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Hi all,
I also had a look at the latest version -06 and it seems for me to be ok no=
w.=20
The only minor concern might be whether the expression "length in four octe=
ts" is familiar enough (I didn't find this in any other draft) or should be=
 mentioned especially in terms of a warning "caution!" or explicit (e.g. "i=
.e. 32 bit") or similar?
Otherwise I am fine with it ...
Thanks!
Best regards
Dirk

-----Original Message-----
From: Stig Venaas [mailto:stig@venaas.com]=20
Sent: Donnerstag, 29. Mai 2014 00:28
To: Thomas C. Schmidt; von Hugo, Dirk; multimob@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [multimob] Working group last call for draft-ietf-multimob-fmi=
pv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05

Hi

On 5/22/2014 4:29 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
> Hi Stig, Dirk,
>
> we just updated the document - sorry for me being slow.
>
> We have fixed all nits that you pointed at.
>
> In particular, the length counter issue should be resolved now: As=20
> this inherited 8 bit length counter is not long enough to count bytes=20
> of MLD state records, we propose to count four octets. This complies=20
> to the alignment and should not be a problem. However, it leads to a=20
> feasible number of MLD records in the payload which at least comes=20
> close to common packet lengths.

Thanks. I'll have a look at this shortly. Great if others can help verify t=
hat this change is OK as well.

Stig

> Best,
>
> Thomas
>
>
> On 19.05.2014 22:00, Stig Venaas wrote:
>> Hi
>>
>> On 4/22/2014 11:13 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>> Hi Stig,
>>>
>>> sorry, we've been busy otherwise.
>>>
>>> We'll try to update asap.
>>
>> How is this going? Looks like we're still waiting.
>>
>> Stig
>>
>>> Cheers,
>>>
>>> Thomas
>>>
>>> On 22.04.2014 19:29, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>> Thomas/authors, I think we're just waiting for 06 with these minor=20
>>>> changes and we can request publication.
>>>>
>>>> Stig
>>>>
>>>> On 4/3/2014 2:15 PM, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>> Hi
>>>>>
>>>>> On 3/31/2014 2:57 PM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>>>> Hi Dirk,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> many thanks for carefully looking through the draft. Please see=20
>>>>>> comments inline.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 27.03.2014 16:30, Dirk.von-Hugo@telekom.de wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Sorry that I missed the preceding WGLC - I do think that this=20
>>>>>>> document is ready for publication. It has greatly improved since=20
>>>>>>> version 00
>>>>>>> ;-)
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Though some (minor) nits came to my mind after re-reading:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> p.1.
>>>>>>> Updates: 5568 (if approved) =3D> shouldn't be added 5949 since it=20
>>>>>>> does also update PFMIPv6?
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I don't think so. The update of 5568 is with the PrRtAdv-Messages.
>>>>>> 5949
>>>>>> does not contain such things, as there is no explicit messaging=20
>>>>>> between MAGs and the MN. Mobility Options are explicitly under=20
>>>>>> the control of IANA.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> As mentioned by others for prior versions there is still mixed=20
>>>>>>> usage of FBack, Hack, ... and FBACK, HACK, ...
>>>>>>> Same for PMAG/NMAG and pMAG/nMAG.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Oh yes, that was in the figures ...
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> p.10ff
>>>>>>> "Section 3.3.  Protocol Operations Specific to PFMIPv6" and Figs.
>>>>>>> 4/5
>>>>>>> do include "PMAG (PAR)" and "NMAG (NAR)" - isn't it all about=20
>>>>>>> PMIP - so no relevance for AR? Otherwise I would expect a=20
>>>>>>> statement like that also a mixed scenario MIP/PMIP is in focus=20
>>>>>>> here ...
>>>>>>> I tried to find out whether this was explained in prior posts=20
>>>>>>> but didn't catch any ... sorry if I missed it!
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Actually the terms PAR and NAR in parenthesis are used to=20
>>>>>> indicate the correspondence with FMIP ... it does not consider=20
>>>>>> mixed terms, but should help the reader to see that this is all=20
>>>>>> about the same "abstract entities" here.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> p.15
>>>>>>> sect. 4.1.3 is on NAR, so I guess:
>>>>>>> of the PAR =3D> of the NAR
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Yes, thanks.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> the NAR joins the groups subscribed
>>>>>>>     for forwarding on the tunnel link. < sounds puzzling to me=20
>>>>>>> =3D> the NAR joins the groups the MN has subscribed
>>>>>>>     for (which are then forwarded by PAR) via the tunnel link. <=20
>>>>>>> is it that what is meant?
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Yes, thanks. This is better.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> p.21
>>>>>>> number of muticast records =3D> number of multicast records
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> or Section 4.2 of [RFC3376]) for the =3D> or Section 4.2 of=20
>>>>>>> [RFC3376] for the
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> p.23
>>>>>>> 5.5.  Length Considerations: Number of Records and Addresses I=20
>>>>>>> understand why the maximum number of multicast address records=20
>>>>>>> is 72 or sources for MLDv2 is 89 (also given in=20
>>>>>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3810#section-5.1.10), but I miss a=20
>>>>>>> consideration of specific limitation due to 8-bit Length format=20
>>>>>>> in new Mobility Header Multicast Option (Fig.7).
>>>>>>> Have I misunderstood something or isn't there a much stricter=20
>>>>>>> limit for multicast address records to (512-2-4)/(4+16) < 26=20
>>>>>>> (w/o source
>>>>>>> addresses) ??
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I guess you hit a point: By bringing back length formatting to=20
>>>>>> standard mobility options recently, we missed that this will not=20
>>>>>> fill an Ethernet packet. I don't think this matters much, but we=20
>>>>>> definitely should adjust the section on length considerations.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> for that multicast address to their MLDv2 (IGMPv2) equivalents=20
>>>>>>> =3D> for that multicast address to their MLDv2 (IGMPv3)=20
>>>>>>> equivalents
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Hope this helps
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Yes, it definitely does.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> We will wait for the next days to pass the call deadline and=20
>>>>>> resubmit then.
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks. Looks like these are the only outstanding issues. Thanks=20
>>>>> for having a careful look Dirk.
>>>>>
>>>>> Once you submit the new version I'll allow a couple of days for=20
>>>>> myself and others to review changes. If they look good I'll=20
>>>>> request publishing.
>>>>>
>>>>> If others have any issues, please let us know, even if passed the=20
>>>>> WGLC deadline.
>>>>>
>>>>> Stig
>>>>>
>>>>>> Thanks again & best regards,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thomas
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>>   -----Original Message-----
>>>>>>> From: multimob [mailto:multimob-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of=20
>>>>>>> Stig Venaas
>>>>>>> Sent: Montag, 24. M=E4rz 2014 21:30
>>>>>>> To: multimob@ietf.org
>>>>>>> Subject: [multimob] Working group last call for
>>>>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> This is a working group last call for
>>>>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Please state whether you think it is ready for publishing or if=20
>>>>>>> you believe there are issues with the document or that it is not=20
>>>>>>> ready for other reasons.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> The document has already been reviewed by several people, but it=20
>>>>>>> is still good to hear from the working group what you think.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> The last call ends one week from now on Monday March 31st.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> The draft is available at
>>>>>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-mu
>>>>>>> lticast-05
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> _______________________________________________
>>>>>>> multimob mailing list
>>>>>>> multimob@ietf.org
>>>>>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/multimob
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> _______________________________________________
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>>>>>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/multimob
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>
>


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Hi Dirk,

many thanks for you continued effort!

Making the bit counting more apparent, should not be a problem. I agree 
that this is a somewhat uncommon way of counting, but prevents us from 
changing the encoding structure of the mobility options, which I believe 
is the more relevant part.

What is your opinion, Stig?

Best regards,

Thomas

On 16.06.2014 12:00, Dirk.von-Hugo@telekom.de wrote:
> Hi all,
> I also had a look at the latest version -06 and it seems for me to be ok now.
> The only minor concern might be whether the expression "length in four octets" is familiar enough (I didn't find this in any other draft) or should be mentioned especially in terms of a warning "caution!" or explicit (e.g. "i.e. 32 bit") or similar?
> Otherwise I am fine with it ...
> Thanks!
> Best regards
> Dirk
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Stig Venaas [mailto:stig@venaas.com]
> Sent: Donnerstag, 29. Mai 2014 00:28
> To: Thomas C. Schmidt; von Hugo, Dirk; multimob@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [multimob] Working group last call for draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>
> Hi
>
> On 5/22/2014 4:29 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>> Hi Stig, Dirk,
>>
>> we just updated the document - sorry for me being slow.
>>
>> We have fixed all nits that you pointed at.
>>
>> In particular, the length counter issue should be resolved now: As
>> this inherited 8 bit length counter is not long enough to count bytes
>> of MLD state records, we propose to count four octets. This complies
>> to the alignment and should not be a problem. However, it leads to a
>> feasible number of MLD records in the payload which at least comes
>> close to common packet lengths.
>
> Thanks. I'll have a look at this shortly. Great if others can help verify that this change is OK as well.
>
> Stig
>
>> Best,
>>
>> Thomas
>>
>>
>> On 19.05.2014 22:00, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>> Hi
>>>
>>> On 4/22/2014 11:13 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>> Hi Stig,
>>>>
>>>> sorry, we've been busy otherwise.
>>>>
>>>> We'll try to update asap.
>>>
>>> How is this going? Looks like we're still waiting.
>>>
>>> Stig
>>>
>>>> Cheers,
>>>>
>>>> Thomas
>>>>
>>>> On 22.04.2014 19:29, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>> Thomas/authors, I think we're just waiting for 06 with these minor
>>>>> changes and we can request publication.
>>>>>
>>>>> Stig
>>>>>
>>>>> On 4/3/2014 2:15 PM, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>>> Hi
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 3/31/2014 2:57 PM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>>>>> Hi Dirk,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> many thanks for carefully looking through the draft. Please see
>>>>>>> comments inline.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On 27.03.2014 16:30, Dirk.von-Hugo@telekom.de wrote:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Sorry that I missed the preceding WGLC - I do think that this
>>>>>>>> document is ready for publication. It has greatly improved since
>>>>>>>> version 00
>>>>>>>> ;-)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Though some (minor) nits came to my mind after re-reading:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> p.1.
>>>>>>>> Updates: 5568 (if approved) => shouldn't be added 5949 since it
>>>>>>>> does also update PFMIPv6?
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> I don't think so. The update of 5568 is with the PrRtAdv-Messages.
>>>>>>> 5949
>>>>>>> does not contain such things, as there is no explicit messaging
>>>>>>> between MAGs and the MN. Mobility Options are explicitly under
>>>>>>> the control of IANA.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> As mentioned by others for prior versions there is still mixed
>>>>>>>> usage of FBack, Hack, ... and FBACK, HACK, ...
>>>>>>>> Same for PMAG/NMAG and pMAG/nMAG.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Oh yes, that was in the figures ...
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> p.10ff
>>>>>>>> "Section 3.3.  Protocol Operations Specific to PFMIPv6" and Figs.
>>>>>>>> 4/5
>>>>>>>> do include "PMAG (PAR)" and "NMAG (NAR)" - isn't it all about
>>>>>>>> PMIP - so no relevance for AR? Otherwise I would expect a
>>>>>>>> statement like that also a mixed scenario MIP/PMIP is in focus
>>>>>>>> here ...
>>>>>>>> I tried to find out whether this was explained in prior posts
>>>>>>>> but didn't catch any ... sorry if I missed it!
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Actually the terms PAR and NAR in parenthesis are used to
>>>>>>> indicate the correspondence with FMIP ... it does not consider
>>>>>>> mixed terms, but should help the reader to see that this is all
>>>>>>> about the same "abstract entities" here.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> p.15
>>>>>>>> sect. 4.1.3 is on NAR, so I guess:
>>>>>>>> of the PAR => of the NAR
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Yes, thanks.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> the NAR joins the groups subscribed
>>>>>>>>      for forwarding on the tunnel link. < sounds puzzling to me
>>>>>>>> => the NAR joins the groups the MN has subscribed
>>>>>>>>      for (which are then forwarded by PAR) via the tunnel link. <
>>>>>>>> is it that what is meant?
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Yes, thanks. This is better.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> p.21
>>>>>>>> number of muticast records => number of multicast records
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> or Section 4.2 of [RFC3376]) for the => or Section 4.2 of
>>>>>>>> [RFC3376] for the
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> p.23
>>>>>>>> 5.5.  Length Considerations: Number of Records and Addresses I
>>>>>>>> understand why the maximum number of multicast address records
>>>>>>>> is 72 or sources for MLDv2 is 89 (also given in
>>>>>>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3810#section-5.1.10), but I miss a
>>>>>>>> consideration of specific limitation due to 8-bit Length format
>>>>>>>> in new Mobility Header Multicast Option (Fig.7).
>>>>>>>> Have I misunderstood something or isn't there a much stricter
>>>>>>>> limit for multicast address records to (512-2-4)/(4+16) < 26
>>>>>>>> (w/o source
>>>>>>>> addresses) ??
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> I guess you hit a point: By bringing back length formatting to
>>>>>>> standard mobility options recently, we missed that this will not
>>>>>>> fill an Ethernet packet. I don't think this matters much, but we
>>>>>>> definitely should adjust the section on length considerations.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> for that multicast address to their MLDv2 (IGMPv2) equivalents
>>>>>>>> => for that multicast address to their MLDv2 (IGMPv3)
>>>>>>>> equivalents
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Hope this helps
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Yes, it definitely does.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> We will wait for the next days to pass the call deadline and
>>>>>>> resubmit then.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thanks. Looks like these are the only outstanding issues. Thanks
>>>>>> for having a careful look Dirk.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Once you submit the new version I'll allow a couple of days for
>>>>>> myself and others to review changes. If they look good I'll
>>>>>> request publishing.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> If others have any issues, please let us know, even if passed the
>>>>>> WGLC deadline.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thanks again & best regards,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thomas
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>    -----Original Message-----
>>>>>>>> From: multimob [mailto:multimob-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
>>>>>>>> Stig Venaas
>>>>>>>> Sent: Montag, 24. März 2014 21:30
>>>>>>>> To: multimob@ietf.org
>>>>>>>> Subject: [multimob] Working group last call for
>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> This is a working group last call for
>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Please state whether you think it is ready for publishing or if
>>>>>>>> you believe there are issues with the document or that it is not
>>>>>>>> ready for other reasons.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The document has already been reviewed by several people, but it
>>>>>>>> is still good to hear from the working group what you think.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The last call ends one week from now on Monday March 31st.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The draft is available at
>>>>>>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-mu
>>>>>>>> lticast-05
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> _______________________________________________
>>>>>>>> multimob mailing list
>>>>>>>> multimob@ietf.org
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On 6/16/14 6:25 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
> Hi Dirk,
>=20
> many thanks for you continued effort!
>=20
> Making the bit counting more apparent, should not be a problem. I agree=

> that this is a somewhat uncommon way of counting, but prevents us from
> changing the encoding structure of the mobility options, which I believ=
e
> is the more relevant part.
>=20
> What is your opinion, Stig?
>=20
> Best regards,
>=20
> Thomas
>=20
> On 16.06.2014 12:00, Dirk.von-Hugo@telekom.de wrote:
>> Hi all,
>> I also had a look at the latest version -06 and it seems for me to be
>> ok now.
>> The only minor concern might be whether the expression "length in four=

>> octets" is familiar enough (I didn't find this in any other draft) or
>> should be mentioned especially in terms of a warning "caution!" or
>> explicit (e.g. "i.e. 32 bit") or similar?
>> Otherwise I am fine with it ...
>> Thanks!
>> Best regards
>> Dirk
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Stig Venaas [mailto:stig@venaas.com]
>> Sent: Donnerstag, 29. Mai 2014 00:28
>> To: Thomas C. Schmidt; von Hugo, Dirk; multimob@ietf.org
>> Subject: Re: [multimob] Working group last call for
>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>
>> Hi
>>
>> On 5/22/2014 4:29 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>> Hi Stig, Dirk,
>>>
>>> we just updated the document - sorry for me being slow.
>>>
>>> We have fixed all nits that you pointed at.
>>>
>>> In particular, the length counter issue should be resolved now: As
>>> this inherited 8 bit length counter is not long enough to count bytes=

>>> of MLD state records, we propose to count four octets. This complies
>>> to the alignment and should not be a problem. However, it leads to a
>>> feasible number of MLD records in the payload which at least comes
>>> close to common packet lengths.
>>
>> Thanks. I'll have a look at this shortly. Great if others can help
>> verify that this change is OK as well.
>>
>> Stig
>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Thomas
>>>
>>>
>>> On 19.05.2014 22:00, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>> Hi
>>>>
>>>> On 4/22/2014 11:13 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>>> Hi Stig,
>>>>>
>>>>> sorry, we've been busy otherwise.
>>>>>
>>>>> We'll try to update asap.
>>>>
>>>> How is this going? Looks like we're still waiting.
>>>>
>>>> Stig
>>>>
>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>>
>>>>> Thomas
>>>>>
>>>>> On 22.04.2014 19:29, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>>> Thomas/authors, I think we're just waiting for 06 with these minor=

>>>>>> changes and we can request publication.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 4/3/2014 2:15 PM, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>>>> Hi
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On 3/31/2014 2:57 PM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>>>>>> Hi Dirk,
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> many thanks for carefully looking through the draft. Please see
>>>>>>>> comments inline.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On 27.03.2014 16:30, Dirk.von-Hugo@telekom.de wrote:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Sorry that I missed the preceding WGLC - I do think that this
>>>>>>>>> document is ready for publication. It has greatly improved sinc=
e
>>>>>>>>> version 00
>>>>>>>>> ;-)
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Though some (minor) nits came to my mind after re-reading:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> p.1.
>>>>>>>>> Updates: 5568 (if approved) =3D> shouldn't be added 5949 since =
it
>>>>>>>>> does also update PFMIPv6?
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> I don't think so. The update of 5568 is with the PrRtAdv-Message=
s.
>>>>>>>> 5949
>>>>>>>> does not contain such things, as there is no explicit messaging
>>>>>>>> between MAGs and the MN. Mobility Options are explicitly under
>>>>>>>> the control of IANA.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> As mentioned by others for prior versions there is still mixed
>>>>>>>>> usage of FBack, Hack, ... and FBACK, HACK, ...
>>>>>>>>> Same for PMAG/NMAG and pMAG/nMAG.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Oh yes, that was in the figures ...
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> p.10ff
>>>>>>>>> "Section 3.3.  Protocol Operations Specific to PFMIPv6" and Fig=
s.
>>>>>>>>> 4/5
>>>>>>>>> do include "PMAG (PAR)" and "NMAG (NAR)" - isn't it all about
>>>>>>>>> PMIP - so no relevance for AR? Otherwise I would expect a
>>>>>>>>> statement like that also a mixed scenario MIP/PMIP is in focus
>>>>>>>>> here ...
>>>>>>>>> I tried to find out whether this was explained in prior posts
>>>>>>>>> but didn't catch any ... sorry if I missed it!
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Actually the terms PAR and NAR in parenthesis are used to
>>>>>>>> indicate the correspondence with FMIP ... it does not consider
>>>>>>>> mixed terms, but should help the reader to see that this is all
>>>>>>>> about the same "abstract entities" here.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> p.15
>>>>>>>>> sect. 4.1.3 is on NAR, so I guess:
>>>>>>>>> of the PAR =3D> of the NAR
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Yes, thanks.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> the NAR joins the groups subscribed
>>>>>>>>>      for forwarding on the tunnel link. < sounds puzzling to me=

>>>>>>>>> =3D> the NAR joins the groups the MN has subscribed
>>>>>>>>>      for (which are then forwarded by PAR) via the tunnel link.=
 <
>>>>>>>>> is it that what is meant?
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Yes, thanks. This is better.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> p.21
>>>>>>>>> number of muticast records =3D> number of multicast records
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> or Section 4.2 of [RFC3376]) for the =3D> or Section 4.2 of
>>>>>>>>> [RFC3376] for the
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> p.23
>>>>>>>>> 5.5.  Length Considerations: Number of Records and Addresses I
>>>>>>>>> understand why the maximum number of multicast address records
>>>>>>>>> is 72 or sources for MLDv2 is 89 (also given in
>>>>>>>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3810#section-5.1.10), but I miss =
a
>>>>>>>>> consideration of specific limitation due to 8-bit Length format=

>>>>>>>>> in new Mobility Header Multicast Option (Fig.7).
>>>>>>>>> Have I misunderstood something or isn't there a much stricter
>>>>>>>>> limit for multicast address records to (512-2-4)/(4+16) < 26
>>>>>>>>> (w/o source
>>>>>>>>> addresses) ??
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> I guess you hit a point: By bringing back length formatting to
>>>>>>>> standard mobility options recently, we missed that this will not=

>>>>>>>> fill an Ethernet packet. I don't think this matters much, but we=

>>>>>>>> definitely should adjust the section on length considerations.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> for that multicast address to their MLDv2 (IGMPv2) equivalents
>>>>>>>>> =3D> for that multicast address to their MLDv2 (IGMPv3)
>>>>>>>>> equivalents
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Hope this helps
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Yes, it definitely does.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> We will wait for the next days to pass the call deadline and
>>>>>>>> resubmit then.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thanks. Looks like these are the only outstanding issues. Thanks
>>>>>>> for having a careful look Dirk.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Once you submit the new version I'll allow a couple of days for
>>>>>>> myself and others to review changes. If they look good I'll
>>>>>>> request publishing.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> If others have any issues, please let us know, even if passed the=

>>>>>>> WGLC deadline.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thanks again & best regards,
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thomas
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>    -----Original Message-----
>>>>>>>>> From: multimob [mailto:multimob-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
>>>>>>>>> Stig Venaas
>>>>>>>>> Sent: Montag, 24. M=E4rz 2014 21:30
>>>>>>>>> To: multimob@ietf.org
>>>>>>>>> Subject: [multimob] Working group last call for
>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> This is a working group last call for
>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Please state whether you think it is ready for publishing or if=

>>>>>>>>> you believe there are issues with the document or that it is no=
t
>>>>>>>>> ready for other reasons.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> The document has already been reviewed by several people, but i=
t
>>>>>>>>> is still good to hear from the working group what you think.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> The last call ends one week from now on Monday March 31st.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> The draft is available at
>>>>>>>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-m=
u
>>>>>>>>> lticast-05
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> _______________________________________________
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On 6/16/2014 5:35 AM, Brian Haberman wrote:
> You could always borrow legacy text from RFC 791...
>
> "Internet Header Length is the length of the internet header in 32 bit
> words"

This does sound better. Less risk of anyone getting it wrong. You could
consider a small example. Just a sentence saying i.e. if the length is
8 octets the length field would be set to 2 or something.

Stig

> Regards,
> Brian
>
> On 6/16/14 6:25 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>> Hi Dirk,
>>
>> many thanks for you continued effort!
>>
>> Making the bit counting more apparent, should not be a problem. I agree
>> that this is a somewhat uncommon way of counting, but prevents us from
>> changing the encoding structure of the mobility options, which I believe
>> is the more relevant part.
>>
>> What is your opinion, Stig?
>>
>> Best regards,
>>
>> Thomas
>>
>> On 16.06.2014 12:00, Dirk.von-Hugo@telekom.de wrote:
>>> Hi all,
>>> I also had a look at the latest version -06 and it seems for me to be
>>> ok now.
>>> The only minor concern might be whether the expression "length in four
>>> octets" is familiar enough (I didn't find this in any other draft) or
>>> should be mentioned especially in terms of a warning "caution!" or
>>> explicit (e.g. "i.e. 32 bit") or similar?
>>> Otherwise I am fine with it ...
>>> Thanks!
>>> Best regards
>>> Dirk
>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Stig Venaas [mailto:stig@venaas.com]
>>> Sent: Donnerstag, 29. Mai 2014 00:28
>>> To: Thomas C. Schmidt; von Hugo, Dirk; multimob@ietf.org
>>> Subject: Re: [multimob] Working group last call for
>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>
>>> Hi
>>>
>>> On 5/22/2014 4:29 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>> Hi Stig, Dirk,
>>>>
>>>> we just updated the document - sorry for me being slow.
>>>>
>>>> We have fixed all nits that you pointed at.
>>>>
>>>> In particular, the length counter issue should be resolved now: As
>>>> this inherited 8 bit length counter is not long enough to count bytes
>>>> of MLD state records, we propose to count four octets. This complies
>>>> to the alignment and should not be a problem. However, it leads to a
>>>> feasible number of MLD records in the payload which at least comes
>>>> close to common packet lengths.
>>>
>>> Thanks. I'll have a look at this shortly. Great if others can help
>>> verify that this change is OK as well.
>>>
>>> Stig
>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Thomas
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On 19.05.2014 22:00, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>> Hi
>>>>>
>>>>> On 4/22/2014 11:13 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>>>> Hi Stig,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> sorry, we've been busy otherwise.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> We'll try to update asap.
>>>>>
>>>>> How is this going? Looks like we're still waiting.
>>>>>
>>>>> Stig
>>>>>
>>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thomas
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 22.04.2014 19:29, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>>>> Thomas/authors, I think we're just waiting for 06 with these minor
>>>>>>> changes and we can request publication.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On 4/3/2014 2:15 PM, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>>>>> Hi
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On 3/31/2014 2:57 PM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>>>>>>> Hi Dirk,
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> many thanks for carefully looking through the draft. Please see
>>>>>>>>> comments inline.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> On 27.03.2014 16:30, Dirk.von-Hugo@telekom.de wrote:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Sorry that I missed the preceding WGLC - I do think that this
>>>>>>>>>> document is ready for publication. It has greatly improved since
>>>>>>>>>> version 00
>>>>>>>>>> ;-)
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Though some (minor) nits came to my mind after re-reading:
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> p.1.
>>>>>>>>>> Updates: 5568 (if approved) => shouldn't be added 5949 since it
>>>>>>>>>> does also update PFMIPv6?
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> I don't think so. The update of 5568 is with the PrRtAdv-Messages.
>>>>>>>>> 5949
>>>>>>>>> does not contain such things, as there is no explicit messaging
>>>>>>>>> between MAGs and the MN. Mobility Options are explicitly under
>>>>>>>>> the control of IANA.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> As mentioned by others for prior versions there is still mixed
>>>>>>>>>> usage of FBack, Hack, ... and FBACK, HACK, ...
>>>>>>>>>> Same for PMAG/NMAG and pMAG/nMAG.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Oh yes, that was in the figures ...
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> p.10ff
>>>>>>>>>> "Section 3.3.  Protocol Operations Specific to PFMIPv6" and Figs.
>>>>>>>>>> 4/5
>>>>>>>>>> do include "PMAG (PAR)" and "NMAG (NAR)" - isn't it all about
>>>>>>>>>> PMIP - so no relevance for AR? Otherwise I would expect a
>>>>>>>>>> statement like that also a mixed scenario MIP/PMIP is in focus
>>>>>>>>>> here ...
>>>>>>>>>> I tried to find out whether this was explained in prior posts
>>>>>>>>>> but didn't catch any ... sorry if I missed it!
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Actually the terms PAR and NAR in parenthesis are used to
>>>>>>>>> indicate the correspondence with FMIP ... it does not consider
>>>>>>>>> mixed terms, but should help the reader to see that this is all
>>>>>>>>> about the same "abstract entities" here.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> p.15
>>>>>>>>>> sect. 4.1.3 is on NAR, so I guess:
>>>>>>>>>> of the PAR => of the NAR
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Yes, thanks.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> the NAR joins the groups subscribed
>>>>>>>>>>       for forwarding on the tunnel link. < sounds puzzling to me
>>>>>>>>>> => the NAR joins the groups the MN has subscribed
>>>>>>>>>>       for (which are then forwarded by PAR) via the tunnel link. <
>>>>>>>>>> is it that what is meant?
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Yes, thanks. This is better.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> p.21
>>>>>>>>>> number of muticast records => number of multicast records
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> or Section 4.2 of [RFC3376]) for the => or Section 4.2 of
>>>>>>>>>> [RFC3376] for the
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> p.23
>>>>>>>>>> 5.5.  Length Considerations: Number of Records and Addresses I
>>>>>>>>>> understand why the maximum number of multicast address records
>>>>>>>>>> is 72 or sources for MLDv2 is 89 (also given in
>>>>>>>>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3810#section-5.1.10), but I miss a
>>>>>>>>>> consideration of specific limitation due to 8-bit Length format
>>>>>>>>>> in new Mobility Header Multicast Option (Fig.7).
>>>>>>>>>> Have I misunderstood something or isn't there a much stricter
>>>>>>>>>> limit for multicast address records to (512-2-4)/(4+16) < 26
>>>>>>>>>> (w/o source
>>>>>>>>>> addresses) ??
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> I guess you hit a point: By bringing back length formatting to
>>>>>>>>> standard mobility options recently, we missed that this will not
>>>>>>>>> fill an Ethernet packet. I don't think this matters much, but we
>>>>>>>>> definitely should adjust the section on length considerations.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> for that multicast address to their MLDv2 (IGMPv2) equivalents
>>>>>>>>>> => for that multicast address to their MLDv2 (IGMPv3)
>>>>>>>>>> equivalents
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Hope this helps
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Yes, it definitely does.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> We will wait for the next days to pass the call deadline and
>>>>>>>>> resubmit then.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thanks. Looks like these are the only outstanding issues. Thanks
>>>>>>>> for having a careful look Dirk.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Once you submit the new version I'll allow a couple of days for
>>>>>>>> myself and others to review changes. If they look good I'll
>>>>>>>> request publishing.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> If others have any issues, please let us know, even if passed the
>>>>>>>> WGLC deadline.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thanks again & best regards,
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thomas
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>     -----Original Message-----
>>>>>>>>>> From: multimob [mailto:multimob-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
>>>>>>>>>> Stig Venaas
>>>>>>>>>> Sent: Montag, 24. März 2014 21:30
>>>>>>>>>> To: multimob@ietf.org
>>>>>>>>>> Subject: [multimob] Working group last call for
>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> This is a working group last call for
>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Please state whether you think it is ready for publishing or if
>>>>>>>>>> you believe there are issues with the document or that it is not
>>>>>>>>>> ready for other reasons.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> The document has already been reviewed by several people, but it
>>>>>>>>>> is still good to hear from the working group what you think.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> The last call ends one week from now on Monday March 31st.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> The draft is available at
>>>>>>>>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-mu
>>>>>>>>>> lticast-05
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>>> multimob@ietf.org
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>>>>>>
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A new Request for Comments is now available in online RFC libraries.

        
        RFC 7287

        Title:      Mobile Multicast Sender Support in 
                    Proxy Mobile IPv6 (PMIPv6) Domains 
        Author:     T. Schmidt, Ed.,
                    S. Gao,
                    H. Zhang,
                    M. Waehlisch
        Status:     Experimental
        Stream:     IETF
        Date:       June 2014
        Mailbox:    Schmidt@informatik.haw-hamburg.de, 
                    shgao@bjtu.edu.cn, 
                    hkzhang@bjtu.edu.cn,
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        Pages:      28
        Characters: 66766
        Updates/Obsoletes/SeeAlso:   None

        I-D Tag:    draft-ietf-multimob-pmipv6-source-09.txt

        URL:        http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7287.txt

Multicast communication can be enabled in Proxy Mobile IPv6 (PMIPv6)
domains via the Local Mobility Anchors by deploying Multicast
Listener Discovery (MLD) proxy functions at Mobile Access Gateways,
by using direct traffic distribution within an ISP's access network,
or by selective route optimization schemes.  This document describes
a base solution and an experimental protocol to support mobile
multicast senders in PMIPv6 domains for all three scenarios.
Protocol optimizations for synchronizing PMIPv6 with PIM, as well as
a peering function for MLD proxies are defined.  Mobile sources
always remain agnostic of multicast mobility operations.

This document is a product of the Multicast Mobility Working Group of the IETF.


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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
 This draft is a work item of the Multicast Mobility Working Group of the IETF.

        Title           : Multicast Listener Extensions for MIPv6 and PMIPv6 Fast Handovers
        Authors         : Thomas C. Schmidt
                          Matthias Waehlisch
                          Rajeev Koodli
                          Godred Fairhurst
                          Dapeng Liu
	Filename        : draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-07.txt
	Pages           : 28
	Date            : 2014-06-26

Abstract:
   Fast handover protocols for MIPv6 and PMIPv6 define mobility
   management procedures that support unicast communication at reduced
   handover latency.  Fast handover base operations do not affect
   multicast communication, and hence do not accelerate handover
   management for native multicast listeners.  Many multicast
   applications like IPTV or conferencing, though, comprise delay-
   sensitive real-time traffic and will benefit from fast handover
   completion.  This document specifies extension of the Mobile IPv6
   Fast Handovers (FMIPv6) and the Fast Handovers for Proxy Mobile IPv6
   (PFMIPv6) protocols to include multicast traffic management in fast
   handover operations.  This multicast support is provided first at the
   control plane by a management of rapid context transfer between
   access routers, second at the data plane by an optional fast traffic
   forwarding that may include buffering.  An FMIPv6 access router
   indicates support for multicast using an updated Proxy Router
   Advertisements message format.


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Hi all,

as no more comments arrived, we have just updated the draft with the 
proposed text.

Best,

Thomas

On 16.06.2014 14:35, Brian Haberman wrote:
> You could always borrow legacy text from RFC 791...
>
> "Internet Header Length is the length of the internet header in 32 bit
> words"
>
> Regards,
> Brian
>
> On 6/16/14 6:25 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>> Hi Dirk,
>>
>> many thanks for you continued effort!
>>
>> Making the bit counting more apparent, should not be a problem. I agree
>> that this is a somewhat uncommon way of counting, but prevents us from
>> changing the encoding structure of the mobility options, which I believe
>> is the more relevant part.
>>
>> What is your opinion, Stig?
>>
>> Best regards,
>>
>> Thomas
>>
>> On 16.06.2014 12:00, Dirk.von-Hugo@telekom.de wrote:
>>> Hi all,
>>> I also had a look at the latest version -06 and it seems for me to be
>>> ok now.
>>> The only minor concern might be whether the expression "length in four
>>> octets" is familiar enough (I didn't find this in any other draft) or
>>> should be mentioned especially in terms of a warning "caution!" or
>>> explicit (e.g. "i.e. 32 bit") or similar?
>>> Otherwise I am fine with it ...
>>> Thanks!
>>> Best regards
>>> Dirk
>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Stig Venaas [mailto:stig@venaas.com]
>>> Sent: Donnerstag, 29. Mai 2014 00:28
>>> To: Thomas C. Schmidt; von Hugo, Dirk; multimob@ietf.org
>>> Subject: Re: [multimob] Working group last call for
>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>
>>> Hi
>>>
>>> On 5/22/2014 4:29 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>> Hi Stig, Dirk,
>>>>
>>>> we just updated the document - sorry for me being slow.
>>>>
>>>> We have fixed all nits that you pointed at.
>>>>
>>>> In particular, the length counter issue should be resolved now: As
>>>> this inherited 8 bit length counter is not long enough to count bytes
>>>> of MLD state records, we propose to count four octets. This complies
>>>> to the alignment and should not be a problem. However, it leads to a
>>>> feasible number of MLD records in the payload which at least comes
>>>> close to common packet lengths.
>>>
>>> Thanks. I'll have a look at this shortly. Great if others can help
>>> verify that this change is OK as well.
>>>
>>> Stig
>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Thomas
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On 19.05.2014 22:00, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>> Hi
>>>>>
>>>>> On 4/22/2014 11:13 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>>>> Hi Stig,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> sorry, we've been busy otherwise.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> We'll try to update asap.
>>>>>
>>>>> How is this going? Looks like we're still waiting.
>>>>>
>>>>> Stig
>>>>>
>>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thomas
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 22.04.2014 19:29, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>>>> Thomas/authors, I think we're just waiting for 06 with these minor
>>>>>>> changes and we can request publication.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On 4/3/2014 2:15 PM, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>>>>> Hi
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On 3/31/2014 2:57 PM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>>>>>>> Hi Dirk,
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> many thanks for carefully looking through the draft. Please see
>>>>>>>>> comments inline.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> On 27.03.2014 16:30, Dirk.von-Hugo@telekom.de wrote:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Sorry that I missed the preceding WGLC - I do think that this
>>>>>>>>>> document is ready for publication. It has greatly improved since
>>>>>>>>>> version 00
>>>>>>>>>> ;-)
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Though some (minor) nits came to my mind after re-reading:
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> p.1.
>>>>>>>>>> Updates: 5568 (if approved) => shouldn't be added 5949 since it
>>>>>>>>>> does also update PFMIPv6?
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> I don't think so. The update of 5568 is with the PrRtAdv-Messages.
>>>>>>>>> 5949
>>>>>>>>> does not contain such things, as there is no explicit messaging
>>>>>>>>> between MAGs and the MN. Mobility Options are explicitly under
>>>>>>>>> the control of IANA.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> As mentioned by others for prior versions there is still mixed
>>>>>>>>>> usage of FBack, Hack, ... and FBACK, HACK, ...
>>>>>>>>>> Same for PMAG/NMAG and pMAG/nMAG.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Oh yes, that was in the figures ...
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> p.10ff
>>>>>>>>>> "Section 3.3.  Protocol Operations Specific to PFMIPv6" and Figs.
>>>>>>>>>> 4/5
>>>>>>>>>> do include "PMAG (PAR)" and "NMAG (NAR)" - isn't it all about
>>>>>>>>>> PMIP - so no relevance for AR? Otherwise I would expect a
>>>>>>>>>> statement like that also a mixed scenario MIP/PMIP is in focus
>>>>>>>>>> here ...
>>>>>>>>>> I tried to find out whether this was explained in prior posts
>>>>>>>>>> but didn't catch any ... sorry if I missed it!
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Actually the terms PAR and NAR in parenthesis are used to
>>>>>>>>> indicate the correspondence with FMIP ... it does not consider
>>>>>>>>> mixed terms, but should help the reader to see that this is all
>>>>>>>>> about the same "abstract entities" here.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> p.15
>>>>>>>>>> sect. 4.1.3 is on NAR, so I guess:
>>>>>>>>>> of the PAR => of the NAR
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Yes, thanks.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> the NAR joins the groups subscribed
>>>>>>>>>>       for forwarding on the tunnel link. < sounds puzzling to me
>>>>>>>>>> => the NAR joins the groups the MN has subscribed
>>>>>>>>>>       for (which are then forwarded by PAR) via the tunnel link. <
>>>>>>>>>> is it that what is meant?
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Yes, thanks. This is better.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> p.21
>>>>>>>>>> number of muticast records => number of multicast records
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> or Section 4.2 of [RFC3376]) for the => or Section 4.2 of
>>>>>>>>>> [RFC3376] for the
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> p.23
>>>>>>>>>> 5.5.  Length Considerations: Number of Records and Addresses I
>>>>>>>>>> understand why the maximum number of multicast address records
>>>>>>>>>> is 72 or sources for MLDv2 is 89 (also given in
>>>>>>>>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3810#section-5.1.10), but I miss a
>>>>>>>>>> consideration of specific limitation due to 8-bit Length format
>>>>>>>>>> in new Mobility Header Multicast Option (Fig.7).
>>>>>>>>>> Have I misunderstood something or isn't there a much stricter
>>>>>>>>>> limit for multicast address records to (512-2-4)/(4+16) < 26
>>>>>>>>>> (w/o source
>>>>>>>>>> addresses) ??
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> I guess you hit a point: By bringing back length formatting to
>>>>>>>>> standard mobility options recently, we missed that this will not
>>>>>>>>> fill an Ethernet packet. I don't think this matters much, but we
>>>>>>>>> definitely should adjust the section on length considerations.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> for that multicast address to their MLDv2 (IGMPv2) equivalents
>>>>>>>>>> => for that multicast address to their MLDv2 (IGMPv3)
>>>>>>>>>> equivalents
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Hope this helps
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Yes, it definitely does.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> We will wait for the next days to pass the call deadline and
>>>>>>>>> resubmit then.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Thanks. Looks like these are the only outstanding issues. Thanks
>>>>>>>> for having a careful look Dirk.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Once you submit the new version I'll allow a couple of days for
>>>>>>>> myself and others to review changes. If they look good I'll
>>>>>>>> request publishing.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> If others have any issues, please let us know, even if passed the
>>>>>>>> WGLC deadline.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thanks again & best regards,
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thomas
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>     -----Original Message-----
>>>>>>>>>> From: multimob [mailto:multimob-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
>>>>>>>>>> Stig Venaas
>>>>>>>>>> Sent: Montag, 24. März 2014 21:30
>>>>>>>>>> To: multimob@ietf.org
>>>>>>>>>> Subject: [multimob] Working group last call for
>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> This is a working group last call for
>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Please state whether you think it is ready for publishing or if
>>>>>>>>>> you believe there are issues with the document or that it is not
>>>>>>>>>> ready for other reasons.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> The document has already been reviewed by several people, but it
>>>>>>>>>> is still good to hear from the working group what you think.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> The last call ends one week from now on Monday March 31st.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> The draft is available at
>>>>>>>>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-mu
>>>>>>>>>> lticast-05
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>>>>
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Hi

On 6/26/2014 2:33 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> as no more comments arrived, we have just updated the draft with the
> proposed text.

Great. I'll request publishing of this then. I'll try to get this
done early next week. Please everyone, have a look at the latest
document and let us know if any concerns. If you read the previous
versions the couple of latest diffs would be of help. See
http://tools.ietf.org/wg/multimob/draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast/
for the different versions and diffs.

Stig

> Best,
>
> Thomas
>
> On 16.06.2014 14:35, Brian Haberman wrote:
>> You could always borrow legacy text from RFC 791...
>>
>> "Internet Header Length is the length of the internet header in 32 bit
>> words"
>>
>> Regards,
>> Brian
>>
>> On 6/16/14 6:25 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>> Hi Dirk,
>>>
>>> many thanks for you continued effort!
>>>
>>> Making the bit counting more apparent, should not be a problem. I agree
>>> that this is a somewhat uncommon way of counting, but prevents us from
>>> changing the encoding structure of the mobility options, which I believe
>>> is the more relevant part.
>>>
>>> What is your opinion, Stig?
>>>
>>> Best regards,
>>>
>>> Thomas
>>>
>>> On 16.06.2014 12:00, Dirk.von-Hugo@telekom.de wrote:
>>>> Hi all,
>>>> I also had a look at the latest version -06 and it seems for me to be
>>>> ok now.
>>>> The only minor concern might be whether the expression "length in four
>>>> octets" is familiar enough (I didn't find this in any other draft) or
>>>> should be mentioned especially in terms of a warning "caution!" or
>>>> explicit (e.g. "i.e. 32 bit") or similar?
>>>> Otherwise I am fine with it ...
>>>> Thanks!
>>>> Best regards
>>>> Dirk
>>>>
>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>> From: Stig Venaas [mailto:stig@venaas.com]
>>>> Sent: Donnerstag, 29. Mai 2014 00:28
>>>> To: Thomas C. Schmidt; von Hugo, Dirk; multimob@ietf.org
>>>> Subject: Re: [multimob] Working group last call for
>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>
>>>> Hi
>>>>
>>>> On 5/22/2014 4:29 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>>> Hi Stig, Dirk,
>>>>>
>>>>> we just updated the document - sorry for me being slow.
>>>>>
>>>>> We have fixed all nits that you pointed at.
>>>>>
>>>>> In particular, the length counter issue should be resolved now: As
>>>>> this inherited 8 bit length counter is not long enough to count bytes
>>>>> of MLD state records, we propose to count four octets. This complies
>>>>> to the alignment and should not be a problem. However, it leads to a
>>>>> feasible number of MLD records in the payload which at least comes
>>>>> close to common packet lengths.
>>>>
>>>> Thanks. I'll have a look at this shortly. Great if others can help
>>>> verify that this change is OK as well.
>>>>
>>>> Stig
>>>>
>>>>> Best,
>>>>>
>>>>> Thomas
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On 19.05.2014 22:00, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>>> Hi
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 4/22/2014 11:13 AM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>>>>> Hi Stig,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> sorry, we've been busy otherwise.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> We'll try to update asap.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> How is this going? Looks like we're still waiting.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Cheers,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thomas
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On 22.04.2014 19:29, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>>>>> Thomas/authors, I think we're just waiting for 06 with these minor
>>>>>>>> changes and we can request publication.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On 4/3/2014 2:15 PM, Stig Venaas wrote:
>>>>>>>>> Hi
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> On 3/31/2014 2:57 PM, Thomas C. Schmidt wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Hi Dirk,
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> many thanks for carefully looking through the draft. Please see
>>>>>>>>>> comments inline.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> On 27.03.2014 16:30, Dirk.von-Hugo@telekom.de wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Sorry that I missed the preceding WGLC - I do think that this
>>>>>>>>>>> document is ready for publication. It has greatly improved since
>>>>>>>>>>> version 00
>>>>>>>>>>> ;-)
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Though some (minor) nits came to my mind after re-reading:
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> p.1.
>>>>>>>>>>> Updates: 5568 (if approved) => shouldn't be added 5949 since it
>>>>>>>>>>> does also update PFMIPv6?
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> I don't think so. The update of 5568 is with the
>>>>>>>>>> PrRtAdv-Messages.
>>>>>>>>>> 5949
>>>>>>>>>> does not contain such things, as there is no explicit messaging
>>>>>>>>>> between MAGs and the MN. Mobility Options are explicitly under
>>>>>>>>>> the control of IANA.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> As mentioned by others for prior versions there is still mixed
>>>>>>>>>>> usage of FBack, Hack, ... and FBACK, HACK, ...
>>>>>>>>>>> Same for PMAG/NMAG and pMAG/nMAG.
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Oh yes, that was in the figures ...
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> p.10ff
>>>>>>>>>>> "Section 3.3.  Protocol Operations Specific to PFMIPv6" and
>>>>>>>>>>> Figs.
>>>>>>>>>>> 4/5
>>>>>>>>>>> do include "PMAG (PAR)" and "NMAG (NAR)" - isn't it all about
>>>>>>>>>>> PMIP - so no relevance for AR? Otherwise I would expect a
>>>>>>>>>>> statement like that also a mixed scenario MIP/PMIP is in focus
>>>>>>>>>>> here ...
>>>>>>>>>>> I tried to find out whether this was explained in prior posts
>>>>>>>>>>> but didn't catch any ... sorry if I missed it!
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Actually the terms PAR and NAR in parenthesis are used to
>>>>>>>>>> indicate the correspondence with FMIP ... it does not consider
>>>>>>>>>> mixed terms, but should help the reader to see that this is all
>>>>>>>>>> about the same "abstract entities" here.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> p.15
>>>>>>>>>>> sect. 4.1.3 is on NAR, so I guess:
>>>>>>>>>>> of the PAR => of the NAR
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Yes, thanks.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> the NAR joins the groups subscribed
>>>>>>>>>>>       for forwarding on the tunnel link. < sounds puzzling to me
>>>>>>>>>>> => the NAR joins the groups the MN has subscribed
>>>>>>>>>>>       for (which are then forwarded by PAR) via the tunnel
>>>>>>>>>>> link. <
>>>>>>>>>>> is it that what is meant?
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Yes, thanks. This is better.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> p.21
>>>>>>>>>>> number of muticast records => number of multicast records
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> or Section 4.2 of [RFC3376]) for the => or Section 4.2 of
>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC3376] for the
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> p.23
>>>>>>>>>>> 5.5.  Length Considerations: Number of Records and Addresses I
>>>>>>>>>>> understand why the maximum number of multicast address records
>>>>>>>>>>> is 72 or sources for MLDv2 is 89 (also given in
>>>>>>>>>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3810#section-5.1.10), but I miss a
>>>>>>>>>>> consideration of specific limitation due to 8-bit Length format
>>>>>>>>>>> in new Mobility Header Multicast Option (Fig.7).
>>>>>>>>>>> Have I misunderstood something or isn't there a much stricter
>>>>>>>>>>> limit for multicast address records to (512-2-4)/(4+16) < 26
>>>>>>>>>>> (w/o source
>>>>>>>>>>> addresses) ??
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> I guess you hit a point: By bringing back length formatting to
>>>>>>>>>> standard mobility options recently, we missed that this will not
>>>>>>>>>> fill an Ethernet packet. I don't think this matters much, but we
>>>>>>>>>> definitely should adjust the section on length considerations.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> for that multicast address to their MLDv2 (IGMPv2) equivalents
>>>>>>>>>>> => for that multicast address to their MLDv2 (IGMPv3)
>>>>>>>>>>> equivalents
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Thanks, fixed.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Hope this helps
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Yes, it definitely does.
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> We will wait for the next days to pass the call deadline and
>>>>>>>>>> resubmit then.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Thanks. Looks like these are the only outstanding issues. Thanks
>>>>>>>>> for having a careful look Dirk.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Once you submit the new version I'll allow a couple of days for
>>>>>>>>> myself and others to review changes. If they look good I'll
>>>>>>>>> request publishing.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> If others have any issues, please let us know, even if passed the
>>>>>>>>> WGLC deadline.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Thanks again & best regards,
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>> Thomas
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>     -----Original Message-----
>>>>>>>>>>> From: multimob [mailto:multimob-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
>>>>>>>>>>> Stig Venaas
>>>>>>>>>>> Sent: Montag, 24. März 2014 21:30
>>>>>>>>>>> To: multimob@ietf.org
>>>>>>>>>>> Subject: [multimob] Working group last call for
>>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> This is a working group last call for
>>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast-05
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Please state whether you think it is ready for publishing or if
>>>>>>>>>>> you believe there are issues with the document or that it is not
>>>>>>>>>>> ready for other reasons.
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> The document has already been reviewed by several people, but it
>>>>>>>>>>> is still good to hear from the working group what you think.
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> The last call ends one week from now on Monday March 31st.
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> The draft is available at
>>>>>>>>>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-mu
>>>>>>>>>>> lticast-05
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>> Stig
>>>>>>>>>>>
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>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>
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Hi

I've now requested publication of this document. You can find the
writeup and other details in the tracker at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-multimob-fmipv6-pfmipv6-multicast/

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