From nobody Fri Dec 20 04:05:44 2019 Return-Path: X-Original-To: dnssd@ietf.org Delivered-To: dnssd@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5D8CE120024; Fri, 20 Dec 2019 04:05:38 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: internet-drafts@ietf.org To: Cc: dnssd@ietf.org X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.113.0 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Reply-To: dnssd@ietf.org Message-ID: <157684353830.27347.15730781244138862302@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Fri, 20 Dec 2019 04:05:38 -0800 Archived-At: Subject: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt X-BeenThere: dnssd@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 List-Id: "Discussion of extensions to DNS-based service discovery for routed networks." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 20 Dec 2019 12:05:38 -0000 A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Extensions for Scalable DNS Service Discovery WG of the IETF. Title : DNS-SD Privacy and Security Requirements Authors : Christian Huitema Daniel Kaiser Filename : draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt Pages : 20 Date : 2019-12-20 Abstract: DNS-SD (DNS Service Discovery) normally discloses information about devices offering and requesting services. This information includes host names, network parameters, and possibly a further description of the corresponding service instance. Especially when mobile devices engage in DNS Service Discovery over Multicast DNS at a public hotspot, serious privacy problems arise. We analyze the requirements of a privacy respecting discovery service. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq/ There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ From nobody Fri Dec 20 04:15:18 2019 Return-Path: X-Original-To: dnssd@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: dnssd@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id A45251200B4 for ; Fri, 20 Dec 2019 04:15:16 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -4.198 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.198 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 0f_4BHKC5JVo for ; Fri, 20 Dec 2019 04:15:13 -0800 (PST) Received: from smtp2.uni.lu (smtp2.uni.lu [IPv6:2001:a18:a:c5::e]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id CBA11120088 for ; Fri, 20 Dec 2019 04:15:12 -0800 (PST) IronPort-SDR: JWG16Nr0DPBQVNkPzib9qH/0TAbbnwtXBV34jsTq2OXDIwax2jJrILx6vh+BUlShTEacdgy+mk S6eBYCyHVWbQ== X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos; i="5.69,335,1571695200"; d="scan'208,217"; a="25818022" To: References: <157684353830.27347.15730781244138862302@ietfa.amsl.com> CC: Christian Huitema From: Daniel KAISER Message-ID: Date: Fri, 20 Dec 2019 13:15:08 +0100 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:68.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/68.2.2 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <157684353830.27347.15730781244138862302@ietfa.amsl.com> Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="------------B6EF6EE2F0534E7A2A77F4ED" Content-Language: en-US X-Originating-IP: [10.244.9.68] X-ClientProxiedBy: lydia2017.uni.lux (2001:a18:a:90::6f) To lydia2017.uni.lux (2001:a18:a:90::6f) Archived-At: Subject: Re: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt X-BeenThere: dnssd@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: "Discussion of extensions to DNS-based service discovery for routed networks." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 20 Dec 2019 12:15:16 -0000 --------------B6EF6EE2F0534E7A2A77F4ED Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit I want to kindly ask the people who gave feedback for this  document, if the feedback has been sufficiently addressed in this new version. In addition to addressing the feedback, we updated and clarified Section 4 (the requirements section). It would be very helpful if somebody could check that section as well (it is short :)). Kind regards, Daniel On 12/20/19 1:05 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote: > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. > This draft is a work item of the Extensions for Scalable DNS Service Discovery WG of the IETF. > > Title : DNS-SD Privacy and Security Requirements > Authors : Christian Huitema > Daniel Kaiser > Filename : draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt > Pages : 20 > Date : 2019-12-20 > > Abstract: > DNS-SD (DNS Service Discovery) normally discloses information about > devices offering and requesting services. This information includes > host names, network parameters, and possibly a further description of > the corresponding service instance. Especially when mobile devices > engage in DNS Service Discovery over Multicast DNS at a public > hotspot, serious privacy problems arise. We analyze the requirements > of a privacy respecting discovery service. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > dnssd mailing list > dnssd@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnssd -- Dr. Daniel Kaiser Research Associate SnT- Interdisciplinary Centre for Security, Reliability and Trust University of Luxembourg Maison du Nombre (MNO) 6, avenue de la Fonte L-4364 Esch-sur-Alzette Office: E02 0225-010 --------------B6EF6EE2F0534E7A2A77F4ED Content-Type: text/html; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit I want to kindly ask the people who gave feedback for this  document, if the feedback has been sufficiently addressed in this new version.

In addition to addressing the feedback, we updated and clarified Section 4 (the requirements section). It would be very helpful if somebody could check that section as well (it is short :)).

Kind regards,
Daniel

On 12/20/19 1:05 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Extensions for Scalable DNS Service Discovery WG of the IETF.

        Title           : DNS-SD Privacy and Security Requirements
        Authors         : Christian Huitema
                          Daniel Kaiser
	Filename        : draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt
	Pages           : 20
	Date            : 2019-12-20

Abstract:
   DNS-SD (DNS Service Discovery) normally discloses information about
   devices offering and requesting services.  This information includes
   host names, network parameters, and possibly a further description of
   the corresponding service instance.  Especially when mobile devices
   engage in DNS Service Discovery over Multicast DNS at a public
   hotspot, serious privacy problems arise.  We analyze the requirements
   of a privacy respecting discovery service.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/

_______________________________________________
dnssd mailing list
dnssd@ietf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnssd


-- 
Dr. Daniel Kaiser
Research Associate
SnT- Interdisciplinary Centre for Security, Reliability and Trust

University of Luxembourg
Maison du Nombre (MNO)
6, avenue de la Fonte
L-4364 Esch-sur-Alzette
Office: E02 0225-010
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List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 20 Dec 2019 17:57:13 -0000 --Apple-Mail-E344411E-21B1-41BD-9554-44637A04A204 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Sure. But you can also publish 03, and ask feedback on that. Or format a txt= draft from current XML, and ask feedback by email. -- Christian Huitema=20 > On Dec 20, 2019, at 2:15 AM, Daniel KAISER wrote: >=20 > =EF=BB=BF I want to kindly ask the people who gave feedback for this docu= ment, if the feedback has been sufficiently addressed in this new version. >=20 > In addition to addressing the feedback, we updated and clarified Section 4= (the requirements section). It would be very helpful if somebody could chec= k that section as well (it is short :)). >=20 > Kind regards, > Daniel >=20 > On 12/20/19 1:05 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote: >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts direct= ories. >> This draft is a work item of the Extensions for Scalable DNS Service Disc= overy WG of the IETF. >>=20 >> Title : DNS-SD Privacy and Security Requirements >> Authors : Christian Huitema >> Daniel Kaiser >> Filename : draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt >> Pages : 20 >> Date : 2019-12-20 >>=20 >> Abstract: >> DNS-SD (DNS Service Discovery) normally discloses information about >> devices offering and requesting services. This information includes >> host names, network parameters, and possibly a further description of >> the corresponding service instance. Especially when mobile devices >> engage in DNS Service Discovery over Multicast DNS at a public >> hotspot, serious privacy problems arise. We analyze the requirements >> of a privacy respecting discovery service. >>=20 >>=20 >> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq/ >>=20 >> There are also htmlized versions available at: >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03 >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03 >>=20 >> A diff from the previous version is available at: >> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03 >>=20 >>=20 >> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submiss= ion >> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. >>=20 >> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ >>=20 >> _______________________________________________ >> dnssd mailing list >> dnssd@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnssd >=20 > --=20 > Dr. Daniel Kaiser > Research Associate > SnT- Interdisciplinary Centre for Security, Reliability and Trust >=20 > University of Luxembourg > Maison du Nombre (MNO) > 6, avenue de la Fonte > L-4364 Esch-sur-Alzette > Office: E02 0225-010 --Apple-Mail-E344411E-21B1-41BD-9554-44637A04A204 Content-Type: text/html; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Sure. But you can also publish 03, and ask f= eedback on that. Or format a txt draft from current XML, and ask feedback by= email.

-- Christian Huitema 

On Dec 20, 2019, at 2:15 AM, Daniel KAISE= R <daniel.kaiser@uni.lu> wrote:

=EF=BB=BF =20 =20 =20 I want to kindly ask the people who gave feedback for this  document, if the feedback ha= s been sufficiently addressed in this new version.

In addition to addressing the feedback, we updated and clarified Section 4 (the requirements section). It would be very helpful if somebody could check that section as well (it is short :)).

Kind regards,
Daniel

On 12/20/19 1:05 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
A New Internet-Draft is availab=
le from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Extensions for Scalable DNS Service Discove=
ry WG of the IETF.

        Title           : DNS-SD Privacy and Security Requirements
        Authors         : Christian Huitema
                          Daniel Kaiser
	Filename        : draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt
	Pages           : 20
	Date            : 2019-12-20

Abstract:
   DNS-SD (DNS Service Discovery) normally discloses information about
   devices offering and requesting services.  This information includes
   host names, network parameters, and possibly a further description of
   the corresponding service instance.  Especially when mobile devices
   engage in DNS Service Discovery over Multicast DNS at a public
   hotspot, serious privacy problems arise.  We analyze the requirements
   of a privacy respecting discovery service.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnssd-=
prireq/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-0=
3
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft=
-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-iet=
f-dnssd-prireq-03


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission=

until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/

_______________________________________________
dnssd mailing list
dnssd@i=
etf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnssd


--=20
Dr. Daniel Kaiser
Research Associate
SnT- Interdisciplinary Centre for Security, Reliability and Trust

University of Luxembourg
Maison du Nombre (MNO)
6, avenue de la Fonte
L-4364 Esch-sur-Alzette
Office: E02 0225-010
=20
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List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 20 Dec 2019 20:16:28 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --------------0BAA1A0B2A071CCF12843DE7 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Sorry, e-mail sent out of context. Please disregard. On 12/20/2019 7:56 AM, Christian Huitema wrote: > Sure. But you can also publish 03, and ask feedback on that. Or format > a txt draft from current XML, and ask feedback by email. > > -- Christian Huitema  > >> On Dec 20, 2019, at 2:15 AM, Daniel KAISER wrote: >> >>  I want to kindly ask the people who gave feedback for this  >> document, if the feedback has been sufficiently addressed in this new >> version. >> >> In addition to addressing the feedback, we updated and clarified >> Section 4 (the requirements section). It would be very helpful if >> somebody could check that section as well (it is short :)). >> >> Kind regards, >> Daniel >> >> On 12/20/19 1:05 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote: >>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. >>> This draft is a work item of the Extensions for Scalable DNS Service Discovery WG of the IETF. >>> >>> Title : DNS-SD Privacy and Security Requirements >>> Authors : Christian Huitema >>> Daniel Kaiser >>> Filename : draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt >>> Pages : 20 >>> Date : 2019-12-20 >>> >>> Abstract: >>> DNS-SD (DNS Service Discovery) normally discloses information about >>> devices offering and requesting services. This information includes >>> host names, network parameters, and possibly a further description of >>> the corresponding service instance. Especially when mobile devices >>> engage in DNS Service Discovery over Multicast DNS at a public >>> hotspot, serious privacy problems arise. We analyze the requirements >>> of a privacy respecting discovery service. >>> >>> >>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq/ >>> >>> There are also htmlized versions available at: >>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03 >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03 >>> >>> A diff from the previous version is available at: >>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03 >>> >>> >>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission >>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. >>> >>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> dnssd mailing list >>> dnssd@ietf.org >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnssd >> >> -- >> Dr. Daniel Kaiser >> Research Associate >> SnT- Interdisciplinary Centre for Security, Reliability and Trust >> >> University of Luxembourg >> Maison du Nombre (MNO) >> 6, avenue de la Fonte >> L-4364 Esch-sur-Alzette >> Office: E02 0225-010 > > _______________________________________________ > dnssd mailing list > dnssd@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnssd --------------0BAA1A0B2A071CCF12843DE7 Content-Type: text/html; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit

Sorry, e-mail sent out of context. Please disregard.

On 12/20/2019 7:56 AM, Christian Huitema wrote:
Sure. But you can also publish 03, and ask feedback on that. Or format a txt draft from current XML, and ask feedback by email.

-- Christian Huitema 

On Dec 20, 2019, at 2:15 AM, Daniel KAISER <daniel.kaiser@uni.lu> wrote:

 I want to kindly ask the people who gave feedback for this  document, if the feedback has been sufficiently addressed in this new version.

In addition to addressing the feedback, we updated and clarified Section 4 (the requirements section). It would be very helpful if somebody could check that section as well (it is short :)).

Kind regards,
Daniel

On 12/20/19 1:05 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Extensions for Scalable DNS Service Discovery WG of the IETF.

        Title           : DNS-SD Privacy and Security Requirements
        Authors         : Christian Huitema
                          Daniel Kaiser
	Filename        : draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03.txt
	Pages           : 20
	Date            : 2019-12-20

Abstract:
   DNS-SD (DNS Service Discovery) normally discloses information about
   devices offering and requesting services.  This information includes
   host names, network parameters, and possibly a further description of
   the corresponding service instance.  Especially when mobile devices
   engage in DNS Service Discovery over Multicast DNS at a public
   hotspot, serious privacy problems arise.  We analyze the requirements
   of a privacy respecting discovery service.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-03


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/

_______________________________________________
dnssd mailing list
dnssd@ietf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnssd


-- 
Dr. Daniel Kaiser
Research Associate
SnT- Interdisciplinary Centre for Security, Reliability and Trust

University of Luxembourg
Maison du Nombre (MNO)
6, avenue de la Fonte
L-4364 Esch-sur-Alzette
Office: E02 0225-010

_______________________________________________
dnssd mailing list
dnssd@ietf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnssd
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List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 21 Dec 2019 18:45:35 -0000 --------------5BA7F3F013AF95880FBEB3ED Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit On 12/21/19 3:12 PM, Florian Adamsky wrote: > Dear all, > > On Friday, Dec 20 2019, Daniel KAISER wrote: > >> I want to kindly ask the people who gave feedback for this  document, if >> the feedback has been sufficiently addressed in this new version. > > thank you for taking my review into consideration. All my suggestions > have been included in the latest version. Thank you very much for proofreading the draft yet again :). > However, I have recognized only a > minor issue with the formatting in Section 4. All numerical items are > listed twice: > >  1.  [...] >  1. >  2.  [...] >  2. > That is strange. When I compile the draft using xml2rfc on my machine I do not get this problem. Maybe it is because there are xml comments at the points where the superfluous numeration appears? Should I re-upload a version without these comments? > But as I said, this is a minor formatting issue. Apart from that, I > approve of advancing the dnssd requirements draft. Thanks again for > writing the draft and shedding light on this important issue! > > [...] > > Best Regards > -- > Prof. Dr. Florian Adamsky > Professor for IT-Security > > Hochschule für Angewandte Wissenschaften Hof > Hof University of Applied Sciences > Alfons-Goppel-Platz 1
 > 95028 Hof / Saale > Germany > > Room: C 122 > Fon:  +49 (0) 9281 / 409 4860 > GPG:  2E36 67A9 1521 744E 0D8E 0930 8CFB DEC8 C702 72AB > > **2019: 25 Jahre Hochschule Hof + 10 Jahre BayIND** > > _______________________________________________ > dnssd mailing list > dnssd@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnssd -- Dr. Daniel Kaiser Research Associate SnT- Interdisciplinary Centre for Security, Reliability and Trust University of Luxembourg Maison du Nombre (MNO) 6, avenue de la Fonte L-4364 Esch-sur-Alzette Office: E02 0225-010 --------------5BA7F3F013AF95880FBEB3ED Content-Type: text/html; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit On 12/21/19 3:12 PM, Florian Adamsky wrote:
Dear all,

On Friday, Dec 20 2019, Daniel KAISER wrote:

I want to kindly ask the people who gave feedback for this  document, if
the feedback has been sufficiently addressed in this new version.

thank you for taking my review into consideration. All my suggestions
have been included in the latest version.
Thank you very much for proofreading the draft yet again :).
However, I have recognized only a
minor issue with the formatting in Section 4. All numerical items are
listed twice:

 1.  [...]
 1.
 2.  [...]
 2.

That is strange. When I compile the draft using xml2rfc on my machine I do not get this problem.
Maybe it is because there are xml comments at the points where the superfluous numeration appears?
Should I re-upload a version without these comments?

But as I said, this is a minor formatting issue. Apart from that, I
approve of advancing the dnssd requirements draft. Thanks again for
writing the draft and shedding light on this important issue!

[...]

Best Regards
--
Prof. Dr. Florian Adamsky
Professor for IT-Security

Hochschule für Angewandte Wissenschaften Hof
Hof University of Applied Sciences
Alfons-Goppel-Platz 1

95028 Hof / Saale
Germany

Room: C 122
Fon:  +49 (0) 9281 / 409 4860
GPG:  2E36 67A9 1521 744E 0D8E 0930 8CFB DEC8 C702 72AB

**2019: 25 Jahre Hochschule Hof + 10 Jahre BayIND** 

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-- 
Dr. Daniel Kaiser
Research Associate
SnT- Interdisciplinary Centre for Security, Reliability and Trust

University of Luxembourg
Maison du Nombre (MNO)
6, avenue de la Fonte
L-4364 Esch-sur-Alzette
Office: E02 0225-010
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