Subject: [Simple] Message Sessions review

From: "Chris Boulton" <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 12 Nov 2003 01:32:16 -0000

All,
 
Reviewed the latest revison and it looks pretty good to me ;-).  I have got a few minor nits, I apologise if these have already been pointed out. 
 
Section 5.3 
reads - 'However, these solutions promised to add a great deal of complexity to the protocol, so the work group chose not to go that route'.
 
should read - 'However, these solutions promised to add a great deal of complexity to the protocol, so the work group chose not to take that route.
 
Section 7.1 reads - 'If a userinfo component exists, MUST be constructed only from "unreserved" characters, to avoid a need for escape processing'
 
should read - If a userinfo component exists, it MUST be constructed only from "unreserved" characters, to avoid a need for escape processing.
 
Section 7.1.1 reads - An URL with an explicit port is never equivalent to another with no port specified.
 
should read - A URL with an explicit port is never equivalent to a URL without a port specified.
 
Section 7.4.6 reads - ' A MSRP session is represented by state at the host device. As mention previously, session state is identified by an MSRP URL'.
 
should read - ' An MSRP session is represented by state at the host device. As mentioned previously, session state is identified by an MSRP URL'.
 
Section 7.5.1 reads - 'If the relay wishes the visiting endpoint to connect over a port other than the MSRP relay well-know port, it MUST explicitly add the port number to visitor URL'.
 
should read - 'If the relay wishes the visiting endpoint to connect over a port other than the MSRP relay well-known port, it MUST explicitly add the port number to visitor URL'.
 
Section 7.7.1 reads - 'The BIND method is used by a host endpoint to establish or refresh
   session state at a hosting relay'.
 
Should we explicitly include 'Terminate' in this description or is it enough to consider it a refresh (with 0 Expiry).

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