Subject: [Netconf] Comments on draft-ietf-netconf-with-defaults-02

From: Phil Shafer <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 30 Jul 2009 07:30:22 -0400

Two comments, mentioned in the meeting Monday.

(a) Please change the terms "agent" and "manager" to "client" and "server".
"a/m" are SNMP terms.  "c/s" are widely used and well known, and are the
terms we've tried to use thru netconf and yang docs.

(b) The example on page 7 does not include a namespace.  <with-defaults>
belongs in the "urn:...:with-defaults" namespace.

One other comment: It would be more readable if most of the contents
of 2.1.1 were in the introduction.  Describe the behaviors after
covering the problem space/motivation.

Thanks,
 Phil