Subject: iSCSI 07-95 Comment 2

From: Thomas Dineen <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 25 Sep 2001 16:49:22 -0700

GentlePeople:

"3.3.7 Data Segment - Command Data
Some SCSI commands require additional parameter data to accompany the
SCSI command. This data may be placed beyond the boundary of the
iSCSI header (a data segment). Alternatively, user data (as from a
WRITE operation) can be placed in the same PDU (both cases referred
to as immediate data). Those data are governed by the general rules
for solicited vs. unsolicited data."

I suggest that the parentheses are not required here:
Change "iSCSI header (a data segment)."
to "iSCSI header in a data segment."

Thomas Dineen