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Hi,

Some comments from me, to get the discussions going :)

Regards,

Christer







General
-----------

Q1: Title & Scope

I think this was already discussed before, but I think we should make it mo=
re clear that the document describes a "session-free" mechanism.

The text does say that a MESSAGE doesn't create a session, but I think we n=
eed some additional stuff:


1)      I think it should be seen in the title. E.g. "Non-Session Data-Only=
 Emergency Calls" or "One-Shot Data-Only Emergency Calls".

2)      It should be more clear that the mechanism is aimed at "single shot=
" cases only, because there is no guarantee that additional MESSAGE request=
s would end up at the same location - nor does the draft define any mechani=
sm on how to associated multiple MESSAGE requests with the same "call". The=
re is some text about it in section 4.1, but below I will suggest some text=
 also for the Introduction section.



Q2: SIP Terminology

Throughout the document, please s/header/header field        <- When you ta=
lk about SIP header fields, that is



Q3: Terminology alignment

The terminology needs to be consistent regarding SIP responses. Sometimes t=
he text says "425 response", sometimes "425", and sometimes "500 (Server In=
ternal Error)".

I suggest to use the "500 (Server Internal Error)" format - both when talki=
ng about responses and when talking about response codes.


Abstract:
------------

Q4:

            s/ "and its transmission using the SIP MESSAGE"/ "and its trans=
mission using SIP MESSAGE requests"


Introduction:
-----------------


Q5:

I suggest to modify:

        This document also describes how a SIP MESSAGE
        [RFC3428] transaction can be used to send a data-only call.

...to:


        This document also describes how a SIP MESSAGE

        [RFC3428] request can be used to send a one-shot

        data-only call, meaning that all data associated

        with the call is sent in a single request.



        NOTE: SIP MESSAGE is not suitable for data-only

        Calls which require the sending of multiple requests.

        There is no guarantee that each SIP MESSAGE request

        will reach traverse the same path and reach the same

        destination. Nor is there a SIP-layer mechanism to

        associate multiple SIP MESSAGE requests with a given

        call.


Section 4.1:
---------------

Q6:

            The first sentence says:

            "A CAP message may be sent on the initial message of any SIP tr=
ansaction."

            I don't understand what "initial message of a SIP transaction" =
means.

Q7:

            The text says:

            "However, this document only describes specific behavior
            when used with a SIP INVITE that would accompany a normal emerg=
ency
            call and a SIP MESSAGE transaction for a one-shot, data-only
            emergency call.  Behavior with other transactions is not define=
d."

            I suggest the following modified text:

            "However, this document only describes the transport of CAP mes=
sages
            within SIP INVITE requests, when an emergency SIP session is es=
tablished,
            and within SIP MESSAGE requests, for one-shot data-only emergen=
cy calls.

            The transport of CAP messages within other type of SIP messages=
 is outside
            the scope of this specification."


Q8:

            Related to that, throughout the document, I think it would be g=
ood to talk
            about "SIP requests" rather than "SIP messages".


Section 4.3:
---------------


Q9:

            I suggest to change the title to "Sending of an one-shot data e=
mergency call".



Q10:

            Related to Q9, the wording "sending a call" sounds a little str=
ange. Couldn't we simply
            talk about "sending of a message"?


Q11:

            I suggest to add some text which states that a SIP MESSAGE may =
fork, but that the sender will only receive one 200 OK response (according =
to the 3261 rules for non-INVITE requests). I.e. the sender will not know h=
ow many recipients received the MESSAGE.



Section 4.x:
---------------

Q12:

            As you have a section for the one-shot call, I think you should=
 also have a section which describes
            INVITE specific aspects.





Section 5.1.
-----------------

Q13:

            The text says:



                    "The 425 response code is a rejection of the request du=
e to its
        included alert content, indicating that it was malformed or not
        satisfactory for the recipient's purpose."

            I suggest the following modified text:



                    "The recipient sends a 425 response if it considers the=
 alerting content to be

                    malformed or not satisfactory for the recipient's purpo=
se."


Q14:

            The text says:


        "A SIP intermediary can also reject an alert it receives from a UA
        when it understands that the provided alert is malformed."

            I suggest the following modified text:


        "A SIP intermediary can also reject a request, if it considers the

        Included alert content malformed."


Q15:

            The text says:

            "It is only appropriate to generate a 425 response when the res=
ponding
            entity has no other information in the request that are usable =
by the
            responder."

            I don't understand this. Above it is said that 425 is used if t=
he alerting content is not usable, and now
            you say that the recipient should also check other information.

            Perhaps you could REMOVE this sentence, and enhance the sentenc=
e in Q11:


                    "The recipient sends a 425 response if it considers the=
 alerting content to be

                    malformed or not satisfactory for the recipient's purpo=
se, and if the request

                    does not contain other information sufficient for emerg=
ency purpose."



                    ...or something like that.



Q16:

The text says:


        "A 425 response is a final response within a transaction, and MUST =
NOT

        terminate an existing dialog."

What does that mean??? A 4xx response DOES terminate a dialog.


Section 5.2
--------------

Q17:

            I have never seen a SIP header field name before, where a capit=
al letter is used within a word. Keep in mind that SIP header fields are ca=
se-insensitive.


Regards,

Christer

















From: Ecrit [mailto:ecrit-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Roger Marshall
Sent: 1. marraskuuta 2014 0:26
To: ecrit@ietf.org
Cc: Rosen, Brian (Brian.Rosen@neustar.biz)
Subject: [Ecrit] WGLC Announce: draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea

This starts WGLC for draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea, Data-Only Emergency Cal=
ls.

The draft can be found at:
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea/

Please review the draft and provide comments to the list before our ECRIT m=
eeting in Honolulu, in just about 2 weeks.

Thanks,


Marc & Roger

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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Hi,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Some comments from me, to get t=
he discussions going :)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Christer<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">General<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">-----------<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q1: Title &amp; Scope<o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-indent:36.0pt"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">I =
think this was already discussed before, but I think we should make it more=
 clear that the document describes a &#8220;session-free&#8221; mechanism.<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-indent:36.0pt"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Th=
e text does say that a MESSAGE doesn&#8217;t create a session, but I think =
we need some additional stuff:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:54.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">1=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-GB">I think it should be se=
en in the title. E.g. &#8220;Non-Session Data-Only Emergency Calls&#8221; o=
r &#8220;One-Shot Data-Only Emergency Calls&#8221;.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"margin-left:54.0pt;text-indent:-18.0=
pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<![if !supportLists]><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">2=
)<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=3D"EN-GB">It should be more clear=
 that the mechanism is aimed at &#8220;single shot&#8221; cases only, becau=
se there is no guarantee that additional MESSAGE requests would end up at t=
he same location &#8211; nor does the draft define any
 mechanism on how to associated multiple MESSAGE requests with the same &#8=
220;call&#8221;. There is some text about it in section 4.1, but below I wi=
ll suggest some text also for the Introduction section.<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q2: SIP Terminology<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-indent:36.0pt"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Th=
roughout the document, please s/header/header field &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp; &lt;- When you talk about SIP header fields, that is<o:p></o:=
p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q3: Terminology alignment<o:p><=
/o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-indent:36.0pt"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Th=
e terminology needs to be consistent regarding SIP responses. Sometimes the=
 text says &#8220;425 response&#8221;, sometimes &#8220;425&#8221;, and som=
etimes &#8220;500 (Server Internal Error)&#8221;.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-indent:36.0pt"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">I =
suggest to use the &#8220;500 (Server Internal Error)&#8221; format &#8211;=
 both when talking about responses and when talking about response codes.<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Abstract:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">------------<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q4:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; s/ &#8220;and its transmission using th=
e SIP MESSAGE&#8221;/ &#8220;and its transmission using SIP MESSAGE request=
s&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Introduction:<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">-----------------<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q5:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">I suggest to modify:<o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-=
family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; This document also describes how a SIP MESSAGE<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-=
family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp; &nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; [RFC3428] transaction can be used to send a data-only=
 call.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-=
family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&#8230;to:<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; This d=
ocument also describes how a SIP MESSAGE<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; [RFC3428] r=
equest can be used to send a one-shot<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; data-o=
nly call, meaning that all data associated<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; with t=
he call is sent in a single request.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; NOTE: =
SIP MESSAGE is not suitable for data-only<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Calls =
which require the sending of multiple requests.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; There =
is no guarantee that each SIP MESSAGE request<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; will r=
each traverse the same path and reach the same<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; destin=
ation. Nor is there a SIP-layer mechanism to<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; associ=
ate multiple SIP MESSAGE requests with a given<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; call.<=
o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Section 4.1:<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">---------------<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q6:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; The first sentence says:<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#8220;A CAP message may be sent on the=
 initial message of any SIP transaction.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; I don&#8217;t understand what &#8220;in=
itial message of a SIP transaction&#8221; means.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q7:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; The text says:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#8220;However, this document only desc=
ribes specific behavior<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; when used with a SIP INVITE that would accom=
pany a normal emergency<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; call and a SIP MESSAGE transaction for a one=
-shot, data-only<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; emergency call.&nbsp; Behavior with other tr=
ansactions is not defined.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; I suggest the following modified text:<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#8220;However, this document only desc=
ribes the transport of CAP messages<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; within SIP INVITE requests, when an eme=
rgency SIP session is established,
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; and within SIP MESSAGE requests, for on=
e-shot data-only emergency calls.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; The transport of CAP messages within ot=
her type of SIP messages is outside<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; the scope of this specification.&#8221;=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q8:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Related to that, throughout the documen=
t, I think it would be good to talk<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; about &#8220;SIP requests&#8221; rather=
 than &#8220;SIP messages&#8221;.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Section 4.3:<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">---------------<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q9:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp; I suggest to change the title to &#8220;Sending of an one-sh=
ot data emergency call&#8221;.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q10:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp; Related to Q9, the wording &#8220;sending a call&#8221; soun=
ds a little strange. Couldn&#8217;t we simply<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp; talk about &#8220;sending of a message&#8221;?<o:p></o:p></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q11:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp; I suggest to add some text which states that a SIP MESSAGE m=
ay fork,<span lang=3D"EN-GB"> but that the sender will only receive
<b>one</b> 200 OK response (according to the 3261 rules for non-INVITE requ=
ests). I.e. the sender will not know how many recipients received the MESSA=
GE.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Section 4.x:<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">---------------<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q12:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; As you have a section for the one-shot =
call, I think you should also have a section which describes<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; INVITE specific aspects.<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Section 5.1.<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">-----------------<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q13:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; The text says:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calib=
ri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calib=
ri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#=
8220;</span>The 425 response code is a rejection of the request due to its<=
o:p></o:p></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; included alert conte=
nt, indicating that it was malformed or not<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; satisfactory for the=
 recipient's purpose.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; I suggest the following modified text:<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calib=
ri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calib=
ri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#=
8220;The recipient sends a 425 response if it considers the alerting conten=
t to be<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calib=
ri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; ma=
lformed or not satisfactory for the recipient&#8217;s purpose.&#8221;<o:p><=
/o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calib=
ri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q14:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp; The text says:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#8220;A SIP intermediary c=
an also reject an alert it receives from a UA<o:p></o:p></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; when it understands =
that the provided alert is malformed.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp; I suggest the following modified text:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#8220;A SIP intermediary c=
an also reject a request, if it considers the<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Included alert content malf=
ormed.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q15:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; The text says:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#8220;It is only appropriate to genera=
te a 425 response when the responding<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; entity has no other information in the reque=
st that are usable by the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; responder.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; I don&#8217;t understand this. Above it=
 is said that 425 is used if the alerting content is not usable, and now<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; you say that the recipient should also =
check other information.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Perhaps you could REMOVE this sentence,=
 and enhance the sentence in Q11:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calib=
ri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#=
8220;The recipient sends a 425 response if it considers the alerting conten=
t to be<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calib=
ri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; ma=
lformed or not satisfactory for the recipient&#8217;s purpose, and if the r=
equest<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calib=
ri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; do=
es not contain other information sufficient for emergency purpose.&#8221;<o=
:p></o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calib=
ri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB" style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calib=
ri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#=
8230;or something like that.<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q16:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-indent:36.0pt"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Th=
e text says:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#8220=
;A 425 response is a final response within a transaction, and MUST NOT<o:p>=
</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; terminate a=
n existing dialog.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"text-indent:36.0pt"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Wh=
at does that mean??? A 4xx response DOES terminate a dialog.<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Section 5.2<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">--------------<o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Q17:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; I have never seen a SIP header field na=
me before, where a capital letter is used within a word. Keep in mind that =
SIP header fields are case-insensitive.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB">Christer<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<pre><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span lang=3D"EN-GB"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> Ecrit [m=
ailto:ecrit-bounces@ietf.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Roger Marshall<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 1. marraskuuta 2014 0:26<br>
<b>To:</b> ecrit@ietf.org<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Rosen, Brian (Brian.Rosen@neustar.biz)<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Ecrit] WGLC Announce: draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">This starts WGLC for draf=
t-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea, Data-Only Emergency Calls.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">The draft can be found at=
:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><a href=3D"http://datatra=
cker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea/">http://datatracker.ietf.o=
rg/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-data-only-ea/</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Please review the draft a=
nd provide comments to the list before our ECRIT meeting in Honolulu, in ju=
st about 2 weeks.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span>=
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libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Marc &amp; Roger<o:p></o:=
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After reviewing version 24, our team came up with some new comments:


*         The draft should probably make 'provided-by' all lower case; in 5=
.3 it is 'Provided-By'.  Xml tags are case sensitive, and RFC 4119 shows it=
 in all lower case when quoting in text (see section 2.2.4).

*         The example in draft 24 section 5.3 now shows the 'EmergencyCallD=
ataValue' element in the geopriv10 namespace, which seems incorrect.

*         There is a 'DataProviderReference' element defined in the Emergen=
cyCallData:ProviderInfo namespace - however it doesn't actually fall within=
 the ProviderInfoType definition like it does in other info types, and like=
 it is used in the examples.  This does seem like a problem in the schema.

*         Also not sure if the 'DataProviderReference' element that is show=
n directly in the PIDF-LO 'provided-by' is really supposed to be there.

*         The DataProviderContact element is declared in the schema as an "=
xc:vcardType"; instead, it should be declared as a type within the Emergenc=
yCallData:ProviderInfo namespace that contains a 'vcards' element from the =
vcard-4.0 namespace.  Specifically note the use of 'vcards' plural.  This i=
s because RFC 6351 explicitly states The <vcards> element MUST be present e=
ven when only a single vCard is present in an XML document.  The schema in =
24 points to the single vCard definition, and most (but not all) of the exa=
mples also show a single vCard, and this appears to be a violation of the R=
FC.

*         The SubscriberData element in EmergencyCallData:SubscriberInfo ha=
s the same problem as DataProviderContact above.

*         The schema shows an 'id' element as mandatory, but not all exampl=
es show this element and I don't see any explanation what it's for.  Sectio=
n 4.1.2 states that a 'ProviderID' element is required, but the schema has =
minOccurs=3D"0".  Several other elements are in the same boat.

Thanks,

Chris Santer

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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,sans-serif">After reviewing version 24, our team came up with s=
ome new comments:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,sans-serif"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in"><span style=3D"f=
ont-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol">&middot;</span><span style=3D"font-size=
:7.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans=
-serif">The draft should probably make &#8216;provided-by&#8217; all lower =
case; in 5.3 it is &#8216;Provided-By&#8217;.&nbsp; Xml tags are case sensi=
tive, and RFC 4119 shows it in all lower case when quoting in text (see sec=
tion
 2.2.4).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in"><span style=3D"f=
ont-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol">&middot;</span><span style=3D"font-size=
:7.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans=
-serif">The example in draft 24 section 5.3 now shows the &#8216;EmergencyC=
allDataValue&#8217; element in the geopriv10 namespace, which seems incorre=
ct.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in"><span style=3D"f=
ont-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol">&middot;</span><span style=3D"font-size=
:7.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans=
-serif">There is a &#8216;DataProviderReference&#8217; element defined in t=
he EmergencyCallData:ProviderInfo namespace &#8211; however it doesn&#8217;=
t actually fall within the ProviderInfoType definition like it does
 in other info types, and like it is used in the examples.&nbsp; This does =
seem like a problem in the schema.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in"><span style=3D"f=
ont-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol">&middot;</span><span style=3D"font-size=
:7.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans=
-serif">Also not sure if the &#8216;DataProviderReference&#8217; element th=
at is shown directly in the PIDF-LO &#8216;provided-by&#8217; is really sup=
posed to be there.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Sy=
mbol"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">&middot;<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:=
&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">The DataProviderContact element is declared=
 in the schema as an &#8220;xc:vcardType&#8221;; instead, it should be decl=
ared as a type within the EmergencyCallData:ProviderInfo
 namespace that contains a &#8216;vcards&#8217; element from the vcard-4.0 =
namespace.&nbsp; Specifically note the use of &#8216;vcards&#8217; plural.&=
nbsp; This is because RFC 6351 explicitly states The &lt;vcards&gt; element=
 MUST be present even when only a single vCard is present in an XML documen=
t.&nbsp;
 The schema in 24 points to the single vCard definition, and most (but not =
all) of the examples also show a single vCard, and this appears to be a vio=
lation of the RFC.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Sy=
mbol"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">&middot;<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &qu=
ot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:=
&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">The SubscriberData element in EmergencyCall=
Data:SubscriberInfo has the same problem as DataProviderContact above.<o:p>=
</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in"><span style=3D"f=
ont-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol">&middot;</span><span style=3D"font-size=
:7.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans=
-serif">The schema shows an &#8216;id&#8217; element as mandatory, but not =
all examples show this element and I don&#8217;t see any explanation what i=
t&#8217;s for.&nbsp; Section 4.1.2 states that a &#8216;ProviderID&#8217; e=
lement is
 required, but the schema has minOccurs=3D&#8221;0&#8221;.&nbsp; Several ot=
her elements are in the same boat.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,sans-serif"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,sans-serif">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,sans-serif"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,sans-serif">Chris Santer<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Some comments:


1:  The title is not clear enough that this mechanism does establish 
an interactive session.  I've made this suggestion before, and 
thought it had been agreed to.  We need to change the title to 
something more clear.  For example, "non-interactive emergency call", 
"non human-associated emergency call".  This also occurs in the 
Abstract, second paragraph, fifth line, in the titles of some 
sections, etc.

2:  Abstract, second paragraph, third line: please replace "or 
vehicles sending crash data" with another example.  Vehicle AACN 
systems establish an interactive session, this is considered more 
critical than transmitting the data.  Further, vehicle data is not 
sent using CAP.  How about using a burglar or fire alarm?

3: Introduction, second paragraph, third and fourth line: same as (2).

4: Introduction, fifth paragraph: this should be mentioned in the Abstract.

5: Multiple locations: the 'purpose' and MIME type should use 
'emergencyCallData' rather than 'emergencyCall'.

6: The document suffers from poor grammar in multiple locations, 
e.g., sentences omitting "is" or "the", word sequences such as "the 
it is", "will depends", "in case that", etc.


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As Chris Santer pointed out in this email
<http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ecrit/current/msg08927.html>:

The DataProviderContact element is declared in the schema as an
> =E2=80=9Cxc:vcardType=E2=80=9D; instead, it should ... [contain] a =E2=80=
=98vcards=E2=80=99 element from
> the vcard-4.0 namespace.  Specifically note the use of =E2=80=98vcards=E2=
=80=99 plural.
> This is because RFC 6351 explicitly states The <vcards> element MUST be
> present even when only a single vCard is present in an XML document.  The
> schema in 24 points to the single vCard definition, and most (but not all=
)
> of the examples also show a single vCard, and this appears to be a
> violation of the RFC.
>

Would it be possible to get an informal spot ruling here on the mailing
list on whether the intent here is to use <vcard> (singluar, as currently
specified) or <vcards> (plural, as required by RFC 6351)?

Thanks,
-Archie

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div><div>As Chris Santer pointed out in <a href=3D"http:/=
/www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ecrit/current/msg08927.html">this email</a>:=
<br><br><blockquote style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid=
 rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex" class=3D"gmail_quote"><span style=3D"fo=
nt-size:11pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">The
 DataProviderContact element is declared in the schema as an=20
=E2=80=9Cxc:vcardType=E2=80=9D; instead, it should ... [contain] a =E2=80=
=98vcards=E2=80=99 element from the vcard-4.0=20
namespace.=C2=A0 Specifically note the use of =E2=80=98vcards=E2=80=99 plur=
al.=C2=A0 This is=20
because RFC 6351 explicitly states The &lt;vcards&gt; element MUST be=20
present even when only a single vCard is present in an XML document.=C2=A0
 The schema in 24 points to the single vCard definition, and most (but=20
not all) of the examples also show a single vCard, and this appears to=20
be a violation of the RFC.</span> <br></blockquote><br></div>Would it be po=
ssible to get an informal spot ruling here on the mailing list on whether t=
he intent here is to use <span style=3D"font-family:monospace">&lt;vcard&gt=
;</span> (singluar, as currently specified) or <span style=3D"font-family:m=
onospace">&lt;vcards&gt;</span> (plural, as required by RFC 6351)?<br><br><=
/div>Thanks,<br>-Archie<br><br></div>

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Andy and I reviewed this erratum and believe it is correct and should be
accepted as an editorial issue.

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5222,
"LoST: A Location-to-Service Translation Protocol".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5222&eid=4174

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Type: Technical
Reported by: Dan Banks <dbanks@ddti.net>

Section: 15 & Apdx A

Original Text
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In section 15, the Exception pattern says (in part):
  locationProfileUnrecognized =
    element locationProfileUnrecognized {
      attribute unsupportedProfiles { xsd:NMTOKENS },
      basicException
    }

The corresponding section in Appendix A says:
       <define name="locationProfileUnrecognized">
         <element name="locationProfileUnrecognized">
           <attribute name="unsupportedProfiles">
             <data type="NMTOKENS"/>
           </attribute>
           <ref name="basicException"/>
         </element>
       </define>


Corrected Text
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Section 15 should say:
  locationProfileUnrecognized =
    element locationProfileUnrecognized {
      basicException
    }

Appendix A should say:
       <define name="locationProfileUnrecognized">
         <element name="locationProfileUnrecognized">
           <ref name="basicException"/>
         </element>
       </define>


Notes
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The ‘unsupportedProfiles’ attribute is not referenced anywhere else in the text of the document; no instruction is given describing the use of this attribute.  This, by itself, is problematic.  However, based on the type, it seems reasonable that the intent may have been to list the location profiles which the server is unable to understand.

Consider the condition under which the ‘locationProfileUnrecognized’ error is returned (section 12.1):
    8. If a server receives a request that only contains location
       information using profiles it does not understand, the server
       responds with a <locationProfileError>

If none of the locations include the optional ‘profile’ attribute, the server may not be able to identify any of the profiles and therefore would be incapable of returning a list of profile names.  This is especially problematic considering that the ‘unsupportedProfiles’ attribute is required by the schema.

Even in cases where one or more locations include the profile attribute, the client already knows what profiles were used in the request, so returning a list of these profiles does not provide new information to the client.

At best, use of the ‘unsupportedProfiles’ attribute appears to be redundant; at worst, it is impossible.  Therefore, the suggested course of action is to remove the attribute from the schema.

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RFC5222 (draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-10)
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Title               : LoST: A Location-to-Service Translation Protocol
Publication Date    : August 2008
Author(s)           : T. Hardie, A. Newton, H. Schulzrinne, H. Tschofenig
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies
Area                : Real-time Applications and Infrastructure
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG


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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5222,
"LoST: A Location-to-Service Translation Protocol".

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You may review the report below and at:
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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Dan Banks <dbanks@ddti.net>

Section: 12.1 Fig 15

Original Text
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     <location id="DEF 345" profile="geodetic-2d">
       <gml:Point id="point1" srsName="urn:ogc:def:crs:EPSG:4326">
         <gml:pos>42.656844 -73.348157</gml:pos>
       </gml:Point>
     </location>

Corrected Text
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     <location id="DEF 345" profile="geodetic-2d">
       <gml:Point id="point1" srsName="urn:ogc:def:crs:EPSG::4326">
         <gml:pos>42.656844 -73.348157</gml:pos>
       </gml:Point>
     </location>

Notes
-----
The 'srsName' in the location provided as part of example in Figure 15 is missing a required ':' between 'EPSG' and '4326'.

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RFC5222 (draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-10)
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Title               : LoST: A Location-to-Service Translation Protocol
Publication Date    : August 2008
Author(s)           : T. Hardie, A. Newton, H. Schulzrinne, H. Tschofenig
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5222,
"LoST: A Location-to-Service Translation Protocol".

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Type: Technical
Reported by: Dan Banks <dbanks@ddti.net>

Section: 15 & Apdx A

Original Text
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Section 15:  

exceptionContainer =
    (badRequest?
     & internalError?
     & serviceSubstitution?
     & defaultMappingReturned?
     & forbidden?
     & notFound?
     & loop?
     & serviceNotImplemented?
     & serverTimeout?
     & serverError?
     & locationInvalid?
     & locationProfileUnrecognized?),
    extensionPoint,
    source

And:

  serverError = element serverError { basicException }
  locationInvalid = element locationInvalid { basicException }

Appendix A:

           <optional>
             <ref name="serverError"/>
           </optional>
           <optional>
             <ref name="locationInvalid"/>
           </optional>

And:

       <define name="serverError">
         <element name="serverError">
           <ref name="basicException"/>
         </element>
       </define>

       <define name="locationInvalid">
         <element name="locationInvalid">
           <ref name="basicException"/>
         </element>
       </define>

Corrected Text
--------------
Section 15:  

exceptionContainer =
    (badRequest?
     & internalError?
     & serviceSubstitution?
     & defaultMappingReturned?
     & forbidden?
     & notFound?
     & loop?
     & serviceNotImplemented?
     & serverTimeout?
     & serverError?
     & SRSInvalid?
     & locationInvalid?
     & locationProfileUnrecognized?),
    extensionPoint,
    source

And:

  serverError = element serverError { basicException }
  SRSInvalid = element SRSInvalid { basicException }
  locationInvalid = element locationInvalid { basicException }

Appendix A:

           <optional>
             <ref name="serverError"/>
           </optional>
           <optional>
             <ref name="SRSInvalid"/>
           </optional>
           <optional>
             <ref name="locationInvalid"/>
           </optional>

And:

       <define name="serverError">
         <element name="serverError">
           <ref name="basicException"/>
         </element>
       </define>

       <define name="SRSInvalid">
         <element name="SRSInvalid">
           <ref name="basicException"/>
         </element>
       </define>

       <define name="locationInvalid">
         <element name="locationInvalid">
           <ref name="basicException"/>
         </element>
       </define>

Notes
-----
The SRSInvalid error is defined in section 13.1, but was omitted from the schemas.

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RFC5222 (draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-10)
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Title               : LoST: A Location-to-Service Translation Protocol
Publication Date    : August 2008
Author(s)           : T. Hardie, A. Newton, H. Schulzrinne, H. Tschofenig
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Andy and I reviewed this report and agree that =E2=80=98unsupportedProfiles=
=E2=80=99 is not
described in the text of RFC 5222.  We do not agree, however, with the
proposal that it be removed, as this may invalidate schema parsers which
based their schema validation on the schema provided.  We propose instead
that this schema element be marked as unused by the erratum.

Ted

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:tahoma,s=
ans-serif;font-size:small">Andy and I reviewed this report and agree that =
=E2=80=98unsupportedProfiles=E2=80=99 is not described in the text of RFC 5=
222.=C2=A0 We do not agree, however, with the proposal that it be removed, =
as this may invalidate schema parsers which based their schema validation o=
n the schema provided.=C2=A0 We propose instead that this schema element be=
 marked as unused by the erratum.<br><br>Ted<br></div></div>

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Andy and I have reviewed the schema and agree that the SRSInvalid error is
described in the text but not present in the schema.  If this schema
element is in use in the community or required by the working group, a new
version of the schema is needed to insert the element and would need to be
documented in a revised RFC.

regards,

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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div class=3D"gmail_default" style=3D"font-family:tahoma,s=
ans-serif;font-size:small">Andy and I have reviewed the schema and agree th=
at the SRSInvalid error is described in the text but not present in the sch=
ema.=C2=A0 If this schema element is in use in the community or required by=
 the working group, a new version of the schema is needed to insert the ele=
ment and would need to be documented in a revised RFC.<br><br></div><div cl=
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At 10:39 PM +0000 11/14/14, Brian Rosen wrote:

>  I think that is right, although we could have a business rule that 
> said only one.

The intent all along has been to have one vcard, so I can update the 
document to use <vcards> but specify that only one vcard SHOULD be 
provided.

>
>>  On Nov 14, 2014, at 7:33 AM, Archie Cobbs 
>> <<mailto:archie@emergencycallworks.com>archie@emergencycallworks.com> 
>> wrote:
>>
>>  As Chris Santer pointed out in 
>> <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ecrit/current/msg08927.html> 
>> this email:
>>
>>  The DataProviderContact element is declared in the schema as an 
>> "xc:vcardType"; instead, it should ... [contain] a 'vcards' 
>> element from the vcard-4.0 namespace.  Specifically note the use 
>> of 'vcards' plural.  This is because RFC 6351 explicitly states 
>> The <vcards> element MUST be present even when only a single vCard 
>> is present in an XML document.  The schema in 24 points to the 
>> single vCard definition, and most (but not all) of the examples 
>> also show a single vCard, and this appears to be a violation of 
>> the RFC.
>>
>>
>>  Would it be possible to get an informal spot ruling here on the 
>> mailing list on whether the intent here is to use <vcard> 
>> (singluar, as currently specified) or <vcards> (plural, as 
>> required by RFC 6351)?
>>
>>  Thanks,
>>  -Archie
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And if more than one is provided only the first shall be used.

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> On 15 Nov 2014, at 8:41 pm, Randall Gellens <randy@qti.qualcomm.com> wrote=
:
>=20
> At 10:39 PM +0000 11/14/14, Brian Rosen wrote:
>=20
>> I think that is right, although we could have a business rule that said o=
nly one.
>=20
> The intent all along has been to have one vcard, so I can update the docum=
ent to use <vcards> but specify that only one vcard SHOULD be provided.
>=20
>>=20
>>> On Nov 14, 2014, at 7:33 AM, Archie Cobbs <<mailto:archie@emergencycallw=
orks.com>archie@emergencycallworks.com> wrote:
>>>=20
>>> As Chris Santer pointed out in <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ecr=
it/current/msg08927.html> this email:
>>>=20
>>> The DataProviderContact element is declared in the schema as an "xc:vcar=
dType"; instead, it should ... [contain] a 'vcards' element from the vcard-4=
.0 namespace.  Specifically note the use of 'vcards' plural.  This is becaus=
e RFC 6351 explicitly states The <vcards> element MUST be present even when o=
nly a single vCard is present in an XML document.  The schema in 24 points t=
o the single vCard definition, and most (but not all) of the examples also s=
how a single vCard, and this appears to be a violation of the RFC.
>>>=20
>>>=20
>>> Would it be possible to get an informal spot ruling here on the mailing l=
ist on whether the intent here is to use <vcard> (singluar, as currently spe=
cified) or <vcards> (plural, as required by RFC 6351)?
>>>=20
>>> Thanks,
>>> -Archie
>>>=20
>>> _______________________________________________
>>> Ecrit mailing list
>>> <mailto:Ecrit@ietf.org>Ecrit@ietf.org
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>>=20
>>=20
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>=20
>=20
> --=20
> Randall Gellens
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