Subject: [Ice] Trickle: Section 12

From: Christer Holmberg <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 28 Feb 2018 07:17:58 +0000

Hi,

The text says:

   "This specification does not directly modify the procedures for ending
   ICE processing described in Section 8 of [rfc5245bis], and Trickle
   ICE implementations follow the same rules.²

If this text is to be kept, I suggest removing ³directly².

But, in general I think that the draft doesn¹t need to mention 5245bis
procedures that are unchanged. Instead there could be a generic statement
in the beginning of the document, saying that unless otherwise stated the
procedures in 5245bis apply.

Regards,

Christer