Subject: [IPFIX] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5655 (1991)

From: RFC Errata System <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 28 Dec 2009 10:52:58 -0800 (PST)

The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5655,
"Specification of the IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) File Format".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5655&eid=1991

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <[email-masked]>

Section: 12.2, pg.43

Original Text
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...  first paragraph:

                                                 [...].  The channel
|  between the Exporting Process to Collecting Process using IPFIX is
   signed by the Exporting Process key and protected via TLS and DTLS,
   while the File is signed by the File Writer key and protected via
   CMS.  [...]

Corrected Text
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                                                 [...].  The channel
|  from the Exporting Process to the Collecting Process using IPFIX is
   signed by the Exporting Process key and protected via TLS and DTLS,
   while the File is signed by the File Writer key and protected via
   CMS.  [...]

Notes
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Rationale:
  "channel between xxx to yyy" does not make sense. Either
  "channel _from_ xxx to yyy"  or  "channel between xxx _and_ yyy"
  should be written.
  The Corrected Text above suggests the first alternative (based
  on the essential unidirectionality of the information flow) and
  balances the use of articles.

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RFC5655 (draft-ietf-ipfix-file-05)
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Title               : Specification of the IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) File Format
Publication Date    : October 2009
Author(s)           : B. Trammell, E. Boschi, L. Mark, T. Zseby, A. Wagner
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : IP Flow Information Export
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG