Subject: [eap] jari's netsel-03 review, summary

From: Jari Arkko <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 25 Jan 2006 21:50:50 +0200

This concludes my review. Overall, I think the document
has a lot of good material, but needs a slightly tighter
scope. For instance, I belive the discussion on payload
routing is something that we could probably leave to
others. Otherwise, the problem definition as such is
in good shape. Where the document needs most work
is in the description of the "issues" or "limitations"
relating to various approaches to network selection.
Material from Sections 3-5 should be gathered in
one place for an in-depth discussion of the issues,
and then the "existing work" and "conclusions" sections
can be shorter. The document should also stop short
of recommending specific IETF (or any other) activities,
and focus on understanding the implications of
the problems and some basic solution approaches.
RFC 4284 should be used as an example when discussing
some of the limitations.

--Jari

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