Subject: [i2rs] Comments on draft-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements-02

From: "Russ White" <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 30 Jan 2016 20:24:22 -0500

Y'all -- 

Two minor comments from my most recent re-reading of
draft-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements-02.

:-)

Russ

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...statistics known by hackers or their competitors. While

Should be "their competitors or hackers." Otherwise the "their" points back
to hackers, which means the information is known by the hackers and the
hacker's competitors -- truly a dire situation.

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Requirements SEC-REQ-13 and SEC-REQ-14 are SHOULD requirements...

Should this actually be 14 and 15?