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From: Peter McCann <Peter.McCann@huawei.com>
To: "Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com" <Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com>, "paws@ietf.org" <paws@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: timeslots for PAWS in the upcoming Vancouver F2F
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Hi, Gabor,

We anticipate bringing an updated protocol framework draft.

(hope this note isn't too late).

-Pete

Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com wrote:
> Folks,
>=20
>=20
>=20
> I need to request a timeslot for PAWS at the upcoming Vancouver F2F=20
> meeting.
>=20
> But in order to do that, I will need to know what drafts are coming up=20
> before the deadline. As a reminder, the use case and requirements=20
> document is being finalized, I do not expect the need for that to be=20
> presented in the F2F; is there going to be any documents on db=20
> discovery, any potential updates or new documents to the data model=20
> and protocol framework?
>=20
> Please let me know *during this week*, as the deadline to request for=20
> a WG timeslot is on Monday.
>=20
>=20
>=20
> Thanks, Gabor



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Folks,

I issued the below 2nd wglc on http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ie=
tf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt
and I only got one review with a comment which is easy to address.

We really need more reviews in order to be able to progress the draft. If y=
ou care about the use cases and requirements related to White Space Databas=
e Access, please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you =
do not have comments, then send a note to the list that the draft is good a=
s it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.

I cannot send the draft to the IESG without a minimum number of reviews. Ie=
, if we don't get reviews, we can't make progress.

Thanks, Gabor

From: paws-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Baj=
ko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)
Sent: Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM
To: paws@ietf.org
Subject: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts

Since there were quite a few changes made to the new version -04, let's hav=
e another WGLC for this document.

Therefore, I'd like to initiate a 2nd WG Last Call for comments on http://w=
ww.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.=
txt

Please review the draft and send your comments to the list by June 1st, 201=
2.

If you review the draft and have no comments, send a note to the list that =
the draft is good as it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actu=
al comments.

Thanks, Gabor


From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org]<mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]> On Behalf Of Probasco =
Scott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)
Sent: Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] UC&R document

Hello All,

A new version of the Use Cases & Requirements draft has been uploaded. This=
 version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of the issues raised durin=
g Working Group Last Call, including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready=
 to be forwarded to IESG.

Kind Regards,
Raj & Scott

Draft:  http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-=
04.txt

Diff:   http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-u=
secases-rqmts-04

Abstract:
   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use
   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are
   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional
   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a
   technique to &quot;unlock&quot; existing spectrum for new use.  An obvio=
us
   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere
   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the
   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a
   database for available channels.

   This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces.  It also
   describes the problems that need to be addressed to enable white
   space spectrum for additional uses, without causing interference to
   currently assigned use, by querying a database which stores
   information about the channel availability at any given location and
   time.  A number of possible use cases of white space spectrum and
   technology as well as a set of requirements for the database query
   protocol are also described.




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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Folks,<o:p></o:p></span><=
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libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I issued the below 2<sup>=
nd</sup> wglc on
</span><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quo=
t;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-d=
rafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">http://www.ietf.o=
rg/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt</a><o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">and I only got one review=
 with a comment which is easy to address.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">We really need more revie=
ws in order to be able to progress the draft. If you care about the use cas=
es and requirements related to White Space Database Access,
 please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you do not ha=
ve comments, then
</span><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quo=
t;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">send a note to the list that the draft is=
 good as it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I cannot send the draft t=
o the IESG without a minimum number of reviews. Ie, if we don&#8217;t get r=
eviews, we can&#8217;t make progress.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks, Gabor<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> paws-bou=
nces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> paws@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Since there were quite a =
few changes made to the new version -04, let&#8217;s have another WGLC for =
this document.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Therefore, I'd like to in=
itiate a 2<sup>nd</sup> WG Last Call for comments on
<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt=
-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Please review the draft a=
nd send your comments to the list by June 1st, 2012.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">If you review the draft a=
nd have no comments, send a note to the list that the draft is good as it i=
s, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks, Gabor<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">
<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> <a href=
=3D"mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]">
[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]</a> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Probasco Scott (Noki=
a-CIC/Dallas)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [paws] UC&amp;R document<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
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;color:black">Hello All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">A new version of the Use Cases &amp; Requirements draft has b=
een uploaded.&nbsp;This version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of =
the issues raised during Working Group Last Call,
 including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready to be forwarded to IESG.<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Kind Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Raj &amp; Scott<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Draft: &nbsp;<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Diff: &nbsp;&nbsp;<a href=3D"http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?ur=
l2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04">http://tools.ietf.org/=
rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04</a><o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Abstract:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned=
 to a particular use<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; but are unused or unoccupied at specific locatio=
ns and times are<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; defined as &quot;white space&quot;.&nbsp;&nbsp;T=
he concept of allowing additional<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; transmissions (which may or may not be licensed)=
 in white space is a<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; technique to &amp;quot;unlock&amp;quot; existing=
 spectrum for new use.&nbsp;&nbsp;An obvious<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; requirement is that these additional transmissio=
ns do not interfere<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; with the assigned use of the spectrum.&nbsp;&nbs=
p;One approach to using the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; white space spectrum at a given time and locatio=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; database for available channels.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; This document describes the concept of TV White =
Spaces.&nbsp;&nbsp;It also<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; describes the problems that need to be addressed=
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;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; information about the channel availability at an=
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Gabor

I will review the use cases and requirements document against the latest UK=
 Ofcom requirements and send comments to the list, possibly this week.

Regards

Andy

From: paws-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Gab=
or.Bajko@nokia.com
Sent: 07 June 2012 16:40
To: paws@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
s

Folks,

I issued the below 2nd wglc on http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ie=
tf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt
and I only got one review with a comment which is easy to address.

We really need more reviews in order to be able to progress the draft. If y=
ou care about the use cases and requirements related to White Space Databas=
e Access, please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you =
do not have comments, then send a note to the list that the draft is good a=
s it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.

I cannot send the draft to the IESG without a minimum number of reviews. Ie=
, if we don't get reviews, we can't make progress.

Thanks, Gabor

From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org]<mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]> On Behalf Of Bajko Gab=
or (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)
Sent: Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts

Since there were quite a few changes made to the new version -04, let's hav=
e another WGLC for this document.

Therefore, I'd like to initiate a 2nd WG Last Call for comments on http://w=
ww.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.=
txt

Please review the draft and send your comments to the list by June 1st, 201=
2.

If you review the draft and have no comments, send a note to the list that =
the draft is good as it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actu=
al comments.

Thanks, Gabor


From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org]<mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]> On Behalf Of Probasco =
Scott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)
Sent: Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] UC&R document

Hello All,

A new version of the Use Cases & Requirements draft has been uploaded. This=
 version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of the issues raised durin=
g Working Group Last Call, including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready=
 to be forwarded to IESG.

Kind Regards,
Raj & Scott

Draft:  http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-=
04.txt

Diff:   http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-u=
secases-rqmts-04

Abstract:
   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use
   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are
   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional
   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a
   technique to &quot;unlock&quot; existing spectrum for new use.  An obvio=
us
   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere
   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the
   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a
   database for available channels.

   This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces.  It also
   describes the problems that need to be addressed to enable white
   space spectrum for additional uses, without causing interference to
   currently assigned use, by querying a database which stores
   information about the channel availability at any given location and
   time.  A number of possible use cases of white space spectrum and
   technology as well as a set of requirements for the database query
   protocol are also described.




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nk=3Dpurple><div class=3DWordSection1><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'f=
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><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";col=
or:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D=
'font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>I will review the use ca=
ses and requirements document against the latest UK Ofcom requirements and =
send comments to the list, possibly this week.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p clas=
s=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F49=
7D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'font-fa=
mily:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
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1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'fon=
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<span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-ser=
if"'>From:</span></b><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-fami=
ly:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> paws-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.=
org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com<br><b>Sent:</b> 07 June 2012=
 16:40<br><b>To:</b> paws@ietf.org<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC f=
or draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><=
/div><p class=3DMsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span l=
ang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";co=
lor:#1F497D'>Folks,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3D=
EN-US style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1=
F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'=
>I issued the below 2<sup>nd</sup> wglc on <a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/i=
nternet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">http://w=
ww.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.=
txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=
=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>and =
I only got one review with a comment which is easy to address.<o:p></o:p></=
span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;=
font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-f=
amily:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>We really need more reviews in =
order to be able to progress the draft. If you care about the use cases and=
 requirements related to White Space Database Access, please read the draft=
 and send your comments to the list. If you do not have comments, then send=
 a note to the list that the draft is good as it is, we need these notes as=
 much as we need the actual comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNo=
rmal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sa=
ns-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><=
span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-ser=
if";color:#1F497D'>I cannot send the draft to the IESG without a minimum nu=
mber of reviews. Ie, if we don&#8217;t get reviews, we can&#8217;t make pro=
gress.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=
=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p=
>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'fo=
nt-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Thanks, Ga=
bor<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'f=
ont-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbs=
p;</o:p></span></p><div><div style=3D'border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF =
1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=3DMsoNormal><b><span lang=3DEN-US=
 style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span><=
/b><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-=
serif"'> <a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a>=
 <a href=3D"mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]">[mailto:paws-bounces@iet=
f.org]</a> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)<br><b>=
Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM<br><b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paw=
s@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br><b>Subject:</b> [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-=
ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p c=
lass=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3D=
MsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri=
","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Since there were quite a few changes made to =
the new version -04, let&#8217;s have another WGLC for this document.<o:p><=
/o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p><=
/span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:11.0pt=
;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Therefore, I'd like to i=
nitiate a 2<sup>nd</sup> WG Last Call for comments on <a href=3D"http://www=
.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.tx=
t">http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecase=
s-rqmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DE=
N-US style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F=
497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US s=
tyle=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>=
Please review the draft and send your comments to the list by June 1st, 201=
2.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'fo=
nt-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp=
;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>If you review th=
e draft and have no comments, send a note to the list that the draft is goo=
d as it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.<o:p=
></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p=
></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:11.0=
pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Thanks, Gabor<o:p></o:=
p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:11.=
0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></sp=
an></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;fo=
nt-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
><div><div style=3D'border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0p=
t 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=3DMsoNormal><b><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-siz=
e:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span lang=3DEN=
-US style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> <a href=
=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> <a href=3D"mail=
to:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]">[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]</a> <b>On=
 Behalf Of </b>Probasco Scott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)<br><b>Sent:</b> Friday, Ma=
y 11, 2012 11:51 AM<br><b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@iet=
f.org</a><br><b>Subject:</b> [paws] UC&amp;R document<o:p></o:p></span></p>=
</div></div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span=
></p><div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:1=
3.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>Hello All,<o:p></o:p></span></p></d=
iv><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;f=
ont-family:Consolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p></div><div><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:=
Consolas;color:black'>A new version of the Use Cases &amp; Requirements dra=
ft has been uploaded.&nbsp;This version of the Internet Draft has addressed=
 all of the issues raised during Working Group Last Call, including discuss=
ion from IETF #83, and is ready to be forwarded to IESG.<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13=
.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p></div><d=
iv><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-f=
amily:Consolas;color:black'>Kind Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><=
p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-famil=
y:Consolas;color:black'>Raj &amp; Scott<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:=
Consolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMso=
Normal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;co=
lor:black'>Draft: &nbsp;<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paws-p=
roblem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paws-p=
roblem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p cl=
ass=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Co=
nsolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNo=
rmal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;colo=
r:black'>Diff: &nbsp;&nbsp;<a href=3D"http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3D=
draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04">http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdi=
ff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04</a><o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-siz=
e:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p></di=
v><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;fo=
nt-family:Consolas;color:black'>Abstract:<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><=
p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-famil=
y:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; Portions of the radio spectrum that ar=
e assigned to a particular use<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DM=
soNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;=
color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; but are unused or unoccupied at specific location=
s and times are<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&n=
bsp;&nbsp; defined as &quot;white space&quot;.&nbsp;&nbsp;The concept of al=
lowing additional<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><spa=
n lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>=
&nbsp;&nbsp; transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white spac=
e is a<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN=
-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp=
; technique to &amp;quot;unlock&amp;quot; existing spectrum for new use.&nb=
sp;&nbsp;An obvious<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><s=
pan lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black=
'>&nbsp;&nbsp; requirement is that these additional transmissions do not in=
terfere<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DE=
N-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbs=
p; with the assigned use of the spectrum.&nbsp;&nbsp;One approach to using =
the<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US=
 style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; w=
hite space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a<o:p></=
o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'=
font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; database fo=
r available channels.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal>=
<span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:bla=
ck'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=
=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;=
&nbsp; This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces.&nbsp;&nbsp;I=
t also<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN=
-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp=
; describes the problems that need to be addressed to enable white<o:p></o:=
p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'fo=
nt-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; space spectru=
m for additional uses, without causing interference to<o:p></o:p></span></p=
></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5=
pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; currently assigned use, b=
y querying a database which stores<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=
=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Conso=
las;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; information about the channel availability at=
 any given location and<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNorma=
l><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:b=
lack'>&nbsp;&nbsp; time.&nbsp;&nbsp;A number of possible use cases of white=
 space spectrum and<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><s=
pan lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black=
'>&nbsp;&nbsp; technology as well as a set of requirements for the database=
 query<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span lang=3DEN=
-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp=
; protocol are also described.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DM=
soNormal><span lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;=
color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><s=
pan lang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black=
'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p></div></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span l=
ang=3DEN-US style=3D'font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";co=
lor:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p></div></div></body></html>=

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We have reviewed the draft and it looks good.   Below are some technical an=
d editorial comments.  Hope these are helpful.

Regards,
-Subir

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Technical:

Section 1.2.1, In Scope:  Page 6:

"2.  Connect to the database using a well-defined access method."

SD> What is the meaning of 'well-defined access method' here?  Then in the =
following bullet point,  it says  'using a well-defined protocol'. May be t=
his is not necessary since the starting sentence of the section says  "The =
protocol will enable".


"As a result, some of the scenarios described in the following section are =
out of scope for this specification (although they might be  addressed by f=
uture specifications)."

SD> It would be good if the 'out of scope' sections are explicitly identifi=
ed.

Section 2.2: Terminology: Page 6:

Database
In the context of white space and cognitive radio technologies, the databas=
e is an entity which contains, but is not limited to, current information a=
bout available spectrum at any given location

SD>  Suggest  modifying the definition like this:

In the context of white space and cognitive radio technologies, the databas=
e is an entity which contains, but is not limited to, current information a=
bout available spectrum at any given location  and time as  required by the=
 regulatory policies.


Page 8:

"White Space Device (WSD)

A device which opportunistically uses some part of white space spectrum.  A=
 white space device can be an access point, base  station, a portable devic=
e or similar.  A white space device may  be required by local regulations t=
o query a database with its location to obtain information about available =
spectrum."

SD> Suggest  adding definition  of `Master Device` and ` Slave Device`  as =
two types of WSDS here and then delete  them from Page 7


-          Master Device WSD
A device   which is required to query the WS Database to find out the avail=
able operating channels.


-          Slave Device WSD
      A device which uses the spectrum made available by a master device an=
d cannot query the  database  directly.



Section 4.1: Page 9

"A complete protocol solution must provide all services that are essential =
to enable the white space paradigm.  Before a white space device can begin =
operating it needs to know what channels are available by sending a query t=
o a white space database for a list of available channels, the white space =
device must first locate or  "discover" a suitable database."

SD> Suggest changing the last sentence like this: "...., the white space de=
vice must have the capability to first locate or discover  a suitable datab=
ase."


Section 4.1.2: Page 11

SD> In Figure 2,   Where is the 'Slave Device'?  Also it may be better just=
 to mention 'Air IF'  instead of 'TDD Air IF'.


Page 15:

Comment: In some use case it says 'Dev' and other use cases it says 'Slave =
Dev'. Good to have the consistency.


Section 4.2.3: Page 18

"1. The dual mode (or multi mode) device (3G + TVWS) is connected to a 3G n=
etwork.  The device has contacted a trusted database to discover the list o=
f available TV channels at its current location.  The device has located a =
TVWS master/AP operating on  an available channel and has associated or con=
nected with the TVWS master/AP."

SD>  I got the impression from the above text   that 'The device' refers to=
 the `Slave  WS Dev'  in Figure 5 and it has contacted  the database.  Am I=
 correct?   If so,  the text  needs to be updated to clarify that the slave=
 cannot contact the database directly.


Section 4.2.6:  Page 22:

"7. The slave/user device scans to locate a mobile master transmission, and=
 associates with the mobile master."

SD> Where is the slave device coming from? There is no 'Slave device' in  f=
igure 8?


Section  4.2.7, Page 23:

SD> In Figure 9, there is a connection between Master devices using 'WS Air=
 IF' . Does this mean these devices have both 'Master' and 'Slave' capabili=
ties?  There is no such description and it is hard to understand why this c=
onnection is necessary and its intended purpose.

Section 4.2.8: Page 26:

"7. The slave devices fitted to the machines scan the TV bands to locate th=
e master transmissions, and associate with the master device."

SD> The above step implies to me that all slave devices are connected to Ma=
ster but the Figure 10 does not indicate that.

Section 5: Page 28:

SD>  In Figure it says 'WS device' and it interfaces to the Database direct=
ly . OTH, in all use cases the  interface with the database is coming from =
the 'Master Device'.  It should be consistent. Suggest changing to 'Master =
Device' or WSD Device (Master)'.

Section 5.2 : Page 29:

SD> This section seems to be a duplicate since Section 4.1.1 already covers=
 this.

Section 5.4: Page 29:

"Use of XML for specifying a data model is an attractive option.  The inten=
t is to evaluate the best option that meets the need for use between white =
space devices and databases."

SD> Suggest adding  XML  as an example

Section 6.1: Page 30:

"D.2: The Data Model  MAY  support specifying the regulatory domain and its=
 corresponding data requirements."

SD> This requirement   should be a 'MUST'; if not how will the databases in=
terpret it?  Also in P.2 it says "The protocol MUST support determination o=
f regulatory domain governing its current location".  Unless it is a must, =
P.2 cannot be satisfied, IMO

Page 31:

"D.4:   The Data Model MUST support specifying a manufacturer's serial numb=
er for a master device"

SD>  Suggest deleting ` the master device' at the end.   Since the serial n=
umber is also applicable for slave device.


Page 33:

SD> Q.6 and Q.7 may  be merged.


Section 8: Page 38:

"Threat 8:  Natural disaster resulting in inability to obtain authorization=
 for white space spectrum use by emergency responders"

Last sentence of this section says " The security requirements arising from=
 the above threats are captured  in the requirements of section 6.1."

SD> Not sure I understand the threat model  here. Also it seems that the se=
ction reference is not correct.


=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D

Editorial:

Abstract 2nd paragraph : Page 1
"This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces."

>From the above sentence I got the impression that the main focus of this dr=
aft is to describe the concept of TV white Space which I believe is not.  M=
ay rephrase this or start with the second sentence like: This document desc=
ribes the use cases and requirements of TV White Space and introduces the p=
roblems that need ...."

Section 3.2, Page 8:

"More information about the switch to digital transmission is at : [DTV]."

SD> Delete ':'

Page 17:

If the channel that a slave/user terminal is currently using is not longer =
..

SD> Typo :  'not/no  longer ...'

Page 28:

4.  Address regulatory requirements - Each country will likely have ...

SD> typo:  'likely to have ...'

Page 35:

"Threat 1:  .... A white space database may be operated by a commercial ent=
ity which restricts
access to authorized users. "

SD> May add 'only'  after 'access';  'access to only authorized users.

'Threat 2: A master device discovers a white space database(s) thru which i=
t can query for channel information.'

SD> Typo: 'thru/through'


From: paws-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Gab=
or.Bajko@nokia.com
Sent: Thursday, June 07, 2012 11:40 AM
To: paws@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
s

Folks,

I issued the below 2nd wglc on http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ie=
tf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt
and I only got one review with a comment which is easy to address.

We really need more reviews in order to be able to progress the draft. If y=
ou care about the use cases and requirements related to White Space Databas=
e Access, please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you =
do not have comments, then send a note to the list that the draft is good a=
s it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.

I cannot send the draft to the IESG without a minimum number of reviews. Ie=
, if we don't get reviews, we can't make progress.

Thanks, Gabor

From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)
Sent: Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts

Since there were quite a few changes made to the new version -04, let's hav=
e another WGLC for this document.

Therefore, I'd like to initiate a 2nd WG Last Call for comments on http://w=
ww.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.=
txt

Please review the draft and send your comments to the list by June 1st, 201=
2.

If you review the draft and have no comments, send a note to the list that =
the draft is good as it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actu=
al comments.

Thanks, Gabor


From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org]<mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]> On Behalf Of Probasco =
Scott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)
Sent: Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] UC&R document

Hello All,

A new version of the Use Cases & Requirements draft has been uploaded. This=
 version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of the issues raised durin=
g Working Group Last Call, including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready=
 to be forwarded to IESG.

Kind Regards,
Raj & Scott

Draft:  http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-=
04.txt

Diff:   http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-u=
secases-rqmts-04

Abstract:
   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use
   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are
   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional
   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a
   technique to &quot;unlock&quot; existing spectrum for new use.  An obvio=
us
   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere
   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the
   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a
   database for available channels.

   This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces.  It also
   describes the problems that need to be addressed to enable white
   space spectrum for additional uses, without causing interference to
   currently assigned use, by querying a database which stores
   information about the channel availability at any given location and
   time.  A number of possible use cases of white space spectrum and
   technology as well as a set of requirements for the database query
   protocol are also described.




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ments. &nbsp;Hope these are helpful.
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libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">-Subir
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Technical:
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 1.2.1, In Scop=
e:&nbsp; Page 6:&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;2.&nbsp; Connect t=
o the database using a well-defined access method.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; What is the meanin=
g of &#8216;well-defined access method&#8217; here?&nbsp; Then in the follo=
wing bullet point,&nbsp; it says&nbsp; &#8216;using a well-defined protocol=
&#8217;. May be this is
 not necessary since the starting sentence of the section says &nbsp;&#8220=
;The protocol will enable&#8221;.&nbsp;&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;As a result, some =
of the scenarios described in the following section are out of scope for th=
is specification (although they might be&nbsp; addressed by future
 specifications).&#8221; <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; It would be good i=
f the &#8216;out of scope&#8217; sections are explicitly identified.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 2.2: Terminolo=
gy: Page 6:<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Database<o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">In the context of white s=
pace and cognitive radio technologies, the database is an entity which cont=
ains, but is not limited to, current information about available
 spectrum at any given location&nbsp; <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt;&nbsp; Suggest&nbsp=
; modifying the definition like this:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">In the context of white s=
pace and cognitive radio technologies, the database is an entity which cont=
ains, but is not limited to, current information about available
 spectrum at any given location&nbsp; and time as &nbsp;required by the reg=
ulatory policies.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 8:<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;White Space Device=
 (WSD)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">A device which opportunis=
tically uses some part of white space spectrum.&nbsp; A white space device =
can be an access point, base&nbsp; station, a portable device or similar.&n=
bsp;
 A white space device may&nbsp; be required by local regulations to query a=
 database with its location to obtain information about available spectrum.=
&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Suggest&nbsp; addi=
ng definition&nbsp; of `Master Device` and ` Slave Device`&nbsp; as two typ=
es of WSDS here and then delete&nbsp; them from Page 7<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&q=
uot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><span style=3D"mso-=
list:Ignore">-<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:=
&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Master Device WSD=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">A device&nbsp;&nbsp; whic=
h is required to query the WS Database to find out the available operating =
channels.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
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<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&q=
uot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><span style=3D"mso-=
list:Ignore">-<span style=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;=
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:=
&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Slave Device WSD
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;A device which uses the spectrum made available by a master devi=
ce and cannot query the&nbsp; database&nbsp; directly.<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 4.1: Page 9<o:=
p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;A complete protoco=
l solution must provide all services that are essential to enable the white=
 space paradigm.&nbsp; Before a white space device can begin operating
 it needs to know what channels are available by sending a query to a white=
 space database for a list of available channels, the white space device mu=
st first locate or&nbsp; &quot;discover&quot; a suitable database.&#8221;<o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Suggest changing t=
he last sentence like this: &#8220;&#8230;., the white space device must ha=
ve the capability to first locate or discover&nbsp; a suitable database.&#8=
221;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 4.1.2: Page 11<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; In Figure 2,&nbsp;=
&nbsp; Where is the &#8216;Slave Device&#8217;?&nbsp; Also it may be better=
 just to mention &#8216;Air IF&#8217;&nbsp; instead of &#8216;TDD Air IF&#8=
217;.&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 15:
<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Comment: In some use case=
 it says &#8216;Dev&#8217; and other use cases it says &#8216;Slave Dev&#82=
17;. Good to have the consistency.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 4.2.3: Page 18=
<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;1. The dual mode (=
or multi mode) device (3G &#43; TVWS) is connected to a 3G network.&nbsp; T=
he device has contacted a trusted database to discover the list of availabl=
e
 TV channels at its current location.&nbsp; The device has located a TVWS m=
aster/AP operating on&nbsp; an available channel and has associated or conn=
ected with the TVWS master/AP.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt;&nbsp; I got the im=
pression from the above text&nbsp;&nbsp; that &#8216;The device&#8217; refe=
rs to the `Slave&nbsp; WS Dev&#8217;&nbsp; in Figure 5 and it has contacted=
&nbsp; the database.&nbsp; Am I correct?&nbsp;&nbsp;
 If so, &nbsp;the text&nbsp; needs to be updated to clarify that the slave =
cannot contact the database directly.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 4.2.6:&nbsp; P=
age 22:<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;7. The slave/user =
device scans to locate a mobile master transmission, and associates with th=
e mobile master.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Where is the slave=
 device coming from? There is no &#8216;Slave device&#8217; in&nbsp; figure=
 8?
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section&nbsp; 4.2.7, P=
age 23:
<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; In Figure 9, there=
 is a connection between Master devices using &#8216;WS Air IF&#8217; . Doe=
s this mean these devices have both &#8216;Master&#8217; and &#8216;Slave&#=
8217; capabilities?&nbsp;
 There is no such description and it is hard to understand why this connect=
ion is necessary and its intended purpose.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 4.2.8: Page 26=
:<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;7. The slave devic=
es fitted to the machines scan the TV bands to locate the master transmissi=
ons, and associate with the master device.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; The above step imp=
lies to me that all slave devices are connected to Master but the Figure 10=
 does not indicate that.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 5: Page 28:<o:=
p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt;&nbsp; In Figure it=
 says &#8216;WS device&#8217; and it interfaces to the Database directly . =
OTH, in all use cases the&nbsp; interface with the database is coming from =
the &#8216;Master
 Device&#8217;.&nbsp; It should be consistent. Suggest changing to &#8216;M=
aster Device&#8217; or WSD Device (Master)&#8217;.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 5.2 : Page 29:=
<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; This section seems=
 to be a duplicate since Section 4.1.1 already covers this.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 5.4: Page 29:<=
o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;Use of XML for spe=
cifying a data model is an attractive option.&nbsp; The intent is to evalua=
te the best option that meets the need for use between white space
 devices and databases.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Suggest adding&nbs=
p; XML&nbsp; as an example
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 6.1: Page 30:<=
o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;D.2: The Data Mode=
l&nbsp; MAY&nbsp; support specifying the regulatory domain and its correspo=
nding data requirements.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; This requirement&n=
bsp;&nbsp; should be a &#8216;MUST&#8217;; if not how will the databases in=
terpret it?&nbsp; Also in P.2 it says &#8220;The protocol MUST support dete=
rmination of regulatory
 domain governing its current location&#8221;.&nbsp; Unless it is a must, P=
.2 cannot be satisfied, IMO<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 31:<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;D.4:&nbsp;&nbsp; T=
he Data Model MUST support specifying a manufacturer's serial number for a =
master device&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt;&nbsp; Suggest dele=
ting ` the master device&#8217; at the end.&nbsp;&nbsp; Since the serial nu=
mber is also applicable for slave device.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 33:<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></spa=
n></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Q.6 and Q.7 may&nb=
sp; be merged.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 8: Page 38:<o:=
p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;Threat 8:&nbsp; Na=
tural disaster resulting in inability to obtain authorization for white spa=
ce spectrum use by emergency responders&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Last sentence of this sec=
tion says &#8220; The security requirements arising from the above threats =
are captured&nbsp; in the requirements of section 6.1.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Not sure I underst=
and the threat model&nbsp; here. Also it seems that the section reference i=
s not correct.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Editorial:<o:p></o:p><=
/span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Abstract 2nd paragraph=
 : Page 1<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;This document desc=
ribes the concept of TV White Spaces.&#8221; &nbsp;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">From the above sentence I=
 got the impression that the main focus of this draft is to describe the co=
ncept of TV white Space which I believe is not.&nbsp; May rephrase
 this or start with the second sentence like: This document describes the u=
se cases and requirements of TV White Space and introduces the problems tha=
t need &#8230;.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 3.2, Page 8:<o=
:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;More information a=
bout the switch to digital transmission is at : [DTV].&#8221;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Delete &#8216;:&#8=
217;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 17:
<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">If the channel that a sla=
ve/user terminal is currently using is not longer ..<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Typo :&nbsp; &#821=
6;not/no&nbsp; longer &#8230;&#8217;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 28:<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">4.&nbsp; Address regulato=
ry requirements - Each country will likely have &#8230;<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; typo:&nbsp; &#8216=
;likely to have &#8230;&#8217;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 35:
<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;Threat 1:&nbsp; &#=
8230;. A white space database may be operated by a commercial entity which =
restricts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">access to authorized user=
s. &#8220;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; May add &#8216;onl=
y&#8217;&nbsp; after &#8216;access&#8217;;&nbsp; &#8216;access to only auth=
orized users.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8216;Threat 2: A master=
 device discovers a white space database(s) thru which it can query for cha=
nnel information.&#8217;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Typo: &#8216;thru/=
through&#8217;
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> paws-bou=
nces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, June 07, 2012 11:40 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> paws@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecas=
es-rqmts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Folks,<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I issued the below 2<sup>=
nd</sup> wglc on
<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt=
-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">and I only got one review=
 with a comment which is easy to address.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">We really need more revie=
ws in order to be able to progress the draft. If you care about the use cas=
es and requirements related to White Space Database Access,
 please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you do not ha=
ve comments, then send a note to the list that the draft is good as it is, =
we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I cannot send the draft t=
o the IESG without a minimum number of reviews. Ie, if we don&#8217;t get r=
eviews, we can&#8217;t make progress.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks, Gabor<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">
<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> [<a href=
=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Since there were quite a =
few changes made to the new version -04, let&#8217;s have another WGLC for =
this document.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Therefore, I'd like to in=
itiate a 2<sup>nd</sup> WG Last Call for comments on
<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt=
-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Please review the draft a=
nd send your comments to the list by June 1st, 2012.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">If you review the draft a=
nd have no comments, send a note to the list that the draft is good as it i=
s, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks, Gabor<o:p></o:p><=
/span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">
<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> <a href=
=3D"mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]">
[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]</a> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Probasco Scott (Noki=
a-CIC/Dallas)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [paws] UC&amp;R document<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Hello All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">A new version of the Use Cases &amp; Requirements draft has b=
een uploaded.&nbsp;This version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of =
the issues raised during Working Group Last Call,
 including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready to be forwarded to IESG.<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Kind Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Raj &amp; Scott<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Draft: &nbsp;<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Diff: &nbsp;&nbsp;<a href=3D"http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?ur=
l2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04">http://tools.ietf.org/=
rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04</a><o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Abstract:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned=
 to a particular use<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; but are unused or unoccupied at specific locatio=
ns and times are<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; defined as &quot;white space&quot;.&nbsp;&nbsp;T=
he concept of allowing additional<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; transmissions (which may or may not be licensed)=
 in white space is a<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; technique to &amp;quot;unlock&amp;quot; existing=
 spectrum for new use.&nbsp;&nbsp;An obvious<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; requirement is that these additional transmissio=
ns do not interfere<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; with the assigned use of the spectrum.&nbsp;&nbs=
p;One approach to using the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; white space spectrum at a given time and locatio=
n is to verify with a<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; database for available channels.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; This document describes the concept of TV White =
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Gabor, all,

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I have reviewed the document and I think it is in very good shape. These
are some minor comments I have:

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Abstract

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Even though TV bands are currently the primary applications for PAWS,
the protocol could be applicable to other bands. Hence, I would suggest
removing "TV" from the second paragraph of the Abstract.

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Section 1.1

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Multiple examples are provided throughout this section. Some are inside
parenthesis, some are preceded by "e.g." and some are not. I would
suggest keeping a common writing style when providing these examples.

=20

Replace "...such as antenna height, and sometimes power." by "...such as
antenna height and power."

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Section 1.2.1

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Replace "...basic service in TV white space." by  "...basic service in
white spaces." (or alternatively "...basic service in white space
frequencies.")

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Section 6.1

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P.5 and P.6 could be combined into one single requirement with some
wording similar to the one used in P.7, e.g. "The messages sent by the
master device and database MUST support integrity protection."

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Section 6.2

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I believe there is a preposition missing in O.5: "The master device MUST
obtain an indication 'about' the regulatory domain governing
operation..."

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Regards,

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Juan Carlos

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From: paws-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com
Sent: Thursday, June 07, 2012 11:40 AM
To: paws@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for
draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts

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Folks,

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I issued the below 2nd wglc on
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecase
s-rqmts-04.txt

and I only got one review with a comment which is easy to address.

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We really need more reviews in order to be able to progress the draft.
If you care about the use cases and requirements related to White Space
Database Access, please read the draft and send your comments to the
list. If you do not have comments, then send a note to the list that the
draft is good as it is, we need these notes as much as we need the
actual comments.

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I cannot send the draft to the IESG without a minimum number of reviews.
Ie, if we don't get reviews, we can't make progress.

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Thanks, Gabor

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From: paws-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)
Sent: Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM
To: paws@ietf.org
Subject: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts

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Since there were quite a few changes made to the new version -04, let's
have another WGLC for this document.

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Therefore, I'd like to initiate a 2nd WG Last Call for comments on
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecase
s-rqmts-04.txt

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Please review the draft and send your comments to the list by June 1st,
2012.

=20

If you review the draft and have no comments, send a note to the list
that the draft is good as it is, we need these notes as much as we need
the actual comments.

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Thanks, Gabor

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From: paws-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
Probasco Scott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)
Sent: Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM
To: paws@ietf.org
Subject: [paws] UC&R document

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Hello All,

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A new version of the Use Cases & Requirements draft has been uploaded.
This version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of the issues
raised during Working Group Last Call, including discussion from IETF
#83, and is ready to be forwarded to IESG.

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Kind Regards,

Raj & Scott

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Draft:
http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.tx
t

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Diff:
http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecase=
s
-rqmts-04

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Abstract:

   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use

   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are

   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional

   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a

   technique to &quot;unlock&quot; existing spectrum for new use.  An
obvious

   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere

   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the

   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a

   database for available channels.

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   This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces.  It also

   describes the problems that need to be addressed to enable white

   space spectrum for additional uses, without causing interference to

   currently assigned use, by querying a database which stores

   information about the channel availability at any given location and

   time.  A number of possible use cases of white space spectrum and

   technology as well as a set of requirements for the database query

   protocol are also described.

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the master device and database MUST support integrity =
protection.&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal =
style=3D'margin-left:.5in'><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal =
style=3D'margin-left:5.25pt'><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>Section 6.2<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal =
style=3D'margin-left:5.25pt'><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal =
style=3D'margin-left:.5in'><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>I believe there is a preposition missing in O.5: &#8220;The master =
device MUST obtain an indication &#8216;about&#8217; the regulatory =
domain governing operation&#8230;&#8221;<o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoNormal style=3D'margin-left:.5in'><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal =
style=3D'margin-left:.5in'><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal =
style=3D'margin-left:.5in'><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal =
style=3D'margin-left:5.25pt'><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal =
style=3D'margin-left:5.25pt'><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal =
style=3D'margin-left:5.25pt'><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>Juan Carlos<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal =
style=3D'margin-left:5.25pt'><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><div =
style=3D'border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in =
4.0pt'><div><div style=3D'border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF =
1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=3DMsoNormal><b><span =
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span>=
</b><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> =
paws-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org] <b>On Behalf Of =
</b>Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com<br><b>Sent:</b> Thursday, June 07, 2012 11:40 =
AM<br><b>To:</b> paws@ietf.org<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC =
for =
draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></=
div><p class=3DMsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>Folks,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>I issued the below 2<sup>nd</sup> wglc on <a =
href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-=
usecases-rqmts-04.txt">http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>and I only got one review with a comment which is easy to =
address.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>We really need more reviews in order to be able to progress the =
draft. If you care about the use cases and requirements related to White =
Space Database Access, please read the draft and send your comments to =
the list. If you do not have comments, then send a note to the list that =
the draft is good as it is, we need these notes as much as we need the =
actual comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>I cannot send the draft to the IESG without a minimum number of =
reviews. Ie, if we don&#8217;t get reviews, we can&#8217;t make =
progress.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>Thanks, Gabor<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><div><div =
style=3D'border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in'><p class=3DMsoNormal><b><span =
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span>=
</b><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> =
paws-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org] <b>On Behalf Of =
</b>Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)<br><b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May =
15, 2012 5:50 PM<br><b>To:</b> paws@ietf.org<br><b>Subject:</b> [paws] =
2nd WGLC for =
draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></=
div><p class=3DMsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>Since there were quite a few changes made to the new version -04, =
let&#8217;s have another WGLC for this document.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>Therefore, I'd like to initiate a 2<sup>nd</sup> WG Last Call for =
comments on <a =
href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-=
usecases-rqmts-04.txt">http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>Please review the draft and send your comments to the list by June =
1st, 2012.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>If you review the draft and have no comments, send a note to the list =
that the draft is good as it is, we need these notes as much as we need =
the actual comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'>Thanks, Gabor<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497=
D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p><div><div =
style=3D'border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in'><p class=3DMsoNormal><b><span =
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span>=
</b><span style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> =
<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> <a =
href=3D"mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]">[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.=
org]</a> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Probasco Scott =
(Nokia-CIC/Dallas)<br><b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 =
AM<br><b>To:</b> <a =
href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br><b>Subject:</b> =
[paws] UC&amp;R document<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p><div><div><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>Hello =
All,<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>A new =
version of the Use Cases &amp; Requirements draft has been =
uploaded.&nbsp;This version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of =
the issues raised during Working Group Last Call, including discussion =
from IETF #83, and is ready to be forwarded to =
IESG.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>Kind =
Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>Raj &amp; =
Scott<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>Draft: =
&nbsp;<a =
href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
s-04.txt">http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rq=
mts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>Diff: =
&nbsp;&nbsp;<a =
href=3D"http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt=
-usecases-rqmts-04">http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-=
problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04</a><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>Abstract:<o:p=
></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular =
use<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times =
are<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
defined as &quot;white space&quot;.&nbsp;&nbsp;The concept of allowing =
additional<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is =
a<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
technique to &amp;quot;unlock&amp;quot; existing spectrum for new =
use.&nbsp;&nbsp;An obvious<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
requirement is that these additional transmissions do not =
interfere<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
with the assigned use of the spectrum.&nbsp;&nbsp;One approach to using =
the<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with =
a<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
database for available channels.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces.&nbsp;&nbsp;It =
also<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
describes the problems that need to be addressed to enable =
white<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
space spectrum for additional uses, without causing interference =
to<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
currently assigned use, by querying a database which =
stores<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
information about the channel availability at any given location =
and<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
time.&nbsp;&nbsp;A number of possible use cases of white space spectrum =
and<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
technology as well as a set of requirements for the database =
query<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'>&nbsp;&nbsp; =
protocol are also described.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p =
class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas;color:black'><o:p>&nbsp;</=
o:p></span></p></div></div><div><p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black'=
><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p></div></div></div></body></html>
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Hello Subir,

Thank you for reviewing the draft and providing comments. I have addressed =
each of your comments, please see below (MSP->) for further information.

Kind Regards,
Scott


From: "ext Das, Subir" <sdas@appcomsci.com<mailto:sdas@appcomsci.com>>
Date: Wed, 13 Jun 2012 03:28:39 +0000
To: Gabor Bajko <Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com<mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com>>, "paw=
s@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>" <paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>>
Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
s

We have reviewed the draft and it looks good.   Below are some technical an=
d editorial comments.  Hope these are helpful.

Regards,
-Subir

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Technical:

Section 1.2.1, In Scope:  Page 6:

=932.  Connect to the database using a well-defined access method.=94

SD> What is the meaning of =91well-defined access method=92 here?  Then in =
the following bullet point,  it says  =91using a well-defined protocol=92. =
May be this is not necessary since the starting sentence of the section say=
s  =93The protocol will enable=94.
MSP->These terms refer to the completed PAWS protocol.


=93As a result, some of the scenarios described in the following section ar=
e out of scope for this specification (although they might be  addressed by=
 future specifications).=94

SD> It would be good if the =91out of scope=92 sections are explicitly iden=
tified.
MSP->I have removed the sentence citing 'out of scope'.

Section 2.2: Terminology: Page 6:

Database
In the context of white space and cognitive radio technologies, the databas=
e is an entity which contains, but is not limited to, current information a=
bout available spectrum at any given location

SD>  Suggest  modifying the definition like this:

In the context of white space and cognitive radio technologies, the databas=
e is an entity which contains, but is not limited to, current information a=
bout available spectrum at any given location  and time as  required by the=
 regulatory policies.
MSP->I have modified the definition based on your proposal.

Page 8:

=93White Space Device (WSD)

A device which opportunistically uses some part of white space spectrum.  A=
 white space device can be an access point, base  station, a portable devic=
e or similar.  A white space device may  be required by local regulations t=
o query a database with its location to obtain information about available =
spectrum.=94

SD> Suggest  adding definition  of `Master Device` and ` Slave Device`  as =
two types of WSDS here and then delete  them from Page 7


-          Master Device WSD
A device   which is required to query the WS Database to find out the avail=
able operating channels.


-          Slave Device WSD
      A device which uses the spectrum made available by a master device an=
d cannot query the  database  directly.
MSP-> I have updated the definition of Slave Device based on your text abov=
e. I have left the definitions as stand-alone definitions rather than placi=
ng them under "White Space Device (WSD)" as the definitions are listed alph=
abetically.


Section 4.1: Page 9

=93A complete protocol solution must provide all services that are essentia=
l to enable the white space paradigm.  Before a white space device can begi=
n operating it needs to know what channels are available by sending a query=
 to a white space database for a list of available channels, the white spac=
e device must first locate or  "discover" a suitable database.=94

SD> Suggest changing the last sentence like this: =93=85., the white space =
device must have the capability to first locate or discover  a suitable dat=
abase.=94
MSP->I have implemented your proposal.


Section 4.1.2: Page 11

SD> In Figure 2,   Where is the =91Slave Device=92?  Also it may be better =
just to mention =91Air IF=92  instead of =91TDD Air IF=92.
MSP->There is no slave device since only the Master Device registers with t=
he database. I have removed "TDD" from the figure.


Page 15:

Comment: In some use case it says =91Dev=92 and other use cases it says =91=
Slave Dev=92. Good to have the consistency.
MSP->I have made changes in 4.2.1 step 6 & 9.


Section 4.2.3: Page 18

=931. The dual mode (or multi mode) device (3G + TVWS) is connected to a 3G=
 network.  The device has contacted a trusted database to discover the list=
 of available TV channels at its current location.  The device has located =
a TVWS master/AP operating on  an available channel and has associated or c=
onnected with the TVWS master/AP.=94

SD>  I got the impression from the above text   that =91The device=92 refer=
s to the `Slave  WS Dev=92  in Figure 5 and it has contacted  the database.=
  Am I correct?   If so,  the text  needs to be updated to clarify that the=
 slave cannot contact the database directly.
MSP->I have removed the text describing the slave device contacting the dat=
abase.


Section 4.2.6:  Page 22:

=937. The slave/user device scans to locate a mobile master transmission, a=
nd associates with the mobile master.=94

SD> Where is the slave device coming from? There is no =91Slave device=92 i=
n  figure 8?
MSP->I have added a slave device to Figure 8 and clarified in step 6 that m=
aster-master communications are possible outside the scope of PAWS.


Section  4.2.7, Page 23:

SD> In Figure 9, there is a connection between Master devices using =91WS A=
ir IF=92 . Does this mean these devices have both =91Master=92 and =91Slave=
=92 capabilities?  There is no such description and it is hard to understan=
d why this connection is necessary and its intended purpose.
MSP->This capability is described in the first paragraph under 4.2.7. I hav=
e clarified in step 6 that master-master communications are possible outsid=
e the scope of PAWS.

Section 4.2.8: Page 26:

=937. The slave devices fitted to the machines scan the TV bands to locate =
the master transmissions, and associate with the master device.=94

SD> The above step implies to me that all slave devices are connected to Ma=
ster but the Figure 10 does not indicate that.
MSP->The first paragraph in 4.2.8 does specify that each slave device is un=
der control of a master device.

Section 5: Page 28:

SD>  In Figure it says =91WS device=92 and it interfaces to the Database di=
rectly . OTH, in all use cases the  interface with the database is coming f=
rom the =91Master Device=92.  It should be consistent. Suggest changing to =
=91Master Device=92 or WSD Device (Master)=92.
MSP->I have updated Figure 11 to "Master" WS Device.

Section 5.2 : Page 29:

SD> This section seems to be a duplicate since Section 4.1.1 already covers=
 this.
MSP->This section is relevant to the Problem Statement (Chapter 5) and shou=
ld be kept.

Section 5.4: Page 29:

=93Use of XML for specifying a data model is an attractive option.  The int=
ent is to evaluate the best option that meets the need for use between whit=
e space devices and databases.=94

SD> Suggest adding  XML  as an example
MSP->Examples are nice, however as we are concluding the 2nd WGLC I propose=
 to leave this as written.

Section 6.1: Page 30:

=93D.2: The Data Model  MAY  support specifying the regulatory domain and i=
ts corresponding data requirements.=94

SD> This requirement   should be a =91MUST=92; if not how will the database=
s interpret it?  Also in P.2 it says =93The protocol MUST support determina=
tion of regulatory domain governing its current location=94.  Unless it is =
a must, P.2 cannot be satisfied, IMO
MSP->Changed D.2 to MUST.

Page 31:

=93D.4:   The Data Model MUST support specifying a manufacturer's serial nu=
mber for a master device=94

SD>  Suggest deleting ` the master device=92 at the end.   Since the serial=
 number is also applicable for slave device.
MSP->Changed 'master' to 'white space'


Page 33:

SD> Q.6 and Q.7 may  be merged.
MSP->Merged O.6 and O.7


Section 8: Page 38:

=93Threat 8:  Natural disaster resulting in inability to obtain authorizati=
on for white space spectrum use by emergency responders=94

Last sentence of this section says =93 The security requirements arising fr=
om the above threats are captured  in the requirements of section 6.1.=94

SD> Not sure I understand the threat model  here. Also it seems that the se=
ction reference is not correct.
MSP->Section 6.1 is Normative Requirements, and contain the requirements ag=
reed as result of the threat model.


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Editorial:
MSP->I have included the editorial corrections.

Abstract 2nd paragraph : Page 1
=93This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces.=94

>From the above sentence I got the impression that the main focus of this dr=
aft is to describe the concept of TV white Space which I believe is not.  M=
ay rephrase this or start with the second sentence like: This document desc=
ribes the use cases and requirements of TV White Space and introduces the p=
roblems that need =85.=94

Section 3.2, Page 8:

=93More information about the switch to digital transmission is at : [DTV].=
=94

SD> Delete =91:=92

Page 17:

If the channel that a slave/user terminal is currently using is not longer =
..

SD> Typo :  =91not/no  longer =85=92

Page 28:

4.  Address regulatory requirements - Each country will likely have =85

SD> typo:  =91likely to have =85=92

Page 35:

=93Threat 1:  =85. A white space database may be operated by a commercial e=
ntity which restricts
access to authorized users. =93

SD> May add =91only=92  after =91access=92;  =91access to only authorized u=
sers.

=91Threat 2: A master device discovers a white space database(s) thru which=
 it can query for channel information.=92

SD> Typo: =91thru/through=92


From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com<mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.c=
om>
Sent: Thursday, June 07, 2012 11:40 AM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
s

Folks,

I issued the below 2nd wglc on http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ie=
tf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt
and I only got one review with a comment which is easy to address.

We really need more reviews in order to be able to progress the draft. If y=
ou care about the use cases and requirements related to White Space Databas=
e Access, please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you =
do not have comments, then send a note to the list that the draft is good a=
s it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.

I cannot send the draft to the IESG without a minimum number of reviews. Ie=
, if we don=92t get reviews, we can=92t make progress.

Thanks, Gabor

From:paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-bounc=
es@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)
Sent: Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts

Since there were quite a few changes made to the new version -04, let=92s h=
ave another WGLC for this document.

Therefore, I'd like to initiate a 2nd WG Last Call for comments on http://w=
ww.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.=
txt

Please review the draft and send your comments to the list by June 1st, 201=
2.

If you review the draft and have no comments, send a note to the list that =
the draft is good as it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actu=
al comments.

Thanks, Gabor


From:paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-bounc=
es@ietf.org]<mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]> On Behalf Of Probasco S=
cott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)
Sent: Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] UC&R document

Hello All,

A new version of the Use Cases & Requirements draft has been uploaded. This=
 version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of the issues raised durin=
g Working Group Last Call, including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready=
 to be forwarded to IESG.

Kind Regards,
Raj & Scott

Draft:  http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-=
04.txt

Diff:   http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-u=
secases-rqmts-04

Abstract:
   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use
   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are
   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional
   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a
   technique to &quot;unlock&quot; existing spectrum for new use.  An obvio=
us
   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere
   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the
   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a
   database for available channels.

   This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces.  It also
   describes the problems that need to be addressed to enable white
   space spectrum for additional uses, without causing interference to
   currently assigned use, by querying a database which stores
   information about the channel availability at any given location and
   time.  A number of possible use cases of white space spectrum and
   technology as well as a set of requirements for the database query
   protocol are also described.



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<div>Hello Subir,</div>
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<div>Thank you for reviewing the draft and providing comments. I have addre=
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<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
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Page 6:&nbsp;
<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=932.&nbsp; Connect to the databas=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; What is the meaning of =91w=
ell-defined access method=92 here?&nbsp; Then in the following bullet point=
,&nbsp; it says&nbsp; =91using a well-defined protocol=92. May
 be this is not necessary since the starting sentence of the section says &=
nbsp;=93The protocol will enable=94.&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;These terms refer to the completed PAWS protocol.</div>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=93As a result, some of the scenar=
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 by future specifications).=94 <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;I have removed the sentence citing 'out of scope'.</div>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73=
, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section 2.2: Terminology: Page =
6:<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Database<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">In the context of white space and =
cognitive radio technologies, the database is an entity which contains, but=
 is not limited to, current information
 about available spectrum at any given location&nbsp; <o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt;&nbsp; Suggest&nbsp; modifyi=
ng the definition like this:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">In the context of white space and =
cognitive radio technologies, the database is an entity which contains, but=
 is not limited to, current information
 about available spectrum at any given location&nbsp; and time as &nbsp;req=
uired by the regulatory policies.</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;I have modified the definition based on your proposal.</div>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Page 8:<o:p></o:p></span></b></=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=93White Space Device (WSD)<o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">A device which opportunistically u=
ses some part of white space spectrum.&nbsp; A white space device can be an=
 access point, base&nbsp; station, a portable
 device or similar.&nbsp; A white space device may&nbsp; be required by loc=
al regulations to query a database with its location to obtain information =
about available spectrum.=94<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; Suggest&nbsp; adding defini=
tion&nbsp; of `Master Device` and ` Slave Device`&nbsp; as two types of WSD=
S here and then delete&nbsp; them from Page 7<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo1"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&qu=
ot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">-<span s=
tyle=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125=
); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Master Device WSD<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">A device&nbsp;&nbsp; which is requ=
ired to query the WS Database to find out the available operating channels.=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level=
1 lfo1"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&qu=
ot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><span style=3D"mso-list:Ignore">-<span s=
tyle=3D"font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nb=
sp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125=
); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Slave Device WSD
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbs=
p;A device which uses the spectrum made available by a master device and ca=
nnot query the&nbsp; database&nbsp; directly.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt; I have updated the definition of Slave Device based on your t=
ext above. I have left the definitions as stand-alone definitions rather th=
an placing them under &quot;White Space Device (WSD)&quot; as the definitio=
ns are listed alphabetically.</div>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73=
, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section 4.1: Page 9<o:p></o:p><=
/span></b></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=93A complete protocol solution mu=
st provide all services that are essential to enable the white space paradi=
gm.&nbsp; Before a white space device can begin
 operating it needs to know what channels are available by sending a query =
to a white space database for a list of available channels, the white space=
 device must first locate or&nbsp; &quot;discover&quot; a suitable database=
.=94<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; Suggest changing the last s=
entence like this: =93=85., the white space device must have the capability=
 to first locate or discover&nbsp; a suitable database.=94</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;I have implemented your proposal.&nbsp;</div>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section 4.1.2: Page 11<o:p></o:p><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; In Figure 2,&nbsp;&nbsp; Wh=
ere is the =91Slave Device=92?&nbsp; Also it may be better just to mention =
=91Air IF=92&nbsp; instead of =91TDD Air IF=92.&nbsp;</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;There is no slave device since only the Master Device register=
s with the database. I have removed &quot;TDD&quot; from the figure.</div>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Page 15:
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Comment: In some use case it says =
=91Dev=92 and other use cases it says =91Slave Dev=92. Good to have the con=
sistency.</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;I have made changes in 4.2.1 step 6 &amp; 9.</div>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section 4.2.3: Page 18<o:p></o:=
p></span></b></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=931. The dual mode (or multi mode=
) device (3G &#43; TVWS) is connected to a 3G network.&nbsp; The device has=
 contacted a trusted database to discover the list
 of available TV channels at its current location.&nbsp; The device has loc=
ated a TVWS master/AP operating on&nbsp; an available channel and has assoc=
iated or connected with the TVWS master/AP.=94<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt;&nbsp; I got the impression =
from the above text&nbsp;&nbsp; that =91The device=92 refers to the `Slave&=
nbsp; WS Dev=92&nbsp; in Figure 5 and it has contacted&nbsp; the database.&=
nbsp;
 Am I correct?&nbsp;&nbsp; If so, &nbsp;the text&nbsp; needs to be updated =
to clarify that the slave cannot contact the database directly.</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;I have removed the text describing the slave device contacting=
 the database.</div>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section 4.2.6:&nbsp; Page 22:<o=
:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=937. The slave/user device scans =
to locate a mobile master transmission, and associates with the mobile mast=
er.=94<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; Where is the slave device c=
oming from? There is no =91Slave device=92 in&nbsp; figure 8?</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;I have added a slave device to Figure 8 and clarified in step =
6 that master-master communications are possible outside the scope of PAWS.=
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section&nbsp; 4.2.7, Page 23:
<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></b></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; In Figure 9, there is a con=
nection between Master devices using =91WS Air IF=92 . Does this mean these=
 devices have both =91Master=92 and =91Slave=92 capabilities?&nbsp;
 There is no such description and it is hard to understand why this connect=
ion is necessary and its intended purpose.</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;This capability is described in the first paragraph under 4.2.=
7. I have clarified in step 6 that master-master communications are possibl=
e outside the scope of PAWS.</div>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section 4.2.8: Page 26:<o:p></o=
:p></span></b></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=937. The slave devices fitted to =
the machines scan the TV bands to locate the master transmissions, and asso=
ciate with the master device.=94<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; The above step implies to m=
e that all slave devices are connected to Master but the Figure 10 does not=
 indicate that.</span></p>
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</div>
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<div>MSP-&gt;The first paragraph in 4.2.8 does specify that each slave devi=
ce is under control of a master device.</div>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section 5: Page 28:<o:p></o:p><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt;&nbsp; In Figure it says =91=
WS device=92 and it interfaces to the Database directly . OTH, in all use c=
ases the&nbsp; interface with the database is coming
 from the =91Master Device=92.&nbsp; It should be consistent. Suggest chang=
ing to =91Master Device=92 or WSD Device (Master)=92.</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;I have updated Figure 11 to &quot;Master&quot; WS Device.</div=
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section 5.2 : Page 29:<o:p></o:=
p></span></b></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; This section seems to be a =
duplicate since Section 4.1.1 already covers this.</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;This section is relevant to the Problem Statement (Chapter 5) =
and should be kept.</div>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section 5.4: Page 29:<o:p></o:p=
></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=93Use of XML for specifying a dat=
a model is an attractive option.&nbsp; The intent is to evaluate the best o=
ption that meets the need for use between white
 space devices and databases.=94<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; Suggest adding&nbsp; XML&nb=
sp; as an example</span></p>
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</div>
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<div>MSP-&gt;Examples are nice, however as we are concluding the 2nd WGLC I=
 propose to leave this as written.</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section 6.1: Page 30:<o:p></o:p=
></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=93D.2: The Data Model&nbsp; MAY&n=
bsp; support specifying the regulatory domain and its corresponding data re=
quirements.=94<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; This requirement&nbsp;&nbsp=
; should be a =91MUST=92; if not how will the databases interpret it?&nbsp;=
 Also in P.2 it says =93The protocol MUST support determination
 of regulatory domain governing its current location=94.&nbsp; Unless it is=
 a must, P.2 cannot be satisfied, IMO</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;Changed D.2 to MUST.</div>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=93D.4:&nbsp;&nbsp; The Data Model=
 MUST support specifying a manufacturer's serial number for a master device=
=94<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt;&nbsp; Suggest deleting ` th=
e master device=92 at the end.&nbsp;&nbsp; Since the serial number is also =
applicable for slave device.</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;Changed 'master' to 'white space'</div>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></b></p=
>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; Q.6 and Q.7 may&nbsp; be me=
rged.</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;Merged O.6 and O.7</div>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section 8: Page 38:<o:p></o:p><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=93Threat 8:&nbsp; Natural disaste=
r resulting in inability to obtain authorization for white space spectrum u=
se by emergency responders=94<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Last sentence of this section says=
 =93 The security requirements arising from the above threats are captured&=
nbsp; in the requirements of section 6.1.=94<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; Not sure I understand the t=
hreat model&nbsp; here. Also it seems that the section reference is not cor=
rect.</span></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;Section 6.1 is Normative Requirements, and contain the require=
ments agreed as result of the threat model.</div>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73=
, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Editorial:</span></b></p>
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<div>MSP-&gt;I have included the editorial corrections.</div>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73=
, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Abstract 2nd paragraph : Page 1=
<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=93This document describes the con=
cept of TV White Spaces.=94 &nbsp;&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">From the above sentence I got the =
impression that the main focus of this draft is to describe the concept of =
TV white Space which I believe is not.&nbsp;
 May rephrase this or start with the second sentence like: This document de=
scribes the use cases and requirements of TV White Space and introduces the=
 problems that need =85.=94<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73=
, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Section 3.2, Page 8:<o:p></o:p>=
</span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=93More information about the swit=
ch to digital transmission is at : [DTV].=94
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; Delete =91:=92<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">If the channel that a slave/user t=
erminal is currently using is not longer ..<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; Typo :&nbsp; =91not/no&nbsp=
; longer =85=92
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">4.&nbsp; Address regulatory requir=
ements - Each country will likely have =85<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; typo:&nbsp; =91likely to ha=
ve =85=92
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73=
, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Page 35:
<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=93Threat 1:&nbsp; =85. A white sp=
ace database may be operated by a commercial entity which restricts<o:p></o=
:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">access to authorized users. =93<o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; May add =91only=92&nbsp; af=
ter =91access=92;&nbsp; =91access to only authorized users.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">=91Threat 2: A master device disco=
vers a white space database(s) thru which it can query for channel informat=
ion.=92<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">SD&gt; Typo: =91thru/through=92
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Taho=
ma, sans-serif; ">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-fami=
ly: Tahoma, sans-serif; ">
<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> [<a href=
=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b><a href=3D"mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com">Gabor.Bajko@no=
kia.com</a><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, June 07, 2012 11:40 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecas=
es-rqmts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Folks,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">I issued the below 2<sup>nd</sup> =
wglc on
<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt=
-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">and I only got one review with a c=
omment which is easy to address.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">We really need more reviews in ord=
er to be able to progress the draft. If you care about the use cases and re=
quirements related to White Space Database
 Access, please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you d=
o not have comments, then send a note to the list that the draft is good as=
 it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.<o:p></o=
:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">I cannot send the draft to the IES=
G without a minimum number of reviews. Ie, if we don=92t get reviews, we ca=
n=92t make progress.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Thanks, Gabor<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Taho=
ma, sans-serif; ">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-fami=
ly: Tahoma, sans-serif; "><a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bou=
nces@ietf.org</a> [<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">mailto:paws-bou=
nces@ietf.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Since there were quite a few chang=
es made to the new version -04, let=92s have another WGLC for this document=
.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Therefore, I'd like to initiate a =
2<sup>nd</sup> WG Last Call for comments on
<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt=
-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Please review the draft and send y=
our comments to the list by June 1st, 2012.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">If you review the draft and have n=
o comments, send a note to the list that the draft is good as it is, we nee=
d these notes as much as we need the
 actual comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Thanks, Gabor<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Taho=
ma, sans-serif; ">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-fami=
ly: Tahoma, sans-serif; "><a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bou=
nces@ietf.org</a>
<a href=3D"mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]">[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf=
.org]</a>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Probasco Scott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [paws] UC&amp;R document<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Hello All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">A new version of the Use Cases &amp; Requirements draft has b=
een uploaded.&nbsp;This version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of =
the issues raised during Working Group Last Call,
 including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready to be forwarded to IESG.<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Kind Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Raj &amp; Scott<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Draft: &nbsp;<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Diff: &nbsp;&nbsp;<a href=3D"http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?ur=
l2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04">http://tools.ietf.org/=
rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04</a><o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Abstract:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned=
 to a particular use<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; but are unused or unoccupied at specific locatio=
ns and times are<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; defined as &quot;white space&quot;.&nbsp;&nbsp;T=
he concept of allowing additional<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; transmissions (which may or may not be licensed)=
 in white space is a<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; technique to &amp;quot;unlock&amp;quot; existing=
 spectrum for new use.&nbsp;&nbsp;An obvious<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; requirement is that these additional transmissio=
ns do not interfere<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; with the assigned use of the spectrum.&nbsp;&nbs=
p;One approach to using the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; white space spectrum at a given time and locatio=
n is to verify with a<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; database for available channels.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; This document describes the concept of TV White =
Spaces.&nbsp;&nbsp;It also<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; describes the problems that need to be addressed=
 to enable white<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; space spectrum for additional uses, without caus=
ing interference to<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; currently assigned use, by querying a database w=
hich stores<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; information about the channel availability at an=
y given location and<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; time.&nbsp;&nbsp;A number of possible use cases =
of white space spectrum and<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; technology as well as a set of requirements for =
the database query<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; protocol are also described.<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: black; font=
-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
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Hello Juan Carlos,

Thank you for reviewing the draft and providing comments. I have addressed =
each of your comments, please see below (MSP->) for further information.

Kind Regards,
Scott

From: Juan Zuniga <JuanCarlos.Zuniga@InterDigital.com<mailto:JuanCarlos.Zun=
iga@InterDigital.com>>
Date: Thu, 14 Jun 2012 17:17:19 -0400
To: Gabor Bajko <Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com<mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com>>, "paw=
s@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>" <paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>>
Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
s

Gabor, all,

I have reviewed the document and I think it is in very good shape. These ar=
e some minor comments I have:


Abstract

Even though TV bands are currently the primary applications for PAWS, the p=
rotocol could be applicable to other bands. Hence, I would suggest removing=
 =93TV=94 from the second paragraph of the Abstract.
MSP->This section has received some changes based on comments from Subir. "=
TV" is still in the abstract, but in a lower priority. Recall that we had d=
iscussion on the email reflector whether to remove 'TV' or not, with the re=
sult that many instances were removed, but some remain.

Section 1.1

Multiple examples are provided throughout this section. Some are inside par=
enthesis, some are preceded by =93e.g.=94 and some are not. I would suggest=
 keeping a common writing style when providing these examples.

Replace =93=85such as antenna height, and sometimes power.=94 by =93=85such=
 as antenna height and power.=94
MSP->Agree, made the changes to the section.

Section 1.2.1

Replace =93=85basic service in TV white space.=94 by  =93=85basic service i=
n white spaces.=94 (or alternatively =93=85basic service in white space fre=
quencies.=94)
MSP->Agree, made the change.

Section 6.1

P.5 and P.6 could be combined into one single requirement with some wording=
 similar to the one used in P.7, e.g. =93The messages sent by the master de=
vice and database MUST support integrity protection.=94
MSP->Agree, combined P.5 and P.5

Section 6.2

I believe there is a preposition missing in O.5: =93The master device MUST =
obtain an indication =91about=92 the regulatory domain governing operation=
=85=94
MSP->Agree, made the change.



Regards,

Juan Carlos


From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com<mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.c=
om>
Sent: Thursday, June 07, 2012 11:40 AM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
s

Folks,

I issued the below 2nd wglc on http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ie=
tf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt
and I only got one review with a comment which is easy to address.

We really need more reviews in order to be able to progress the draft. If y=
ou care about the use cases and requirements related to White Space Databas=
e Access, please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you =
do not have comments, then send a note to the list that the draft is good a=
s it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.

I cannot send the draft to the IESG without a minimum number of reviews. Ie=
, if we don=92t get reviews, we can=92t make progress.

Thanks, Gabor

From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)
Sent: Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts

Since there were quite a few changes made to the new version -04, let=92s h=
ave another WGLC for this document.

Therefore, I'd like to initiate a 2nd WG Last Call for comments on http://w=
ww.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.=
txt

Please review the draft and send your comments to the list by June 1st, 201=
2.

If you review the draft and have no comments, send a note to the list that =
the draft is good as it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actu=
al comments.

Thanks, Gabor


From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org]<mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]> On Behalf Of Probasco =
Scott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)
Sent: Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] UC&R document

Hello All,

A new version of the Use Cases & Requirements draft has been uploaded. This=
 version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of the issues raised durin=
g Working Group Last Call, including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready=
 to be forwarded to IESG.

Kind Regards,
Raj & Scott

Draft:  http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-=
04.txt

Diff:   http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-u=
secases-rqmts-04

Abstract:
   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use
   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are
   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional
   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a
   technique to &quot;unlock&quot; existing spectrum for new use.  An obvio=
us
   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere
   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the
   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a
   database for available channels.

   This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces.  It also
   describes the problems that need to be addressed to enable white
   space spectrum for additional uses, without causing interference to
   currently assigned use, by querying a database which stores
   information about the channel availability at any given location and
   time.  A number of possible use cases of white space spectrum and
   technology as well as a set of requirements for the database query
   protocol are also described.



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<div>Thank you for reviewing the draft and providing comments. I have addre=
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 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Multipl=
e examples are provided throughout this section. Some are inside parenthesi=
s, some are preceded by =93e.g.=94 and some
 are not. I would suggest keeping a common writing style when providing the=
se examples.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Replace=
 =93=85such as antenna height, and sometimes power.=94 by =93=85such as ant=
enna height and power.=94</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div>MSP-&gt;Agree, made the changes to the section.</div>
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soft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" x=
mlns:x=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:excel" xmlns:p=3D"urn:schemas-mi=
crosoft-com:office:powerpoint" xmlns:a=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:=
access" xmlns:dt=3D"uuid:C2F41010-65B3-11d1-A29F-00AA00C14882" xmlns:s=3D"u=
uid:BDC6E3F0-6DA3-11d1-A2A3-00AA00C14882" xmlns:rs=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft=
-com:rowset" xmlns:z=3D"#RowsetSchema" xmlns:b=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com=
:office:publisher" xmlns:ss=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:spreadsheet=
" xmlns:c=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:component:spreadsheet" xmlns:=
odc=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:odc" xmlns:oa=3D"urn:schemas-micros=
oft-com:office:activation" xmlns:html=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40" x=
mlns:q=3D"http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/soap/envelope/" xmlns:rtc=3D"http://mi=
crosoft.com/officenet/conferencing" xmlns:d=3D"DAV:" xmlns:repl=3D"http://s=
chemas.microsoft.com/repl/" xmlns:mt=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharep=
oint/soap/meetings/" xmlns:x2=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/excel/=
2003/xml" xmlns:ppda=3D"http://www.passport.com/NameSpace.xsd" xmlns:ois=3D=
"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/ois/" xmlns:dir=3D"http://sch=
emas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/directory/" xmlns:ds=3D"http://www.w3.or=
g/2000/09/xmldsig#" xmlns:dsp=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/ds=
p" xmlns:udc=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc" xmlns:xsd=3D"http://=
www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema" xmlns:sub=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharep=
oint/soap/2002/1/alerts/" xmlns:ec=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/04/xmlenc#" xm=
lns:sp=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/" xmlns:sps=3D"http://sch=
emas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/" xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XM=
LSchema-instance" xmlns:udcs=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc/soap"=
 xmlns:udcxf=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc/xmlfile" xmlns:udcp2p=
=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc/parttopart" xmlns:wf=3D"http://sc=
hemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/workflow/" xmlns:dsss=3D"http://schemas=
.microsoft.com/office/2006/digsig-setup" xmlns:dssi=3D"http://schemas.micro=
soft.com/office/2006/digsig" xmlns:mdssi=3D"http://schemas.openxmlformats.o=
rg/package/2006/digital-signature" xmlns:mver=3D"http://schemas.openxmlform=
ats.org/markup-compatibility/2006" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/=
office/2004/12/omml" xmlns:mrels=3D"http://schemas.openxmlformats.org/packa=
ge/2006/relationships" xmlns:spwp=3D"http://microsoft.com/sharepoint/webpar=
tpages" xmlns:ex12t=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/exchange/services/2006/=
types" xmlns:ex12m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/exchange/services/2006/m=
essages" xmlns:pptsl=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/SlideL=
ibrary/" xmlns:spsl=3D"http://microsoft.com/webservices/SharePointPortalSer=
ver/PublishedLinksService" xmlns:st=3D"&#1;" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/=
REC-html40">
<div lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"blue" vlink=3D"purple">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Secti=
on 1.2.1<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>=
&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Replace=
 =93=85basic service in TV white space.=94 by &nbsp;=93=85basic service in =
white spaces.=94 (or alternatively =93=85basic service in white
 space frequencies.=94)</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div>MSP-&gt;Agree, made the change.</div>
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<div xmlns:v=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:vml" xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-micro=
soft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" x=
mlns:x=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:excel" xmlns:p=3D"urn:schemas-mi=
crosoft-com:office:powerpoint" xmlns:a=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:=
access" xmlns:dt=3D"uuid:C2F41010-65B3-11d1-A29F-00AA00C14882" xmlns:s=3D"u=
uid:BDC6E3F0-6DA3-11d1-A2A3-00AA00C14882" xmlns:rs=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft=
-com:rowset" xmlns:z=3D"#RowsetSchema" xmlns:b=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com=
:office:publisher" xmlns:ss=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:spreadsheet=
" xmlns:c=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:component:spreadsheet" xmlns:=
odc=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:odc" xmlns:oa=3D"urn:schemas-micros=
oft-com:office:activation" xmlns:html=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40" x=
mlns:q=3D"http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/soap/envelope/" xmlns:rtc=3D"http://mi=
crosoft.com/officenet/conferencing" xmlns:d=3D"DAV:" xmlns:repl=3D"http://s=
chemas.microsoft.com/repl/" xmlns:mt=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharep=
oint/soap/meetings/" xmlns:x2=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/excel/=
2003/xml" xmlns:ppda=3D"http://www.passport.com/NameSpace.xsd" xmlns:ois=3D=
"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/ois/" xmlns:dir=3D"http://sch=
emas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/directory/" xmlns:ds=3D"http://www.w3.or=
g/2000/09/xmldsig#" xmlns:dsp=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/ds=
p" xmlns:udc=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc" xmlns:xsd=3D"http://=
www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema" xmlns:sub=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharep=
oint/soap/2002/1/alerts/" xmlns:ec=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/04/xmlenc#" xm=
lns:sp=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/" xmlns:sps=3D"http://sch=
emas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/" xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XM=
LSchema-instance" xmlns:udcs=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc/soap"=
 xmlns:udcxf=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc/xmlfile" xmlns:udcp2p=
=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc/parttopart" xmlns:wf=3D"http://sc=
hemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/workflow/" xmlns:dsss=3D"http://schemas=
.microsoft.com/office/2006/digsig-setup" xmlns:dssi=3D"http://schemas.micro=
soft.com/office/2006/digsig" xmlns:mdssi=3D"http://schemas.openxmlformats.o=
rg/package/2006/digital-signature" xmlns:mver=3D"http://schemas.openxmlform=
ats.org/markup-compatibility/2006" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/=
office/2004/12/omml" xmlns:mrels=3D"http://schemas.openxmlformats.org/packa=
ge/2006/relationships" xmlns:spwp=3D"http://microsoft.com/sharepoint/webpar=
tpages" xmlns:ex12t=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/exchange/services/2006/=
types" xmlns:ex12m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/exchange/services/2006/m=
essages" xmlns:pptsl=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/SlideL=
ibrary/" xmlns:spsl=3D"http://microsoft.com/webservices/SharePointPortalSer=
ver/PublishedLinksService" xmlns:st=3D"&#1;" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/=
REC-html40">
<div lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"blue" vlink=3D"purple">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Secti=
on 6.1<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>=
&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">P.5 and=
 P.6 could be combined into one single requirement with some wording simila=
r to the one used in P.7, e.g. =93The messages
 sent by the master device and database MUST support integrity protection.=
=94</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div>MSP-&gt;Agree, combined P.5 and P.5</div>
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soft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" x=
mlns:x=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:excel" xmlns:p=3D"urn:schemas-mi=
crosoft-com:office:powerpoint" xmlns:a=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:=
access" xmlns:dt=3D"uuid:C2F41010-65B3-11d1-A29F-00AA00C14882" xmlns:s=3D"u=
uid:BDC6E3F0-6DA3-11d1-A2A3-00AA00C14882" xmlns:rs=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft=
-com:rowset" xmlns:z=3D"#RowsetSchema" xmlns:b=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com=
:office:publisher" xmlns:ss=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:spreadsheet=
" xmlns:c=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:component:spreadsheet" xmlns:=
odc=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:odc" xmlns:oa=3D"urn:schemas-micros=
oft-com:office:activation" xmlns:html=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40" x=
mlns:q=3D"http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/soap/envelope/" xmlns:rtc=3D"http://mi=
crosoft.com/officenet/conferencing" xmlns:d=3D"DAV:" xmlns:repl=3D"http://s=
chemas.microsoft.com/repl/" xmlns:mt=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharep=
oint/soap/meetings/" xmlns:x2=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/excel/=
2003/xml" xmlns:ppda=3D"http://www.passport.com/NameSpace.xsd" xmlns:ois=3D=
"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/ois/" xmlns:dir=3D"http://sch=
emas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/directory/" xmlns:ds=3D"http://www.w3.or=
g/2000/09/xmldsig#" xmlns:dsp=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/ds=
p" xmlns:udc=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc" xmlns:xsd=3D"http://=
www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema" xmlns:sub=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharep=
oint/soap/2002/1/alerts/" xmlns:ec=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/04/xmlenc#" xm=
lns:sp=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/" xmlns:sps=3D"http://sch=
emas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/" xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XM=
LSchema-instance" xmlns:udcs=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc/soap"=
 xmlns:udcxf=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc/xmlfile" xmlns:udcp2p=
=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc/parttopart" xmlns:wf=3D"http://sc=
hemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/workflow/" xmlns:dsss=3D"http://schemas=
.microsoft.com/office/2006/digsig-setup" xmlns:dssi=3D"http://schemas.micro=
soft.com/office/2006/digsig" xmlns:mdssi=3D"http://schemas.openxmlformats.o=
rg/package/2006/digital-signature" xmlns:mver=3D"http://schemas.openxmlform=
ats.org/markup-compatibility/2006" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/=
office/2004/12/omml" xmlns:mrels=3D"http://schemas.openxmlformats.org/packa=
ge/2006/relationships" xmlns:spwp=3D"http://microsoft.com/sharepoint/webpar=
tpages" xmlns:ex12t=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/exchange/services/2006/=
types" xmlns:ex12m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/exchange/services/2006/m=
essages" xmlns:pptsl=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/SlideL=
ibrary/" xmlns:spsl=3D"http://microsoft.com/webservices/SharePointPortalSer=
ver/PublishedLinksService" xmlns:st=3D"&#1;" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/=
REC-html40">
<div lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"blue" vlink=3D"purple">
<div class=3D"WordSection1">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Secti=
on 6.2<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>=
&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">I belie=
ve there is a preposition missing in O.5: =93The master device MUST obtain =
an indication =91about=92 the regulatory domain
 governing operation=85=94</span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
</span>
<div>MSP-&gt;Agree, made the change.</div>
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soft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" x=
mlns:x=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:excel" xmlns:p=3D"urn:schemas-mi=
crosoft-com:office:powerpoint" xmlns:a=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:=
access" xmlns:dt=3D"uuid:C2F41010-65B3-11d1-A29F-00AA00C14882" xmlns:s=3D"u=
uid:BDC6E3F0-6DA3-11d1-A2A3-00AA00C14882" xmlns:rs=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft=
-com:rowset" xmlns:z=3D"#RowsetSchema" xmlns:b=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com=
:office:publisher" xmlns:ss=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:spreadsheet=
" xmlns:c=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:component:spreadsheet" xmlns:=
odc=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:odc" xmlns:oa=3D"urn:schemas-micros=
oft-com:office:activation" xmlns:html=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40" x=
mlns:q=3D"http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/soap/envelope/" xmlns:rtc=3D"http://mi=
crosoft.com/officenet/conferencing" xmlns:d=3D"DAV:" xmlns:repl=3D"http://s=
chemas.microsoft.com/repl/" xmlns:mt=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharep=
oint/soap/meetings/" xmlns:x2=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/excel/=
2003/xml" xmlns:ppda=3D"http://www.passport.com/NameSpace.xsd" xmlns:ois=3D=
"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/ois/" xmlns:dir=3D"http://sch=
emas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/directory/" xmlns:ds=3D"http://www.w3.or=
g/2000/09/xmldsig#" xmlns:dsp=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/ds=
p" xmlns:udc=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc" xmlns:xsd=3D"http://=
www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema" xmlns:sub=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharep=
oint/soap/2002/1/alerts/" xmlns:ec=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/04/xmlenc#" xm=
lns:sp=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/" xmlns:sps=3D"http://sch=
emas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/" xmlns:xsi=3D"http://www.w3.org/2001/XM=
LSchema-instance" xmlns:udcs=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc/soap"=
 xmlns:udcxf=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc/xmlfile" xmlns:udcp2p=
=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/data/udc/parttopart" xmlns:wf=3D"http://sc=
hemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/workflow/" xmlns:dsss=3D"http://schemas=
.microsoft.com/office/2006/digsig-setup" xmlns:dssi=3D"http://schemas.micro=
soft.com/office/2006/digsig" xmlns:mdssi=3D"http://schemas.openxmlformats.o=
rg/package/2006/digital-signature" xmlns:mver=3D"http://schemas.openxmlform=
ats.org/markup-compatibility/2006" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/=
office/2004/12/omml" xmlns:mrels=3D"http://schemas.openxmlformats.org/packa=
ge/2006/relationships" xmlns:spwp=3D"http://microsoft.com/sharepoint/webpar=
tpages" xmlns:ex12t=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/exchange/services/2006/=
types" xmlns:ex12m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/exchange/services/2006/m=
essages" xmlns:pptsl=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/sharepoint/soap/SlideL=
ibrary/" xmlns:spsl=3D"http://microsoft.com/webservices/SharePointPortalSer=
ver/PublishedLinksService" xmlns:st=3D"&#1;" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/=
REC-html40">
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o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&n=
bsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Regar=
ds,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>=
&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Juan =
Carlos<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>=
&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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4.0pt">
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0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Taho=
ma, sans-serif; ">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-fami=
ly: Tahoma, sans-serif; ">
<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> [<a href=
=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b><a href=3D"mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com">Gabor.Bajko@no=
kia.com</a><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, June 07, 2012 11:40 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecas=
es-rqmts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Folks,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">I issued the below 2<sup>nd</sup> =
wglc on
<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt=
-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">and I only got one review with a c=
omment which is easy to address.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">We really need more reviews in ord=
er to be able to progress the draft. If you care about the use cases and re=
quirements related to White Space Database
 Access, please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you d=
o not have comments, then send a note to the list that the draft is good as=
 it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.<o:p></o=
:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">I cannot send the draft to the IES=
G without a minimum number of reviews. Ie, if we don=92t get reviews, we ca=
n=92t make progress.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Thanks, Gabor<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Taho=
ma, sans-serif; ">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-fami=
ly: Tahoma, sans-serif; ">
<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> [<a href=
=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Since there were quite a few chang=
es made to the new version -04, let=92s have another WGLC for this document=
.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Therefore, I'd like to initiate a =
2<sup>nd</sup> WG Last Call for comments on
<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt=
-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Please review the draft and send y=
our comments to the list by June 1st, 2012.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">If you review the draft and have n=
o comments, send a note to the list that the draft is good as it is, we nee=
d these notes as much as we need the
 actual comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Thanks, Gabor<o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 1=
25); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-family: Taho=
ma, sans-serif; ">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size: 10pt; font-fami=
ly: Tahoma, sans-serif; ">
<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> <a href=
=3D"mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]">
[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]</a> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Probasco Scott (Noki=
a-CIC/Dallas)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [paws] UC&amp;R document<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Hello All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">A new version of the Use Cases &amp; Requirements draft has b=
een uploaded.&nbsp;This version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of =
the issues raised during Working Group Last Call,
 including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready to be forwarded to IESG.<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Kind Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Raj &amp; Scott<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Draft: &nbsp;<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Diff: &nbsp;&nbsp;<a href=3D"http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?ur=
l2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04">http://tools.ietf.org/=
rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04</a><o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Abstract:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned=
 to a particular use<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; but are unused or unoccupied at specific locatio=
ns and times are<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; defined as &quot;white space&quot;.&nbsp;&nbsp;T=
he concept of allowing additional<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; transmissions (which may or may not be licensed)=
 in white space is a<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; technique to &amp;quot;unlock&amp;quot; existing=
 spectrum for new use.&nbsp;&nbsp;An obvious<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; requirement is that these additional transmissio=
ns do not interfere<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; with the assigned use of the spectrum.&nbsp;&nbs=
p;One approach to using the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; white space spectrum at a given time and locatio=
n is to verify with a<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; database for available channels.<o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; This document describes the concept of TV White =
Spaces.&nbsp;&nbsp;It also<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; describes the problems that need to be addressed=
 to enable white<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; space spectrum for additional uses, without caus=
ing interference to<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; currently assigned use, by querying a database w=
hich stores<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; information about the channel availability at an=
y given location and<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; time.&nbsp;&nbsp;A number of possible use cases =
of white space spectrum and<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; technology as well as a set of requirements for =
the database query<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; protocol are also described.<o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size: 10.5pt; color: black; font=
-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
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Folks,

Thanks for the comments received. The editors will generate a new version o=
f the draft including proposed changes from Subir and JC, and add a new req=
uirement to support pre-configured databases as requested by Peter and Joel=
 (eg, add a new requirement P.x: The address of a database (eg in form of a=
 URI) can be preconfigured in a master device. The master device MUST be ab=
le to contact a database using a pre-configured database address.)

If there won't be any additional comments received in the next week or so, =
we can hopefully send the updated draft to the iesg, then the wg can focus =
on the solution space.

Regards, Gabor


From: paws-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Pro=
basco Scott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)
Sent: Wednesday, June 20, 2012 1:59 PM
To: paws@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
s

Hello Juan Carlos,

Thank you for reviewing the draft and providing comments. I have addressed =
each of your comments, please see below (MSP->) for further information.

Kind Regards,
Scott

From: Juan Zuniga <JuanCarlos.Zuniga@InterDigital.com<mailto:JuanCarlos.Zun=
iga@InterDigital.com>>
Date: Thu, 14 Jun 2012 17:17:19 -0400
To: Gabor Bajko <Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com<mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com>>, "paw=
s@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>" <paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>>
Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
s

Gabor, all,

I have reviewed the document and I think it is in very good shape. These ar=
e some minor comments I have:


Abstract

Even though TV bands are currently the primary applications for PAWS, the p=
rotocol could be applicable to other bands. Hence, I would suggest removing=
 "TV" from the second paragraph of the Abstract.
MSP->This section has received some changes based on comments from Subir. "=
TV" is still in the abstract, but in a lower priority. Recall that we had d=
iscussion on the email reflector whether to remove 'TV' or not, with the re=
sult that many instances were removed, but some remain.

Section 1.1

Multiple examples are provided throughout this section. Some are inside par=
enthesis, some are preceded by "e.g." and some are not. I would suggest kee=
ping a common writing style when providing these examples.

Replace "...such as antenna height, and sometimes power." by "...such as an=
tenna height and power."
MSP->Agree, made the changes to the section.

Section 1.2.1

Replace "...basic service in TV white space." by  "...basic service in whit=
e spaces." (or alternatively "...basic service in white space frequencies."=
)
MSP->Agree, made the change.

Section 6.1

P.5 and P.6 could be combined into one single requirement with some wording=
 similar to the one used in P.7, e.g. "The messages sent by the master devi=
ce and database MUST support integrity protection."
MSP->Agree, combined P.5 and P.5

Section 6.2

I believe there is a preposition missing in O.5: "The master device MUST ob=
tain an indication 'about' the regulatory domain governing operation..."
MSP->Agree, made the change.



Regards,

Juan Carlos


From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com<mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.c=
om>
Sent: Thursday, June 07, 2012 11:40 AM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
s

Folks,

I issued the below 2nd wglc on http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ie=
tf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt
and I only got one review with a comment which is easy to address.

We really need more reviews in order to be able to progress the draft. If y=
ou care about the use cases and requirements related to White Space Databas=
e Access, please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you =
do not have comments, then send a note to the list that the draft is good a=
s it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.

I cannot send the draft to the IESG without a minimum number of reviews. Ie=
, if we don't get reviews, we can't make progress.

Thanks, Gabor

From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)
Sent: Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts

Since there were quite a few changes made to the new version -04, let's hav=
e another WGLC for this document.

Therefore, I'd like to initiate a 2nd WG Last Call for comments on http://w=
ww.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.=
txt

Please review the draft and send your comments to the list by June 1st, 201=
2.

If you review the draft and have no comments, send a note to the list that =
the draft is good as it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actu=
al comments.

Thanks, Gabor


From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org]<mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]> On Behalf Of Probasco =
Scott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)
Sent: Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] UC&R document

Hello All,

A new version of the Use Cases & Requirements draft has been uploaded. This=
 version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of the issues raised durin=
g Working Group Last Call, including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready=
 to be forwarded to IESG.

Kind Regards,
Raj & Scott

Draft:  http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-=
04.txt

Diff:   http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-u=
secases-rqmts-04

Abstract:
   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use
   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are
   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional
   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a
   technique to &quot;unlock&quot; existing spectrum for new use.  An obvio=
us
   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere
   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the
   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a
   database for available channels.

   This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces.  It also
   describes the problems that need to be addressed to enable white
   space spectrum for additional uses, without causing interference to
   currently assigned use, by querying a database which stores
   information about the channel availability at any given location and
   time.  A number of possible use cases of white space spectrum and
   technology as well as a set of requirements for the database query
   protocol are also described.



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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Folks,<o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks for the comments r=
eceived. The editors will generate a new version of the draft including pro=
posed changes from Subir and JC, and add a new requirement
 to support pre-configured databases as requested by Peter and Joel (eg, ad=
d a new requirement
</span><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quo=
t;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">P.x: The address of a database (eg in for=
m of a URI) can be preconfigured in a master device. The master device MUST=
 be able to contact a database using a pre-configured
 database address.</span><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;=
Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">If there won&#8217;t be a=
ny additional comments received in the next week or so, we can hopefully se=
nd the updated draft to the iesg, then the wg can focus on the
 solution space.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Regards, Gabor<o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> paws-bou=
nces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Probasco Scott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, June 20, 2012 1:59 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> paws@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecas=
es-rqmts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Hello Juan Carlos,<o:p></o:=
p></span></p>
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Thank you for reviewing the=
 draft and providing comments. I have addressed each of your comments, plea=
se see below (MSP-&gt;) for further information.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Kind Regards,<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Scott<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">From:
</span></b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,=
&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Juan Zuniga &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:JuanC=
arlos.Zuniga@InterDigital.com">JuanCarlos.Zuniga@InterDigital.com</a>&gt;<b=
r>
<b>Date: </b>Thu, 14 Jun 2012 17:17:19 -0400<br>
<b>To: </b>Gabor Bajko &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com">Gabor.B=
ajko@nokia.com</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.or=
g</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecas=
es-rqmts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
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<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Gabor, all,</span><span s=
tyle=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I have reviewed the docum=
ent and I think it is in very good shape. These are some minor comments I h=
ave:</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Abstract</span><span styl=
e=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">Even though TV bands are currently the primary applications for PAWS, the=
 protocol could be applicable to other bands. Hence, I would
 suggest removing &#8220;TV&#8221; from the second paragraph of the Abstrac=
t.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;This section has re=
ceived some changes based on comments from Subir. &quot;TV&quot; is still i=
n the abstract, but in a lower priority. Recall that we had discussion
 on the email reflector whether to remove 'TV' or not, with the result that=
 many instances were removed, but some remain.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F49=
7D">Section 1.1</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F49=
7D">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">Multiple examples are provided throughout this section. Some are inside p=
arenthesis, some are preceded by &#8220;e.g.&#8221; and some are not.
 I would suggest keeping a common writing style when providing these exampl=
es.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">Replace &#8220;&#8230;such as antenna height, and sometimes power.&#8221;=
 by &#8220;&#8230;such as antenna height and power.&#8221;</span><span styl=
e=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;Agree, made the cha=
nges to the section.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F49=
7D">Section 1.2.1</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F49=
7D">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">Replace &#8220;&#8230;basic service in TV white space.&#8221; by &nbsp;&#=
8220;&#8230;basic service in white spaces.&#8221; (or alternatively &#8220;=
&#8230;basic service in white space
 frequencies.&#8221;)</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;Agree, made the cha=
nge.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F49=
7D">Section 6.1</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F49=
7D">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">P.5 and P.6 could be combined into one single requirement with some wordi=
ng similar to the one used in P.7, e.g. &#8220;The messages sent
 by the master device and database MUST support integrity protection.&#8221=
;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;Agree, combined P.5=
 and P.5<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F49=
7D">Section 6.2</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F49=
7D">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">I believe there is a preposition missing in O.5: &#8220;The master device=
 MUST obtain an indication &#8216;about&#8217; the regulatory domain govern=
ing
 operation&#8230;&#8221;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;Agree, made the cha=
nge.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:.5in"><span style=3D"font-size:=
11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D=
">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F49=
7D">Regards,</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F49=
7D">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F49=
7D">Juan Carlos</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-left:5.25pt"><span style=3D"font-siz=
e:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F49=
7D">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in =
4.0pt">
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">From:</span></b><span sty=
le=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot=
;;color:black">
<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> [<a href=
=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b><a href=3D"mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com">Gabor.Bajko@no=
kia.com</a><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, June 07, 2012 11:40 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecas=
es-rqmts</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Folks,</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I issued the below 2<sup>=
nd</sup> wglc on
<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt=
-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts-04.txt</a></span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">and I only got one review=
 with a comment which is easy to address.</span><span style=3D"color:black"=
><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">We really need more revie=
ws in order to be able to progress the draft. If you care about the use cas=
es and requirements related to White Space Database Access,
 please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you do not ha=
ve comments, then send a note to the list that the draft is good as it is, =
we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.</span><span sty=
le=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I cannot send the draft t=
o the IESG without a minimum number of reviews. Ie, if we don&#8217;t get r=
eviews, we can&#8217;t make progress.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks, Gabor</span><span=
 style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">From:</span></b><span sty=
le=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot=
;;color:black">
<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> [<a href=
=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Since there were quite a =
few changes made to the new version -04, let&#8217;s have another WGLC for =
this document.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Therefore, I'd like to in=
itiate a 2<sup>nd</sup> WG Last Call for comments on
<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt=
-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts-04.txt</a></span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Please review the draft a=
nd send your comments to the list by June 1st, 2012.</span><span style=3D"c=
olor:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">If you review the draft a=
nd have no comments, send a note to the list that the draft is good as it i=
s, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.</span><span =
style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks, Gabor</span><span=
 style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">From:</span></b><span sty=
le=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot=
;;color:black">
<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> <a href=
=3D"mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]">
[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]</a> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Probasco Scott (Noki=
a-CIC/Dallas)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [paws] UC&amp;R document</span><span style=3D"color:black">=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Hello All,</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">A new version of the Use Cases &amp; Requirements draft has b=
een uploaded.&nbsp;This version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of =
the issues raised during Working Group Last Call,
 including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready to be forwarded to IESG.<=
/span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Kind Regards,</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Raj &amp; Scott</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Draft: &nbsp;<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt</a></span><span style=3D"color:black">=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Diff: &nbsp;&nbsp;<a href=3D"http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?ur=
l2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04">http://tools.ietf.org/=
rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04</a></span><sp=
an style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Abstract:</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned=
 to a particular use</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; but are unused or unoccupied at specific locatio=
ns and times are</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; defined as &quot;white space&quot;.&nbsp;&nbsp;T=
he concept of allowing additional</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; transmissions (which may or may not be licensed)=
 in white space is a</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; technique to &amp;quot;unlock&amp;quot; existing=
 spectrum for new use.&nbsp;&nbsp;An obvious</span><span style=3D"color:bla=
ck"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; requirement is that these additional transmissio=
ns do not interfere</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; with the assigned use of the spectrum.&nbsp;&nbs=
p;One approach to using the</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; white space spectrum at a given time and locatio=
n is to verify with a</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; database for available channels.</span><span sty=
le=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; This document describes the concept of TV White =
Spaces.&nbsp;&nbsp;It also</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; describes the problems that need to be addressed=
 to enable white</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; space spectrum for additional uses, without caus=
ing interference to</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; currently assigned use, by querying a database w=
hich stores</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
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Hi Scott,
Thanks for addressing the comments.

Regards,
-Subir

From: paws-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of sco=
tt.probasco@nokia.com
Sent: Wednesday, June 20, 2012 4:56 PM
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Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
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Hello Subir,

Thank you for reviewing the draft and providing comments. I have addressed =
each of your comments, please see below (MSP->) for further information.

Kind Regards,
Scott


From: "ext Das, Subir" <sdas@appcomsci.com<mailto:sdas@appcomsci.com>>
Date: Wed, 13 Jun 2012 03:28:39 +0000
To: Gabor Bajko <Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com<mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com>>, "paw=
s@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>" <paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>>
Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
s

We have reviewed the draft and it looks good.   Below are some technical an=
d editorial comments.  Hope these are helpful.

Regards,
-Subir

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Technical:

Section 1.2.1, In Scope:  Page 6:

"2.  Connect to the database using a well-defined access method."

SD> What is the meaning of 'well-defined access method' here?  Then in the =
following bullet point,  it says  'using a well-defined protocol'. May be t=
his is not necessary since the starting sentence of the section says  "The =
protocol will enable".
MSP->These terms refer to the completed PAWS protocol.


"As a result, some of the scenarios described in the following section are =
out of scope for this specification (although they might be  addressed by f=
uture specifications)."

SD> It would be good if the 'out of scope' sections are explicitly identifi=
ed.
MSP->I have removed the sentence citing 'out of scope'.

Section 2.2: Terminology: Page 6:

Database
In the context of white space and cognitive radio technologies, the databas=
e is an entity which contains, but is not limited to, current information a=
bout available spectrum at any given location

SD>  Suggest  modifying the definition like this:

In the context of white space and cognitive radio technologies, the databas=
e is an entity which contains, but is not limited to, current information a=
bout available spectrum at any given location  and time as  required by the=
 regulatory policies.
MSP->I have modified the definition based on your proposal.

Page 8:

"White Space Device (WSD)

A device which opportunistically uses some part of white space spectrum.  A=
 white space device can be an access point, base  station, a portable devic=
e or similar.  A white space device may  be required by local regulations t=
o query a database with its location to obtain information about available =
spectrum."

SD> Suggest  adding definition  of `Master Device` and ` Slave Device`  as =
two types of WSDS here and then delete  them from Page 7


-          Master Device WSD
A device   which is required to query the WS Database to find out the avail=
able operating channels.


-          Slave Device WSD
      A device which uses the spectrum made available by a master device an=
d cannot query the  database  directly.
MSP-> I have updated the definition of Slave Device based on your text abov=
e. I have left the definitions as stand-alone definitions rather than placi=
ng them under "White Space Device (WSD)" as the definitions are listed alph=
abetically.


Section 4.1: Page 9

"A complete protocol solution must provide all services that are essential =
to enable the white space paradigm.  Before a white space device can begin =
operating it needs to know what channels are available by sending a query t=
o a white space database for a list of available channels, the white space =
device must first locate or  "discover" a suitable database."

SD> Suggest changing the last sentence like this: "...., the white space de=
vice must have the capability to first locate or discover  a suitable datab=
ase."
MSP->I have implemented your proposal.


Section 4.1.2: Page 11

SD> In Figure 2,   Where is the 'Slave Device'?  Also it may be better just=
 to mention 'Air IF'  instead of 'TDD Air IF'.
MSP->There is no slave device since only the Master Device registers with t=
he database. I have removed "TDD" from the figure.


Page 15:

Comment: In some use case it says 'Dev' and other use cases it says 'Slave =
Dev'. Good to have the consistency.
MSP->I have made changes in 4.2.1 step 6 & 9.


Section 4.2.3: Page 18

"1. The dual mode (or multi mode) device (3G + TVWS) is connected to a 3G n=
etwork.  The device has contacted a trusted database to discover the list o=
f available TV channels at its current location.  The device has located a =
TVWS master/AP operating on  an available channel and has associated or con=
nected with the TVWS master/AP."

SD>  I got the impression from the above text   that 'The device' refers to=
 the `Slave  WS Dev'  in Figure 5 and it has contacted  the database.  Am I=
 correct?   If so,  the text  needs to be updated to clarify that the slave=
 cannot contact the database directly.
MSP->I have removed the text describing the slave device contacting the dat=
abase.


Section 4.2.6:  Page 22:

"7. The slave/user device scans to locate a mobile master transmission, and=
 associates with the mobile master."

SD> Where is the slave device coming from? There is no 'Slave device' in  f=
igure 8?
MSP->I have added a slave device to Figure 8 and clarified in step 6 that m=
aster-master communications are possible outside the scope of PAWS.


Section  4.2.7, Page 23:

SD> In Figure 9, there is a connection between Master devices using 'WS Air=
 IF' . Does this mean these devices have both 'Master' and 'Slave' capabili=
ties?  There is no such description and it is hard to understand why this c=
onnection is necessary and its intended purpose.
MSP->This capability is described in the first paragraph under 4.2.7. I hav=
e clarified in step 6 that master-master communications are possible outsid=
e the scope of PAWS.

Section 4.2.8: Page 26:

"7. The slave devices fitted to the machines scan the TV bands to locate th=
e master transmissions, and associate with the master device."

SD> The above step implies to me that all slave devices are connected to Ma=
ster but the Figure 10 does not indicate that.
MSP->The first paragraph in 4.2.8 does specify that each slave device is un=
der control of a master device.

Section 5: Page 28:

SD>  In Figure it says 'WS device' and it interfaces to the Database direct=
ly . OTH, in all use cases the  interface with the database is coming from =
the 'Master Device'.  It should be consistent. Suggest changing to 'Master =
Device' or WSD Device (Master)'.
MSP->I have updated Figure 11 to "Master" WS Device.

Section 5.2 : Page 29:

SD> This section seems to be a duplicate since Section 4.1.1 already covers=
 this.
MSP->This section is relevant to the Problem Statement (Chapter 5) and shou=
ld be kept.

Section 5.4: Page 29:

"Use of XML for specifying a data model is an attractive option.  The inten=
t is to evaluate the best option that meets the need for use between white =
space devices and databases."

SD> Suggest adding  XML  as an example
MSP->Examples are nice, however as we are concluding the 2nd WGLC I propose=
 to leave this as written.

Section 6.1: Page 30:

"D.2: The Data Model  MAY  support specifying the regulatory domain and its=
 corresponding data requirements."

SD> This requirement   should be a 'MUST'; if not how will the databases in=
terpret it?  Also in P.2 it says "The protocol MUST support determination o=
f regulatory domain governing its current location".  Unless it is a must, =
P.2 cannot be satisfied, IMO
MSP->Changed D.2 to MUST.

Page 31:

"D.4:   The Data Model MUST support specifying a manufacturer's serial numb=
er for a master device"

SD>  Suggest deleting ` the master device' at the end.   Since the serial n=
umber is also applicable for slave device.
MSP->Changed 'master' to 'white space'


Page 33:

SD> Q.6 and Q.7 may  be merged.
MSP->Merged O.6 and O.7


Section 8: Page 38:

"Threat 8:  Natural disaster resulting in inability to obtain authorization=
 for white space spectrum use by emergency responders"

Last sentence of this section says " The security requirements arising from=
 the above threats are captured  in the requirements of section 6.1."

SD> Not sure I understand the threat model  here. Also it seems that the se=
ction reference is not correct.
MSP->Section 6.1 is Normative Requirements, and contain the requirements ag=
reed as result of the threat model.


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Editorial:
MSP->I have included the editorial corrections.

Abstract 2nd paragraph : Page 1
"This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces."

>From the above sentence I got the impression that the main focus of this dr=
aft is to describe the concept of TV white Space which I believe is not.  M=
ay rephrase this or start with the second sentence like: This document desc=
ribes the use cases and requirements of TV White Space and introduces the p=
roblems that need ...."

Section 3.2, Page 8:

"More information about the switch to digital transmission is at : [DTV]."

SD> Delete ':'

Page 17:

If the channel that a slave/user terminal is currently using is not longer =
..

SD> Typo :  'not/no  longer ...'

Page 28:

4.  Address regulatory requirements - Each country will likely have ...

SD> typo:  'likely to have ...'

Page 35:

"Threat 1:  .... A white space database may be operated by a commercial ent=
ity which restricts
access to authorized users. "

SD> May add 'only'  after 'access';  'access to only authorized users.

'Threat 2: A master device discovers a white space database(s) thru which i=
t can query for channel information.'

SD> Typo: 'thru/through'


From: paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-boun=
ces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com<mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.c=
om>
Sent: Thursday, June 07, 2012 11:40 AM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmt=
s

Folks,

I issued the below 2nd wglc on http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ie=
tf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt
and I only got one review with a comment which is easy to address.

We really need more reviews in order to be able to progress the draft. If y=
ou care about the use cases and requirements related to White Space Databas=
e Access, please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you =
do not have comments, then send a note to the list that the draft is good a=
s it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.

I cannot send the draft to the IESG without a minimum number of reviews. Ie=
, if we don't get reviews, we can't make progress.

Thanks, Gabor

From:paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-bounc=
es@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)
Sent: Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts

Since there were quite a few changes made to the new version -04, let's hav=
e another WGLC for this document.

Therefore, I'd like to initiate a 2nd WG Last Call for comments on http://w=
ww.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.=
txt

Please review the draft and send your comments to the list by June 1st, 201=
2.

If you review the draft and have no comments, send a note to the list that =
the draft is good as it is, we need these notes as much as we need the actu=
al comments.

Thanks, Gabor


From:paws-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:paws-bounc=
es@ietf.org]<mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]> On Behalf Of Probasco S=
cott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)
Sent: Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM
To: paws@ietf.org<mailto:paws@ietf.org>
Subject: [paws] UC&R document

Hello All,

A new version of the Use Cases & Requirements draft has been uploaded. This=
 version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of the issues raised durin=
g Working Group Last Call, including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready=
 to be forwarded to IESG.

Kind Regards,
Raj & Scott

Draft:  http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-=
04.txt

Diff:   http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-u=
secases-rqmts-04

Abstract:
   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use
   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are
   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional
   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a
   technique to &quot;unlock&quot; existing spectrum for new use.  An obvio=
us
   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere
   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the
   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a
   database for available channels.

   This document describes the concept of TV White Spaces.  It also
   describes the problems that need to be addressed to enable white
   space spectrum for additional uses, without causing interference to
   currently assigned use, by querying a database which stores
   information about the channel availability at any given location and
   time.  A number of possible use cases of white space spectrum and
   technology as well as a set of requirements for the database query
   protocol are also described.



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libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks for addressing the=
 comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">-Subir
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span><=
/p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-s=
ize:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> paws-bou=
nces@ietf.org [mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>scott.probasco@nokia.com<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, June 20, 2012 4:56 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> paws@ietf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecas=
es-rqmts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Hello Subir,<o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Thank you for reviewing the=
 draft and providing comments. I have addressed each of your comments, plea=
se see below (MSP-&gt;) for further information.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Kind Regards,<o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Scott<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">From:
</span></b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,=
&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&quot;ext Das, Subir&quot; &lt;<a href=
=3D"mailto:sdas@appcomsci.com">sdas@appcomsci.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Date: </b>Wed, 13 Jun 2012 03:28:39 &#43;0000<br>
<b>To: </b>Gabor Bajko &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com">Gabor.B=
ajko@nokia.com</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.or=
g</a>&quot; &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecas=
es-rqmts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">We have reviewed the draf=
t and it looks good.&nbsp;&nbsp; Below are some technical and editorial com=
ments. &nbsp;Hope these are helpful.
</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Regards,</span><span styl=
e=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">-Subir
</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p=
></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Technical:
</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 1.2.1, In Scop=
e:&nbsp; Page 6:&nbsp;
</span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;2.&nbsp; Connect t=
o the database using a well-defined access method.&#8221;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; What is the meanin=
g of &#8216;well-defined access method&#8217; here?&nbsp; Then in the follo=
wing bullet point,&nbsp; it says&nbsp; &#8216;using a well-defined protocol=
&#8217;. May be this is
 not necessary since the starting sentence of the section says &nbsp;&#8220=
;The protocol will enable&#8221;.&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:bl=
ack"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;These terms refer t=
o the completed PAWS protocol.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;As a result, some =
of the scenarios described in the following section are out of scope for th=
is specification (although they might be&nbsp; addressed by future
 specifications).&#8221; </span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></sp=
an></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; It would be good i=
f the &#8216;out of scope&#8217; sections are explicitly identified.</span>=
<span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;I have removed the =
sentence citing 'out of scope'.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 2.2: Terminolo=
gy: Page 6:</span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Database</span><span styl=
e=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">In the context of white s=
pace and cognitive radio technologies, the database is an entity which cont=
ains, but is not limited to, current information about available
 spectrum at any given location&nbsp; </span><span style=3D"color:black"><o=
:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt;&nbsp; Suggest&nbsp=
; modifying the definition like this:</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">In the context of white s=
pace and cognitive radio technologies, the database is an entity which cont=
ains, but is not limited to, current information about available
 spectrum at any given location&nbsp; and time as &nbsp;required by the reg=
ulatory policies.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;I have modified the=
 definition based on your proposal.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 8:</span></b><spa=
n style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;White Space Device=
 (WSD)</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">A device which opportunis=
tically uses some part of white space spectrum.&nbsp; A white space device =
can be an access point, base&nbsp; station, a portable device or similar.&n=
bsp;
 A white space device may&nbsp; be required by local regulations to query a=
 database with its location to obtain information about available spectrum.=
&#8221;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Suggest&nbsp; addi=
ng definition&nbsp; of `Master Device` and ` Slave Device`&nbsp; as two typ=
es of WSDS here and then delete&nbsp; them from Page 7</span><span style=3D=
"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in"><span style=3D"f=
ont-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;colo=
r:#1F497D">-</span><span style=3D"font-size:7.0pt;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quo=
t;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Master Device WSD</span><span style=3D"co=
lor:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">A device&nbsp;&nbsp; whic=
h is required to query the WS Database to find out the available operating =
channels.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoListParagraph" style=3D"text-indent:-.25in"><span style=3D"f=
ont-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;colo=
r:#1F497D">-</span><span style=3D"font-size:7.0pt;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbs=
p;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quo=
t;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Slave Device WSD
</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&=
nbsp;&nbsp;A device which uses the spectrum made available by a master devi=
ce and cannot query the&nbsp; database&nbsp; directly.</span><span style=3D=
"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt; I have updated the=
 definition of Slave Device based on your text above. I have left the defin=
itions as stand-alone definitions rather than placing them
 under &quot;White Space Device (WSD)&quot; as the definitions are listed a=
lphabetically.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span class=3D"apple-style-span"><span style=3D"font=
-size:11.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#=
1F497D">&nbsp;</span></span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 4.1: Page 9</s=
pan></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;A complete protoco=
l solution must provide all services that are essential to enable the white=
 space paradigm.&nbsp; Before a white space device can begin operating
 it needs to know what channels are available by sending a query to a white=
 space database for a list of available channels, the white space device mu=
st first locate or&nbsp; &quot;discover&quot; a suitable database.&#8221;</=
span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Suggest changing t=
he last sentence like this: &#8220;&#8230;., the white space device must ha=
ve the capability to first locate or discover&nbsp; a suitable database.&#8=
221;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;I have implemented =
your proposal.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 4.1.2: Page 11</s=
pan><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; In Figure 2,&nbsp;=
&nbsp; Where is the &#8216;Slave Device&#8217;?&nbsp; Also it may be better=
 just to mention &#8216;Air IF&#8217;&nbsp; instead of &#8216;TDD Air IF&#8=
217;.&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;There is no slave d=
evice since only the Master Device registers with the database. I have remo=
ved &quot;TDD&quot; from the figure.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 15:
</span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Comment: In some use case=
 it says &#8216;Dev&#8217; and other use cases it says &#8216;Slave Dev&#82=
17;. Good to have the consistency.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p><=
/o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;I have made changes=
 in 4.2.1 step 6 &amp; 9.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 4.2.3: Page 18=
</span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;1. The dual mode (=
or multi mode) device (3G &#43; TVWS) is connected to a 3G network.&nbsp; T=
he device has contacted a trusted database to discover the list of availabl=
e
 TV channels at its current location.&nbsp; The device has located a TVWS m=
aster/AP operating on&nbsp; an available channel and has associated or conn=
ected with the TVWS master/AP.&#8221;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt;&nbsp; I got the im=
pression from the above text&nbsp;&nbsp; that &#8216;The device&#8217; refe=
rs to the `Slave&nbsp; WS Dev&#8217;&nbsp; in Figure 5 and it has contacted=
&nbsp; the database.&nbsp; Am I correct?&nbsp;&nbsp;
 If so, &nbsp;the text&nbsp; needs to be updated to clarify that the slave =
cannot contact the database directly.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;I have removed the =
text describing the slave device contacting the database.<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 4.2.6:&nbsp; P=
age 22:</span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;7. The slave/user =
device scans to locate a mobile master transmission, and associates with th=
e mobile master.&#8221;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Where is the slave=
 device coming from? There is no &#8216;Slave device&#8217; in&nbsp; figure=
 8?</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;I have added a slav=
e device to Figure 8 and clarified in step 6 that master-master communicati=
ons are possible outside the scope of PAWS.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section&nbsp; 4.2.7, P=
age 23:
</span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span></b><span=
 style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; In Figure 9, there=
 is a connection between Master devices using &#8216;WS Air IF&#8217; . Doe=
s this mean these devices have both &#8216;Master&#8217; and &#8216;Slave&#=
8217; capabilities?&nbsp;
 There is no such description and it is hard to understand why this connect=
ion is necessary and its intended purpose.</span><span style=3D"color:black=
"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;This capability is =
described in the first paragraph under 4.2.7. I have clarified in step 6 th=
at master-master communications are possible outside the scope
 of PAWS.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 4.2.8: Page 26=
:</span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;7. The slave devic=
es fitted to the machines scan the TV bands to locate the master transmissi=
ons, and associate with the master device.&#8221;</span><span style=3D"colo=
r:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; The above step imp=
lies to me that all slave devices are connected to Master but the Figure 10=
 does not indicate that.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;The first paragraph=
 in 4.2.8 does specify that each slave device is under control of a master =
device.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 5: Page 28:</s=
pan></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt;&nbsp; In Figure it=
 says &#8216;WS device&#8217; and it interfaces to the Database directly . =
OTH, in all use cases the&nbsp; interface with the database is coming from =
the &#8216;Master
 Device&#8217;.&nbsp; It should be consistent. Suggest changing to &#8216;M=
aster Device&#8217; or WSD Device (Master)&#8217;.</span><span style=3D"col=
or:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;I have updated Figu=
re 11 to &quot;Master&quot; WS Device.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 5.2 : Page 29:=
</span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; This section seems=
 to be a duplicate since Section 4.1.1 already covers this.</span><span sty=
le=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;This section is rel=
evant to the Problem Statement (Chapter 5) and should be kept.<o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 5.4: Page 29:<=
/span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;Use of XML for spe=
cifying a data model is an attractive option.&nbsp; The intent is to evalua=
te the best option that meets the need for use between white space
 devices and databases.&#8221;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p=
></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Suggest adding&nbs=
p; XML&nbsp; as an example</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;Examples are nice, =
however as we are concluding the 2nd WGLC I propose to leave this as writte=
n.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 6.1: Page 30:<=
/span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;D.2: The Data Mode=
l&nbsp; MAY&nbsp; support specifying the regulatory domain and its correspo=
nding data requirements.&#8221;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:=
p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; This requirement&n=
bsp;&nbsp; should be a &#8216;MUST&#8217;; if not how will the databases in=
terpret it?&nbsp; Also in P.2 it says &#8220;The protocol MUST support dete=
rmination of regulatory
 domain governing its current location&#8221;.&nbsp; Unless it is a must, P=
.2 cannot be satisfied, IMO</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;Changed D.2 to MUST=
.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 31:</span></b><sp=
an style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;D.4:&nbsp;&nbsp; T=
he Data Model MUST support specifying a manufacturer's serial number for a =
master device&#8221;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt;&nbsp; Suggest dele=
ting ` the master device&#8217; at the end.&nbsp;&nbsp; Since the serial nu=
mber is also applicable for slave device.</span><span style=3D"color:black"=
><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;Changed 'master' to=
 'white space'<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 33:</span></b><sp=
an style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span></b><span=
 style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Q.6 and Q.7 may&nb=
sp; be merged.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;Merged O.6 and O.7<=
o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 8: Page 38:</s=
pan></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;Threat 8:&nbsp; Na=
tural disaster resulting in inability to obtain authorization for white spa=
ce spectrum use by emergency responders&#8221;</span><span style=3D"color:b=
lack"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Last sentence of this sec=
tion says &#8220; The security requirements arising from the above threats =
are captured&nbsp; in the requirements of section 6.1.&#8221;</span><span s=
tyle=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Not sure I underst=
and the threat model&nbsp; here. Also it seems that the section reference i=
s not correct.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;Section 6.1 is Norm=
ative Requirements, and contain the requirements agreed as result of the th=
reat model.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D</span><span style=3D"color=
:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Editorial:</span></b><=
span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">MSP-&gt;I have included the=
 editorial corrections.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Abstract 2nd paragraph=
 : Page 1</span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;This document desc=
ribes the concept of TV White Spaces.&#8221; &nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">From the above sentence I=
 got the impression that the main focus of this draft is to describe the co=
ncept of TV white Space which I believe is not.&nbsp; May rephrase
 this or start with the second sentence like: This document describes the u=
se cases and requirements of TV White Space and introduces the problems tha=
t need &#8230;.&#8221;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Section 3.2, Page 8:</=
span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;More information a=
bout the switch to digital transmission is at : [DTV].&#8221;
</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Delete &#8216;:&#8=
217;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 17:
</span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">If the channel that a sla=
ve/user terminal is currently using is not longer ..</span><span style=3D"c=
olor:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Typo :&nbsp; &#821=
6;not/no&nbsp; longer &#8230;&#8217;
</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 28:</span></b><sp=
an style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">4.&nbsp; Address regulato=
ry requirements - Each country will likely have &#8230;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; typo:&nbsp; &#8216=
;likely to have &#8230;&#8217;
</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Page 35:
</span></b><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8220;Threat 1:&nbsp; &#=
8230;. A white space database may be operated by a commercial entity which =
restricts</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">access to authorized user=
s. &#8220;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; May add &#8216;onl=
y&#8217;&nbsp; after &#8216;access&#8217;;&nbsp; &#8216;access to only auth=
orized users.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&#8216;Threat 2: A master=
 device discovers a white space database(s) thru which it can query for cha=
nnel information.&#8217;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">SD&gt; Typo: &#8216;thru/=
through&#8217;
</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">From:</span></b><span sty=
le=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot=
;;color:black">
<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.org</a> [<a href=
=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b><a href=3D"mailto:Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com">Gabor.Bajko@no=
kia.com</a><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, June 07, 2012 11:40 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecas=
es-rqmts</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Folks,</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I issued the below 2<sup>=
nd</sup> wglc on
<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt=
-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts-04.txt</a></span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">and I only got one review=
 with a comment which is easy to address.</span><span style=3D"color:black"=
><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">We really need more revie=
ws in order to be able to progress the draft. If you care about the use cas=
es and requirements related to White Space Database Access,
 please read the draft and send your comments to the list. If you do not ha=
ve comments, then send a note to the list that the draft is good as it is, =
we need these notes as much as we need the actual comments.</span><span sty=
le=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I cannot send the draft t=
o the IESG without a minimum number of reviews. Ie, if we don&#8217;t get r=
eviews, we can&#8217;t make progress.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:=
p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks, Gabor</span><span=
 style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">From:</span></b><span sty=
le=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot=
;;color:black"><a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.o=
rg</a>
 [<a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org</a>=
] <b>On Behalf Of
</b>Bajko Gabor (Nokia-CIC/SiliconValley)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 15, 2012 5:50 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [paws] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-r=
qmts</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Since there were quite a =
few changes made to the new version -04, let&#8217;s have another WGLC for =
this document.</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Therefore, I'd like to in=
itiate a 2<sup>nd</sup> WG Last Call for comments on
<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt=
-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">
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qmts-04.txt</a></span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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nd send your comments to the list by June 1st, 2012.</span><span style=3D"c=
olor:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
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nd have no comments, send a note to the list that the draft is good as it i=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks, Gabor</span><span=
 style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in =
0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot=
;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">From:</span></b><span sty=
le=3D"font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot=
;;color:black"><a href=3D"mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org">paws-bounces@ietf.o=
rg</a>
<a href=3D"mailto:[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf.org]">[mailto:paws-bounces@ietf=
.org]</a>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Probasco Scott (Nokia-CIC/Dallas)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 11, 2012 11:51 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:paws@ietf.org">paws@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [paws] UC&amp;R document</span><span style=3D"color:black">=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"color:black">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span>=
</p>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Hello All,</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></spa=
n></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">A new version of the Use Cases &amp; Requirements draft has b=
een uploaded.&nbsp;This version of the Internet Draft has addressed all of =
the issues raised during Working Group Last Call,
 including discussion from IETF #83, and is ready to be forwarded to IESG.<=
/span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Kind Regards,</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Raj &amp; Scott</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p>=
</span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Draft: &nbsp;<a href=3D"http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt">http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-paw=
s-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04.txt</a></span><span style=3D"color:black">=
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Diff: &nbsp;&nbsp;<a href=3D"http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?ur=
l2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04">http://tools.ietf.org/=
rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-04</a></span><sp=
an style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">Abstract:</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span=
></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned=
 to a particular use</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; but are unused or unoccupied at specific locatio=
ns and times are</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; defined as &quot;white space&quot;.&nbsp;&nbsp;T=
he concept of allowing additional</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></=
o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; transmissions (which may or may not be licensed)=
 in white space is a</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; technique to &amp;quot;unlock&amp;quot; existing=
 spectrum for new use.&nbsp;&nbsp;An obvious</span><span style=3D"color:bla=
ck"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; requirement is that these additional transmissio=
ns do not interfere</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; with the assigned use of the spectrum.&nbsp;&nbs=
p;One approach to using the</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; white space spectrum at a given time and locatio=
n is to verify with a</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span><=
/p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; database for available channels.</span><span sty=
le=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; This document describes the concept of TV White =
Spaces.&nbsp;&nbsp;It also</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></s=
pan></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; describes the problems that need to be addressed=
 to enable white</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; space spectrum for additional uses, without caus=
ing interference to</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p=
>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; currently assigned use, by querying a database w=
hich stores</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; information about the channel availability at an=
y given location and</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; time.&nbsp;&nbsp;A number of possible use cases =
of white space spectrum and</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></=
span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; technology as well as a set of requirements for =
the database query</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;&nbsp; protocol are also described.</span><span style=
=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:13.5pt;font-family:Consolas=
;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D"color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></=
p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Ca=
libri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&nbsp;</span><span style=3D=
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</div>
</div>
</div>
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts director=
ies.
 This draft is a work item of the Protocol to Access WS database Working Gr=
oup of the IETF.

	Title           : Protocol to Access White Space database: PS, use cases a=
nd rqmts
	Author(s)       : Scott Probasco
                          Basavaraj Patil
	Filename        : draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-05.txt
	Pages           : 42
	Date            : 2012-06-21

Abstract:
   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use
   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are
   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional
   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a
   technique to "unlock" existing spectrum for new use.  An obvious
   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere
   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the
   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a
   database for available channels.

   This document describes a number of possible use cases of white space
   spectrum and technology as well as a set of requirements for the
   database query protocol.  The concept of TV white spaces is described
   including the problems that need to be addressed to enable white
   space spectrum for additional uses without causing interference to
   currently assigned use.  Use of white space is enabled by querying a
   database which stores information about the channel availability at
   any given location and time.


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Hello All,

This version 05 contains updates from the editors to address the comments
posted to the reflector during 2nd WGLC. We hope this fulfills the work
group's needs & desires, and look forward to continued progress in PAWS.

Kind Regards,
Scott & Raj



On 6/21/12 11:42 AM, "ext internet-drafts@ietf.org"
<internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Protocol to Access WS database Working
>Group of the IETF.
>
>    Title           : Protocol to Access White Space database: PS, use
>cases and rqmts
>    Author(s)       : Scott Probasco
>                          Basavaraj Patil
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-05.txt
>    Pages           : 42
>    Date            : 2012-06-21
>
>Abstract:
>   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use
>   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are
>   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional
>   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a
>   technique to "unlock" existing spectrum for new use.  An obvious
>   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere
>   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the
>   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a
>   database for available channels.
>
>   This document describes a number of possible use cases of white space
>   spectrum and technology as well as a set of requirements for the
>   database query protocol.  The concept of TV white spaces is described
>   including the problems that need to be addressed to enable white
>   space spectrum for additional uses without causing interference to
>   currently assigned use.  Use of white space is enabled by querying a
>   database which stores information about the channel availability at
>   any given location and time.
>
>
>The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
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>ts
>
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-r
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Scott, Raj

Thank you for all your hard work on the requirements drafts. I've reviewed =
draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-05.txt and it appears to cover =
all the UK and Ofcom requirements as we currently understand them. I believ=
e that there will be a public url from next week for the reference for [Ofc=
om Requirements], and I'll let you know as soon as this is made available.

I have a suggestion regarding Figure 8, for clarity. According to the text,=
 this scenario is not dependent on the air interface being TDD, so it shoul=
d be labelled as "WS AirIF" (for consistency with subsequent figures) inste=
ad of "TDD Air Interface". I then suggest that the label is moved to be nex=
t to or across the dotted line between the right hand master device and the=
 slave device that was added recently under editing. At the moment it could=
 be interpreted that the slave is wired to the master.

Finally I have found just two typos:

In 6.2 O.2, second sentence: "... have the capability determine its locatio=
n..." is missing "to"
In 6.2 O.9, "frequency" is misspelt.

Regards

Andy

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Hello All,

This version 05 contains updates from the editors to address the comments p=
osted to the reflector during 2nd WGLC. We hope this fulfills the work grou=
p's needs & desires, and look forward to continued progress in PAWS.

Kind Regards,
Scott & Raj



On 6/21/12 11:42 AM, "ext internet-drafts@ietf.org"
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>
>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts=20
>directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Protocol to Access WS database=20
>Working Group of the IETF.
>
>    Title           : Protocol to Access White Space database: PS, use
>cases and rqmts
>    Author(s)       : Scott Probasco
>                          Basavaraj Patil
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-05.txt
>    Pages           : 42
>    Date            : 2012-06-21
>
>Abstract:
>   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use
>   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are
>   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional
>   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a
>   technique to "unlock" existing spectrum for new use.  An obvious
>   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere
>   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the
>   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a
>   database for available channels.
>
>   This document describes a number of possible use cases of white space
>   spectrum and technology as well as a set of requirements for the
>   database query protocol.  The concept of TV white spaces is described
>   including the problems that need to be addressed to enable white
>   space spectrum for additional uses without causing interference to
>   currently assigned use.  Use of white space is enabled by querying a
>   database which stores information about the channel availability at
>   any given location and time.
>
>
>The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-
>rqm
>ts
>
>There's also a htmlized version available at:
>http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-
>05
>
>A diff from previous version is available at:
>http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecase
>s-r
>qmts-05
>
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Folks,

There have not been any comments to the draft version -05 which would resul=
t in significant changes to the draft. The editors will generate in the nex=
t few days  a version -06 to incorporate the minor/editorial changes reques=
ted by Andy, and I will do the write-up and send the draft to the iesg.

- Gabor

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Scott, Raj

Thank you for all your hard work on the requirements drafts. I've reviewed =
draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-05.txt and it appears to cover =
all the UK and Ofcom requirements as we currently understand them. I believ=
e that there will be a public url from next week for the reference for [Ofc=
om Requirements], and I'll let you know as soon as this is made available.

I have a suggestion regarding Figure 8, for clarity. According to the text,=
 this scenario is not dependent on the air interface being TDD, so it shoul=
d be labelled as "WS AirIF" (for consistency with subsequent figures) inste=
ad of "TDD Air Interface". I then suggest that the label is moved to be nex=
t to or across the dotted line between the right hand master device and the=
 slave device that was added recently under editing. At the moment it could=
 be interpreted that the slave is wired to the master.

Finally I have found just two typos:

In 6.2 O.2, second sentence: "... have the capability determine its locatio=
n..." is missing "to"
In 6.2 O.9, "frequency" is misspelt.

Regards

Andy

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-05.txt

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This version 05 contains updates from the editors to address the comments p=
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p's needs & desires, and look forward to continued progress in PAWS.

Kind Regards,
Scott & Raj



On 6/21/12 11:42 AM, "ext internet-drafts@ietf.org"
<internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts=20
>directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Protocol to Access WS database=20
>Working Group of the IETF.
>
>    Title           : Protocol to Access White Space database: PS, use
>cases and rqmts
>    Author(s)       : Scott Probasco
>                          Basavaraj Patil
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-05.txt
>    Pages           : 42
>    Date            : 2012-06-21
>
>Abstract:
>   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use
>   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are
>   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional
>   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a
>   technique to "unlock" existing spectrum for new use.  An obvious
>   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere
>   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the
>   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a
>   database for available channels.
>
>   This document describes a number of possible use cases of white space
>   spectrum and technology as well as a set of requirements for the
>   database query protocol.  The concept of TV white spaces is described
>   including the problems that need to be addressed to enable white
>   space spectrum for additional uses without causing interference to
>   currently assigned use.  Use of white space is enabled by querying a
>   database which stores information about the channel availability at
>   any given location and time.
>
>
>The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-
>rqm
>ts
>
>There's also a htmlized version available at:
>http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-
>05
>
>A diff from previous version is available at:
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>s-r
>qmts-05
>
>
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