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"I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet
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I found the document well written and it contains minor but necessary
updates to RFC5204.

The changed portion of this document is well stated and  I believe
this document is ready to be published.

Some editorial findings by idnits below:

  == Outdated reference: draft-ietf-hip-rfc5201-bis has been published
as RFC 7401

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of
     draft-ietf-hip-rfc5203-bis-07

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-07) exists of
     draft-ietf-hip-rfc5205-bis-06

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-12) exists of
     draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-11

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of
     draft-ietf-hip-rfc5206-bis-08

-Zhen


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Hi Authors,

"I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-hip-rfc5205-bis
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The document present minor but clear &necessary updates to RFC5205.

I find the document is ready.

One editorial suggestion in the Appendix A as below. This could help
developers to identify the delta text a bit easier.

   o  Extended DNS HIP RR to support for Host Identities based on
      Elliptic Curve Digital Signature Algorithm (ECDSA).  [Section 5.5]

   o  Clarified that new query must be made when the time that passed
      since a RR was retrieved exceeds the TTL of the RR. [Section 4.2]

   o  Added considerations related to multiple HIP RRs being associated
      with a single name. [Section 4.2]

-Zhen


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Hi Julien,

could you please look into the review below and address the comments?

Thanks,

Gonzalo

On 04/12/2015 11:41 AM, Sheng Jiang wrote:
> "I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet
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> that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate,
> see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html."
> 
> This standard track document obsoletes RFC5205, which was 
> Experimental. I guess this need support from various implementation 
> and inter-operational tests. I personally don't know them, but I guess 
> they already took place. The document is well written and ready for 
> publication.
> 
> This bis document has only little different from the original document: 
> mainly three more paragraphs, two in section 4.2 and one in section 5.5.
> They looks good. A couple of minor comments:
> 
> Entiry//entity, in 2nd paragraph of section 4.2, "the record MUST be 
> considered to be no longer valid and deleted by the entiry that retrieved it"
> 
> The abbreviation "HPIHI" in section 6 has no explanation or long name 
> when it appears first time.
> 
> Regards,
> 
> Sheng
> 


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Hi Julien,

could you please acknowledge this review and fix the typos in your sources?

Thanks,

Gonzalo

On 06/12/2015 7:06 PM, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> Hi Julien,
> 
> could you please look into the review below and address the comments?
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Gonzalo
> 
> On 04/12/2015 11:41 AM, Sheng Jiang wrote:
>> "I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis
>> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet
>> Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these
>> comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF
>> contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments
>> that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate,
>> see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html."
>>
>> This standard track document obsoletes RFC5205, which was 
>> Experimental. I guess this need support from various implementation 
>> and inter-operational tests. I personally don't know them, but I guess 
>> they already took place. The document is well written and ready for 
>> publication.
>>
>> This bis document has only little different from the original document: 
>> mainly three more paragraphs, two in section 4.2 and one in section 5.5.
>> They looks good. A couple of minor comments:
>>
>> Entiry//entity, in 2nd paragraph of section 4.2, "the record MUST be 
>> considered to be no longer valid and deleted by the entiry that retrieved it"
>>
>> The abbreviation "HPIHI" in section 6 has no explanation or long name 
>> when it appears first time.
>>
>> Regards,
>>
>> Sheng
>>


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Hi Sheng,

Thank you for reviewing the document. I will post an update addressing
your comments ASAP. W.r.t. to the abbreviation HPIHI, it's a typo in a
deprecated name of the HIPHI resource record. I should read HIP
instead of HPIHI.

Best,

--julien

On Fri, Dec 4, 2015 at 1:41 AM, Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@huawei.com> wrote:
> "I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet
> Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these
> comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF
> contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments
> that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate,
> see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html."
>
> This standard track document obsoletes RFC5205, which was
> Experimental. I guess this need support from various implementation
> and inter-operational tests. I personally don't know them, but I guess
> they already took place. The document is well written and ready for
> publication.
>
> This bis document has only little different from the original document:
> mainly three more paragraphs, two in section 4.2 and one in section 5.5.
> They looks good. A couple of minor comments:
>
> Entiry//entity, in 2nd paragraph of section 4.2, "the record MUST be
> considered to be no longer valid and deleted by the entiry that retrieved it"
>
> The abbreviation "HPIHI" in section 6 has no explanation or long name
> when it appears first time.
>
> Regards,
>
> Sheng


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