Subject: [Roll] Nit: hosts or DODAGs required to satisfy app goals?

From: Alexandru Petrescu <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 25 Jul 2010 00:36:16 +0200

> A grounded DODAG offers connectivity to hosts that are required for
> satisfying the application-defined goal.

Comma missing?  Who is required?  The hosts or the connectivity?

Required for satisfying or required to satisfy?

> A floating DODAG is not expected to satisfy the goal

Ah, it seems it is the DODAG who is expected.  So it should say "that
is" required, not "that are" required.

What did the Author mean?

Alex

> and in most cases only provides routes to nodes within the DODAG.
> Floating DODAGs may be used, for example, to preserve inner
> connectivity during repair.