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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies of the IETF.

        Title           : Next-Generation Pan-European eCall
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-14.txt
	Pages           : 44
	Date            : 2016-10-03

Abstract:
   This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
   mechanisms to support the next generation of the Pan European in-
   vehicle emergency call service defined under the eSafety initiative
   of the European Commission (generally referred to as "eCall"). eCall
   is a standardized and mandated system for a special form of emergency
   calls placed by vehicles, providing real-time communications and an
   integrated set of related data.

   This document also registers MIME Content Types and an Emergency Call
   Additional Data Blocks for the eCall vehicle data and metadata/
   control data.


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This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies of the IETF.

        Title           : Next-Generation Vehicle-Initiated Emergency Calls
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Brian Rosen
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-13.txt
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	Date            : 2016-10-03

Abstract:
   This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
   mechanisms to support the next generation of emergency calls placed
   by vehicles (automatically in the event of a crash or serious
   incident, or manually invoked by a vehicle occupant) and conveying
   vehicle, sensor, and location data related to the crash or incident.
   Such calls are often referred to as "Automatic Crash Notification"
   (ACN), or "Advanced Automatic Crash Notification" (AACN), even in the
   case of manual trigger.  The "Advanced" qualifier refers to the
   ability to carry a richer set of data.

   This document also registers a MIME Content Type and Emergency Call
   Additional Data Block for the vehicle, sensor, and location data
   (often referred to as "crash data" even though there is not
   necessarily a crash).  An external specification for the data format,
   contents, and structure are referenced in this document.

   This document reuses the technical aspects of next-generation pan-
   European eCall (a mandated and standardized system for emergency
   calls by in-vehicle systems within Europe and other regions).
   However, this document specifies a different set of vehicle (crash)
   data, specifically, the Vehicle Emergency Data Set (VEDS) rather than
   the eCall Minimum Set of Data (MSD).  This document is an extension
   of the eCall document, with the primary differences being that this
   document makes the MSD data set optional and VEDS mandatory, and adds
   attribute values to the eCall metadata/control object to permit
   greater functionality.  This document registers a new INFO package
   (identical to that registered for eCall but with the addition of the
   VEDS MIME type).  This document also describes legacy (circuit-
   switched) ACN systems and their migration to next-generation
   emergency calling, to provide background information and context.


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Hi everyone,

An issue arose with the MIME media type registrations.  After 
discussion and consultation on the meda-types list and with 
individuals, to address it, I added text to the IANA Considerations 
section of eCall to formalize the "EmergencyCallData" subtype tree. 
I want to thank Ned Freed for his help.


At 8:23 PM -0700 9/25/16, Randall Gellens wrote:

>  I updated car-crash to -12, to add a sentence to the Terminology 
> section that clarifies that "IVS" can mean either an IVS or TSP 
> when discussing signaling.
>
>
>  At 8:11 PM -0700 9/24/16, Randall Gellens wrote:
>
>>   Hi ECRIT,
>>
>>   The versions draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-13 & 
>> draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-11 address all comments.
>>
>>   --Randy
>>
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Thank you Randy (and Ned).

Now that that is resolved, we will go to WGLC.

On Oct 3, 2016 10:53, "Randall Gellens" <rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org> wrote:

> Hi everyone,
>
> An issue arose with the MIME media type registrations.  After discussion
> and consultation on the meda-types list and with individuals, to address
> it, I added text to the IANA Considerations section of eCall to formalize
> the "EmergencyCallData" subtype tree. I want to thank Ned Freed for his
> help.
>
>
> At 8:23 PM -0700 9/25/16, Randall Gellens wrote:
>
>  I updated car-crash to -12, to add a sentence to the Terminology section
>> that clarifies that "IVS" can mean either an IVS or TSP when discussing
>> signaling.
>>
>>
>>  At 8:11 PM -0700 9/24/16, Randall Gellens wrote:
>>
>>   Hi ECRIT,
>>>
>>>   The versions draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-13 & draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-11
>>> address all comments.
>>>
>>>   --Randy
>>>
>>>   _______________________________________________
>>>   Ecrit mailing list
>>>   Ecrit@ietf.org
>>>   https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ecrit
>>>
>>
>>
>>  --
>>  Randall Gellens
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<p dir=3D"ltr">Thank you Randy (and Ned).</p>
<p dir=3D"ltr">Now that that is resolved, we will go to WGLC.</p>
<div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Oct 3, 2016 10=
:53, &quot;Randall Gellens&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:rg%2Bietf@randy.pens=
ive.org">rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br type=3D"attribution"><=
blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px=
 #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Hi everyone,<br>
<br>
An issue arose with the MIME media type registrations.=C2=A0 After discussi=
on and consultation on the meda-types list and with individuals, to address=
 it, I added text to the IANA Considerations section of eCall to formalize =
the &quot;EmergencyCallData&quot; subtype tree. I want to thank Ned Freed f=
or his help.<br>
<br>
<br>
At 8:23 PM -0700 9/25/16, Randall Gellens wrote:<br>
<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
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=C2=A0I updated car-crash to -12, to add a sentence to the Terminology sect=
ion that clarifies that &quot;IVS&quot; can mean either an IVS or TSP when =
discussing signaling.<br>
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=C2=A0At 8:11 PM -0700 9/24/16, Randall Gellens wrote:<br>
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=C2=A0 Hi ECRIT,<br>
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=C2=A0 The versions draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-13 &amp; draft-ietf-ecrit-car-cr=
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Hi Allison,

In our phone call a few weeks ago, I understood you were going to 
issue WG LC for these two docs right away, in parallel with 
resolution of the MIME issue, and run LC for only one week because of 
the amount of time the group (including Ivo) have considered the docs 
to have been in LC already.  I'm curious what changed that made you 
delay the LC until today, and run for two weeks?

--Randy

At 12:03 PM -0400 10/4/16, Az Mankin wrote:

>  Thank you Randy (and Ned).
>
>  Now that that is resolved, we will go to WGLC.
>
>
>  On Oct 3, 2016 10:53, "Randall Gellens" 
> <<mailto:rg%2Bietf@randy.pensive.org>rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org> 
> wrote:
>
>  Hi everyone,
>
>  An issue arose with the MIME media type registrations.  After 
> discussion and consultation on the meda-types list and with 
> individuals, to address it, I added text to the IANA Considerations 
> section of eCall to formalize the "EmergencyCallData" subtype tree. 
> I want to thank Ned Freed for his help.
>
>
>  At 8:23 PM -0700 9/25/16, Randall Gellens wrote:
>
>   I updated car-crash to -12, to add a sentence to the Terminology 
> section that clarifies that "IVS" can mean either an IVS or TSP 
> when discussing signaling.
>
>
>   At 8:11 PM -0700 9/24/16, Randall Gellens wrote:
>
>    Hi ECRIT,
>
>    The versions draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-13 & 
> draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-11 address all comments.
>
>    --Randy
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Hi,

Again, we need to decide on what to do regarding using Content-ID as a SIP
header field.

If we decide to not care about the fact the header field hasn=B9t been
defined for SIP, we should at least say that in the spec.

The best thing would obviously be to get the SIPCORE draft adopted, as
this is not an ECRIT-specific issue.

Regards,

Christer


On 05/10/16 21:15, "Ecrit on behalf of Randall Gellens"
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>Hi Allison,
>
>In our phone call a few weeks ago, I understood you were going to
>issue WG LC for these two docs right away, in parallel with
>resolution of the MIME issue, and run LC for only one week because of
>the amount of time the group (including Ivo) have considered the docs
>to have been in LC already.  I'm curious what changed that made you
>delay the LC until today, and run for two weeks?
>
>--Randy
>
>At 12:03 PM -0400 10/4/16, Az Mankin wrote:
>
>>  Thank you Randy (and Ned).
>>
>>  Now that that is resolved, we will go to WGLC.
>>
>>
>>  On Oct 3, 2016 10:53, "Randall Gellens"
>> <<mailto:rg%2Bietf@randy.pensive.org>rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org>
>> wrote:
>>
>>  Hi everyone,
>>
>>  An issue arose with the MIME media type registrations.  After
>> discussion and consultation on the meda-types list and with
>> individuals, to address it, I added text to the IANA Considerations
>> section of eCall to formalize the "EmergencyCallData" subtype tree.
>> I want to thank Ned Freed for his help.
>>
>>
>>  At 8:23 PM -0700 9/25/16, Randall Gellens wrote:
>>
>>   I updated car-crash to -12, to add a sentence to the Terminology
>> section that clarifies that "IVS" can mean either an IVS or TSP
>> when discussing signaling.
>>
>>
>>   At 8:11 PM -0700 9/24/16, Randall Gellens wrote:
>>
>>    Hi ECRIT,
>>
>>    The versions draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-13 &
>> draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-11 address all comments.
>>
>>    --Randy
>>
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Hi,

One way to solve the Content-ID issue would be to ALWAYS use a multipart MI=
ME, even if we only carry one body part. See example in section 12.2.2.3 of=
 RFC 6086.

Another advantage would be that we would always the same Content-Dispositio=
n header field value for the MSD/control body parts. Currently the value is=
 dependent on whether there are other body parts in the message or not, whi=
ch is a little strange. So, the multipart/MIME would have C-D:info-package =
and the MSD/control body part would have C-D:by-reference.

Comments?

Regards,

Christer

(It may still be a good idea to define usage of Content-ID for SIP, but the=
n the ECRIT specs would not be held up due to that work)

--_000_D41C26AC10977christerholmbergericssoncom_
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<meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html; charset=3Dus-ascii"=
>
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<body style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-lin=
e-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-fami=
ly: Calibri, sans-serif;">
<div>Hi,</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>One way to solve the Content-ID issue would be to ALWAYS use a multipa=
rt MIME, even if we only carry one body part. See example in section 12.2.2=
.3 of RFC 6086.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Another advantage would be that we would always the same Content-Dispo=
sition header field value for the MSD/control body parts. Currently the val=
ue is dependent on whether there are other body parts in the message or not=
, which is a little strange. So,
 the multipart/MIME would have C-D:info-package and the MSD/control body pa=
rt would have C-D:by-reference.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Comments?</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Regards,</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Christer</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>(It may still be a good idea to define usage of Content-ID for SIP, bu=
t then the ECRIT specs would not be held up due to that work)</div>
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On 10/6/16 8:58 AM, Christer Holmberg wrote:
> Hi,
>
> One way to solve the Content-ID issue would be to ALWAYS use a multipart
> MIME, even if we only carry one body part. See example in section
> 12.2.2.3 of RFC 6086.

This is certainly a possibility

	Thanks,
	Paul

> Another advantage would be that we would always the same
> Content-Disposition header field value for the MSD/control body parts.
> Currently the value is dependent on whether there are other body parts
> in the message or not, which is a little strange. So, the multipart/MIME
> would have C-D:info-package and the MSD/control body part would have
> C-D:by-reference.
>
> Comments?
>
> Regards,
>
> Christer
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> (It may still be a good idea to define usage of Content-ID for SIP, but
> then the ECRIT specs would not be held up due to that work)
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I have been working on an implementation of the similar location mechanism =
described by draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-03, and have some feedback:

1)
For completeLocation, the actual element name in the schema is "completedlo=
cation", with a 'd' and lowercase 'l'.  It appears this should be "complete=
Location".  There is also a use of "completedLocation" on page 5 that shoul=
d be changed.  Also, there will only be a single completeLocation returned.

   ##
   ##       completeLocation
   ##
   div {
     completeLocation =3D
       element completedlocation {
         locationInformation
       }+
   }

Should be:

   ##
   ##       completeLocation
   ##
   div {
     completeLocation =3D
       element completeLocation {
         locationInformation
       }
   }

2)
An element "returnedLocationResponse" is defined by the schema, but not dis=
cussed in the text or illustrated in the examples:


   div {

     returnedLocationResponse =3D

       element returnedLocationResponse {

         completeLocation, similarLocation, extensionPoint

       }

   }

Perhaps we need a better way state that completeLocation or similarLocation=
 elements can be placed at the existing extension point within the LoST loc=
ationValidation element.

3)
It is desirable to have away for a client to specifically request RLI, inst=
ead of it being included any time that validation is performed.  Responses =
with multiple similar locations can quickly become large compared to respon=
ses without RLI, and may also incur additional processing cost at the serve=
r.  This could be wasteful if automated validation is being performed or if=
 the RLI is otherwise not understood or discarded.  I suggest an attribute =
be added to the findService request (perhaps rli:returnLocation) with defin=
ed values of { "none" | "similar"  | "complete" | "any" } to indicate which=
 return location types the client is interested in.  Further, I suggest tha=
t the server be restricted to including only RLI types in the response that=
 are requested, and that omitting the attribute from the request is equival=
ent to rli:returnLocation=3D"none".

4)
The text and schema state that the similarLocation and completeLocation ele=
ments include the "profile" attribute, but this is not shown in the example=
s.  RFC5222 makes the profile attribute optional in location chunks.  On th=
e server side, this means that any location chunks without a profile attrib=
ute need to be further analyzed to see if they can be recognized, which is =
an unnecessary complication.  On the client side, the response pertains to =
one particular location in the request (indicated by <locationUsed>), so th=
e profile could be assumed from that, but I would much rather have it be ex=
plicit.

I suggest we make the profile attribute mandatory where it is used within t=
his extension.  I also suggest we add text to the effect of "If completeLoc=
ation or similarLocation is included in the findService response, the profi=
le MUST be the same as that of the location in the request that is used to =
generate the findService response."

Also, section 4 states:

   completeLocation and similarLocation use the locationInformation

   element from [RFC5222<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5222>] including th=
e profile attribute which is

   useful if the request contains location information in a profile

   derived from the civic profile.

However, locationInformation is only a pattern defined in the schema in RFC=
5222, borrowed and reused here, not an actual element.  Suggest changing th=
e wording from "element" to "pattern".

5)
I would like to suggest that each element that users the locationInformatio=
n pattern should only represent one location.  That is, instead of a single=
 similarLocation element containing multiple civicAddress elements (as illu=
strated in the example), multiple similarLocation elements should be used w=
ith each containing a single civicAddress.

I am continuing to review this draft and may have additional comments.

Dan Banks

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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">I have been working on an implementation of the similar lo=
cation mechanism described by draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-03, and hav=
e some feedback:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">1)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">For completeLocation, the actual element name in the schem=
a is &#8220;completedlocation&#8221;, with a &#8216;d&#8217; and lowercase =
&#8216;l&#8217;.&nbsp; It appears this should be &#8220;completeLocation&#8=
221;.&nbsp; There is also a use
 of &#8220;completedLocation&#8221; on page 5 that should be changed.&nbsp;=
 Also, there will only be a single completeLocation returned.<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; ##<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; ##&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; comple=
teLocation<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; ##<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; div {<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; completeLocation =3D<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; element complete<span=
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o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; locationI=
nformation<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; }<span style=3D"backg=
round:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">&#43;</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; }<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Should be:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; ##<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; ##&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; comple=
teLocation<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; ##<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; div {<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; completeLocation =3D<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; element complete<span=
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:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; locationI=
nformation<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; }<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Co=
urier New&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp; }<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">2)<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">An element &#8220;returnedLocationResponse&#8221; is=
 defined by the schema, but not discussed in the text or illustrated in the=
 examples:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp; div {<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; returnedLocationResponse =3D<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; element returnedLocationResponse =
{<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; completeLocation, sim=
ilarLocation, extensionPoint<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; }<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp; }<o:p></o:p></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Perhaps we need a better way state that completeLoca=
tion or similarLocation elements can be placed at the existing extension po=
int within the LoST locationValidation element.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">3)<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">It is desirable to have away for a client to specifi=
cally request RLI, instead of it being included any time that validation is=
 performed.&nbsp; Responses with multiple similar locations can quickly bec=
ome large compared to responses without
 RLI, and may also incur additional processing cost at the server.&nbsp; Th=
is could be wasteful if automated validation is being performed or if the R=
LI is otherwise not understood or discarded.&nbsp; I suggest an attribute b=
e added to the findService request (perhaps
 rli:returnLocation) with defined values of { &#8220;none&#8221; | &#8220;s=
imilar&#8221;&nbsp; | &#8220;complete&#8221; | &#8220;any&#8221; } to indic=
ate which return location types the client is interested in.&nbsp; Further,=
 I suggest that the server be restricted to including only RLI types in the=
 response that
 are requested, and that omitting the attribute from the request is equival=
ent to rli:returnLocation=3D&#8221;none&#8221;.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">4)<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">The text and schema state that the similarLocation a=
nd completeLocation elements include the &#8220;profile&#8221; attribute, b=
ut this is not shown in the examples.&nbsp; RFC5222 makes the profile attri=
bute optional in location chunks.&nbsp; On the server side,
 this means that any location chunks without a profile attribute need to be=
 further analyzed to see if they can be recognized, which is an unnecessary=
 complication.&nbsp; On the client side, the response pertains to one parti=
cular location in the request (indicated
 by &lt;locationUsed&gt;), so the profile could be assumed from that, but I=
 would much rather have it be explicit.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I suggest we make the profile attribute mandatory wh=
ere it is used within this extension.&nbsp; I also suggest we add text to t=
he effect of &#8220;If completeLocation or similarLocation is included in t=
he findService response, the profile MUST be
 the same as that of the location in the request that is used to generate t=
he findService response.&#8221;
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Also, section 4 states:<o:p></o:p></p>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp; completeLocation and similarLocation use the locationInfo=
rmation<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp; element from [<a href=3D"https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5=
222" title=3D"&quot;LoST: A Location-to-Service Translation Protocol&quot;"=
>RFC5222</a>] including the profile attribute which is<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp; useful if the request contains location information in a =
profile<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>&nbsp;&nbsp; derived from the civic profile.<o:p></o:p></pre>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">However, locationInformation is only a pattern defin=
ed in the schema in RFC5222, borrowed and reused here, not an actual elemen=
t.&nbsp; Suggest changing the wording from &#8220;element&#8221; to &#8220;=
pattern&#8221;.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">5)<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I would like to suggest that each element that users=
 the locationInformation pattern should only represent one location.&nbsp; =
That is, instead of a single similarLocation element containing multiple ci=
vicAddress elements (as illustrated in
 the example), multiple similarLocation elements should be used with each c=
ontaining a single civicAddress.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I am continuing to review this draft and may have ad=
ditional comments.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Dan Banks<o:p></o:p></p>
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On 06/10/16 18:40, "Ecrit on behalf of Paul Kyzivat"
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>On 10/6/16 8:58 AM, Christer Holmberg wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> One way to solve the Content-ID issue would be to ALWAYS use a multipart
>> MIME, even if we only carry one body part. See example in section
>> 12.2.2.3 of RFC 6086.
>
>This is certainly a possibility
>
>	Thanks,
>	Paul
>
>> Another advantage would be that we would always the same
>> Content-Disposition header field value for the MSD/control body parts.
>> Currently the value is dependent on whether there are other body parts
>> in the message or not, which is a little strange. So, the multipart/MIME
>> would have C-D:info-package and the MSD/control body part would have
>> C-D:by-reference.
>>
>> Comments?
>>
>> Regards,
>>
>> Christer
>>
>> (It may still be a good idea to define usage of Content-ID for SIP, but
>> then the ECRIT specs would not be held up due to that work)
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At 12:58 PM +0000 10/6/16, Christer Holmberg wrote:

>  Hi,
>
>  One way to solve the Content-ID issue would be to ALWAYS use a 
> multipart MIME, even if we only carry one body part. See example in 
> section 12.2.2.3 of RFC 6086.
>
>  Another advantage would be that we would always the same 
> Content-Disposition header field value for the MSD/control body 
> parts. Currently the value is dependent on whether there are other 
> body parts in the message or not, which is a little strange. So, 
> the multipart/MIME would have C-D:info-package and the MSD/control 
> body part would have C-D:by-reference.
>
>  Comments?
>
>  Regards,
>
>  Christer
>
>  (It may still be a good idea to define usage of Content-ID for SIP, 
> but then the ECRIT specs would not be held up due to that work)


Hi Christer,

In view of the slow progress of your draft, I think the proposal to 
always use a multipart is the best option.  As you say, it simplifies 
the implementation because the C-D will always be "By-Reference".

(As I recall, the same idea was floated some time back, during the 
discussion about INFO.)

I agree that your draft should still progress, as it seems an 
oversight that C-ID is not included.

--Randy

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Hi,

>>  One way to solve the Content-ID issue would be to ALWAYS use a=20
>> multipart MIME, even if we only carry one body part. See example in=20
>> section 12.2.2.3 of RFC 6086.
>>
>>  Another advantage would be that we would always the same=20
>> Content-Disposition header field value for the MSD/control body parts.=20
>> Currently the value is dependent on whether there are other body parts=20
>> in the message or not, which is a little strange. So, the=20
>> multipart/MIME would have C-D:info-package and the MSD/control body=20
>> part would have C-D:by-reference.
>
> In view of the slow progress of your draft, I think the proposal to=20
> always use a multipart is the best option.  As you say, it simplifies=20
> the implementation because the C-D will always be "By-Reference".
>
> (As I recall, the same idea was floated some time back, during the=20
> discussion about INFO.)

So, unless someone objects, I suggest we move forward with such approach.=20

Also, I'd like to see the a new version of the draft BEFORE the end of the =
WGLC, so that I can perform a WGLC review based on that.

Regards,

Christer


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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies of the IETF.

        Title           : Next-Generation Vehicle-Initiated Emergency Calls
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Brian Rosen
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-14.txt
	Pages           : 42
	Date            : 2016-10-09

Abstract:
   This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
   mechanisms to support the next generation of emergency calls placed
   by vehicles (automatically in the event of a crash or serious
   incident, or manually invoked by a vehicle occupant) and conveying
   vehicle, sensor, and location data related to the crash or incident.
   Such calls are often referred to as "Automatic Crash Notification"
   (ACN), or "Advanced Automatic Crash Notification" (AACN), even in the
   case of manual trigger.  The "Advanced" qualifier refers to the
   ability to carry a richer set of data.

   This document also registers a MIME Content Type and Emergency Call
   Additional Data Block for the vehicle, sensor, and location data
   (often referred to as "crash data" even though there is not
   necessarily a crash).  An external specification for the data format,
   contents, and structure are referenced in this document.

   This document reuses the technical aspects of next-generation pan-
   European eCall (a mandated and standardized system for emergency
   calls by in-vehicle systems within Europe and other regions).
   However, this document specifies a different set of vehicle (crash)
   data, specifically, the Vehicle Emergency Data Set (VEDS) rather than
   the eCall Minimum Set of Data (MSD).  This document is an extension
   of the eCall document, with the primary differences being that this
   document makes the MSD data set optional and VEDS mandatory, and adds
   attribute values to the eCall metadata/control object to permit
   greater functionality.  This document registers a new INFO package
   (identical to that registered for eCall but with the addition of the
   VEDS MIME type).  This document also describes legacy (circuit-
   switched) ACN systems and their migration to next-generation
   emergency calling, to provide background information and context.


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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies of the IETF.

        Title           : Next-Generation Pan-European eCall
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-15.txt
	Pages           : 44
	Date            : 2016-10-09

Abstract:
   This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
   mechanisms to support the next generation of the Pan European in-
   vehicle emergency call service defined under the eSafety initiative
   of the European Commission (generally referred to as "eCall"). eCall
   is a standardized and mandated system for a special form of emergency
   calls placed by vehicles, providing real-time communications and an
   integrated set of related data.

   This document also registers MIME Content Types and an Emergency Call
   Additional Data Blocks for the eCall vehicle data and metadata/
   control data.


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At 8:55 AM +0000 10/9/16, Christer Holmberg wrote:

>  Hi,
>
>>>   One way to solve the Content-ID issue would be to ALWAYS use a
>>>  multipart MIME, even if we only carry one body part. See example in
>>>  section 12.2.2.3 of RFC 6086.
>>>
>>>   Another advantage would be that we would always the same
>>>  Content-Disposition header field value for the MSD/control body parts.
>>>  Currently the value is dependent on whether there are other body parts
>>>  in the message or not, which is a little strange. So, the
>>>  multipart/MIME would have C-D:info-package and the MSD/control body
>>>  part would have C-D:by-reference.
>>
>>  In view of the slow progress of your draft, I think the proposal to
>>  always use a multipart is the best option.  As you say, it simplifies
>>  the implementation because the C-D will always be "By-Reference".
>>
>>  (As I recall, the same idea was floated some time back, during the
>>  discussion about INFO.)
>
>  So, unless someone objects, I suggest we move forward with such approach.
>
>  Also, I'd like to see the a new version of the draft BEFORE the end 
> of the WGLC, so that I can perform a WGLC review based on that.

Now available.

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Hi,

Attached is my review of draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-15. I have not reviewed Sec=
tion 15.

Note that some of my comments probably apply to draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash =
also, so I ask the authors to take that into consideration.

Regards.

Christer

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Q1:

In Section 2, I suggest to change the title to "Applicability", because I t=
hink that is what is normally used.


Q2:

In Section 2, you should expand "3GPP" and "CEN" on first occurrence. In ad=
dition, I think there should be a reference with "3GPP IMS Emergency Callin=
g".


Q3:

In Section 2, the text says:

   "The technical contents of this document also provide a basis for
   reuse and extension for other vehicle-initiated emergency call
   Systems.

   Vehicles designed for multiple regions might need to support eCall
   and other Advanced Automatic Crash Notification (AACN) systems, such
   as described in [I-D.ietf-ecrit-car-crash]."

I don=B9t think the text is needed, but if you want to keep it you should e=
xplicitly say that it=B9s outside the scope of the document.


Q4:

In Section 3, you first describe eCall in general, which is good. But then,=
 in the last paragraph, you suddenly start talking about MIME types. I thin=
k you should add another chapter, giving a general overview of what the doc=
ument does. I guess you can re-use text from the Abstract.


Q5:

In Section 5, I suggest to re-name the title to "MSD Format", or something =
like that.


Q6:

In Section 6, please add references to the different SIP/MIME header fields=
 (Content-Type, Content-ID etc).


Q7:

In Section 6, the text says:

   "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always enclosed in a multipart
   body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in the
   SIP message)."

We did agree on this for INFO, but is there a reason for doing this also in=
 non-INFO requests?


Q8:

In Section 6, the text says:

   "Note that in some cases there might be intermediate
   multipart body parts between the top level multipart and the body
   part containing the MSD or metadata/control object."

I have no idea what that text means.


Q9:

In Section 9, I suggest to remove the bullet list. I don=B9t really underst=
and why it is needed, and it=B9s unclear what "This mechanism" refers to.
IF you want to list requirements associated with carrying control/metadata =
I think it should be in a separate section.


Q10:

In Section 9, the text says:

   "if the IVS sends a requested MSD in an INFO request and does not receiv=
e a SIP
   status message for the INFO request, it resends it; if the PSAP
   requests an MSD and does not receive a SIP status message for the
   INFO request, it resends it.)"

This is basic SIP,  and can be removed. Earlier you mention SIP re-transmis=
sion, and that=B9s enough. I think you should add the following, though:

   =B3Note that, per RFC6086, a 200 OK response to the INFO request only in=
dicates that the receiver has successfully received and accepted the INFO r=
equest."


Q11:

In Section 9, the text says:

   "The SIP response codes 600 (Busy Everywhere), 486 (Busy Here), and 603 =
(Decline) are used when
   the PSAP wants to reject a call but inform the vehicle occupants that
   it is aware of the situation."

Please add a reference to where this is defined.


Q12:

In Section 10.6, please add explicit text that says that multipart is used =
even if only a single body part is transported. You may even reference the =
example in RFC 6086. Also add explicit text saying that =B3Per RFC 6086, th=
e content disposition value of the multipart MIME is 'info-package', or som=
ething like that.


Q13:

In Section 10.6, similar to my earlier comment, I don=B9t understand the te=
xt about "intermediary body parts".


Q14:

In Section 11, you should add the Content-Disposition SIP header field (wit=
h 'info-package' value) to the INFO requests.

Regards,

Christer



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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Attached is my review of draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-15. =
I have not reviewed Section 15.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Note that some of my comments probably apply to draf=
t-ietf-ecrit-car-crash also, so I ask the authors to take that into conside=
ration.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Regards.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Christer<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">----------<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q1:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 2, I suggest to change the title to &#822=
0;Applicability&#8221;, because I think that is what is normally used.<o:p>=
</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q2:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 2, you should expand &#8220;3GPP&#8221; a=
nd &#8220;CEN&#8221; on first occurrence. In addition, I think there should=
 be a reference with &quot;3GPP IMS Emergency Calling&#8221;.<o:p></o:p></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q3:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 2, the text says:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;The technical contents of this do=
cument also provide a basis for<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; reuse and extension for other vehicle-i=
nitiated emergency call<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; Systems.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; Vehicles designed for multiple regions =
might need to support eCall<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; and other Advanced Automatic Crash Noti=
fication (AACN) systems, such<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; as described in [I-D.ietf-ecrit-car-cra=
sh].&#8221;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I don=B9t think the text is needed, but if you want =
to keep it you should explicitly say that it=B9s outside the scope of the d=
ocument.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q4:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 3, you first describe eCall in general, w=
hich is good. But then, in the last paragraph, you suddenly start talking a=
bout MIME types. I think you should add another chapter, giving a general o=
verview of what the document does.
 I guess you can re-use text from the Abstract.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q5:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 5, I suggest to re-name the title to &#82=
20;MSD Format&#8221;, or something like that.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q6:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 6, please add references to the different=
 SIP/MIME header fields (Content-Type, Content-ID etc).<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q7:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 6, the text says:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;An MSD or a metadata/control bloc=
k is always enclosed in a multipart<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; body part (even if it would otherwise b=
e the only body part in the<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; SIP message).&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">We did agree on this for INFO, but is there a reason=
 for doing this also in non-INFO requests?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q8:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 6, the text says:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;Note that in some cases there mig=
ht be intermediate<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; multipart body parts between the top le=
vel multipart and the body<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; part containing the MSD or metadata/con=
trol object.&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I have no idea what that text means.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q9:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 9, I suggest to remove the bullet list. I=
 don=B9t really understand why it is needed, and it=B9s unclear what &#8220=
;This mechanism&#8221; refers to.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">IF you want to list requirements associated with car=
rying control/metadata I think it should be in a separate section.<o:p></o:=
p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q10:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 9, the text says:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;if the IVS sends a requested MSD =
in an INFO request and does not receive a SIP<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; status message for the INFO request, it=
 resends it; if the PSAP<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; requests an MSD and does not receive a =
SIP status message for the<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; INFO request, it resends it.)&quot;<o:p=
></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">This is basic SIP,&nbsp; and can be removed. Earlier=
 you mention SIP re-transmission, and that=B9s enough. I think you should a=
dd the following, though:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; =B3Note that, per RFC6086, a 200 OK res=
ponse to the INFO request only indicates that the receiver has successfully=
 received and accepted the INFO request.&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q11:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 9, the text says:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;The SIP response codes 600 (Busy =
Everywhere), 486 (Busy Here), and 603 (Decline) are used when<o:p></o:p></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; the PSAP wants to reject a call but inf=
orm the vehicle occupants that<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; it is aware of the situation.&quot;&nbs=
p; <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Please add a reference to where this is defined.<o:p=
></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q12:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 10.6, please add explicit text that says =
that multipart is used even if only a single body part is transported. You =
may even reference the example in RFC 6086. Also add explicit text saying t=
hat =B3Per RFC 6086, the content disposition
 value of the multipart MIME is &#8216;info-package&#8217;, or something li=
ke that.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q13:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 10.6, similar to my earlier comment, I do=
n=B9t understand the text about &#8220;intermediary body parts&#8221;.<o:p>=
</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q14:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 11, you should add the Content-Dispositio=
n SIP header field (with &#8216;info-package&#8217; value) to the INFO requ=
ests.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Christer<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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Regarding Q4, I mean "add another PARAGRAPH" :)

From: Ecrit [mailto:ecrit-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg
Sent: 11 October 2016 21:38
To: ecrit@ietf.org
Subject: [Ecrit] Christer's review of draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-15 (excluding =
Section 15)

Hi,

Attached is my review of draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-15. I have not reviewed Sec=
tion 15.

Note that some of my comments probably apply to draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash =
also, so I ask the authors to take that into consideration.

Regards.

Christer

----------

Q1:

In Section 2, I suggest to change the title to "Applicability", because I t=
hink that is what is normally used.


Q2:

In Section 2, you should expand "3GPP" and "CEN" on first occurrence. In ad=
dition, I think there should be a reference with "3GPP IMS Emergency Callin=
g".


Q3:

In Section 2, the text says:

   "The technical contents of this document also provide a basis for
   reuse and extension for other vehicle-initiated emergency call
   Systems.

   Vehicles designed for multiple regions might need to support eCall
   and other Advanced Automatic Crash Notification (AACN) systems, such
   as described in [I-D.ietf-ecrit-car-crash]."

I don=B9t think the text is needed, but if you want to keep it you should e=
xplicitly say that it=B9s outside the scope of the document.


Q4:

In Section 3, you first describe eCall in general, which is good. But then,=
 in the last paragraph, you suddenly start talking about MIME types. I thin=
k you should add another chapter, giving a general overview of what the doc=
ument does. I guess you can re-use text from the Abstract.


Q5:

In Section 5, I suggest to re-name the title to "MSD Format", or something =
like that.


Q6:

In Section 6, please add references to the different SIP/MIME header fields=
 (Content-Type, Content-ID etc).


Q7:

In Section 6, the text says:

   "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always enclosed in a multipart
   body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in the
   SIP message)."

We did agree on this for INFO, but is there a reason for doing this also in=
 non-INFO requests?


Q8:

In Section 6, the text says:

   "Note that in some cases there might be intermediate
   multipart body parts between the top level multipart and the body
   part containing the MSD or metadata/control object."

I have no idea what that text means.


Q9:

In Section 9, I suggest to remove the bullet list. I don=B9t really underst=
and why it is needed, and it=B9s unclear what "This mechanism" refers to.
IF you want to list requirements associated with carrying control/metadata =
I think it should be in a separate section.


Q10:

In Section 9, the text says:

   "if the IVS sends a requested MSD in an INFO request and does not receiv=
e a SIP
   status message for the INFO request, it resends it; if the PSAP
   requests an MSD and does not receive a SIP status message for the
   INFO request, it resends it.)"

This is basic SIP,  and can be removed. Earlier you mention SIP re-transmis=
sion, and that=B9s enough. I think you should add the following, though:

   =B3Note that, per RFC6086, a 200 OK response to the INFO request only in=
dicates that the receiver has successfully received and accepted the INFO r=
equest."


Q11:

In Section 9, the text says:

   "The SIP response codes 600 (Busy Everywhere), 486 (Busy Here), and 603 =
(Decline) are used when
   the PSAP wants to reject a call but inform the vehicle occupants that
   it is aware of the situation."

Please add a reference to where this is defined.


Q12:

In Section 10.6, please add explicit text that says that multipart is used =
even if only a single body part is transported. You may even reference the =
example in RFC 6086. Also add explicit text saying that =B3Per RFC 6086, th=
e content disposition value of the multipart MIME is 'info-package', or som=
ething like that.


Q13:

In Section 10.6, similar to my earlier comment, I don=B9t understand the te=
xt about "intermediary body parts".


Q14:

In Section 11, you should add the Content-Disposition SIP header field (wit=
h 'info-package' value) to the INFO requests.

Regards,

Christer



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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:#1F497D">Regarding Q4, I mean &=
#8220;add another PARAGRAPH&#8221; :)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><a name=3D"_MailEndCompose"><span style=3D"color:#1F=
497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></a></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"mso-fareast-languag=
e:EN-GB">From:</span></b><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"mso-fareast-language=
:EN-GB"> Ecrit [mailto:ecrit-bounces@ietf.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Christer Holmberg<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 11 October 2016 21:38<br>
<b>To:</b> ecrit@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Ecrit] Christer's review of draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-15 (exc=
luding Section 15)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Attached is my review of draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-15. =
I have not reviewed Section 15.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Note that some of my comments probably apply to draf=
t-ietf-ecrit-car-crash also, so I ask the authors to take that into conside=
ration.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Regards.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Christer<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">----------<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q1:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 2, I suggest to change the title to &#822=
0;Applicability&#8221;, because I think that is what is normally used.<o:p>=
</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q2:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 2, you should expand &#8220;3GPP&#8221; a=
nd &#8220;CEN&#8221; on first occurrence. In addition, I think there should=
 be a reference with &quot;3GPP IMS Emergency Calling&#8221;.<o:p></o:p></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q3:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 2, the text says:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;The technical contents of this do=
cument also provide a basis for<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; reuse and extension for other vehicle-i=
nitiated emergency call<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; Systems.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; Vehicles designed for multiple regions =
might need to support eCall<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; and other Advanced Automatic Crash Noti=
fication (AACN) systems, such<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; as described in [I-D.ietf-ecrit-car-cra=
sh].&#8221;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I don=B9t think the text is needed, but if you want =
to keep it you should explicitly say that it=B9s outside the scope of the d=
ocument.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q4:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 3, you first describe eCall in general, w=
hich is good. But then, in the last paragraph, you suddenly start talking a=
bout MIME types. I think you should add another chapter, giving a general o=
verview of what the document does.
 I guess you can re-use text from the Abstract.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q5:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 5, I suggest to re-name the title to &#82=
20;MSD Format&#8221;, or something like that.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q6:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 6, please add references to the different=
 SIP/MIME header fields (Content-Type, Content-ID etc).<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q7:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 6, the text says:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;An MSD or a metadata/control bloc=
k is always enclosed in a multipart<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; body part (even if it would otherwise b=
e the only body part in the<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; SIP message).&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">We did agree on this for INFO, but is there a reason=
 for doing this also in non-INFO requests?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q8:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 6, the text says:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;Note that in some cases there mig=
ht be intermediate<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; multipart body parts between the top le=
vel multipart and the body<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; part containing the MSD or metadata/con=
trol object.&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I have no idea what that text means.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q9:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 9, I suggest to remove the bullet list. I=
 don=B9t really understand why it is needed, and it=B9s unclear what &#8220=
;This mechanism&#8221; refers to.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">IF you want to list requirements associated with car=
rying control/metadata I think it should be in a separate section.<o:p></o:=
p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q10:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 9, the text says:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;if the IVS sends a requested MSD =
in an INFO request and does not receive a SIP<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; status message for the INFO request, it=
 resends it; if the PSAP<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; requests an MSD and does not receive a =
SIP status message for the<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; INFO request, it resends it.)&quot;<o:p=
></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">This is basic SIP,&nbsp; and can be removed. Earlier=
 you mention SIP re-transmission, and that=B9s enough. I think you should a=
dd the following, though:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; =B3Note that, per RFC6086, a 200 OK res=
ponse to the INFO request only indicates that the receiver has successfully=
 received and accepted the INFO request.&quot;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q11:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 9, the text says:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;The SIP response codes 600 (Busy =
Everywhere), 486 (Busy Here), and 603 (Decline) are used when<o:p></o:p></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; the PSAP wants to reject a call but inf=
orm the vehicle occupants that<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">&nbsp;&nbsp; it is aware of the situation.&quot;&nbs=
p; <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Please add a reference to where this is defined.<o:p=
></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q12:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 10.6, please add explicit text that says =
that multipart is used even if only a single body part is transported. You =
may even reference the example in RFC 6086. Also add explicit text saying t=
hat =B3Per RFC 6086, the content disposition
 value of the multipart MIME is &#8216;info-package&#8217;, or something li=
ke that.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q13:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 10.6, similar to my earlier comment, I do=
n=B9t understand the text about &#8220;intermediary body parts&#8221;.<o:p>=
</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Q14:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">In Section 11, you should add the Content-Dispositio=
n SIP header field (with &#8216;info-package&#8217; value) to the INFO requ=
ests.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Christer<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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Hi Christer,

Thanks for your review.  Please see initial answers (before I've 
edited the draft) below.

--Randy

At 6:44 PM +0000 10/11/16, Christer Holmberg wrote:

>  Regarding Q4, I mean "add another PARAGRAPH" :)
>
>  From: Ecrit [mailto:ecrit-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg
>  Sent: 11 October 2016 21:38
>  To: ecrit@ietf.org
>  Subject: [Ecrit] Christer's review of draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-15 
> (excluding Section 15)
>
>  Hi,
>
>  Attached is my review of draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-15. I have not 
> reviewed Section 15.
>
>  Note that some of my comments probably apply to 
> draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash also, so I ask the authors to take that 
> into consideration.
>
>  Regards.
>
>  Christer
>
>  ----------
>
>  Q1:
>
>  In Section 2, I suggest to change the title to "Applicability", 
> because I think that is what is normally used.

I've always used "Document Scope" for this material (e.g., see RFC 7852).


>  Q2:
>
>  In Section 2, you should expand "3GPP" and "CEN" on first 
> occurrence. In addition, I think there should be a reference with 
> "3GPP IMS Emergency Calling".

Good suggestion, thanks, I'll add these.

>
>
>  Q3:
>
>  In Section 2, the text says:
>
>     "The technical contents of this document also provide a basis for
>     reuse and extension for other vehicle-initiated emergency call
>     Systems.
>
>     Vehicles designed for multiple regions might need to support eCall
>     and other Advanced Automatic Crash Notification (AACN) systems, such
>     as described in [I-D.ietf-ecrit-car-crash]."
>
>  I don't think the text is needed, but if you want to keep it you 
> should explicitly say that it's outside the scope of the document.

I think the first sentence helps explain the expansion items (e.g., 
used by the car-crash draft), and the second was added by request of 
Keith a year or two ago; I'm happy to reword both sentences to make 
it more clear that this is background info.


>  Q4:
>
>  In Section 3, you first describe eCall in general, which is good. 
> But then, in the last paragraph, you suddenly start talking about 
> MIME types. I think you should add another chapter, giving a 
> general overview of what the document does. I guess you can re-use 
> text from the Abstract.

I see your point.  I'll add another paragraph saying what the draft 
does, to provide a smoother transition into the one about the MIME 
types.


>  Q5:
>
>  In Section 5, I suggest to re-name the title to "MSD Format", or 
> something like that.

What is your concern with the current title?  To me, "Vehicle Data" 
is more general and hence easier to understand for someone who 
doesn't know what an MSD is.  The text explains that the data is 
called an MSD.  How about if I add "(MSD)" to the title?  That way, 
someone who knows they are looking for the MSD info can find it, and 
someone who doesn't know what an MSD is will know what the section is 
about.



>  Q6:
>
>  In Section 6, please add references to the different SIP/MIME 
> header fields (Content-Type, Content-ID etc).

We have multiple references to RFC 7852.  Do you think we need to 
also reference RFC 3261 for Call-Info and RFC 2045 and/or RFC 2392 
for Content-ID and RFC 2045 for Content-Type and Content-Disposition?


>  Q7:
>
>  In Section 6, the text says:
>
>     "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always enclosed in a multipart
>     body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in the
>     SIP message)."
>
>  We did agree on this for INFO, but is there a reason for doing this 
> also in non-INFO requests?

I suspect so, and it's the same reason: so that Content-ID is valid. 
(In reality, I can't imagine that an MSD would be the only body part 
in an initial INVITE, but I think we need to say so just in case.)


>  Q8:
>
>  In Section 6, the text says:
>
>     "Note that in some cases there might be intermediate
>     multipart body parts between the top level multipart and the body
>     part containing the MSD or metadata/control object."
>
>  I have no idea what that text means.

It's just trying to note that there might be multiple levels of 
multipart.  I'll reword this to make it simpler.


>  Q9:
>
>  In Section 9, I suggest to remove the bullet list. I don't really 
> understand why it is needed, and it's unclear what "This mechanism" 
> refers to.
>  IF you want to list requirements associated with carrying 
> control/metadata I think it should be in a separate section.

I think you're right that the bullet list and some surrounding text 
can be deleted.


>  Q10:
>
>  In Section 9, the text says:
>
>     "if the IVS sends a requested MSD in an INFO request and does 
> not receive a SIP
>     status message for the INFO request, it resends it; if the PSAP
>     requests an MSD and does not receive a SIP status message for the
>     INFO request, it resends it.)"
>
>  This is basic SIP,  and can be removed. Earlier you mention SIP 
> re-transmission, and that's enough. I think you should add the 
> following, though:
>
>     "Note that, per RFC6086, a 200 OK response to the INFO request 
> only indicates that the receiver has successfully received and 
> accepted the INFO request."

I'm happy to delete the text after "Normal SIP retransmission handles 
non-receipt of requested data".  I agree it isn't needed.

Is there specific text that you think is potentially confusing and 
hence needs the note about the semantics of a 200 OK?


>  Q11:
>
>  In Section 9, the text says:
>
>     "The SIP response codes 600 (Busy Everywhere), 486 (Busy Here), 
> and 603 (Decline) are used when
>     the PSAP wants to reject a call but inform the vehicle occupants that
>     it is aware of the situation."
>
>  Please add a reference to where this is defined.

I'll reword this text.


>  Q12:
>
>  In Section 10.6, please add explicit text that says that multipart 
> is used even if only a single body part is transported.

I'll add text to make it more explicit.

>   You may even reference the example in RFC 6086. Also add explicit 
> text saying that "Per RFC 6086, the content disposition value of 
> the multipart MIME is 'info-package', or something like that.

We had an email discussion about this some weeks back, and Paul 
pointed out that it wasn't always correct for the top level multipart 
to have a Content-Disposition of INFO-Package.

>
>
>  Q13:
>
>  In Section 10.6, similar to my earlier comment, I don't understand 
> the text about "intermediary body parts".

I'll fix this as above.

>  Q14:
>
>  In Section 11, you should add the Content-Disposition SIP header 
> field (with 'info-package' value) to the INFO requests.

In the email discussion, Paul said it was better to leave it off.


-- 
Randall Gellens
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On 10/11/16 6:56 PM, Randall Gellens wrote:

> I suspect so, and it's the same reason: so that Content-ID is valid. (In
> reality, I can't imagine that an MSD would be the only body part in an
> initial INVITE, but I think we need to say so just in case.)

I wonder how many implementations will break when they get an INVITE 
with a multipart body but no offer included. :-)


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Hi,

Please see inline:


>>  Q3:
>>
>>  In Section 2, the text says:
>>
>>     "The technical contents of this document also provide a basis for
>>     reuse and extension for other vehicle-initiated emergency call
>>     Systems.
>>
>>     Vehicles designed for multiple regions might need to support eCall
>>     and other Advanced Automatic Crash Notification (AACN) systems, such
>>     as described in [I-D.ietf-ecrit-car-crash]."
>>
>>  I don't think the text is needed, but if you want to keep it you
>> should explicitly say that it's outside the scope of the document.
>
>I think the first sentence helps explain the expansion items (e.g.,
>used by the car-crash draft), and the second was added by request of
>Keith a year or two ago; I'm happy to reword both sentences to make
>it more clear that this is background info.


I just want to make it clear that none of the above is something that is
covered in THIS document.


>>  Q5:
>>
>>  In Section 5, I suggest to re-name the title to "MSD Format", or
>> something like that.
>
>What is your concern with the current title?  To me, "Vehicle Data"
>is more general and hence easier to understand for someone who
>doesn't know what an MSD is.  The text explains that the data is
>called an MSD.  How about if I add "(MSD)" to the title?  That way,
>someone who knows they are looking for the MSD info can find it, and
>someone who doesn't know what an MSD is will know what the section is
>about.

I was thinking more about this, and I=B9m ok with the current title.


>>  Q6:
>>
>>  In Section 6, please add references to the different SIP/MIME
>> header fields (Content-Type, Content-ID etc).
>
>We have multiple references to RFC 7852.  Do you think we need to
>also reference RFC 3261 for Call-Info and RFC 2045 and/or RFC 2392
>for Content-ID and RFC 2045 for Content-Type and Content-Disposition?


I think it would be good to have a reference on first occurrence,
especially since some header fields aren=B9t SIP header fields.


>>  Q7:
>>
>>  In Section 6, the text says:
>>
>>     "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always enclosed in a
>>multipart
>>     body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in the
>>     SIP message)."
>>
>>  We did agree on this for INFO, but is there a reason for doing this
>> also in non-INFO requests?
>
>I suspect so, and it's the same reason: so that Content-ID is valid.
>(In reality, I can't imagine that an MSD would be the only body part
>in an initial INVITE, but I think we need to say so just in case.)


You are right.

Maybe it would be good to add a note saying that the reason is that, at
the time of writing the document, the usage of Content-ID as a SIP header
field was not defined.

I DO agree that, in most cases, MSD will not be the only body part in the
INVITE.


>>  Q8:
>>
>>  In Section 6, the text says:
>>
>>     "Note that in some cases there might be intermediate
>>     multipart body parts between the top level multipart and the body
>>     part containing the MSD or metadata/control object."
>>
>>  I have no idea what that text means.
>
>It's just trying to note that there might be multiple levels of
>multipart.  I'll reword this to make it simpler.

I don=B9t think we need to say anything. It=B9s basic multipart handling, a=
nd
we don=B9t define any procedures that mandates multiple levels, so...


>>  Q10:
>>
>>  In Section 9, the text says:
>>
>>     "if the IVS sends a requested MSD in an INFO request and does
>> not receive a SIP
>>     status message for the INFO request, it resends it; if the PSAP
>>     requests an MSD and does not receive a SIP status message for the
>>     INFO request, it resends it.)"
>>
>>  This is basic SIP,  and can be removed. Earlier you mention SIP
>> re-transmission, and that's enough. I think you should add the
>> following, though:
>>
>>     "Note that, per RFC6086, a 200 OK response to the INFO request
>> only indicates that the receiver has successfully received and
>> accepted the INFO request."
>
>I'm happy to delete the text after "Normal SIP retransmission handles
>non-receipt of requested data".  I agree it isn't needed.
>
>Is there specific text that you think is potentially confusing and
>hence needs the note about the semantics of a 200 OK?

Some may think that 200 OK means that the ecall application accepted the
MSD.

MSD only means that the receiving SIP stack accepted the INFO.


>>  Q11:
>>
>>  In Section 9, the text says:
>>
>>     "The SIP response codes 600 (Busy Everywhere), 486 (Busy Here),
>> and 603 (Decline) are used when
>>     the PSAP wants to reject a call but inform the vehicle occupants
>>that
>>     it is aware of the situation."
>>
>>  Please add a reference to where this is defined.
>
>I'll reword this text.

My question was not about the wording - it was more about where this is
defined.

I.e., is this something you define for ecall, or it is something generic
defined elsewhere?



>>  Q12:
>>
>>  In Section 10.6, please add explicit text that says that multipart
>> is used even if only a single body part is transported.
>
>I'll add text to make it more explicit.
>
>>   You may even reference the example in RFC 6086. Also add explicit
>> text saying that "Per RFC 6086, the content disposition value of
>> the multipart MIME is 'info-package', or something like that.
>
>We had an email discussion about this some weeks back, and Paul
>pointed out that it wasn't always correct for the top level multipart
>to have a Content-Disposition of INFO-Package.

The C-D of the multipart which contains the ecall body part(s) shall be
info-package.

Perhaps that multipart is within another multipart, but that=B9s a separate
issue.


>>  Q14:
>>
>>  In Section 11, you should add the Content-Disposition SIP header
>> field (with 'info-package' value) to the INFO requests.
>
>In the email discussion, Paul said it was better to leave it off.

I don=B9t agree. These specific examples are cases where the INFO only
contains ecall information, which is the normal case.

If people also want to add an example where the INFO also contains
non-ecall stuff, we can do that, even though I don=B9t think it=B9s needed.


Regards,

Christer


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Hi Christer,

Please see inline.

At 6:37 AM +0000 10/12/16, Christer Holmberg wrote:

>  Hi,
>
>  Please see inline:
>
>
>>>   Q3:
>>>
>>>   In Section 2, the text says:
>>>
>>>      "The technical contents of this document also provide a basis for
>>>      reuse and extension for other vehicle-initiated emergency call
>>>      Systems.
>>>
>>>      Vehicles designed for multiple regions might need to support eCall
>>>      and other Advanced Automatic Crash Notification (AACN) systems, such
>>>      as described in [I-D.ietf-ecrit-car-crash]."
>>>
>>>   I don't think the text is needed, but if you want to keep it you
>>>  should explicitly say that it's outside the scope of the document.
>>
>>I think the first sentence helps explain the expansion items (e.g.,
>>used by the car-crash draft), and the second was added by request of
>>Keith a year or two ago; I'm happy to reword both sentences to make
>>it more clear that this is background info.
>
>
>  I just want to make it clear that none of the above is something that is
>  covered in THIS document.

OK, I'll make this more clear.


>   >>  Q5:
>>>
>>>   In Section 5, I suggest to re-name the title to "MSD Format", or
>>>  something like that.
>>
>>What is your concern with the current title?  To me, "Vehicle Data"
>>is more general and hence easier to understand for someone who
>>doesn't know what an MSD is.  The text explains that the data is
>>called an MSD.  How about if I add "(MSD)" to the title?  That way,
>>someone who knows they are looking for the MSD info can find it, and
>>someone who doesn't know what an MSD is will know what the section is
>>about.
>
>  I was thinking more about this, and I'm ok with the current title.
>
>
>>>   Q6:
>>>
>>>   In Section 6, please add references to the different SIP/MIME
>>>  header fields (Content-Type, Content-ID etc).
>>
>>We have multiple references to RFC 7852.  Do you think we need to
>>also reference RFC 3261 for Call-Info and RFC 2045 and/or RFC 2392
>>for Content-ID and RFC 2045 for Content-Type and Content-Disposition?
>
>
>  I think it would be good to have a reference on first occurrence,
>  especially since some header fields aren't SIP header fields.

These are standard MIME header fields, just as multipart handling is 
standard MIME, and we don't need a reference to multipart handling.


>   >>  Q7:
>>>
>>>   In Section 6, the text says:
>>>
>>>      "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always enclosed in a
>>>multipart
>>>      body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in the
>>>      SIP message)."
>>>
>>>   We did agree on this for INFO, but is there a reason for doing this
>>>  also in non-INFO requests?
>>
>>I suspect so, and it's the same reason: so that Content-ID is valid.
>>(In reality, I can't imagine that an MSD would be the only body part
>>in an initial INVITE, but I think we need to say so just in case.)
>
>
>  You are right.
>
>  Maybe it would be good to add a note saying that the reason is that, at
>  the time of writing the document, the usage of Content-ID as a SIP header
>  field was not defined.

OK, I'll note that.

>
>  I DO agree that, in most cases, MSD will not be the only body part in the
>  INVITE.
>
>
>>>   Q8:
>>>
>>>   In Section 6, the text says:
>>>
>>>      "Note that in some cases there might be intermediate
>>>      multipart body parts between the top level multipart and the body
>>>      part containing the MSD or metadata/control object."
>>>
>>>   I have no idea what that text means.
>>
>>It's just trying to note that there might be multiple levels of
>>multipart.  I'll reword this to make it simpler.
>
>  I don't think we need to say anything. It's basic multipart handling, and
>  we don't define any procedures that mandates multiple levels, so...

OK, I'll delete it.


>   >>  Q10:
>>>
>>>   In Section 9, the text says:
>>>
>>>      "if the IVS sends a requested MSD in an INFO request and does
>   >> not receive a SIP
>>>      status message for the INFO request, it resends it; if the PSAP
>>>      requests an MSD and does not receive a SIP status message for the
>>>      INFO request, it resends it.)"
>>>
>>>   This is basic SIP,  and can be removed. Earlier you mention SIP
>>>  re-transmission, and that's enough. I think you should add the
>>>  following, though:
>>>
>>>      "Note that, per RFC6086, a 200 OK response to the INFO request
>>>  only indicates that the receiver has successfully received and
>>>  accepted the INFO request."
>>
>   >I'm happy to delete the text after "Normal SIP retransmission handles
>>non-receipt of requested data".  I agree it isn't needed.
>>
>>Is there specific text that you think is potentially confusing and
>>hence needs the note about the semantics of a 200 OK?
>
>  Some may think that 200 OK means that the ecall application accepted the
>  MSD.

We already talk about what the MSD ack means.  Let me think about how 
to work something about what a 200 OK doesn't mean in to that text.

>
>  MSD only means that the receiving SIP stack accepted the INFO.
>
>
>>>   Q11:
>>>
>>>   In Section 9, the text says:
>>>
>>>      "The SIP response codes 600 (Busy Everywhere), 486 (Busy Here),
>>>  and 603 (Decline) are used when
>>>      the PSAP wants to reject a call but inform the vehicle occupants
>>>that
>>>      it is aware of the situation."
>>>
>>>   Please add a reference to where this is defined.
>>
>>I'll reword this text.
>
>  My question was not about the wording - it was more about where this is
>  defined.
>
>  I.e., is this something you define for ecall, or it is something generic
>  defined elsewhere?

It's defined here.  I'll reword it to make this more clear (e.g., "a 
PSAP is able to reject a call but inform...")


>   >>  Q12:
>>>
>>>   In Section 10.6, please add explicit text that says that multipart
>>>  is used even if only a single body part is transported.
>>
>>I'll add text to make it more explicit.
>>
>>>    You may even reference the example in RFC 6086. Also add explicit
>>>  text saying that "Per RFC 6086, the content disposition value of
>>>  the multipart MIME is 'info-package', or something like that.
>>
>>We had an email discussion about this some weeks back, and Paul
>>pointed out that it wasn't always correct for the top level multipart
>>to have a Content-Disposition of INFO-Package.
>
>  The C-D of the multipart which contains the ecall body part(s) shall be
>  info-package.

If a multipart contains only eCall body parts, then maybe so, but as 
Paul pointed out, a multipart within an INFO request can contain body 
parts related to the INFO package and other body parts.  I think Paul 
made a larger point that the C-D of multiparts is not 
straightforward, so it's better not to make a blanket statement about 
it.

>
>  Perhaps that multipart is within another multipart, but that's a separate
>  issue.
>
>
>>>   Q14:
>>>
>>>   In Section 11, you should add the Content-Disposition SIP header
>>>  field (with 'info-package' value) to the INFO requests.
>>
>>In the email discussion, Paul said it was better to leave it off.
>
>  I don't agree. These specific examples are cases where the INFO only
>  contains ecall information, which is the normal case.

I'm happy either way (to add the "Content-Disposition: INFO-package" 
or leave it off as Paul suggested), but I'd like to hear from Paul 
before making a change.

>
>  If people also want to add an example where the INFO also contains
>  non-ecall stuff, we can do that, even though I don't think it's needed.


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Hi,


>>>>   Q6:
>>>>
>>>>   In Section 6, please add references to the different SIP/MIME =20
>>>> header fields (Content-Type, Content-ID etc).
>>>
>>>We have multiple references to RFC 7852.  Do you think we need to also=20
>>>reference RFC 3261 for Call-Info and RFC 2045 and/or RFC 2392 for=20
>>>Content-ID and RFC 2045 for Content-Type and Content-Disposition?
>>
>>
>>  I think it would be good to have a reference on first occurrence, =20
>> especially since some header fields aren't SIP header fields.
>
> These are standard MIME header fields, just as multipart handling is stan=
dard MIME, and we don't need a reference to multipart handling.

Ok, I don't want to delay the work because of that, so I withdraw the comme=
nt. You may get the same comment from the Gen-ART and/or IESG folks, though=
.

>>>>  Q10:
>>>>
>>>>   In Section 9, the text says:
>>>>
>>>>      "if the IVS sends a requested MSD in an INFO request and does
>>>> not receive a SIP
>>>>      status message for the INFO request, it resends it; if the PSAP
>>>>      requests an MSD and does not receive a SIP status message for the
>>>>      INFO request, it resends it.)"
>>>>
>>>>   This is basic SIP,  and can be removed. Earlier you mention SIP
>>>>  re-transmission, and that's enough. I think you should add the
>>>>  following, though:
>>>>
>>>>      "Note that, per RFC6086, a 200 OK response to the INFO request
>>>>  only indicates that the receiver has successfully received and
>>>>  accepted the INFO request."
>>>
>>>I'm happy to delete the text after "Normal SIP retransmission handles
>>>non-receipt of requested data".  I agree it isn't needed.
>>>
>>>Is there specific text that you think is potentially confusing and
>>>hence needs the note about the semantics of a 200 OK?
>>
>>  Some may think that 200 OK means that the ecall application accepted th=
e
>>  MSD.
>
> We already talk about what the MSD ack means.  Let me think about how=20
> to work something about what a 200 OK doesn't mean in to that text.

I think you should say that the 200 OK only means that the receiver accepte=
d the INFO, and that any potential application-level error message will com=
e in a separate INFO request.=20


>>>>   Q11:
>>>>
>>>>   In Section 9, the text says:
>>>>
>>>>      "The SIP response codes 600 (Busy Everywhere), 486 (Busy Here),
>>>>        and 603 (Decline) are used when the PSAP wants to reject a call=
 but inform the vehicle occupants
>>>>        that it is aware of the situation."
>>>>
>>>>   Please add a reference to where this is defined.
>>>
>>>I'll reword this text.
>>
>>  My question was not about the wording - it was more about where this is
>>  defined.
>>
>>  I.e., is this something you define for ecall, or it is something generi=
c
>>  defined elsewhere?
>
> It's defined here.  I'll reword it to make this more clear (e.g., "a=20
> PSAP is able to reject a call but inform...")

Does it really belong to section 9? Wouldn't e.g., section 7 be more approp=
riate?


>>>>  Q12:
>>>>
>>>>   In Section 10.6, please add explicit text that says that multipart
>>>>  is used even if only a single body part is transported.
>>>
>>>I'll add text to make it more explicit.
>>>
>>>>    You may even reference the example in RFC 6086. Also add explicit
>>>>  text saying that "Per RFC 6086, the content disposition value of
>>>>  the multipart MIME is 'info-package', or something like that.
>>>
>>>We had an email discussion about this some weeks back, and Paul
>>>pointed out that it wasn't always correct for the top level multipart
>>>to have a Content-Disposition of INFO-Package.
>>
>>  The C-D of the multipart which contains the ecall body part(s) shall be
>>  info-package.
>
> If a multipart contains only eCall body parts, then maybe so, but as=20
> Paul pointed out, a multipart within an INFO request can contain body=20
> parts related to the INFO package and other body parts.  I think Paul=20
> made a larger point that the C-D of multiparts is not=20
> straightforward, so it's better not to make a blanket statement about=20
> it.

The Info Package body part(s) always need to be within a Info-Package multi=
part.

Then, if you also want to include non-Info Package body part(s), you DO nee=
d a "multilevel" multipart.

Something like:


C-T: multipart/MIME
   ---boundary
   C-T multipart/MIME
   C-D info package
       ---boundary2
       <ecall content, e.g., MSD>
       ---boundary2---
   ---boundary
   C-T foo
   C-D bar=20
   <non ecall content>
   ---boundary---

And, as the examples show INFOs with Info Package body parts only, there sh=
all be a SIP header field C-D:info-package.

Regards,

Christer


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Hi Christer,

I've made all the edits, except for the Content-Disposition, which as 
I mentioned I'm happy to do either way, but based on the earlier 
discussion with Paul, I'm concerned that the correct C-D value of 
multiparts isn't straightforward, so a blanket statement might be 
incorrect.  I think we can avoid saying how C-D is to be set in 
multiparts since we do say multiple times very plainly that 
everything that is sent in an INFO request is sent per RFC 6086.  So 
I think we can leave that to implementers' interpretation of the 
relevant RFCs.

See below for other resolutions.

At 5:32 PM +0000 10/12/16, Christer Holmberg wrote:

>  Hi,
>
>
>>>>>    Q6:
>>>>>
>>>>>    In Section 6, please add references to the different SIP/MIME 
>>>>>  header fields (Content-Type, Content-ID etc).
>>>>
>>>>We have multiple references to RFC 7852.  Do you think we need to also
>>>>reference RFC 3261 for Call-Info and RFC 2045 and/or RFC 2392 for
>>>>Content-ID and RFC 2045 for Content-Type and Content-Disposition?
>>>
>>>
>>>   I think it would be good to have a reference on first occurrence, 
>>>  especially since some header fields aren't SIP header fields.
>>
>>  These are standard MIME header fields, just as multipart handling 
>> is standard MIME, and we don't need a reference to multipart 
>> handling.
>
>  Ok, I don't want to delay the work because of that, so I withdraw 
> the comment. You may get the same comment from the Gen-ART and/or 
> IESG folks, though.
>
>>>>>   Q10:
>>>>>
>>>>>    In Section 9, the text says:
>>>>>
>>>>>       "if the IVS sends a requested MSD in an INFO request and does
>>>>>  not receive a SIP
>>>>>       status message for the INFO request, it resends it; if the PSAP
>>>>>       requests an MSD and does not receive a SIP status message for the
>>>>>       INFO request, it resends it.)"
>>>>>
>>>>>    This is basic SIP,  and can be removed. Earlier you mention SIP
>>>>>   re-transmission, and that's enough. I think you should add the
>>>>>   following, though:
>>>>>
>>>>>       "Note that, per RFC6086, a 200 OK response to the INFO request
>>>>>   only indicates that the receiver has successfully received and
>>>>>   accepted the INFO request."
>>>>
>>>>I'm happy to delete the text after "Normal SIP retransmission handles
>>>>non-receipt of requested data".  I agree it isn't needed.
>>>>
>>>>Is there specific text that you think is potentially confusing and
>>>>hence needs the note about the semantics of a 200 OK?
>>>
>>>   Some may think that 200 OK means that the ecall application accepted the
>>>   MSD.
>>
>>  We already talk about what the MSD ack means.  Let me think about how
>>  to work something about what a 200 OK doesn't mean in to that text.
>
>  I think you should say that the 200 OK only means that the receiver 
> accepted the INFO, and that any potential application-level error 
> message will come in a separate INFO request.

I added text that "per <xref target="RFC6086"/>, a 200 OK response to 
an INFO request indicates only that the receiver has successfully 
received and accepted the INFO request, it says nothing about the 
acceptability of the payload".  I'd rather not add text about 
application-level error messages here, because the specific context 
is a solicited MSD that the PSAP finds unacceptable, and in that case 
the PSAP isn't expected to send a negative acknowledgement because 
(a) the PSAP can request a new MSD if it wants, and (b) the IVS 
wouldn't be expected to take any action if it did, since any resent 
MSD would almost certainly have the same problem, since it's likely a 
bug in either the IVS or PSAP.

>
>
>>>>>    Q11:
>>>>>
>>>>>    In Section 9, the text says:
>>>>>
>>>>>       "The SIP response codes 600 (Busy Everywhere), 486 (Busy Here),
>>>>>         and 603 (Decline) are used when the PSAP wants to reject 
>>>>> a call but inform the vehicle occupants
>   >>>>        that it is aware of the situation."
>>>>>
>>>>>    Please add a reference to where this is defined.
>>>>
>>>>I'll reword this text.
>>>
>>>   My question was not about the wording - it was more about where this is
>>>   defined.
>>>
>>>   I.e., is this something you define for ecall, or it is something generic
>>>   defined elsewhere?
>>
>>  It's defined here.  I'll reword it to make this more clear (e.g., "a
>>  PSAP is able to reject a call but inform...")
>
>  Does it really belong to section 9? Wouldn't e.g., section 7 be 
> more appropriate?

It could go in several sections, including 9, because it's mostly 
about the metadata/control object, but I moved it to section 6 
because it seemed to fit best there in the flow of the text.


>   >>>>  Q12:
>   >>>>
>>>>>    In Section 10.6, please add explicit text that says that multipart
>>>>>   is used even if only a single body part is transported.
>>>>
>>>>I'll add text to make it more explicit.
>>>>
>>>>>     You may even reference the example in RFC 6086. Also add explicit
>>>>>   text saying that "Per RFC 6086, the content disposition value of
>>>>>   the multipart MIME is 'info-package', or something like that.
>>>>
>>>>We had an email discussion about this some weeks back, and Paul
>>>>pointed out that it wasn't always correct for the top level multipart
>>>>to have a Content-Disposition of INFO-Package.
>>>
>>>   The C-D of the multipart which contains the ecall body part(s) shall be
>>>   info-package.
>>
>>  If a multipart contains only eCall body parts, then maybe so, but as
>>  Paul pointed out, a multipart within an INFO request can contain body
>>  parts related to the INFO package and other body parts.  I think Paul
>>  made a larger point that the C-D of multiparts is not
>>  straightforward, so it's better not to make a blanket statement about
>>  it.
>
>  The Info Package body part(s) always need to be within a 
> Info-Package multipart.
>
>  Then, if you also want to include non-Info Package body part(s), 
> you DO need a "multilevel" multipart.
>
>  Something like:
>
>
>  C-T: multipart/MIME
>     ---boundary
>     C-T multipart/MIME
>     C-D info package
>         ---boundary2
>         <ecall content, e.g., MSD>
>         ---boundary2---
>     ---boundary
>     C-T foo
>     C-D bar
>     <non ecall content>
>     ---boundary---
>
>  And, as the examples show INFOs with Info Package body parts only, 
> there shall be a SIP header field C-D:info-package.

Since this is different than what Paul said in the earlier exchange, 
I'd like to get confirmation before adding C-D to the examples. 
Especially because I think if there's any ambiguity, we may be better 
off leaving C-D out, since the examples say that not all SIP header 
fields are shown.

-- 
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies of the IETF.

        Title           : Next-Generation Pan-European eCall
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16.txt
	Pages           : 44
	Date            : 2016-10-14

Abstract:
   This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
   mechanisms to support the next generation of the pan European in-
   vehicle emergency call service defined under the eSafety initiative
   of the European Commission (generally referred to as "eCall"). eCall
   is a standardized and mandated system for a special form of emergency
   calls placed by vehicles, providing real-time communications and an
   integrated set of related data.

   This document also registers MIME Content Types and an Emergency Call
   Additional Data Block for the eCall vehicle data and metadata/control
   data, and an INFO package to enable carrying this data in INFO
   requests.


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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies of the IETF.

        Title           : Next-Generation Vehicle-Initiated Emergency Calls
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Brian Rosen
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15.txt
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	Date            : 2016-10-14

Abstract:
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   mechanisms to support the next generation of emergency calls placed
   by vehicles (automatically in the event of a crash or serious
   incident, or manually invoked by a vehicle occupant) and conveying
   vehicle, sensor, and location data related to the crash or incident.
   Such calls are often referred to as "Automatic Crash Notification"
   (ACN), or "Advanced Automatic Crash Notification" (AACN), even in the
   case of manual trigger.  The "Advanced" qualifier refers to the
   ability to carry a richer set of data.

   This document also registers a MIME Content Type and Emergency Call
   Additional Data Block for the vehicle, sensor, and location data
   (often referred to as "crash data" even though there is not
   necessarily a crash) and an INFO package to enable carrying this and
   related data in INFO requests.  An external specification for the
   data format, contents, and structure are referenced in this document.

   This document reuses the technical aspects of next-generation pan-
   European eCall (a mandated and standardized system for emergency
   calls by in-vehicle systems within Europe and other regions).
   However, this document specifies a different set of vehicle (crash)
   data, specifically, the Vehicle Emergency Data Set (VEDS) rather than
   the eCall Minimum Set of Data (MSD).  This document is an extension
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Hi everyone,

These versions address all comments received, with the exception of 
the Content-Disposition issue Christer raised.

--Randall

At 10:01 AM -0700 10/14/16, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:

>  A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with 
> Internet Technologies of the IETF.
>
>          Title           : Next-Generation Pan-European eCall
>          Authors         : Randall Gellens
>                            Hannes Tschofenig
>  	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16.txt
>  	Pages           : 44
>  	Date            : 2016-10-14
>
>  Abstract:
>     This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
>     mechanisms to support the next generation of the pan European in-
>     vehicle emergency call service defined under the eSafety initiative
>     of the European Commission (generally referred to as "eCall"). eCall
>     is a standardized and mandated system for a special form of emergency
>     calls placed by vehicles, providing real-time communications and an
>     integrated set of related data.
>
>     This document also registers MIME Content Types and an Emergency Call
>     Additional Data Block for the eCall vehicle data and metadata/control
>     data, and an INFO package to enable carrying this data in INFO
>     requests.
>
>
>  The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall/
>
>  There's also a htmlized version available at:
>  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16
>
>  A diff from the previous version is available at:
>  https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16
>
>
>  Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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At 10:02 AM -0700 10/14/16, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:

>  A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with 
> Internet Technologies of the IETF.
>
>          Title           : Next-Generation Vehicle-Initiated Emergency Calls
>          Authors         : Randall Gellens
>                            Brian Rosen
>                            Hannes Tschofenig
>  	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15.txt
>  	Pages           : 43
>  	Date            : 2016-10-14
>
>  Abstract:
>     This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
>     mechanisms to support the next generation of emergency calls placed
>     by vehicles (automatically in the event of a crash or serious
>     incident, or manually invoked by a vehicle occupant) and conveying
>     vehicle, sensor, and location data related to the crash or incident.
>     Such calls are often referred to as "Automatic Crash Notification"
>     (ACN), or "Advanced Automatic Crash Notification" (AACN), even in the
>     case of manual trigger.  The "Advanced" qualifier refers to the
>     ability to carry a richer set of data.
>
>     This document also registers a MIME Content Type and Emergency Call
>     Additional Data Block for the vehicle, sensor, and location data
>     (often referred to as "crash data" even though there is not
>     necessarily a crash) and an INFO package to enable carrying this and
>     related data in INFO requests.  An external specification for the
>     data format, contents, and structure are referenced in this document.
>
>     This document reuses the technical aspects of next-generation pan-
>     European eCall (a mandated and standardized system for emergency
>     calls by in-vehicle systems within Europe and other regions).
>     However, this document specifies a different set of vehicle (crash)
>     data, specifically, the Vehicle Emergency Data Set (VEDS) rather than
>     the eCall Minimum Set of Data (MSD).  This document is an extension
>     of the eCall document, with the primary differences being that this
>     document makes the MSD data set optional and VEDS mandatory, and adds
>     attribute values to the metadata/control object to permit greater
>     functionality.  This document registers a new INFO package (identical
>     to that registered for eCall but with the addition of the VEDS MIME
>     type).  This document also describes legacy (circuit-switched) ACN
>     systems and their migration to next-generation emergency calling, to
>     provide background information and context.
>
>
>  The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash/
>
>  There's also a htmlized version available at:
>  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15
>
>  A diff from the previous version is available at:
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>
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I'll request IETF LC first thing on Tuesday. Working on the write-up and
will share it tonight.

Thank you, WG and Randy

On Oct 14, 2016 12:06, "Randall Gellens" <rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org> wrote:

> Hi everyone,
>
> These versions address all comments received, with the exception of the
> Content-Disposition issue Christer raised.
>
> --Randall
>
> At 10:01 AM -0700 10/14/16, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>
>  A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>>  This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with
>> Internet Technologies of the IETF.
>>
>>          Title           : Next-Generation Pan-European eCall
>>          Authors         : Randall Gellens
>>                            Hannes Tschofenig
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16.txt
>>         Pages           : 44
>>         Date            : 2016-10-14
>>
>>  Abstract:
>>     This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
>>     mechanisms to support the next generation of the pan European in-
>>     vehicle emergency call service defined under the eSafety initiative
>>     of the European Commission (generally referred to as "eCall"). eCall
>>     is a standardized and mandated system for a special form of emergency
>>     calls placed by vehicles, providing real-time communications and an
>>     integrated set of related data.
>>
>>     This document also registers MIME Content Types and an Emergency Call
>>     Additional Data Block for the eCall vehicle data and metadata/control
>>     data, and an INFO package to enable carrying this data in INFO
>>     requests.
>>
>>
>>  The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall/
>>
>>  There's also a htmlized version available at:
>>  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16
>>
>>  A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>  https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16
>>
>>
>>  Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> submission
>>  until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>>  Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>>  ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
>>  _______________________________________________
>>  Ecrit mailing list
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>>
>
> At 10:02 AM -0700 10/14/16, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>
>  A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>>  This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with
>> Internet Technologies of the IETF.
>>
>>          Title           : Next-Generation Vehicle-Initiated Emergency
>> Calls
>>          Authors         : Randall Gellens
>>                            Brian Rosen
>>                            Hannes Tschofenig
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15.txt
>>         Pages           : 43
>>         Date            : 2016-10-14
>>
>>  Abstract:
>>     This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
>>     mechanisms to support the next generation of emergency calls placed
>>     by vehicles (automatically in the event of a crash or serious
>>     incident, or manually invoked by a vehicle occupant) and conveying
>>     vehicle, sensor, and location data related to the crash or incident.
>>     Such calls are often referred to as "Automatic Crash Notification"
>>     (ACN), or "Advanced Automatic Crash Notification" (AACN), even in the
>>     case of manual trigger.  The "Advanced" qualifier refers to the
>>     ability to carry a richer set of data.
>>
>>     This document also registers a MIME Content Type and Emergency Call
>>     Additional Data Block for the vehicle, sensor, and location data
>>     (often referred to as "crash data" even though there is not
>>     necessarily a crash) and an INFO package to enable carrying this and
>>     related data in INFO requests.  An external specification for the
>>     data format, contents, and structure are referenced in this document.
>>
>>     This document reuses the technical aspects of next-generation pan-
>>     European eCall (a mandated and standardized system for emergency
>>     calls by in-vehicle systems within Europe and other regions).
>>     However, this document specifies a different set of vehicle (crash)
>>     data, specifically, the Vehicle Emergency Data Set (VEDS) rather than
>>     the eCall Minimum Set of Data (MSD).  This document is an extension
>>     of the eCall document, with the primary differences being that this
>>     document makes the MSD data set optional and VEDS mandatory, and adds
>>     attribute values to the metadata/control object to permit greater
>>     functionality.  This document registers a new INFO package (identical
>>     to that registered for eCall but with the addition of the VEDS MIME
>>     type).  This document also describes legacy (circuit-switched) ACN
>>     systems and their migration to next-generation emergency calling, to
>>     provide background information and context.
>>
>>
>>  The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash/
>>
>>  There's also a htmlized version available at:
>>  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15
>>
>>  A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>  https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15
>>
>>
>>  Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> submission
>>  until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>>  Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>>  ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
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<p dir=3D"ltr">I&#39;ll request IETF LC first thing on Tuesday. Working on =
the write-up and will share it tonight.</p>
<p dir=3D"ltr">Thank you, WG and Randy</p>
<div class=3D"gmail_extra"><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Oct 14, 2016 1=
2:06, &quot;Randall Gellens&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:rg%2Bietf@randy.pen=
sive.org">rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org</a>&gt; wrote:<br type=3D"attribution">=
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Hi everyone,<br>
<br>
These versions address all comments received, with the exception of the Con=
tent-Disposition issue Christer raised.<br>
<br>
--Randall<br>
<br>
At 10:01 AM -0700 10/14/16, <a href=3D"mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org" tar=
get=3D"_blank">internet-drafts@ietf.org</a> wrote:<br>
<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
=C2=A0A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts di=
rectories.<br>
=C2=A0This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with In=
ternet Technologies of the IETF.<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Title=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =
=C2=A0: Next-Generation Pan-European eCall<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Authors=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0=
: Randall Gellens<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=
=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Hannes Tschofenig<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Filename=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 : draft-iet=
f-ecrit-ecall-16.txt<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Pages=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0:=
 44<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Date=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 :=
 2016-10-14<br>
<br>
=C2=A0Abstract:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 This document describes how to use IP-based emergency service=
s<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 mechanisms to support the next generation of the pan European=
 in-<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 vehicle emergency call service defined under the eSafety init=
iative<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 of the European Commission (generally referred to as &quot;eC=
all&quot;). eCall<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 is a standardized and mandated system for a special form of e=
mergency<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 calls placed by vehicles, providing real-time communications =
and an<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 integrated set of related data.<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 This document also registers MIME Content Types and an Emerge=
ncy Call<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 Additional Data Block for the eCall vehicle data and metadata=
/control<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 data, and an INFO package to enable carrying this data in INF=
O<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 requests.<br>
<br>
<br>
=C2=A0The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:<br>
=C2=A0<a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall/" =
rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org/<wbr>doc/=
draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall/</a><br>
<br>
=C2=A0There&#39;s also a htmlized version available at:<br>
=C2=A0<a href=3D"https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16" rel=
=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://tools.ietf.org/html/d<wbr>raft-ie=
tf-ecrit-ecall-16</a><br>
<br>
=C2=A0A diff from the previous version is available at:<br>
=C2=A0<a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-ecrit-ecall=
-16" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?<wbr=
>url2=3Ddraft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16</a><br>
<br>
<br>
=C2=A0Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of sub=
mission<br>
=C2=A0until the htmlized version and diff are available at <a href=3D"http:=
//tools.ietf.org" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">tools.ietf.org</a>.<=
br>
<br>
=C2=A0Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:<br>
=C2=A0<a href=3D"ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/" rel=3D"noreferrer" ta=
rget=3D"_blank">ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-d<wbr>rafts/</a><br>
<br>
=C2=A0_____________________________<wbr>__________________<br>
=C2=A0Ecrit mailing list<br>
=C2=A0<a href=3D"mailto:Ecrit@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">Ecrit@ietf.org</a=
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><br>
</blockquote>
<br>
At 10:02 AM -0700 10/14/16, <a href=3D"mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org" tar=
get=3D"_blank">internet-drafts@ietf.org</a> wrote:<br>
<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1p=
x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
=C2=A0A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts di=
rectories.<br>
=C2=A0This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with In=
ternet Technologies of the IETF.<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Title=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =
=C2=A0: Next-Generation Vehicle-Initiated Emergency Calls<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Authors=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0=
: Randall Gellens<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=
=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Brian Rosen<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=
=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Hannes Tschofenig<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Filename=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 : draft-iet=
f-ecrit-car-crash-15.<wbr>txt<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Pages=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0:=
 43<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Date=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 :=
 2016-10-14<br>
<br>
=C2=A0Abstract:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 This document describes how to use IP-based emergency service=
s<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 mechanisms to support the next generation of emergency calls =
placed<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 by vehicles (automatically in the event of a crash or serious=
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 incident, or manually invoked by a vehicle occupant) and conv=
eying<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 vehicle, sensor, and location data related to the crash or in=
cident.<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 Such calls are often referred to as &quot;Automatic Crash Not=
ification&quot;<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 (ACN), or &quot;Advanced Automatic Crash Notification&quot; (=
AACN), even in the<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 case of manual trigger.=C2=A0 The &quot;Advanced&quot; qualif=
ier refers to the<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 ability to carry a richer set of data.<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 This document also registers a MIME Content Type and Emergenc=
y Call<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 Additional Data Block for the vehicle, sensor, and location d=
ata<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 (often referred to as &quot;crash data&quot; even though ther=
e is not<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 necessarily a crash) and an INFO package to enable carrying t=
his and<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 related data in INFO requests.=C2=A0 An external specificatio=
n for the<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 data format, contents, and structure are referenced in this d=
ocument.<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 This document reuses the technical aspects of next-generation=
 pan-<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 European eCall (a mandated and standardized system for emerge=
ncy<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 calls by in-vehicle systems within Europe and other regions).=
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 However, this document specifies a different set of vehicle (=
crash)<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 data, specifically, the Vehicle Emergency Data Set (VEDS) rat=
her than<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 the eCall Minimum Set of Data (MSD).=C2=A0 This document is a=
n extension<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 of the eCall document, with the primary differences being tha=
t this<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 document makes the MSD data set optional and VEDS mandatory, =
and adds<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 attribute values to the metadata/control object to permit gre=
ater<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 functionality.=C2=A0 This document registers a new INFO packa=
ge (identical<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 to that registered for eCall but with the addition of the VED=
S MIME<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 type).=C2=A0 This document also describes legacy (circuit-swi=
tched) ACN<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 systems and their migration to next-generation emergency call=
ing, to<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 provide background information and context.<br>
<br>
<br>
=C2=A0The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:<br>
=C2=A0<a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-car-cras=
h/" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org/<wbr>=
doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash<wbr>/</a><br>
<br>
=C2=A0There&#39;s also a htmlized version available at:<br>
=C2=A0<a href=3D"https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15"=
 rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://tools.ietf.org/html/d<wbr>raf=
t-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15</a><br>
<br>
=C2=A0A diff from the previous version is available at:<br>
=C2=A0<a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-ecrit-car-c=
rash-15" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?=
<wbr>url2=3Ddraft-ietf-ecrit-car-cras<wbr>h-15</a><br>
<br>
<br>
=C2=A0Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of sub=
mission<br>
=C2=A0until the htmlized version and diff are available at <a href=3D"http:=
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br>
<br>
=C2=A0Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:<br>
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Hi Christer,

In rereading RFC 6086 and RFC 5621, I don't see any clear statement 
that the Content-Disposition of a top-level multipart within an INFO 
request should be Info-Package.  RFC 6086 says Content-Disposition is 
optional at the top level of a SIP message, and the examples in RFC 
6086 sometimes show no Content-Disposition at the top level.  Upon 
careful rereading, my interpretation is that the innermost multipart 
that contains only body parts associated with the INFO package 
perhaps should have a Content-Disposition of Info-Package.  If there 
is only one multipart, then the innermost is also the top level.

Therefore, I propose to add the following text:

    The innermost multipart that contains only body parts associated with
    the INFO package SHOULD have a Content-Disposition value of Info-
    Package (if there is only one multipart, then the innermost is also
    the top level).

And add the C-D header to the examples.

--Randy

At 4:56 PM +0000 10/15/16, Christer Holmberg wrote:

>  Hi,
>
>  We need to solve the Content-Disposition issue first. If the issue 
> is unclear, perhaps it's not enough to cover it in the example - 
> perhaps we need some normative clarification text too.
>
>  Regards,
>
>  Christer
>
>  From: Ecrit [mailto:ecrit-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Az Mankin
>  Sent: 15 October 2016 18:24
>  To: Randy Gellens <rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org>
>  Cc: ecrit@ietf.org
>  Subject: Re: [Ecrit] draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16.txt and 
> draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15.txt
>
>  I'll request IETF LC first thing on Tuesday. Working on the 
> write-up and will share it tonight.
>  Thank you, WG and Randy
>
>  On Oct 14, 2016 12:06, "Randall Gellens" 
> <<mailto:rg%2Bietf@randy.pensive.org>rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org> 
> wrote:
>
>  Hi everyone,
>
>  These versions address all comments received, with the exception of 
> the Content-Disposition issue Christer raised.
>
>  --Randall
>
>  At 10:01 AM -0700 10/14/16, <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> 
> internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>
>   A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
>   This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with 
> Internet Technologies of the IETF.
>
>           Title           : Next-Generation Pan-European eCall
>           Authors         : Randall Gellens
>                             Hannes Tschofenig
>          Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16.txt
>          Pages           : 44
>          Date            : 2016-10-14
>
>   Abstract:
>      This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
>      mechanisms to support the next generation of the pan European in-
>      vehicle emergency call service defined under the eSafety initiative
>      of the European Commission (generally referred to as "eCall"). eCall
>      is a standardized and mandated system for a special form of emergency
>      calls placed by vehicles, providing real-time communications and an
>      integrated set of related data.
>
>      This document also registers MIME Content Types and an Emergency Call
>      Additional Data Block for the eCall vehicle data and metadata/control
>      data, and an INFO package to enable carrying this data in INFO
>      requests.
>
>
>   The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> 
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall/>https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall/
>
>   There's also a htmlized version available at:
> 
> <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16
>
>   A diff from the previous version is available at:
> 
> <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16>https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16
>
>
>   Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
>   until the htmlized version and diff are available at 
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>
>   Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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>
>  At 10:02 AM -0700 10/14/16, <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> 
> internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>
>   A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
>   This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with 
> Internet Technologies of the IETF.
>
>           Title           : Next-Generation Vehicle-Initiated Emergency Calls
>           Authors         : Randall Gellens
>                             Brian Rosen
>                             Hannes Tschofenig
>          Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15.txt
>          Pages           : 43
>          Date            : 2016-10-14
>
>   Abstract:
>      This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
>      mechanisms to support the next generation of emergency calls placed
>      by vehicles (automatically in the event of a crash or serious
>      incident, or manually invoked by a vehicle occupant) and conveying
>      vehicle, sensor, and location data related to the crash or incident.
>      Such calls are often referred to as "Automatic Crash Notification"
>      (ACN), or "Advanced Automatic Crash Notification" (AACN), even in the
>      case of manual trigger.  The "Advanced" qualifier refers to the
>      ability to carry a richer set of data.
>
>      This document also registers a MIME Content Type and Emergency Call
>      Additional Data Block for the vehicle, sensor, and location data
>      (often referred to as "crash data" even though there is not
>      necessarily a crash) and an INFO package to enable carrying this and
>      related data in INFO requests.  An external specification for the
>      data format, contents, and structure are referenced in this document.
>
>      This document reuses the technical aspects of next-generation pan-
>      European eCall (a mandated and standardized system for emergency
>      calls by in-vehicle systems within Europe and other regions).
>      However, this document specifies a different set of vehicle (crash)
>      data, specifically, the Vehicle Emergency Data Set (VEDS) rather than
>      the eCall Minimum Set of Data (MSD).  This document is an extension
>      of the eCall document, with the primary differences being that this
>      document makes the MSD data set optional and VEDS mandatory, and adds
>      attribute values to the metadata/control object to permit greater
>      functionality.  This document registers a new INFO package (identical
>      to that registered for eCall but with the addition of the VEDS MIME
>      type).  This document also describes legacy (circuit-switched) ACN
>      systems and their migration to next-generation emergency calling, to
>      provide background information and context.
>
>
>   The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> 
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash/>https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash/
>
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Hi Randall,

>In rereading RFC 6086 and RFC 5621, I don't see any clear statement that t=
he Content-Disposition of a top-level multipart within an INFO request shou=
ld be Info-Package.

Section 4.3.1 says:

   "If an INFO request associated with an Info Package contains a message
   body part, the body part is identified by a Content-Disposition
   header field "Info-Package" value.  The body part can contain a
   single MIME type, or it can be a multipart [RFC5621] that contains
   other body parts associated with the Info Package."

>RFC 6086 says Content-Disposition is optional at the top level of a SIP me=
ssage, and the examples in RFC
>6086 sometimes show no Content-Disposition at the top level.  Upon careful=
 rereading, my interpretation is that the innermost multipart that contains=
 only body parts >associated with the INFO package perhaps should have a Co=
ntent-Disposition of Info-Package.  If there is only one multipart, then th=
e innermost is also the top level.

Correct. It's the innermost multipart that contains body parts associated w=
ith the INFO package that shall have a Content-Disposition:info-package.

And, in the example of draft-ecall, that "innermost multipart" is the only =
multipart, so there shall be a SIP level C-D: info-package header field.

>Therefore, I propose to add the following text:
>
>    The innermost multipart that contains only body parts associated with
>    the INFO package SHOULD have a Content-Disposition value of Info-
>    Package (if there is only one multipart, then the innermost is also
>    the top level).
>
> And add the C-D header to the examples.

I think it shall be "MUST", because I can't find any text making it optiona=
l.

Regards,

Christer


At 4:56 PM +0000 10/15/16, Christer Holmberg wrote:

>  Hi,
>
>  We need to solve the Content-Disposition issue first. If the issue is=20
> unclear, perhaps it's not enough to cover it in the example - perhaps=20
> we need some normative clarification text too.
>
>  Regards,
>
>  Christer
>
>  From: Ecrit [mailto:ecrit-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Az Mankin
>  Sent: 15 October 2016 18:24
>  To: Randy Gellens <rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org>
>  Cc: ecrit@ietf.org
>  Subject: Re: [Ecrit] draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16.txt and=20
> draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15.txt
>
>  I'll request IETF LC first thing on Tuesday. Working on the write-up=20
> and will share it tonight.
>  Thank you, WG and Randy
>
>  On Oct 14, 2016 12:06, "Randall Gellens"=20
> <<mailto:rg%2Bietf@randy.pensive.org>rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org>
> wrote:
>
>  Hi everyone,
>
>  These versions address all comments received, with the exception of=20
> the Content-Disposition issue Christer raised.
>
>  --Randall
>
>  At 10:01 AM -0700 10/14/16, <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>=20
> internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>
>   A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts=20
> directories.
>   This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with=20
> Internet Technologies of the IETF.
>
>           Title           : Next-Generation Pan-European eCall
>           Authors         : Randall Gellens
>                             Hannes Tschofenig
>          Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16.txt
>          Pages           : 44
>          Date            : 2016-10-14
>
>   Abstract:
>      This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
>      mechanisms to support the next generation of the pan European in-
>      vehicle emergency call service defined under the eSafety initiative
>      of the European Commission (generally referred to as "eCall"). eCall
>      is a standardized and mandated system for a special form of emergenc=
y
>      calls placed by vehicles, providing real-time communications and an
>      integrated set of related data.
>
>      This document also registers MIME Content Types and an Emergency Cal=
l
>      Additional Data Block for the eCall vehicle data and metadata/contro=
l
>      data, and an INFO package to enable carrying this data in INFO
>      requests.
>
>
>   The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>=20
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall/>https://data
> tracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall/
>
>   There's also a htmlized version available at:
>=20
> <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16>https://tools.i
> etf.org/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16
>
>   A diff from the previous version is available at:
>=20
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> ww.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16
>
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>   Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submi=
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>
>   Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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>
>   A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts=20
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>   This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with=20
> Internet Technologies of the IETF.
>
>           Title           : Next-Generation Vehicle-Initiated Emergency C=
alls
>           Authors         : Randall Gellens
>                             Brian Rosen
>                             Hannes Tschofenig
>          Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15.txt
>          Pages           : 43
>          Date            : 2016-10-14
>
>   Abstract:
>      This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
>      mechanisms to support the next generation of emergency calls placed
>      by vehicles (automatically in the event of a crash or serious
>      incident, or manually invoked by a vehicle occupant) and conveying
>      vehicle, sensor, and location data related to the crash or incident.
>      Such calls are often referred to as "Automatic Crash Notification"
>      (ACN), or "Advanced Automatic Crash Notification" (AACN), even in th=
e
>      case of manual trigger.  The "Advanced" qualifier refers to the
>      ability to carry a richer set of data.
>
>      This document also registers a MIME Content Type and Emergency Call
>      Additional Data Block for the vehicle, sensor, and location data
>      (often referred to as "crash data" even though there is not
>      necessarily a crash) and an INFO package to enable carrying this and
>      related data in INFO requests.  An external specification for the
>      data format, contents, and structure are referenced in this document=
.
>
>      This document reuses the technical aspects of next-generation pan-
>      European eCall (a mandated and standardized system for emergency
>      calls by in-vehicle systems within Europe and other regions).
>      However, this document specifies a different set of vehicle (crash)
>      data, specifically, the Vehicle Emergency Data Set (VEDS) rather tha=
n
>      the eCall Minimum Set of Data (MSD).  This document is an extension
>      of the eCall document, with the primary differences being that this
>      document makes the MSD data set optional and VEDS mandatory, and add=
s
>      attribute values to the metadata/control object to permit greater
>      functionality.  This document registers a new INFO package (identica=
l
>      to that registered for eCall but with the addition of the VEDS MIME
>      type).  This document also describes legacy (circuit-switched) ACN
>      systems and their migration to next-generation emergency calling, to
>      provide background information and context.
>
>
>   The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
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>
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>
>   A diff from the previous version is available at:
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>
>
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Hi Christer,

I added the following text:

    The innermost multipart that contains only body parts associated with
    the INFO package has a Content-Disposition value of Info-Package (if
    there is only one multipart, then the innermost is also the top
    level).

I also added

	      Content-Dispositio: Info-Package

to the INFO examples.

This should clarify C-D.  I'll upload the revision as soon as I hear back.

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Thread-Topic: [Ecrit] draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-16.txt and draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-15.txt
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Hi,

>I added the following text:
>
>    The innermost multipart that contains only body parts associated with
>    the INFO package has a Content-Disposition value of Info-Package (if
>    there is only one multipart, then the innermost is also the top
>    level).

Do we really need the "(if there in only one multipart..." text?

>I also added
>
>	      Content-Dispositio: Info-Package
>
> to the INFO examples.

Thanks!=20

Regards,

Christer


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At 7:18 PM +0000 10/16/16, Christer Holmberg wrote:

>  Hi,
>
>>I added the following text:
>>
>>     The innermost multipart that contains only body parts associated with
>>     the INFO package has a Content-Disposition value of Info-Package (if
>>     there is only one multipart, then the innermost is also the top
>>     level).
>
>  Do we really need the "(if there in only one multipart..." text?

I added it because I thought someone might be confused about 
"innermost".  I'll delete it and upload the revision now.

>
>>I also added
>>
>>	      Content-Dispositio: Info-Package
>>
>>  to the INFO examples.
>
>  Thanks!
>
>  Regards,
>
>  Christer


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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies of the IETF.

        Title           : Next-Generation Pan-European eCall
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-17.txt
	Pages           : 45
	Date            : 2016-10-16

Abstract:
   This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
   mechanisms to support the next generation of the pan European in-
   vehicle emergency call service defined under the eSafety initiative
   of the European Commission (generally referred to as "eCall"). eCall
   is a standardized and mandated system for a special form of emergency
   calls placed by vehicles, providing real-time communications and an
   integrated set of related data.

   This document also registers MIME Content Types and an Emergency Call
   Additional Data Block for the eCall vehicle data and metadata/control
   data, and an INFO package to enable carrying this data in INFO
   requests.


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        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Brian Rosen
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-16.txt
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	Date            : 2016-10-16

Abstract:
   This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
   mechanisms to support the next generation of emergency calls placed
   by vehicles (automatically in the event of a crash or serious
   incident, or manually invoked by a vehicle occupant) and conveying
   vehicle, sensor, and location data related to the crash or incident.
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   (ACN), or "Advanced Automatic Crash Notification" (AACN), even in the
   case of manual trigger.  The "Advanced" qualifier refers to the
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   (often referred to as "crash data" even though there is not
   necessarily a crash) and an INFO package to enable carrying this and
   related data in INFO requests.  An external specification for the
   data format, contents, and structure are referenced in this document.

   This document reuses the technical aspects of next-generation pan-
   European eCall (a mandated and standardized system for emergency
   calls by in-vehicle systems within Europe and other regions).
   However, this document specifies a different set of vehicle (crash)
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   type).  This document also describes legacy (circuit-switched) ACN
   systems and their migration to next-generation emergency calling, to
   provide background information and context.


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Thanks, Allison.  ecall-17 and car-crash-16 (just uploaded now) 
address all comments, including the Content-Disposition issue.

--Randy

At 11:24 AM -0400 10/15/16, Az Mankin wrote:

>  I'll request IETF LC first thing on Tuesday. Working on the 
> write-up and will share it tonight.
>
>  Thank you, WG and Randy

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Hooray, thank you!

On Oct 16, 2016 17:14, "Randall Gellens" <rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org> wrote:

> Thanks, Allison.  ecall-17 and car-crash-16 (just uploaded now) address
> all comments, including the Content-Disposition issue.
>
> --Randy
>
> At 11:24 AM -0400 10/15/16, Az Mankin wrote:
>
>  I'll request IETF LC first thing on Tuesday. Working on the write-up and
>> will share it tonight.
>>
>>  Thank you, WG and Randy
>>
>
> --
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<p dir=3D"ltr">Hooray, thank you!</p>
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x #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Thanks, Allison.=C2=A0 ecall-17 and car-cras=
h-16 (just uploaded now) address all comments, including the Content-Dispos=
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<br>
--Randy<br>
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=C2=A0I&#39;ll request IETF LC first thing on Tuesday. Working on the write=
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<br>
=C2=A0Thank you, WG and Randy<br>
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I identified a few issues:

ISSUE 1:

section 3 - given that the section 3 contains a lot of information on legac=
y eCall in 3GPP, on ETSI requirements on NG-eCall, and CEN documents, I won=
der why the section 3 does not refer to 3GPP TS 24.229 (particularly subcla=
use 4.7.6) which gives details of requirements on PSAP for usage of eCall i=
n mobile environment.

ISSUE 2:

section 3 - level of technical detail of the last paragraph of section 3 do=
es not fit with level of technical detail of the remaining text of section =
3.

ISSUE 3:

section 4 - add a reference to stage-3 requirements on eCall in 3GPP TS 24.=
229.

ISSUE 4:

section 4, "   This document registers the 'application/
   emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD+per' MIME Content-Type to enable the MSD
   to be carried in SIP."

There is no MIME Content-Type registry. "MIME Content-Type" -> "MIME type"

Same in other places of the document.

ISSUE 6:

section 6 - "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always enclosed in a mul=
tipart
   body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in the
   SIP message)." - which multipart MIME type is meant? multipart/mixed or =
multipart/alternative or ....

ISSUE 7

section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP
   INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant by "attach=
ing MSD to SIP INFO request"?

ISSUE 8

section 9 - "   If the IVS receives a SIP response without the metadata/con=
trol
   block, it indicates that the SIP dialog is not an NG-eCall (e.g.,
   some part of the call is being handled as a legacy call)." - needs to ta=
lk about final responses only, as earlier text states "A
   metadata/control object is not attached to provisional (e.g., 180)
   responses."

ISSUE 9

section 9 - what is "SIP status message"?

ISSUE 10

"
For
   example, if a PSAP is unable to accept an eCall (e.g., due to
   overload or too many calls from the same location), it can reject the
   INVITE.  Since a metadata/control object is also included in the SIP
   response that rejects the call, the IVS knows if the PSAP received
   the MSD, and can inform the vehicle occupants that the PSAP
   successfully received the vehicle location and information but can't
   talk to the occupants at that time." - this prevents persons in the car =
from getting emergency service of the PSAP using other means (e.g. using ci=
rcuit switched network). Possibility for DOS attack.

ISSUE 11

"The body for an emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD info package is a multipart bo=
dy." - which multipart MIME type is meant? multipart/mixed or multipart/alt=
ernative or ....

ISSUE 12

"Zero or one application/
   emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD+per part (containing an MSD) and zero or
   more application/emergencyCallData.control+xml (containing a
   metadata/control object) parts are permitted." - this allows INFO with n=
o body part at all. If this is intentional, describe when it is supposed to=
 be used. If this is not intentional, state that at least one of both is pr=
esent.

ISSUE 13

"Intermediate multipart
   body parts MAY appear." - what does it mean? Where is "Intermediate mult=
ipart body part" defined?

ISSUE 14

"while others can be
   expected to carry an occasional request" - meaning of "occasional" can b=
e whatever, it depends on perspective of the user - once per milisecond, on=
ce per second, once per minute, once per hour or once per day?

ISSUE 15

Figure 8 expects location body by inclusion of Geolocation: <cid:target123@=
example.com> but does not show it.

ISSUE 16

>From and To in Figure 9 do not fit From and To in Figure 8.

ISSUE 17

>From in Figure 10 does not contain tag.

ISSUE 18

Accept in Figure 10 is not correct - INFO response is not expected to conta=
in body.

ISSUE 19

To in Figure 11 does not contain tag.

ISSUE 20

examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not aligned w=
ith https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation stating "The schemaLo=
cation attribute value consists of one or more pairs of URI references, sep=
arated by white space. "

           xsi:schemaLocation=3D
               "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"

Kind regards

Ivo Sedlacek


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There is one thing I would like to add to the feedback which I sent recentl=
y on the similar location draft:

Section 4 discusses briefly the possibility of the server limiting the numb=
er of returned similar locations.  Although the current text expresses the =
general idea that there may be a few that are the "most likely" to be the c=
orrect location, there are also scenarios where many similar locations coul=
d all be equally likely, and the server might need to simply cut off the li=
st at a reasonable count.  In those situations, I believe it would be helpf=
ul if the server indicated when such  a limit is actually applied.

I suggest that an attribute be added to the locationValidation element of t=
he findService response, perhaps rli:similarLocationsLimited, having a data=
 type of boolean, with instructions that a server SHOULD include this attri=
bute if the number of returned similar locations is limited due to configur=
ation or policy.

Dan Banks

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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Section 4 discusses briefly the possibility of the s=
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 there are also scenarios where many similar locations could all be equally=
 likely, and the server might need to simply cut off the list at a reasonab=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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licy.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Hi Ivo,


At 12:48 AM +0000 10/17/16, Ivo Sedlacek wrote:

>  I identified a few issues:
>
>  ISSUE 1:
>
>  section 3 - given that the section 3 contains a lot of information 
> on legacy eCall in 3GPP, on ETSI requirements on NG-eCall, and CEN 
> documents, I wonder why the section 3 does not refer to 3GPP TS 
> 24.229 (particularly subclause 4.7.6) which gives details of 
> requirements on PSAP for usage of eCall in mobile environment.

Reference to TS24.229 added in section 4.  Section 3 has higher-level 
information and background, with references to SDOs rather than 
documents.  Section 4 has references to documents, which is where the 
reference to TS24.229 was added.

>
>  ISSUE 2:
>
>  section 3 - level of technical detail of the last paragraph of 
> section 3 does not fit with level of technical detail of the 
> remaining text of section 3.

Intermediate paragraphs were added in version 17.

>
>  ISSUE 3:
>
>  section 4 - add a reference to stage-3 requirements on eCall in 
> 3GPP TS 24.229.

Reference added.

>
>  ISSUE 4:
>
>  section 4, "   This document registers the 'application/
>     emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD+per' MIME Content-Type to enable the MSD
>     to be carried in SIP."
>
>  There is no MIME Content-Type registry. "MIME Content-Type" -> "MIME type"
>
>  Same in other places of the document.

Corrected "content type" to "media type".


>  ISSUE 6:
>
>  section 6 - "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always enclosed 
> in a multipart
>     body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in the
>     SIP message)." - which multipart MIME type is meant? 
> multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....

We do not need to specify that in this text.

>
>  ISSUE 7
>
>  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP
>     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant by 
> "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?

I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier 
instances in the same section that say "as a MIME body part".

>
>  ISSUE 8
>
>  section 9 - "   If the IVS receives a SIP response without the 
> metadata/control
>     block, it indicates that the SIP dialog is not an NG-eCall (e.g.,
>     some part of the call is being handled as a legacy call)." - 
> needs to talk about final responses only, as earlier text states "A
>     metadata/control object is not attached to provisional (e.g., 180)
>     responses."

Agreed, fixed.

>
>  ISSUE 9
>
>  section 9 - what is "SIP status message"?

I do not see "SIP status message" anywhere in the document.

>
>  ISSUE 10
>
>  "
>  For
>     example, if a PSAP is unable to accept an eCall (e.g., due to
>     overload or too many calls from the same location), it can reject the
>     INVITE.  Since a metadata/control object is also included in the SIP
>     response that rejects the call, the IVS knows if the PSAP received
>     the MSD, and can inform the vehicle occupants that the PSAP
>     successfully received the vehicle location and information but can't
>     talk to the occupants at that time." - this prevents persons in 
> the car from getting emergency service of the PSAP using other 
> means (e.g. using circuit switched network). Possibility for DOS 
> attack.

If the PSAP is overloaded (e.g., there is a very large multi-vehicle 
incident, or another large-scale emergency incident), then there are 
likely to be multiple simultaneous eCall attempts.  The document does 
not in any way dictate or mandate PSAP response.  PSAPs are free to 
respond as they choose.  E.g., a PSAP can accept eCalls and add them 
to a queue, a PSAP can reject an eCall and include an ack with 
"received=false", a PSAP can reject an eCall and include an ack with 
"received=true".  Doing the latter indicates that the PSAP has 
received the MSD and hence is aware of the incident.

>
>  ISSUE 11
>
>  "The body for an emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD info package is a 
> multipart body." - which multipart MIME type is meant? 
> multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....

We do not need to get into that level of detail in this text.

>
>  ISSUE 12
>
>  "Zero or one application/
>     emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD+per part (containing an MSD) and zero or
>     more application/emergencyCallData.control+xml (containing a
>     metadata/control object) parts are permitted." - this allows 
> INFO with no body part at all. If this is intentional, describe 
> when it is supposed to be used. If this is not intentional, state 
> that at least one of both is present.

I clarified this, thanks for catching it.

>
>  ISSUE 13
>
>  "Intermediate multipart
>     body parts MAY appear." - what does it mean? Where is 
> "Intermediate multipart body part" defined?

The text was deleted in version -16.

>
>  ISSUE 14
>
>  "while others can be
>     expected to carry an occasional request" - meaning of 
> "occasional" can be whatever, it depends on perspective of the user 
> - once per milisecond, once per second, once per minute, once per 
> hour or once per day?

Other text makes it clear that a request for an updated MSD is 
generally sent upon manual request of a PSAP call taker who suspects 
vehicle state may have changed.

>
>  ISSUE 15
>
>  Figure 8 expects location body by inclusion of Geolocation: 
> <cid:target123@example.com> but does not show it.

Fixed, thanks for catching this.

>
>  ISSUE 16
>
>>From and To in Figure 9 do not fit From and To in Figure 8.

Fixed, thanks for catching this.

>
>  ISSUE 17
>
>>From in Figure 10 does not contain tag.

Fixed, thanks for catching this.

>
>  ISSUE 18
>
>  Accept in Figure 10 is not correct - INFO response is not expected 
> to contain body.

Fixed, thanks for catching this.

>
>  ISSUE 19
>
>  To in Figure 11 does not contain tag.

Fixed, thanks for catching this.

>
>  ISSUE 20
>
>  examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not 
> aligned with https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation 
> stating "The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or more 
> pairs of URI references, separated by white space. "
>
>             xsi:schemaLocation=
>                 "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"

Fixed.

>
>  Kind regards
>
>  Ivo Sedlacek
>
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies of the IETF.

        Title           : Next-Generation Pan-European eCall
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-18.txt
	Pages           : 45
	Date            : 2016-10-17

Abstract:
   This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
   mechanisms to support the next generation of the pan European in-
   vehicle emergency call service defined under the eSafety initiative
   of the European Commission (generally referred to as "eCall"). eCall
   is a standardized and mandated system for a special form of emergency
   calls placed by vehicles, providing real-time communications and an
   integrated set of related data.

   This document also registers MIME media types and an Emergency Call
   Additional Data Block for the eCall vehicle data and metadata/control
   data, and an INFO package to enable carrying this data in INFO
   requests.


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        Title           : Next-Generation Vehicle-Initiated Emergency Calls
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Brian Rosen
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-17.txt
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Abstract:
   This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
   mechanisms to support the next generation of emergency calls placed
   by vehicles (automatically in the event of a crash or serious
   incident, or manually invoked by a vehicle occupant) and conveying
   vehicle, sensor, and location data related to the crash or incident.
   Such calls are often referred to as "Automatic Crash Notification"
   (ACN), or "Advanced Automatic Crash Notification" (AACN), even in the
   case of manual trigger.  The "Advanced" qualifier refers to the
   ability to carry a richer set of data.

   This document also registers a MIME media type and Emergency Call
   Additional Data Block for the vehicle, sensor, and location data
   (often referred to as "crash data" even though there is not
   necessarily a crash) and an INFO package to enable carrying this and
   related data in INFO requests.  An external specification for the
   data format, contents, and structure are referenced in this document.

   This document reuses the technical aspects of next-generation pan-
   European eCall (a mandated and standardized system for emergency
   calls by in-vehicle systems within Europe and other regions).
   However, this document specifies a different set of vehicle (crash)
   data, specifically, the Vehicle Emergency Data Set (VEDS) rather than
   the eCall Minimum Set of Data (MSD).  This document is an extension
   of the eCall document, with the primary differences being that this
   document makes the MSD data set optional and VEDS mandatory, and adds
   attribute values to the metadata/control object to permit greater
   functionality.  This document registers a new INFO package (identical
   to that registered for eCall but with the addition of the VEDS MIME
   type).  This document also describes legacy (circuit-switched) ACN
   systems and their migration to next-generation emergency calling, to
   provide background information and context.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash/

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https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-17

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https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-17


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ecall-18 and car-crash-17 (just uploaded now) address all comments, 
including Ivo's.

-- 
Randall Gellens
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We must respect the other fellow's religion, but only in the sense and to
the extent that we respect his theory that his wife is beautiful and his
children are smart.                                      --H.L. Mencken


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Hi,

Once all comments have been addressed, I think the community should be
given a few days to check the latest version of the draft, before the
publication request is done.

Regards,

Christer



On 18/10/16 02:51, "Randall Gellens" <rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org> wrote:

>ecall-18 and car-crash-17 (just uploaded now) address all comments,
>including Ivo's.
>
>--=20
>Randall Gellens
>Opinions are personal;    facts are suspect;    I speak for myself only
>-------------- Randomly selected tag: ---------------
>We must respect the other fellow's religion, but only in the sense and to
>the extent that we respect his theory that his wife is beautiful and his
>children are smart.                                      --H.L. Mencken


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Hello,

first of all, I am participating in 3GPP CT1 meeting this week and I have n=
ot have time to review changes between -015 and -018 properly. Can we shift=
 the deadline to next week?

I am OK with resolution of ISSUE 1, ISSUE 3, ISSUE 8, ISSUE 13, ISSUE 15, I=
SSUE 16, ISSUE 17, ISSUE 19.

On the remaining issues:

> >  ISSUE 2:
> >
> >  section 3 - level of technical detail of the last paragraph of=20
> > section 3 does not fit with level of technical detail of the remaining=
=20
> > text of section 3.
>=20
> Intermediate paragraphs were added in version 17.

I still believe that section 3 contains different types of information:
Type1: generic overview of the eCall requirements, existing solutions, ...
Type2: information about the draft

It would be better to split those to separate sections.

> >  ISSUE 4:
> >
> >  section 4, "   This document registers the 'application/
> >     emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD+per' MIME Content-Type to enable the MS=
D
> >     to be carried in SIP."
> >
> >  There is no MIME Content-Type registry. "MIME Content-Type" -> "MIME t=
ype"
> >
> >  Same in other places of the document.
>=20
> Corrected "content type" to "media type".

I can still see a few occurences of "content type" in -018 - e.g.

---------
      Security considerations: This ****content type**** is designed to car=
ry
      vehicle and incident-related data during an emergency call.  This
      data contains personal information including vehicle VIN,
      location, direction, etc.  Appropriate precautions need to be
      taken to limit unauthorized access, inappropriate disclosure to
      third parties, and eavesdropping of this information.  In general,
      it is acceptable for the data to be unprotected while briefly in
      transit within the Mobile Network Operator (MNO); the MNO is
      trusted to not permit the data to be accessed by third parties.
      Sections 7 and Section 8 of [RFC7852] contain more discussion.
---------
and
---------
   The metadata/control block is designed for use with pan-European
   eCall and also eCall-like systems (i.e., in other regions), and has
   extension points.  Note that eCall-like systems might define their
   own vehicle data blocks, and so might need to register a new INFO
   package to accomodate the new data ****content type**** and the metadata=
/
   control object.
---------
and
--------
         This ****content type**** carries metadata and control information=
 and
         requests, such as from a Public Safety Answering Point (PSAP)
         to an In-Vehicle System (IVS) during an emergency call.
--------

> >  ISSUE 6:
> >
> >  section 6 - "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always enclosed in=
=20
> > a multipart
> >     body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in the
> >     SIP message)." - which multipart MIME type is meant?=20
> > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
>=20
> We do not need to specify that in this text.

IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while PSAP expect=
s multipart/alternative.

> >  ISSUE 7
> >
> >  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP
> >     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant by=20
> > "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?
>=20
> I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier instances in=
 the=20
> same section that say "as a MIME body part".

I do not really know what "attach body to SIP request"  means. Likely, othe=
r readers will not know it either.

A reference to a section defining how to "attach body to SIP request" would=
 help.


> >  ISSUE 9
> >
> >  section 9 - what is "SIP status message"?
>=20
> I do not see "SIP status message" anywhere in the document.

It was in -015 section 9 but it looks like it was already resolved in -18.


> >  ISSUE 10
> >
> >  "
> >  For
> >     example, if a PSAP is unable to accept an eCall (e.g., due to
> >     overload or too many calls from the same location), it can reject t=
he
> >     INVITE.  Since a metadata/control object is also included in the SI=
P
> >     response that rejects the call, the IVS knows if the PSAP received
> >     the MSD, and can inform the vehicle occupants that the PSAP
> >     successfully received the vehicle location and information but can'=
t
> >     talk to the occupants at that time." - this prevents persons in=20
> > the car from getting emergency service of the PSAP using other means=20
> > (e.g. using circuit switched network). Possibility for DOS attack.
>=20
> If the PSAP is overloaded (e.g., there is a very large multi-vehicle=20
> incident, or another large-scale emergency incident), then there are like=
ly=20
> to be multiple simultaneous eCall attempts.  The document does not in any=
 way=20
> dictate or mandate PSAP response.  PSAPs are free to respond as they choo=
se. =20
> E.g., a PSAP can accept eCalls and add them to a queue, a PSAP can reject=
 an=20
> eCall and include an ack with "received=3Dfalse", a PSAP can reject an eC=
all=20
> and include an ack with "received=3Dtrue".  Doing the latter indicates th=
at the=20
> PSAP has received the MSD and hence is aware of the incident.

How can the UA be sure that such response was sent by PSAP and not by an at=
tacker, located somewhere between UA and PSAP?=20

Any SIP entity which happens to be in the path of the emergency call INVITE=
 request can generate a 600  (Busy Everywhere), 486 (Busy Here), and 603 (D=
ecline) response and populate it with a particular body.

It is at least a security risk and it needs to be documented.

> >  ISSUE 11
> >
> >  "The body for an emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD info package is a=20
> > multipart body." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
> > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
>=20
> We do not need to get into that level of detail in this text.

IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while PSAP expect=
s multipart/alternative.

> >  ISSUE 14
> >
> >  "while others can be
> >     expected to carry an occasional request" - meaning of "occasional"=
=20
> > can be whatever, it depends on perspective of the user
> > - once per milisecond, once per second, once per minute, once per hour=
=20
> > or once per day?
>=20
> Other text makes it clear that a request for an updated MSD is generally =
sent=20
> upon manual request of a PSAP call taker who suspects vehicle state may h=
ave changed.

A statement that the request is expected to be triggered by manual action o=
f the PSAP call taker is good, so I suggest to add it to this section too a=
s expert reviewer will read it.

> >
> >  ISSUE 18
> >
> >  Accept in Figure 10 is not correct - INFO response is not expected=20
> > to contain body.
>=20
> Fixed, thanks for catching this.

in -18, I can still see Accept with multipart/mixed in the INFO request in =
Figure 10.

IMO, this is wrong as we do NOT expect a body in INFO response. Yes, there =
will be a body in subsequent INFO request sent in opposite direction, but t=
hat's not impacted by Accept in first INFO request.

> >
> >  ISSUE 20
> >
> >  examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not=20
> > aligned with https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation=20
> > stating "The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or more=20
> > pairs of URI references, separated by white space. "
> >
> >             xsi:schemaLocation=3D
> >                 "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
>=20
> Fixed.

I can see in -18, that you chose to remove the information about schema loc=
ation from the XML examples.
That's OK with me.

However, then you can also remove the following as it is not needed any mor=
e

	xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance"

Kind regards

Ivo Sedlacek


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Hi,

Regarding indicating the type of multipart (mixed, alternative etc), I
agree with Ivo.=20

Unfortunately RFC 6086 doesn=B9t normatively define the type either (in the
examples multipart/mixed is used, though), why I think it=B9s even more
important to do it in draft-ecall.

Regards,

Christer


On 18/10/16 15:02, "Ecrit on behalf of Ivo Sedlacek"
<ecrit-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of ivo.sedlacek@ericsson.com> wrote:

>Hello,
>
>first of all, I am participating in 3GPP CT1 meeting this week and I have
>not have time to review changes between -015 and -018 properly. Can we
>shift the deadline to next week?
>
>I am OK with resolution of ISSUE 1, ISSUE 3, ISSUE 8, ISSUE 13, ISSUE 15,
>ISSUE 16, ISSUE 17, ISSUE 19.
>
>On the remaining issues:
>
>> >  ISSUE 2:
>> >
>> >  section 3 - level of technical detail of the last paragraph of
>> > section 3 does not fit with level of technical detail of the
>>remaining=20
>> > text of section 3.
>>=20
>> Intermediate paragraphs were added in version 17.
>
>I still believe that section 3 contains different types of information:
>Type1: generic overview of the eCall requirements, existing solutions, ...
>Type2: information about the draft
>
>It would be better to split those to separate sections.
>
>> >  ISSUE 4:
>> >
>> >  section 4, "   This document registers the 'application/
>> >     emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD+per' MIME Content-Type to enable the
>>MSD
>> >     to be carried in SIP."
>> >
>> >  There is no MIME Content-Type registry. "MIME Content-Type" -> "MIME
>>type"
>> >
>> >  Same in other places of the document.
>>=20
>> Corrected "content type" to "media type".
>
>I can still see a few occurences of "content type" in -018 - e.g.
>
>---------
>      Security considerations: This ****content type**** is designed to
>carry
>      vehicle and incident-related data during an emergency call.  This
>      data contains personal information including vehicle VIN,
>      location, direction, etc.  Appropriate precautions need to be
>      taken to limit unauthorized access, inappropriate disclosure to
>      third parties, and eavesdropping of this information.  In general,
>      it is acceptable for the data to be unprotected while briefly in
>      transit within the Mobile Network Operator (MNO); the MNO is
>      trusted to not permit the data to be accessed by third parties.
>      Sections 7 and Section 8 of [RFC7852] contain more discussion.
>---------
>and
>---------
>   The metadata/control block is designed for use with pan-European
>   eCall and also eCall-like systems (i.e., in other regions), and has
>   extension points.  Note that eCall-like systems might define their
>   own vehicle data blocks, and so might need to register a new INFO
>   package to accomodate the new data ****content type**** and the
>metadata/
>   control object.
>---------
>and
>--------
>         This ****content type**** carries metadata and control
>information and
>         requests, such as from a Public Safety Answering Point (PSAP)
>         to an In-Vehicle System (IVS) during an emergency call.
>--------
>
>> >  ISSUE 6:
>> >
>> >  section 6 - "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always enclosed
>>in=20
>> > a multipart
>> >     body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in the
>> >     SIP message)." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
>> > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
>>=20
>> We do not need to specify that in this text.
>
>IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while PSAP
>expects multipart/alternative.
>
>> >  ISSUE 7
>> >
>> >  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP
>> >     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant by
>> > "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?
>>=20
>> I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier instances
>>in the=20
>> same section that say "as a MIME body part".
>
>I do not really know what "attach body to SIP request"  means. Likely,
>other readers will not know it either.
>
>A reference to a section defining how to "attach body to SIP request"
>would help.
>
>
>> >  ISSUE 9
>> >
>> >  section 9 - what is "SIP status message"?
>>=20
>> I do not see "SIP status message" anywhere in the document.
>
>It was in -015 section 9 but it looks like it was already resolved in -18.
>
>
>> >  ISSUE 10
>> >
>> >  "
>> >  For
>> >     example, if a PSAP is unable to accept an eCall (e.g., due to
>> >     overload or too many calls from the same location), it can reject
>>the
>> >     INVITE.  Since a metadata/control object is also included in the
>>SIP
>> >     response that rejects the call, the IVS knows if the PSAP received
>> >     the MSD, and can inform the vehicle occupants that the PSAP
>> >     successfully received the vehicle location and information but
>>can't
>> >     talk to the occupants at that time." - this prevents persons in
>> > the car from getting emergency service of the PSAP using other means
>> > (e.g. using circuit switched network). Possibility for DOS attack.
>>=20
>> If the PSAP is overloaded (e.g., there is a very large multi-vehicle
>> incident, or another large-scale emergency incident), then there are
>>likely=20
>> to be multiple simultaneous eCall attempts.  The document does not in
>>any way=20
>> dictate or mandate PSAP response.  PSAPs are free to respond as they
>>choose. =20
>> E.g., a PSAP can accept eCalls and add them to a queue, a PSAP can
>>reject an=20
>> eCall and include an ack with "received=3Dfalse", a PSAP can reject an
>>eCall=20
>> and include an ack with "received=3Dtrue".  Doing the latter indicates
>>that the=20
>> PSAP has received the MSD and hence is aware of the incident.
>
>How can the UA be sure that such response was sent by PSAP and not by an
>attacker, located somewhere between UA and PSAP?
>
>Any SIP entity which happens to be in the path of the emergency call
>INVITE request can generate a 600  (Busy Everywhere), 486 (Busy Here),
>and 603 (Decline) response and populate it with a particular body.
>
>It is at least a security risk and it needs to be documented.
>
>> >  ISSUE 11
>> >
>> >  "The body for an emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD info package is a
>> > multipart body." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
>> > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
>>=20
>> We do not need to get into that level of detail in this text.
>
>IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while PSAP
>expects multipart/alternative.
>
>> >  ISSUE 14
>> >
>> >  "while others can be
>> >     expected to carry an occasional request" - meaning of
>>"occasional"=20
>> > can be whatever, it depends on perspective of the user
>> > - once per milisecond, once per second, once per minute, once per
>>hour=20
>> > or once per day?
>>=20
>> Other text makes it clear that a request for an updated MSD is
>>generally sent=20
>> upon manual request of a PSAP call taker who suspects vehicle state may
>>have changed.
>
>A statement that the request is expected to be triggered by manual action
>of the PSAP call taker is good, so I suggest to add it to this section
>too as expert reviewer will read it.
>
>> >
>> >  ISSUE 18
>> >
>> >  Accept in Figure 10 is not correct - INFO response is not expected
>> > to contain body.
>>=20
>> Fixed, thanks for catching this.
>
>in -18, I can still see Accept with multipart/mixed in the INFO request
>in Figure 10.
>
>IMO, this is wrong as we do NOT expect a body in INFO response. Yes,
>there will be a body in subsequent INFO request sent in opposite
>direction, but that's not impacted by Accept in first INFO request.
>
>> >
>> >  ISSUE 20
>> >
>> >  examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not
>> > aligned with https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation
>> > stating "The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or more
>> > pairs of URI references, separated by white space. "
>> >
>> >             xsi:schemaLocation=3D
>> >                 "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
>>=20
>> Fixed.
>
>I can see in -18, that you chose to remove the information about schema
>location from the XML examples.
>That's OK with me.
>
>However, then you can also remove the following as it is not needed any
>more
>
>	xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance"
>
>Kind regards
>
>Ivo Sedlacek
>
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Hi Ivo,

I think we can address any remaining comments as part of IETF Last Call.

--Randy

At 12:02 PM +0000 10/18/16, Ivo Sedlacek wrote:

>  Hello,
>
>  first of all, I am participating in 3GPP CT1 meeting this week and 
> I have not have time to review changes between -015 and -018 
> properly. Can we shift the deadline to next week?
>
>  I am OK with resolution of ISSUE 1, ISSUE 3, ISSUE 8, ISSUE 13, 
> ISSUE 15, ISSUE 16, ISSUE 17, ISSUE 19.
>
>  On the remaining issues:
>
>>  >  ISSUE 2:
>>  >
>>  >  section 3 - level of technical detail of the last paragraph of
>>  > section 3 does not fit with level of technical detail of the remaining
>>  > text of section 3.
>>
>>  Intermediate paragraphs were added in version 17.
>
>  I still believe that section 3 contains different types of information:
>  Type1: generic overview of the eCall requirements, existing solutions, ...
>  Type2: information about the draft
>
>  It would be better to split those to separate sections.

Can you elaborate on what the problem is?

>
>>  >  ISSUE 4:
>>  >
>>  >  section 4, "   This document registers the 'application/
>>  >     emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD+per' MIME Content-Type to enable the MSD
>>  >     to be carried in SIP."
>>  >
>>  >  There is no MIME Content-Type registry. "MIME Content-Type" -> 
>> "MIME type"
>>  >
>>  >  Same in other places of the document.
>>
>>  Corrected "content type" to "media type".
>
>  I can still see a few occurences of "content type" in -018 - e.g.

Thanks, I'll do a grep.

>
>  ---------
>        Security considerations: This ****content type**** is designed to carry
>        vehicle and incident-related data during an emergency call.  This
>        data contains personal information including vehicle VIN,
>        location, direction, etc.  Appropriate precautions need to be
>        taken to limit unauthorized access, inappropriate disclosure to
>        third parties, and eavesdropping of this information.  In general,
>        it is acceptable for the data to be unprotected while briefly in
>        transit within the Mobile Network Operator (MNO); the MNO is
>        trusted to not permit the data to be accessed by third parties.
>        Sections 7 and Section 8 of [RFC7852] contain more discussion.
>  ---------
>  and
>  ---------
>     The metadata/control block is designed for use with pan-European
>     eCall and also eCall-like systems (i.e., in other regions), and has
>     extension points.  Note that eCall-like systems might define their
>     own vehicle data blocks, and so might need to register a new INFO
>     package to accomodate the new data ****content type**** and the metadata/
>     control object.
>  ---------
>  and
>  --------
>           This ****content type**** carries metadata and control 
> information and
>           requests, such as from a Public Safety Answering Point (PSAP)
>           to an In-Vehicle System (IVS) during an emergency call.
>  --------
>
>>  >  ISSUE 6:
>>  >
>>  >  section 6 - "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always enclosed in
>>  > a multipart
>>  >     body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in the
>>  >     SIP message)." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
>>  > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
>>
>>  We do not need to specify that in this text.
>
>  IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while 
> PSAP expects multipart/alternative.

It would be hard to imagine a use case where a UA generates 
multipart/alternative.  However, I don't mind adding text clarifying 
that multipart/mixed is expected.

>
>>  >  ISSUE 7
>>  >
>>  >  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP
>>  >     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant by
>>  > "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?
>>
>>  I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier 
>> instances in the
>>  same section that say "as a MIME body part".
>
>  I do not really know what "attach body to SIP request"  means. 
> Likely, other readers will not know it either.
>
>  A reference to a section defining how to "attach body to SIP 
> request" would help.

It's the same section, just a little bit before.

>
>
>>  >  ISSUE 9
>>  >
>>  >  section 9 - what is "SIP status message"?
>>
>>  I do not see "SIP status message" anywhere in the document.
>
>  It was in -015 section 9 but it looks like it was already resolved in -18.
>
>
>>  >  ISSUE 10
>>  >
>>  >  "
>>  >  For
>>  >     example, if a PSAP is unable to accept an eCall (e.g., due to
>>  >     overload or too many calls from the same location), it can reject the
>>  >     INVITE.  Since a metadata/control object is also included in the SIP
>>  >     response that rejects the call, the IVS knows if the PSAP received
>>  >     the MSD, and can inform the vehicle occupants that the PSAP
>>  >     successfully received the vehicle location and information but can't
>>  >     talk to the occupants at that time." - this prevents persons in
>>  > the car from getting emergency service of the PSAP using other means
>>  > (e.g. using circuit switched network). Possibility for DOS attack.
>>
>>  If the PSAP is overloaded (e.g., there is a very large multi-vehicle
>>  incident, or another large-scale emergency incident), then there are likely
>>  to be multiple simultaneous eCall attempts.  The document does not 
>> in any way
>>  dictate or mandate PSAP response.  PSAPs are free to respond as 
>> they choose. 
>>  E.g., a PSAP can accept eCalls and add them to a queue, a PSAP can reject an
>>  eCall and include an ack with "received=false", a PSAP can reject an eCall
>>  and include an ack with "received=true".  Doing the latter 
>> indicates that the
>>  PSAP has received the MSD and hence is aware of the incident.
>
>  How can the UA be sure that such response was sent by PSAP and not 
> by an attacker, located somewhere between UA and PSAP?
>
>  Any SIP entity which happens to be in the path of the emergency 
> call INVITE request can generate a 600  (Busy Everywhere), 486 
> (Busy Here), and 603 (Decline) response and populate it with a 
> particular body.
>
>  It is at least a security risk and it needs to be documented.

OK, I'll add some text.

>
>>  >  ISSUE 11
>>  >
>>  >  "The body for an emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD info package is a
>>  > multipart body." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
>>  > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
>>
>>  We do not need to get into that level of detail in this text.
>
>  IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while 
> PSAP expects multipart/alternative.

Same answer as above.

>
>>  >  ISSUE 14
>>  >
>>  >  "while others can be
>>  >     expected to carry an occasional request" - meaning of "occasional"
>>  > can be whatever, it depends on perspective of the user
>>  > - once per milisecond, once per second, once per minute, once per hour
>>  > or once per day?
>>
>>  Other text makes it clear that a request for an updated MSD is 
>> generally sent
>>  upon manual request of a PSAP call taker who suspects vehicle 
>> state may have changed.
>
>  A statement that the request is expected to be triggered by manual 
> action of the PSAP call taker is good, so I suggest to add it to 
> this section too as expert reviewer will read it.

OK, I'll add text.

>
>>  >
>>  >  ISSUE 18
>>  >
>>  >  Accept in Figure 10 is not correct - INFO response is not expected
>>  > to contain body.
>>
>>  Fixed, thanks for catching this.
>
>  in -18, I can still see Accept with multipart/mixed in the INFO 
> request in Figure 10.

I don't see it.  Here is Figure 10:

     INFO sip:+13145551111@example.com SIP/2.0
     To: <sip:+13145551111@example.com>;tag=9fxced76sl
     From: Exemplar PSAP <urn:service:sos.ecall.automatic>;tag=8gydfe65t0
     Call-ID: 3848276298220188511@atlanta.example.com
     Call-Info: <cid:3456789012@atlanta.example.com>;
                purpose=emergencyCallData.control
     CSeq: 41862 INFO
     Info-Package: emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD
     Allow: INVITE, ACK, PRACK, INFO, OPTIONS, CANCEL, REFER, BYE,
            SUBSCRIBE, NOTIFY, UPDATE
     Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary=boundaryZZZ
     Content-Dispositio: Info-Package
     Content-Length: ...

     --boundaryZZZ
     Content-Disposition: by-reference
     Content-Type: application/emergencyCallData.control+xml
     Content-ID: <3456789012@atlanta.example.com>

     <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
     <emergencyCallData.control
         xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
         xmlns:xsi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance">

     <request action="send-data" datatype="eCall.MSD"/>

     </emergencyCallData.control>
      --boundaryZZZ--

                       Figure 10: INFO requesting MSD




>
>  IMO, this is wrong as we do NOT expect a body in INFO response. 
> Yes, there will be a body in subsequent INFO request sent in 
> opposite direction, but that's not impacted by Accept in first INFO 
> request.
>
>>  >
>>  >  ISSUE 20
>>  >
>>  >  examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not
>>  > aligned with https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation
>>  > stating "The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or more
>>  > pairs of URI references, separated by white space. "
>>  >
>>  >             xsi:schemaLocation=
>>  >                 "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
>>
>>  Fixed.
>
>  I can see in -18, that you chose to remove the information about 
> schema location from the XML examples.
>  That's OK with me.
>
>  However, then you can also remove the following as it is not needed any more
>
>  	xmlns:xsi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance"

I've asked Hannes to verify the XML schema and examples as part of 
IETF Last Call.

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Hi,

>I think we can address any remaining comments as part of IETF Last Call.

NO.=20

We shall forward a document we are ok with. There most likely will be other=
 issues and comments during IETF last call.

Regards,

Christer


At 12:02 PM +0000 10/18/16, Ivo Sedlacek wrote:

>  Hello,
>
>  first of all, I am participating in 3GPP CT1 meeting this week and I=20
> have not have time to review changes between -015 and -018 properly.=20
> Can we shift the deadline to next week?
>
>  I am OK with resolution of ISSUE 1, ISSUE 3, ISSUE 8, ISSUE 13, ISSUE=20
> 15, ISSUE 16, ISSUE 17, ISSUE 19.
>
>  On the remaining issues:
>
>>  >  ISSUE 2:
>>  >
>>  >  section 3 - level of technical detail of the last paragraph of  >=20
>> section 3 does not fit with level of technical detail of the=20
>> remaining  > text of section 3.
>>
>>  Intermediate paragraphs were added in version 17.
>
>  I still believe that section 3 contains different types of information:
>  Type1: generic overview of the eCall requirements, existing solutions, .=
..
>  Type2: information about the draft
>
>  It would be better to split those to separate sections.

Can you elaborate on what the problem is?

>
>>  >  ISSUE 4:
>>  >
>>  >  section 4, "   This document registers the 'application/
>>  >     emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD+per' MIME Content-Type to enable the =
MSD
>>  >     to be carried in SIP."
>>  >
>>  >  There is no MIME Content-Type registry. "MIME Content-Type" ->=20
>> "MIME type"
>>  >
>>  >  Same in other places of the document.
>>
>>  Corrected "content type" to "media type".
>
>  I can still see a few occurences of "content type" in -018 - e.g.

Thanks, I'll do a grep.

>
>  ---------
>        Security considerations: This ****content type**** is designed to =
carry
>        vehicle and incident-related data during an emergency call.  This
>        data contains personal information including vehicle VIN,
>        location, direction, etc.  Appropriate precautions need to be
>        taken to limit unauthorized access, inappropriate disclosure to
>        third parties, and eavesdropping of this information.  In general,
>        it is acceptable for the data to be unprotected while briefly in
>        transit within the Mobile Network Operator (MNO); the MNO is
>        trusted to not permit the data to be accessed by third parties.
>        Sections 7 and Section 8 of [RFC7852] contain more discussion.
>  ---------
>  and
>  ---------
>     The metadata/control block is designed for use with pan-European
>     eCall and also eCall-like systems (i.e., in other regions), and has
>     extension points.  Note that eCall-like systems might define their
>     own vehicle data blocks, and so might need to register a new INFO
>     package to accomodate the new data ****content type**** and the metad=
ata/
>     control object.
>  ---------
>  and
>  --------
>           This ****content type**** carries metadata and control=20
> information and
>           requests, such as from a Public Safety Answering Point (PSAP)
>           to an In-Vehicle System (IVS) during an emergency call.
>  --------
>
>>  >  ISSUE 6:
>>  >
>>  >  section 6 - "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always=20
>> enclosed in  > a multipart
>>  >     body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in th=
e
>>  >     SIP message)." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
>>  > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
>>
>>  We do not need to specify that in this text.
>
>  IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while PSAP=20
> expects multipart/alternative.

It would be hard to imagine a use case where a UA generates multipart/alter=
native.  However, I don't mind adding text clarifying that multipart/mixed =
is expected.

>
>>  >  ISSUE 7
>>  >
>>  >  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP
>>  >     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant by
>>  > "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?
>>
>>  I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier=20
>> instances in the
>>  same section that say "as a MIME body part".
>
>  I do not really know what "attach body to SIP request"  means.=20
> Likely, other readers will not know it either.
>
>  A reference to a section defining how to "attach body to SIP=20
> request" would help.

It's the same section, just a little bit before.

>
>
>>  >  ISSUE 9
>>  >
>>  >  section 9 - what is "SIP status message"?
>>
>>  I do not see "SIP status message" anywhere in the document.
>
>  It was in -015 section 9 but it looks like it was already resolved in -1=
8.
>
>
>>  >  ISSUE 10
>>  >
>>  >  "
>>  >  For
>>  >     example, if a PSAP is unable to accept an eCall (e.g., due to
>>  >     overload or too many calls from the same location), it can reject=
 the
>>  >     INVITE.  Since a metadata/control object is also included in the =
SIP
>>  >     response that rejects the call, the IVS knows if the PSAP receive=
d
>>  >     the MSD, and can inform the vehicle occupants that the PSAP
>>  >     successfully received the vehicle location and information but ca=
n't
>>  >     talk to the occupants at that time." - this prevents persons in
>>  > the car from getting emergency service of the PSAP using other means
>>  > (e.g. using circuit switched network). Possibility for DOS attack.
>>
>>  If the PSAP is overloaded (e.g., there is a very large multi-vehicle
>>  incident, or another large-scale emergency incident), then there are li=
kely
>>  to be multiple simultaneous eCall attempts.  The document does not=20
>> in any way
>>  dictate or mandate PSAP response.  PSAPs are free to respond as=20
>> they choose.=20
>>  E.g., a PSAP can accept eCalls and add them to a queue, a PSAP can reje=
ct an
>>  eCall and include an ack with "received=3Dfalse", a PSAP can reject an =
eCall
>>  and include an ack with "received=3Dtrue".  Doing the latter=20
>> indicates that the
>>  PSAP has received the MSD and hence is aware of the incident.
>
>  How can the UA be sure that such response was sent by PSAP and not=20
> by an attacker, located somewhere between UA and PSAP?
>
>  Any SIP entity which happens to be in the path of the emergency=20
> call INVITE request can generate a 600  (Busy Everywhere), 486=20
> (Busy Here), and 603 (Decline) response and populate it with a=20
> particular body.
>
>  It is at least a security risk and it needs to be documented.

OK, I'll add some text.

>
>>  >  ISSUE 11
>>  >
>>  >  "The body for an emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD info package is a
>>  > multipart body." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
>>  > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
>>
>>  We do not need to get into that level of detail in this text.
>
>  IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while=20
> PSAP expects multipart/alternative.

Same answer as above.

>
>>  >  ISSUE 14
>>  >
>>  >  "while others can be
>>  >     expected to carry an occasional request" - meaning of "occasional=
"
>>  > can be whatever, it depends on perspective of the user
>>  > - once per milisecond, once per second, once per minute, once per hou=
r
>>  > or once per day?
>>
>>  Other text makes it clear that a request for an updated MSD is=20
>> generally sent
>>  upon manual request of a PSAP call taker who suspects vehicle=20
>> state may have changed.
>
>  A statement that the request is expected to be triggered by manual=20
> action of the PSAP call taker is good, so I suggest to add it to=20
> this section too as expert reviewer will read it.

OK, I'll add text.

>
>>  >
>>  >  ISSUE 18
>>  >
>>  >  Accept in Figure 10 is not correct - INFO response is not expected
>>  > to contain body.
>>
>>  Fixed, thanks for catching this.
>
>  in -18, I can still see Accept with multipart/mixed in the INFO=20
> request in Figure 10.

I don't see it.  Here is Figure 10:

     INFO sip:+13145551111@example.com SIP/2.0
     To: <sip:+13145551111@example.com>;tag=3D9fxced76sl
     From: Exemplar PSAP <urn:service:sos.ecall.automatic>;tag=3D8gydfe65t0
     Call-ID: 3848276298220188511@atlanta.example.com
     Call-Info: <cid:3456789012@atlanta.example.com>;
                purpose=3DemergencyCallData.control
     CSeq: 41862 INFO
     Info-Package: emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD
     Allow: INVITE, ACK, PRACK, INFO, OPTIONS, CANCEL, REFER, BYE,
            SUBSCRIBE, NOTIFY, UPDATE
     Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary=3DboundaryZZZ
     Content-Dispositio: Info-Package
     Content-Length: ...

     --boundaryZZZ
     Content-Disposition: by-reference
     Content-Type: application/emergencyCallData.control+xml
     Content-ID: <3456789012@atlanta.example.com>

     <?xml version=3D"1.0" encoding=3D"UTF-8"?>
     <emergencyCallData.control
         xmlns=3D"urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
         xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance">

     <request action=3D"send-data" datatype=3D"eCall.MSD"/>

     </emergencyCallData.control>
      --boundaryZZZ--

                       Figure 10: INFO requesting MSD




>
>  IMO, this is wrong as we do NOT expect a body in INFO response.=20
> Yes, there will be a body in subsequent INFO request sent in=20
> opposite direction, but that's not impacted by Accept in first INFO=20
> request.
>
>>  >
>>  >  ISSUE 20
>>  >
>>  >  examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not
>>  > aligned with https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation
>>  > stating "The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or more
>>  > pairs of URI references, separated by white space. "
>>  >
>>  >             xsi:schemaLocation=3D
>>  >                 "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
>>
>>  Fixed.
>
>  I can see in -18, that you chose to remove the information about=20
> schema location from the XML examples.
>  That's OK with me.
>
>  However, then you can also remove the following as it is not needed any =
more
>
>  	xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance"

I've asked Hannes to verify the XML schema and examples as part of=20
IETF Last Call.

--=20
Randall Gellens
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The comments were submitted as part of WGLC and I expect them to be address=
ed during WGLC.

Kind regards

Ivo

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From: Randall Gellens [mailto:rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org]=20
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Subject: RE: [Ecrit] Ivo's review of draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-15

Hi Ivo,

I think we can address any remaining comments as part of IETF Last Call.

--Randy

At 12:02 PM +0000 10/18/16, Ivo Sedlacek wrote:

>  Hello,
>
>  first of all, I am participating in 3GPP CT1 meeting this week and I=20
> have not have time to review changes between -015 and -018 properly.=20
> Can we shift the deadline to next week?
>
>  I am OK with resolution of ISSUE 1, ISSUE 3, ISSUE 8, ISSUE 13, ISSUE=20
> 15, ISSUE 16, ISSUE 17, ISSUE 19.
>
>  On the remaining issues:
>
>>  >  ISSUE 2:
>>  >
>>  >  section 3 - level of technical detail of the last paragraph of  >=20
>> section 3 does not fit with level of technical detail of the=20
>> remaining  > text of section 3.
>>
>>  Intermediate paragraphs were added in version 17.
>
>  I still believe that section 3 contains different types of information:
>  Type1: generic overview of the eCall requirements, existing solutions, .=
..
>  Type2: information about the draft
>
>  It would be better to split those to separate sections.

Can you elaborate on what the problem is?

>
>>  >  ISSUE 4:
>>  >
>>  >  section 4, "   This document registers the 'application/
>>  >     emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD+per' MIME Content-Type to enable the =
MSD
>>  >     to be carried in SIP."
>>  >
>>  >  There is no MIME Content-Type registry. "MIME Content-Type" ->=20
>> "MIME type"
>>  >
>>  >  Same in other places of the document.
>>
>>  Corrected "content type" to "media type".
>
>  I can still see a few occurences of "content type" in -018 - e.g.

Thanks, I'll do a grep.

>
>  ---------
>        Security considerations: This ****content type**** is designed to =
carry
>        vehicle and incident-related data during an emergency call.  This
>        data contains personal information including vehicle VIN,
>        location, direction, etc.  Appropriate precautions need to be
>        taken to limit unauthorized access, inappropriate disclosure to
>        third parties, and eavesdropping of this information.  In general,
>        it is acceptable for the data to be unprotected while briefly in
>        transit within the Mobile Network Operator (MNO); the MNO is
>        trusted to not permit the data to be accessed by third parties.
>        Sections 7 and Section 8 of [RFC7852] contain more discussion.
>  ---------
>  and
>  ---------
>     The metadata/control block is designed for use with pan-European
>     eCall and also eCall-like systems (i.e., in other regions), and has
>     extension points.  Note that eCall-like systems might define their
>     own vehicle data blocks, and so might need to register a new INFO
>     package to accomodate the new data ****content type**** and the metad=
ata/
>     control object.
>  ---------
>  and
>  --------
>           This ****content type**** carries metadata and control=20
> information and
>           requests, such as from a Public Safety Answering Point (PSAP)
>           to an In-Vehicle System (IVS) during an emergency call.
>  --------
>
>>  >  ISSUE 6:
>>  >
>>  >  section 6 - "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always=20
>> enclosed in  > a multipart
>>  >     body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in th=
e
>>  >     SIP message)." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
>>  > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
>>
>>  We do not need to specify that in this text.
>
>  IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while PSAP=20
> expects multipart/alternative.

It would be hard to imagine a use case where a UA generates multipart/alter=
native.  However, I don't mind adding text clarifying that multipart/mixed =
is expected.

>
>>  >  ISSUE 7
>>  >
>>  >  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP
>>  >     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant by
>>  > "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?
>>
>>  I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier=20
>> instances in the
>>  same section that say "as a MIME body part".
>
>  I do not really know what "attach body to SIP request"  means.=20
> Likely, other readers will not know it either.
>
>  A reference to a section defining how to "attach body to SIP=20
> request" would help.

It's the same section, just a little bit before.

>
>
>>  >  ISSUE 9
>>  >
>>  >  section 9 - what is "SIP status message"?
>>
>>  I do not see "SIP status message" anywhere in the document.
>
>  It was in -015 section 9 but it looks like it was already resolved in -1=
8.
>
>
>>  >  ISSUE 10
>>  >
>>  >  "
>>  >  For
>>  >     example, if a PSAP is unable to accept an eCall (e.g., due to
>>  >     overload or too many calls from the same location), it can reject=
 the
>>  >     INVITE.  Since a metadata/control object is also included in the =
SIP
>>  >     response that rejects the call, the IVS knows if the PSAP receive=
d
>>  >     the MSD, and can inform the vehicle occupants that the PSAP
>>  >     successfully received the vehicle location and information but ca=
n't
>>  >     talk to the occupants at that time." - this prevents persons in
>>  > the car from getting emergency service of the PSAP using other means
>>  > (e.g. using circuit switched network). Possibility for DOS attack.
>>
>>  If the PSAP is overloaded (e.g., there is a very large multi-vehicle
>>  incident, or another large-scale emergency incident), then there are li=
kely
>>  to be multiple simultaneous eCall attempts.  The document does not=20
>> in any way
>>  dictate or mandate PSAP response.  PSAPs are free to respond as=20
>> they choose.=20
>>  E.g., a PSAP can accept eCalls and add them to a queue, a PSAP can reje=
ct an
>>  eCall and include an ack with "received=3Dfalse", a PSAP can reject an =
eCall
>>  and include an ack with "received=3Dtrue".  Doing the latter=20
>> indicates that the
>>  PSAP has received the MSD and hence is aware of the incident.
>
>  How can the UA be sure that such response was sent by PSAP and not=20
> by an attacker, located somewhere between UA and PSAP?
>
>  Any SIP entity which happens to be in the path of the emergency=20
> call INVITE request can generate a 600  (Busy Everywhere), 486=20
> (Busy Here), and 603 (Decline) response and populate it with a=20
> particular body.
>
>  It is at least a security risk and it needs to be documented.

OK, I'll add some text.

>
>>  >  ISSUE 11
>>  >
>>  >  "The body for an emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD info package is a
>>  > multipart body." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
>>  > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
>>
>>  We do not need to get into that level of detail in this text.
>
>  IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while=20
> PSAP expects multipart/alternative.

Same answer as above.

>
>>  >  ISSUE 14
>>  >
>>  >  "while others can be
>>  >     expected to carry an occasional request" - meaning of "occasional=
"
>>  > can be whatever, it depends on perspective of the user
>>  > - once per milisecond, once per second, once per minute, once per hou=
r
>>  > or once per day?
>>
>>  Other text makes it clear that a request for an updated MSD is=20
>> generally sent
>>  upon manual request of a PSAP call taker who suspects vehicle=20
>> state may have changed.
>
>  A statement that the request is expected to be triggered by manual=20
> action of the PSAP call taker is good, so I suggest to add it to=20
> this section too as expert reviewer will read it.

OK, I'll add text.

>
>>  >
>>  >  ISSUE 18
>>  >
>>  >  Accept in Figure 10 is not correct - INFO response is not expected
>>  > to contain body.
>>
>>  Fixed, thanks for catching this.
>
>  in -18, I can still see Accept with multipart/mixed in the INFO=20
> request in Figure 10.

I don't see it.  Here is Figure 10:

     INFO sip:+13145551111@example.com SIP/2.0
     To: <sip:+13145551111@example.com>;tag=3D9fxced76sl
     From: Exemplar PSAP <urn:service:sos.ecall.automatic>;tag=3D8gydfe65t0
     Call-ID: 3848276298220188511@atlanta.example.com
     Call-Info: <cid:3456789012@atlanta.example.com>;
                purpose=3DemergencyCallData.control
     CSeq: 41862 INFO
     Info-Package: emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD
     Allow: INVITE, ACK, PRACK, INFO, OPTIONS, CANCEL, REFER, BYE,
            SUBSCRIBE, NOTIFY, UPDATE
     Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary=3DboundaryZZZ
     Content-Dispositio: Info-Package
     Content-Length: ...

     --boundaryZZZ
     Content-Disposition: by-reference
     Content-Type: application/emergencyCallData.control+xml
     Content-ID: <3456789012@atlanta.example.com>

     <?xml version=3D"1.0" encoding=3D"UTF-8"?>
     <emergencyCallData.control
         xmlns=3D"urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
         xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance">

     <request action=3D"send-data" datatype=3D"eCall.MSD"/>

     </emergencyCallData.control>
      --boundaryZZZ--

                       Figure 10: INFO requesting MSD




>
>  IMO, this is wrong as we do NOT expect a body in INFO response.=20
> Yes, there will be a body in subsequent INFO request sent in=20
> opposite direction, but that's not impacted by Accept in first INFO=20
> request.
>
>>  >
>>  >  ISSUE 20
>>  >
>>  >  examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not
>>  > aligned with https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation
>>  > stating "The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or more
>>  > pairs of URI references, separated by white space. "
>>  >
>>  >             xsi:schemaLocation=3D
>>  >                 "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
>>
>>  Fixed.
>
>  I can see in -18, that you chose to remove the information about=20
> schema location from the XML examples.
>  That's OK with me.
>
>  However, then you can also remove the following as it is not needed any =
more
>
>  	xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance"

I've asked Hannes to verify the XML schema and examples as part of=20
IETF Last Call.

--=20
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This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies of the IETF.

        Title           : Next-Generation Pan-European eCall
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-19.txt
	Pages           : 45
	Date            : 2016-10-18

Abstract:
   This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
   mechanisms to support the next generation of the pan European in-
   vehicle emergency call service defined under the eSafety initiative
   of the European Commission (generally referred to as "eCall"). eCall
   is a standardized and mandated system for a special form of emergency
   calls placed by vehicles, providing real-time communications and an
   integrated set of related data.

   This document also registers MIME media types and an Emergency Call
   Additional Data Block for the eCall vehicle data and metadata/control
   data, and an INFO package to enable carrying this data in INFO
   requests.


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        Title           : Next-Generation Vehicle-Initiated Emergency Calls
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Brian Rosen
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-car-crash-18.txt
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Abstract:
   This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
   mechanisms to support the next generation of emergency calls placed
   by vehicles (automatically in the event of a crash or serious
   incident, or manually invoked by a vehicle occupant) and conveying
   vehicle, sensor, and location data related to the crash or incident.
   Such calls are often referred to as "Automatic Crash Notification"
   (ACN), or "Advanced Automatic Crash Notification" (AACN), even in the
   case of manual trigger.  The "Advanced" qualifier refers to the
   ability to carry a richer set of data.

   This document also registers a MIME media type and Emergency Call
   Additional Data Block for the vehicle, sensor, and location data
   (often referred to as "crash data" even though there is not
   necessarily a crash) and an INFO package to enable carrying this and
   related data in INFO requests.  An external specification for the
   data format, contents, and structure are referenced in this document.

   This document reuses the technical aspects of next-generation pan-
   European eCall (a mandated and standardized system for emergency
   calls by in-vehicle systems within Europe and other regions).
   However, this document specifies a different set of vehicle (crash)
   data, specifically, the Vehicle Emergency Data Set (VEDS) rather than
   the eCall Minimum Set of Data (MSD).  This document is an extension
   of the eCall document, with the primary differences being that this
   document makes the MSD data set optional and VEDS mandatory, and adds
   attribute values to the metadata/control object to permit greater
   functionality.  This document registers a new INFO package (identical
   to that registered for eCall but with the addition of the VEDS MIME
   type).  This document also describes legacy (circuit-switched) ACN
   systems and their migration to next-generation emergency calling, to
   provide background information and context.


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Hi Ivo and Christer,

All comments have been addressed in -19.

Thank you.

At 4:43 PM +0000 10/18/16, Ivo Sedlacek wrote:

>  The comments were submitted as part of WGLC and I expect them to be 
> addressed during WGLC.
>
>  Kind regards
>
>  Ivo
>
>  -----Original Message-----
>  From: Randall Gellens [mailto:rg+ietf@randy.pensive.org]
>  Sent: Wednesday, October 19, 2016 12:12 AM
>  To: Ivo Sedlacek <ivo.sedlacek@ericsson.com>; Az Mankin 
> <azmankin@gmail.com>; ecrit@ietf.org
>  Subject: RE: [Ecrit] Ivo's review of draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-15
>
>  Hi Ivo,
>
>  I think we can address any remaining comments as part of IETF Last Call.
>
>  --Randy
>
>  At 12:02 PM +0000 10/18/16, Ivo Sedlacek wrote:
>
>>   Hello,
>>
>>   first of all, I am participating in 3GPP CT1 meeting this week and I
>>  have not have time to review changes between -015 and -018 properly.
>>  Can we shift the deadline to next week?
>>
>>   I am OK with resolution of ISSUE 1, ISSUE 3, ISSUE 8, ISSUE 13, ISSUE
>>  15, ISSUE 16, ISSUE 17, ISSUE 19.
>>
>>   On the remaining issues:
>>
>>>   >  ISSUE 2:
>>>   >
>>>   >  section 3 - level of technical detail of the last paragraph of  >
>>>  section 3 does not fit with level of technical detail of the
>>>  remaining  > text of section 3.
>>>
>>>   Intermediate paragraphs were added in version 17.
>>
>>   I still believe that section 3 contains different types of information:
>>   Type1: generic overview of the eCall requirements, existing solutions, ...
>>   Type2: information about the draft
>>
>>   It would be better to split those to separate sections.
>
>  Can you elaborate on what the problem is?
>
>>
>>>   >  ISSUE 4:
>>>   >
>>>   >  section 4, "   This document registers the 'application/
>>>   >     emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD+per' MIME Content-Type to enable the MSD
>>>   >     to be carried in SIP."
>>>   >
>>>   >  There is no MIME Content-Type registry. "MIME Content-Type" ->
>>>  "MIME type"
>>>   >
>>>   >  Same in other places of the document.
>>>
>>>   Corrected "content type" to "media type".
>>
>>   I can still see a few occurences of "content type" in -018 - e.g.
>
>  Thanks, I'll do a grep.
>
>>
>>   ---------
>>         Security considerations: This ****content type**** is 
>> designed to carry
>>         vehicle and incident-related data during an emergency call.  This
>>         data contains personal information including vehicle VIN,
>>         location, direction, etc.  Appropriate precautions need to be
>>         taken to limit unauthorized access, inappropriate disclosure to
>>         third parties, and eavesdropping of this information.  In general,
>>         it is acceptable for the data to be unprotected while briefly in
>>         transit within the Mobile Network Operator (MNO); the MNO is
>>         trusted to not permit the data to be accessed by third parties.
>>         Sections 7 and Section 8 of [RFC7852] contain more discussion.
>>   ---------
>>   and
>>   ---------
>>      The metadata/control block is designed for use with pan-European
>>      eCall and also eCall-like systems (i.e., in other regions), and has
>>      extension points.  Note that eCall-like systems might define their
>>      own vehicle data blocks, and so might need to register a new INFO
>>      package to accomodate the new data ****content type**** and 
>> the metadata/
>>      control object.
>>   ---------
>>   and
>>   --------
>>            This ****content type**** carries metadata and control
>>  information and
>>            requests, such as from a Public Safety Answering Point (PSAP)
>>            to an In-Vehicle System (IVS) during an emergency call.
>>   --------
>>
>>>   >  ISSUE 6:
>>>   >
>>>   >  section 6 - "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always
>>>  enclosed in  > a multipart
>>>   >     body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in the
>>>   >     SIP message)." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
>>>   > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
>>>
>>>   We do not need to specify that in this text.
>   >
>>   IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while PSAP
>>  expects multipart/alternative.
>
>  It would be hard to imagine a use case where a UA generates 
> multipart/alternative.  However, I don't mind adding text 
> clarifying that multipart/mixed is expected.
>
>>
>>>   >  ISSUE 7
>>>   >
>>>   >  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP
>>>   >     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant by
>>>   > "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?
>>>
>>>   I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier
>>>  instances in the
>>>   same section that say "as a MIME body part".
>>
>>   I do not really know what "attach body to SIP request"  means.
>>  Likely, other readers will not know it either.
>>
>>   A reference to a section defining how to "attach body to SIP
>>  request" would help.
>
>  It's the same section, just a little bit before.
>
>>
>>
>>>   >  ISSUE 9
>>>   >
>>>   >  section 9 - what is "SIP status message"?
>>>
>>>   I do not see "SIP status message" anywhere in the document.
>>
>>   It was in -015 section 9 but it looks like it was already resolved in -18.
>>
>>
>>>   >  ISSUE 10
>>>   >
>>>   >  "
>>>   >  For
>>>   >     example, if a PSAP is unable to accept an eCall (e.g., due to
>>>   >     overload or too many calls from the same location), it can 
>>> reject the
>>>   >     INVITE.  Since a metadata/control object is also included in the SIP
>>>   >     response that rejects the call, the IVS knows if the PSAP received
>>>   >     the MSD, and can inform the vehicle occupants that the PSAP
>>>   >     successfully received the vehicle location and information but can't
>>>   >     talk to the occupants at that time." - this prevents persons in
>>>   > the car from getting emergency service of the PSAP using other means
>>>   > (e.g. using circuit switched network). Possibility for DOS attack.
>>>
>>>   If the PSAP is overloaded (e.g., there is a very large multi-vehicle
>>>   incident, or another large-scale emergency incident), then there 
>>> are likely
>>>   to be multiple simultaneous eCall attempts.  The document does not
>>>  in any way
>>>   dictate or mandate PSAP response.  PSAPs are free to respond as
>>>  they choose.
>>>   E.g., a PSAP can accept eCalls and add them to a queue, a PSAP 
>>> can reject an
>>>   eCall and include an ack with "received=false", a PSAP can reject an eCall
>>>   and include an ack with "received=true".  Doing the latter
>>>  indicates that the
>>>   PSAP has received the MSD and hence is aware of the incident.
>>
>>   How can the UA be sure that such response was sent by PSAP and not
>>  by an attacker, located somewhere between UA and PSAP?
>>
>>   Any SIP entity which happens to be in the path of the emergency
>>  call INVITE request can generate a 600  (Busy Everywhere), 486
>>  (Busy Here), and 603 (Decline) response and populate it with a
>>  particular body.
>>
>>   It is at least a security risk and it needs to be documented.
>
>  OK, I'll add some text.
>
>>
>>>   >  ISSUE 11
>>>   >
>>>   >  "The body for an emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD info package is a
>>>   > multipart body." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
>>>   > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
>>>
>>>   We do not need to get into that level of detail in this text.
>>
>>   IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while
>>  PSAP expects multipart/alternative.
>
>  Same answer as above.
>
>>
>>>   >  ISSUE 14
>>>   >
>>>   >  "while others can be
>>>   >     expected to carry an occasional request" - meaning of "occasional"
>>>   > can be whatever, it depends on perspective of the user
>>>   > - once per milisecond, once per second, once per minute, once per hour
>>>   > or once per day?
>>>
>>>   Other text makes it clear that a request for an updated MSD is
>>>  generally sent
>>>   upon manual request of a PSAP call taker who suspects vehicle
>>>  state may have changed.
>>
>>   A statement that the request is expected to be triggered by manual
>>  action of the PSAP call taker is good, so I suggest to add it to
>>  this section too as expert reviewer will read it.
>
>  OK, I'll add text.
>
>>
>>>   >
>>>   >  ISSUE 18
>>>   >
>>>   >  Accept in Figure 10 is not correct - INFO response is not expected
>>>   > to contain body.
>   >>
>>>   Fixed, thanks for catching this.
>>
>>   in -18, I can still see Accept with multipart/mixed in the INFO
>>  request in Figure 10.
>
>  I don't see it.  Here is Figure 10:
>
>       INFO sip:+13145551111@example.com SIP/2.0
>       To: <sip:+13145551111@example.com>;tag=9fxced76sl
>       From: Exemplar PSAP <urn:service:sos.ecall.automatic>;tag=8gydfe65t0
>       Call-ID: 3848276298220188511@atlanta.example.com
>       Call-Info: <cid:3456789012@atlanta.example.com>;
>                  purpose=emergencyCallData.control
>       CSeq: 41862 INFO
>       Info-Package: emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD
>       Allow: INVITE, ACK, PRACK, INFO, OPTIONS, CANCEL, REFER, BYE,
>              SUBSCRIBE, NOTIFY, UPDATE
>       Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary=boundaryZZZ
>       Content-Dispositio: Info-Package
>       Content-Length: ...
>
>       --boundaryZZZ
>       Content-Disposition: by-reference
>       Content-Type: application/emergencyCallData.control+xml
>       Content-ID: <3456789012@atlanta.example.com>
>
>       <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
>       <emergencyCallData.control
>           xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
>           xmlns:xsi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance">
>
>       <request action="send-data" datatype="eCall.MSD"/>
>
>       </emergencyCallData.control>
>        --boundaryZZZ--
>
>                         Figure 10: INFO requesting MSD
>
>
>
>
>>
>>   IMO, this is wrong as we do NOT expect a body in INFO response.
>>  Yes, there will be a body in subsequent INFO request sent in
>>  opposite direction, but that's not impacted by Accept in first INFO
>>  request.
>>
>>>   >
>>>   >  ISSUE 20
>>>   >
>>>   >  examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not
>>>   > aligned with https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation
>>>   > stating "The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or more
>>>   > pairs of URI references, separated by white space. "
>>>   >
>>>   >             xsi:schemaLocation=
>>>   >                 "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
>>>
>>>   Fixed.
>>
>>   I can see in -18, that you chose to remove the information about
>>  schema location from the XML examples.
>>   That's OK with me.
>>
>>   However, then you can also remove the following as it is not 
>> needed any more
>>
>> 	xmlns:xsi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance"
>
>  I've asked Hannes to verify the XML schema and examples as part of
>  IETF Last Call.
>
>  --
>  Randall Gellens
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eCall-19 and car-crash-18 (just uploaded now) address all comments.

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Hi, everyone,

I'd like to remind people that we use rough consensus, not perfect
unanimity, and we use a well defined process, including practical time
periods for our phases of last call.   We also care about "running code,"
and one thing that would be valuable for this last day of the last call is
to share info on state of implementation of these two specs.  This doesn't
mean they must be fully implemented and deployed, of course, but what types
of pragmatic or empirical tests have occurred so far?

I'm planning to request IETF Last Call this afternoon (Pacific Time) as
previously announced.  This will not launch an immediate IETF Last Call,
because there is first an AD Review, and I will work to present to Alyssa
what the remaining issues are in the shepherd's writeup.  I'm open to your
sending me text as input for the writeup.

Allison





On Tue, Oct 18, 2016 at 9:16 AM, Christer Holmberg <
christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> >I think we can address any remaining comments as part of IETF Last Call.
>
> NO.
>
> We shall forward a document we are ok with. There most likely will be
> other issues and comments during IETF last call.
>
> Regards,
>
> Christer
>
>
> At 12:02 PM +0000 10/18/16, Ivo Sedlacek wrote:
>
> >  Hello,
> >
> >  first of all, I am participating in 3GPP CT1 meeting this week and I
> > have not have time to review changes between -015 and -018 properly.
> > Can we shift the deadline to next week?
> >
> >  I am OK with resolution of ISSUE 1, ISSUE 3, ISSUE 8, ISSUE 13, ISSUE
> > 15, ISSUE 16, ISSUE 17, ISSUE 19.
> >
> >  On the remaining issues:
> >
> >>  >  ISSUE 2:
> >>  >
> >>  >  section 3 - level of technical detail of the last paragraph of  >
> >> section 3 does not fit with level of technical detail of the
> >> remaining  > text of section 3.
> >>
> >>  Intermediate paragraphs were added in version 17.
> >
> >  I still believe that section 3 contains different types of information:
> >  Type1: generic overview of the eCall requirements, existing solutions,
> ...
> >  Type2: information about the draft
> >
> >  It would be better to split those to separate sections.
>
> Can you elaborate on what the problem is?
>
> >
> >>  >  ISSUE 4:
> >>  >
> >>  >  section 4, "   This document registers the 'application/
> >>  >     emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD+per' MIME Content-Type to enable
> the MSD
> >>  >     to be carried in SIP."
> >>  >
> >>  >  There is no MIME Content-Type registry. "MIME Content-Type" ->
> >> "MIME type"
> >>  >
> >>  >  Same in other places of the document.
> >>
> >>  Corrected "content type" to "media type".
> >
> >  I can still see a few occurences of "content type" in -018 - e.g.
>
> Thanks, I'll do a grep.
>
> >
> >  ---------
> >        Security considerations: This ****content type**** is designed to
> carry
> >        vehicle and incident-related data during an emergency call.  This
> >        data contains personal information including vehicle VIN,
> >        location, direction, etc.  Appropriate precautions need to be
> >        taken to limit unauthorized access, inappropriate disclosure to
> >        third parties, and eavesdropping of this information.  In general,
> >        it is acceptable for the data to be unprotected while briefly in
> >        transit within the Mobile Network Operator (MNO); the MNO is
> >        trusted to not permit the data to be accessed by third parties.
> >        Sections 7 and Section 8 of [RFC7852] contain more discussion.
> >  ---------
> >  and
> >  ---------
> >     The metadata/control block is designed for use with pan-European
> >     eCall and also eCall-like systems (i.e., in other regions), and has
> >     extension points.  Note that eCall-like systems might define their
> >     own vehicle data blocks, and so might need to register a new INFO
> >     package to accomodate the new data ****content type**** and the
> metadata/
> >     control object.
> >  ---------
> >  and
> >  --------
> >           This ****content type**** carries metadata and control
> > information and
> >           requests, such as from a Public Safety Answering Point (PSAP)
> >           to an In-Vehicle System (IVS) during an emergency call.
> >  --------
> >
> >>  >  ISSUE 6:
> >>  >
> >>  >  section 6 - "An MSD or a metadata/control block is always
> >> enclosed in  > a multipart
> >>  >     body part (even if it would otherwise be the only body part in
> the
> >>  >     SIP message)." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
> >>  > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
> >>
> >>  We do not need to specify that in this text.
> >
> >  IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while PSAP
> > expects multipart/alternative.
>
> It would be hard to imagine a use case where a UA generates
> multipart/alternative.  However, I don't mind adding text clarifying that
> multipart/mixed is expected.
>
> >
> >>  >  ISSUE 7
> >>  >
> >>  >  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP
> >>  >     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant by
> >>  > "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?
> >>
> >>  I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier
> >> instances in the
> >>  same section that say "as a MIME body part".
> >
> >  I do not really know what "attach body to SIP request"  means.
> > Likely, other readers will not know it either.
> >
> >  A reference to a section defining how to "attach body to SIP
> > request" would help.
>
> It's the same section, just a little bit before.
>
> >
> >
> >>  >  ISSUE 9
> >>  >
> >>  >  section 9 - what is "SIP status message"?
> >>
> >>  I do not see "SIP status message" anywhere in the document.
> >
> >  It was in -015 section 9 but it looks like it was already resolved in
> -18.
> >
> >
> >>  >  ISSUE 10
> >>  >
> >>  >  "
> >>  >  For
> >>  >     example, if a PSAP is unable to accept an eCall (e.g., due to
> >>  >     overload or too many calls from the same location), it can
> reject the
> >>  >     INVITE.  Since a metadata/control object is also included in the
> SIP
> >>  >     response that rejects the call, the IVS knows if the PSAP
> received
> >>  >     the MSD, and can inform the vehicle occupants that the PSAP
> >>  >     successfully received the vehicle location and information but
> can't
> >>  >     talk to the occupants at that time." - this prevents persons in
> >>  > the car from getting emergency service of the PSAP using other means
> >>  > (e.g. using circuit switched network). Possibility for DOS attack.
> >>
> >>  If the PSAP is overloaded (e.g., there is a very large multi-vehicle
> >>  incident, or another large-scale emergency incident), then there are
> likely
> >>  to be multiple simultaneous eCall attempts.  The document does not
> >> in any way
> >>  dictate or mandate PSAP response.  PSAPs are free to respond as
> >> they choose.
> >>  E.g., a PSAP can accept eCalls and add them to a queue, a PSAP can
> reject an
> >>  eCall and include an ack with "received=false", a PSAP can reject an
> eCall
> >>  and include an ack with "received=true".  Doing the latter
> >> indicates that the
> >>  PSAP has received the MSD and hence is aware of the incident.
> >
> >  How can the UA be sure that such response was sent by PSAP and not
> > by an attacker, located somewhere between UA and PSAP?
> >
> >  Any SIP entity which happens to be in the path of the emergency
> > call INVITE request can generate a 600  (Busy Everywhere), 486
> > (Busy Here), and 603 (Decline) response and populate it with a
> > particular body.
> >
> >  It is at least a security risk and it needs to be documented.
>
> OK, I'll add some text.
>
> >
> >>  >  ISSUE 11
> >>  >
> >>  >  "The body for an emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD info package is a
> >>  > multipart body." - which multipart MIME type is meant?
> >>  > multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....
> >>
> >>  We do not need to get into that level of detail in this text.
> >
> >  IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while
> > PSAP expects multipart/alternative.
>
> Same answer as above.
>
> >
> >>  >  ISSUE 14
> >>  >
> >>  >  "while others can be
> >>  >     expected to carry an occasional request" - meaning of
> "occasional"
> >>  > can be whatever, it depends on perspective of the user
> >>  > - once per milisecond, once per second, once per minute, once per
> hour
> >>  > or once per day?
> >>
> >>  Other text makes it clear that a request for an updated MSD is
> >> generally sent
> >>  upon manual request of a PSAP call taker who suspects vehicle
> >> state may have changed.
> >
> >  A statement that the request is expected to be triggered by manual
> > action of the PSAP call taker is good, so I suggest to add it to
> > this section too as expert reviewer will read it.
>
> OK, I'll add text.
>
> >
> >>  >
> >>  >  ISSUE 18
> >>  >
> >>  >  Accept in Figure 10 is not correct - INFO response is not expected
> >>  > to contain body.
> >>
> >>  Fixed, thanks for catching this.
> >
> >  in -18, I can still see Accept with multipart/mixed in the INFO
> > request in Figure 10.
>
> I don't see it.  Here is Figure 10:
>
>      INFO sip:+13145551111@example.com SIP/2.0
>      To: <sip:+13145551111@example.com>;tag=9fxced76sl
>      From: Exemplar PSAP <urn:service:sos.ecall.automatic>;tag=8gydfe65t0
>      Call-ID: 3848276298220188511@atlanta.example.com
>      Call-Info: <cid:3456789012@atlanta.example.com>;
>                 purpose=emergencyCallData.control
>      CSeq: 41862 INFO
>      Info-Package: emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD
>      Allow: INVITE, ACK, PRACK, INFO, OPTIONS, CANCEL, REFER, BYE,
>             SUBSCRIBE, NOTIFY, UPDATE
>      Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary=boundaryZZZ
>      Content-Dispositio: Info-Package
>      Content-Length: ...
>
>      --boundaryZZZ
>      Content-Disposition: by-reference
>      Content-Type: application/emergencyCallData.control+xml
>      Content-ID: <3456789012@atlanta.example.com>
>
>      <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
>      <emergencyCallData.control
>          xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
>          xmlns:xsi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance">
>
>      <request action="send-data" datatype="eCall.MSD"/>
>
>      </emergencyCallData.control>
>       --boundaryZZZ--
>
>                        Figure 10: INFO requesting MSD
>
>
>
>
> >
> >  IMO, this is wrong as we do NOT expect a body in INFO response.
> > Yes, there will be a body in subsequent INFO request sent in
> > opposite direction, but that's not impacted by Accept in first INFO
> > request.
> >
> >>  >
> >>  >  ISSUE 20
> >>  >
> >>  >  examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not
> >>  > aligned with https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation
> >>  > stating "The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or more
> >>  > pairs of URI references, separated by white space. "
> >>  >
> >>  >             xsi:schemaLocation=
> >>  >                 "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
> >>
> >>  Fixed.
> >
> >  I can see in -18, that you chose to remove the information about
> > schema location from the XML examples.
> >  That's OK with me.
> >
> >  However, then you can also remove the following as it is not needed any
> more
> >
> >       xmlns:xsi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance"
>
> I've asked Hannes to verify the XML schema and examples as part of
> IETF Last Call.
>
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ailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com" target=3D"_blank">christer.holmberg@e=
ricsson.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" styl=
e=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Hi,<br>
<span class=3D""><br>
&gt;I think we can address any remaining comments as part of IETF Last Call=
.<br>
<br>
</span>NO.<br>
<br>
We shall forward a document we are ok with. There most likely will be other=
 issues and comments during IETF last call.<br>
<br>
Regards,<br>
<br>
Christer<br>
<div class=3D"HOEnZb"><div class=3D"h5"><br>
<br>
At 12:02 PM +0000 10/18/16, Ivo Sedlacek wrote:<br>
<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 Hello,<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 first of all, I am participating in 3GPP CT1 meeting this week a=
nd I<br>
&gt; have not have time to review changes between -015 and -018 properly.<b=
r>
&gt; Can we shift the deadline to next week?<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 I am OK with resolution of ISSUE 1, ISSUE 3, ISSUE 8, ISSUE 13, =
ISSUE<br>
&gt; 15, ISSUE 16, ISSUE 17, ISSUE 19.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 On the remaining issues:<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 ISSUE 2:<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 section 3 - level of technical detail of the last=
 paragraph of=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt; section 3 does not fit with level of technical detail of the<br>
&gt;&gt; remaining=C2=A0 &gt; text of section 3.<br>
&gt;&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 Intermediate paragraphs were added in version 17.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 I still believe that section 3 contains different types of infor=
mation:<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 Type1: generic overview of the eCall requirements, existing solu=
tions, ...<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 Type2: information about the draft<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 It would be better to split those to separate sections.<br>
<br>
Can you elaborate on what the problem is?<br>
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 ISSUE 4:<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 section 4, &quot;=C2=A0 =C2=A0This document regis=
ters the &#39;application/<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD+<wbr>per=
&#39; MIME Content-Type to enable the MSD<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0to be carried in SIP.&quot;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 There is no MIME Content-Type registry. &quot;MIM=
E Content-Type&quot; -&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt; &quot;MIME type&quot;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 Same in other places of the document.<br>
&gt;&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 Corrected &quot;content type&quot; to &quot;media type&quot;=
.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 I can still see a few occurences of &quot;content type&quot; in =
-018 - e.g.<br>
<br>
Thanks, I&#39;ll do a grep.<br>
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 ---------<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Security considerations: This ****content t=
ype**** is designed to carry<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 vehicle and incident-related data during an=
 emergency call.=C2=A0 This<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 data contains personal information includin=
g vehicle VIN,<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 location, direction, etc.=C2=A0 Appropriate=
 precautions need to be<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 taken to limit unauthorized access, inappro=
priate disclosure to<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 third parties, and eavesdropping of this in=
formation.=C2=A0 In general,<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 it is acceptable for the data to be unprote=
cted while briefly in<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 transit within the Mobile Network Operator =
(MNO); the MNO is<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 trusted to not permit the data to be access=
ed by third parties.<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 Sections 7 and Section 8 of [RFC7852] conta=
in more discussion.<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 ---------<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 and<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 ---------<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0The metadata/control block is designed for use with=
 pan-European<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0eCall and also eCall-like systems (i.e., in other r=
egions), and has<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0extension points.=C2=A0 Note that eCall-like system=
s might define their<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0own vehicle data blocks, and so might need to regis=
ter a new INFO<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0package to accomodate the new data ****content type=
**** and the metadata/<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0control object.<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 ---------<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 and<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 --------<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0This ****content type**** carr=
ies metadata and control<br>
&gt; information and<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0requests, such as from a Publi=
c Safety Answering Point (PSAP)<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0to an In-Vehicle System (IVS) =
during an emergency call.<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 --------<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 ISSUE 6:<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 section 6 - &quot;An MSD or a metadata/control bl=
ock is always<br>
&gt;&gt; enclosed in=C2=A0 &gt; a multipart<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0body part (even if it would otherwis=
e be the only body part in the<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0SIP message).&quot; - which multipar=
t MIME type is meant?<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....<br>
&gt;&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 We do not need to specify that in this text.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while =
PSAP<br>
&gt; expects multipart/alternative.<br>
<br>
It would be hard to imagine a use case where a UA generates multipart/alter=
native.=C2=A0 However, I don&#39;t mind adding text clarifying that multipa=
rt/mixed is expected.<br>
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 ISSUE 7<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 section 6 - &quot;The IVS then attaches an update=
d MSD to a SIP<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0INFO request and sends it within the=
 dialog.&quot; - what is meant by<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; &quot;attaching MSD to SIP INFO request&quot;?<br>
&gt;&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 I think that&#39;s made abundantly clear in the multiple ear=
lier<br>
&gt;&gt; instances in the<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 same section that say &quot;as a MIME body part&quot;.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 I do not really know what &quot;attach body to SIP request&quot;=
=C2=A0 means.<br>
&gt; Likely, other readers will not know it either.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 A reference to a section defining how to &quot;attach body to SI=
P<br>
&gt; request&quot; would help.<br>
<br>
It&#39;s the same section, just a little bit before.<br>
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 ISSUE 9<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 section 9 - what is &quot;SIP status message&quot=
;?<br>
&gt;&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 I do not see &quot;SIP status message&quot; anywhere in the =
document.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 It was in -015 section 9 but it looks like it was already resolv=
ed in -18.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 ISSUE 10<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 &quot;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 For<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0example, if a PSAP is unable to acce=
pt an eCall (e.g., due to<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0overload or too many calls from the =
same location), it can reject the<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0INVITE.=C2=A0 Since a metadata/contr=
ol object is also included in the SIP<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0response that rejects the call, the =
IVS knows if the PSAP received<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0the MSD, and can inform the vehicle =
occupants that the PSAP<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0successfully received the vehicle lo=
cation and information but can&#39;t<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0talk to the occupants at that time.&=
quot; - this prevents persons in<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; the car from getting emergency service of the PSAP usin=
g other means<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; (e.g. using circuit switched network). Possibility for =
DOS attack.<br>
&gt;&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 If the PSAP is overloaded (e.g., there is a very large multi=
-vehicle<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 incident, or another large-scale emergency incident), then t=
here are likely<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 to be multiple simultaneous eCall attempts.=C2=A0 The docume=
nt does not<br>
&gt;&gt; in any way<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 dictate or mandate PSAP response.=C2=A0 PSAPs are free to re=
spond as<br>
&gt;&gt; they choose.<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 E.g., a PSAP can accept eCalls and add them to a queue, a PS=
AP can reject an<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 eCall and include an ack with &quot;received=3Dfalse&quot;, =
a PSAP can reject an eCall<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 and include an ack with &quot;received=3Dtrue&quot;.=C2=A0 D=
oing the latter<br>
&gt;&gt; indicates that the<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 PSAP has received the MSD and hence is aware of the incident=
.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 How can the UA be sure that such response was sent by PSAP and n=
ot<br>
&gt; by an attacker, located somewhere between UA and PSAP?<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 Any SIP entity which happens to be in the path of the emergency<=
br>
&gt; call INVITE request can generate a 600=C2=A0 (Busy Everywhere), 486<br=
>
&gt; (Busy Here), and 603 (Decline) response and populate it with a<br>
&gt; particular body.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 It is at least a security risk and it needs to be documented.<br=
>
<br>
OK, I&#39;ll add some text.<br>
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 ISSUE 11<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 &quot;The body for an emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD=
 info package is a<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; multipart body.&quot; - which multipart MIME type is me=
ant?<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; multipart/mixed or multipart/alternative or ....<br>
&gt;&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 We do not need to get into that level of detail in this text=
.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 IMO, we need to. Else, the UA can provide multipart/mixed while<=
br>
&gt; PSAP expects multipart/alternative.<br>
<br>
Same answer as above.<br>
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 ISSUE 14<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 &quot;while others can be<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0expected to carry an occasional requ=
est&quot; - meaning of &quot;occasional&quot;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; can be whatever, it depends on perspective of the user<=
br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; - once per milisecond, once per second, once per minute=
, once per hour<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; or once per day?<br>
&gt;&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 Other text makes it clear that a request for an updated MSD =
is<br>
&gt;&gt; generally sent<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 upon manual request of a PSAP call taker who suspects vehicl=
e<br>
&gt;&gt; state may have changed.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 A statement that the request is expected to be triggered by manu=
al<br>
&gt; action of the PSAP call taker is good, so I suggest to add it to<br>
&gt; this section too as expert reviewer will read it.<br>
<br>
OK, I&#39;ll add text.<br>
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 ISSUE 18<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 Accept in Figure 10 is not correct - INFO respons=
e is not expected<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; to contain body.<br>
&gt;&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 Fixed, thanks for catching this.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 in -18, I can still see Accept with multipart/mixed in the INFO<=
br>
&gt; request in Figure 10.<br>
<br>
I don&#39;t see it.=C2=A0 Here is Figure 10:<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0INFO <a href=3D"mailto:sip%3A%2B13145551111@example.com=
">sip:+13145551111@example.com</a> SIP/2.0<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0To: &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:sip%3A%2B13145551111@example.=
com">sip:+13145551111@example.com</a>&gt;<wbr>;tag=3D9fxced76sl<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0From: Exemplar PSAP &lt;urn:service:sos.ecall.<wbr>auto=
matic&gt;;tag=3D8gydfe65t0<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Call-ID: <a href=3D"mailto:3848276298220188511@atlanta.=
example.com">3848276298220188511@atlanta.<wbr>example.com</a><br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Call-Info: &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:cid%3A3456789012@atlan=
ta.example.com">cid:3456789012@atlanta.<wbr>example.com</a>&gt;;<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 purpose=3Demergency=
CallData.<wbr>control<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0CSeq: 41862 INFO<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Info-Package: emergencyCallData.eCall.MSD<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Allow: INVITE, ACK, PRACK, INFO, OPTIONS, CANCEL, REFER=
, BYE,<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 SUBSCRIBE, NOTIFY, UPDATE<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary=3DboundaryZZZ<b=
r>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Content-Dispositio: Info-Package<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Content-Length: ...<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0--boundaryZZZ<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Content-Disposition: by-reference<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Content-Type: application/emergencyCallData.<wbr>contro=
l+xml<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Content-ID: &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:3456789012@atlanta.ex=
ample.com">3456789012@atlanta.example.<wbr>com</a>&gt;<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0&lt;?xml version=3D&quot;1.0&quot; encoding=3D&quot;UTF=
-8&quot;?&gt;<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0&lt;emergencyCallData.control<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0xmlns=3D&quot;urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:<wbr=
>EmergencyCallData:control&quot;<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0xmlns:xsi=3D&quot;<a href=3D"http://www.w=
3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">http://=
www.w3.org/<wbr>2001/XMLSchema-instance</a>&quot;&gt;<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0&lt;request action=3D&quot;send-data&quot; datatype=3D&=
quot;eCall.MSD&quot;/&gt;<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0&lt;/emergencyCallData.control&gt;<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 --boundaryZZZ--<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=
=A0 =C2=A0Figure 10: INFO requesting MSD<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 IMO, this is wrong as we do NOT expect a body in INFO response.<=
br>
&gt; Yes, there will be a body in subsequent INFO request sent in<br>
&gt; opposite direction, but that&#39;s not impacted by Accept in first INF=
O<br>
&gt; request.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 ISSUE 20<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 examples contain a value of schemaLocation parame=
ter which is not<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; aligned with <a href=3D"https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema=
-0/#schemaLocation" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">https://www.w3.org=
/TR/<wbr>xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation</a><br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; stating &quot;The schemaLocation attribute value consis=
ts of one or more<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt; pairs of URI references, separated by white space. &quo=
t;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0xsi:sche=
maLocation=3D<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 &gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =
=C2=A0&quot;urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:<wbr>EmergencyCallData:control&quot;<br>
&gt;&gt;<br>
&gt;&gt;=C2=A0 Fixed.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 I can see in -18, that you chose to remove the information about=
<br>
&gt; schema location from the XML examples.<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 That&#39;s OK with me.<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 However, then you can also remove the following as it is not nee=
ded any more<br>
&gt;<br>
&gt;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0xmlns:xsi=3D&quot;<a href=3D"http://www.w3.o=
rg/2001/XMLSchema-instance" rel=3D"noreferrer" target=3D"_blank">http://www=
.w3.org/<wbr>2001/XMLSchema-instance</a>&quot;<br>
<br>
I&#39;ve asked Hannes to verify the XML schema and examples as part of<br>
IETF Last Call.<br>
<br>
--<br>
Randall Gellens<br>
Opinions are personal;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 facts are suspect;=C2=A0 =C2=A0 I speak=
 for myself only<br>
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=C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=
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Hello,



I checked -19 against the comments raised during WGLC.



I am OK with resolution of ISSUE 4, ISSUE 6, ISSUE 10, ISSUE 11, ISSUE 14, =
ISSUE 18.



ISSUE 2 did not seem to be addressed. However, I can live with ISSUE 2 not =
being addressed so you can mark the ISSUE 2 as withdrawn.



ISSUE 7, ISSUE 20 have not been addressed - see below.



A new ISSUE 21 was found in -19  - see below.



On:



> >>  >  ISSUE 7

> >>  >

> >>  >  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP

> >>  >     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant b=
y

> >>  > "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?

> >>

> >>  I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier

> >> instances in the  same section that say "as a MIME body part".

> >

> >  I do not really know what "attach body to SIP request"  means.

> > Likely, other readers will not know it either.

> >

> >  A reference to a section defining how to "attach body to SIP request"

> > would help.

>

> It's the same section, just a little bit before.



I assume you refer -19 text stating: "[RFC7852] establishes a general mecha=
nism for attaching blocks of

   data to a SIP emergency call."



However, RC7852 contains only one occurence of "attach" and that's in Figur=
e 6 (see below) and it seems to refer to anything else.



                  +-----------+----------------------------+

                  | Token     | Description                |

                  +-----------+----------------------------+

                  | Mobile    | The device is able to move |

                  |           |   at any time              |

                  |           |                            |

                  | Fixed     | The device is not expected |

                  |           |   to move unless the       |

                  |           |   service is relocated     |

                  |           |                            |

                  | Nomadic   | The device is not expected |

                  |           |   to change its point of   |

                  |           |   attachment while on a    |

                  |           |   call                     |

                  |           |                            |

                  | Unknown   | No information is known    |

                  |           |   about the service        |

                  |           |   mobility environment for |

                  |           |   the device               |

                  +-----------+----------------------------+



                    Figure 6: Service Mobility Registry





Or do you refer to anything else? A formal definition would help.



> >>  >

> >>  >  ISSUE 20

> >>  >

> >>  >  examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not

> >> > aligned with https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation

> >>  > stating "The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or

> >> more  > pairs of URI references, separated by white space. "

> >>  >

> >>  >             xsi:schemaLocation=3D

> >>  >                 "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"

> >>

> >>  Fixed.

> >

> >  I can see in -18, that you chose to remove the information about

> > schema location from the XML examples.

> >  That's OK with me.

> >

> >  However, then you can also remove the following as it is not needed

> > any more

> >

> >         xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance"

>

> I've asked Hannes to verify the XML schema and examples as part of IETF L=
ast Call.



xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance" is still in XML tex=
t examples and there is no usage of "xsi" prefix.







ISSUE 21:



                in in-dialog requests, the Request-URI is set to remote con=
tact URI (in case of loose routing) or to the most top route URI (in case o=
f strict routing) - see rfc3261 section 12.2.1.1. In both cases, it would b=
e SIP URI and not URN as in Figure 11.



Kind regards



Ivo





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<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Hello,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I checked -19 against the co=
mments raised during WGLC.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I am OK with resolution of I=
SSUE 4, ISSUE 6, ISSUE 10, ISSUE 11, ISSUE 14, ISSUE 18.<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">ISSUE 2 did not seem to be a=
ddressed. However, I can live with ISSUE 2 not being addressed so you can m=
ark the ISSUE 2 as withdrawn.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">ISSUE 7, ISSUE 20 have not b=
een addressed - see below.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">A new ISSUE 21 was found in =
-19 &nbsp;- see below.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">On:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p; ISSUE 7<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p; section 6 - &quot;The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP<o:p></o:=
p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; INFO request and sends it within the dialog.&quot; - w=
hat is meant by<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt; &qu=
ot;attaching MSD to SIP INFO request&quot;?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; I think =
that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt; instances in t=
he&nbsp; same section that say &quot;as a MIME body part&quot;.<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&nbsp; I do not rea=
lly know what &quot;attach body to SIP request&quot;&nbsp; means.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt; Likely, other read=
ers will not know it either.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&nbsp; A reference =
to a section defining how to &quot;attach body to SIP request&quot;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt; would help.<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; It's the same section, =
just a little bit before.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black">I assu=
me you refer -19 text stating: &quot;[RFC7852] establishes a general mechan=
ism for attaching blocks of<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;=
&nbsp; data to a SIP emergency call.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black">Howeve=
r, RC7852 contains only one occurence of &quot;attach&quot; and that's in F=
igure 6 (see below) and it seems to refer to anything else.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
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sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; | Mobile&nbsp;&nb=
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp; |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#43;-----------&=
#43;----------------------------&#43;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Figur=
e 6: Service Mobility Registry<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black">Or do =
you refer to anything else? A formal definition would help.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p; ISSUE 20<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p; examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt; &gt; aligned w=
ith <a href=3D"https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation">
<span style=3D"color:windowtext;text-decoration:none">https://www.w3.org/TR=
/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt; sta=
ting &quot;The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt; more&nbsp; &gt=
; pairs of URI references, separated by white space. &quot;<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; xsi:sc=
hemaLocation=3D<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control&qu=
ot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; Fixed.<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&nbsp; I can see in=
 -18, that you chose to remove the information about
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt; schema location fr=
om the XML examples.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&nbsp; That's OK wi=
th me.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&nbsp; However, the=
n you can also remove the following as it is not needed
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt; any more<o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; xmlns:xsi=3D&quot;<a href=3D"http://www.w3.org/200=
1/XMLSchema-instance"><span style=3D"color:windowtext;text-decoration:none"=
>http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance</span></a>&quot;<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; I've asked Hannes to ve=
rify the XML schema and examples as part of IETF Last Call.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">xmlns:xsi=3D&quot;<a href=3D=
"http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance"><span style=3D"color:windowtext=
;text-decoration:none">http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance</span></a>=
&quot; is still in XML text examples and there is no
 usage of &quot;xsi&quot; prefix.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">ISSUE 21: <o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; in in-dialog=
 requests, the Request-URI is set to remote contact URI (in case of loose r=
outing) or to the most top route URI (in case of strict routing) - see rfc3=
261 section 12.2.1.1. In both cases,
 it would be SIP URI and not URN as in Figure 11.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Kind regards<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Ivo<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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(ISSUE 21 reformulated)



Hello,



I checked -19 against the comments raised during WGLC.



I am OK with resolution of ISSUE 4, ISSUE 6, ISSUE 10, ISSUE 11, ISSUE 14, =
ISSUE 18.



ISSUE 2 did not seem to be addressed. However, I can live with ISSUE 2 not =
being addressed so you can mark the ISSUE 2 as withdrawn.



ISSUE 7, ISSUE 20 have not been addressed - see below.



A new ISSUE 21 was found in -19  - see below.



On:



> >>  >  ISSUE 7

> >>  >

> >>  >  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP

> >>  >     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant b=
y

> >>  > "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?

> >>

> >>  I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier

> >> instances in the  same section that say "as a MIME body part".

> >

> >  I do not really know what "attach body to SIP request"  means.

> > Likely, other readers will not know it either.

> >

> >  A reference to a section defining how to "attach body to SIP request"

> > would help.

>

> It's the same section, just a little bit before.



I assume you refer -19 text stating: "[RFC7852] establishes a general mecha=
nism for attaching blocks of

   data to a SIP emergency call."



However, RC7852 contains only one occurence of "attach" and that's in Figur=
e 6 (see below) and it seems to refer to anything else.



                  +-----------+----------------------------+

                  | Token     | Description                |

                  +-----------+----------------------------+

                  | Mobile    | The device is able to move |

                  |           |   at any time              |

                  |           |                            |

                  | Fixed     | The device is not expected |

                  |           |   to move unless the       |

                  |           |   service is relocated     |

                  |           |                            |

                  | Nomadic   | The device is not expected |

                  |           |   to change its point of   |

                  |           |   attachment while on a    |

                  |           |   call                     |

                  |           |                            |

                  | Unknown   | No information is known    |

                  |           |   about the service        |

                  |           |   mobility environment for |

                  |           |   the device               |

                  +-----------+----------------------------+



                    Figure 6: Service Mobility Registry





Or do you refer to anything else? A formal definition would help.



> >>  >

> >>  >  ISSUE 20

> >>  >

> >>  >  examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not

> >> > aligned with https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation

> >>  > stating "The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or

> >> more  > pairs of URI references, separated by white space. "

> >>  >

> >>  >             xsi:schemaLocation=3D

> >>  >                 "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"

> >>

> >>  Fixed.

> >

> >  I can see in -18, that you chose to remove the information about

> > schema location from the XML examples.

> >  That's OK with me.

> >

> >  However, then you can also remove the following as it is not needed

> > any more

> >

> >         xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance"

>

> I've asked Hannes to verify the XML schema and examples as part of IETF L=
ast Call.



xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance" is still in XML tex=
t examples and there is no usage of "xsi" prefix.







ISSUE 21:



                Request-URI of SIP INFO request in Figure 11 (INFO urn:serv=
ice:sos.ecall.automatic SIP/2.0) is incorrect.



                Reason: in in-dialog requests, the Request-URI is set to th=
e remote contact URI (in case of loose routing) or to the most top route UR=
I (in case of strict routing) - see rfc3261 section 12.2.1.1.



                The draft does NOT need so state how Request-URI in SIP INF=
O request is set,  but the Request-URI of SIP INFO request in Figure 11 nee=
ds to be corrected.



Kind regards



Ivo





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<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:red">(ISSUE 2=
1 reformulated)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Hello,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I checked -19 against the co=
mments raised during WGLC.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">I am OK with resolution of I=
SSUE 4, ISSUE 6, ISSUE 10, ISSUE 11, ISSUE 14, ISSUE 18.<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">ISSUE 2 did not seem to be a=
ddressed. However, I can live with ISSUE 2 not being addressed so you can m=
ark the ISSUE 2 as withdrawn.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">ISSUE 7, ISSUE 20 have not b=
een addressed - see below.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">A new ISSUE 21 was found in =
-19 &nbsp;- see below.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">On:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p; ISSUE 7<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p; section 6 - &quot;The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP<o:p></o:=
p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; INFO request and sends it within the dialog.&quot; - w=
hat is meant by<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt; &qu=
ot;attaching MSD to SIP INFO request&quot;?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; I think =
that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt; instances in t=
he&nbsp; same section that say &quot;as a MIME body part&quot;.<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&nbsp; I do not rea=
lly know what &quot;attach body to SIP request&quot;&nbsp; means.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt; Likely, other read=
ers will not know it either.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&nbsp; A reference =
to a section defining how to &quot;attach body to SIP request&quot;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt; would help.<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; It's the same section, =
just a little bit before.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black">I assu=
me you refer -19 text stating: &quot;[RFC7852] establishes a general mechan=
ism for attaching blocks of<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;=
&nbsp; data to a SIP emergency call.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black">Howeve=
r, RC7852 contains only one occurence of &quot;attach&quot; and that's in F=
igure 6 (see below) and it seems to refer to anything else.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#43;-----------&=
#43;----------------------------&#43;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; | Token&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp; | Description&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#43;-----------&=
#43;----------------------------&#43;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; | Mobile&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp; | The device is able to move |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; at any time&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; | Fixed&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp; | The device is not expected |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; to move unless t=
he&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;|<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; service is reloc=
ated&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; | Nomadic&nbsp;&n=
bsp; | The device is not expected |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; to change its po=
int of&nbsp;&nbsp; |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;
<span style=3D"background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">attachment</span> wh=
ile on a&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; call&nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; | Unknown&nbsp;&n=
bsp; | No information is known&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;|&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; about the servic=
e&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; mobility environ=
ment for |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; |&nbsp;&nbsp; the device&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp; |<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &#43;-----------&=
#43;----------------------------&#43;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"font-family:&quot;C=
ourier New&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Figur=
e 6: Service Mobility Registry<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black">Or do =
you refer to anything else? A formal definition would help.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p; ISSUE 20<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p; examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt; &gt; aligned w=
ith <a href=3D"https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation">
<span style=3D"color:windowtext;text-decoration:none">https://www.w3.org/TR=
/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt; sta=
ting &quot;The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt; more&nbsp; &gt=
; pairs of URI references, separated by white space. &quot;<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;<o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; xsi:sc=
hemaLocation=3D<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control&qu=
ot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; Fixed.<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&nbsp; I can see in=
 -18, that you chose to remove the information about
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt; schema location fr=
om the XML examples.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&nbsp; That's OK wi=
th me.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&nbsp; However, the=
n you can also remove the following as it is not needed
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt; any more<o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; &gt;&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; xmlns:xsi=3D&quot;<a href=3D"http://www.w3.org/200=
1/XMLSchema-instance"><span style=3D"color:windowtext;text-decoration:none"=
>http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance</span></a>&quot;<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt; I've asked Hannes to ve=
rify the XML schema and examples as part of IETF Last Call.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">xmlns:xsi=3D&quot;<a href=3D=
"http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance"><span style=3D"color:windowtext=
;text-decoration:none">http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance</span></a>=
&quot; is still in XML text examples and there is no
 usage of &quot;xsi&quot; prefix.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">ISSUE 21: <o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <span style=
=3D"color:red">
Request-URI of SIP INFO request in Figure 11 (INFO urn:service:sos.ecall.au=
tomatic SIP/2.0) is incorrect.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:red"><o:p>&nb=
sp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:red">&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp; Reason: i</span><span lang=3D"EN-US">n in-dialog requests, the Requ=
est-URI is set to
<span style=3D"color:red">the </span>remote contact URI (in case of loose r=
outing) or to the most top route URI (in case of strict routing) - see rfc3=
261 section 12.2.1.1.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:red">&nbsp;&n=
bsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp; The draft does NOT need so state how Request-URI in SIP INFO reques=
t is set,&nbsp; but the Request-URI of SIP INFO request in Figure 11 needs =
to be corrected.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Kind regards<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">Ivo<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Hi,

>> >>  >  ISSUE 7

>> >>  >

>> >>  >  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP

>> >>  >     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant =
by

>> >>  > "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?

>> >>

>> >>  I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier

>> >> instances in the  same section that say "as a MIME body part".

>> >

>> >  I do not really know what "attach body to SIP request"  means.

>> > Likely, other readers will not know it either.

>> >

>> >  A reference to a section defining how to "attach body to SIP request"

>> > would help.

>>

>> It's the same section, just a little bit before.

>

>I assume you refer -19 text stating: "[RFC7852] establishes a general mech=
anism for attaching blocks of

>   data to a SIP emergency call."



I think we could say something like:

=93[RFC7852] provides the general guidelines for including emergency call r=
elated data in SIP messages=94

Then, wherever the text talks about =93attaching=94 data to a SIP message, =
you use similar terminology:

E.g.,

   "encoding it per Annex A of EN 15722 [msd] and attaching it to a SIP
   message as a MIME body part per [RFC7852].=94

=85becomes:

   "encoding it per Annex A of EN 15722 [msd] and including it in a SIP
   message as a MIME body part per [RFC7852]. "

Regards,

Christer



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<div>Hi,</div>
<div><br>
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<div><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt;">&gt;&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;&nbsp; IS=
SUE 7</span></div>
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&nbsp; section 6 - &quot;The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP<o:p>=
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<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; &gt;=
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<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;&gt; &gt;&gt;&nbsp; I th=
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<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;&gt; &gt;&gt; instances =
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<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;&gt; &gt; Likely, other =
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<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US">&gt;&gt; &gt;&nbsp; A refere=
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assume you refer -19 text stating: &quot;[RFC7852] establishes a general me=
chanism for attaching blocks of<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black">&gt; &=
nbsp; data to a SIP emergency call.&quot;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoPlainText"><span lang=3D"EN-US" style=3D"color:black"><o:p>&=
nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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</div>
</div>
</span>
<div>I think we could say something like:</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>=93[RFC7852] provides the general guidelines for including emergency c=
all related data in SIP messages=94</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Then, wherever the text talks about =93attaching=94 data to a SIP mess=
age, you use similar terminology:</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>E.g.,</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>
<div>&nbsp; &nbsp;&quot;encoding it per Annex A of EN 15722 [msd] and attac=
hing it to a SIP</div>
<div>&nbsp; &nbsp;message as a MIME body part per [RFC7852].=94</div>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>=85becomes:</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>
<div>&nbsp; &nbsp;&quot;encoding it per Annex A of EN 15722 [msd] and inclu=
ding it in a SIP</div>
<div>&nbsp; &nbsp;message as a MIME body part per [RFC7852]. &quot;</div>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Regards,</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Christer</div>
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At 11:14 AM +0000 10/27/16, Ivo Sedlacek wrote:

>  (ISSUE 21 reformulated)
>
>  Hello,
>
>  I checked -19 against the comments raised during WGLC.
>
>  I am OK with resolution of ISSUE 4, ISSUE 6, ISSUE 10, ISSUE 11, 
> ISSUE 14, ISSUE 18.
>
>  ISSUE 2 did not seem to be addressed. However, I can live with 
> ISSUE 2 not being addressed so you can mark the ISSUE 2 as 
> withdrawn.
>
>  ISSUE 7, ISSUE 20 have not been addressed - see below.
>
>  A new ISSUE 21 was found in -19  - see below.
>
>  On:
>
>   > >>  >  ISSUE 7
>   > >>  >
>   > >>  >  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP
>   > >>  >     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is meant by
>   > >>  > "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?
>   > >>
>   > >>  I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier
>   > >> instances in the  same section that say "as a MIME body part".
>   > >
>   > >  I do not really know what "attach body to SIP request"  means.
>   > > Likely, other readers will not know it either.
>   > >
>   > >  A reference to a section defining how to "attach body to SIP request"
>   > > would help.
>   >
>   > It's the same section, just a little bit before.
>
>  I assume you refer -19 text stating: "[RFC7852] establishes a 
> general mechanism for attaching blocks of
>     data to a SIP emergency call."

If you look seven paragraphs above the paragraph in question (same 
section), you'll see:

    A PSAP or IVS transmits a metadata/control object (see Section 9) by
    encoding it per the description in this document and attaching it to
    a SIP message as a MIME body part per [RFC7852].

Then, three paragraphs later (four paragraphs above the paragraph in 
question) it uses "attach" again:

    An In-Vehicle System (IVS) initiating an NG-eCall attaches an MSD to
    the initial INVITE and optionally attaches a metadata/control object
    informing the PSAP of its capabilities.

The surrounding text makes it clear that these are "attached" as body 
parts in the SIP message.



>
>  However, RC7852 contains only one occurence of "attach" and that's 
> in Figure 6 (see below) and it seems to refer to anything else.
>
>                    +-----------+----------------------------+
>                    | Token     | Description                |
>                    +-----------+----------------------------+
>                    | Mobile    | The device is able to move |
>                    |           |   at any time              |
>                    |           |                            |
>                    | Fixed     | The device is not expected |
>                    |           |   to move unless the       |
>                    |           |   service is relocated     |
>                    |           |                            |
>                    | Nomadic   | The device is not expected |
>                    |           |   to change its point of   |
>                    |           |   attachment while on a    |
>                    |           |   call                     |
>                    |           |                            |
>                    | Unknown   | No information is known    |
>                    |           |   about the service        |
>                    |           |   mobility environment for |
>                    |           |   the device               |
>                    +-----------+----------------------------+
>
>                      Figure 6: Service Mobility Registry
>
>
>  Or do you refer to anything else? A formal definition would help.
>
>   > >>  >
>   > >>  >  ISSUE 20
>   > >>  >
>   > >>  >  examples contain a value of schemaLocation parameter which is not
>   > >> > aligned with 
> <https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation> 
> https://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-0/#schemaLocation
>   > >>  > stating "The schemaLocation attribute value consists of one or
>   > >> more  > pairs of URI references, separated by white space. "
>   > >>  >
>   > >>  >             xsi:schemaLocation=
>   > >>  >                 "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:EmergencyCallData:control"
>   > >>
>   > >>  Fixed.
>   > >
>   > >  I can see in -18, that you chose to remove the information about
>   > > schema location from the XML examples.
>   > >  That's OK with me.
>   > >
>   > >  However, then you can also remove the following as it is not needed
>   > > any more
>   > >
>   > > 
> xmlns:xsi="<http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance>http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance"
>   >
>   > I've asked Hannes to verify the XML schema and examples as part 
> of IETF Last Call.
>
> 
> xmlns:xsi="<http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance>http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance" 
> is still in XML text examples and there is no usage of "xsi" prefix.
>
>
>
>  ISSUE 21:
>
>                  Request-URI of SIP INFO request in Figure 11 (INFO 
> urn:service:sos.ecall.automatic SIP/2.0) is incorrect.
>
>                  Reason: in in-dialog requests, the Request-URI is 
> set to the remote contact URI (in case of loose routing) or to the 
> most top route URI (in case of strict routing) - see rfc3261 
> section 12.2.1.1.
>
>                  The draft does NOT need so state how Request-URI in 
> SIP INFO request is set,  but the Request-URI of SIP INFO request 
> in Figure 11 needs to be corrected.
>
>  Kind regards
>
>  Ivo
>
>


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Hello,


> >   > >>  >  ISSUE 7
> >   > >>  >
> >   > >>  >  section 6 - "The IVS then attaches an updated MSD to a SIP
> >   > >>  >     INFO request and sends it within the dialog." - what is m=
eant by
> >   > >>  > "attaching MSD to SIP INFO request"?
> >   > >>
> >   > >>  I think that's made abundantly clear in the multiple earlier
> >   > >> instances in the  same section that say "as a MIME body part".
> >   > >
> >   > >  I do not really know what "attach body to SIP request"  means.
> >   > > Likely, other readers will not know it either.
> >   > >
> >   > >  A reference to a section defining how to "attach body to SIP req=
uest"
> >   > > would help.
> >   >
> >   > It's the same section, just a little bit before.
> >
> >  I assume you refer -19 text stating: "[RFC7852] establishes a general=
=20
> > mechanism for attaching blocks of
> >     data to a SIP emergency call."
>=20
> If you look seven paragraphs above the paragraph in question (same sectio=
n),=20
> you'll see:
>=20
>     A PSAP or IVS transmits a metadata/control object (see Section 9) by
>     encoding it per the description in this document and attaching it to
>     a SIP message as a MIME body part per [RFC7852].
>=20
> Then, three paragraphs later (four paragraphs above the paragraph in
> question) it uses "attach" again:
>=20
>     An In-Vehicle System (IVS) initiating an NG-eCall attaches an MSD to
>     the initial INVITE and optionally attaches a metadata/control object
>     informing the PSAP of its capabilities.
>=20
> The surrounding text makes it clear that these are "attached" as body par=
ts=20
> in the SIP message.

The above still talks about "attaching"/"attaches" without explaining what =
it means.

It can be easily misunderstood to refer to inclusion of a body part with Co=
ntent-Disposition "attachment" in a SIP message.

Kind regards

Ivo



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Hi Roger, Jeff, Brian,

There's a typo in the second-to-last paragraph of Section 1: 
"protocol extension will protocol extension will".

Also in the definition of "Civic Location": "to to".

Also the definition of "Invalid Location" contains the term 
"findRequest" which I think should be "findService request".

Also in section 3, "when invalid location is received" should perhaps 
be "invalid location elements are received".

Also in section 4, consider using all uppercase forms of "optional" 
for clarity.

I also think the definition of "Civic Location" could be made more 
clear (e.g., perhaps by mentioning that it is typically a street or 
postal address or part of one).

I suggest rewording the second paragraph of section 4 to use 
descriptive rather than normative language, since "few" is not 
definable and hence the SHOULD NOT and MAY don't really seen 
appropriate.

Consider mentioning if the additional elements can be returned only 
when validateLocation="true".

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Instead of a boolean, it might be worth considering an integer, to 
inform the client how many similar locations could match.  Depending 
on the situation, the client might report an error and attempt to get 
a less ambiguous location.

At 9:45 PM +0000 10/17/16, Dan Banks wrote:

>  I'm thinking of an example where you might a large apartment 
> building, and a query that did not include unit or floor.  If the 
> response only lists the first 5 units as similar locations, a 
> person looking at this might (incorrectly) assume that the server 
> doesn't have data for the other 13 units in that building.  Of 
> course, there is already a good disclaimer in the draft not to make 
> such assumptions, but the more often we can give the users a 
> complete list of similar locations, the more effective this 
> extension will be.  So, I think an explicit indication will be 
> helpful.  At the very least, it should save a support call or two 
> ("If the LVF knew that unit 501 was valid, then why did it only 
> suggest 101, 103, 201, 202, and 203?")
>
>  Dan
>
>  From: Rosen, Brian [mailto:Brian.Rosen@neustar.biz]
>  Sent: Monday, October 17, 2016 4:24 PM
>  To: Dan Banks; ecrit@ietf.org
>  Subject: Re: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-03 feedback - additional
>
>  I don't really have a problem with having this option, but one 
> question I have is what would the client do with that information? 
>  I can't think of any behavior change that return of that 
> information would trigger.
>
>  Brian
>
>  From: Dan Banks <<mailto:DBanks@ddti.net>DBanks@ddti.net>
>  Date: Monday, October 17, 2016 at 4:18 PM
>  To: "<mailto:ecrit@ietf.org>ecrit@ietf.org" 
> <<mailto:ecrit@ietf.org>ecrit@ietf.org>
>  Cc: Brian Rosen <<mailto:brian.rosen@neustar.biz>brian.rosen@neustar.biz>
>  Subject: draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-03 feedback - additional
>
>  There is one thing I would like to add to the feedback which I sent 
> recently on the similar location draft:
>
>  Section 4 discusses briefly the possibility of the server limiting 
> the number of returned similar locations.  Although the current 
> text expresses the general idea that there may be a few that are 
> the "most likely" to be the correct location, there are also 
> scenarios where many similar locations could all be equally likely, 
> and the server might need to simply cut off the list at a 
> reasonable count.  In those situations, I believe it would be 
> helpful if the server indicated when such  a limit is actually 
> applied.
>
>  I suggest that an attribute be added to the locationValidation 
> element of the findService response, perhaps 
> rli:similarLocationsLimited, having a data type of boolean, with 
> instructions that a server SHOULD include this attribute if the 
> number of returned similar locations is limited due to 
> configuration or policy.
>
>  Dan Banks
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At 9:06 PM +0000 10/6/16, Dan Banks wrote:

>  I have been working on an implementation of the similar location 
> mechanism described by draft-ietf-ecrit-similar-location-03, and 
> have some feedback:
>
>  1)
>  For completeLocation, the actual element name in the schema is 
> "completedlocation", with a 'd' and lowercase 'l'.  It appears this 
> should be "completeLocation".  There is also a use of 
> "completedLocation" on page 5 that should be changed.  Also, there 
> will only be a single completeLocation returned.

I agree; these should be addressed.

>  2)
>  An element "returnedLocationResponse" is defined by the schema, but 
> not discussed in the text or illustrated in the examples:

I agree, this should be addressed.

>  3)
>  It is desirable to have away for a client to specifically request 
> RLI, instead of it being included any time that validation is 
> performed.  Responses with multiple similar locations can quickly 
> become large compared to responses without RLI, and may also incur 
> additional processing cost at the server.  This could be wasteful 
> if automated validation is being performed or if the RLI is 
> otherwise not understood or discarded.  I suggest an attribute be 
> added to the findService request (perhaps rli:returnLocation) with 
> defined values of { "none" | "similar"  | "complete" | "any" } to 
> indicate which return location types the client is interested in. 
> Further, I suggest that the server be restricted to including only 
> RLI types in the response that are requested, and that omitting the 
> attribute from the request is equivalent to 
> rli:returnLocation="none".

This seems worth discussing.

>  5)
>  I would like to suggest that each element that users the 
> locationInformation pattern should only represent one location. 
> That is, instead of a single similarLocation element containing 
> multiple civicAddress elements (as illustrated in the example), 
> multiple similarLocation elements should be used with each 
> containing a single civicAddress.

This seems helpful.

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