Subject: [eap] Issue 181: Key NITs

From: Bernard Aboba <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 10 Oct 2003 06:04:42 -0700 (PDT)

Issue 181: Key NITs
Submitter name:   Bernard Aboba
Submitter email address: [email-masked]
Date first submitted: October 10, 2003
Reference:
Document: Keyframe-07
Comment type: E
Priority: S
Section: 7, Appendices
Rationale/Explanation of issue:

References section should be numbered:

7. References
7.1 Normative References
7.2 Informative References

The [8021XHandoff] reference has got a number of problematic line breaks.

In the Appendices, B should have the abbreviation spelled out:

Appendix B Transient EAP Key (TEK) Hierarchy

The TLS-PRF-X formula has problematic line breaks

The Figure B-1 title should be on the same page, and has problematic line
breaks.

In Appendix C, both the AAA-Key(0,31) and AAA-Key(32.63) formulas have
problematic line breaks.

Similarly, TLS-PRF-X formula has problematic line breaks.

In Appendix C, the Figure C-1 title  has problematic line breaks.

Appendix F (Acknowledgements) should be moved to before Authors'
Addresses.

Appendix G (Open Issues) need not be an Appendix.

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