Subject: [nmrg] Intent Classification Draft - Comments Pedro Andres Aranda Gutierrez of Complexity 0 and 1 addressed

From: Adriana Olariu <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 2020 16:26:54 +0000

Dear Pedro,
Thank you for your comments on the intent classification draft. All the comments received from you have been addressed in the 01 version of the draft. The draft is available as TXT in Github (https://github.com/irtf-nmrg/nmrg-ibn-intent-classification/blob/01/draft-irtf-nmrg-ibn-intent-classification-01.txt) or as WORD DOC format in the attachment to this email.
Please let us know if you have any comments on how your feedback has been addressed.

Best regards,
Adriana and Olga

Author

Affiliation

High-level comment

Section

Complexity

Editor

Status

How it was addressed

18

Pedro Andres Aranda Gutierrez

Paderborn University

Verify the distinction between SDOs and non-SDOs solutions.

1

0

Huawei

Completed

Rewritten in Section 1 as "All SDOs, and open source projects, such as IETF [ANIMA]…" .

19

Pedro Andres Aranda Gutierrez

Paderborn University

Re-phrasing of text - "Thus, the goal of this document is to bring clarity to what an intent represents for different stakeholders,..."

1

1

Huawei

Completed

Updated as suggested  in Section 1 : "The goal of this document is to clarify what an  intent represents for different stakeholders".

20

Pedro Andres Aranda Gutierrez

Paderborn University

Re-phrasing of text: Review usage of would/could or will/can

1

1

Huawei

Completed

Updated in Section 1 : "This classification could".

21

Pedro Andres Aranda Gutierrez

Paderborn University

Re-phrasing of text: Specify the important part of the sentence first: ""This is achieved by proposing initial classification tables and the methodology used for generating them."

1

0

Huawei

Completed

Rephrased in Section 1 as "This is achieved by proposing the methodology and initial  classification tables".

22

Pedro Andres Aranda Gutierrez

Paderborn University

Re-phrasing of text: "This draft together with [CLEMM] aims"

1

0

Huawei

Completed

Rephrased in Section 1: "Together with [CLEMM], this draft aims…"