Subject: [v6ops] more minor comments for draft-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-07.txt

From: "Hemant Singh (shemant)" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 27 Aug 2012 22:34:01 +0000

# Section 9.2.  Please change the following text from

IPv4-only clients must be support through

to

IPv4-only clients must be supported through

# Section 6.1.  Change the following text from

The v4p host behind the CLAT on this diagram with the private IPv4 addresses.

To 

The v4p host behind the CLAT on this diagram uses a private IPv4 address.

I don't have any more comments.  Please make all minor edits in a -08 version ASAP so that when the reserved IID issue is resolved, you can publish a -08 to reflect that consensus and shoot for a WGLC.

Thanks,

Hemant