Subject: [ippm] AD review: draft-ietf-ippm-multimetrics-11

From: Lars Eggert <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 5 Aug 2009 16:52:51 +0300

Ready for publication, will start IETF last call.

Nits:

Section 9.2., paragraph 1:
 >    measure must take in consideration that intrically more packets  
will

   Nit: s/intrically/intrinsically/

Section 10.4., paragraph 4:
 >    o  Hosts_serie: <H1, H2,..., Hn>, a list of points of interest;

   Nit: s/serie/series/ here and in many other places

Lars