Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] fa1258: RPC text changes, Sections 11 through 20

From: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 04 May 2021 15:32:51 -0700

Branch: refs/heads/rpc-transport-3
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: fa12582e1ff16f227a7c8b7d1f2acd2e76a78858
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/fa12582e1ff16f227a7c8b7d1f2acd2e76a78858
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  RPC text changes, Sections 11 through 20

This depends on cabo/kramdown-rfc2629#118, so it won't build properly
just yet.

It's also just the stuff that is visible in the text diff, no XML
changes yet.

  Commit: bef96892374b4ce332f99edbd969834a4089a33c
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/bef96892374b4ce332f99edbd969834a4089a33c
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

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  Log Message:
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  Asides

  Commit: 8e141b57cac67e3d61b0ef79f33535ed399e60ba
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/8e141b57cac67e3d61b0ef79f33535ed399e60ba
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Remove spacing from frame type ranges

  Commit: 88b9b8ae9cfa3500c0a3a83383c18c2e989adc8b
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/88b9b8ae9cfa3500c0a3a83383c18c2e989adc8b
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Align the definition lists better

  Commit: 7794ab03cfd120eaee11163ab77352d96543a757
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/7794ab03cfd120eaee11163ab77352d96543a757
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Clarify retransmission rules for closing signals

  Commit: 747fa80b8d20e3a11c8ce287b280b8f80e2c18aa
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/747fa80b8d20e3a11c8ce287b280b8f80e2c18aa
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Fix subject-verb agreement

  Commit: 4157118d5d840dbb83f149ed36ae8bc9ffb3d6e5
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/4157118d5d840dbb83f149ed36ae8bc9ffb3d6e5
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  It's item 7, not bullet 7

  Commit: 77a7704854cdcdc1d83cbaab4e00a80148501c4a
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/77a7704854cdcdc1d83cbaab4e00a80148501c4a
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  2MSB instead

  Commit: 9ffb7b702d6d09fcc52f1d0025ffe7703de457a0
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/9ffb7b702d6d09fcc52f1d0025ffe7703de457a0
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Missed mention of the examples

  Commit: d00ce244292cc38611bf22ccb8eb788b46c3ff1c
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/d00ce244292cc38611bf22ccb8eb788b46c3ff1c
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  It's not required to start, but you need it in the end

  Commit: cfa4073c587738dc481bb8cb388a98636a701173
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/cfa4073c587738dc481bb8cb388a98636a701173
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
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  Log Message:
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  The packet payload is common enough to move

  Commit: 56d8a5cae76030536af9ac9a0b84ab332b4a4678
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/56d8a5cae76030536af9ac9a0b84ab332b4a4678
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Be specific about injection attacks

  Commit: a639e9f8243b8052c2fb488dd30454917bb290fc
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/a639e9f8243b8052c2fb488dd30454917bb290fc
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  It is ANY Initial packet now

  Commit: 48a56d4f45015233d3517a77b11e8800d62ea7ae
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/48a56d4f45015233d3517a77b11e8800d62ea7ae
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Let's just use ECN-CE throughout, the ECN- part is not implied here

  Commit: 6baec2cb66bf803dd971e832781c4e2ebfa3f1dc
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/6baec2cb66bf803dd971e832781c4e2ebfa3f1dc
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-04-30 (Fri, 30 Apr 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Make it parse

  Commit: 68e8fe8d91571d89f5679c6b51c02cc7ef72644a
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/68e8fe8d91571d89f5679c6b51c02cc7ef72644a
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-05-03 (Mon, 03 May 2021)

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  Log Message:
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  ready for some line length warnings

Co-authored-by: Jana Iyengar <[email-masked]>

  Commit: 4b680caf9971331ad480afa2d6af7dc951056603
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/4b680caf9971331ad480afa2d6af7dc951056603
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-05-03 (Mon, 03 May 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Fixups

  Commit: c55c989b1521f28f48ec89ff9a3377a410bdb570
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/c55c989b1521f28f48ec89ff9a3377a410bdb570
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-05-03 (Mon, 03 May 2021)

  Changed paths:
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    M draft-ietf-quic-http.md
    R draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md
    M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md
    R draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md
    R draft-ietf-quic-tls.md
    R draft-ietf-quic-transport.md
    A rfc8999.md
    A rfc9000.md
    A rfc9001.md
    A rfc9002.md
    A xml2rfc-tidy.py

  Log Message:
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  Merge branch 'master' into rpc-transport-2

  Commit: 3e9b27d56c7473d0e6f1e52a0a41bc70a142d092
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/3e9b27d56c7473d0e6f1e52a0a41bc70a142d092
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-05-03 (Mon, 03 May 2021)

  Changed paths:
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  Log Message:
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  wrap

  Commit: aa92e26822745fbcab268b229250e6281c0f6f85
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/aa92e26822745fbcab268b229250e6281c0f6f85
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-05-03 (Mon, 03 May 2021)

  Changed paths:
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  Log Message:
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  Missed a destination connection ID in lowercase

  Commit: 5ee395c54988717740ab8b4eb634c0346965eeec
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/5ee395c54988717740ab8b4eb634c0346965eeec
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-05-03 (Mon, 03 May 2021)

  Changed paths:
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  Log Message:
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  Make largest acknowledged consistent

  Commit: f7561f50361a250df6c77d76f37a1fc0d717f1ed
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/f7561f50361a250df6c77d76f37a1fc0d717f1ed
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-05-03 (Mon, 03 May 2021)

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  Make stream ID lowercase when it isn't a field

  Commit: eeaec316c34a2e95b4b12f5d31ec1bb38747c9b0
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/eeaec316c34a2e95b4b12f5d31ec1bb38747c9b0
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-05-05 (Wed, 05 May 2021)

  Changed paths:
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  Log Message:
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  Another 'this'

  Commit: ffe725c68fd4d80cd4e91ced02269b729e9fd277
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/ffe725c68fd4d80cd4e91ced02269b729e9fd277
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-05-05 (Wed, 05 May 2021)

  Changed paths:
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    M rfc9000.md
    M rfc9001.md
    M rfc9002.md

  Log Message:
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  Merge branch 'master' into rpc-transport-2

  Commit: 29f0b8284580f7d490d3b2c30b91511a5fc05540
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/29f0b8284580f7d490d3b2c30b91511a5fc05540
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-05-05 (Wed, 05 May 2021)

  Changed paths:
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  Log Message:
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  Merge pull request #4879 from quicwg/rpc-transport-2

Second batch of changes for transport

  Commit: f2263292a0cf39f3c4dd5df1644c69e2732df3b2
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/f2263292a0cf39f3c4dd5df1644c69e2732df3b2
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-05-05 (Wed, 05 May 2021)

  Changed paths:
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  Log Message:
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  Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/master' into rpc-transport-3

Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/compare/6a393ab44064...f2263292a0cf