Subject: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04

From: Matthew Bocci via Datatracker <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 22 Jun 2021 03:16:19 -0700

Reviewer: Matthew Bocci
Review result: Has Nits

I have been selected as the RTG DIR reviewer for
draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint.

Thanks for the draft. This is clear and well written. I have just a couple of
minor editorial nits, below, that should be fixed prior to publication.

Regards
Matthew

Abstract:
s/Segment SUb-TLV/Segment Sub-TLV

1. Introduction
s/"Protocol in the Segment IS Sub-TLV"/"Protocol in the Segment ID Sub-TLV"