From nobody Fri Mar 2 10:31:51 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietf.org Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 38DD812D876; Fri, 2 Mar 2018 10:31:38 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: Stewart Bryant To: Cc: i2rs@ietf.org, draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-data-model.all@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.73.0 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <152001549820.15735.17467223319832721576@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Fri, 02 Mar 2018 10:31:38 -0800 Archived-At: Subject: [i2rs] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-data-model-10 X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 02 Mar 2018 18:31:38 -0000 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-data-model-10 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2018-03-02 IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-30 IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-05 Summary: Read this from the perspective of a generalist rather that as a routing specialist in the expectation that other routing specialist would read the YANG model in detail and compare it to the text and there experience of operational routers. From that perspective this seems ready to be published. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: None From nobody Fri Mar 2 11:09:54 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietf.org Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4BE3B129C6A; Fri, 2 Mar 2018 11:09:51 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: Carlos Martinez To: Cc: i2rs@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org, draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology.all@ietf.org X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.73.0 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <152001779127.15727.12457697280451415989@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Fri, 02 Mar 2018 11:09:51 -0800 Archived-At: Subject: [i2rs] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06 X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 02 Mar 2018 19:09:51 -0000 Reviewer: Carlos Martinez Review result: Ready Reviewer: Carlos Martinez Review Result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. I believe the document expresses clearly how the model fits within the larger tree of network-related YANG models. It is well written and readable. I consider the document to be ready. From nobody Mon Mar 5 01:59:23 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietf.org Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id BC2E2126579; Mon, 5 Mar 2018 01:59:22 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: internet-drafts@ietf.org To: Cc: i2rs@ietf.org X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.73.0 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <152024396273.27878.14051270706323494269@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Mon, 05 Mar 2018 01:59:22 -0800 Archived-At: Subject: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-04.txt X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 05 Mar 2018 09:59:23 -0000 A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System WG of the IETF. Title : A YANG Data Model for Layer-2 Network Topologies Authors : Jie Dong Xiugang Wei Filename : draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-04.txt Pages : 25 Date : 2018-03-05 Abstract: This document defines a YANG data model for Layer 2 network topologies. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology/ There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-04 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-04 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-04 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. 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During this WG LC, please indicate any issues with the updates to align with Network Management Data Store Module. These may include: 1) Yang data model structure, 2) High level Yang language format 3) Security consideration section, 4) Any issues with the notification calls. If you feel this updated data model is ready for publication, please send indicate that in your response. Cheerily, Susan Hares ------=_NextPart_000_017F_01D3B60F.67341EB0 Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

Greetings = I2RS folks:

 

This is a 2 Week WG LC to confirm the WG LC on = draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology.   During this WG LC, = please indicate any issues with the updates to align with Network = Management Data Store Module.  These may include:

 

1)      = Yang data model = structure,

2)      = High level Yang language = format

3)      = Security consideration = section,

4)      = Any issues with the = notification calls.

 

If you feel = this updated data model is ready for publication, please send indicate = that in your response.

 

Cheerily, = Susan Hares

 

 

------=_NextPart_000_017F_01D3B60F.67341EB0-- From nobody Wed Mar 7 09:53:25 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0C901120725; Wed, 7 Mar 2018 09:53:24 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -14.509 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-14.509 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI=-5, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001, USER_IN_DEF_DKIM_WL=-7.5] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=cisco.com Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id EtOQ-L3HE2sv; Wed, 7 Mar 2018 09:53:22 -0800 (PST) Received: from aer-iport-4.cisco.com (aer-iport-4.cisco.com [173.38.203.54]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher DHE-RSA-SEED-SHA (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 38D07120721; Wed, 7 Mar 2018 09:53:21 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=cisco.com; i=@cisco.com; l=8073; q=dns/txt; s=iport; t=1520445201; x=1521654801; h=subject:to:references:from:message-id:date:mime-version: in-reply-to; bh=ectGiU/CFDSTn02juSM+42BgEN70RYinHkRTGNNnPi8=; b=Upm9zMI/I4PyIe+0MJzf71L6LsiWsw504R2S6iNeVRYxiQwzgyIHD2Q1 oS7qM3JbOd0miEyP8eDXAQNot7/gLMVxDJLTwR4Xyv7gEKFa0X1xlr4CU vva0kDYmHp+yzVCcX4zm0IPVgR8xraZ+EgYzBT2t3N67BtVoobjrZcV6d c=; X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Filtered: true X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Result: =?us-ascii?q?A0B6AQDvJaBa/xbLJq1dGQEBAQEBAQEBA?= =?us-ascii?q?QEBAQcBAQEBAYJaSYETcCiObI8JgRaPEYU3ggEKGAEKhQ0Cgys4FAECAQEBAQE?= =?us-ascii?q?BAmsnhSQBAQQBAStBGwsOCi4nMAYBDAYCAQGFFxCrQiaETIN0gX8dBYUxhAWCD?= =?us-ascii?q?4MEgy4BAYFZhgUEmmcJkHgHgWeEN4J4hWSBLYodhg2BLjUhgVIzGggbFTqCQ4J?= =?us-ascii?q?jbgEIbkA3jAkBAQE?= X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="5.47,436,1515456000"; d="scan'208,217";a="2436486" Received: from aer-iport-nat.cisco.com (HELO aer-core-3.cisco.com) ([173.38.203.22]) by aer-iport-4.cisco.com with ESMTP/TLS/DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384; 07 Mar 2018 17:53:19 +0000 Received: from [10.63.23.110] (dhcp-ensft1-uk-vla370-10-63-23-110.cisco.com [10.63.23.110]) by aer-core-3.cisco.com (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id w27HrIAj023448; Wed, 7 Mar 2018 17:53:19 GMT To: Susan Hares , i2rs@ietf.org, draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology@ietf.org References: <017e01d3b639$50098a70$f01c9f50$@ndzh.com> From: Robert Wilton Message-ID: <69d117ad-ca45-0ab4-93b9-ccc6bae2b2b4@cisco.com> Date: Wed, 7 Mar 2018 17:53:18 +0000 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 10.0; WOW64; rv:52.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/52.6.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <017e01d3b639$50098a70$f01c9f50$@ndzh.com> Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="------------F0AECD928C1CA2775CAAD4A6" Content-Language: en-US Archived-At: Subject: Re: [i2rs] WG LC confirmation on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology (3/7 to 3/21/2018) X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 Precedence: list List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 07 Mar 2018 17:53:24 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --------------F0AECD928C1CA2775CAAD4A6 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=windows-1252; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit One quick comment (not a proper review): I note that the extra state module in Appendix A is redefining features defined in the main module.  This isn't generically necessarily the wrong thing to do, but in this case it looks like they are not required in the state module (since they don't appear to be used), and would be best removed. Thanks, Rob On 07/03/2018 17:25, Susan Hares wrote: > > Greetings I2RS folks: > > This is a 2 Week WG LC to confirm the WG LC on > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology.   During this WG LC, please > indicate any issues with the updates to align with Network Management > Data Store Module.  These may include: > > 1)Yang data model structure, > > 2)High level Yang language format > > 3)Security consideration section, > > 4)Any issues with the notification calls. > > If you feel this updated data model is ready for publication, please > send indicate that in your response. > > Cheerily, Susan Hares > > > > _______________________________________________ > i2rs mailing list > i2rs@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs --------------F0AECD928C1CA2775CAAD4A6 Content-Type: text/html; charset=windows-1252 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit

One quick comment (not a proper review):

I note that the extra state module in Appendix A is redefining features defined in the main module.  This isn't generically necessarily the wrong thing to do, but in this case it looks like they are not required in the state module (since they don't appear to be used), and would be best removed.

Thanks,
Rob


On 07/03/2018 17:25, Susan Hares wrote:

Greetings I2RS folks:

 

This is a 2 Week WG LC to confirm the WG LC on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology.   During this WG LC, please indicate any issues with the updates to align with Network Management Data Store Module.  These may include:

 

1)      Yang data model structure,

2)      High level Yang language format

3)      Security consideration section,

4)      Any issues with the notification calls.

 

If you feel this updated data model is ready for publication, please send indicate that in your response.

 

Cheerily, Susan Hares

 

 



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--------------F0AECD928C1CA2775CAAD4A6-- From nobody Fri Mar 9 13:28:17 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietf.org Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5167012783A; Fri, 9 Mar 2018 13:28:16 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: The IESG To: "IETF-Announce" X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.74.0 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk CC: i2rs@ietf.org, draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@ietf.org, Susan Hares , i2rs-chairs@ietf.org, akatlas@gmail.com, shares@ndzh.com Reply-To: ietf@ietf.org Sender: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Message-ID: <152063089628.11207.17812655851887339242.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Fri, 09 Mar 2018 13:28:16 -0800 Archived-At: Subject: [i2rs] Last Call: (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 09 Mar 2018 21:28:16 -0000 The IESG has received a request from the Interface to the Routing System WG (i2rs) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks' as Proposed Standard The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the ietf@ietf.org mailing lists by 2018-04-03. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. Abstract This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data Center Network. The file can be obtained via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology/ IESG discussion can be tracked via https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology/ballot/ No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. The document contains these normative downward references. 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which looks like XML/HTML style reference in the YANG module, which will not work as the YANG module must be plain text. I suggest an introductory section along the lines of This module imports ... from ... and references [RFC7348] along the lines of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis without which [RFC7348] will be an unused Reference. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "The IESG" To: "IETF-Announce" Cc: ; ; ; ; Sent: Friday, March 09, 2018 9:28 PM Subject: Last Call: (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard > > The IESG has received a request from the Interface to the Routing System WG > (i2rs) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for Fabric > Topology in Data Center Networks' > as Proposed > Standard > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > ietf@ietf.org mailing lists by 2018-04-03. Exceptionally, comments may be > sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of > the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Abstract > > > This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data > Center Network. > > > > > The file can be obtained via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- topology/ > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- topology/ballot/ > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > The document contains these normative downward references. > See RFC 3967 for additional information: > rfc7348: Virtual eXtensible Local Area Network (VXLAN): A Framework for Overlaying Virtualized Layer 2 Networks over Layer 3 Networks (Informational - Independent Submission Editor stream) > > > From nobody Wed Mar 14 19:12:55 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4FEA9127863; Wed, 14 Mar 2018 19:12:54 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -4.219 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.219 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H3=-0.01, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=-0.01, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_KAM_HTML_FONT_INVALID=0.01, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id mZkH-53tXaZr; Wed, 14 Mar 2018 19:12:52 -0700 (PDT) Received: from huawei.com (lhrrgout.huawei.com [194.213.3.17]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 05CA81242F7; Wed, 14 Mar 2018 19:12:52 -0700 (PDT) Received: from lhreml702-cah.china.huawei.com (unknown [172.18.7.106]) by Forcepoint Email with ESMTP id 718F8BE6C44A3; Thu, 15 Mar 2018 02:12:49 +0000 (GMT) Received: from NKGEML412-HUB.china.huawei.com (10.98.56.73) by lhreml702-cah.china.huawei.com (10.201.108.43) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.382.0; Thu, 15 Mar 2018 02:12:49 +0000 Received: from NKGEML515-MBX.china.huawei.com ([fe80::a54a:89d2:c471:ff]) by nkgeml412-hub.china.huawei.com ([10.98.56.73]) with mapi id 14.03.0361.001; Thu, 15 Mar 2018 10:12:43 +0800 From: "Dongjie (Jimmy)" To: Robert Wilton , Susan Hares , "i2rs@ietf.org" , "draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology@ietf.org" Thread-Topic: [i2rs] WG LC confirmation on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology (3/7 to 3/21/2018) Thread-Index: AdO2OUuQrVZmDWCsRGC17ANFhQSi6v//gaUA//Pu1xA= Date: Thu, 15 Mar 2018 02:12:43 +0000 Message-ID: <76CD132C3ADEF848BD84D028D243C9279834FF88@NKGEML515-MBX.china.huawei.com> References: <017e01d3b639$50098a70$f01c9f50$@ndzh.com> <69d117ad-ca45-0ab4-93b9-ccc6bae2b2b4@cisco.com> In-Reply-To: <69d117ad-ca45-0ab4-93b9-ccc6bae2b2b4@cisco.com> Accept-Language: en-US, zh-CN Content-Language: zh-CN X-MS-Has-Attach: X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: x-originating-ip: [10.130.151.75] Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_76CD132C3ADEF848BD84D028D243C9279834FF88NKGEML515MBXchi_" MIME-Version: 1.0 X-CFilter-Loop: Reflected Archived-At: Subject: Re: [i2rs] WG LC confirmation on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology (3/7 to 3/21/2018) X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 Precedence: list List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 15 Mar 2018 02:12:54 -0000 --_000_76CD132C3ADEF848BD84D028D243C9279834FF88NKGEML515MBXchi_ Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi Robert, Sorry for the late reply and thanks a lot for your comments. We will make t= he changes to the state module in next revision. Best regards, Jie From: Robert Wilton [mailto:rwilton@cisco.com] Sent: Thursday, March 08, 2018 1:53 AM To: Susan Hares ; i2rs@ietf.org; draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-n= etwork-topology@ietf.org Subject: Re: [i2rs] WG LC confirmation on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-t= opology (3/7 to 3/21/2018) One quick comment (not a proper review): I note that the extra state module in Appendix A is redefining features def= ined in the main module. This isn't generically necessarily the wrong thin= g to do, but in this case it looks like they are not required in the state = module (since they don't appear to be used), and would be best removed. Thanks, Rob On 07/03/2018 17:25, Susan Hares wrote: Greetings I2RS folks: This is a 2 Week WG LC to confirm the WG LC on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-netw= ork-topology. During this WG LC, please indicate any issues with the upda= tes to align with Network Management Data Store Module. These may include: 1) Yang data model structure, 2) High level Yang language format 3) Security consideration section, 4) Any issues with the notification calls. If you feel this updated data model is ready for publication, please send i= ndicate that in your response. Cheerily, Susan Hares _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list i2rs@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs --_000_76CD132C3ADEF848BD84D028D243C9279834FF88NKGEML515MBXchi_ Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

Hi Robert,

 

Sorry for the late reply and thanks a lot for your comments. We w= ill make the changes to the state module in next revision.

 

Best regards,

Jie

 

F= rom: Robert Wilt= on [mailto:rwilton@cisco.com]
Sent: Thursday, March 08, 2018 1:53 AM
To: Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>; i2rs@ietf.org; draft-ietf-i= 2rs-yang-l2-network-topology@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [i2rs] WG LC confirmation on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-ne= twork-topology (3/7 to 3/21/2018)

 

One quick comment (not a proper review):

I note that the extra state module in Appendix A is= redefining features defined in the main module.  This isn't generical= ly necessarily the wrong thing to do, but in this case it looks like they a= re not required in the state module (since they don't appear to be used), and would be best removed.

Thanks,
Rob

 

On 07/03/2018 17:25, Susan Hare= s wrote:

Greetings I2RS folks:

 

This is a 2 Week WG LC to confi= rm the WG LC on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology.   Durin= g this WG LC, please indicate any issues with the updates to align with Net= work Management Data Store Module.  These may include:

 

1) &nbs= p;    Yang data model structu= re,

2) &nbs= p;    High level Yang languag= e format

3) &nbs= p;    Security consideration = section,

4) &nbs= p;    Any issues with the not= ification calls.

 

If you feel this updated data m= odel is ready for publication, please send indicate that in your response.

 

Cheerily, Susan Hares

 

 




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--_000_76CD132C3ADEF848BD84D028D243C9279834FF88NKGEML515MBXchi_-- From nobody Fri Mar 16 14:31:17 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5EB5912D952; Fri, 16 Mar 2018 14:31:01 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -4.211 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.211 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id UEJhBlSW4RYE; Fri, 16 Mar 2018 14:30:58 -0700 (PDT) Received: from rfc-editor.org (rfc-editor.org [4.31.198.49]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id A3D92126BF0; Fri, 16 Mar 2018 14:30:43 -0700 (PDT) Received: by rfc-editor.org (Postfix, from userid 30) id 51348B80CF9; Fri, 16 Mar 2018 14:30:40 -0700 (PDT) To: ietf-announce@ietf.org, rfc-dist@rfc-editor.org X-PHP-Originating-Script: 1005:ams_util_lib.php From: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, drafts-update-ref@iana.org, i2rs@ietf.org Content-type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Message-Id: <20180316213040.51348B80CF9@rfc-editor.org> Date: Fri, 16 Mar 2018 14:30:40 -0700 (PDT) Archived-At: Subject: [i2rs] =?utf-8?q?RFC_8345_on_A_YANG_Data_Model_for_Network_Topolo?= =?utf-8?q?gies?= X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 Precedence: list List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 16 Mar 2018 21:31:10 -0000 A new Request for Comments is now available in online RFC libraries. RFC 8345 Title: A YANG Data Model for Network Topologies Author: A. Clemm, J. Medved, R. Varga, N. Bahadur, H. Ananthakrishnan, X. Liu Status: Standards Track Stream: IETF Date: March 2018 Mailbox: ludwig@clemm.org, jmedved@cisco.com, robert.varga@pantheon.tech, nitin_bahadur@yahoo.com, hari@packetdesign.com, xufeng_liu@jabil.com Pages: 57 Characters: 111154 Updates/Obsoletes/SeeAlso: None I-D Tag: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-20.txt URL: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8345 DOI: 10.17487/RFC8345 This document defines an abstract (generic, or base) YANG data model for network/service topologies and inventories. The data model serves as a base model that is augmented with technology-specific details in other, more specific topology and inventory data models. This document is a product of the Interface to the Routing System Working Group of the IETF. This is now a Proposed Standard. 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RFC 8346 Title: A YANG Data Model for Layer 3 Topologies Author: A. Clemm, J. Medved, R. Varga, X. Liu, H. Ananthakrishnan, N. Bahadur Status: Standards Track Stream: IETF Date: March 2018 Mailbox: ludwig@clemm.org, jmedved@cisco.com, robert.varga@pantheon.tech, xufeng.liu.ietf@gmail.com, hari@packetdesign.com, nitin_bahadur@yahoo.com Pages: 35 Characters: 64661 Updates/Obsoletes/SeeAlso: None I-D Tag: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-16.txt URL: https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc8346 DOI: 10.17487/RFC8346 This document defines a YANG data model for Layer 3 network topologies. This document is a product of the Interface to the Routing System Working Group of the IETF. This is now a Proposed Standard. STANDARDS TRACK: This document specifies an Internet Standards Track protocol for the Internet community, and requests discussion and suggestions for improvements. 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RFC8340    |     draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-06.txt
RFC8341    |     draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-09.txt
RFC8342    |     draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-10.txt
RFC8343    |     draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7223bis-03.txt
RFC8344    |     draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-03.txt
RFC8345    |     draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-20.txt
RFC8346    |     draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-16.txt

Congratulations to all persons involved.

Regards, Benoit
--------------E1FDFA4D65BC1FDD95D6E942-- From nobody Sat Mar 17 17:29:25 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4CF1C12426E; Sat, 17 Mar 2018 17:29:13 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: 0.957 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=0.957 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DOS_OUTLOOK_TO_MX=2.845, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, T_KAM_HTML_FONT_INVALID=0.01, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=no autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id KHu5x_QUUmOo; Sat, 17 Mar 2018 17:29:12 -0700 (PDT) Received: from hickoryhill-consulting.com (50-245-122-97-static.hfc.comcastbusiness.net [50.245.122.97]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 9CA47124205; Sat, 17 Mar 2018 17:29:11 -0700 (PDT) X-Default-Received-SPF: pass (skip=forwardok (res=PASS)) x-ip-name=31.133.157.12; From: "Susan Hares" To: "'Benoit Claise'" , "'NETMOD Working Group'" , "'NETCONF'" , References: In-Reply-To: Date: Sat, 17 Mar 2018 20:29:05 -0400 Message-ID: <01ed01d3be50$20e97bf0$62bc73d0$@ndzh.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_NextPart_000_01EE_01D3BE2E.99D87830" X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook 14.0 Thread-Index: AQEiz2XEpXlG9LBtV+f9LYgOZkDmFqU3ATJw Content-Language: en-us X-Authenticated-User: skh@ndzh.com Archived-At: Subject: Re: [i2rs] RFC 8340 to 8346 published X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 Precedence: list List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 18 Mar 2018 00:29:13 -0000 This is a multipart message in MIME format. ------=_NextPart_000_01EE_01D3BE2E.99D87830 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Benoit: =20 A Big Thank you to you and Alia Atlas! I=E2=80=99m thrilled to see the = I2RS topology RFCs happen.=20 =20 Sue Hares=20 =20 From: i2rs [mailto:i2rs-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Benoit Claise Sent: Saturday, March 17, 2018 6:36 PM To: NETMOD Working Group; NETCONF; i2rs@ietf.org Subject: [i2rs] RFC 8340 to 8346 published =20 Dear all, RFC8340 | = draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-06.txt RFC8341 | = draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-09.txt RFC8342 | = draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-10.txt RFC8343 | = draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7223bis-03.txt RFC8344 | = draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-03.txt RFC8345 | = draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-20.txt RFC8346 | = draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-16.txt Congratulations to all persons involved. Regards, Benoit ------=_NextPart_000_01EE_01D3BE2E.99D87830 Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

Benoit:

 

A Big Thank you to you and Alia Atlas!=C2=A0=C2=A0 I=E2=80=99m = thrilled to see the I2RS topology RFCs happen.

 

Sue Hares

 

From: i2rs [mailto:i2rs-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Benoit = Claise
Sent: Saturday, March 17, 2018 6:36 PM
To: = NETMOD Working Group; NETCONF; i2rs@ietf.org
Subject: [i2rs] = RFC 8340 to 8346 published

 

Dear = all,

RFC8340 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-06.txt

RFC8341 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-09.txt
RFC8342 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-10.txt
RFC8343 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7223bis-03.txt
RFC8344 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-03.txt
RFC8345 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-20.txt
RFC8346 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-16.txt

Congratulations to all = persons involved.

Regards, = Benoit

------=_NextPart_000_01EE_01D3BE2E.99D87830-- From nobody Sun Mar 18 20:00:43 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietf.org Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 73C96124BE8; Sun, 18 Mar 2018 20:00:41 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: internet-drafts@ietf.org To: Cc: i2rs@ietf.org X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.75.2 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <152142844142.15982.9977877609579084399@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Sun, 18 Mar 2018 20:00:41 -0700 Archived-At: Subject: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-07.txt X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 19 Mar 2018 03:00:41 -0000 A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System WG of the IETF. Title : A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks Authors : Yan Zhuang Danian Shi Rong Gu Hariharan Ananthakrishnan Filename : draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-07.txt Pages : 29 Date : 2018-03-18 Abstract: This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data Center Network. 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charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook 14.0 Thread-Index: AQFrqHRgEjLIc2YHsCKqo0cIPKILoQLWIT4ZAcijc9ykgklegA== Content-Language: en-us X-Authenticated-User: skh@ndzh.com Archived-At: Subject: Re: [i2rs] Last Call: (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 Precedence: list List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 19 Mar 2018 06:05:25 -0000 Yan: Thank you for the update. Sue Hares -----Original Message----- From: i2rs [mailto:i2rs-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Zhuangyan (Yan) Sent: Sunday, March 18, 2018 11:02 PM To: tom p.; ietf@ietf.org Cc: i2rs@ietf.org; draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@ietf.org; i2rs-chairs@ietf.org; shares@ndzh.com; akatlas@gmail.com Subject: Re: [i2rs] Last Call: (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard Hi Tom, Thank you for your comments. We changed the words in description statement as you suggested and added an introductory section before the module codes in section "Fabric YANG Module". The draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis is added as well. We think the new version-07 resolved all your comments :) Thank you. Best Regards, Yan (on behalf of all authors) -----Original Message----- From: tom p. [mailto:daedulus@btconnect.com] Sent: Tuesday, March 13, 2018 8:30 PM To: ietf@ietf.org Cc: i2rs@ietf.org; draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@ietf.org; i2rs-chairs@ietf.org; shares@ndzh.com; akatlas@gmail.com Subject: Re: Last Call: (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard I see description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier, see [RFC7348])s that the fabric has"; which looks like XML/HTML style reference in the YANG module, which will not work as the YANG module must be plain text. I suggest an introductory section along the lines of This module imports ... from ... and references [RFC7348] along the lines of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis without which [RFC7348] will be an unused Reference. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "The IESG" To: "IETF-Announce" Cc: ; ; ; ; Sent: Friday, March 09, 2018 9:28 PM Subject: Last Call: (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard > > The IESG has received a request from the Interface to the Routing System WG > (i2rs) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for Fabric > Topology in Data Center Networks' > as Proposed > Standard > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > ietf@ietf.org mailing lists by 2018-04-03. Exceptionally, comments may be > sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of > the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Abstract > > > This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data > Center Network. > > > > > The file can be obtained via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- topology/ > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- topology/ballot/ > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > The document contains these normative downward references. > See RFC 3967 for additional information: > rfc7348: Virtual eXtensible Local Area Network (VXLAN): A Framework for Overlaying Virtualized Layer 2 Networks over Layer 3 Networks (Informational - Independent Submission Editor stream) > > > _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list i2rs@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs From nobody Mon Mar 19 06:19:56 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 28A0B1275FD; 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charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable A big +1. =20 Mehmet =20 From: Netconf On Behalf Of Benoit Claise Sent: Saturday, March 17, 2018 11:36 PM To: NETMOD Working Group ; NETCONF ; = i2rs@ietf.org Subject: [Netconf] RFC 8340 to 8346 published =20 Dear all, RFC8340 | = draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-06.txt RFC8341 | = draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-09.txt RFC8342 | = draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-10.txt RFC8343 | = draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7223bis-03.txt RFC8344 | = draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-03.txt RFC8345 | = draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-20.txt RFC8346 | = draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-16.txt Congratulations to all persons involved. 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A big = +1.

 

Mehmet

 

From: Netconf <netconf-bounces@ietf.org> = On Behalf Of Benoit Claise
Sent: Saturday, March 17, = 2018 11:36 PM
To: NETMOD Working Group = <netmod@ietf.org>; NETCONF <netconf@ietf.org>; = i2rs@ietf.org
Subject: [Netconf] RFC 8340 to 8346 = published

 

Dear = all,

RFC8340 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-06.txt

RFC8341 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-09.txt
RFC8342 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-10.txt
RFC8343 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7223bis-03.txt
RFC8344 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-03.txt
RFC8345 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-20.txt
RFC8346 &nbs= p;  |     = draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-16.txt

Congratulations to all = persons involved.

Regards, = Benoit

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Since your mail reader does not understand this format, some or all of this message may not be legible. --B_3604607709_1382682878 Content-type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-transfer-encoding: quoted-printable Hi Peter, =20 =C2=A0=C2=A0 =C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0Thanks for the Gen-art review. Sorry it missed my attention back= when you sent it. Please see NB> below for comments. =20 =20 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues =20 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.=C2=A0 Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. =20 For more information, please see the FAQ at ;. =20 Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-14 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2018-02-22 IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-23 IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08 =20 Summary: This Informational draft specifies an information model for routin= g information bases, providing modeling of the internal information of a rout= er or similar network device.=C2=A0 The draft is mostly ready, but has some issues= that should be considered. [Ready with issues] =20 Major issues: None =20 Minor issues: =20 Page 4, 3rd full paragraph, 1st sentence: the draft introduces the concept = of "RIB clients" in Figure 1, notes that they are generally routing protocols,= and then never uses the term again.=C2=A0 All other references to the what must be = the users of the northbound interface are then called "external entities" for t= he most part.=C2=A0 This is confusing because the term "external entity" is not de= fined nor fully equated with "RIB client".=C2=A0 The term also seems to indicate that= the "external entity" is not necessarily running on the network device.=C2=A0 While= that might be one way of looking at the feeding of data into the RIB via NETCONF= or RESTCONF, that doesn't seem to be the case for a routing protocol.=C2=A0 A full= er explanation of the users of the northbound interface and a revision to Figu= re 1 might help clarify this situation. =20 NB> You are right. I=E2=80=99m updating the draft to replace =E2=80=9Cexternal entities= =E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9CRIB client=E2=80=9D. =20 Page 7, 1st paragraph after bullet list, last sentence: Routing instances a= re identified by ROUTER_IDs anyhow, so this sentence seems superfluous.=20 Perhaps you are trying to get across the point that the ROUTER_ID (which is= definitely present for the router) is not *used* by this routing instance. =20 NB> That sentence was requested by some folks to ensure that ROUTER_ID base= d conflicts do not occur. =20 The term "ethernet" is used in several places in the document.=C2=A0 Except in = the grammar of section 6, change these to the capitalized "Ethernet".=20 =20 NB> Done =20 This brings up a larger point, however.=C2=A0 Not all IEEE MAC addresses are as= sociated with Ethernet interfaces and I believe this document is expected to be applicabl= e to other IEEE 802 MACs such as IEEE 802.11 (WLAN) and IEEE 802.15 (WPAN).=C2=A0 IE= EE 802.15 has long and short forms of MAC addresses, so you may want to give s= ome additional thought to what you want to say with this term and pick somethin= g more appropriate. =20 NB> In Section 2.4.1, when talking about the IEEE MAC we say that =E2=80=9CThe eg= ress interface=20 must be an Ethernet interface.=E2=80=9D So the MAC is to be used only in the cont= ext of Ethernet interfaces. =20 NB> With regards to short and long form of MAC addresses, these should get = specified in the data-model,=20 since the data-model will need to validate things. =20 I think there's a discussion missing that may or may not be within scope of this document.=C2=A0 RIBs appear to be typically divided according to the proto= col for which they are providing routing (IPv4, MPLS, etc.)=C2=A0 Section 7.1 discu= sses routing preferences, with an example of OSPF route and a route from some ot= her protocol.=C2=A0 When the OSPF route is withdrawn, the other route is installed = in the FIB.=C2=A0 What's not clear is what makes the decision to do this and cause= a specific RIB to push its route into the FIB.=C2=A0 Is that the routing instance= or the RIB manager?=20 =20 NB> It should be the RIB manager. =20 A routing instance is described as a set of interfaces, RIBs, and routing parameters.=C2=A0 It's description does not make it clear that it arbitrates among the RIBs or the routing protocols which are using the northbound interface to talk to the RIB manager.=C2=A0 Figure 1 makes it seem l= ike there is a RIB manger per RIB, in which case how can the RIB manager make decisions between multiple RIBs? =20 NB> Good point. I=E2=80=99ll change the figure to indicate that the RIB manager h= andles 1 or more RIBs. =20 Page 14, Section 3, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: a "connection" is mentione= d here.=C2=A0 This document purports to deal with an API (and one that would most= ly be used by local routing protocols if the figures are to be believed) and hasn= 't otherwise made any mention of a connection, let alone what constitutes a connection and defines its lifetime.=C2=A0 More discussion is needed of this co= ncept instead of just (possibly) resting the whole thing on brief mentions of NET= CONF and RESTCONF (which aren't even brought into the picture until the Security Considerations section later on in the document). =20 NB> Removed the sentence related to =E2=80=9Cconnection=E2=80=9D. You are right that th= is sentence causes more confusion and little value. =20 Page 15, 1st partial paragraph: there are unstated assumptions about needin= g a subscription mechanism for subscribing to notifications, particularly notifications from RIBs that were not created by the entity.=C2=A0 (This goes b= ack to the concept on the previous page that entities may possibly read to or w= rite from RIBs they did not create.)=C2=A0 The discussion of notifications could use= some fleshing out here. =20 NB> How notifications are sent, whether using a subscription model or somet= hing else is left to the Data Model. And it=E2=80=99s left un-fleshed to allow the= data-model writers to decide what to do here. =20 Nits/editorial comments: =20 NB> I=E2=80=99m addressing all your nits in version 15. For nits not being addres= sed, see NB> below. =20 General: =20 Append a comma after "i.e." and "e.g."=C2=A0 Make all uses of "e.g." lower case= .=20 Some uses of "e.g." have double spaces after them and those double spaces should be replaced with single spaces. =20 Change "use-cases" to "use cases" throughout the document.=C2=A0 Or use the oth= er way around.=C2=A0 Just be consistent in the usage.=C2=A0 Non-hyphenate usage appear= s to be preferred. =20 Insert a blank line before and after bullet lists for readability.=C2=A0 Consid= er adding a blank line between entries to aid readability as well. =20 Specific: =20 Page 1, Abstract, 2nd sentence: delete the semicolon. =20 Page 1, Abstract, 4th sentence: replace the space between "higher" and "lev= el" with a hyphen. =20 Page 3, Section 1, 2nd sentence: change "config" to "configuration informat= ion" (or something similar). =20 Page 3, Section 1, 3rd sentence: change "north-bound" to "northbound".=C2=A0 Ap= pend a comma after each of "clients", "i.e.", and "protocols". =20 Page 3, Figure 1 caption: append a comma after "clients". =20 Page 4, 1st partial paragraph, 1st complete sentence: change "which" to "th= at". Append a comma after "policies". =20 Page 4, 1st partial paragraph, 4th complete sentence: replace the space bet= ween "publicly" and "documented" with a hyphen and then append a comma after "publicly-documented". =20 Page 4, 2nd full paragraph, 1st sentence: I'm not sure what "show output sc= reen scraping" is.=C2=A0 I'm familiar with screen scraping, but could not find a goo= d source for your term.=C2=A0 Perhaps you could explain or modify it? =20 NB> Modified it to =E2=80=9Cscreen scraping=E2=80=9D =20 Page 5, Section 1.1: you may wish to reference RFC 8174, which updates RFC = 2119 and makes it applicable across more than Standards Track documents. =20 NB> Done =20 Page 5, Section 2, 4th sentence: delete the comma after "single". =20 Page 5, Section 2, 5th sentence: make "Section" lower case. =20 Page 5, Section 2, 6th sentence: change the space between "high" and "level= " to a hyphen. =20 Page 5, Figure 2: remove the space between "routing-instance" and "(s)". =20 Page 5, Section 2.1, 3rd sentence: change "intance" to "instance".=C2=A0 Also f= ix the sentence or Figure 2: the sentence says 1 or more RIBs, the diagram sho= ws 0 or more.=C2=A0 I'm not sure how a zero RIB routing instance is useful, but make= the two ranges consistent. =20 NB> Updated =20 Page 6, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: delete this sentence as it is redundan= t with information given in the previous paragraph on Page 5. =20 NB> While it is redundant, it adds clarity where the item is being defined. =20 Page 6, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: Change "a" to "an" before "ENABLE_IP_RPF_CHECK".=C2=A0 Capitalize each word in "Reverse path forwarding". =20 Page 6, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: delete "Reverse path forwarding", inse= rt the word "The" at the beginning of the sentence and remove the parentheses around "RPF". =20 Page 6, 2nd paragraph, 3rd and 4th sentences: change "rpf" to "RPF". =20 Page 6, Section 2.2, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: delete both semicolons. =20 Page 6, "interface-list" bullet item, 3rd sentence: I think it reads better with "in" inserted before "on". =20 Page 7, "ROUTER_ID" bullet item: change "router-id" to "ROUTER_ID".=C2=A0 Or if= you want a descriptive term, change it to "router identification". =20 Page 8, MPLS bullet item: "change "a" to "an". =20 Page 8, paragraph after "route-vendor-attributes" bullet item, 1st sentence= : change "Nexthop" to "nexthop". =20 Page 9, 1st partial paragraph, 4th full sentence: change "a" to "an" before "MPLS". =20 Page 9, 1st partial paragraph, 7th full sentence: append a comma after "Conversely".=C2=A0 Insert "the" before "case". =20 Page 10, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: put a comma after "extensible". =20 Page 10, 1st paragraph, 5th sentence: change "it's" to "its". =20 Page 11, "EGRESS_INTERFACE" sub-bullet item: append a comma after "logical"= . =20 Page 11, "EGRESS_INTERFACE and IP address" sub-bullet item: append a comma after "cases". =20 Page 11, "Tunnel nexthops" bullet item: change "Various" to "The". =20 Page 11, "tunnel encap" sub-bullet item: change "tunnel encap" to "tunnel-encap" in the sub-bullet title to match Figure 4.=C2=A0 Change "encap" = to "encapsulation" in the first sentence.=C2=A0 Change "tunnel encap" in the 2nd sentence to "tunnel-encap". =20 Page 11, "tunnel decap" sub-bullet item: change "tunnel decap" to "tunnel-decap" in the sub-bullet title to match Figure 4.=C2=A0 Change "decap" = to "decapsulation" in the second sentence.=C2=A0 Change the "a" before "EGRESS_INTERFACE" to "an" in the third sentence. =20 Page 11, "logical tunnel" sub-bullet item: change "logical tunnel" to "logical-tunnel" in the sub-bullet title to match Figure 4.=C2=A0 Change the "a= " before "MPLS" to "an". =20 Page 11, last (partial) paragraph, 2nd partial sentence: change "end-point"= to "endpoint". =20 Page 12, Section 2.4.1.1, 1st sentence: change "drop" to "discard" to match= the following discussion. =20 Page 12, Section 2.4.2, 1st paragraph after bullet items, 1st sentence: del= ete the comma. =20 Page 12, Section 2.4.2, 1st paragraph after bullet items, 3rd sentence: del= ete the comma. =20 Page 12, Section 2.4.2, 1st paragraph after bullet items, 6th sentence: cha= nge "and" to "or".=C2=A0 Make "header" plural. =20 Page 13, Section 2.4.2.1, "NEXTHOP_PREFERENCE" bullet item, 4th sentence: insert "the" before "two". =20 Page 13, Section 2.4.2.1, "NEXTHOP_PREFERENCE" bullet item, last sentence: delete the asterisk and join "(Section 6)" with the rest of the sentence. =20 Page 14, Section 3, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: delete the comma. =20 Page 14, Section 3, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "agent" to "entity"= to at least be consistent with prior usage in the document.=C2=A0 But also refer b= ack to the issue listed above about use of the term "external entity". =20 Page 14, Section 4, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: delete the comma. =20 Page 18, Section 6.1, 2nd sentence: append a comma after "preference".=C2=A0 Ch= ange "multicasted" to "multicast" (the preferred form of the word). =20 Page 18, Section 7.2.1, last sentence: change "encap" to "encapsulation".=20 Change "decap" to "decapsulation". =20 Page 21, Section 7.2.6, 2nd sentence: delete the comma. =20 Page 21, Section 7.2.6, 5th sentence: change "Lets" to "Let's". =20 Page 23, Section 8, 2nd sentence: delete the comma. =20 Page 24, Section 11, 1st sentence: append a comma after "co-chair".=C2=A0 Chang= e the first occurrence of "on" to "for". =20 Page 24, Section 11, 2nd sentence: append a comma after "Hares".=C2=A0 Yeah, ye= ah, I know, no one is going to require the Oxford comma here to figure out what t= he sentence means. ;-) =20 Thanks Nitin --B_3604607709_1382682878 Content-type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-transfer-encoding: quoted-printable

Hi Peter,

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=C2=A0=C2=A0= =C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0Thanks for the Gen-art review. Sorry it missed my attention back when= you sent it. Please see NB> below for comments.

 

<= p class=3DMsoNormal> 
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review result: Ready with Issues
 
I am the assigned =
Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being proc= essed
by the IESG for the IETF Ch=
air.=C2=A0 Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
 
For more informat=
ion, please see the FAQ at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>;.
 
Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-14<=
/pre>
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2018-02-22
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-23
I=
ESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08
 
Summary: This Informational d=
raft specifies an information model for routing
information bases, providing modeling of the internal informa=
tion of a router
or similar netwo=
rk device.=C2=A0 The draft is mostly ready, but has some issues that<=
/span>
should be considered. [Ready with issues]
 
Major issues: None
 
Minor issues:<=
/span>
 
Page 4, 3rd full paragraph, 1st sentence: the draft introduces the con=
cept of
"RIB clients" i=
n Figure 1, notes that they are generally routing protocols, and<=
/span>
then never uses the term again.=C2=A0 All other =
references to the what must be the
users of the northbound interface are then called "external entities&=
quot; for the
most part.=C2=A0 This i=
s confusing because the term "external entity" is not defined=

nor fully equated with "RIB clie=
nt".=C2=A0 The term also seems to indicate that the
=

"external entity" is not necessarily running o=
n the network device.=C2=A0 While that
might be one way of looking at the feeding of data into the RIB via NETCON=
F or
RESTCONF, that doesn't seem =
to be the case for a routing protocol.=C2=A0 A fuller
explanation of the users of the northbound interface and a =
revision to Figure 1
might help c=
larify this situation.
 =
;
NB> You are right. I=E2=80=99m updating=
 the draft to replace =E2=80=9Cexternal entities=E2=80=9D to =E2=80=9CRIB client=E2=80=9D.
 
Page 7, 1st paragraph after bullet list, last sentence: Routing inst=
ances are
identified by ROUTER_ID=
s anyhow, so this sentence seems superfluous. 
Perhaps you are trying to get across the point that the ROUTER=
_ID (which is definitely
present =
for the router) is not *used* by this routing instance.
 
NB&=
gt; That sentence was requested by some folks to ensure that ROUTER_ID based=
 conflicts do not occur.
&nb=
sp;
The term "ethernet" is u=
sed in several places in the document.=C2=A0 Except in the
grammar of section 6, change these to the capitalized =
"Ethernet". 
 =
;
NB> Done
<=
pre style=3D'margin-bottom:7.5pt;background:white'> 
This br=
ings up a larger point, however.=C2=A0 Not all IEEE MAC addresses are associated=
 with
Ethernet interfaces and I b=
elieve this document is expected to be applicable to
=

other IEEE 802 MACs such as IEEE 802.11 (WLAN) and IEEE =
802.15 (WPAN).=C2=A0 IEEE
802.15 has =
long and short forms of MAC addresses, so you may want to give some
additional thought to what you want to sa=
y with this term and pick something
more appropriate.
 <=
/o:p>
NB> In Section 2.4.1, when talking =
about the IEEE MAC we say that =E2=80=9CThe egress interface 
must be an Ethernet interface.=E2=80=9D So the MAC is to be=
 used only in the context of Ethernet interfaces.
 
NB> Wi=
th regards to short and long form of MAC addresses, these should get specifi=
ed in the data-model, 
since the =
data-model will need to validate things.
 
I think there's a =
discussion missing that may or may not be within scope of<=
/pre>
this document.=C2=A0 RIBs appear to be typically divide=
d according to the protocol
for w=
hich they are providing routing (IPv4, MPLS, etc.)=C2=A0 Section 7.1 discusses
routing preferences, with an examp=
le of OSPF route and a route from some other
protocol.=C2=A0 When the OSPF route is withdrawn, the other route is=
 installed in
the FIB.=C2=A0 What's n=
ot clear is what makes the decision to do this and cause a=

specific RIB to push its route into the FIB.=C2=A0 Is =
that the routing instance or
the =
RIB manager? 
 
NB> It should be the RIB manager.
 
 A routing instance is described as a set of interfaces, RIBs,=

and routing parameters.=C2=A0 It's descri=
ption does not make it clear that it
arbitrates among the RIBs or the routing protocols which are using the
northbound interface to talk to th=
e RIB manager.=C2=A0 Figure 1 makes it seem like
there is a RIB manger per RIB, in which case how can the RIB man=
ager make
decisions between multi=
ple RIBs?
 
NB> Good point. I=E2=80=99ll change the figure to in=
dicate that the RIB manager handles 1 or more RIBs.
<=
pre style=3D'margin-bottom:7.5pt;background:white'> 
Page 14=
, Section 3, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: a "connection" is mentio=
ned
here.=C2=A0 This document purport=
s to deal with an API (and one that would mostly be
<=
pre style=3D'margin-bottom:7.5pt;background:white'>used by local routing protocols if the figures are to be =
believed) and hasn't
otherwise ma=
de any mention of a connection, let alone what constitutes a
connection and defines its lifetime.=C2=A0 More disc=
ussion is needed of this concept
=
instead of just (possibly) resting the whole thing on brief mentions of NETC=
ONF
and RESTCONF (which aren't ev=
en brought into the picture until the Security
Considerations section later on in the document).
 
NB> Removed the sentence related to =E2=80=9Cconnection=E2=80=9D. You are right =
that this sentence causes more confusion and little value.=

 
=
Page 15, 1st partial paragraph: there are unstated assumptions about needing=
 a
=
subscription mechanism for sub=
scribing to notifications, particularly
notifications from RIBs that were not created by the entity.=C2=A0 (This =
goes back
to the concept on the p=
revious page that entities may possibly read to or write
from RIBs they did not create.)=C2=A0 The discussion of =
notifications could use some
fles=
hing out here.
 <=
/span>
NB> How notifications are sent, whether u=
sing a subscription model or something else is left to the Data Model. And i=
t=E2=80=99s left un-fleshed to allow the data-model writers to decide what to do h=
ere.
 
Nits/editorial comments:
 
NB> I=E2=80=99m=
 addressing all your nits in version 15. For nits not being addressed, see N=
B> below.
 
General:
 <=
/span>
Append a comma after "i.e."=
 and "e.g."=C2=A0 Make all uses of "e.g." lower case. <=
/o:p>
<=
span style=3D'font-family:Menlo;color:#333333'>Some uses of "e.g." h=
ave double spaces after them and those double spaces
should be replaced with single spaces.=

 
Change "use-cases" to "use cases" througho=
ut the document.=C2=A0 Or use the other
way around.=C2=A0 Just be consistent in the usage.=C2=A0 Non-hyphenate usa=
ge appears to
be preferred=
.
 
I=
nsert a blank line before and after bullet lists for readability.=C2=A0 Consider=

adding a blank line betwe=
en entries to aid readability as well.
 
Specific:
 
Page 1=
, Abstract, 2nd sentence: delete the semicolon.
<=
pre style=3D'margin-bottom:7.5pt;background:white'> <=
/o:p>
<=
span style=3D'font-family:Menlo;color:#333333'>Page 1, Abstract, 4th sentence:=
 replace the space between "higher" and "level"
with a hyphen.
 
Page 3, Section 1, 2nd sentence: change "config" to "con=
figuration information"
(or something similar).
 
Page 3, Section 1, 3rd sentence: change "north-=
bound" to "northbound".=C2=A0 Append
<=
pre style=3D'margin-bottom:7.5pt;background:white'>a comma after each of "clients", "i.e.&=
quot;, and "protocols".
 
Page 3, Figure 1 caption: append a comma afte=
r "clients".
&=
nbsp;
Page 4, 1st partial paragraph=
, 1st complete sentence: change "which" to "that".<=
/o:p>
<=
span style=3D'font-family:Menlo;color:#333333'> Append a comma after "pol=
icies".
 
Page 4, 1st partial paragraph, 4th comp=
lete sentence: replace the space between
"publicly" and "documented" with a hyphen=
 and then append a comma after
"publicly-documented".
 
Page 4, 2nd full =
paragraph, 1st sentence: I'm not sure what "show output screen
scraping" is.=C2=A0 I'm familiar with sc=
reen scraping, but could not find a good
source for your term.=C2=A0 Perhaps you could explain or modify it?=

 
NB> Modified it to =E2=80=9Cscreen scraping=E2=80=9D
 
Pa=
ge 5, Section 1.1: you may wish to reference RFC 8174, which updates RFC 211=
9
<=
span style=3D'font-family:Menlo;color:#333333'>and makes it applicable across =
more than Standards Track documents.
 
NB> Done=

 
Page 5, Section 2, 4th sentence: delete the comma after "sing=
le".
 
Page 5, Section 2, 5th sentence: make "Section" lower case.=

 
Page 5, Section 2, 6th sentence: change the space b=
etween "high" and "level" to
=

a hyphen.
 
Page 5, Figure 2: remove the space between &qu=
ot;routing-instance" and "(s)".
 
Page =
5, Section 2.1, 3rd sentence: change "intance" to "instance&q=
uot;.=C2=A0 Also fix
the sentence or Figure 2: the sente=
nce says 1 or more RIBs, the diagram shows 0
or more.=C2=A0 I'm not sure how a zero RIB routing instance is usefu=
l, but make the
two ranges consis=
tent.
 
NB> Updated
 
Page 6, 1st paragraph=
, 1st sentence: delete this sentence as it is redundant
with information given in the previous paragraph on P=
age 5.
 
NB> While it is redundant, it adds clarity where =
the item is being defined.
&=
nbsp;
Page 6, 2nd paragraph, 1st se=
ntence: Change "a" to "an" before<=
/pre>
"ENABLE_IP_RPF_CHECK".=C2=A0 Capitalize ea=
ch word in "Reverse path forwarding".
<=
pre style=3D'margin-bottom:7.5pt;background:white'> 
Page=
 6, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: delete "Reverse path forwarding",=
 insert
the word "The=
" at the beginning of the sentence and remove the parentheses
around "RPF".<=
/span>
 
Page 6, 2nd paragraph, 3rd and 4th sentences: change "rpf&=
quot; to "RPF".
=
 
=

Page 6, Section 2.2, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: del=
ete both semicolons.
&nb=
sp;
<=
span style=3D'font-family:Menlo;color:#333333'>Page 6, "interface-list&qu=
ot; bullet item, 3rd sentence: I think it reads better=

with "in" inserted before "on&qu=
ot;.
 
Page 7, "ROUTER_ID" bullet item: change "router-id" to=
 "ROUTER_ID".=C2=A0 Or if you
want a descriptive term, change it to "router identification&=
quot;.
 
Page 8, MPLS bullet item: "change "=
a" to "an".
 
Page 8, paragraph after "route-vendor-attribute=
s" bullet item, 1st sentence:
change "Nexthop" to "nexthop".
 
Page 9, 1st par=
tial paragraph, 4th full sentence: change "a" to "an" be=
fore
"MPLS".
 
Page 9=
, 1st partial paragraph, 7th full sentence: append a comma after<=
/span>
"Conversely".=C2=A0 Insert &quo=
t;the" before "case".
 
Page 10, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: put =
a comma after "extensible".
 
Page 10, 1st paragraph, 5th sentence: cha=
nge "it's" to "its".
 
Page 11, "EGRESS_INTERFACE" =
sub-bullet item: append a comma after "logical".=

 
Page 11, "EGRESS_INTERFACE and IP address" sub-bullet item:=
 append a comma
after &quo=
t;cases".
 
Page 11, "Tunnel nexthops" bullet item: change "V=
arious" to "The".
 
Page 11, "tunnel encap" sub-bullet i=
tem: change "tunnel encap" to
"tunnel-encap" in the sub-bullet title to match Figu=
re 4.=C2=A0 Change "encap" to
"encapsulation" in the first sentence.=C2=A0 Change "tu=
nnel encap" in the 2nd
sentence to "tunnel-encap".
 
Page 11, &qu=
ot;tunnel decap" sub-bullet item: change "tunnel decap" to
<=
s>"tunnel-decap" in =
the sub-bullet title to match Figure 4.=C2=A0 Change "decap" to
"decapsulation" in the=
 second sentence.=C2=A0 Change the "a" before
"EGRESS_INTERFACE" to "an" in =
the third sentence.
<=
span style=3D'text-decoration:none'> 
Page 11, "logical tunnel" sub-bullet item: change=
 "logical tunnel" to
"logical-tunnel" in the sub-bullet title to match Figure 4.=C2=A0=
 Change the "a"
=
before "MPLS" to "an".
 =

Page 11, last (partial) paragraph, 2=
nd partial sentence: change "end-point" to
"endpoint".
=

 =

=
Page 12, Section 2.4.1.1, 1st =
sentence: change "drop" to "discard" to match the
following discussion.=

 
Page 12, Section 2.4.2, 1st paragraph after bullet items, 1st =
sentence: delete
the comma=
.
 
P=
age 12, Section 2.4.2, 1st paragraph after bullet items, 3rd sentence: delet=
e
the comma.
 
Page 12, Section=
 2.4.2, 1st paragraph after bullet items, 6th sentence: change
"and" to "or".=C2=A0 Ma=
ke "header" plural.
 
Page 13, Section 2.4.2.1, "NEXTHOP_PREFERENC=
E" bullet item, 4th sentence:
insert "the" before "two".
 
Page 13, Section 2.4.2.1, "NEXTHOP_PREFERENCE" bullet item, la=
st sentence:
delete the as=
terisk and join "(Section 6)" with the rest of the sentence.<=
/o:p>
<=
span style=3D'font-family:Menlo;color:#333333'> 
Page 14,=
 Section 3, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: delete the comma.
 
Page 14, Section 3,=
 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "agent" to "entity"=
 to
at least be consistent with p=
rior usage in the document.=C2=A0 But also refer back
to the issue listed above about use of the term "exter=
nal entity".
 
Page 14, Section 4, 1st paragraph, 1st=
 sentence: delete the comma.
 
Page 18, Section 6.1, 2nd sentence: append a comma=
 after "preference".=C2=A0 Change
"multicasted" to "multicast" (the preferre=
d form of the word).
=
 
Page 18, Section 7.2.1, last sentence: change "encap&=
quot; to "encapsulation". 
Change "decap" to "decapsulation".=

 
Page 21, Section 7.2.6, 2nd sentence: delete the comma.
 
Page 21, =
Section 7.2.6, 5th sentence: change "Lets" to "Let's".
=
 
Page=
 23, Section 8, 2nd sentence: delete the comma.
<=
pre style=3D'margin-bottom:7.5pt;background:white'> <=
/o:p>
<=
span style=3D'font-family:Menlo;color:#333333'>Page 24, Section 11, 1st senten=
ce: append a comma after "co-chair".=C2=A0 Change the
first occurrence of "on" to &quo=
t;for".
 
Page 24, Section 11, 2nd sentence: appe=
nd a comma after "Hares".=C2=A0 Yeah, yeah, I
know, no one is going to require the Oxford comma =
here to figure out what the
sentence means. ;-)
&n=
bsp;
Thanks
Nitin
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I already did a review of revision 2, so I will focus on the differences between the two versions. I really like the fact that the physical layer-2 address was moved into the general description of nodes and termination points. Common fields like this make it easier to write application and services that don't need to be updated with each new special case added to the format. I also think it is a good style that the "legacy" case for termination points was moved to the end of the list. I think revision 4 resolves the minor issues I had with draft revision 2. Henning Rogge On Tue, Mar 13, 2018 at 7:35 AM, Yemin (Amy) wrote: > Thank you, Henning. > > > > Amy > > From: Henning Rogge [mailto:hrogge@gmail.com] > Sent: Tuesday, March 13, 2018 1:43 PM > To: Yemin (Amy) > Subject: Re: Could you do the review=EF=BC=9F//RE: rtgdir Early Review re= quested: > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology > > > > Yes, I will do so. > > > > Henning > > > > Am 13.03.2018 04:44 schrieb "Yemin (Amy)" : > > Hi Henning, > > Could you please reply if you can do the review or not? > Thanks. > > Amy > -----Original Message----- > From: Yemin (Amy) > Sent: Thursday, March 08, 2018 11:53 AM > To: 'Henning Rogge' > Cc: 'Susan Hares' ; Jonathan Hardwick > > Subject: RE: rtgdir Early Review requested: > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology > > Hi Henning, > > Could you re-review the draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology again? > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology= / > > This is an early review request. There is some guidance and a template > here. > https://trac.ietf.org/trac/rtg/wiki/RtgDirGuidance > > The deadline for comments is March 19. Please let me know if you can do = it, > or not. > > Many thanks > Amy > > -----Original Message----- > From: Susan Hares [mailto:skh@ndzh.com] > Sent: Thursday, March 08, 2018 12:56 AM > To: Jonathan Hardwick ; Yemin (Amy) > > Subject: rtgdir Early Review requested: > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology > > > Early review of: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology (no specific > version) > Deadline: 2018-03-19 > Requested by: Susan Hares > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology= /reviewrequest/10234/ > > rtgdir Early Review requested: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology > > It would be helpful to have the review done before the I2RS meeting at IE= TF > 101 > From nobody Mon Mar 26 09:36:53 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5E6DB12D77C; Mon, 26 Mar 2018 09:36:46 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -1.901 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.901 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=btconnect.onmicrosoft.com Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id E0972KiJMYv9; Mon, 26 Mar 2018 09:36:43 -0700 (PDT) Received: from EUR01-VE1-obe.outbound.protection.outlook.com (mail-ve1eur01on071f.outbound.protection.outlook.com [IPv6:2a01:111:f400:fe1f::71f]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id CE11312AF84; Mon, 26 Mar 2018 09:36:42 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=btconnect.onmicrosoft.com; s=selector1-btconnect-com; h=From:Date:Subject:Message-ID:Content-Type:MIME-Version; bh=3ri0OMvidGSWu38CaTjWsCUnrbfSxHVlz+j7H5F1q0g=; b=d7keAjXK47tHBK/E/CJDkl+Lp0nL3F4eX3BTOk6VDGVfeTICnLbrtMivR6LFqz8gu8eMKWR1Ol04S2+1ywfFRAv/oV1yq6XxhGZPTlgIvfY8Be6W01J7ll6hfpAD9q3ErYmEteem1JFxfLSLjHvIUPiP16tDwWOw1DEUHdweop4= Authentication-Results: spf=none (sender IP is ) smtp.mailfrom=daedulus@btconnect.com; Received: from pc6 (86.155.37.36) by AM5PR0701MB2338.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com (2603:10a6:203:e::8) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.20.631.5; Mon, 26 Mar 2018 16:36:40 +0000 Message-ID: <012901d3c520$2d8395e0$4001a8c0@gateway.2wire.net> From: "tom p." 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[not sure what e-mail will do with this but in the I-D, the line length is too long] draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo is now RFC8345 draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-16.txt is now RFC8346 draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-03.txt is now RFC8344 the Copyright date is 2016 the URL to the licence information should be https not http (sigh) "Please replace the data in the revision statement with the data of publication when published."; /data/date/ 2 data model [6020][7950] I would expect to see [RFC6020][RFC7950] uh huh I am not sure who the AD is now for this work so they probably need adding to the addressees of any further e-mail. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Zhuangyan (Yan)" To: "tom p." ; Cc: ; ; ; ; Sent: Monday, March 19, 2018 4:01 AM > Hi Tom, > > Thank you for your comments. > We changed the words in description statement as you suggested and added an introductory section before the module codes in section "Fabric YANG Module". The draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis is added as well. > > We think the new version-07 resolved all your comments :) Thank you. > > Best Regards, > > Yan (on behalf of all authors) > > > -----Original Message----- > From: tom p. [mailto:daedulus@btconnect.com] > Sent: Tuesday, March 13, 2018 8:30 PM > To: ietf@ietf.org > Cc: i2rs@ietf.org; draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@ietf.org; i2rs-chairs@ietf.org; shares@ndzh.com; akatlas@gmail.com > Subject: Re: Last Call: (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard > > I see > > description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier, see [RFC7348])s that the fabric has"; > > which looks like XML/HTML style reference in the YANG module, which will not work as the YANG module must be plain text. > > I suggest an introductory section along the lines of > > This module imports ... > from ... > and references [RFC7348] > > along the lines of > draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis > without which [RFC7348] will be an unused Reference. > > Tom Petch > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "The IESG" > To: "IETF-Announce" > Cc: ; > ; > ; ; > Sent: Friday, March 09, 2018 9:28 PM > Subject: Last Call: > (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard > > > > > > The IESG has received a request from the Interface to the Routing > System WG > > (i2rs) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for > Fabric > > Topology in Data Center Networks' > > as Proposed > > Standard > > > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits > final > > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > > ietf@ietf.org mailing lists by 2018-04-03. Exceptionally, comments may > be > > sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the > beginning of > > the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > > > Abstract > > > > > > This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data > > Center Network. > > > > > > > > > > The file can be obtained via > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- > topology/ > > > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- > topology/ballot/ > > > > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > > > > The document contains these normative downward references. > > See RFC 3967 for additional information: > > rfc7348: Virtual eXtensible Local Area Network (VXLAN): A > Framework for Overlaying Virtualized Layer 2 Networks over Layer 3 Networks (Informational - Independent Submission Editor stream) > > > > > > > > From nobody Tue Mar 27 02:18:58 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietf.org Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 48F6D1200C5; Tue, 27 Mar 2018 02:18:57 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: internet-drafts@ietf.org To: Cc: i2rs@ietf.org X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.76.1 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <152214233725.5143.11359694654590967121@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Tue, 27 Mar 2018 02:18:57 -0700 Archived-At: Subject: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08.txt X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 27 Mar 2018 09:18:57 -0000 A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System WG of the IETF. Title : A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks Authors : Yan Zhuang Danian Shi Rong Gu Hariharan Ananthakrishnan Filename : draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08.txt Pages : 29 Date : 2018-03-27 Abstract: This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data Center Network. 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We also updated other referred drafts if they are also published in March :) Yan Yes, you have addressed my comments Tom Petch > Best Regards, > > Yan(on behalf of all authors) > > -----Original Message----- > From: tom p. [mailto:daedulus@btconnect.com] > Sent: Tuesday, March 27, 2018 12:32 AM > To: Zhuangyan (Yan) ; ietf@ietf.org > Cc: i2rs@ietf.org; draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@ietf.org; i2rs-chairs@ietf.org; shares@ndzh.com; akatlas@gmail.com > Subject: Re: Last Call: (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard > > Yan > > It resolves my comments but... :-( > > there is a line length problem with that description clause " description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier defined in RFC 7348)s that the fabric has."; [not sure what e-mail will do with this but in the I-D, the line length is too long] > > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo is now RFC8345 draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-16.txt is now RFC8346 draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-03.txt is now RFC8344 > > the Copyright date is 2016 > > the URL to the licence information should be https not http (sigh) > > "Please replace the data in the revision statement with the data of publication when published."; /data/date/ 2 > > data model [6020][7950] > I would expect to see [RFC6020][RFC7950] > > uh huh > > I am not sure who the AD is now for this work so they probably need adding to the addressees of any further e-mail. > > Tom Petch > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Zhuangyan (Yan)" > To: "tom p." ; > Cc: ; > ; > ; ; > Sent: Monday, March 19, 2018 4:01 AM > > > Hi Tom, > > > > Thank you for your comments. > > We changed the words in description statement as you suggested and > added an introductory section before the module codes in section "Fabric YANG Module". The draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis is added as well. > > > > We think the new version-07 resolved all your comments :) Thank you. > > > > Best Regards, > > > > Yan (on behalf of all authors) > > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: tom p. [mailto:daedulus@btconnect.com] > > Sent: Tuesday, March 13, 2018 8:30 PM > > To: ietf@ietf.org > > Cc: i2rs@ietf.org; > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@ietf.org; > i2rs-chairs@ietf.org; shares@ndzh.com; akatlas@gmail.com > > Subject: Re: Last Call: > (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard > > > > I see > > > > description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier, see [RFC7348])s > that the fabric has"; > > > > which looks like XML/HTML style reference in the YANG module, which > will not work as the YANG module must be plain text. > > > > I suggest an introductory section along the lines of > > > > This module imports ... > > from ... > > and references [RFC7348] > > > > along the lines of > > draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis > > without which [RFC7348] will be an unused Reference. > > > > Tom Petch > > > > ----- Original Message ----- > > From: "The IESG" > > To: "IETF-Announce" > > Cc: ; > > ; > > ; ; > > Sent: Friday, March 09, 2018 9:28 PM > > Subject: Last Call: > > (A YANG Data > Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard > > > > > > > > > > The IESG has received a request from the Interface to the Routing > > System WG > > > (i2rs) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for > > Fabric > > > Topology in Data Center Networks' > > > as > Proposed > > > Standard > > > > > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and > solicits > > final > > > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > > > ietf@ietf.org mailing lists by 2018-04-03. Exceptionally, comments > may > > be > > > sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the > > beginning of > > > the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > > > > > Abstract > > > > > > > > > This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in > Data > > > Center Network. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > The file can be obtained via > > > > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- > > topology/ > > > > > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > > > > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- > > topology/ballot/ > > > > > > > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > > > > > > > The document contains these normative downward references. > > > See RFC 3967 for additional information: > > > rfc7348: Virtual eXtensible Local Area Network (VXLAN): A > > Framework for Overlaying Virtualized Layer 2 Networks over Layer 3 > Networks (Informational - Independent Submission Editor stream) > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > From nobody Thu Mar 29 12:36:39 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietf.org Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id A9B31120725; Thu, 29 Mar 2018 12:36:32 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: internet-drafts@ietf.org To: Cc: i2rs@ietf.org X-Test-IDTracker: no X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.76.2 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated Precedence: bulk Message-ID: <152235219263.4349.339896102576007563@ietfa.amsl.com> Date: Thu, 29 Mar 2018 12:36:32 -0700 Archived-At: Subject: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-15.txt X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 29 Mar 2018 19:36:33 -0000 A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System WG of the IETF. Title : Routing Information Base Info Model Authors : Nitin Bahadur Sriganesh Kini Jan Medved Filename : draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-15.txt Pages : 28 Date : 2018-03-29 Abstract: Routing and routing functions in enterprise and carrier networks are typically performed by network devices (routers and switches) using a routing information base (RIB). Protocols and configuration push data into the RIB and the RIB manager installs state into the hardware for packet forwarding. This draft specifies an information model for the RIB to enable defining a standardized data model, and it was used by the IETF's I2RS WG to design the I2RS RIB data model. It is being published to record the higher-level informational model decisions for RIBs so that other developers of RIBs may benefit from the design concepts. 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Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ From nobody Thu Mar 29 12:38:30 2018 Return-Path: X-Original-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: i2rs@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7B53B1270B4 for ; Thu, 29 Mar 2018 12:38:28 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -0.844 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.844 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, MIME_QP_LONG_LINE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, RCVD_NUMERIC_HELO=1.164, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=no autolearn_force=no Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=yahoo.com Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id qG4gOza6PDSF for ; Thu, 29 Mar 2018 12:38:26 -0700 (PDT) Received: from sonic312-22.consmr.mail.gq1.yahoo.com (sonic312-22.consmr.mail.gq1.yahoo.com [98.137.69.203]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id AF491120725 for ; Thu, 29 Mar 2018 12:38:26 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=yahoo.com; s=s2048; t=1522352306; bh=TuHrO+42n7zSyHz+5Y6kRvwkARRLgJjfXZEQOweVsW8=; h=Date:Subject:From:To:References:In-Reply-To:From:Subject; b=ExgSwpxCqUC9PATGw8dJgNKdqPxtJMDmOV/UQKdGTRzmdsk95KetOkI7TH4Upi6klRt6eOpE2ZXPWq1QLBHyHO5KQGSGZGUdP451IK4UIeFnxkYm7tMvH6ZC/TnJkEqoOEtoA2Le52uHIpWaJnLvu8leAKwXEGFTflmZfMI1okKjOfRTJt4TKelsinfOJIVny2NI/nBMkJuUB3wYScab5lmwYFkJhDxf9Cg19ySeBiDPEi248NoxbOluYwaW9o0OYQWl7vnG/WrLsVqYGhLUySML4ZylMuRgFk/AgOdtkN7mnlkl2plvnQ+8jqrtasQHZQs1kjPH9YOZ60JlcYmdZw== X-YMail-OSG: K41M6rAVM1lz66bYPiRZiIgMx.d3NTg48Ma9zLy8dpv3aBwXXGFvGURCYerW3sT TM6eZE.LnpzyDvxYgW9BxZ3iSYlVVeLTT_KHyXZA2xWxzeJIp2QL0SJMMJRSfCaYNYVJiT3cf_C9 oIRWSK52T66x7RNWNYcMweARnOxP7jmNzraVnKtptS2xllrE0zbRkvDjta.YPaaB77W2bQJaAwuI R0WEL.1whWEtSM_s_EFtTTjBm5p1RjFAF0PNPspM9RZ4621K_27JV2tAI0xK3xiwjFEBu1UGLI3N m_VPKe_yoZG9akPqbXMCZc.01BegOjcY71FpuKIChWsozW_kEES1P5oRjLS5Su.In3yV7zXd3Bef c86T5D._pkp9eRvPC7aGcWVA7fxlG67pnNCY3LeIjw4wHYrSAMn4P1GhMoErKzqYOKywRyir8vql iY8wqu55khykSjlkft3R_4jVuyJJOPomR6ZtOeWXKcgBBgwisUrSdFaIxsMXaJV6HqO_7s05HtDs dc3cRfusrDB97vVkTB_xJJrV9nQ-- Received: from sonic.gate.mail.ne1.yahoo.com by sonic312.consmr.mail.gq1.yahoo.com with HTTP; Thu, 29 Mar 2018 19:38:26 +0000 Received: from 67.136.82.65 (EHLO [172.26.18.60]) ([67.136.82.65]) by smtp419.mail.gq1.yahoo.com (Oath Hermes SMTP Server) with ESMTPA ID 10ab6a7e2ff8e6fb799c4e5897f002bb for ; Thu, 29 Mar 2018 19:38:21 +0000 (UTC) User-Agent: Microsoft-MacOutlook/10.9.0.180116 Date: Thu, 29 Mar 2018 12:38:19 -0700 From: Nitin Bahadur To: Message-ID: Thread-Topic: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-15.txt References: <152235219263.4349.339896102576007563@ietfa.amsl.com> In-Reply-To: <152235219263.4349.339896102576007563@ietfa.amsl.com> Mime-version: 1.0 Content-type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-transfer-encoding: quoted-printable Archived-At: Subject: Re: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-15.txt X-BeenThere: i2rs@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 Precedence: list List-Id: "Interface to The Internet Routing System \(IRS\)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 29 Mar 2018 19:38:28 -0000 Addresses gen-art review comments. =EF=BB=BFOn 3/29/18, 12:37 PM, "i2rs-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of internet-draft= s@ietf.org" wr= ote: =20 A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts dire= ctories. This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System WG of = the IETF. =20 Title : Routing Information Base Info Model Authors : Nitin Bahadur Sriganesh Kini Jan Medved Filename : draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-15.txt Pages : 28 Date : 2018-03-29 =20 Abstract: Routing and routing functions in enterprise and carrier networks are typically performed by network devices (routers and switches) using = a routing information base (RIB). Protocols and configuration push data into the RIB and the RIB manager installs state into the hardware for packet forwarding. This draft specifies an information model for the RIB to enable defining a standardized data model, and it was used by the IETF's I2RS WG to design the I2RS RIB data model. It is being published to record the higher-level informational model decisions for RIBs so that other developers of RIBs may benefit from the design concepts. =20 =20 The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model/ =20 There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-15 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-15 =20 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-15 =20 =20 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submi= ssion until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. =20 Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ =20 _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list i2rs@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs =20