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Hi all:

Here are my **DRAFT** minutes, please send me your comments/improvements
/suggestions.

Cheers, Nevil


Brief summary:  IPFIX WG meeting in Berlin

Our Link Layer Attributes and IPFIX Mediation Protocol drafts will be
submitted this month (August).

Extended Field Specifiers look really useful, we could use them for
exporting MIB Objects, We must choose between implementing EFSF (which
would need a charter update) first, or using a mibFieldOption Template
so as to finish the Exporting MIB Objects draft.  Both, of course,
will require changes to IPFIX collectors.

There are several new drafts that could be WG items.  These need to have
objectives that could not be achieved by just registering new IEs via
IANA/IE Doctors.


Minutes of the IPFIX meeting at IETF 87 in Berlin
About 36 people present, plus 6 on jabber
Scribes: Paul Aitken (on Etherpad at http://tools.ietf.org/wg/ipfix/minutes)
   and Chris Innacio
Meeting chairs: Nevil Brownlee, Juergen Quittek

Juergen opened the meeting, and gave the IPFIX status update:
- IPFIX Protocol, 5101bis
     approved as Internet Standard, 17 Jul 13

Nevil Brownlee presented the Link Layer IEs draft:
- Kobayashi-san has made changes as suggested by Pat Thaler in
   Orlando.  She has reviewed the new version, and reported that
   she will send Kobayashi-san a list detailing a few more needed
   changes.
= After that the draft will be ready to submit.

Brian Trammell presented the IPFIX Mediation Protocol draft:
= -06 version to be published shortly, now ready for WGLC

Paul Aitken presented the MIB Variable Export draft:
- mibFieldOption proposed as alternative to Extended Field Specifiers (EFSF)
- Brian Trammell: this is backwards compatible with current IPFIX
- Juergen Quittek: but it adds an extra level of lookup in collectors
- Benoit Claise: would like to compare EFSF vs option templates
= This needs more discussion on the list

Paul presented "IPFIX Extensions"
- These must solve real problems, i.e. have real use cases
- EFSF would support many use cases that would otherwise need many new
   IEs, e.g. Unobserved Fields, MIB OIDs.
- Johan Kogel: likes it, but it may end up duplication some IEs
- Agreement that using Option Templates to extend IEs is inelegant,
   but we already do it a lot, e.g. RFC 6313 (structured data)
- Paul: it's orthogonal to the 'Option Templates' approach

Abdelkader Lahmadi presented 'Metering Process Location'
- A set of IEs for specifying host location
- Could use EFSF, but need to know times when location changed
- Peng Fan: doesn't want to install IPFIX on his mobile 'phone
= Continue discussion on list

Toerless Eckert presented 'Signaling Flow Characteristics'
- Making a set of IEs that Applications can use to export
   information about their flows
- How many IEs?  ~20 to 30
= Discuss this idea with IE Doctors

Ramki Krishnan presented 'Flow-Aware Packet Sampling'
- The draft has been extensively revised since Orlando
= Its aims could be achieved by registering this as a new
   sampling technique, i.e. value of the flowSelectorAlgorithm
   IE.

There was no Other Business.

The Chairs reminded the WG that
- We need to consider IPFIX Extensions - i.e. EFSF - carefully,
   and reach consensus on a new charter item to work on it
- Any other proposals for new work need to solve a real problem,
   and require something more than changes to the IE Registry

The meeting finished at 1137

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I would like the IPFIX WG to review this draft that uses IPFIX to log NAT
events.=20

http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-behave-ipfix-nat-logging

This is a behave working group draft. Your feedback is greatly appreciated.

Thanks
Senthil


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Senthil,

Here's a quick review of your draft from an IPFIX perspective:

* The [NAT-EVENT-LOG-IANA] reference is not referenced in the text, and 
the URL doesn't exist.
     If it's not needed, then remove the reference. If it's needed, then 
fix the URL :-)

* Where the tables include sizes of 1, 2, and 3 digits, the alignment is 
wrong (centralised?). Please right-align all the numbers.

* Terminology: define "IE" / "IE's" before section 2. eg, reference the 
terminology from 5101bis.

* Please be consistent about your usage of "IE" versus "Information 
Elements".

* Briefly introduce IPFIX in the Introduction section. eg:

    The IPFIX Protocol [RFC5101bis] defines a generic push mechanism for exporting information and events.
    The IPFIX Information Model [IANA-IPFIX] defines a set of standard Information Elements (IEs) which can be carried by the IPFIX protocol.
    This document details the IPFIX Information Elements that are required for logging by a NAT device and all the optional fields.
    The fields specified in this document are gleaned from [RFC4787  <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4787>] and [RFC5382  <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5382>].


* Note that 5101 and 5102 are both being updated by -bis drafts which 
are soon to be RFCs - so your Informative References should be updated.

* [IANA-IPFIX] == http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml
     This is now the definitive reference, rather than 5102 / 5102bis.

* Please write "NetFlow v9" rather than "Netflow 9" (ie, with a capital 
'F' and a 'v').

* IANA Considerations: if there are none, then say "there are no IANA 
considerations."

P.

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      <br style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium; ">
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        style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium;
        background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">Here's a quick review of
        your draft from an IPFIX perspective:<br>
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      </font><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* The
        [NAT-EVENT-LOG-IANA] reference is not referenced in the text,
        and the URL doesn't exist.<br>
        &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; If it's not needed, then remove the reference. If it's
        needed, then fix the URL :-)<br>
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    <div><br style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium; ">
      <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
        medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* Where the
        tables include sizes of 1, 2, and 3 digits, the alignment is
        wrong (centralised?). Please right-align all the numbers.</span></div>
    <div><br>
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    <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
      medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* Terminology:
      define "IE" / "IE's" before section 2. eg, reference the
      terminology from 5101bis.</span><br>
    <br>
    <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
      medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* Please be
      consistent about your usage of "IE" versus "Information Elements".</span><br>
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    <div><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">*
        Briefly introduce IPFIX in the Introduction section. eg:</span><br
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      <pre class="newpage" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; ">   The IPFIX Protocol [RFC5101bis] defines a generic push mechanism for exporting information and events.
  &nbsp;The IPFIX Information Model [IANA-IPFIX] defines a set of standard Information Elements (IEs) which can be carried by the IPFIX protocol.
   This document details the IPFIX Information Elements that are required for logging by a NAT device and all the optional fields.
   The fields specified in this document are gleaned from [<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4787" title="&quot;Network Address Translation (NAT) Behavioral Requirements for Unicast UDP&quot;">RFC4787</a>] and [<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5382" title="&quot;NAT Behavioral Requirements for TCP&quot;">RFC5382</a>].</pre>
      <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
        medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
      </span><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><span
          style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
          medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* Note that
          5101 and 5102 are both being updated by -bis drafts which are
          soon to be RFCs - so your Informative References should be
          updated.</span><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family:
          Calibri; font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255,
          255); "><br>
          <br>
        </span>* [IANA-IPFIX] ==&nbsp;</span><a class="moz-txt-link-freetext"
        href="http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml"
        style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
        medium; ">http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml</a><br>
      &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; This is now the definitive reference, rather than 5102 /
      5102bis.<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
      </span><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
        * Please write "NetFlow v9" rather than "Netflow 9" (ie, with a
        capital 'F' and a 'v').</span><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);
        font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium; background-color:
        rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
      </span><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
        * IANA Considerations: if there are none, then say "there are no
        IANA considerations."</span></div>
    <div><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal;
        text-decoration: none; "></span></div>
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[resending due to an apparent IETF email outage?]


Senthil,

Here's a quick review of your draft from an IPFIX perspective:

* The [NAT-EVENT-LOG-IANA] reference is not referenced in the text, and 
the URL doesn't exist.
     If it's not needed, then remove the reference. If it's needed, then 
fix the URL :-)

* Where the tables include sizes of 1, 2, and 3 digits, the alignment is 
wrong (centralised?). Please right-align all the numbers.

* Terminology: define "IE" / "IE's" before section 2. eg, reference the 
terminology from 5101bis.

* Please be consistent about your usage of "IE" versus "Information 
Elements".

* Briefly introduce IPFIX in the Introduction section. eg:

    The IPFIX Protocol [RFC5101bis] defines a generic push mechanism for exporting information and events.
    The IPFIX Information Model [IANA-IPFIX] defines a set of standard Information Elements (IEs) which can be carried by the IPFIX protocol.
    This document details the IPFIX Information Elements that are required for logging by a NAT device and all the optional fields.
    The fields specified in this document are gleaned from [RFC4787  <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4787>] and [RFC5382  <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5382>].


* Note that 5101 and 5102 are both being updated by -bis drafts which 
are soon to be RFCs - so your Informative References should be updated.

* [IANA-IPFIX] == http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml
     This is now the definitive reference, rather than 5102 / 5102bis.

* Please write "NetFlow v9" rather than "Netflow 9" (ie, with a capital 
'F' and a 'v').

* IANA Considerations: if there are none, then say "there are no IANA 
considerations."

P.

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      font-size: 14px; "> <span style="font-family: Calibri; font-size:
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        Senthil,</span><br style="font-family: Calibri; font-size:
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      <br style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium; ">
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        style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium;
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        your draft from an IPFIX perspective:<br>
      </span></div>
    <br>
    <div><font style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); " face="Calibri,sans-serif">
      </font><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* The
        [NAT-EVENT-LOG-IANA] reference is not referenced in the text,
        and the URL doesn't exist.<br>
        &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; If it's not needed, then remove the reference. If it's
        needed, then fix the URL :-)<br>
      </span></div>
    <div><br style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium; ">
      <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
        medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* Where the
        tables include sizes of 1, 2, and 3 digits, the alignment is
        wrong (centralised?). Please right-align all the numbers.</span></div>
    <div><br>
    </div>
    <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
      medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* Terminology:
      define "IE" / "IE's" before section 2. eg, reference the
      terminology from 5101bis.</span><br>
    <br>
    <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
      medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* Please be
      consistent about your usage of "IE" versus "Information Elements".</span><br>
    <div><br>
    </div>
    <div><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">*
        Briefly introduce IPFIX in the Introduction section. eg:</span><br
        style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium; ">
      <pre class="newpage" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; ">   The IPFIX Protocol [RFC5101bis] defines a generic push mechanism for exporting information and events.
  &nbsp;The IPFIX Information Model [IANA-IPFIX] defines a set of standard Information Elements (IEs) which can be carried by the IPFIX protocol.
   This document details the IPFIX Information Elements that are required for logging by a NAT device and all the optional fields.
   The fields specified in this document are gleaned from [<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4787" title="&quot;Network Address Translation (NAT) Behavioral Requirements for Unicast UDP&quot;">RFC4787</a>] and [<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5382" title="&quot;NAT Behavioral Requirements for TCP&quot;">RFC5382</a>].</pre>
      <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
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      </span><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
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          style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
          medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* Note that
          5101 and 5102 are both being updated by -bis drafts which are
          soon to be RFCs - so your Informative References should be
          updated.</span><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family:
          Calibri; font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255,
          255); "><br>
          <br>
        </span>* [IANA-IPFIX] ==&nbsp;</span><a class="moz-txt-link-freetext"
        href="http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml"
        style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
        medium; ">http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml</a><br>
      &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; This is now the definitive reference, rather than 5102 /
      5102bis.<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
      </span><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
        * Please write "NetFlow v9" rather than "Netflow 9" (ie, with a
        capital 'F' and a 'v').</span><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);
        font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium; background-color:
        rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
      </span><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
        * IANA Considerations: if there are none, then say "there are no
        IANA considerations."</span></div>
    <div><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
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Hi Paul,

On 08/01/2013 04:02 PM, Paul Aitken wrote:
> Senthil,

  [ snip ]
> * [IANA-IPFIX] == http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml
>     This is now the definitive reference, rather than 5102 / 5102bis.

Given recent discussion of the ietf list I think the correct link to use 
is actually

http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix

  [ snip ]

-Andrew

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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Hi Paul,<br>
      <br>
      On 08/01/2013 04:02 PM, Paul Aitken wrote:<br>
    </div>
    <blockquote cite="mid:51FABEBF.1080507@cisco.com" type="cite">
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      <div> <span style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium;
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    <br>
    &nbsp;[ snip ]<br>
    <blockquote cite="mid:51FABEBF.1080507@cisco.com" type="cite">
      <div><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
          font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><span
            style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
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          [IANA-IPFIX] ==&nbsp;</span><a moz-do-not-send="true"
          class="moz-txt-link-freetext"
          href="http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml"
          style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
          medium; ">http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml</a><br>
        &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; This is now the definitive reference, rather than 5102 /
        5102bis.<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
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Paul,
Thanks for the review, I will incorporate the comments in the next revision=
.

Thanks
Senthil

From: "Paul Aitken (paitken)" <paitken@cisco.com<mailto:paitken@cisco.com>>
Date: Friday, August 2, 2013 5:01 AM
To: Senthil Sivakumar <ssenthil@cisco.com<mailto:ssenthil@cisco.com>>
Cc: IETF IPFIX Working Group <ipfix@ietf.org<mailto:ipfix@ietf.org>>, "beha=
ve@ietf.org<mailto:behave@ietf.org>" <behave@ietf.org<mailto:behave@ietf.or=
g>>
Subject: review of draft-ietf-behave-ipfix-nat-logging-00 - IPFIX Informati=
on Elements for logging NAT Events

[resending due to an apparent IETF email outage?]


Senthil,

Here's a quick review of your draft from an IPFIX perspective:

* The [NAT-EVENT-LOG-IANA] reference is not referenced in the text, and the=
 URL doesn't exist.
    If it's not needed, then remove the reference. If it's needed, then fix=
 the URL :-)

* Where the tables include sizes of 1, 2, and 3 digits, the alignment is wr=
ong (centralised?). Please right-align all the numbers.

* Terminology: define "IE" / "IE's" before section 2. eg, reference the ter=
minology from 5101bis.

* Please be consistent about your usage of "IE" versus "Information Element=
s".

* Briefly introduce IPFIX in the Introduction section. eg:

   The IPFIX Protocol [RFC5101bis] defines a generic push mechanism for exp=
orting information and events.
   The IPFIX Information Model [IANA-IPFIX] defines a set of standard Infor=
mation Elements (IEs) which can be carried by the IPFIX protocol.
   This document details the IPFIX Information Elements that are required f=
or logging by a NAT device and all the optional fields.
   The fields specified in this document are gleaned from [RFC4787<http://t=
ools.ietf.org/html/rfc4787>] and [RFC5382<http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc538=
2>].

* Note that 5101 and 5102 are both being updated by -bis drafts which are s=
oon to be RFCs - so your Informative References should be updated.

* [IANA-IPFIX] =3D=3D http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml
    This is now the definitive reference, rather than 5102 / 5102bis.

* Please write "NetFlow v9" rather than "Netflow 9" (ie, with a capital 'F'=
 and a 'v').

* IANA Considerations: if there are none, then say "there are no IANA consi=
derations."

P.

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ly: Calibri, sans-serif; ">
<div>Paul,</div>
<div>Thanks for the review, I will incorporate the comments in the next rev=
ision.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Thanks</div>
<div>Senthil</div>
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<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">From: </span>&quot;Paul Aitken (paitken)&q=
uot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:paitken@cisco.com">paitken@cisco.com</a>&gt;<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Friday, August 2, 2013 5:01 A=
M<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">To: </span>Senthil Sivakumar &lt;<a href=
=3D"mailto:ssenthil@cisco.com">ssenthil@cisco.com</a>&gt;<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>IETF IPFIX Working Group &lt;<a=
 href=3D"mailto:ipfix@ietf.org">ipfix@ietf.org</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"ma=
ilto:behave@ietf.org">behave@ietf.org</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:behav=
e@ietf.org">behave@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
<span style=3D"font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>review of draft-ietf-behav=
e-ipfix-nat-logging-00 - IPFIX Information Elements for logging NAT Events<=
br>
</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>
<div style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space;
    -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; " bgcolor=3D"#FFFFFF" text=3D"#0=
00000">
<div style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;
      font-size: 14px; ">
<span style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size:
        medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">[resending due to a=
n apparent IETF email outage?]<br>
<br>
<br>
Senthil,</span><br style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size:
        medium; ">
<br style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium; ">
<span style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium;
        background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "></span><span style=3D"font-=
family: Calibri; font-size: medium;
        background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">Here's a quick review of yo=
ur draft from an
 IPFIX perspective:<br>
</span></div>
<br>
<div><font style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); " face=3D"Calibri,sans-serif"></fo=
nt><span style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* The [N=
AT-EVENT-LOG-IANA] reference is not referenced in the
 text, and the URL doesn't exist.<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; If it's not needed, then remove the reference. If it's n=
eeded, then fix the URL :-)<br>
</span></div>
<div><br style=3D"font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium; ">
<span style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
        medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* Where the tables =
include sizes of 1, 2, and 3 digits, the alignment is wrong (centralised?).=
 Please right-align all the numbers.</span></div>
<div><br>
</div>
<span style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
      medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* Terminology: define=
 &quot;IE&quot; / &quot;IE's&quot; before section 2. eg, reference the term=
inology from 5101bis.</span><br>
<br>
<span style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
      medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* Please be consisten=
t about your usage of &quot;IE&quot; versus &quot;Information Elements&quot=
;.</span><br>
<div><br>
</div>
<div><span style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">* Briefl=
y introduce IPFIX in the Introduction section. eg:</span><br style=3D"font-=
family: Calibri; font-size: medium; ">
<pre class=3D"newpage" style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, =
sans-serif; font-size: 14px; ">   The IPFIX Protocol [RFC5101bis] defines a=
 generic push mechanism for exporting information and events.
  &nbsp;The IPFIX Information Model [IANA-IPFIX] defines a set of standard =
Information Elements (IEs) which can be carried by the IPFIX protocol.
   This document details the IPFIX Information Elements that are required f=
or logging by a NAT device and all the optional fields.
   The fields specified in this document are gleaned from [<a href=3D"http:=
//tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4787" title=3D"&quot;Network Address Translation (=
NAT) Behavioral Requirements for Unicast UDP&quot;">RFC4787</a>] and [<a hr=
ef=3D"http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5382" title=3D"&quot;NAT Behavioral Req=
uirements for TCP&quot;">RFC5382</a>].</pre>
<span style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
        medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
</span><span style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><span st=
yle=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
          medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); ">*
 Note that 5101 and 5102 are both being updated by -bis drafts which are so=
on to be RFCs - so your Informative References should be updated.</span><sp=
an style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family:
          Calibri; font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255,
          255); "><br>
<br>
</span>* [IANA-IPFIX] =3D=3D&nbsp;</span><a class=3D"moz-txt-link-freetext"=
 href=3D"http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml" style=3D"color:=
 rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri; font-size:
        medium; ">http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xhtml</a><br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; This is now the definitive reference, rather than 5102 /=
 5102bis.<span style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
</span><span style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
* Please write &quot;NetFlow v9&quot; rather than &quot;Netflow 9&quot; (ie=
, with a capital 'F' and a 'v').</span><span style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0);
        font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium; background-color:
        rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
</span><span style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: medium; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); "><br>
* IANA Considerations: if there are none, then say &quot;there are no IANA =
considerations.&quot;</span></div>
<div><span style=3D"color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri;
        font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal;
        text-decoration: none; "></span></div>
<br>
P.<br>
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Hi all:

The -06 version of IPFIX Mediation Protocol was published last week,
now it's time for its WG Last Call.

The WGLC starts now, and will run until Friday, 23 August.

Please read the draft and send your comments/suggestions to the list.
Actual reviews of the draft would be much appreciated, but a brief
comment saying "I read it, it's fine" is useful too!

Cheers, Nevil

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Hi all:

The note below reminds me that we need to make some progress on
MIB Variable Export.  The minutes from Berlin (now on the IETF
Proceedings page) say:
  - mibFieldOption proposed as alternative to Extended Field
      Specifiers (EFSF)
  - Brian Trammell: this is backwards compatible with current IPFIX
  - Juergen Quittek: but it adds an extra level of lookup in collectors
  - Benoit Claise: would like to compare EFSF vs option templates
  = This needs more discussion on the list

So far I haven't seen any discussion on this list.  My own view is that:
  i) the mibFieldOption follows what we've done for things like
     structured data.  We know it will work.
ii) EFSF seems a nice, general, mechanism but it's definitely an IPFIX
     extension, i.e. a new way of doing things.  If we're to use EFSF,
     we'll need to develop it as a new WG item and publish it before
     we can use it for MIB Variables.

We _need_ some more discussion.  Also it would be good to have a
draft proposing EFSF.  Paul, could you do that sometime soon, please?

Meantime, let's see some real discussion of mibOption and EFSF!

Cheers, Nevil


On 26/08/13 11:42 PM, IETF Secretariat wrote:
> The following draft will expire soon:
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> Name:     draft-ietf-ipfix-mib-variable-export
> Title:    Exporting MIB Variables using the IPFIX Protocol
> State:    I-D Exists
> Expires:  2013-08-29 (in 2 days, 19 hours)

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Hi all:

This WGLC has finished, with no comments at all on the list.
I need at least a few "looks OK to me" or "I can live with that"
responses before I can put together its Shepherd writeup!

Cheers, Nevil


On 8/08/13 10:12 AM, Nevil Brownlee wrote:
>
> Hi all:
>
> The -06 version of IPFIX Mediation Protocol was published last week,
> now it's time for its WG Last Call.
>
> The WGLC starts now, and will run until Friday, 23 August.
>
> Please read the draft and send your comments/suggestions to the list.
> Actual reviews of the draft would be much appreciated, but a brief
> comment saying "I read it, it's fine" is useful too!
>
> Cheers, Nevil

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Hi Nevil, all,

I missed last call, but as no one else has posted anything here are my 
comments.

First, I think something like this document is needed, but I'd prefer 
the language to be a bit more general in a number of places.  I also 
have a number of specific issues.

An IPFIX Mediator converts a record stream to IPFIX and a record stream 
can be "IPFIX Data Records or any other format", but other than those 
points in the Terminology section this document seems to assume IPFIX input.

For example:
    Original Exporter:   An Original Exporter is an IPFIX Device that
       hosts the Observation Points where the metered IP packets are
       observed.

I have a need for something very much like originalExporterIPv4Address 
except that my data source(s) fall under that "any other format" 
umbrella and are not IPFIX devices. I'd prefer to see 
originalSenderIPv4Address (or some such) rather than an IE for each 
non-IPFIX source.

If there is a need to know that the original source was IPFIX or 
something else I'd prefer an additional IE for originalSenderFormat.  
Probably with a registry of known formats. I don't have a use case for 
this IE at the moment, but perhaps there is a need.

In section 3 "Note that the format is compatible
    with the IPFIX Message Header defined in
    [I-D.ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis], with some field definitions
    (for the example, the Export Time) updated in the context of the
    IPFIX Mediator."

I don't like this at all.  Does an exporter send IPFIX or something 
compatible with IPFIX?

For example Export Time "MAY use the export time received from the 
incoming Transport Session".  I think I understand the motivation behind 
this, but at the collector I have no way to know which export time is 
being used.  How do I know if the time applies to the original or 
mediator?  I'd rather not see this exception unless someone can explain 
how it is useful.

The text for sequence number doesn't match 5101bis.  More generally I 
think it is confusing to include all that copy paste text in this 
document.  I'd rather see a reference to 5101bis followed by a list of 
special circumstances.

Something like
      The format of the IPFIX Message Header as exported by an IPFIX
      Mediator is the same as  [RFC5102bis].

       See Section 4.1 for special considerations for Observation Domain
       management while passing unmodified templates through an IPFIX
       Mediator, and Section 5 for guidelines for preservation of
       original Observation Domain information at an IPFIX Mediator.

That makes it obvious what is special or different(*shudder*) relative 
to IPFIX.

Section 4.1 and 4.3 discuss two situations when a Mediator MUST NOT 
reorder and fields in a record.  Additionally, if an IE occurs more than 
once in a template that order also MUST NOT be modified.  I would think 
that this situation should also be treated similarly to unknown IEs 
either resend all or none.

4.2 starts with "The second case".  I'm not entirely sure what was first.

In section 4.3

" Depending on application requirements, Mediators which do not
    generate new Records SHOULD re-export values for unknown Information
    Elements, whether enterprise-specific Information Elements or
    Information Elements in the IPFIX Information Element registry
    [iana-ipfix-assignments]. added since the Mediator was implemented or
    updated."

That sentence seems a bit long and complicated.  At the very least I 
think the '.' before added needs to be removed.  Although I'd prefer to 
simplify it.  I think it is enough to state that "An IE is considered 
unknown if its data type and semantics are not known to the Mediator."  
Trying to list the reasons it might not be known just complicates things 
IMO.


I didn't fully grok Section 5, but "[RFC6313] MUST be used" bothers me.  
Mostly because from a collector perspective I really don't like 6313 at 
all and subTemplateMultiList in particular.  Is 6313 really the only way 
to export this data?  Why?

Section 7 timing constraints refers to relative timestamps as "difficult 
to manage".  I think "impossible to manage" is closer to the mark.  A 
collector can get sysUpTime from a v9 header.  For IPFIX I'm no sure 
where I get sysUpTime from.  Perhaps there needs to be a requirement for 
Mediators converting v9 to IPFIX to translate relative times to absolute 
times.

Better late than never I guess,
-Andrew

On 08/26/2013 11:32 PM, Nevil Brownlee wrote:
>
> Hi all:
>
> This WGLC has finished, with no comments at all on the list.
> I need at least a few "looks OK to me" or "I can live with that"
> responses before I can put together its Shepherd writeup!
>
> Cheers, Nevil
>
>
> On 8/08/13 10:12 AM, Nevil Brownlee wrote:
>>
>> Hi all:
>>
>> The -06 version of IPFIX Mediation Protocol was published last week,
>> now it's time for its WG Last Call.
>>
>> The WGLC starts now, and will run until Friday, 23 August.
>>
>> Please read the draft and send your comments/suggestions to the list.
>> Actual reviews of the draft would be much appreciated, but a brief
>> comment saying "I read it, it's fine" is useful too!
>>
>> Cheers, Nevil
>

