Subject: [Simple] WGLC Extension for future status

From: "Mary Barnes" <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 14 May 2004 10:47:07 -0400

Just a couple minor comments on this draft
http://www.cs.columbia.edu/sip/draft/timed-status/draft-ietf-simple-future-0
2.txt

- Section 1. Introduction - the last sentence of the first paragraph does
not need to parenthetical.  It's an important point and reads better without
the parenthesis. 
- The references to rpid and cipid need to be updated.
- Jonathan is listed both as a Contributor and in the acknowledgements.  Is
that intentional (I only ask because I had always assumed that you didn't
include contributors in the acknowledgements)?  

Regards, 
Mary H. Barnes
[email-masked]