Subject: [Netconf] comment ons draft-ietf-netconf-with-defaults-04.txt]

From: "Bert (IETF) Wijnen" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 11 Nov 2009 11:07:54 +0900

just some late editorial comments that you might consider
if a new rev gets done

- sect 1.2 2nd para
       As a consequence of this issue,
   maybe better to s/issue/approach/

- section 9
   add a note to rfc-editor to remove section 9 when doc
   gets published as rfc

- I see that you use [RFC2119] for citation and [NETCONF]
   I prefer consistency and would personally use [RFC4741]
   to be consistent with citations to other RFCs.
   personal taste of course. Not a bug

Bert