prevent as many discrepancies as possi=
ble, shouldn=92t that be a =93SHOULD=94 (or even a =93MUST=94)?&nbsp;&nbsp;
 Given the local configuration, why would the PE not want to include the le=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M5. In Section 5.1 =
(E-TREE Extended Community) there is redundant information (first and last =
paragraphs).&nbsp; Among that redundant information there is no consistency=
: =93the Leaf Label field is set to a valid
 MPLS label=94 and =93the Leaf Label MUST be set to a valid MPLS label=94 =
=96 please be consistent and specify things just once.&nbsp;
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emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M5.1. BTW, that is a =93valid MPLS label=
=94?&nbsp; How would a receiver recognize it?&nbsp; Please add a reference =
to avoid confusion.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p><font color=3D"#ff0000"><font face=3D"Calibri,s=
ans-serif" size=3D"3">Added a brief description of&nbsp;</font><font size=
=3D"3">=93</font><font face=3D"Calibri,sans-serif" size=3D"3">valid MPLS la=
bel=94 and provided the reference</font></font></o:p></p>
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ize: 14px;">
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emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p><font face=3D"Calibri,sans-serif" size=3D"3">&n=
bsp;</font></o:p></p>
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M6. Definition of the E-TREE Extended Comm=
unity<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M6.1. Only one Flag is defined.&nbsp; What=
 about the others?&nbsp; Please set up a registry.</span></p>
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ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">If needed in the future, we will setup a registry.&=
nbsp;</font></div>
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: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
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emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M6.2. [Minor] Please put a Figure number a=
nd heading for the community format.</span></p>
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<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
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emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M6.3. It looks like the Reserved fields ar=
e set to 0.&nbsp; What should happen if the receiver gets something else?</=
span></p>
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ize: 14px;">
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ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Added a sentence that&nbsp;=93the receiver should i=
gnore the reserved bits=94</font></div>
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: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
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emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M6.4. =93=85the Leaf-Indication flag MUST =
be set to one and Leaf Label is set to zero. The received PE should ignore =
Leaf Label and only processes Leaf-Indication flag.=94&nbsp; What if the Le=
af Label is not set to zero?&nbsp; The second sentence
 says to ignore it, but the first one that it =93MUST be=85set to zero=94.&=
nbsp; Which one is it?&nbsp; Maybe both=85&nbsp; Be specific!</span></p>
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ize: 14px;">
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ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">For MPLS label, changed it to&nbsp;=93the transmitt=
er SHOULD set it to zero and the receiver SHOULD ignore it=94.</font></div>
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: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
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emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M6.5. =93=85the Leaf Label MUST be set to =
a valid MPLS label and the Leaf-Indication flag should be set to zero. The =
received PE should ignore the Leaf-Indication flag.=94&nbsp; Similar questi=
on for the Leaf-Indication bit.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">For Leaf-Inication flag,&nbsp;change it to &quot;</=
font><span style=3D"color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">the transmitter SHOULD set it t=
o zero and the receiver SHOULD ignore it&quot;</span></div>
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ize: 14px;">
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emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M6.6. =93A non-valid MPLS label when sent =
along with the Ethernet A-D per ES route, should be logged as an error.=94&=
nbsp; I=92m assuming that not only the logging is needed, but is the route =
ignored/discarded too?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Added&nbsp;=93the route should be ignored&quot;</fo=
nt></div>
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: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
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emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M7. The PMSI Tunnel Attribute:&nbsp; Pleas=
e be clear to the fact that the C bit is being defined/introduced in this d=
ocument (and not just start talking about it as if it is well-known to ever=
y reader).</span></p>
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ize: 14px;">
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ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Modified the 1st para to make it explicit:</font></=
div>
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ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#000000" face=3D"Calibri,sans-serif" style=3D"color: rgb(255=
, 0, 0);">&quot;This draft defines a new Composite tunnel type by introduci=
ng a new &nbsp;&quot;</font><font face=3D"Calibri, sans-serif"><font color=
=3D"#ff0000">Composite</font><font color=3D"#ff0000">&nbsp;Tunnel'
 bit in the Tunnel Type field and adding a MPLS label to the Tunnel Identif=
ier field of PMSI Tunnel attribute as detailed below. This draft uses all o=
ther remaining fields per existing definition.&quot;</font></font></div>
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emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M7.1. It is not clear to me how the C bit =
is to be used.&nbsp; Section 5.2 says that =93the high-order bit of the tun=
nel type field (C bit - Composite tunnel bit) is set while the remaining lo=
w-order seven bits indicate the tunnel type
 as before.=94&nbsp;&nbsp; But 3.3.1 says that the =93new composite tunnel =
type is advertised by the root PE to simultaneously indicate a P2MP tunnel =
in transmit direction and an ingress-replication tunnel in the receive dire=
ction=85=94.&nbsp; Knowing, from 5.2 that when the C bit
 is set =93Tunnel Types=850x06 'Ingress Replication' is invalid=94, then do=
es the C bit have a set meaning or ???&nbsp;&nbsp; [BTW, s/is/are]<o:p></o:=
p></span></p>
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">The description in section 3.3.1 is consistent with=
 this section 5.2. Basically, Composite Tunnel type, as its name implies co=
nsist of two tunnels: a P2MP tunnel in the transmit direction and a MP2P tu=
nnel in the receive direction. The
 MP2P tunnel in the receive direction is used by Leaf&nbsp;PE devices for t=
heir BUM traffic transmission. The &quot;ingress replication tunnel type=94=
&nbsp;is not valid because for that we don=92t need composite tunnel type!!=
</font></div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">I added the following sentence to the 1st&nbsp;para=
graph to clarify it &nbsp;more:</font></div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">&quot;Composite tunnel type is advertised by the ro=
ot PE to simultaneously indicate a P2MP tunnel in transmit direction and an=
 ingress-replication tunnel in the receive direction for the BUM traffic.&q=
uot;</font></div>
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ize: 14px;">
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<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M7.2. [Minor] In some places you talk abou=
t the =93C bit=94 or =93Composite tunnel bit=94, but later mention the =93C=
omposite flag=94.&nbsp; I=92m assuming it is the same thing =96 please be c=
onsistent!</span></p>
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</span>
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ize: 14px;">
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ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000"><font face=3D"Calibri,sans-serif">OK, changed it to=
 &quot;Composite Tunnel</font><font face=3D"Calibri,sans-serif">&nbsp;bit&q=
uot;.</font></font></div>
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: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
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emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M7.3. =93invalid tunnel type=94&nbsp; RFC6=
514 talks about an =93undefined tunnel type=94.&nbsp; Do you mean the same =
thing?&nbsp; If you do, please use the right terminology and put a referenc=
e to rfc6514 here to remind people where the action is defined.<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Added a&nbsp;sentence that it should be treated as =
malformed per section 5 of [RFC6514].</font></div>
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emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
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: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M8. Section 8.1 (Considerations for PMSI T=
unnel Types).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M8.1. What should the name of the bit be?&=
nbsp; C bit, =93composite tunnels=94 or =93Composite tunnel bit=94 =96 all =
3 versions are used, and IANA will want specific directions.</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000"><font face=3D"Calibri,sans-serif">Now, using&nbsp;=
=93Composite Tunnel bit=94 everywhere.</font></font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M8.2. =93=85by removing the entries for 0x=
FB-0xFE and 0x0F=94&nbsp; The range between 0x80-0xFA also needs to be chan=
ged/updated.&nbsp; s/0x0F/0xFF.&nbsp; It may be clearer to write that this =
document updates the range 0x80-0xFF.</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">The ranges&nbsp;=930xFB-0xFE=94 and 0x0F have been =
replaced with&nbsp;=930x7B-0x7E=94 and 0x7F.</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M8.3. =93=85and replacing them by=85=94&nb=
sp;&nbsp; Please format the table so that spacing is aligned (for better cl=
arity for IANA).&nbsp; Also, please include in it all the reallocated space=
; for example:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style=3D"font-si=
ze:11.0pt;font-family:Consolas">Value&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp; Meaning&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp; Reference<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Consolas">0x0B-0x7A&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp; Unassigned&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Consolas">&nbsp;0x7B-0x7E&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Reserved for Experimental Use&nbsp; &nbsp;[this document=
]<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Consolas">0x7F&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Reserved&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; [this document]<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Consolas">0x80-0xFF&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp; Composite Tunnels&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; [this document]&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Consolas"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size=
: 14px;"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: Consolas;"><o:p><font=
 color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif;"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; font-family: Consolas;"><o:p>&nbsp=
;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">M8.4. What is 0x7F reserved for?&nbsp; It =
doesn=92t seem to be used in this document.&nbsp; Why a different registrat=
ion procedure?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p><font color=3D"#ff0000"><font size=3D"3">0x7F j=
ust replaces 0x0F -&nbsp;i.e. &nbsp;No new registration procedure</font></f=
ont></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">Minor:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P1. s/and RFC called &quot;A Framework for=
 E-Tree Service over MPLS Network&quot;./RFC7387 (&quot;A Framework for Eth=
ernet Tree (E-Tree) Service over a Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) Net=
work&quot;).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000"><br>
</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P2. Please expand EVPN on first use.&nbsp;=
 I know that this is a well-known term =96 please consider talking to the R=
FC Editor (once this document gets to them) in order to include =93EVPN=94 =
in the =93RFC Editor Abbreviations List=94 [1].<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done and we=92ll do.</font></div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000"><br>
</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P2.1.&nbsp; Please also expand: DF, BUM=85=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000"><br>
</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">[1] <a href=3D"https://www.rfc-editor.org/=
materials/abbrev.expansion.txt">
https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt</a> <o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P3. The abbreviation for Ethernet Segment =
is introduced in Section 3.2=85please introduce it on first mention (Sectio=
n 2) as it gets used before 3.2.&nbsp; Also, the abbreviation for Attachmen=
t Circuit is introduced after AC has been
 used several times.&nbsp; EC is used w/out definition.<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000"><br>
</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P4. =93E-TREE for VPLS=94&nbsp; Please add=
 an Informative reference to rfc7796.</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P5. =93=85new BGP Extended Community for l=
eaf indication as shown later in this document.=94&nbsp; Please include a f=
orward reference to Section 5.1.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P6. =93MAC mobility procedures=94&nbsp; Wh=
at are those?&nbsp; Please add a reference.</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P7. Section 3.2.1 (BUM traffic originated =
from a single-homed site on a leaf AC) starts by talking about =93a special=
 MPLS label=94 =96 even though there=92s a reference later to 5.1, please b=
e explicit (writing something like this):
 =93the PE adds the Leaf Label advertised using the E-Tree Extended Communi=
ty (Section 5.1)=94.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Simplifying the text will go a=
 long way to making implementation easier.</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P8. =93IRB use case is outside the scope o=
f this document.=94&nbsp; An Informative reference to draft-ietf-bess-evpn-=
inter-subnet-forwarding would be nice.</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P9. It would be nice to include a =93map=
=94 of the document in the Introduction: (something like) =93Section 2 talk=
s about blah=85Section 3 defines=85=94.</span></p>
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</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P10. s/EVPN MAC Advertisement route/MAC/IP=
 Advertisement Route&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;Please be specific!<o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P11. =93To support multicast/broadcast fro=
m Root to Leaf sites, either a P2MP tree rooted at the PE(s) with the Root =
site(s) or ingress replication can be used.=94&nbsp; References would be ve=
ry nice!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P12. Section 5.3 doesn=92t exist.</span></=
p>
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</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Corrected.</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P13. Both Sections 3 and 4 mention the sam=
e things (other tagging mechanisms and IRB) out of scope.&nbsp; It would be=
 nice to mention common pieces of the operation in a single place.</span></=
p>
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</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">They are for two different solutions&nbsp;=96&nbsp;=
one for EVPN and the&nbsp;other for PBB-EVPN. It is done intentionally for =
ease of reference.</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P14. =93This document defines two new BGP =
Extended Community for EVPN.=94&nbsp; I only see one.</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">It used to be two :-)&nbsp;I corrected it.</font></=
div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P15. A Normative reference to rfc4360 is n=
eeded in 5.1.</span></p>
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</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P16. There=92s no need to the reference to=
 rfc7153 because you=92re referring to the registry itself.</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">It doesn=92t hurt :-)</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P17. The 'Updates: ' line in the draft hea=
der should list only the _numbers_ of the RFCs which will be updated by thi=
s document (if approved); it should not include the word 'RFC' in the list.=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
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</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done. Also added 6514 to the list.</font></div>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<br>
</div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<div bgcolor=3D"white" lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"#0563C1" vlink=3D"#954F72">
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">P18. There is no reference to rfc5226.&nbs=
p; <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
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</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
<span id=3D"OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family=
: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">Nits:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">N1. There are a lot of very long sentences=
=85&nbsp; It would be nice if the ideas were composed so that the overall d=
ocument was easier to read.&nbsp; For an example, take a look at the last p=
aragraph in 2.2=85&nbsp; No specific action required
 here, but it would be nice to give it an editing pass.<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans=
-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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</span>
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-s=
ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000">I did an&nbsp;editorial pass through this section t=
o improve its&nbsp;readability.</font></div>
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ize: 14px;">
<font color=3D"#ff0000"><br>
</font></div>
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: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">
<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">N2. s/</span> <span style=3D"font-size:11.=
0pt">each of its MAC/IP Advertisement route/each of its MAC/IP Advertisemen=
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<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done</font>.</div>
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">N3. Another example of where the text is n=
ot as clear as it could be for a specification is Section 3.2, where taggin=
g MPLS frames is mandated (=93the MPLS-encapsulated frames MUST be tagged w=
ith an indication when they originated
 from a Leaf AC=94), but there is no indication on how to do this until 3 p=
aragraphs later =96 a seemingly unrelated discussion is held in between=85
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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ize: 14px;">
<span style=3D"color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">I did an&nbsp;editorial pass through=
 this section to improve its&nbsp;readability.</span></div>
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ize: 14px;">
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<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">N4. =93we=94 is used a couple of times (ou=
tside the Acknowledgements) =96 please change that to =93this document=94 (=
or something similar).</span></p>
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<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
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<div xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sch=
emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">N5. s/where and Ethernet Segment/where an =
Ethernet Segment</span></p>
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<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
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emas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/off=
ice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">N6. s/draft/document</span></p>
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<font color=3D"#ff0000">Done</font>.</div>
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Looking at the Shepherd write up and the Ballot, I see no mention of the
normative reference to RFC 7348, which is informational and part of the
Independent Submission stream. As I mention in my comments below, I can't
fully follow the technical contents of this document, but this seems like
a red flag to me and -- as far as I can tell -- it hasn't been discussed
yet. It's possible that the reference just ended up in the wrong section
(and should actually be informative), but it's not immediately obvious on
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I strongly second Mirja's comment requesting positive confirmation from
the WG that is is collectively aware of the associated IPR
declarations.

>From https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt:
> It is common in technical writing to abbreviate complex technical
terms
> by combining the first letters.  The resulting abbreviations are
often
> called acronyms.  Editorial guidelines for the RFC series generally
> require expansion of these abbreviations on first occurrence in a
> title, in an abstract, or in the body of the document.

These guidelines go on to point out which acronyms are common enough not
to require expansion on first use. The following acronyms are not
considered common, and require expansion on first use *and* in the title
(I'm being very careful to cite only those which are *not* expanded on
first use, so each of these should be actionable):

- VPWS 
- EVPN
- P2P
- MAC (which is, itself, ambiguous without an expansion on first use)
- PE
- CE
- L2
- DF
- iBGP
- eBGP

I don't think "encap" is a word.

I have not made a complete effort to understand the technical aspects of
this document as its acronym use is literally too thick for me to read
and comprehend its contents. I presume it is readable to its community of
interest (as three implementations already exist); but finding ways to
write in prose instead of acronyms where possible would be highly
welcome.



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On 5/11/17 07:33, Alvaro Retana (aretana) wrote:
> On 5/11/17, 1:19 AM, "Adam Roach" <adam@nostrum.com> wrote:
>
> Adam:
>
> Hi!
>
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> DISCUSS:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> Looking at the Shepherd write up and the Ballot, I see no mention of the
>> normative reference to RFC 7348, which is informational and part of the
>> Independent Submission stream. As I mention in my comments below, I can't
>> fully follow the technical contents of this document, but this seems like
>> a red flag to me and -- as far as I can tell -- it hasn't been discussed
>> yet. It's possible that the reference just ended up in the wrong section
>> (and should actually be informative), but it's not immediately obvious on
>> a casual examination whether that's true.
> This document was originally scheduled for the Apr/27 Telechat, but as a result of Aliaâ€™s DISCUSS [1], the reference to rfc7348 was changed to Normative.  The WG was ccâ€™ed during the discussion, and I then reran the IETF LC with the downref explicitly mentioned [2].  I have no concerns about it.
>
> Yes, the Shepherdâ€™s write-up should have been updated.

Thanks for the clarification. I'm clearing my discuss.

/a


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Subject: Re: [bess] Closed -- Working Group Last Call on draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis
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I have now posted draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02.txt, which I believe 
addresses the LC comments.


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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the BGP Enabled ServiceS of the IETF.

        Title           : E-TREE Support in EVPN & PBB-EVPN
        Authors         : Ali Sajassi
                          Samer Salam
                          John Drake
                          Jim Uttaro
                          Sami Boutros
                          Jorge Rabadan
	Filename        : draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree-11.txt
	Pages           : 19
	Date            : 2017-05-12

Abstract:
   The Metro Ethernet Forum (MEF) has defined a rooted-multipoint
   Ethernet service known as Ethernet Tree (E-Tree). A solution
   framework for supporting this service in MPLS networks is proposed in
   RFC7387 ("A Framework for Ethernet Tree (E-Tree) Service over a
   Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) Network"). This document
   discusses how those functional requirements can be easily met with
   Ethernet VPN (EVPN) and how EVPN offers a more efficient
   implementation of these functions. This document makes use of the
   most significant bit of the scope governed by the IANA registry
   created by RFC7385, and hence updates RFC7385 accordingly.



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Hi Alvaro,

Please see my comment resolutions inline. I have updated and posted a new r=
ev:

https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree-11.txt


From: "Alvaro Retana (aretana)" <aretana@cisco.com<mailto:aretana@cisco.com=
>>
Date: Friday, May 12, 2017 at 12:18 PM
To: Cisco Employee <sajassi@cisco.com<mailto:sajassi@cisco.com>>, "draft-ie=
tf-bess-evpn-etree@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree@ietf.org>" <d=
raft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree@ietf.o=
rg>>
Cc: "bess-chairs@ietf.org<mailto:bess-chairs@ietf.org>" <bess-chairs@ietf.o=
rg<mailto:bess-chairs@ietf.org>>, "bess@ietf.org<mailto:bess@ietf.org>" <be=
ss@ietf.org<mailto:bess@ietf.org>>, Thomas Morin <thomas.morin@orange.com<m=
ailto:thomas.morin@orange.com>>
Subject: Re: AD Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree-09

On 5/9/17, 8:51 PM, "Ali Sajassi (sajassi)" <sajassi@cisco.com<mailto:sajas=
si@cisco.com>> wrote:

Ali:

Hi!

We=92re on the right path, but not there yet.  Please see my comments inlin=
e below.

Thanks!

Alvaro.


=85
> > M1. Both the Introduction and the Abstract mention that =93this documen=
t discusses
> > how the functional requirements for E-Tree service can be easily met=85=
=94  It seems to
> > me that RFC7387 is used as the building block for this document.  Why i=
s it not a
> > Normative reference?
>
> Because RFC7387 is informational RFC (and the framework RFC) and the idni=
ts
> complains of a downref: Normative reference to an informational RFC

The status of an RFC is not an indicator of how it should be referenced =96=
 complaints from idnits is not an excuse.  IOW, there is nothing that preve=
nts an Informational document to be referenced as Normative =96 we just nee=
d to take care of the process: not a big deal, but important.

Let me rephrase.  Is rfc7387 a document that =93that must be read to unders=
tand or implement=94 [1] what is specified in this document?  Because of ho=
w rfc7387 is positioned in the Abstract/Introduction, it seems to me that t=
he framework must be read to then understand how this document addresses it=
:


=93                                             A solution

   framework for supporting this service in MPLS networks is proposed in

   RFC7387<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7387> ("A Framework for Ethernet =
Tree (E-Tree) Service over a

   Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) Network"). This document

   discusses how those functional requirements can be easily met with

   Ethernet VPN (EVPN) and how EVPN offers a more efficient

   implementation of these functions.=94

[1] https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/normative-informative.html

It is a bit subjective in this case but to be safe and assuming the readers=
 don=92t have any background in E-TREE (which has been around for a long ti=
me =96 e.g., private VLAN), I have moved it to the normative section.

> > M2. There is no reference to E-Tree.  Please add a Normative one.
>
> Added a reference for E-TREE definition in MEF.

This reference needs to be Normative =96 see above.

Done.

=85
> > M6. Definition of the E-TREE Extended Community
> >
> > M6.1. Only one Flag is defined.  What about the others?  Please set up =
a registry.
>
> If needed in the future, we will setup a registry.

Please set it up now.

OK, I will set it up.

=85
> > M7.1. It is not clear to me how the C bit is to be used.  Section 5.2 s=
ays that =93the high-
> > order bit of the tunnel type field (C bit - Composite tunnel bit) is se=
t while the
> > remaining low-order seven bits indicate the tunnel type as before.=94  =
 But 3.3.1 says
> > that the =93new composite tunnel type is advertised by the root PE to s=
imultaneously
> > indicate a P2MP tunnel in transmit direction and an ingress-replication=
 tunnel in the
> > receive direction=85=94.  Knowing, from 5.2 that when the C bit is set =
=93Tunnel
> > Types=850x06 'Ingress Replication' is invalid=94, then does the C bit h=
ave a set meaning
> > or ???   [BTW, s/is/are]
>
> The description in section 3.3.1 is consistent with this section 5.2. Bas=
ically, Composite
> Tunnel type, as its name implies consist of two tunnels: a P2MP tunnel in=
 the transmit
> direction and a MP2P tunnel in the receive direction. The MP2P tunnel in =
the receive
> direction is used by Leaf PE devices for their BUM traffic transmission. =
The "ingress
> replication tunnel type=94 is not valid because for that we don=92t need =
composite tunnel
> type!!
> I added the following sentence to the 1st paragraph to clarify it  more:
> "Composite tunnel type is advertised by the root PE to simultaneously ind=
icate a P2MP
> tunnel in transmit direction and an ingress-replication tunnel in the rec=
eive direction
> for the BUM traffic."

Let me see if I understand what you=92re saying:

If the C-bit is set, then the receive direction always has an IR tunnel.  T=
he type of the P2MP tunnel is defined by one of the other bits.  Is that ri=
ght?

That=92s correct. The remaining 7 bits indicate the type of tunnel.

If so, are all the other bits valid (always)?  The text already says that 0=
x00/0x06 are invalid, but, for example, what about 0x07 (mLDP MP2MP LSP) or=
 0x0A (Assisted-Replication Tunnel [draft-ietf-bess-evpn-optimized-ir])?

How can you be sure that any other type besides 0x00/0x06 will be ok?

 Basically composite tunnel type doesn=92t make sense when ingress replicat=
ion (0x06) is used or when tunnel info is not present (0x00). Other than th=
at, it can be used with other tunnel types.

=85
> > M8.4. What is 0x7F reserved for?  It doesn=92t seem to be used in this =
document.  Why
> > a different registration procedure?
>
> 0x7F just replaces 0x0F - i.e.  No new registration procedure

0x0F is currently Unassigned, not Reserved.

I meant to say 0xFF. Basically the existing experimental types 0xFB =96 0xF=
E and reserved type of 0xFF has moved to new code points of: 0x7B =96 0x7E =
and 0x7F.

=85
> > P17. The 'Updates: ' line in the draft header should list only the _num=
bers_ of the
> > RFCs which will be updated by this document (if approved); it should no=
t include the
> > word 'RFC' in the list.
>
> Done. Also added 6514 to the list.

Hmm...  I don=92t see how this document Updates rfc6514=85.??

On the 2nd thought, it doesn=92t updated it because the whole purpose of C-=
bit is backward compatibility. So no updates to rfc6514. I removed it from =
the text.

But if it does, you need to include some text about it in both the Abstract=
 and the Introduction.  BTW, please add something about the Update to rfc73=
85 in the Introduction.

Added a sentence to the introduction in last paragraph.

> > P18. There is no reference to rfc5226.
>
> Done.

This one must be Normative.

Done.


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<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">From: </span>&quot;Alvaro Retana (aretana)=
&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:aretana@cisco.com">aretana@cisco.com</a>&gt;<b=
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<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Friday, May 12, 2017 at 12:18=
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<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">To: </span>Cisco Employee &lt;<a href=3D"m=
ailto:sajassi@cisco.com">sajassi@cisco.com</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto=
:draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree@ietf.org">draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree@ietf.org</=
a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-bess-evpn-etree@ietf.org">draft-i=
etf-bess-evpn-etree@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>&quot;<a href=3D"mailto:bess-ch=
airs@ietf.org">bess-chairs@ietf.org</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:bess-ch=
airs@ietf.org">bess-chairs@ietf.org</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:bess@i=
etf.org">bess@ietf.org</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:bess@ietf.org">bess@=
ietf.org</a>&gt;,
 Thomas Morin &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:thomas.morin@orange.com">thomas.morin@o=
range.com</a>&gt;<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>Re: AD Review of draft-iet=
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On 5/9/17, 8:51 PM, &quot;Ali Sajassi (sajassi)&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto=
:sajassi@cisco.com">sajassi@cisco.com</a>&gt; wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Ali:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi!<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">We=92re on the right path, but not there yet.&nbsp; =
Please see my comments inline below.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Thanks!<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Alvaro.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&nbsp;<=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">=85</sp=
an><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; M1. Both the Introduction and the Abstract mention that =93this document=
 discusses
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; how the functional requirements for E-Tree service can be easily met=85=
=94&nbsp; It seems to
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; me that RFC7387 is used as the building block for this document.&nbsp; W=
hy is it not a
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; Normative reference?</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt;&nb=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">Because RFC7387 is informat=
ional RFC (and the framework RFC) and the idnits
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">complains of a downref:&nbs=
p;Normative reference to an informational RFC<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">The status of an RFC is not an indicator of how it s=
hould be referenced =96 complaints from idnits is not an excuse.&nbsp; IOW,=
 there is nothing that prevents an Informational document to be referenced =
as Normative =96 we just need to take care
 of the process: not a big deal, but important.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Let me rephrase.&nbsp; Is rfc7387 a document that =
=93that must be read to understand or implement=94 [1] what is specified in=
 this document?&nbsp; Because of how rfc7387 is positioned in the Abstract/=
Introduction, it seems to me that the framework must
 be read to then understand how this document addresses it: <o:p></o:p></p>
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p;</o:p></span></p>
<pre><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">=93&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
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bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; A solution<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">&nbsp;&nbsp; fram=
ework for supporting this service in MPLS networks is proposed in<o:p></o:p=
></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">&nbsp;&nbsp; <a h=
ref=3D"https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7387"><span style=3D"color:windowtext=
">RFC7387</span></a> (&quot;A Framework for Ethernet Tree (E-Tree) Service =
over a<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">&nbsp;&nbsp; Mult=
iprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) Network&quot;). This document<o:p></o:p></=
span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">&nbsp;&nbsp; disc=
usses how those functional requirements can be easily met with<o:p></o:p></=
span></pre>
<pre><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">&nbsp;&nbsp; Ethe=
rnet VPN (EVPN) and how EVPN offers a more efficient<o:p></o:p></span></pre=
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<pre><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">&nbsp;&nbsp; impl=
ementation of these functions.=94<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
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<span style=3D"color:black">[1] <a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statem=
ent/normative-informative.html">
https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/normative-informative.html</a> &nbsp;<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p><font color=3D"#ff0000"><font face=3D"Calibri,s=
ans-serif" size=3D"3">It is a bit&nbsp;</font><font size=3D"3">subjective i=
n this case but to be safe and assuming the readers don=92t have any backgr=
ound in E-TREE (which has been around for a long
 time&nbsp;=96&nbsp;e.g.,&nbsp;private VLAN),&nbsp;I have moved it to the n=
ormative section.</font></font></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; M2. There is no reference to E-Tree.&nbsp; Please add a Normative one.</=
span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt;&nb=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">Added a reference for E-TRE=
E definition in MEF.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">This reference needs to be Normative =96 see above.<=
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<div><font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">=85&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; M6. Definition of the E-TREE Extended Community</span><span style=3D"fon=
t-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t;&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; M6.1. Only one Flag is defined.&nbsp; What about the others?&nbsp; Pleas=
e set up a registry.</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
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pan><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">If needed in the future, we=
 will setup a registry.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Please set it up now.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<div><font color=3D"#ff0000">OK,&nbsp;I will set it up.</font></div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; M7.1. It is not clear to me how the C bit is to be used.&nbsp; Section 5=
.2 says that =93the high-<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; order bit of the tunnel type field (C bit - Composite tunnel bit) is set=
 while the
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; remaining low-order seven bits indicate the tunnel type as before.=94&nb=
sp;&nbsp; But 3.3.1 says
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; that the =93new composite tunnel type is advertised by the root PE to si=
multaneously
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; indicate a P2MP tunnel in transmit direction and an ingress-replication =
tunnel in the
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; receive direction=85=94.&nbsp; Knowing, from 5.2 that when the C bit is =
set =93Tunnel
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; Types=850x06 'Ingress Replication' is invalid=94, then does the C bit ha=
ve a set meaning
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; or ???&nbsp;&nbsp; [BTW, s/is/are]</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt=
;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt;&nb=
sp;</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">The description in section =
3.3.1 is consistent with this section 5.2. Basically, Composite
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">Tunnel type, as its name im=
plies consist of two tunnels: a P2MP tunnel in the transmit
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">direction and a MP2P tunnel=
 in the receive direction. The MP2P tunnel in the receive
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">direction is used by Leaf&n=
bsp;PE devices for their BUM traffic transmission. The &quot;ingress
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">replication tunnel type=94&=
nbsp;is not valid because for that we don=92t need composite tunnel
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">type!!</span><span style=3D=
"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">I added the following sente=
nce to the 1st&nbsp;paragraph to clarify it &nbsp;more:</span><span style=
=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">&quot;Composite tunnel type=
 is advertised by the root PE to simultaneously indicate a P2MP
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">tunnel in transmit directio=
n and an ingress-replication tunnel in the receive direction
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">for the BUM traffic.&quot;<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Let me see if I understand what you=92re saying:<o:p=
></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">If the C-bit is set, then the receive direction alwa=
ys has an IR tunnel.&nbsp; The type of the P2MP tunnel is defined by one of=
 the other bits.&nbsp; Is that right?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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<div><font color=3D"#ff0000">That=92s correct. The remaining 7 bits indicat=
e the type of tunnel.&nbsp;</font></div>
<div><font color=3D"#ff0000"><br>
</font></div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">If so, are all the other bits valid (always)?&nbsp; =
The text already says that 0x00/0x06 are invalid, but, for example, what ab=
out 0x07 (mLDP MP2MP LSP) or 0x0A (Assisted-Replication Tunnel [draft-ietf-=
bess-evpn-optimized-ir])? &nbsp;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">How can you be sure that any other type besides 0x00=
/0x06 will be ok?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p><font face=3D"Calibri,sans-serif" size=3D"3">&n=
bsp;</font><font color=3D"#ff0000"><font face=3D"Calibri,sans-serif" size=
=3D"3">Basically composite tunnel type doesn</font><font size=3D"3">=92</fo=
nt><font face=3D"Calibri,sans-serif" size=3D"3">t make sense
 when ingress replication (0x06) is used or when tunnel info is not present=
 (0x00). Other than that, it can be used with other tunnel types.&nbsp;</fo=
nt></font></o:p></p>
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<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; color: rgb=
(0, 0, 0);">
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black"><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">=85</sp=
an><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; M8.4. What is 0x7F reserved for?&nbsp; It doesn=92t seem to be used in t=
his document.&nbsp; Why
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; a different registration procedure?</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5p=
t;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt;&nb=
sp;</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"color:red">0x7F just replaces 0x0F -&nbsp;i.e. &nbsp;No=
 new registration procedure<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:red"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">0x0F is currently Unassigned, not Reserved.</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
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</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div><font color=3D"#ff0000">I meant to say 0xFF. Basically the existing ex=
perimental types 0xFB&nbsp;=96&nbsp;0xFE and reserved type of 0xFF has move=
d to new code points of: 0x7B&nbsp;=96&nbsp;0x7E and 0x7F.</font></div>
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<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; color: rgb=
(0, 0, 0);">
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&nbsp;<=
/span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">=85&nbs=
p;</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
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<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; color: rgb=
(0, 0, 0);">
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; P17. The 'Updates: ' line in the draft header should list only the _numb=
ers_ of the
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; RFCs which will be updated by this document (if approved); it should not=
 include the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; word 'RFC' in the list.</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:blac=
k"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt;&nb=
sp;</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
</div>
<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; color: rgb=
(0, 0, 0);">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">Done. Also added 6514 to th=
e list.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red"><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hmm...&nbsp; I don=92t see how this document Updates=
 rfc6514=85.??<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><font color=3D"#ff0000">On the 2nd thought, it doesn=92t updated it be=
cause the whole purpose of C-bit is backward&nbsp;compatibility. So no upda=
tes to rfc6514.&nbsp;I removed it from the text.</font></div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">But if it does, you need to include some text about =
it in both the Abstract and the Introduction.&nbsp; BTW, please add somethi=
ng about the Update to rfc7385 in the Introduction.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<div><font color=3D"#ff0000">Added a sentence to the&nbsp;introduction in l=
ast paragraph.</font></div>
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black"><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; &g=
t; P18. There is no reference to rfc5226.&nbsp;
</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt;&nb=
sp;</span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
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<div style=3D"font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; color: rgb=
(0, 0, 0);">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&gt; </=
span><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;color:red">Done.</span><span style=3D"=
font-size:10.5pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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(0, 0, 0);">
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;color:black">&nbsp;<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">This one must be Normati=
ve.</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</div>
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<div><font color=3D"#ff0000">Done.</font></div>
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        Title           : Virtual Private Wire Service support in Ethernet VPN
        Authors         : Sami Boutros
                          Ali Sajassi
                          Samer Salam
                          John Drake
                          Jorge Rabadan
	Filename        : draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-14.txt
	Pages           : 15
	Date            : 2017-05-15

Abstract:
   This document describes how Ethernet VPN (EVPN) can be used to
   support Virtual Private Wire Service (VPWS) in MPLS/IP networks. EVPN
   enables the following characteristics for VPWS: single-active as well
   as all-active multi-homing with flow-based load-balancing, eliminates
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        Title           : L2L3 VPN Multicast MIB
        Authors         : Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang
                          Hiroshi Tsunoda
	Filename        : draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-08.txt
	Pages           : 20
	Date            : 2017-05-26

Abstract:
   This memo defines a portion of the Management Information Base (MIB)
   for use with network management protocols in the Internet community.
   In particular, it describes two MIB modules which will be used by
   other MIB modules for monitoring and/or configuring Layer 2 and Layer
   3 Virtual Private Networks that support multicast.


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From: Hiroshi Tsunoda <tsuno@m.ieice.org>
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Dear Glenn,

Thank you for your thorough review and waiting for the updated.

I posted a new revision taking into account your latest comments.
In the new revision, all of your comments are addressed.
I also revised the draft to improve the readability.

Please see some notes below.

URL:
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Diff:
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2017-05-02 14:44 GMT+02:00 Hiroshi Tsunoda <tsuno@m.ieice.org>:
> 2017-05-01 12:32 GMT+02:00 Glenn Mansfield Keeni <glenn@cysols.com>:
>> Dear Tsuno/Zhang
>>      Thanks for waiting. The review of
>>  draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-07 follows.
>>
>> Glenn
>>
>> C1. Abstract:
>>     The draft now defines 2 MIB modules.  Please revise the abstract
>>     and probably the title of the document too.

Fixed.

>> C2. The MIBs (L2L3-VPN-MCAST-TC-MIB, L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB) compile OK.
>>     (Three {type-unref} warnings are there, may be ignored.)

I have confirmed that the latest version of MIB modules can also be
compiled successfully.

>> C3. Page 4:
>>       s/3.  Summary of MIB Module/
>>         3.  Summary of MIB Modules/

Fixed.

>> C4. Page 6: L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer DESCRIPTION
>>       s/"Denotes a pointer to the row pertaining to a table entry/
>>        /"This textual convention represents a pointer to a row in
>>         the table represented by the following object of type
>>         L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointerType./

Fixed.

>> C5. Page 7: L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer DESCRIPTION
>>         The explanation in the last paragraph seems out of place.
>>         It may be removed.

Fixed.

>> C6  Page 7: L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointerType DESCRIPTION
>>         it is unclear when the value 'null(0)' will be used.
>>         Is this allowed only when the corresponding object of type
>>         L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer has a value that is a
>>         zero-length string ? If yes, please make that clear.

'null(0)' is the default value and indicates that the corresponding
L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer object is not assigned.
In the new revision, this point is described clearly.

>> C7. Page 9: l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeTable DESCRIPTION
>>         s/created by a PE router/maintained by a PE router/

Fixed.

>> C8. Page 12: l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId
>>          Do you really want to keep this object in L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB.
>>          It will change every time a new "tunnel type" is added to
>>          L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelType. That will defeat the purpose
>>          of separating L2L3-VPN-MCAST-TC-MIB from L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB
>>          It may be a good idea to define a textual convention like
>>              L2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId
>>          in the L2L3-VPN-MCAST-TC-MIB and use that textual convention
>>          in the L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB

Thank you for your suggestion. I revised the definition according to
your suggestion.

>> C9. Page 13: l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId DESCRIPTION
>> A.       s/Thus, the size of this object is 16 octets in IPv4/
>>            Thus, the size of this object is 8 octets in IPv4/

Fixed.

>> B.       The last 2 paragraphs do not tie up well with the previous
>>          paragraphs in the DESCRIPTION.

Those 2 paragraphs are removed in the new revision.

>> C.       In the last paragraph
>>          "this object is a pair of source and group IP addresses"
>>          is unlcear. Please clarify.

Fixed. In the new revision, this point is described as follows.

"the corresponding Tunnel Identifier is composed of
the source IP address and the group IP address."

>> C10. Page 15: Security Considerations
>>          I would think that any field that reveals information about
>>          a Multicast VPN and/or its members is sensitive.
>>          Does the l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId field reveal
>>          information about the participating members? If yes, it must
>>          be marked as sensitive.

I revised this point according to your suggestion.

>> C11. Editorial:
>>
>> A. This does not pertain to the MIBs as such,
>>    but I am uncomfortable with the  several variations
>>    of the phrase
>>    "Layer 2 and Layer 3 Virtual Private Networks (VPN)
>>     that support multicast"
>>    that appears in the text. I do not have a solution
>>    on hand but it would be perhaps be more readable to
>>    define and use a simple name/notation the beast for
>>    which the MIB is being designed (e.g. "L2L3VPNMCast").
>>
>> B. Same with the phrase
>>     "Layer 2 (L2) and Layer 3 (L3) VPN (Virtual Private
>>      Network)
>>     it would be probably be easier on the reader if an
>>     abbreviation like L2L3VPNs was used where ever
>>     applicable.

Thank you for your comments.
In the new reivsion the abbreviation "L2L3VPNMCast"
is defined and used throughout the draft.

>> C12. P2:Para4: s/within MIB module specifications//;

Fixed.

>> C13. General:
>> A.      The DESCRIPTION clauses could do would some more
>>         packing. (Too much space at the end of lines)
>> B.      Please check the articles a/an/the once again. Some
>>         usages do not seem right to me.

Fixed.

Sincerely yours,

-- tsuno


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Dear Tsuno,
      Thanks for the good work.
I will review and get back to you.

Glenn
On 2017/05/26 21:25, Hiroshi Tsunoda wrote:
> Dear Glenn,
> 
> Thank you for your thorough review and waiting for the updated.
> 
> I posted a new revision taking into account your latest comments.
> In the new revision, all of your comments are addressed.
> I also revised the draft to improve the readability.
> 
> Please see some notes below.
> 
> URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-08.txt
> Htmlized(1):
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-08
> Htmlized(2):
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-08
> Diff:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-08
> 
> 2017-05-02 14:44 GMT+02:00 Hiroshi Tsunoda <tsuno@m.ieice.org>:
>> 2017-05-01 12:32 GMT+02:00 Glenn Mansfield Keeni <glenn@cysols.com>:
>>> Dear Tsuno/Zhang
>>>       Thanks for waiting. The review of
>>>   draft-ietf-bess-l2l3-vpn-mcast-mib-07 follows.
>>>
>>> Glenn
>>>
>>> C1. Abstract:
>>>      The draft now defines 2 MIB modules.  Please revise the abstract
>>>      and probably the title of the document too.
> 
> Fixed.
> 
>>> C2. The MIBs (L2L3-VPN-MCAST-TC-MIB, L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB) compile OK.
>>>      (Three {type-unref} warnings are there, may be ignored.)
> 
> I have confirmed that the latest version of MIB modules can also be
> compiled successfully.
> 
>>> C3. Page 4:
>>>        s/3.  Summary of MIB Module/
>>>          3.  Summary of MIB Modules/
> 
> Fixed.
> 
>>> C4. Page 6: L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer DESCRIPTION
>>>        s/"Denotes a pointer to the row pertaining to a table entry/
>>>         /"This textual convention represents a pointer to a row in
>>>          the table represented by the following object of type
>>>          L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointerType./
> 
> Fixed.
> 
>>> C5. Page 7: L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer DESCRIPTION
>>>          The explanation in the last paragraph seems out of place.
>>>          It may be removed.
> 
> Fixed.
> 
>>> C6  Page 7: L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointerType DESCRIPTION
>>>          it is unclear when the value 'null(0)' will be used.
>>>          Is this allowed only when the corresponding object of type
>>>          L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer has a value that is a
>>>          zero-length string ? If yes, please make that clear.
> 
> 'null(0)' is the default value and indicates that the corresponding
> L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelPointer object is not assigned.
> In the new revision, this point is described clearly.
> 
>>> C7. Page 9: l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeTable DESCRIPTION
>>>          s/created by a PE router/maintained by a PE router/
> 
> Fixed.
> 
>>> C8. Page 12: l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId
>>>           Do you really want to keep this object in L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB.
>>>           It will change every time a new "tunnel type" is added to
>>>           L2L3VpnMcastProviderTunnelType. That will defeat the purpose
>>>           of separating L2L3-VPN-MCAST-TC-MIB from L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB
>>>           It may be a good idea to define a textual convention like
>>>               L2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId
>>>           in the L2L3-VPN-MCAST-TC-MIB and use that textual convention
>>>           in the L2L3-VPN-MCAST-MIB
> 
> Thank you for your suggestion. I revised the definition according to
> your suggestion.
> 
>>> C9. Page 13: l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId DESCRIPTION
>>> A.       s/Thus, the size of this object is 16 octets in IPv4/
>>>             Thus, the size of this object is 8 octets in IPv4/
> 
> Fixed.
> 
>>> B.       The last 2 paragraphs do not tie up well with the previous
>>>           paragraphs in the DESCRIPTION.
> 
> Those 2 paragraphs are removed in the new revision.
> 
>>> C.       In the last paragraph
>>>           "this object is a pair of source and group IP addresses"
>>>           is unlcear. Please clarify.
> 
> Fixed. In the new revision, this point is described as follows.
> 
> "the corresponding Tunnel Identifier is composed of
> the source IP address and the group IP address."
> 
>>> C10. Page 15: Security Considerations
>>>           I would think that any field that reveals information about
>>>           a Multicast VPN and/or its members is sensitive.
>>>           Does the l2L3VpnMcastPmsiTunnelAttributeId field reveal
>>>           information about the participating members? If yes, it must
>>>           be marked as sensitive.
> 
> I revised this point according to your suggestion.
> 
>>> C11. Editorial:
>>>
>>> A. This does not pertain to the MIBs as such,
>>>     but I am uncomfortable with the  several variations
>>>     of the phrase
>>>     "Layer 2 and Layer 3 Virtual Private Networks (VPN)
>>>      that support multicast"
>>>     that appears in the text. I do not have a solution
>>>     on hand but it would be perhaps be more readable to
>>>     define and use a simple name/notation the beast for
>>>     which the MIB is being designed (e.g. "L2L3VPNMCast").
>>>
>>> B. Same with the phrase
>>>      "Layer 2 (L2) and Layer 3 (L3) VPN (Virtual Private
>>>       Network)
>>>      it would be probably be easier on the reader if an
>>>      abbreviation like L2L3VPNs was used where ever
>>>      applicable.
> 
> Thank you for your comments.
> In the new reivsion the abbreviation "L2L3VPNMCast"
> is defined and used throughout the draft.
> 
>>> C12. P2:Para4: s/within MIB module specifications//;
> 
> Fixed.
> 
>>> C13. General:
>>> A.      The DESCRIPTION clauses could do would some more
>>>          packing. (Too much space at the end of lines)
>>> B.      Please check the articles a/an/the once again. Some
>>>          usages do not seem right to me.
> 
> Fixed.
> 
> Sincerely yours,
> 
> -- tsuno
> 

