Subject: [CCAMP] Comments on draft-sharma-ccamp-otn-service-model (Re: I-D Action: draft-sharma-ccamp-otn-service-model-00.txt)

From: Yuji Tochio <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 20 Jul 2016 18:28:26 +0900

Dear authors and all

I have read your draft and I think it is a good starting point in CCAMP but have
some comments.
So I would like to address my comments on draft-sharma-ccamp-otn-service-model.
They are about referencing issue in general.

1)
This draft refers to ITU-T G.709 (2012). The latest G.709 is now approved and  ODUCn is
included in 2016 version.
If you would like to include ODUCn, then you should refer to G.709(2016).
But it is noted that G.709 (2016) does not use LO/HO ODU  but uses server/client ODU.

2)
A number of non-standard clients are defined., like ODU1e, ODU2f, ODU3e1, ODU3e2....
This draft repeats the issue found in draft-ietf-ccamp-additional-signal-type-g709v3
before being WG draft.

Your draft is presented as "Intended status: Standards Track", it should be careful
in the choice of Intended status.

Regards,
Yuji

ps
I had sent the comments to authors in advance but forgot sending to list per Xian's request.

On 2016/07/07 7:11, [email-masked] wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>
>
>          Title           : OTN Service YANG Model
>          Authors         : Anurag Sharma
>                            Rajan Rao
>                            Xian Zhang
> 	Filename        : draft-sharma-ccamp-otn-service-model-00.txt
> 	Pages           : 19
> 	Date            : 2016-07-06
>
> Abstract:
>     This document describes the YANG data model for OTN Services.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-sharma-ccamp-otn-service-model/
>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-sharma-ccamp-otn-service-model-00
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>
> _______________________________________________
> I-D-Announce mailing list
> [email-masked]
> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce
> Internet-Draft directories: http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html
> or ftp://ftp.ietf.org/ietf/1shadow-sites.txt
>