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Our AD (Dave Harrington) raised a concern in the Quebec City meeting about =
whether the updates to the compliance statement and conformance groups were=
 done correctly in the -00 iSCSI MIB update draft (i.e., by deprecating the=
 existing objects that should no longer be used, and defining new objects t=
o replace them).

I'm pleased to report that our talented MIB author team (Mark and Prakash) =
got this right - there is a deprecated compliance statement plus multiple d=
eprecated conformance groups in the -00 draft, accompanied by a V2 complian=
ce statement and new V2 conformance groups corresponding to the deprecated =
groups.  Well done!

Thanks,
--David
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Thanks, David!

BTW, for the attributes we added -- InstXNodeArchitecture, =
IntrLoginAuthorizeFails, SsnProtocolLevel, and SsnTaskReporting, we =
simply added these to the appropriate AttributesEntry objects, and to =
their conformance statements.  We believe that's correct for adding new =
attributes.

Mark

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Thanks,
--David
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Having seen no objections, draft-ietf-storm-rdmap-ext-01 will be an officia=
l WG draft;
I need to get the necessary minor change to the WG charter approved and pos=
ted before
I can change the state of that draft in the draft tracker.

Thanks,
--David

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> The sense of the storm WG meeting in Quebec City was that the storm WG
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> the RDMA protocol extensions proposed therein.
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> Thanks,
> --David
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Reminder: the two iSCSI drafts are in WG Last Call:

			iSCSI Protocol (Consolidated)
	  	    draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons-03.txt

       Internet Small Computer Systems Interface (iSCSI) SAM
                 draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam-03.txt

Please send all technical comments to the storm mailing list (storm@ietf.or=
g).
Editorial comments may be sent directly to the draft editors:
- iSCSI Protocol (Consolidated): Mallikarjun Chadalapaka <cbm@chadalapaka.c=
om>
- iSCSI SAM (new features): Frederick Knight <knight@netapp.com>

A new version of the SAM draft is expected sometime soon to correct problem=
s
in the title, abstract, and IANA registry text (the IANA changes were discu=
ssed
in Quebec City - they mostly affect the range of allocatable values, not th=
e
actual values used in these two drafts).

I've been reaching out to a number of implementation groups at EMC, VMware
and Dell, along with the Linux implementers.  I have some feedback - one of
the EMC implementation groups looked at the SAM draft and the changes that =
the
consolidated iSCSI draft makes to the existing RFCs and indicated that they
saw no problems with the changes.

August seems to be a slow month for everyone.  Therefore the WG Last Call o=
n
these two drafts is EXTENDED to midnight, US Eastern Time on Tuesday, Septe=
mber 6.

Thanks,
--David (storm WG co-chair)
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Here are a couple of minor comments on the consolidated draft:
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1)      an observation in the abstract is the sentence:
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The iSCSI protocol aims to be fully compliant with
  the standardized SCSI Architecture Model (SAM).
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In fact, "SAM" is incorrect here.  SAM is not a generic name; SAM is the
name of the very first version of the SCSI Architecture Model.  In fact,
the original iSCSI was based on SAM-2, not SAM.  Maybe it should leave
out the use of a meaningful SCSI acronym (SAM) and just say:
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The iSCSI protocol aims to be fully compliant with the standardized SCSI
Architecture.
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2)      Last paragraph of abstract:
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This document consolidates RFCs 3720, 3980, 4850 and 5048 into a
  single document and makes additional updates to the consolidated
  specification. This document also updates RFC 3721. The text in
  this document thus supersedes the text in RFCs 3720, 3721, 3980,
  4850 and 5048 whenever there is such a question.
=20
The first sentence does not list 3721 as part of the consolidation, but
the last sentence says this document supersedes 3721.  It seems that in
order to supersede 3721, it must consolidate 3721 into this single
document.  The middle sentence ("This document also updates RFC3721.")
adds confusion.  Is it that just some of 3721 is consolidated, and other
parts are not consolidated, so in fact, only some of 3721 is superseded?
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The last sentence is also missing something ... "The text in this
document supersedes the text in ... whenever there is such a question."
- what question?  Does this mean whenever there is a conflict?; or
whenever they disagree?; or whenever there is a difference?
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                Fred
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<p class=3DMsoNormal>Here are a couple of minor comments on the =
consolidated
draft:<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<p class=3DMsoListParagraph style=3D'text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 =
level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span
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style=3D'mso-list:Ignore'>1)<span
style=3D'font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; =
</span></span></span><![endif]>an
observation in the abstract is the sentence:<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal style=3D'tab-stops:45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt =
229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt =
641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt'><span
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier =
New";mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman"'>The
iSCSI protocol aims to be fully compliant with<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";
mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>the standardized SCSI =
Architecture Model
(SAM).<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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style=3D'font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";
mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal>In fact, &#8220;SAM&#8221; is incorrect here.<span
style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>SAM is not a generic name; SAM =
is the
name of the very first version of the SCSI Architecture Model.<span
style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>In fact, the original iSCSI was =
based on
SAM-2, not SAM.<span style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>Maybe it =
should
leave out the use of a meaningful SCSI acronym (SAM) and just =
say:<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal>The iSCSI protocol aims to be fully compliant with =
the
standardized SCSI Architecture.<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

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style=3D'mso-list:Ignore'>2)<span
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paragraph of abstract:<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<pre>This document consolidates RFCs 3720, 3980, 4850 and 5048 into =
a<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><span style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; =
</span>single document and makes additional updates to the =
consolidated<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><span =
style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>specification. This document =
also updates RFC 3721. The text in<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><span =
style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>this document thus supersedes =
the text in RFCs 3720, 3721, 3980,<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><span =
style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>4850 and 5048 whenever there is =
such a question.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></pre>

<p class=3DMsoNormal>The first sentence does not list 3721 as part of =
the
consolidation, but the last sentence says this document supersedes =
3721.<span
style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>It seems that in order to =
supersede
3721, it must consolidate 3721 into this single document.<span
style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>The middle sentence =
(&#8220;This
document also updates RFC3721.&#8221;) adds confusion.<span
style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>Is it that just some of 3721 is
consolidated, and other parts are not consolidated, so in fact, only =
some of
3721 is superseded?<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal>The last sentence is also missing something &#8230;
&#8221;The text in this document supersedes the text in &#8230; whenever =
there
is <span style=3D'color:red'>such a question</span>.&#8221; &#8211; what
question?<span style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>Does this mean =
whenever
there is a conflict?; or whenever they disagree?; or whenever there is a
difference?<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'mso-tab-count:1'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>Fred<o:p></o:p></p>

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In doing an internal review of the iSCSI Last Call drafts, someone asked me
this.  I want to run this response by the larger WG to see if we're all in
agreement.

Question: What is the difference between
Version-max/Version-min/Version-active values exchanged during the iSCSI
Login phase, and the negotiated value of iSCSIProtocolLevel key?

Answer: The V-* values agreed to during the Login process determine the
operating version of the iSCSI protocol, and announce if any other versions
can be supported by either side.  The operational iSCSIProtocolLevel key on
the other hand determines the specific protocol features that may be used on
an iSCSI session, within the "Version-active" versioned iSCSI protocol.

If this sounds reasonable, it is worth capturing this clarification in the
SAM-4 draft where this key is defined.

Thanks.

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Thanks Fred for the feedback.

On #1, I will update the reference to SAM-2, as the rest of the spec is
based on SAM-2 (and SAM-4 compliance is coming in the new other draft).

On #2, RFC 3721 is an Informational RFC - while the consolidated draft adds
a clarification that overrides some 3721 verbiage  (SLP SHOULD requirement)
to remove any implementer ambiguity, the consolidated draft does not
consolidate that RFC.  The reason was that this is a standards-track
document, and we did not want to include all the informational text into
this.  That's the reason for the current Abstract wording that you cite
below.

To explain "whenever there is such a question", the answer is all of those
you have listed (I think of Conflict/Disagreement/Difference as the same in
this context), :) 

Thanks.

Mallikarjun
  

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Here are a couple of minor comments on the consolidated draft:

1) an observation in the abstract is the sentence:

The iSCSI protocol aims to be fully compliant with
  the standardized SCSI Architecture Model (SAM).

In fact, "SAM" is incorrect here.  SAM is not a generic name; SAM is the
name of the very first version of the SCSI Architecture Model.  In fact, the
original iSCSI was based on SAM-2, not SAM.  Maybe it should leave out the
use of a meaningful SCSI acronym (SAM) and just say:

The iSCSI protocol aims to be fully compliant with the standardized SCSI
Architecture.

2) Last paragraph of abstract:

This document consolidates RFCs 3720, 3980, 4850 and 5048 into a
  single document and makes additional updates to the consolidated
  specification. This document also updates RFC 3721. The text in
  this document thus supersedes the text in RFCs 3720, 3721, 3980,
  4850 and 5048 whenever there is such a question.

The first sentence does not list 3721 as part of the consolidation, but the
last sentence says this document supersedes 3721.  It seems that in order to
supersede 3721, it must consolidate 3721 into this single document.  The
middle sentence ("This document also updates RFC3721.") adds confusion.  Is
it that just some of 3721 is consolidated, and other parts are not
consolidated, so in fact, only some of 3721 is superseded?

The last sentence is also missing something . "The text in this document
supersedes the text in . whenever there is such a question." - what
question?  Does this mean whenever there is a conflict?; or whenever they
disagree?; or whenever there is a difference?

	Fred



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The new SAM features draft changes the format of some PDUs.

The current Version-max/min/active are fields within a PDU.

The iSCSIProtocolLevel tells the end points which format to use for the
PDUs, so the end point can find the fields within the PDU.  This lets us
have different format PDUs AFTER the negotiation of this key.  The
creation of the iSCSIProtocolLevel key allows us to write future drafts
that make changes more radical than what the new SAM features draft
contains.

You need to know the iSCSIProtocolLevel to know which PDU format to use.
So this makes me wonder, if we should move the negotiation of
iSCSIProtocolLevel from the full feature phase to the login phase
(should the negotiation of iSCSIProtocolLevel come earlier)?  Might we
ever want to change the format of any of the PDUs used during login?

	Fred

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In doing an internal review of the iSCSI Last Call drafts, someone asked
me
this.  I want to run this response by the larger WG to see if we're all
in
agreement.

Question: What is the difference between
Version-max/Version-min/Version-active values exchanged during the iSCSI
Login phase, and the negotiated value of iSCSIProtocolLevel key?

Answer: The V-* values agreed to during the Login process determine the
operating version of the iSCSI protocol, and announce if any other
versions
can be supported by either side.  The operational iSCSIProtocolLevel key
on
the other hand determines the specific protocol features that may be
used on
an iSCSI session, within the "Version-active" versioned iSCSI protocol.

If this sounds reasonable, it is worth capturing this clarification in
the
SAM-4 draft where this key is defined.

Thanks.

Mallikarjun



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As David says below, Last call implementer review feedback is very =
welcome.

I personally am reaching out to implementers in Microsoft, and so far
haven't uncovered any major issues (barring a clarification that I sent =
two
days ago to the mailing list).

I have now posted the iSCSI Last Call review slides that I used in =
internal
reviews.  This covers both iSCSI drafts in Last Call.  Given the size of =
the
consolidated draft, you may take advantage of the slides in speeding up =
your
reviews.  Please drop me a note if you'd like to see something
added/updated.

http://www.chadalapaka.com/Documents/iSCSI%20Drafts%20=96%20Last%20Call%2=
0Revi
ew.pdf=20

Thanks.

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  Importance: High
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  Reminder: the two iSCSI drafts are in WG Last Call:
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  			iSCSI Protocol (Consolidated)
  	  	    draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons-03.txt
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         Internet Small Computer Systems Interface (iSCSI) SAM
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  A new version of the SAM draft is expected sometime soon to correct
  problems in the title, abstract, and IANA registry text (the IANA =
changes
  were discussed in Quebec City - they mostly affect the range of
allocatable
  values, not the actual values used in these two drafts).
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  I've been reaching out to a number of implementation groups at EMC,
  VMware and Dell, along with the Linux implementers.  I have some =
feedback
  - one of the EMC implementation groups looked at the SAM draft and the
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and
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I agree with Fred.  I think we should mark the key as IO (Initialize-Only)
in terms of when it can be used.

As far as what the iSCSIProtocolLevel indicates though, it may communicate
changes in PDU format and/or end node semantics.  IOW, there is no reason to
limit this exclusively to signal PDU format changes.  Hope that makes sense.

Changing the format of the Login-related PDUs is an interesting question.  I
would think that Version number should be bumped up to cover that scenario.

Thanks.

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  Subject: RE: [storm] iSCSI Level and Version
  
  The new SAM features draft changes the format of some PDUs.
  
  The current Version-max/min/active are fields within a PDU.
  
  The iSCSIProtocolLevel tells the end points which format to use for the
  PDUs, so the end point can find the fields within the PDU.  This lets us
have
  different format PDUs AFTER the negotiation of this key.  The creation of
  the iSCSIProtocolLevel key allows us to write future drafts that make
  changes more radical than what the new SAM features draft contains.
  
  You need to know the iSCSIProtocolLevel to know which PDU format to use.
  So this makes me wonder, if we should move the negotiation of
  iSCSIProtocolLevel from the full feature phase to the login phase (should
the
  negotiation of iSCSIProtocolLevel come earlier)?  Might we ever want to
  change the format of any of the PDUs used during login?
  
  	Fred
  
  -----Original Message-----
  From: Mallikarjun Chadalapaka [mailto:cbm@chadalapaka.com]
  Sent: Tuesday, August 16, 2011 11:14 PM
  To: storm@ietf.org
  Subject: [storm] iSCSI Level and Version
  
  In doing an internal review of the iSCSI Last Call drafts, someone asked
me
  this.  I want to run this response by the larger WG to see if we're all in
  agreement.
  
  Question: What is the difference between Version-max/Version-
  min/Version-active values exchanged during the iSCSI Login phase, and the
  negotiated value of iSCSIProtocolLevel key?
  
  Answer: The V-* values agreed to during the Login process determine the
  operating version of the iSCSI protocol, and announce if any other
versions
  can be supported by either side.  The operational iSCSIProtocolLevel key
on
  the other hand determines the specific protocol features that may be used
  on an iSCSI session, within the "Version-active" versioned iSCSI protocol.
  
  If this sounds reasonable, it is worth capturing this clarification in the
  SAM-4 draft where this key is defined.
  
  Thanks.
  
  Mallikarjun
  
  
  
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I'll change it to IO (Initialize-Only).

Yes, the iSCSIProtocolLevel indicates something the implementation needs
to know very early in the communication process (that includes PDU
formats, or end node semantics, or maybe something else we haven't
thought of yet).  I just described PDU formats, because that is the case
that we happen to have in front of us at this point in time.

And the rest of this stuff is hypothetical.  Changing the version number
wouldn't do any good, if you couldn't find the version number field
(because of a change to the PDU format).  Maybe in that hypothetical
situation, BOTH the version number and the iSCSIProtocolLevel would need
to change.  But, let's wait to cross that bridge until we have too.

	Fred

-----Original Message-----
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Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2011 8:40 PM
To: Knight, Frederick; storm@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [storm] iSCSI Level and Version

I agree with Fred.  I think we should mark the key as IO
(Initialize-Only)
in terms of when it can be used.

As far as what the iSCSIProtocolLevel indicates though, it may
communicate
changes in PDU format and/or end node semantics.  IOW, there is no
reason to
limit this exclusively to signal PDU format changes.  Hope that makes
sense.

Changing the format of the Login-related PDUs is an interesting
question.  I
would think that Version number should be bumped up to cover that
scenario.

Thanks.

Mallikarjun


  -----Original Message-----
  From: Knight, Frederick [mailto:Frederick.Knight@netapp.com]
  Sent: Tuesday, August 16, 2011 10:14 PM
  To: Mallikarjun Chadalapaka; storm@ietf.org
  Subject: RE: [storm] iSCSI Level and Version
 =20
  The new SAM features draft changes the format of some PDUs.
 =20
  The current Version-max/min/active are fields within a PDU.
 =20
  The iSCSIProtocolLevel tells the end points which format to use for
the
  PDUs, so the end point can find the fields within the PDU.  This lets
us
have
  different format PDUs AFTER the negotiation of this key.  The creation
of
  the iSCSIProtocolLevel key allows us to write future drafts that make
  changes more radical than what the new SAM features draft contains.
 =20
  You need to know the iSCSIProtocolLevel to know which PDU format to
use.
  So this makes me wonder, if we should move the negotiation of
  iSCSIProtocolLevel from the full feature phase to the login phase
(should
the
  negotiation of iSCSIProtocolLevel come earlier)?  Might we ever want
to
  change the format of any of the PDUs used during login?
 =20
  	Fred
 =20
  -----Original Message-----
  From: Mallikarjun Chadalapaka [mailto:cbm@chadalapaka.com]
  Sent: Tuesday, August 16, 2011 11:14 PM
  To: storm@ietf.org
  Subject: [storm] iSCSI Level and Version
 =20
  In doing an internal review of the iSCSI Last Call drafts, someone
asked
me
  this.  I want to run this response by the larger WG to see if we're
all in
  agreement.
 =20
  Question: What is the difference between Version-max/Version-
  min/Version-active values exchanged during the iSCSI Login phase, and
the
  negotiated value of iSCSIProtocolLevel key?
 =20
  Answer: The V-* values agreed to during the Login process determine
the
  operating version of the iSCSI protocol, and announce if any other
versions
  can be supported by either side.  The operational iSCSIProtocolLevel
key
on
  the other hand determines the specific protocol features that may be
used
  on an iSCSI session, within the "Version-active" versioned iSCSI
protocol.
 =20
  If this sounds reasonable, it is worth capturing this clarification in
the
  SAM-4 draft where this key is defined.
 =20
  Thanks.
 =20
  Mallikarjun
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Hey,

I believe the ORD/IRD fields in the MPAv2 messages need to be in Network 
Byte Order.  This is not mandated in the draft.

I also think there is an oversight in RFC 5044 with regard to the 
PD_Length field in the MPAv1 messages.  It should also be in Network 
Byte Order, but I don't see this requirement anywhere in the RFC.

Or maybe NBO is a always assumed in IETF wire-protocol messages?


Steve.


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Andy,

Many thanks for looking at the consolidated draft.

> In section 9.2, authentication is now required (MUST rather than MAY).
> I'm quite sure this isn't going to fly with everyone.  CHAP is rarely
> used in production environments, and until there's some distributed
> key authentication method, I don't think many customers are going
> to be interested.

Indeed it does, good catch, thank you.

The offending text in the consolidated draft is:

9.2. In-band Initiator-Target Authentication

  During login, the target MUST authenticate the initiator and the
  initiator MAY authenticate the target.

RFC 3720 had this text instead:

8.2.  In-band Initiator-Target Authentication

   During login, the target MAY authenticate the initiator and the
   initiator MAY authenticate the target.

Thanks,
--David
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Andy Banta [mailto:abanta@vmware.com]
> Sent: Monday, August 15, 2011 1:02 PM
> To: Black, David; storm@ietf.org
> Cc: Banta, Andy (VMWare); Sreekanti, Kumar (VMWare); Huang, Kun (VMWare);=
 Aithal, Prasanna (VMWare);
> Tomar, Nagendra (VMWare)
> Subject: Re: Drafts of new iSCSI specs
>=20
> On Thu, Aug 04, 2011 at 12:08:38AM -0400, Black, David wrote:
> > Andy,
> >
> > Can I interest you or anyone else at VMware in taking a look at these
> > specs - it
> > shouldn't involve a lot of time.  I can extend the deadline for input
> > past VMworld if that helps.
>=20
> David, Folks,
>=20
> I'm the vSphere iSCSI development tech lead at VMware.
>=20
> I got a chance to look at the first one.  A few comments:
>=20
> In section 9.2, authentication is now required (MUST rather than MAY).
> I'm quite sure this isn't going to fly with everyone.  CHAP is rarely
> used in production environments, and until there's some distributed
> key authentication method, I don't think many customers are going
> to be interested.
>=20
> If this RFC gets approved as written, it will regularly be violated at
> this clause.
>=20
> We are interested in coming up with a pluggable authentication method,
> but I don't think that will change the spec in any way.
>=20
> I don't have any other specific comments based on the changes, but
> have not gone through the spec in detail.  I'll take a look at the
> second spec in the next few days.
>=20
> Thanks,
> Andy
> banta@vmware.com
>=20
> > Thanks,
> > --David
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Black, David
> > > Sent: Friday, July 15, 2011 2:01 AM
> > > To: Banta, Andy (VMWare)
> > > Cc: Black, David
> > > Subject: FW: Drafts of new iSCSI specs
> > > Importance: High
> > >
> > > Hi Andy,
> > >
> > > It was good to see you at EMC World, even if only briefly.
> > >
> > > I'm one of the co-chairs of the IETF storm (STORage Maintenance), whe=
re
> > > new drafts of the iSCSI specifications are close to completion (they'=
re
> > > in Working Group Last Call).  We're looking for review and feedback f=
rom
> > > iSCSI implementers, and I was hoping that you could take a look at th=
is
> > > on behalf of ESX's iSCSI implementation.
> > >
> > > There are two new iSCSI drafts:
> > >
> > > (1) iSCSI Protocol (Consolidated), draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons-03
> > > 	http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons/
> > >
> > > This draft consolidates several existing iSCSI RFCs, primarily RFC 37=
20
> > > and RFC 5048, and removes some unimplemented features - the result sh=
ould be
> > > backwards-compatible with existing implementations.  As the draft is =
several
> > > hundred pages in length, I don't expect you to read it in its entiret=
y, but
> > > could you look at this summary of what's been changed and see whether=
 it's
> > > reasonable?:
> > >
> > > 2.3. Summary of Changes
> > >
> > >    1)     Consolidated RFCs 3720, 3980, 4850 and 5048, and made the
> > >            necessary editorial changes
> > >    2)     iSCSIProtocolLevel is specified as "1" in section 13.24, an=
d
> > >            added a related normative reference to [iSCSI-SAM] draft
> > >    3)     Markers and related keys were removed
> > >    4)     SPKM authentication and related keys were removed
> > >    5)     Added a new section 13.25 on responding to obsoleted keys
> > >    6)     Have explicitly allowed initiator+target implementations
> > >            throughout the text
> > >    7)   Clarified in section 4.2.7 that implementations SHOULD NOT
> > >          rely on SLP-based discovery
> > >    8)   Added UML diagrams, and related conventions in section 3
> > >    9)   FastAbort implementation is made a "SHOULD" requirement in
> > >          section 4.2.3.4 from the previous "MUST" requirement.
> > >    10) Clarified in section 6.2 that validity of NotUnderstood
> > >          response depends on iSCSIProtocolLevel
> > >
> > > (2) iSCSI SAM features, draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam-03
> > > 	http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam/
> > >
> > > iSCSI was originally based on version 2 of the SCSI architecture, SAM=
-2.
> > > This draft updates iSCSI to the current version of the SCSI architect=
ure,
> > > SAM-5, by adding additional features, and a text key to negotiate the=
ir
> > > usage, iSCSIProtocolLevel.  The draft is only about 20 pages - please=
 take
> > > a look at it from an implementer's standpoint.
> > >
> > > Finally, if there's anything you wish the iSCSI RFCs said, or functio=
nality
> > > that you think should be removed, please say so.
> > >
> > > Your comments can be sent directly to the mailing list - storm@ietf.o=
rg,
> > > or can be sent to me.  Please identify yourself as a VMware iSCSI
> > > implementer in your comments.  The Working Group Last Call on these d=
rafts
> > > runs through August 21st - please let me know when you think you coul=
d
> > > have comments ready.
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > > --David
> > > ----------------------------------------------------
> > > David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer
> > > EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA=A0 01748
> > > +1 (508) 293-7953=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 FAX: +1 (508) 2=
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> > > ----------------------------------------------------
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I have reached out to both the VNX and Symmetrix iSCSI implementation teams=
 inside
EMC.  Both teams have checked the changes in the consolidated draft and the=
 features
in the SAM draft, and do not have any problems with what is being specified=
.

Thanks,
--David
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EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA=A0 01748
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Mallikarjun Chadalapaka [mailto:cbm@chadalapaka.com]
> Sent: Thursday, August 18, 2011 4:42 PM
> To: Black, David; storm@ietf.org
> Subject: RE: [storm] iSCSI drafts - Last Call update and extension
>=20
> As David says below, Last call implementer review feedback is very welcom=
e.
>=20
> I personally am reaching out to implementers in Microsoft, and so far
> haven't uncovered any major issues (barring a clarification that I sent t=
wo
> days ago to the mailing list).
>=20
> I have now posted the iSCSI Last Call review slides that I used in intern=
al
> reviews.  This covers both iSCSI drafts in Last Call.  Given the size of =
the
> consolidated draft, you may take advantage of the slides in speeding up y=
our
> reviews.  Please drop me a note if you'd like to see something
> added/updated.
>=20
> http://www.chadalapaka.com/Documents/iSCSI%20Drafts%20-%20Last%20Call%20R=
eview.pdf
>=20
>=20
> Thanks.
>=20
> Mallikarjun
>=20
>=20
>   -----Original Message-----
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>   Of david.black@emc.com
>   Sent: Friday, August 12, 2011 5:00 PM
>   To: storm@ietf.org
>   Subject: [storm] iSCSI drafts - Last Call update and extension
>   Importance: High
>=20
>   Reminder: the two iSCSI drafts are in WG Last Call:
>=20
>   			iSCSI Protocol (Consolidated)
>   	  	    draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons-03.txt
>=20
>          Internet Small Computer Systems Interface (iSCSI) SAM
>                    draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam-03.txt
>=20
>   Please send all technical comments to the storm mailing list
>   (storm@ietf.org).
>   Editorial comments may be sent directly to the draft editors:
>   - iSCSI Protocol (Consolidated): Mallikarjun Chadalapaka
>   <cbm@chadalapaka.com>
>   - iSCSI SAM (new features): Frederick Knight <knight@netapp.com>
>=20
>   A new version of the SAM draft is expected sometime soon to correct
>   problems in the title, abstract, and IANA registry text (the IANA chang=
es
>   were discussed in Quebec City - they mostly affect the range of
> allocatable
>   values, not the actual values used in these two drafts).
>=20
>   I've been reaching out to a number of implementation groups at EMC,
>   VMware and Dell, along with the Linux implementers.  I have some feedba=
ck
>   - one of the EMC implementation groups looked at the SAM draft and the
>   changes that the consolidated iSCSI draft makes to the existing RFCs an=
d
>   indicated that they saw no problems with the changes.
>=20
>   August seems to be a slow month for everyone.  Therefore the WG Last Ca=
ll
>   on these two drafts is EXTENDED to midnight, US Eastern Time on Tuesday=
,
>   September 6.
>=20
>   Thanks,
>   --David (storm WG co-chair)
>   ----------------------------------------------------
>   David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer
>   EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA=A0 01748
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Follow-up on this - I believe that we should stick with the two MAY-use req=
uirements that were in RFC 3720.

Thanks,
--David


> -----Original Message-----
> From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of=
 david.black@emc.com
> Sent: Wednesday, August 24, 2011 7:10 PM
> To: Banta, Andy (VMWare); storm@ietf.org
> Cc: Banta, Andy (VMWare); Huang, Kun (VMWare); Tomar, Nagendra (VMWare); =
Sreekanti, Kumar (VMWare);
> Aithal, Prasanna (VMWare); Goyal, Neeraj (VMWare)
> Subject: Re: [storm] Drafts of new iSCSI specs
>=20
> Andy,
>=20
> Many thanks for looking at the consolidated draft.
>=20
> > In section 9.2, authentication is now required (MUST rather than MAY).
> > I'm quite sure this isn't going to fly with everyone.  CHAP is rarely
> > used in production environments, and until there's some distributed
> > key authentication method, I don't think many customers are going
> > to be interested.
>=20
> Indeed it does, good catch, thank you.
>=20
> The offending text in the consolidated draft is:
>=20
> 9.2. In-band Initiator-Target Authentication
>=20
>   During login, the target MUST authenticate the initiator and the
>   initiator MAY authenticate the target.
>=20
> RFC 3720 had this text instead:
>=20
> 8.2.  In-band Initiator-Target Authentication
>=20
>    During login, the target MAY authenticate the initiator and the
>    initiator MAY authenticate the target.
>=20
> Thanks,
> --David
> ----------------------------------------------------
> David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer
> EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA=A0 01748
> +1 (508) 293-7953=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7=
786
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> ----------------------------------------------------
>=20
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Andy Banta [mailto:abanta@vmware.com]
> > Sent: Monday, August 15, 2011 1:02 PM
> > To: Black, David; storm@ietf.org
> > Cc: Banta, Andy (VMWare); Sreekanti, Kumar (VMWare); Huang, Kun (VMWare=
); Aithal, Prasanna (VMWare);
> > Tomar, Nagendra (VMWare)
> > Subject: Re: Drafts of new iSCSI specs
> >
> > On Thu, Aug 04, 2011 at 12:08:38AM -0400, Black, David wrote:
> > > Andy,
> > >
> > > Can I interest you or anyone else at VMware in taking a look at these
> > > specs - it
> > > shouldn't involve a lot of time.  I can extend the deadline for input
> > > past VMworld if that helps.
> >
> > David, Folks,
> >
> > I'm the vSphere iSCSI development tech lead at VMware.
> >
> > I got a chance to look at the first one.  A few comments:
> >
> > In section 9.2, authentication is now required (MUST rather than MAY).
> > I'm quite sure this isn't going to fly with everyone.  CHAP is rarely
> > used in production environments, and until there's some distributed
> > key authentication method, I don't think many customers are going
> > to be interested.
> >
> > If this RFC gets approved as written, it will regularly be violated at
> > this clause.
> >
> > We are interested in coming up with a pluggable authentication method,
> > but I don't think that will change the spec in any way.
> >
> > I don't have any other specific comments based on the changes, but
> > have not gone through the spec in detail.  I'll take a look at the
> > second spec in the next few days.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Andy
> > banta@vmware.com
> >
> > > Thanks,
> > > --David
> > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: Black, David
> > > > Sent: Friday, July 15, 2011 2:01 AM
> > > > To: Banta, Andy (VMWare)
> > > > Cc: Black, David
> > > > Subject: FW: Drafts of new iSCSI specs
> > > > Importance: High
> > > >
> > > > Hi Andy,
> > > >
> > > > It was good to see you at EMC World, even if only briefly.
> > > >
> > > > I'm one of the co-chairs of the IETF storm (STORage Maintenance), w=
here
> > > > new drafts of the iSCSI specifications are close to completion (the=
y're
> > > > in Working Group Last Call).  We're looking for review and feedback=
 from
> > > > iSCSI implementers, and I was hoping that you could take a look at =
this
> > > > on behalf of ESX's iSCSI implementation.
> > > >
> > > > There are two new iSCSI drafts:
> > > >
> > > > (1) iSCSI Protocol (Consolidated), draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons-03
> > > > 	http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons/
> > > >
> > > > This draft consolidates several existing iSCSI RFCs, primarily RFC =
3720
> > > > and RFC 5048, and removes some unimplemented features - the result =
should be
> > > > backwards-compatible with existing implementations.  As the draft i=
s several
> > > > hundred pages in length, I don't expect you to read it in its entir=
ety, but
> > > > could you look at this summary of what's been changed and see wheth=
er it's
> > > > reasonable?:
> > > >
> > > > 2.3. Summary of Changes
> > > >
> > > >    1)     Consolidated RFCs 3720, 3980, 4850 and 5048, and made the
> > > >            necessary editorial changes
> > > >    2)     iSCSIProtocolLevel is specified as "1" in section 13.24, =
and
> > > >            added a related normative reference to [iSCSI-SAM] draft
> > > >    3)     Markers and related keys were removed
> > > >    4)     SPKM authentication and related keys were removed
> > > >    5)     Added a new section 13.25 on responding to obsoleted keys
> > > >    6)     Have explicitly allowed initiator+target implementations
> > > >            throughout the text
> > > >    7)   Clarified in section 4.2.7 that implementations SHOULD NOT
> > > >          rely on SLP-based discovery
> > > >    8)   Added UML diagrams, and related conventions in section 3
> > > >    9)   FastAbort implementation is made a "SHOULD" requirement in
> > > >          section 4.2.3.4 from the previous "MUST" requirement.
> > > >    10) Clarified in section 6.2 that validity of NotUnderstood
> > > >          response depends on iSCSIProtocolLevel
> > > >
> > > > (2) iSCSI SAM features, draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam-03
> > > > 	http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam/
> > > >
> > > > iSCSI was originally based on version 2 of the SCSI architecture, S=
AM-2.
> > > > This draft updates iSCSI to the current version of the SCSI archite=
cture,
> > > > SAM-5, by adding additional features, and a text key to negotiate t=
heir
> > > > usage, iSCSIProtocolLevel.  The draft is only about 20 pages - plea=
se take
> > > > a look at it from an implementer's standpoint.
> > > >
> > > > Finally, if there's anything you wish the iSCSI RFCs said, or funct=
ionality
> > > > that you think should be removed, please say so.
> > > >
> > > > Your comments can be sent directly to the mailing list - storm@ietf=
.org,
> > > > or can be sent to me.  Please identify yourself as a VMware iSCSI
> > > > implementer in your comments.  The Working Group Last Call on these=
 drafts
> > > > runs through August 21st - please let me know when you think you co=
uld
> > > > have comments ready.
> > > >
> > > > Thanks,
> > > > --David
> > > > ----------------------------------------------------
> > > > David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer
> > > > EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA=A0 01748
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Yes, absolutely.

	paul

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Subject: Re: [storm] Drafts of new iSCSI specs

Follow-up on this - I believe that we should stick with the two MAY-use req=
uirements that were in RFC 3720.

Thanks,
--David


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> Of david.black@emc.com
> Sent: Wednesday, August 24, 2011 7:10 PM
> To: Banta, Andy (VMWare); storm@ietf.org
> Cc: Banta, Andy (VMWare); Huang, Kun (VMWare); Tomar, Nagendra=20
> (VMWare); Sreekanti, Kumar (VMWare); Aithal, Prasanna (VMWare); Goyal,=20
> Neeraj (VMWare)
> Subject: Re: [storm] Drafts of new iSCSI specs
>=20
> Andy,
>=20
> Many thanks for looking at the consolidated draft.
>=20
> > In section 9.2, authentication is now required (MUST rather than MAY).
> > I'm quite sure this isn't going to fly with everyone.  CHAP is=20
> > rarely used in production environments, and until there's some=20
> > distributed key authentication method, I don't think many customers=20
> > are going to be interested.
>=20
> Indeed it does, good catch, thank you.
>=20
> The offending text in the consolidated draft is:
>=20
> 9.2. In-band Initiator-Target Authentication
>=20
>   During login, the target MUST authenticate the initiator and the
>   initiator MAY authenticate the target.
>=20
> RFC 3720 had this text instead:
>=20
> 8.2.  In-band Initiator-Target Authentication
>=20
>    During login, the target MAY authenticate the initiator and the
>    initiator MAY authenticate the target.
>=20
> Thanks,
> --David
> ----------------------------------------------------
> David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176 South St.,=20
> Hopkinton, MA=A0 01748
> +1 (508) 293-7953=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7=
786
> david.black@emc.com=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754
> ----------------------------------------------------
>=20
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Andy Banta [mailto:abanta@vmware.com]
> > Sent: Monday, August 15, 2011 1:02 PM
> > To: Black, David; storm@ietf.org
> > Cc: Banta, Andy (VMWare); Sreekanti, Kumar (VMWare); Huang, Kun=20
> > (VMWare); Aithal, Prasanna (VMWare); Tomar, Nagendra (VMWare)
> > Subject: Re: Drafts of new iSCSI specs
> >
> > On Thu, Aug 04, 2011 at 12:08:38AM -0400, Black, David wrote:
> > > Andy,
> > >
> > > Can I interest you or anyone else at VMware in taking a look at=20
> > > these specs - it shouldn't involve a lot of time.  I can extend=20
> > > the deadline for input past VMworld if that helps.
> >
> > David, Folks,
> >
> > I'm the vSphere iSCSI development tech lead at VMware.
> >
> > I got a chance to look at the first one.  A few comments:
> >
> > In section 9.2, authentication is now required (MUST rather than MAY).
> > I'm quite sure this isn't going to fly with everyone.  CHAP is=20
> > rarely used in production environments, and until there's some=20
> > distributed key authentication method, I don't think many customers=20
> > are going to be interested.
> >
> > If this RFC gets approved as written, it will regularly be violated=20
> > at this clause.
> >
> > We are interested in coming up with a pluggable authentication=20
> > method, but I don't think that will change the spec in any way.
> >
> > I don't have any other specific comments based on the changes, but=20
> > have not gone through the spec in detail.  I'll take a look at the=20
> > second spec in the next few days.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Andy
> > banta@vmware.com
> >
> > > Thanks,
> > > --David
> > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: Black, David
> > > > Sent: Friday, July 15, 2011 2:01 AM
> > > > To: Banta, Andy (VMWare)
> > > > Cc: Black, David
> > > > Subject: FW: Drafts of new iSCSI specs
> > > > Importance: High
> > > >
> > > > Hi Andy,
> > > >
> > > > It was good to see you at EMC World, even if only briefly.
> > > >
> > > > I'm one of the co-chairs of the IETF storm (STORage=20
> > > > Maintenance), where new drafts of the iSCSI specifications are=20
> > > > close to completion (they're in Working Group Last Call).  We're=20
> > > > looking for review and feedback from iSCSI implementers, and I=20
> > > > was hoping that you could take a look at this on behalf of ESX's iS=
CSI implementation.
> > > >
> > > > There are two new iSCSI drafts:
> > > >
> > > > (1) iSCSI Protocol (Consolidated), draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons-03
> > > > 	http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons/
> > > >
> > > > This draft consolidates several existing iSCSI RFCs, primarily=20
> > > > RFC 3720 and RFC 5048, and removes some unimplemented features -=20
> > > > the result should be backwards-compatible with existing=20
> > > > implementations.  As the draft is several hundred pages in=20
> > > > length, I don't expect you to read it in its entirety, but could=20
> > > > you look at this summary of what's been changed and see whether=20
> > > > it's
> > > > reasonable?:
> > > >
> > > > 2.3. Summary of Changes
> > > >
> > > >    1)     Consolidated RFCs 3720, 3980, 4850 and 5048, and made the
> > > >            necessary editorial changes
> > > >    2)     iSCSIProtocolLevel is specified as "1" in section 13.24, =
and
> > > >            added a related normative reference to [iSCSI-SAM] draft
> > > >    3)     Markers and related keys were removed
> > > >    4)     SPKM authentication and related keys were removed
> > > >    5)     Added a new section 13.25 on responding to obsoleted keys
> > > >    6)     Have explicitly allowed initiator+target implementations
> > > >            throughout the text
> > > >    7)   Clarified in section 4.2.7 that implementations SHOULD NOT
> > > >          rely on SLP-based discovery
> > > >    8)   Added UML diagrams, and related conventions in section 3
> > > >    9)   FastAbort implementation is made a "SHOULD" requirement in
> > > >          section 4.2.3.4 from the previous "MUST" requirement.
> > > >    10) Clarified in section 6.2 that validity of NotUnderstood
> > > >          response depends on iSCSIProtocolLevel
> > > >
> > > > (2) iSCSI SAM features, draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam-03
> > > > 	http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam/
> > > >
> > > > iSCSI was originally based on version 2 of the SCSI architecture, S=
AM-2.
> > > > This draft updates iSCSI to the current version of the SCSI=20
> > > > architecture, SAM-5, by adding additional features, and a text=20
> > > > key to negotiate their usage, iSCSIProtocolLevel.  The draft is=20
> > > > only about 20 pages - please take a look at it from an implementer'=
s standpoint.
> > > >
> > > > Finally, if there's anything you wish the iSCSI RFCs said, or=20
> > > > functionality that you think should be removed, please say so.
> > > >
> > > > Your comments can be sent directly to the mailing list -=20
> > > > storm@ietf.org, or can be sent to me.  Please identify yourself=20
> > > > as a VMware iSCSI implementer in your comments.  The Working=20
> > > > Group Last Call on these drafts runs through August 21st -=20
> > > > please let me know when you think you could have comments ready.
> > > >
> > > > Thanks,
> > > > --David
> > > > ----------------------------------------------------
> > > > David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176=20
> > > > South St., Hopkinton, MA=A0 01748
> > > > +1 (508) 293-7953=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 FAX: +1 (508)=
 293-7786
> > > > david.black@emc.com=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754
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The 2011-2012 Nominating committee is seeking nominations from now=20
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Self nomination is welcome.=20

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Because the list of nominees this year is public, we will accept=20
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If you wish to provide anonymous feedback, the chair or any of the=20
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In addition to nominations, the Nominating Committee is actively
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I have received 1 technical change request (actually, a request to
replace silence with explicit text):
=20
For the new QUERY TASK, there is no stated requirement for command
connection allegiance.  Without that requirement being stated , the
QUERY TASK can go down any connection of the session.
=20
BUT, other TMFs like ABORT TASK do have such a requirement.
=20
Could a QUERY TASK (down a different connection) get to the target
BEFORE the command that it was querying?  While not harmful, it would be
undesirable/unexpected by an initiator.
=20
The request was to explicitly state that QUERY TASK has the same command
connection allegiance requirements that are associated with ABORT TASK.
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Does anyone have any issue with explicitly stating that QUERY TASK also
requires command connection allegiance?
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<p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'color:#1F497D'>I have received 1 =
technical
change request (actually, a request to replace silence with explicit =
text):<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'color:#1F497D'>For the new QUERY =
TASK, there is
no stated requirement for command connection allegiance.<span
style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>Without that requirement being =
stated ,
the QUERY TASK can go down any connection of the =
session.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'color:#1F497D'>BUT, other TMFs like =
ABORT TASK
do have such a requirement.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'color:#1F497D'>Could a QUERY TASK =
(down a
different connection) get to the target BEFORE the command that it was
querying?<span style=3D'mso-spacerun:yes'>&nbsp; </span>While not =
harmful, it
would be undesirable/unexpected by an initiator.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'color:#1F497D'>The request was to =
explicitly
state that QUERY TASK has the same command connection allegiance =
requirements
that are associated with ABORT TASK.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span style=3D'color:#1F497D'>Does anyone have any =
issue with
explicitly stating that QUERY TASK also requires command connection =
allegiance?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=3DMsoNormal><span =
style=3D'color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

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style=3D'mso-tab-count:1'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp=
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</span>Fred<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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I managed to review this draft, although I didn't look at the Appendixes, a=
nd a side-by-side
diff against RFC 3720 was very helpful.

These comments are for discussion, and hence are with WG chair hat off.

Major issues:

[A] I think the "Updates:" field in the header is wrong.  I believe that th=
e RFC published from
the consolidated draft should be the one base reference for iSCSI.  Therefo=
re it needs to obsolete
RFCs 3720, 3980, 4850 and 5048.  The RFC Editor's database tracks "obsolete=
d by" relationships,
so anyone looking for any of those RFCs will find a reference to the new RF=
C.  The presence of
RFC 3721 as updated by this draft is correct.

[B] As noted previously on the list, the "MUST" requirement for use of auth=
entication in the
first line of Section 9.2 needs to be changed to a "MAY" (as it was in RFC =
3720).  Implementation
of CHAP authentication is still a "MUST" requirement.

[C] The IPsec RFC references have been updated to the new version of IPsec,=
 but we haven't
done anything to RFC 3723, which still references an older version of IPsec=
.  I had been
hoping to avoid updating RFC 3723, but input on what to do here is welcome.=
  One possibility
is to add just enough text to the consolidated draft to update the IPsec re=
quirements material
in RFC 3723 to the new version of IPsec, allow implementation of the old ve=
rsion, and avoid
a 3723bis draft.  Thoughts?

[D] Section 10.2 contains a "SHOULD" requirement for ACA (Auto-Contingent A=
llegiance) support.
As ACA support in SCSI initiators is not common, I suggest weakening this t=
o a MAY requirement.

[E] I didn't see any text to specify that the SPKM keys MUST NOT generate "=
NotUnderstood" responses.
OTOH, as I believe SPKM support for iSCSI was never implemented, I don't be=
lieve that this is a
serious problem.

Minor Concerns:

[1] There are a number of statements of the form "See SCSI for ...".  Each =
of these should cite
a relevant SCSI standard.

[2] In Section 4.4.2, somehow "15 bytes" was changed to "14 bytes" in this =
bullet item:

       - a text encoding as a hex-constant (see Section 5.1 "Text
          Format") of the ISID (for SCSI initiator port) or the
          portal group tag (for SCSI target port) including the
          initial 0X or 0x and the terminating null (14 bytes).

I believe 15 bytes is correct, as that's "0x" (2 bytes) + 48-bit ISID in he=
x (12 bytes) +
a null (1 byte).  A portal group tag is shorter (16 bits), so 15 bytes in t=
he maximum length,
but only 7 bytes will be used for the portal group tag case.

[2] In Section 6.3, on p.99, remove at least the second sentence from this =
paragraph (it's
incorrect), or remove the entire paragraph:

  The initiator and target MAY want to negotiate iSCSI
  authentication parameters. Once this negotiation is completed, the
  channel is considered secure.

[3] In section 6.3.2, change "security mechanism" to "authentication method=
" in the first line
of the first paragraph for clarity:

  The security exchange sets the security mechanism and authenticates
  the initiator user and the target to each other. The exchange
  proceeds according to the authentication method chosen in the
  negotiation phase and is conducted using the login requests' and
  responses' key=3Dvalue parameters.

[4] Also in Section 6.3.2, remove "It should be noted that" from the last p=
aragraph:

  It should be noted that the negotiation might also be directed by
  the target if the initiator does support security, but is not
  ready to direct the negotiation (propose options).

Nits:

There are an enormous number of section number cross-references that either=
 point to the
wrong place (because they still need to be updated) or are incomplete (cont=
ain no
section number).

In 11.4.5.3, 3rd paragraph:
	at theS CSI layer ->  at the SCSI layer

Thanks,
--David
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This is mostly with <WG chair hat on>, as the technical contents of this dr=
aft have been stable for a while now.

The Updates header and the second paragraph of the Introduction need to be =
removed.  This draft and the iSCSI consolidated draft will be issued as RFC=
s simultaneously, hence no Updates pointers are needed - each draft normati=
vely references the other, and that suffices.

The title of this draft needs to change to something more descriptive - onl=
y people like Fred, Mallikarjun and yours truly who spend too much time on =
SCSI know what SAM stands for.  The filename should not change.

As discussed in Quebec City and on the list, the specification of allowed v=
alues needs to change for the new iSCSIProtocolLevel key, and there will be=
 some associated changes to allocation policy to get an expert review done =
by a T10 reviewer before IESG approval of a document that allocates a value=
 for that key.

<WG chair hat off> Also in that text, a minor editorial nit - change "claim=
ed by" to "corresponding to" in the following text:

     Negotiation of the iSCSIProtocolLevel key to a value claimed by
     an RFC indicates that both negotiating parties are compliant to
     the RFC in question, and agree to support the corresponding
     semantics on that iSCSI session.

<WG chair hat on> There should be a new version of the draft coming soon wi=
th the above changes - it may be necessary to run a short second WG Last Ca=
ll to make sure that we have the iSCSIProtocolLevel key specified correctly=
, including its IANA Considerations.

Thanks,
--David
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Thanks Andy and David for surfacing the feedback.  It is indeed a good
catch. =20

I just searched through my available iSCSI email archives, and did not =
see
how/why this had changed.  I do not know of an easy way to search =
through
ips and storm archives (and I know I lost some archives last year).  =
Please
let this thread know if you have requested this change and would like to
continue to argue for it, or have the email trail that resulted in this
change.  My default plan is to flip this back to MAY as proposed below =
in
the next revision.

I was not tracking this as changed so it didn't even figure in my change
list.  Sorry about that.

Mallikarjun



  -----Original Message-----
  From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf
  Of Paul_Koning@Dell.com
  Sent: Wednesday, August 24, 2011 5:49 PM
  To: david.black@emc.com; abanta@vmware.com; storm@ietf.org
  Cc: abanta@vmware.com; khuang@vmware.com; ntomar@vmware.com;
  ksreekanti@vmware.com; paithal@vmware.com; ngoyal@vmware.com
  Subject: Re: [storm] Drafts of new iSCSI specs
 =20
  Yes, absolutely.
 =20
  	paul
 =20
  -----Original Message-----
  From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf
  Of david.black@emc.com
  Sent: Wednesday, August 24, 2011 7:21 PM
  To: david.black@emc.com; abanta@vmware.com; storm@ietf.org
  Cc: abanta@vmware.com; khuang@vmware.com; ntomar@vmware.com;
  ksreekanti@vmware.com; paithal@vmware.com; ngoyal@vmware.com
  Subject: Re: [storm] Drafts of new iSCSI specs
 =20
  Follow-up on this - I believe that we should stick with the two =
MAY-use
  requirements that were in RFC 3720.
 =20
  Thanks,
  --David
 =20
 =20
  > -----Original Message-----
  > From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On
  Behalf
  > Of david.black@emc.com
  > Sent: Wednesday, August 24, 2011 7:10 PM
  > To: Banta, Andy (VMWare); storm@ietf.org
  > Cc: Banta, Andy (VMWare); Huang, Kun (VMWare); Tomar, Nagendra
  > (VMWare); Sreekanti, Kumar (VMWare); Aithal, Prasanna (VMWare);
  Goyal,
  > Neeraj (VMWare)
  > Subject: Re: [storm] Drafts of new iSCSI specs
  >
  > Andy,
  >
  > Many thanks for looking at the consolidated draft.
  >
  > > In section 9.2, authentication is now required (MUST rather than =
MAY).
  > > I'm quite sure this isn't going to fly with everyone.  CHAP is
  > > rarely used in production environments, and until there's some
  > > distributed key authentication method, I don't think many =
customers
  > > are going to be interested.
  >
  > Indeed it does, good catch, thank you.
  >
  > The offending text in the consolidated draft is:
  >
  > 9.2. In-band Initiator-Target Authentication
  >
  >   During login, the target MUST authenticate the initiator and the
  >   initiator MAY authenticate the target.
  >
  > RFC 3720 had this text instead:
  >
  > 8.2.  In-band Initiator-Target Authentication
  >
  >    During login, the target MAY authenticate the initiator and the
  >    initiator MAY authenticate the target.
  >
  > Thanks,
  > --David
  > ----------------------------------------------------
  > David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176 South =
St.,
  > Hopkinton, MA=A0 01748
  > +1 (508) 293-7953=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 FAX: +1 (508) =
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  > david.black@emc.com=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754
  > ----------------------------------------------------
  >
  > > -----Original Message-----
  > > From: Andy Banta [mailto:abanta@vmware.com]
  > > Sent: Monday, August 15, 2011 1:02 PM
  > > To: Black, David; storm@ietf.org
  > > Cc: Banta, Andy (VMWare); Sreekanti, Kumar (VMWare); Huang, Kun
  > > (VMWare); Aithal, Prasanna (VMWare); Tomar, Nagendra (VMWare)
  > > Subject: Re: Drafts of new iSCSI specs
  > >
  > > On Thu, Aug 04, 2011 at 12:08:38AM -0400, Black, David wrote:
  > > > Andy,
  > > >
  > > > Can I interest you or anyone else at VMware in taking a look at
  > > > these specs - it shouldn't involve a lot of time.  I can extend
  > > > the deadline for input past VMworld if that helps.
  > >
  > > David, Folks,
  > >
  > > I'm the vSphere iSCSI development tech lead at VMware.
  > >
  > > I got a chance to look at the first one.  A few comments:
  > >
  > > In section 9.2, authentication is now required (MUST rather than =
MAY).
  > > I'm quite sure this isn't going to fly with everyone.  CHAP is
  > > rarely used in production environments, and until there's some
  > > distributed key authentication method, I don't think many =
customers
  > > are going to be interested.
  > >
  > > If this RFC gets approved as written, it will regularly be =
violated
  > > at this clause.
  > >
  > > We are interested in coming up with a pluggable authentication
  > > method, but I don't think that will change the spec in any way.
  > >
  > > I don't have any other specific comments based on the changes, but
  > > have not gone through the spec in detail.  I'll take a look at the
  > > second spec in the next few days.
  > >
  > > Thanks,
  > > Andy
  > > banta@vmware.com
  > >
  > > > Thanks,
  > > > --David
  > > >
  > > > > -----Original Message-----
  > > > > From: Black, David
  > > > > Sent: Friday, July 15, 2011 2:01 AM
  > > > > To: Banta, Andy (VMWare)
  > > > > Cc: Black, David
  > > > > Subject: FW: Drafts of new iSCSI specs
  > > > > Importance: High
  > > > >
  > > > > Hi Andy,
  > > > >
  > > > > It was good to see you at EMC World, even if only briefly.
  > > > >
  > > > > I'm one of the co-chairs of the IETF storm (STORage
  > > > > Maintenance), where new drafts of the iSCSI specifications are
  > > > > close to completion (they're in Working Group Last Call).  =
We're
  > > > > looking for review and feedback from iSCSI implementers, and I
  > > > > was hoping that you could take a look at this on behalf of =
ESX's
iSCSI
  implementation.
  > > > >
  > > > > There are two new iSCSI drafts:
  > > > >
  > > > > (1) iSCSI Protocol (Consolidated), =
draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons-03
  > > > > 	http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons/
  > > > >
  > > > > This draft consolidates several existing iSCSI RFCs, primarily
  > > > > RFC 3720 and RFC 5048, and removes some unimplemented
  features -
  > > > > the result should be backwards-compatible with existing
  > > > > implementations.  As the draft is several hundred pages in
  > > > > length, I don't expect you to read it in its entirety, but =
could
  > > > > you look at this summary of what's been changed and see =
whether
  > > > > it's
  > > > > reasonable?:
  > > > >
  > > > > 2.3. Summary of Changes
  > > > >
  > > > >    1)     Consolidated RFCs 3720, 3980, 4850 and 5048, and =
made
the
  > > > >            necessary editorial changes
  > > > >    2)     iSCSIProtocolLevel is specified as "1" in section =
13.24,
and
  > > > >            added a related normative reference to [iSCSI-SAM]
draft
  > > > >    3)     Markers and related keys were removed
  > > > >    4)     SPKM authentication and related keys were removed
  > > > >    5)     Added a new section 13.25 on responding to obsoleted
keys
  > > > >    6)     Have explicitly allowed initiator+target =
implementations
  > > > >            throughout the text
  > > > >    7)   Clarified in section 4.2.7 that implementations SHOULD =
NOT
  > > > >          rely on SLP-based discovery
  > > > >    8)   Added UML diagrams, and related conventions in section =
3
  > > > >    9)   FastAbort implementation is made a "SHOULD" =
requirement in
  > > > >          section 4.2.3.4 from the previous "MUST" requirement.
  > > > >    10) Clarified in section 6.2 that validity of NotUnderstood
  > > > >          response depends on iSCSIProtocolLevel
  > > > >
  > > > > (2) iSCSI SAM features, draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam-03
  > > > > 	http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam/
  > > > >
  > > > > iSCSI was originally based on version 2 of the SCSI =
architecture,
  SAM-2.
  > > > > This draft updates iSCSI to the current version of the SCSI
  > > > > architecture, SAM-5, by adding additional features, and a text
  > > > > key to negotiate their usage, iSCSIProtocolLevel.  The draft =
is
  > > > > only about 20 pages - please take a look at it from an
implementer's
  standpoint.
  > > > >
  > > > > Finally, if there's anything you wish the iSCSI RFCs said, or
  > > > > functionality that you think should be removed, please say so.
  > > > >
  > > > > Your comments can be sent directly to the mailing list -
  > > > > storm@ietf.org, or can be sent to me.  Please identify =
yourself
  > > > > as a VMware iSCSI implementer in your comments.  The Working
  > > > > Group Last Call on these drafts runs through August 21st -
  > > > > please let me know when you think you could have comments
  ready.
  > > > >
  > > > > Thanks,
  > > > > --David
  > > > > ----------------------------------------------------
  > > > > David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176
  > > > > South St., Hopkinton, MA=A0 01748
  > > > > +1 (508) 293-7953=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 FAX: +1 =
(508) 293-7786
  > > > > david.black@emc.com=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 Mobile: +1 (978) =
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I disagree.

1) while not common, the hosts that use it, do need it;
2) the original 3720 text contains a SHOULD; and
3) there is no good reason for us to be weakening this statement.

	Fred Knight
	NetApp

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<...text removed...>

[D] Section 10.2 contains a "SHOULD" requirement for ACA
(Auto-Contingent Allegiance) support.
As ACA support in SCSI initiators is not common, I suggest weakening
this to a MAY requirement.



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I do not recall making any such request - if I did (my memory's far from pe=
rfect), I hereby withdraw that request ;-).

Please change that back to "MAY".

Thanks,
--David


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Mallikarjun Chadalapaka [mailto:cbm@chadalapaka.com]
> Sent: Thursday, August 25, 2011 10:28 PM
> To: Paul_Koning@Dell.com; Black, David; Banta, Andy (VMWare); storm@ietf.=
org
> Cc: Banta, Andy (VMWare); Huang, Kun (VMWare); Tomar, Nagendra (VMWare); =
Sreekanti, Kumar (VMWare);
> Aithal, Prasanna (VMWare); Goyal, Neeraj (VMWare)
> Subject: RE: [storm] Drafts of new iSCSI specs
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> Thanks Andy and David for surfacing the feedback.  It is indeed a good
> catch.
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> I just searched through my available iSCSI email archives, and did not se=
e
> how/why this had changed.  I do not know of an easy way to search through
> ips and storm archives (and I know I lost some archives last year).  Plea=
se
> let this thread know if you have requested this change and would like to
> continue to argue for it, or have the email trail that resulted in this
> change.  My default plan is to flip this back to MAY as proposed below in
> the next revision.
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> I was not tracking this as changed so it didn't even figure in my change
> list.  Sorry about that.
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> Mallikarjun
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>   -----Original Message-----
>   From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf
>   Of Paul_Koning@Dell.com
>   Sent: Wednesday, August 24, 2011 5:49 PM
>   To: david.black@emc.com; abanta@vmware.com; storm@ietf.org
>   Cc: abanta@vmware.com; khuang@vmware.com; ntomar@vmware.com;
>   ksreekanti@vmware.com; paithal@vmware.com; ngoyal@vmware.com
>   Subject: Re: [storm] Drafts of new iSCSI specs
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>   Yes, absolutely.
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>   	paul
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>   -----Original Message-----
>   From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf
>   Of david.black@emc.com
>   Sent: Wednesday, August 24, 2011 7:21 PM
>   To: david.black@emc.com; abanta@vmware.com; storm@ietf.org
>   Cc: abanta@vmware.com; khuang@vmware.com; ntomar@vmware.com;
>   ksreekanti@vmware.com; paithal@vmware.com; ngoyal@vmware.com
>   Subject: Re: [storm] Drafts of new iSCSI specs
>=20
>   Follow-up on this - I believe that we should stick with the two MAY-use
>   requirements that were in RFC 3720.
>=20
>   Thanks,
>   --David
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>=20
>   > -----Original Message-----
>   > From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On
>   Behalf
>   > Of david.black@emc.com
>   > Sent: Wednesday, August 24, 2011 7:10 PM
>   > To: Banta, Andy (VMWare); storm@ietf.org
>   > Cc: Banta, Andy (VMWare); Huang, Kun (VMWare); Tomar, Nagendra
>   > (VMWare); Sreekanti, Kumar (VMWare); Aithal, Prasanna (VMWare);
>   Goyal,
>   > Neeraj (VMWare)
>   > Subject: Re: [storm] Drafts of new iSCSI specs
>   >
>   > Andy,
>   >
>   > Many thanks for looking at the consolidated draft.
>   >
>   > > In section 9.2, authentication is now required (MUST rather than MA=
Y).
>   > > I'm quite sure this isn't going to fly with everyone.  CHAP is
>   > > rarely used in production environments, and until there's some
>   > > distributed key authentication method, I don't think many customers
>   > > are going to be interested.
>   >
>   > Indeed it does, good catch, thank you.
>   >
>   > The offending text in the consolidated draft is:
>   >
>   > 9.2. In-band Initiator-Target Authentication
>   >
>   >   During login, the target MUST authenticate the initiator and the
>   >   initiator MAY authenticate the target.
>   >
>   > RFC 3720 had this text instead:
>   >
>   > 8.2.  In-band Initiator-Target Authentication
>   >
>   >    During login, the target MAY authenticate the initiator and the
>   >    initiator MAY authenticate the target.
>   >
>   > Thanks,
>   > --David
>   > ----------------------------------------------------
>   > David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176 South St.=
,
>   > Hopkinton, MA=A0 01748
>   > +1 (508) 293-7953=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 FAX: +1 (508) 2=
93-7786
>   > david.black@emc.com=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754
>   > ----------------------------------------------------
>   >
>   > > -----Original Message-----
>   > > From: Andy Banta [mailto:abanta@vmware.com]
>   > > Sent: Monday, August 15, 2011 1:02 PM
>   > > To: Black, David; storm@ietf.org
>   > > Cc: Banta, Andy (VMWare); Sreekanti, Kumar (VMWare); Huang, Kun
>   > > (VMWare); Aithal, Prasanna (VMWare); Tomar, Nagendra (VMWare)
>   > > Subject: Re: Drafts of new iSCSI specs
>   > >
>   > > On Thu, Aug 04, 2011 at 12:08:38AM -0400, Black, David wrote:
>   > > > Andy,
>   > > >
>   > > > Can I interest you or anyone else at VMware in taking a look at
>   > > > these specs - it shouldn't involve a lot of time.  I can extend
>   > > > the deadline for input past VMworld if that helps.
>   > >
>   > > David, Folks,
>   > >
>   > > I'm the vSphere iSCSI development tech lead at VMware.
>   > >
>   > > I got a chance to look at the first one.  A few comments:
>   > >
>   > > In section 9.2, authentication is now required (MUST rather than MA=
Y).
>   > > I'm quite sure this isn't going to fly with everyone.  CHAP is
>   > > rarely used in production environments, and until there's some
>   > > distributed key authentication method, I don't think many customers
>   > > are going to be interested.
>   > >
>   > > If this RFC gets approved as written, it will regularly be violated
>   > > at this clause.
>   > >
>   > > We are interested in coming up with a pluggable authentication
>   > > method, but I don't think that will change the spec in any way.
>   > >
>   > > I don't have any other specific comments based on the changes, but
>   > > have not gone through the spec in detail.  I'll take a look at the
>   > > second spec in the next few days.
>   > >
>   > > Thanks,
>   > > Andy
>   > > banta@vmware.com
>   > >
>   > > > Thanks,
>   > > > --David
>   > > >
>   > > > > -----Original Message-----
>   > > > > From: Black, David
>   > > > > Sent: Friday, July 15, 2011 2:01 AM
>   > > > > To: Banta, Andy (VMWare)
>   > > > > Cc: Black, David
>   > > > > Subject: FW: Drafts of new iSCSI specs
>   > > > > Importance: High
>   > > > >
>   > > > > Hi Andy,
>   > > > >
>   > > > > It was good to see you at EMC World, even if only briefly.
>   > > > >
>   > > > > I'm one of the co-chairs of the IETF storm (STORage
>   > > > > Maintenance), where new drafts of the iSCSI specifications are
>   > > > > close to completion (they're in Working Group Last Call).  We'r=
e
>   > > > > looking for review and feedback from iSCSI implementers, and I
>   > > > > was hoping that you could take a look at this on behalf of ESX'=
s
> iSCSI
>   implementation.
>   > > > >
>   > > > > There are two new iSCSI drafts:
>   > > > >
>   > > > > (1) iSCSI Protocol (Consolidated), draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons-=
03
>   > > > > 	http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons/
>   > > > >
>   > > > > This draft consolidates several existing iSCSI RFCs, primarily
>   > > > > RFC 3720 and RFC 5048, and removes some unimplemented
>   features -
>   > > > > the result should be backwards-compatible with existing
>   > > > > implementations.  As the draft is several hundred pages in
>   > > > > length, I don't expect you to read it in its entirety, but coul=
d
>   > > > > you look at this summary of what's been changed and see whether
>   > > > > it's
>   > > > > reasonable?:
>   > > > >
>   > > > > 2.3. Summary of Changes
>   > > > >
>   > > > >    1)     Consolidated RFCs 3720, 3980, 4850 and 5048, and made
> the
>   > > > >            necessary editorial changes
>   > > > >    2)     iSCSIProtocolLevel is specified as "1" in section 13.=
24,
> and
>   > > > >            added a related normative reference to [iSCSI-SAM]
> draft
>   > > > >    3)     Markers and related keys were removed
>   > > > >    4)     SPKM authentication and related keys were removed
>   > > > >    5)     Added a new section 13.25 on responding to obsoleted
> keys
>   > > > >    6)     Have explicitly allowed initiator+target implementati=
ons
>   > > > >            throughout the text
>   > > > >    7)   Clarified in section 4.2.7 that implementations SHOULD =
NOT
>   > > > >          rely on SLP-based discovery
>   > > > >    8)   Added UML diagrams, and related conventions in section =
3
>   > > > >    9)   FastAbort implementation is made a "SHOULD" requirement=
 in
>   > > > >          section 4.2.3.4 from the previous "MUST" requirement.
>   > > > >    10) Clarified in section 6.2 that validity of NotUnderstood
>   > > > >          response depends on iSCSIProtocolLevel
>   > > > >
>   > > > > (2) iSCSI SAM features, draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam-03
>   > > > > 	http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam/
>   > > > >
>   > > > > iSCSI was originally based on version 2 of the SCSI architectur=
e,
>   SAM-2.
>   > > > > This draft updates iSCSI to the current version of the SCSI
>   > > > > architecture, SAM-5, by adding additional features, and a text
>   > > > > key to negotiate their usage, iSCSIProtocolLevel.  The draft is
>   > > > > only about 20 pages - please take a look at it from an
> implementer's
>   standpoint.
>   > > > >
>   > > > > Finally, if there's anything you wish the iSCSI RFCs said, or
>   > > > > functionality that you think should be removed, please say so.
>   > > > >
>   > > > > Your comments can be sent directly to the mailing list -
>   > > > > storm@ietf.org, or can be sent to me.  Please identify yourself
>   > > > > as a VMware iSCSI implementer in your comments.  The Working
>   > > > > Group Last Call on these drafts runs through August 21st -
>   > > > > please let me know when you think you could have comments
>   ready.
>   > > > >
>   > > > > Thanks,
>   > > > > --David
>   > > > > ----------------------------------------------------
>   > > > > David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176
>   > > > > South St., Hopkinton, MA=A0 01748
>   > > > > +1 (508) 293-7953=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 FAX: +1 (=
508) 293-7786
>   > > > > david.black@emc.com=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0=A0 Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7=
754
>   > > > > ----------------------------------------------------
>   > > >
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts director=
ies. This draft is a work item of the STORage Maintenance Working Group of =
the IETF.

	Title           : Internet Small Computer Systems Interface (iSCSI) SCSI A=
rchitecture Features Update
	Author(s)       : Frederick Knight
                          Mallikarjun Chadalapaka
	Filename        : draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-sam-04.txt
	Pages           : 1
	Date            : 2011-08-26

   Internet Small Computer Systems Interface (iSCSI) is a SCSI
   transport protocol that maps the SCSI family of protocols onto
   TCP/IP. The iSCSI protocol as specified in [draft-ietf-storm-
   iscsi-cons-xx] (and as previously specified by the combination
   of RFC 3720 and RFC 5048) is based on the SAM-2 (SCSI
   Architecture Model - 2) version of the SCSI family of
   protocols. This document defines enhancements to the iSCSI
   protocol to support certain additional features of the SCSI
   protocol that were defined in SAM-3, SAM-4, and SAM-5.

   This document is a companion document to [draft-ietf-storm-
   iscsi-cons-xx].

      --------------------------------------------------------
      RFC EDITORS NOTE: The above references to [draft-ietf-storm-
      iscsi-cons-xx] should reference the RFC number assigned to
      that document, and this note should be removed.
      --------------------------------------------------------


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<WG chair hat off>

In that case, let's at least get the explanation for the SHOULD right ;-).

Here's a suggestion ...

OLD
  ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
  errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
  initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD support
  ACA.
NEW
  Some SCSI initiator implementations use ACA to enforce ordered
  command execution during recovery from errors.  In order to support
  error recovery in such SCSI initiators, iSCSI initiators and targets
  SHOULD support ACA.

Thanks,
--David

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Knight, Frederick [mailto:Frederick.Knight@netapp.com]
> Sent: Friday, August 26, 2011 8:51 AM
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> I disagree.
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> 1) while not common, the hosts that use it, do need it;
> 2) the original 3720 text contains a SHOULD; and
> 3) there is no good reason for us to be weakening this statement.
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> 	Fred Knight
> 	NetApp
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> -----Original Message-----
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> Subject: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
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> <...text removed...>
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> [D] Section 10.2 contains a "SHOULD" requirement for ACA
> (Auto-Contingent Allegiance) support.
> As ACA support in SCSI initiators is not common, I suggest weakening
> this to a MAY requirement.
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Network byte order is the usual default, but it doesn't hurt to say so.

Thanks,
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> Hey,
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> I believe the ORD/IRD fields in the MPAv2 messages need to be in Network
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> Byte Order, but I don't see this requirement anywhere in the RFC.
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> Or maybe NBO is a always assumed in IETF wire-protocol messages?
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I am having a little bit of difficulty following the logic of the
proposed new text.

First it says that some initiator implementations use ACA (which
implies that some do not). Then, it says that iSCSI initiators
(presumably all iSCSI initiators) ... SHOULD support ACA.

I can understand why initiators that need ACA SHOULD support it,
but why should the others bear the burden?

All the best,

.Ralph

On 8/27/2011 5:36 PM, david.black@emc.com wrote:
> <WG chair hat off>
>
> In that case, let's at least get the explanation for the SHOULD right ;-).
>
> Here's a suggestion ...
>
> OLD
>    ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
>    errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
>    initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD support
>    ACA.
> NEW
>    Some SCSI initiator implementations use ACA to enforce ordered
>    command execution during recovery from errors.  In order to support
>    error recovery in such SCSI initiators, iSCSI initiators and targets
>    SHOULD support ACA.
>
> Thanks,
> --David
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Knight, Frederick [mailto:Frederick.Knight@netapp.com]
>> Sent: Friday, August 26, 2011 8:51 AM
>> To: Black, David
>> Cc: storm@ietf.org
>> Subject: RE: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
>>
>> I disagree.
>>
>> 1) while not common, the hosts that use it, do need it;
>> 2) the original 3720 text contains a SHOULD; and
>> 3) there is no good reason for us to be weakening this statement.
>>
>> 	Fred Knight
>> 	NetApp
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: david.black@emc.com [mailto:david.black@emc.com]
>> Sent: Thursday, August 25, 2011 5:55 PM
>> To: storm@ietf.org
>> Subject: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
>>
>> <...text removed...>
>>
>> [D] Section 10.2 contains a "SHOULD" requirement for ACA
>> (Auto-Contingent Allegiance) support.
>> As ACA support in SCSI initiators is not common, I suggest weakening
>> this to a MAY requirement.
>>
>>
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Ralph,

I think you caught a nit. Your point is correct - WRT initiators.
The SHOULD statement should refer to targets only.  Initiators that are =
not supporting ACA may have a hard time surviving in the same =
environment with initiators that require and support ACA  but will cause =
no harm to those that require and support it.

Julo
On Aug 28, 2011, at 5:18 AM, Ralph Weber wrote:

> I am having a little bit of difficulty following the logic of the
> proposed new text.
>=20
> First it says that some initiator implementations use ACA (which
> implies that some do not). Then, it says that iSCSI initiators
> (presumably all iSCSI initiators) ... SHOULD support ACA.
>=20
> I can understand why initiators that need ACA SHOULD support it,
> but why should the others bear the burden?
>=20
> All the best,
>=20
> .Ralph
>=20
> On 8/27/2011 5:36 PM, david.black@emc.com wrote:
>> <WG chair hat off>
>>=20
>> In that case, let's at least get the explanation for the SHOULD right =
;-).
>>=20
>> Here's a suggestion ...
>>=20
>> OLD
>>   ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
>>   errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
>>   initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD support
>>   ACA.
>> NEW
>>   Some SCSI initiator implementations use ACA to enforce ordered
>>   command execution during recovery from errors.  In order to support
>>   error recovery in such SCSI initiators, iSCSI initiators and =
targets
>>   SHOULD support ACA.
>>=20
>> Thanks,
>> --David
>>=20
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Knight, Frederick [mailto:Frederick.Knight@netapp.com]
>>> Sent: Friday, August 26, 2011 8:51 AM
>>> To: Black, David
>>> Cc: storm@ietf.org
>>> Subject: RE: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI =
draft
>>>=20
>>> I disagree.
>>>=20
>>> 1) while not common, the hosts that use it, do need it;
>>> 2) the original 3720 text contains a SHOULD; and
>>> 3) there is no good reason for us to be weakening this statement.
>>>=20
>>> 	Fred Knight
>>> 	NetApp
>>>=20
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: david.black@emc.com [mailto:david.black@emc.com]
>>> Sent: Thursday, August 25, 2011 5:55 PM
>>> To: storm@ietf.org
>>> Subject: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
>>>=20
>>> <...text removed...>
>>>=20
>>> [D] Section 10.2 contains a "SHOULD" requirement for ACA
>>> (Auto-Contingent Allegiance) support.
>>> As ACA support in SCSI initiators is not common, I suggest weakening
>>> this to a MAY requirement.
>>>=20
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I agree - second try at text:

OLD
  ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
  errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
  initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD support
  ACA.
NEW
  Some SCSI initiators use ACA to enforce ordered command execution
  during error recovery, and hence iSCSI initiator implementations
  for those SCSI initiators need to support ACA.  In order to support
  error recovery for these SCSI and iSCSI initiators, iSCSI targets
  SHOULD support ACA.

As Ralph noted, an implementer of an iSCSI initiator that needs ACA will kn=
ow
it, or learn quickly when error recovery doesn't work right wrt the SCSI cl=
ass
driver :-), so the primary purpose of the SHOULD in this text is to tell
target implementers about the need for ACA support.

FWIW, this is a "SHOULD" and not a "MUST" because a target implementer may
choose not to support initiators that use ACA - that absence of ACA support
will be detected quickly at the SCSI level, as the first SCSI command that
sets the NACA bit in the CONTROL byte in the CDB will get hit with a
CHECK CONDITION for having done so.

Thanks,
--David

> -----Original Message-----
> From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of=
 Julian Satran
> Sent: Sunday, August 28, 2011 1:15 AM
> To: Ralph Weber
> Cc: storm@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
>=20
> Ralph,
>=20
> I think you caught a nit. Your point is correct - WRT initiators.
> The SHOULD statement should refer to targets only.  Initiators that are n=
ot supporting ACA may have a
> hard time surviving in the same environment with initiators that require =
and support ACA  but will
> cause no harm to those that require and support it.
>=20
> Julo
> On Aug 28, 2011, at 5:18 AM, Ralph Weber wrote:
>=20
> > I am having a little bit of difficulty following the logic of the
> > proposed new text.
> >
> > First it says that some initiator implementations use ACA (which
> > implies that some do not). Then, it says that iSCSI initiators
> > (presumably all iSCSI initiators) ... SHOULD support ACA.
> >
> > I can understand why initiators that need ACA SHOULD support it,
> > but why should the others bear the burden?
> >
> > All the best,
> >
> > .Ralph
> >
> > On 8/27/2011 5:36 PM, david.black@emc.com wrote:
> >> <WG chair hat off>
> >>
> >> In that case, let's at least get the explanation for the SHOULD right =
;-).
> >>
> >> Here's a suggestion ...
> >>
> >> OLD
> >>   ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
> >>   errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
> >>   initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD support
> >>   ACA.
> >> NEW
> >>   Some SCSI initiator implementations use ACA to enforce ordered
> >>   command execution during recovery from errors.  In order to support
> >>   error recovery in such SCSI initiators, iSCSI initiators and targets
> >>   SHOULD support ACA.
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >> --David
> >>
> >>> -----Original Message-----
> >>> From: Knight, Frederick [mailto:Frederick.Knight@netapp.com]
> >>> Sent: Friday, August 26, 2011 8:51 AM
> >>> To: Black, David
> >>> Cc: storm@ietf.org
> >>> Subject: RE: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draf=
t
> >>>
> >>> I disagree.
> >>>
> >>> 1) while not common, the hosts that use it, do need it;
> >>> 2) the original 3720 text contains a SHOULD; and
> >>> 3) there is no good reason for us to be weakening this statement.
> >>>
> >>> 	Fred Knight
> >>> 	NetApp
> >>>
> >>> -----Original Message-----
> >>> From: david.black@emc.com [mailto:david.black@emc.com]
> >>> Sent: Thursday, August 25, 2011 5:55 PM
> >>> To: storm@ietf.org
> >>> Subject: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
> >>>
> >>> <...text removed...>
> >>>
> >>> [D] Section 10.2 contains a "SHOULD" requirement for ACA
> >>> (Auto-Contingent Allegiance) support.
> >>> As ACA support in SCSI initiators is not common, I suggest weakening
> >>> this to a MAY requirement.
> >>>
> >>>
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A necessary nuance between Operating Systems and initiator products
is missing in the rewrite. How about:

Some operating systems depend on SCSI ACA to enforce ordered command
execution during error recovery, and hence iSCSI initiator implementations
for those operating systems need to support ACA.  In order to support
error recovery for these operating systems and iSCSI initiators, iSCSI
targets SHOULD support ACA.

All the best,

.Ralph

On 8/28/2011 12:27 PM, david.black@emc.com wrote:
> I agree - second try at text:
>
> OLD
>    ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
>    errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
>    initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD support
>    ACA.
> NEW
>    Some SCSI initiators use ACA to enforce ordered command execution
>    during error recovery, and hence iSCSI initiator implementations
>    for those SCSI initiators need to support ACA.  In order to support
>    error recovery for these SCSI and iSCSI initiators, iSCSI targets
>    SHOULD support ACA.
>
> As Ralph noted, an implementer of an iSCSI initiator that needs ACA will know
> it, or learn quickly when error recovery doesn't work right wrt the SCSI class
> driver :-), so the primary purpose of the SHOULD in this text is to tell
> target implementers about the need for ACA support.
>
> FWIW, this is a "SHOULD" and not a "MUST" because a target implementer may
> choose not to support initiators that use ACA - that absence of ACA support
> will be detected quickly at the SCSI level, as the first SCSI command that
> sets the NACA bit in the CONTROL byte in the CDB will get hit with a
> CHECK CONDITION for having done so.
>
> Thanks,
> --David
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Julian Satran
>> Sent: Sunday, August 28, 2011 1:15 AM
>> To: Ralph Weber
>> Cc: storm@ietf.org
>> Subject: Re: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
>>
>> Ralph,
>>
>> I think you caught a nit. Your point is correct - WRT initiators.
>> The SHOULD statement should refer to targets only.  Initiators that are not supporting ACA may have a
>> hard time surviving in the same environment with initiators that require and support ACA  but will
>> cause no harm to those that require and support it.
>>
>> Julo
>> On Aug 28, 2011, at 5:18 AM, Ralph Weber wrote:
>>
>>> I am having a little bit of difficulty following the logic of the
>>> proposed new text.
>>>
>>> First it says that some initiator implementations use ACA (which
>>> implies that some do not). Then, it says that iSCSI initiators
>>> (presumably all iSCSI initiators) ... SHOULD support ACA.
>>>
>>> I can understand why initiators that need ACA SHOULD support it,
>>> but why should the others bear the burden?
>>>
>>> All the best,
>>>
>>> .Ralph
>>>
>>> On 8/27/2011 5:36 PM, david.black@emc.com wrote:
>>>> <WG chair hat off>
>>>>
>>>> In that case, let's at least get the explanation for the SHOULD right ;-).
>>>>
>>>> Here's a suggestion ...
>>>>
>>>> OLD
>>>>    ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
>>>>    errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
>>>>    initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD support
>>>>    ACA.
>>>> NEW
>>>>    Some SCSI initiator implementations use ACA to enforce ordered
>>>>    command execution during recovery from errors.  In order to support
>>>>    error recovery in such SCSI initiators, iSCSI initiators and targets
>>>>    SHOULD support ACA.
>>>>
>>>> Thanks,
>>>> --David
>>>>
>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>> From: Knight, Frederick [mailto:Frederick.Knight@netapp.com]
>>>>> Sent: Friday, August 26, 2011 8:51 AM
>>>>> To: Black, David
>>>>> Cc: storm@ietf.org
>>>>> Subject: RE: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
>>>>>
>>>>> I disagree.
>>>>>
>>>>> 1) while not common, the hosts that use it, do need it;
>>>>> 2) the original 3720 text contains a SHOULD; and
>>>>> 3) there is no good reason for us to be weakening this statement.
>>>>>
>>>>> 	Fred Knight
>>>>> 	NetApp
>>>>>
>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>> From: david.black@emc.com [mailto:david.black@emc.com]
>>>>> Sent: Thursday, August 25, 2011 5:55 PM
>>>>> To: storm@ietf.org
>>>>> Subject: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
>>>>>
>>>>> <...text removed...>
>>>>>
>>>>> [D] Section 10.2 contains a "SHOULD" requirement for ACA
>>>>> (Auto-Contingent Allegiance) support.
>>>>> As ACA support in SCSI initiators is not common, I suggest weakening
>>>>> this to a MAY requirement.
>>>>>
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STORage Maintenance (storm)
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The IETF IPS (IP Storage) and RDDP (Remote Direct Data Placement)
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(1) iSCSI: Combine RFCs 3720 (iSCSI), 3980 (NAA names), 4850 (node
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I am catching up on this thread after a vacation.

I agree in general with the consensus on this thread that we should leave
ACA as SHOULD.

Specifically, I like David's last rewrite, which succinctly states the
rationale in SCSI initiator terms, as appropriate for this spec.  I plan to
get that into the next rev.

David, thanks for your Last Call review.  I will address your all other
comments as well in the next revision.

Thanks.

Mallikarjun

 

  -----Original Message-----
  From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf
  Of Ralph Weber
  Sent: Monday, August 29, 2011 12:37 PM
  To: storm@ietf.org
  Subject: Re: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
  
  A necessary nuance between Operating Systems and initiator products is
  missing in the rewrite. How about:
  
  Some operating systems depend on SCSI ACA to enforce ordered command
  execution during error recovery, and hence iSCSI initiator implementations
  for those operating systems need to support ACA.  In order to support
error
  recovery for these operating systems and iSCSI initiators, iSCSI targets
  SHOULD support ACA.
  
  All the best,
  
  .Ralph
  
  On 8/28/2011 12:27 PM, david.black@emc.com wrote:
  > I agree - second try at text:
  >
  > OLD
  >    ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
  >    errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
  >    initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD support
  >    ACA.
  > NEW
  >    Some SCSI initiators use ACA to enforce ordered command execution
  >    during error recovery, and hence iSCSI initiator implementations
  >    for those SCSI initiators need to support ACA.  In order to support
  >    error recovery for these SCSI and iSCSI initiators, iSCSI targets
  >    SHOULD support ACA.
  >
  > As Ralph noted, an implementer of an iSCSI initiator that needs ACA
  > will know it, or learn quickly when error recovery doesn't work right
  > wrt the SCSI class driver :-), so the primary purpose of the SHOULD in
  > this text is to tell target implementers about the need for ACA support.
  >
  > FWIW, this is a "SHOULD" and not a "MUST" because a target
  implementer
  > may choose not to support initiators that use ACA - that absence of
  > ACA support will be detected quickly at the SCSI level, as the first
  > SCSI command that sets the NACA bit in the CONTROL byte in the CDB
  > will get hit with a CHECK CONDITION for having done so.
  >
  > Thanks,
  > --David
  >
  >> -----Original Message-----
  >> From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On
  >> Behalf Of Julian Satran
  >> Sent: Sunday, August 28, 2011 1:15 AM
  >> To: Ralph Weber
  >> Cc: storm@ietf.org
  >> Subject: Re: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI
  >> draft
  >>
  >> Ralph,
  >>
  >> I think you caught a nit. Your point is correct - WRT initiators.
  >> The SHOULD statement should refer to targets only.  Initiators that
  >> are not supporting ACA may have a hard time surviving in the same
  >> environment with initiators that require and support ACA  but will
cause
  no harm to those that require and support it.
  >>
  >> Julo
  >> On Aug 28, 2011, at 5:18 AM, Ralph Weber wrote:
  >>
  >>> I am having a little bit of difficulty following the logic of the
  >>> proposed new text.
  >>>
  >>> First it says that some initiator implementations use ACA (which
  >>> implies that some do not). Then, it says that iSCSI initiators
  >>> (presumably all iSCSI initiators) ... SHOULD support ACA.
  >>>
  >>> I can understand why initiators that need ACA SHOULD support it, but
  >>> why should the others bear the burden?
  >>>
  >>> All the best,
  >>>
  >>> .Ralph
  >>>
  >>> On 8/27/2011 5:36 PM, david.black@emc.com wrote:
  >>>> <WG chair hat off>
  >>>>
  >>>> In that case, let's at least get the explanation for the SHOULD right
;-).
  >>>>
  >>>> Here's a suggestion ...
  >>>>
  >>>> OLD
  >>>>    ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
  >>>>    errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
  >>>>    initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD support
  >>>>    ACA.
  >>>> NEW
  >>>>    Some SCSI initiator implementations use ACA to enforce ordered
  >>>>    command execution during recovery from errors.  In order to
  support
  >>>>    error recovery in such SCSI initiators, iSCSI initiators and
targets
  >>>>    SHOULD support ACA.
  >>>>
  >>>> Thanks,
  >>>> --David
  >>>>
  >>>>> -----Original Message-----
  >>>>> From: Knight, Frederick [mailto:Frederick.Knight@netapp.com]
  >>>>> Sent: Friday, August 26, 2011 8:51 AM
  >>>>> To: Black, David
  >>>>> Cc: storm@ietf.org
  >>>>> Subject: RE: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI
  >>>>> draft
  >>>>>
  >>>>> I disagree.
  >>>>>
  >>>>> 1) while not common, the hosts that use it, do need it;
  >>>>> 2) the original 3720 text contains a SHOULD; and
  >>>>> 3) there is no good reason for us to be weakening this statement.
  >>>>>
  >>>>> 	Fred Knight
  >>>>> 	NetApp
  >>>>>
  >>>>> -----Original Message-----
  >>>>> From: david.black@emc.com [mailto:david.black@emc.com]
  >>>>> Sent: Thursday, August 25, 2011 5:55 PM
  >>>>> To: storm@ietf.org
  >>>>> Subject: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
  >>>>>
  >>>>> <...text removed...>
  >>>>>
  >>>>> [D] Section 10.2 contains a "SHOULD" requirement for ACA
  >>>>> (Auto-Contingent Allegiance) support.
  >>>>> As ACA support in SCSI initiators is not common, I suggest
  >>>>> weakening this to a MAY requirement.
  >>>>>
  >>>>>
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I like Ralph's suggestion to include a mention of operating systems in the =
new test,
but I have some further tweaks to his words to suggest:

SCSI initiator functionality in some operating systems depends on ACA to en=
force
ordered command execution during error recovery, and hence iSCSI initiator
implementations for those operating systems need to support ACA.  In order
to support error recovery for these operating systems and iSCSI initiators,
iSCSI targets SHOULD support ACA.

Thanks,
--David

> -----Original Message-----
> From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of=
 Mallikarjun Chadalapaka
> Sent: Tuesday, August 30, 2011 1:49 PM
> To: storm@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
>=20
> I am catching up on this thread after a vacation.
>=20
> I agree in general with the consensus on this thread that we should leave
> ACA as SHOULD.
>=20
> Specifically, I like David's last rewrite, which succinctly states the
> rationale in SCSI initiator terms, as appropriate for this spec.  I plan =
to
> get that into the next rev.
>=20
> David, thanks for your Last Call review.  I will address your all other
> comments as well in the next revision.
>=20
> Thanks.
>=20
> Mallikarjun
>=20
>=20
>=20
>   -----Original Message-----
>   From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf
>   Of Ralph Weber
>   Sent: Monday, August 29, 2011 12:37 PM
>   To: storm@ietf.org
>   Subject: Re: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
>=20
>   A necessary nuance between Operating Systems and initiator products is
>   missing in the rewrite. How about:
>=20
>   Some operating systems depend on SCSI ACA to enforce ordered command
>   execution during error recovery, and hence iSCSI initiator implementati=
ons
>   for those operating systems need to support ACA.  In order to support
> error
>   recovery for these operating systems and iSCSI initiators, iSCSI target=
s
>   SHOULD support ACA.
>=20
>   All the best,
>=20
>   .Ralph
>=20
>   On 8/28/2011 12:27 PM, david.black@emc.com wrote:
>   > I agree - second try at text:
>   >
>   > OLD
>   >    ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
>   >    errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
>   >    initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD support
>   >    ACA.
>   > NEW
>   >    Some SCSI initiators use ACA to enforce ordered command execution
>   >    during error recovery, and hence iSCSI initiator implementations
>   >    for those SCSI initiators need to support ACA.  In order to suppor=
t
>   >    error recovery for these SCSI and iSCSI initiators, iSCSI targets
>   >    SHOULD support ACA.
>   >
>   > As Ralph noted, an implementer of an iSCSI initiator that needs ACA
>   > will know it, or learn quickly when error recovery doesn't work right
>   > wrt the SCSI class driver :-), so the primary purpose of the SHOULD i=
n
>   > this text is to tell target implementers about the need for ACA suppo=
rt.
>   >
>   > FWIW, this is a "SHOULD" and not a "MUST" because a target
>   implementer
>   > may choose not to support initiators that use ACA - that absence of
>   > ACA support will be detected quickly at the SCSI level, as the first
>   > SCSI command that sets the NACA bit in the CONTROL byte in the CDB
>   > will get hit with a CHECK CONDITION for having done so.
>   >
>   > Thanks,
>   > --David
>   >
>   >> -----Original Message-----
>   >> From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On
>   >> Behalf Of Julian Satran
>   >> Sent: Sunday, August 28, 2011 1:15 AM
>   >> To: Ralph Weber
>   >> Cc: storm@ietf.org
>   >> Subject: Re: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI
>   >> draft
>   >>
>   >> Ralph,
>   >>
>   >> I think you caught a nit. Your point is correct - WRT initiators.
>   >> The SHOULD statement should refer to targets only.  Initiators that
>   >> are not supporting ACA may have a hard time surviving in the same
>   >> environment with initiators that require and support ACA  but will
> cause
>   no harm to those that require and support it.
>   >>
>   >> Julo
>   >> On Aug 28, 2011, at 5:18 AM, Ralph Weber wrote:
>   >>
>   >>> I am having a little bit of difficulty following the logic of the
>   >>> proposed new text.
>   >>>
>   >>> First it says that some initiator implementations use ACA (which
>   >>> implies that some do not). Then, it says that iSCSI initiators
>   >>> (presumably all iSCSI initiators) ... SHOULD support ACA.
>   >>>
>   >>> I can understand why initiators that need ACA SHOULD support it, bu=
t
>   >>> why should the others bear the burden?
>   >>>
>   >>> All the best,
>   >>>
>   >>> .Ralph
>   >>>
>   >>> On 8/27/2011 5:36 PM, david.black@emc.com wrote:
>   >>>> <WG chair hat off>
>   >>>>
>   >>>> In that case, let's at least get the explanation for the SHOULD ri=
ght
> ;-).
>   >>>>
>   >>>> Here's a suggestion ...
>   >>>>
>   >>>> OLD
>   >>>>    ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
>   >>>>    errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
>   >>>>    initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD suppo=
rt
>   >>>>    ACA.
>   >>>> NEW
>   >>>>    Some SCSI initiator implementations use ACA to enforce ordered
>   >>>>    command execution during recovery from errors.  In order to
>   support
>   >>>>    error recovery in such SCSI initiators, iSCSI initiators and
> targets
>   >>>>    SHOULD support ACA.
>   >>>>
>   >>>> Thanks,
>   >>>> --David
>   >>>>
>   >>>>> -----Original Message-----
>   >>>>> From: Knight, Frederick [mailto:Frederick.Knight@netapp.com]
>   >>>>> Sent: Friday, August 26, 2011 8:51 AM
>   >>>>> To: Black, David
>   >>>>> Cc: storm@ietf.org
>   >>>>> Subject: RE: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI
>   >>>>> draft
>   >>>>>
>   >>>>> I disagree.
>   >>>>>
>   >>>>> 1) while not common, the hosts that use it, do need it;
>   >>>>> 2) the original 3720 text contains a SHOULD; and
>   >>>>> 3) there is no good reason for us to be weakening this statement.
>   >>>>>
>   >>>>> 	Fred Knight
>   >>>>> 	NetApp
>   >>>>>
>   >>>>> -----Original Message-----
>   >>>>> From: david.black@emc.com [mailto:david.black@emc.com]
>   >>>>> Sent: Thursday, August 25, 2011 5:55 PM
>   >>>>> To: storm@ietf.org
>   >>>>> Subject: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draf=
t
>   >>>>>
>   >>>>> <...text removed...>
>   >>>>>
>   >>>>> [D] Section 10.2 contains a "SHOULD" requirement for ACA
>   >>>>> (Auto-Contingent Allegiance) support.
>   >>>>> As ACA support in SCSI initiators is not common, I suggest
>   >>>>> weakening this to a MAY requirement.
>   >>>>>
>   >>>>>
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This new WG charter adds the RDMAP extensions work discussed in Quebec City=
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the IETF has been rechartered.  For additional information, please=20
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STORage Maintenance (storm)
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Last updated: 2011-08-18
Current Status: Active Working Group

Chairs:
  Tom Talpey <ttalpey@microsoft.com>
  David Black <black_david@emc.com>

Transport Area Directors:
  Wesley Eddy <wes@mti-systems.com>
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Description of Working Group:

The IETF IPS (IP Storage) and RDDP (Remote Direct Data Placement)
working groups have produced a significant number of storage protocols
(e.g., iSCSI, iSER and FCIP) for which there is significant usage. The
time has come to reflect feedback from implementation and usage into
updated RFCs; this work may include:

- Implementation-driven revisions and updates to existing protocols
(i.e., updated RFCs that match the "running code").

- Interoperability reports as needed for the resulting revised protocols
that are appropriate for Draft Standard RFC status.

- Minor protocol changes or additions. Backwards compatibility is required.

Significant changes to the existing protocol standards are out of scope,
including any work on version 2 of any of these protocols. Security for
these protocols is based on the functionality specified in RFC 3723
(Securing Block Storage Protocols over IP); the working group does not
intend to make major changes or updates to that RFC.

Stability is critical to the usage of these protocols, so backwards
compatibility with existing implementations will be a requirement
imposed on for all protocol changes and additions. Note that this is a
requirement for implementation compatibility - if it is the case that
all implementations of a protocol have done something different than
what the RFC specifies, it is appropriate for a new RFC to document what
the "running code" actually does and deprecate the unused original behavior=
.

List of work items:

(1) iSCSI: Combine RFCs 3720 (iSCSI), 3980 (NAA names), 4850 (node
architecture key) and 5048 (corrections/clarifications) into one draft
(3720bis), removing features that are not implemented in practice. This
draft should be prepared so that it could become a Draft Standard RFC,
but the Working Group has decided not to advance it to Draft Standard
status.

(2) iSCSI: Add features to support at least SAM-4 (4th version of the
SCSI architecture) in a backwards-compatible fashion, as iSCSI is
currently based on SAM-2. This will be a separate draft from the iSCSI
update in the previous item. The Working Group may add additional minor
useful iSCSI features to this draft, including features from draft
versions of SAM-5. The iSCSI MIB (RFC 4544) should be updated to provide
SNMP support for new features as appropriate.

(3) FCIP: IP Protocol number 133 was allocated to a precursor of the
FCIP protocol in 2000, but this allocated number is not used by FCIP.
The Working Group has documented the deployed pre-standard use of this
protocol number in RFC 6172, and IANA has updated the registry entry
to reference RFC 6172.

(4) iFCP: The Address Translation mode of iFCP needs to be deprecated
(SHOULD NOT implement or use), as there are significant technical
problems with its specification, and moreover, only the Address
Transparent mode of iFCP is in use. This will be done via a short draft
that updates RFC 4172, and not via a complete rewrite of RFC 4172.
The Working Group has deprecated iFCP Address Translation mode in
RFC 6172 and made the corresponding changes to the iFCP MIB (originally
RFC 4369) in RFC 6173.

(5) RDDP MPA: Good support for MPI applications requires a small update
to the startup functionality to allow either end of the connection to
initiate. In addition, a couple of minor changes to RDDP connection
setup are needed based on implementation experience.

(6) iSER: Experience with Infiniband implementations suggest a few minor
updates to reflect what has been done in practice.

(7) RDMA Protocol: Experience with the rddp (iWARP) RDMA Protocol
(RFC 5040) suggests that some minor extensions are needed, specifically,
the addition of immediate data support and remote atomic operations.

The Working Group is expected to maintain good working relationships
with INCITS Technical Committee T10 (SCSI standards) and INCITS
Technical Committee T11 (Fibre Channel standards) via overlaps in
membership as opposed to appointment of formal liaisons. The liaison
process (including IAB appointment of a liaison or liaisons) remains
available for use if needed.

Recent changes in INCITS rules have removed public access to some T10
and T11 standards documents that are expected to be needed for the WG's
program of work. Arrangements have been made with T10 and T11 for IETF
participants to obtain copies of specific standards their personal use
in IETF work as needed; contact the WG chair(s) for details.

Goals and Milestones:=20

Done 	  First version of combined iSCSI draft (3720bis)
Done 	  First version of iSCSI SAM-4 (and other) new features draft
Done 	  First version of RDDP MPA startup change draft
Done      First version of FCIP protocol number and iFCP Address=20
          Translation mode draft
Done      First version of iSER update draft
Done      Working Group Last Call on FCIP protocol number and iFCP=20
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Done      Working Group Last Call on RDDP MPA startup change draft
Done      Functionally complete iSCSI SAM-4 (and other) new features=20
          draft
Done      Working Group decision on whether to seek Draft Standard RFC=20
          status for the combined iSCSI draft (3720bis). [Note: decision=20
          may be made significantly before this date.]
Jul 2011  Working Group Last Call on combined iSCSI draft (3720bis) plus=20
          iSCSI SAM-4 (and other) new features draft
Done 	  First version of iSCSI MIB update draft
Sep 2011  Working Group Last Call on iSCSI MIB update draft
Oct 2011  Working Group Last Call on iSER update draft
Feb 2012  Working Group Last Call on RDMA Protocol Extensions draft
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Subject: Re: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
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David, If agreement between the two of us counts as consensus,
then pop open the bubbly. All the best, .Ralph

On 8/30/2011 6:09 PM, david.black@emc.com wrote:
> I like Ralph's suggestion to include a mention of operating systems in the new test,
> but I have some further tweaks to his words to suggest:
>
> SCSI initiator functionality in some operating systems depends on ACA to enforce
> ordered command execution during error recovery, and hence iSCSI initiator
> implementations for those operating systems need to support ACA.  In order
> to support error recovery for these operating systems and iSCSI initiators,
> iSCSI targets SHOULD support ACA.
>
> Thanks,
> --David
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Mallikarjun Chadalapaka
>> Sent: Tuesday, August 30, 2011 1:49 PM
>> To: storm@ietf.org
>> Subject: Re: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
>>
>> I am catching up on this thread after a vacation.
>>
>> I agree in general with the consensus on this thread that we should leave
>> ACA as SHOULD.
>>
>> Specifically, I like David's last rewrite, which succinctly states the
>> rationale in SCSI initiator terms, as appropriate for this spec.  I plan to
>> get that into the next rev.
>>
>> David, thanks for your Last Call review.  I will address your all other
>> comments as well in the next revision.
>>
>> Thanks.
>>
>> Mallikarjun
>>
>>
>>
>>    -----Original Message-----
>>    From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf
>>    Of Ralph Weber
>>    Sent: Monday, August 29, 2011 12:37 PM
>>    To: storm@ietf.org
>>    Subject: Re: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
>>
>>    A necessary nuance between Operating Systems and initiator products is
>>    missing in the rewrite. How about:
>>
>>    Some operating systems depend on SCSI ACA to enforce ordered command
>>    execution during error recovery, and hence iSCSI initiator implementations
>>    for those operating systems need to support ACA.  In order to support
>> error
>>    recovery for these operating systems and iSCSI initiators, iSCSI targets
>>    SHOULD support ACA.
>>
>>    All the best,
>>
>>    .Ralph
>>
>>    On 8/28/2011 12:27 PM, david.black@emc.com wrote:
>>    >  I agree - second try at text:
>>    >
>>    >  OLD
>>    >     ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
>>    >     errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
>>    >     initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD support
>>    >     ACA.
>>    >  NEW
>>    >     Some SCSI initiators use ACA to enforce ordered command execution
>>    >     during error recovery, and hence iSCSI initiator implementations
>>    >     for those SCSI initiators need to support ACA.  In order to support
>>    >     error recovery for these SCSI and iSCSI initiators, iSCSI targets
>>    >     SHOULD support ACA.
>>    >
>>    >  As Ralph noted, an implementer of an iSCSI initiator that needs ACA
>>    >  will know it, or learn quickly when error recovery doesn't work right
>>    >  wrt the SCSI class driver :-), so the primary purpose of the SHOULD in
>>    >  this text is to tell target implementers about the need for ACA support.
>>    >
>>    >  FWIW, this is a "SHOULD" and not a "MUST" because a target
>>    implementer
>>    >  may choose not to support initiators that use ACA - that absence of
>>    >  ACA support will be detected quickly at the SCSI level, as the first
>>    >  SCSI command that sets the NACA bit in the CONTROL byte in the CDB
>>    >  will get hit with a CHECK CONDITION for having done so.
>>    >
>>    >  Thanks,
>>    >  --David
>>    >
>>    >>  -----Original Message-----
>>    >>  From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On
>>    >>  Behalf Of Julian Satran
>>    >>  Sent: Sunday, August 28, 2011 1:15 AM
>>    >>  To: Ralph Weber
>>    >>  Cc: storm@ietf.org
>>    >>  Subject: Re: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI
>>    >>  draft
>>    >>
>>    >>  Ralph,
>>    >>
>>    >>  I think you caught a nit. Your point is correct - WRT initiators.
>>    >>  The SHOULD statement should refer to targets only.  Initiators that
>>    >>  are not supporting ACA may have a hard time surviving in the same
>>    >>  environment with initiators that require and support ACA  but will
>> cause
>>    no harm to those that require and support it.
>>    >>
>>    >>  Julo
>>    >>  On Aug 28, 2011, at 5:18 AM, Ralph Weber wrote:
>>    >>
>>    >>>  I am having a little bit of difficulty following the logic of the
>>    >>>  proposed new text.
>>    >>>
>>    >>>  First it says that some initiator implementations use ACA (which
>>    >>>  implies that some do not). Then, it says that iSCSI initiators
>>    >>>  (presumably all iSCSI initiators) ... SHOULD support ACA.
>>    >>>
>>    >>>  I can understand why initiators that need ACA SHOULD support it, but
>>    >>>  why should the others bear the burden?
>>    >>>
>>    >>>  All the best,
>>    >>>
>>    >>>  .Ralph
>>    >>>
>>    >>>  On 8/27/2011 5:36 PM, david.black@emc.com wrote:
>>    >>>>  <WG chair hat off>
>>    >>>>
>>    >>>>  In that case, let's at least get the explanation for the SHOULD right
>> ;-).
>>    >>>>
>>    >>>>  Here's a suggestion ...
>>    >>>>
>>    >>>>  OLD
>>    >>>>     ACA helps preserve ordered command execution in the presence of
>>    >>>>     errors. As iSCSI can have many commands in-flight between
>>    >>>>     initiator and target, iSCSI initiators and targets SHOULD support
>>    >>>>     ACA.
>>    >>>>  NEW
>>    >>>>     Some SCSI initiator implementations use ACA to enforce ordered
>>    >>>>     command execution during recovery from errors.  In order to
>>    support
>>    >>>>     error recovery in such SCSI initiators, iSCSI initiators and
>> targets
>>    >>>>     SHOULD support ACA.
>>    >>>>
>>    >>>>  Thanks,
>>    >>>>  --David
>>    >>>>
>>    >>>>>  -----Original Message-----
>>    >>>>>  From: Knight, Frederick [mailto:Frederick.Knight@netapp.com]
>>    >>>>>  Sent: Friday, August 26, 2011 8:51 AM
>>    >>>>>  To: Black, David
>>    >>>>>  Cc: storm@ietf.org
>>    >>>>>  Subject: RE: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI
>>    >>>>>  draft
>>    >>>>>
>>    >>>>>  I disagree.
>>    >>>>>
>>    >>>>>  1) while not common, the hosts that use it, do need it;
>>    >>>>>  2) the original 3720 text contains a SHOULD; and
>>    >>>>>  3) there is no good reason for us to be weakening this statement.
>>    >>>>>
>>    >>>>>  	Fred Knight
>>    >>>>>  	NetApp
>>    >>>>>
>>    >>>>>  -----Original Message-----
>>    >>>>>  From: david.black@emc.com [mailto:david.black@emc.com]
>>    >>>>>  Sent: Thursday, August 25, 2011 5:55 PM
>>    >>>>>  To: storm@ietf.org
>>    >>>>>  Subject: [storm] WG Last Call comments on consolidated iSCSI draft
>>    >>>>>
>>    >>>>>  <...text removed...>
>>    >>>>>
>>    >>>>>  [D] Section 10.2 contains a "SHOULD" requirement for ACA
>>    >>>>>  (Auto-Contingent Allegiance) support.
>>    >>>>>  As ACA support in SCSI initiators is not common, I suggest
>>    >>>>>  weakening this to a MAY requirement.
>>    >>>>>
>>    >>>>>
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