Subject: [PMOL] Editorial comments on the framework draft

From: Benoit Claise <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 24 Mar 2009 17:57:29 -0700

Hi,

Not sure if those two were mentioned already...

1. You might want to mention what compagg is. It's in the reference but ...

    3.3.2 Index (from compagg)
       An Index is a metric for which the output value range has been
       selected for convenience or clarity, and the behavior of which is
       selected to support ease of understanding (e.g. G.107 R Factor).
       The deterministic function for an index is often developed after
       the index range and behavior have been determined. 

2. I see two instances of "[Ref ?]"

Regards, Benoit.