Subject: Re: [Netconf] RESTCONF-10 draft clarifications

From: t.petch <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 30 Mar 2016 11:36:37 +0100

Some minor comments on s.4

s4.5
 /MUST not/MUST NOT/

s.1.1.3 ' ordered-by user '
s.4.4.1 '  "ordered-by" user'
s.4.8    ' user-ordered  '
s.4.8.4 ' user-ordered '
           ' ordered by the user.  '
s4.8.5  ' user ordered '
           ' ordered by the  user.  '

I think these are all the same in which case I would prefer a single
term; the defined one is probably best

s 4.4
' If the server implements  any YANG module that contains a
configuration data node that is   "ordered-by" user, then the "insert"
and "point" query parameters MUST be supported.  If not, then these
parameters not applicable. '

seems at odds with s.4.8.4

'  The "insert" query parameter MUST be supported by the server. '

likewise for "point" in s.4.8.5

Tom Petch

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Subject: [Netconf] RESTCONF-10 draft clarifications