Subject: [quicwg/version-negotiation] 62f06f: Edits to Retry text

From: David Schinazi <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 25 Jul 2021 17:08:37 -0700

Branch: refs/heads/main
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation
  Commit: 62f06fa1f2dbfb6924524830046fbb1d3d8ec1a7
      https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/commit/62f06fa1f2dbfb6924524830046fbb1d3d8ec1a7
  Author: Martin Thomson <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-07-19 (Mon, 19 Jul 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md

  Log Message:
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  Edits to Retry text

* Retry packets have a capital R
* protocols aren't "who"
* paragraphs are good
* minor edits for brevity

  Commit: 089c0ce023d9f0d0c01c20bb2ddc8b6a00811b83
      https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/commit/089c0ce023d9f0d0c01c20bb2ddc8b6a00811b83
  Author: David Schinazi <[email-masked]>
  Date:   2021-07-25 (Sun, 25 Jul 2021)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation.md

  Log Message:
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  Merge pull request #52 from martinthomson/no-protocol-anthopomorphism

Edits to Retry text

Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/version-negotiation/compare/5f44d2d88490...089c0ce023d9