From nobody Thu Apr 5 06:39:10 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: hipsec@ietf.org Delivered-To: hipsec@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id E99AF12D885; Thu, 5 Apr 2018 06:39:02 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: Joel Halpern To: Cc: draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis.all@ietf.org, hipsec@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.77.1 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <152293554290.25904.13212973371332391926@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Thu, 05 Apr 2018 06:39:02 -0700 Archived-At: Subject: [Hipsec] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-19 X-BeenThere: hipsec@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 List-Id: "This is the official IETF Mailing List for the HIP Working Group." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 05 Apr 2018 13:39:03 -0000 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-19 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2018-04-05 IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-26 IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10 Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. My thanks to the authors for addressing the comments in my previous review. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: N/A From nobody Thu Apr 5 09:51:29 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: hipsec@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: hipsec@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 261CA12DA22; Thu, 5 Apr 2018 09:51:27 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -4.209 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.209 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id OGmibgm9Z2lX; Thu, 5 Apr 2018 09:51:23 -0700 (PDT) Received: from z9m9z.htt-consult.com (z9m9z.htt-consult.com [50.253.254.3]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id AB9141271DF; Thu, 5 Apr 2018 09:51:20 -0700 (PDT) Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by z9m9z.htt-consult.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5385A62146; Thu, 5 Apr 2018 12:51:19 -0400 (EDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at htt-consult.com Received: from z9m9z.htt-consult.com ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (z9m9z.htt-consult.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with LMTP id I4Az7gUkA8Wx; Thu, 5 Apr 2018 12:51:13 -0400 (EDT) Received: from lx120e.htt-consult.com (unknown [192.168.160.12]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES128-SHA (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by z9m9z.htt-consult.com (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 299E862144; Thu, 5 Apr 2018 12:51:08 -0400 (EDT) To: Joel Halpern , gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis.all@ietf.org, hipsec@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org References: <152293554290.25904.13212973371332391926@ietfa.amsl.com> From: Robert Moskowitz Message-ID: <8cf4d1b6-f326-0401-4818-5b3f1f6aefed@labs.htt-consult.com> Date: Thu, 5 Apr 2018 12:50:58 -0400 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:52.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/52.2.1 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <152293554290.25904.13212973371332391926@ietfa.amsl.com> Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="------------2B72E11F1735797C88243B27" Content-Language: en-US Archived-At: Subject: Re: [Hipsec] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-19 X-BeenThere: hipsec@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 Precedence: list List-Id: "This is the official IETF Mailing List for the HIP Working Group." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 05 Apr 2018 16:51:27 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --------------2B72E11F1735797C88243B27 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit It is Passover middle days. I am on vacation, kind of today and tomorrow is full Holiday... Bob On 04/05/2018 09:39 AM, Joel Halpern wrote: > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > . > > Document: draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-19 > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review Date: 2018-04-05 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-26 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10 > > Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. > My thanks to the authors for addressing the comments in my previous review. > > Major issues: N/A > > Minor issues: N/A > > Nits/editorial comments: N/A > > -- Standard Robert Moskowitz Owner HTT Consulting C:248-219-2059 F:248-968-2824 E:rgm@labs.htt-consult.com There's no limit to what can be accomplished if it doesn't matter who gets the credit --------------2B72E11F1735797C88243B27 Content-Type: text/html; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit It is Passover middle days.  I am on vacation, kind of today and tomorrow is full Holiday...

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On 04/05/2018 09:39 AM, Joel Halpern wrote:
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-19
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2018-04-05
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-26
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
    My thanks to the authors for addressing the comments in my previous review.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:  N/A

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--------------2B72E11F1735797C88243B27-- From nobody Sun Apr 8 00:32:08 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: hipsec@ietf.org Delivered-To: hipsec@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5C60212420B; Sun, 8 Apr 2018 00:32:06 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: Roni Even To: Cc: hipsec@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org, draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal.all@ietf.org X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.77.1 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <152317272632.1526.14567136074332180513@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Sun, 08 Apr 2018 00:32:06 -0700 Archived-At: Subject: [Hipsec] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28 X-BeenThere: hipsec@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 List-Id: "This is the official IETF Mailing List for the HIP Working Group." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 08 Apr 2018 07:32:06 -0000 Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2018-04-08 IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-26 IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with one nit. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In section 7 - "a new error type SERVER_REFLEXIVE_CANDIDATE_ALLOCATION_FAILED in Section 5.9." It is in section 5.10 From nobody Mon Apr 9 05:06:04 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: hipsec@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: hipsec@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B8DE212D964 for ; Mon, 9 Apr 2018 05:05:54 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -4.321 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.321 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H3=-0.01, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=-0.01, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=ericsson.com Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 14Gp2Sa2Yng3 for ; Mon, 9 Apr 2018 05:05:53 -0700 (PDT) Received: from sesbmg23.ericsson.net (sesbmg23.ericsson.net [193.180.251.37]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 8B13D127871 for ; Mon, 9 Apr 2018 05:05:51 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=ericsson.com; s=mailgw201801; c=relaxed/simple; q=dns/txt; i=@ericsson.com; t=1523275548; h=From:Sender:Reply-To:Subject:Date:Message-ID:To:CC:MIME-Version:Content-Type: Content-Transfer-Encoding:Content-ID:Content-Description:Resent-Date:Resent-From: Resent-Sender:Resent-To:Resent-Cc:Resent-Message-ID:In-Reply-To:References:List-Id: List-Help:List-Unsubscribe:List-Subscribe:List-Post:List-Owner:List-Archive; bh=hZCeVQxMuDK+ES+Fi2BR5dgDSVw9uDSEUku1UrDLtqM=; b=hHnFOLMiAns5S+VBpR/3mSV8H6FagkNDsTZM/BfAmz3uHGvJL629MGHRWylXB5Yf yMWu2ndFNHIp8Pi5QXBJBMRe5QcODITTPjdMZKQS0D8cXEIVFpVL0auO1EPylHC1 aRgqTqzNwMM/Ycn6UscsCBwbKtQhXM9O8262BKAOJeA=; X-AuditID: c1b4fb25-1c7ff7000000522b-a0-5acb571cbeab Received: from ESESSHC022.ericsson.se (Unknown_Domain [153.88.183.84]) by sesbmg23.ericsson.net (Symantec Mail Security) with SMTP id DE.FB.21035.C175BCA5; Mon, 9 Apr 2018 14:05:48 +0200 (CEST) Received: from [131.160.51.186] (153.88.183.153) by smtp.internal.ericsson.com (153.88.183.86) with Microsoft SMTP Server id 14.3.382.0; Mon, 9 Apr 2018 14:05:48 +0200 To: Roni Even , CC: , , References: <152317272632.1526.14567136074332180513@ietfa.amsl.com> From: Miika Komu Organization: Ericsson AB Message-ID: <1e94caf7-9b00-7cea-e3b4-0922c0cb3942@ericsson.com> Date: Mon, 9 Apr 2018 15:05:48 +0300 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:52.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/52.7.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <152317272632.1526.14567136074332180513@ietfa.amsl.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8"; format=flowed Content-Language: en-US Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFnrMLMWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUyM2J7iK5M+Okog7NrLC02nd7DanH11WcW i6mLJjNbPNs4n8XibzuzA6vHzll32T2WLPnJFMAUxWWTkpqTWZZapG+XwJWx49QPxoI+jopz rbuYGxh3snUxcnJICJhIHD30mrmLkYtDSOAIo8SitcdZIJzVjBJLFzxhAakSFvCVmHt6FZDN wSEiYCWxcbYLiMksECPRvNwMpEJIwFli1uLJYNVsAloSq+5cZwax+QUkJTY07AazeQXsJd4d 38ME0soioCLx8qo5SFhUIELi3vlPbBAlghInZ0Is5RRwkVh7fTEjiM0sYCExc/55KFtc4taT +UwQtrzE9rdzmEFGCgGNvHgseAKj0Cwkk2Yh6Z6FpHsWku4FjCyrGEWLU4uTctONjPVSizKT i4vz8/TyUks2MQKD/uCW36o7GC+/cTzEKMDBqMTDa697OkqINbGsuDL3EKMEB7OSCK+uP1CI NyWxsiq1KD++qDQntfgQozQHi5I470PzzVFCAumJJanZqakFqUUwWSYOTqkGxrQEYW33BZOV ZSSnRz4wvuVtaBFpe/F3uSmTf2vZvVtnOJRTjsqcyvTWfjrhD7fDd+ddSv1Ltxudq+fxSN56 +YPdQyFBhj9272VOJG96q//nFY92Hpf+/dzScyppkXM8zt032ef8dmLQ82ncpefO/T1W9Fra pyaReb+Mg53VXX0xXvMK2dkrlViKMxINtZiLihMB5wO5hXYCAAA= Archived-At: Subject: Re: [Hipsec] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28 X-BeenThere: hipsec@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 Precedence: list List-Id: "This is the official IETF Mailing List for the HIP Working Group." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 09 Apr 2018 12:05:55 -0000 Hi Roni, On 04/08/2018 10:32 AM, Roni Even wrote: > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > . > > Document: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-?? > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review Date: 2018-04-08 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-26 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10 > > Summary: > The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with one nit. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > In section 7 - "a new error type SERVER_REFLEXIVE_CANDIDATE_ALLOCATION_FAILED > in Section 5.9." It is in section 5.10 good catch, I'll fix the reference in the next version. Thanks!